quintitem wrote:

;< I'm noob modder

star for nice map and video(?) xD

• Tags: Add "Crybaby Boyfriend", "Honeyworks"?
  
  Source: チョリスP、フェルナンドP should be translated to "ChorisuP x FernandoP".
  
  You can change pause-overlay.png to jpg file to save some space?
  
  The soft-clap during kiai doesn't fit well imo...normal-hit might be a choice you may consider...Just set custom 1 if you are not using that finish2
  Download: soft-hitclap.rar
  
  Reconsider the new combos? It's like half for lyrics and half for rhythm...I can't read...Also it isn't consistent from diff to diff...

• Fine...

• 00:55:336 (4,5) - hmm, try switch hitsound? might work better to stress the finish
  01:59:907 (4) - Add clap?
  03:37:336 (1) - Remove new combo.

• 00:41:049 (6) - Whistle begin?
  00:46:763 (5) - Try whistle begin instead of end?
  00:58:763 (1,2,3,4) - hmm, any reason for this anti-jump? Kinda unexpected for me since there's no variation here...
  01:28:478 (1,2,3) - I prefer not to stack these...looks confusing
  02:00:335 (6) - Use notes instead of slider? The drum makes me want to click twice here, lol...
  02:21:620 (3) - Rotate 90°?
  03:23:335 (1) - Remove new combo like [Normal]?

Uan wrote:

gina go go :3
S.T.A.R!!

Debbiee wrote:

Sorry for delay

Here's my mod

Easy
00:06:192 (3) - I think stacking circles in Easy diff is wrong. This may be hard for a newbie.　Fixed
01:05:479 - Move this break line 1 tick right.　I think this is fine, so no changed.

Normal
02:55:336 - Move this break line 1 tick right.　^

Couldn't find anything much.
Star

MoonShade wrote:

General
- Try to find a better mp3　I did, and I also changed the offset, so I think you still I got the old one.
- Remove .osb　This is not really necessary, perhaps I might need this file too.

Easy
- Approach Rate -1? Would help to desice when to click imo　No, but thanks for your suggestion
- There are parts which would look better if they had be aligned using grid-snap imo
00:34:412 (2) - overlapping + slider doesn't look nice, redo it, perhaps with 2 waypoints　Fixed
00:42:412 (2,1) - overlapping　Fixed
02:30:126 (4,5,1) - try to have the slider-end and the circle in one horizontal line and (4,1) in a vertical line　Oops, this is not my part.

Normal
02:18:764 (1,2) - this overlapping pattern doesn't look this nice　I'll keep it like this for now

Nice Map - Star :3　Thanks

1. I feel little bit off of the timing,I recommend you set the offset to : 1612 .It should be more better.(However please check the mod before you fix this.)Also please remeber to resnap all notes and Green line!
2. I guess 2000 lead in is too much,I prefer1500.
3. Probably add a soft-sliderslide2?

1. 00:23:907- Probably add a note here to consistent the play flow and follow the rhythm like you do in previous.Please consistent the spacing if you do that!
2. 00:28:479(x)- ^Same!
3. 00:45:193(x)- Wait!I feel the rhythm is quite empty here,I'm going to provide some suggestion to you:1.Add a spinner at 00:45:336- and stop it at 00:46:479 - (2).Map something here with slider and notes. 3.Make a long slider start from 00:45:050 to 00:46:764,sure you can put some reverse on the slider!
   01:05:479(x)- Move this break to 01:05:621- !Just move it to a accent beat.
4. 01:33:050(1.2.3)- For me,I prefer you use a slider to instead of notes,because some of the newbie can't follow the 1.5 beat or can't ready the 1.5 beat spacing.
5. 01:55:907(2.3.4)- ^Yeah,Same!
6. 02:18:764(1.2.3.4.1)- No please,these 1/2 click is too difficult for a easy diff and they didn't fit this diff very well!Please change some slider to 1/1!
7. 02:39:335 (3)- A short slider more then 4 reverse in Easy diff will make confused to some of the newbie,change it if possible!
8. 02:59:621(1.2)- I prefer you use a short slider then notes.1/2 click with 2 single notes if quite difficult for newbie imo.
9. 04:06:193(1)- Little hitsound suggestion here:Remove all finish and change to "Normal" hitsound.
10. 04:09:050(1)- Also something hitsound stuff here:Remove finish at the end of the slider and set the green line to S1,so it can make silent to the slider!
11. 04:19:907(3)- New combo here to consistent the new combo in overall!
12. 04:22:193(5)- Use a note to instead of it please,because 04:23:336 - shouldn't appear a sound.

1. 00:01:621(x)- Please set this offset(red line) to S1 then remove 00:04:336 -this timing section.
2. 01:10:479(2)- IMO,This slider doesn't fit the music too much!Probably make this slider end at 01:11:050- ?
3. 01:41:621(1.2)- You probably miss a clap on (1)- and the end of the slider?
4. 02:17:050(7.8)- I can't understand why you make a slider (8)- that's really unnecessary!Just remove it and add 2 reverse from (7)- that may better during gameplay!
5. 02:55:193(x)- Please move this break to 02:55:336- just make follow the music and make it to the accent beat!
6. 03:05:907(3)- Remoce finish please!It's extremely weird!
7. 04:06:193(1)- Please use some notes to instead of slider!I just wondering why you make this part(only this part) easier then a "Easy" diff?So I prefer something in 1/2 here.
8. 04:10:764(4)- Remove the finish hitsound please because this part is really clam!So I don't prefer something like finish here!I assume finish is using in a strong beat!
9. 04:22:193(4)- Same as Easy!If you won't do that,I will recommend you reduce the volume at the end of the slider.

1. 00:09:907(1)- I don't know this type of the slider is rankable or not,however I don't see any reason that you make a slider like this,change it if possible.
2. 00:58:764 (1.2.3.4)- These spacing change is really sudden,it probabaly better if you add a new combo to (2.3.4)-
3. 01:03:907 (2-7)- I'm wondering why you put a stream here? D: It extremely weird and they don't fit the music!I guess a spinner would be better!
4. The slider speed change is quite weird imo,they are too sudden when x1.0 -> x1.5.It probably I suck,however I feel really awkward of this,you may need more opinion from others palyer/modder/bat/mat.
5. 02:23:621 (2)- Make this slider end at 02:24:193- to fit the music!
6. 02:41:620 (1,2,3)- I don't see any reason that you need to put so many 1/4 slider stream here!
7. 02:45:620 (7)- Remove clap please!It doesn't fit the music too much
8. 03:56:478 (6)- ^ Same!
9. 04:06:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -Please!Remove the finish and change it to "Normal" hitsound,It sounds cool with that,also,Can you make a jump here to make more fun?
10. 04:10:763 (4)- Remove finish please!
11. 04:21:906 (3)- I suggest you follow the instrument here.So change (3)- to note then add a note at 04:22:193- and add the whistle there.

02:30:126 (4,5,1) - try to have the slider-end and the circle in one horizontal line and (4,1) in a vertical line

02:18:764(1.2.3.4.1)- No please,these 1/2 click is too difficult for a easy diff and they didn't fit this diff very well!Please change some slider to 1/1! Basically saying *change this to a boring slider sequence* because it's hard for easies? Well, they are 1/1 in 210 BPM song, and since ALMOST all use doubled BPM i can't say why you say it's hard. Plus we should make our little noobie pups knowing what following music is.


02:39:335 (3)- A short slider more then 4 reverse in Easy diff will make confused to some of the newbie,change it if possible!
Something strange... as it's arleady changed ?.?...

02:59:621(1.2)- I prefer you use a short slider then notes.1/2 click with 2 single notes if quite difficult for newbie imo.
Since is correctly spaced it do well. Plus it don't feel a slider won't give the same effect... so. Just No.

Elize wrote:

Nice Song!!

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NanaDesu wrote:

觸咩咩好萌


萬惡的補字>_<


跟邪惡的第三行

_Gezo_ wrote:

Late mod~

[General]
MP3 is fine.
At some moments, the mapper name does not appear, is this intended ?　You mean the SB? If yes, then at some parts, there is no mapper's name because it's a break or whatever.

[Easy]
00:28:479 (4,1) - Overlap. You can try to change the shape of the slider or to move aside 00:28:479 (4).　Fixed
01:46:763 (1) - x=220, y=136 for an equilateral triangle. If you do so, please move the following beats if needed.　Fixed


[Normal]
Circle Size +1 ?
The breaks are all after 50% of the map. The first is at 02:55:336, which is 2/3 of the map. The second one is 15 seconds later and the last is 1 minute later, at 90.6%. (shot for loads of figures)　Deleted some notes for having a break.
04:02:764 (6) - This could be at x=168, y=140 for colinearity. Spacing x1 will be kept (and a good rectangle between 04:02:193 (5,6,7S))　Fixed

[Hard]
00:09:907 (1) - MANIPULATION OF SLIDER LENGTH D:　Dw, this slider is fine ... I guess.

orz I gave up T__________T
j/k

Have my star ! And COOKIES !　/me eats cookie

1. I-i'm not going to cry...
2. Tags: Perhaps, add "Crybaby Boyfriend"? (which is the title in English)
3. Source: I'm not really sure about it, I'll get somebody to confirm it. Meanwhile, isn't it spelled "ChorisP" ?
4. Breaks: When all the diffs are from the same creator, Breaks are supposed to remain consistent through the difficulties. Anyhow, there's not much you can do at this stage just take it as an advice for your next maps~
5. Tick Rate: I strongly suggest to use '2', it fits perfectly the song/map, especially for [Hard]. (Oh, [Easy] might be an exception, due to the really slow slider-speed '2' might seem too much.)
6. Storyboard: Remove all the unnecessary transparent pixels from "Gina.png" and "Haku.png" (That will reduce the "OSZ" size and the SB Load)

1. I strongly suggest to raise AR 1 tick.
2. 01:05:479 - I guess this break is supposed to be rhythmical, you should move this break 1/4 later to suit the "rhythm".
3. 02:48:478 (3) - Due to the previous "kick-sliders" most of the rookies will expect 1 repeat only for this one. I strongly suggest to either remove one repeat or use a simple slider.
4. 02:55:336 - The rhythmical change happens here, thus "Kiai Time" should end here.
5. 03:01:049 (1,2) - Perhaps move the NC to (2)? The previous combo seems too short imo.

1. 02:00:479 - Same as [Easy], if this is supposed to be a rhythmical break, you should drag it 1/4 later.
2. 02:55:193 - ^
3. 02:55:336 - The rhythmical change happens here, thus "Kiai Time" is supposed to end here.
4. 02:55:336 - I strongly suggest to map this break, you mapped this on [Easy] so I don't see why you wouldn't do it here. Also, it's a really small part so it wouldn't take much time~
5. 03:25:050 (7) - I think it's NC time, perhaps add it?
6. 03:46:765 (1) - Is this NC really necessary? Seems really random imo. I'd suggest to remove it.

1. Whoa, 4 Mins without breaks... I strongly suggest to add another one, perhaps here: 02:00:479 like you did in [Normal]?
2. 00:58:763 (5,1,2,3) - Slightly increase spacing between this objects, please. Otherwise, these look like fake 1/4. (Also, move the NC to (5))
3. 01:30:763 (4) - Perhaps, modify this slider-shape a bit so it doesn't cover some of the next circles?
4. 02:55:336 - The musical change happens here, thus the Kiai should end here~
5. 03:25:049 (8) - This combo-length seems too long, perhaps NC here?

02:48:478 (3) - Due to the previous "kick-sliders" most of the rookies will expect 1 repeat only for this one. I strongly suggest to either remove one repeat or use a simple slider.

02:48:478 (3) - I don't particularly like kicksliders on Easy difficulties, it can be confusing for new players.

deepsea wrote:

[Hard]
00:47:335 (1,2,3) - These are kinda hard to read and a little...not beautiful　Fixed I think ?

Easy & Normal
Nothing is actually wrong, just saying placing notes very close didn't make map easier, it makes map hard to read.　I was thinking about to replace them, but yet, I don't know. I am allowed to do this kind of big changes during weekend only, so I'll see. However, Easy changed a lot already (from 0.8x to 1.0x then to 1.1x).
Also diff gap between Easy and Normal is a bit too big but still fine.　Some people mentioned this already. But I'm stupid enough, kept adding notes in Normal .

Star.
不愧是小車車神觸。　小車車神觸 is so MOE

Krisom wrote:

A promise is a promise! 7th BAT modpost go!　Gratz

General.-
·I'd move the log down on the OP and place higher the fact that Easy is a collab. Because right now it's kinda hidden.　Alright, I don't get this >"<
· Well well, it's a suprise that I dont find anything in the general field! Good ^^!　Yeah >w</

Hard.-
00:28:192 (4,5,6,7,8) - Change to normal-hitnormals like in 00:19:049 (2,3,4,5,6,7) to match the drums :3! Dont forget to remove the whistles!　Fixed
01:24:049 (2,3) - I'd curve these sliders, the flow gets suddenly cut between (2) and (3) and it doesnt fits. Spacing them just a tad closer would be a good idea too imo.　Fixed
01:55:049 (1,2,3) - Carefull! A weird stack occurs in-game below (1) because of the stacking of (2) and (3)! To solve this,I'd move (2) away to prevent the stack from happening, you can come up with another idea if you like though　Fixed
02:37:049 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:24:049 (2,3), I'd curve these a bit　Fixed
03:09:049 (1) - Remove the finish? This ends in silence anyways. Also I'm quite sure this should end 1/2 later, on 03:11:336　Fixed
03:45:049 (2,3,4) - The stack makes this pattern underlap with 03:44:478 (1)'s end, I'd move the whole stack a bit down and right to prevent this (OR (1) a bit up and left)　Fixed

Normal.-
03:06:479 (1) - Why dont you just make this end on 03:11:336 ?　That would be too long, so I changed it a little different

Easy.-
03:09:621 - Remove this break?　Fixed

I'm not a big fan of Miku X Len, but that's unrelated to the modpost =3=　Ehhhhh, actually, I'm fine with any couple pair lol
Also why is Len always a Shota D:?!　That's why he's so cuteeeeeee, right :3 ?

Oh yeah, the diffs are lovely and this map was a nice suprise, Let me know when you fix stuff and I'll come back, mkay?　Sure!

tutuhaha wrote:

超帅的有没有！！！！！！！！加油加油~\(≧▽≦)/~！！！！！！！！！！！！！

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Easy]
02:48:478 (3) - This is a VERY small kick slider, new players may have trouble knowing they need to hold as they'll never see the second reverse arrow

That's all, fix and i'll rank

IceBeam wrote:

Okaaay..

Folder and map setting are fine

[Easy]
00:54:193 (4,5) - why not to remove (5)-th circle and extend the slider up to it's time? It'd much more consistent in case of previous patterns　Fixed
01:18:764 (1) - shorten this slider by 1/1? Cause having a note at the downbeat (01:19:336) is more correct and it'd be improve the rhytm　Fixed
01:37:622 (5) - finish is missing?　Fixed
01:39:907 (6) - ^　Fixed
01:46:764 (1) - change it to a reverse-slider,so you will have a note at 01:47:621. it'd be muuuuch better　Fixed
01:49:050 (2) - shorten by 1/2? I heard a note at 01:49:907　Fixed
03:49:622 (3) - ^ :/　I changed the pattern a little

[Normal]
03:01:907 - 2 finishes in a row sound a bit annoying,remove this one please　Removed the first one

[Hard]
01:10:478 (2) - could you shorten this one by 1/2 and start 01:11:620 (3) 1/2 later with adding a circle to 01:11:621? it'd be perfect　Sure, fixed

I only pointed out the things that could really imporve the rhytm/playability..
It's especially needed in the easiest difficulty,so I'd like you to fix the most of my suggestions　They sound even better after your mod

Call me back if you decide to change anything

IceBeam wrote:

Okaaay..

Folder and map setting are fine

[Easy]
02:01:050 (1,2) - same,remove (2)-nd circle and extend it up to it's point please there are many other note, so you can just say i'm following the voice
02:29:907 (4) - it's a bit late,it might be fit the lyrics but not that well..just move the whole slider 1/2 back and it'll be fine with rythmn it won't fit the way i mapped after and before.
02:37:907 (1) - red tick after the spinner? well,leaving this to Sakura Might be more happy if i did start on the white before or after? making it way harder than it is ?
02:54:764 (1) - again asking you to shorten by 1/1 cause there should be a note at 02:55:336 Well, if i kept adding note and shorten slider, why did you said that the only slider solution felt better?

Call me back if you decide to change anything

Krisom wrote:

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mukuchi na futari ~
Saigo ni tsugeta kimochi ~
Jaa ne ~! Ahhhhh!!!!
「Gomen ne」
「Arigatou」

Congratulations!

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IkkiMinami wrote:

gratz gina! :3

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Gratz MeiMei ;D

gina91189 wrote:

Thank guys :3
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