1. Castle Crush (1,82 stars, 107 notes)
2. Chain Link Chamber (3,12 stars, 138 notes)
3. Toxic Tower (4,74 stars, 276 notes)

1. 01/15: uploaded to Pending.
   Fixes according to ouranhshc's mod.
   Moved to WIP.
   Added new mp3 and fixed the storyboard.
2. 01/16: Moved back to pending.
   Fixes according to Jarby's mod.
3. 01/17: Fixes according to Agnes' mod.
   Fix according to RandomJibberish's mod.
4. 01/19: Fixes according to Krisom's mod.
5. 01/21: Fixes according to Jarby's IRC mod. Bubbled by Jarby.
   Changed to Ploy's (or Alace's) timing. Popped by orioncomet.
   Added a fade out in the storyboard. Rebubbled by orioncomet.
6. 01/22: Fixed the fade out in the storyboard. Rebubbled by Beuchi-chan.
7. 01/23: Added Finish hitsound to the map and changed soft-hitnormal.wav.
   Changes to hitsounds.

ouranhshc wrote:

Toxic Tower - overall doesn't seem planned out well :(
00:27:137 (5) - slider isn't straight nice catch
00:33:730 (7) - 1grid right, 1 grid up? hm... nope
00:36:864 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1) - this section, could been planned out better, the combos don't go with the music/SB that well Changed.
01:00:601 (2,3) - make them not touch k

Normal
boxxy D:

Easy
boxxy D:

rrtyui wrote:

Titie chanege

Dave Wise→David Wise

Jarby wrote:

Chain Link Chamber:

00:47:259 (1,1,1,2) - In this situation, I don't believe the arrangement is logical. Remove the second new combo. okay

Castle Crush:

00:43:039 (1,1,1,1) - As above, divide into sections of 2. done
00:51:479 (1,1,1) - Though I believe in this context, 3 would work better. Oh ho ho. :( done
01:12:578 - I don't think the break here needs to be so long just because it's an easy difficulty. It would be less of a pain on the player if you halved its length. done

arien666 wrote:

I think the pizza is done :3

Agnes wrote:

Odaril~ Agnes~

[Overall]
Nothing major to poke at.

[Castle Crush]
No problems here.

[Chain Link Chamber]
Few suggestions; apply them if you wish.
00:36:973 (1) - This felt a little out of place, but I believe it's just because of the notes at 00:34:600 (1,2,3). It's supposed to be the held note.
01:31:039 (5) - Try to move this down a tad bit? Done.

[Toxic Tower]
00:04:534 (9,1) - ffffff I'm not really fond of overlaps such as this. @_@ Makes it hard to see if it was a slider and whatnot, but I see what you were trying to do with the SB, so... I'm not really sure how this can be worked out. All up to you. Neither do I ! But I thought it would make sense here, because I've been using these weird rock pillars so far, and this slider follows them as well.

Here, have a star. c:

RandomJibberish wrote:

General
Try this for your green image - idk how authentic to the game it is, I was just messing around lol In the game, the poison ends very straight the way mine does. :/

Greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen

[attachment=0:c0658]green.png[/attachment:c0658]

I found the lack of any finish type sounds pretty jarring. Whatever you're going for though. I tried to use some finishes, but I couldn't find a place where they fit, so... no finish.
Oh, and tick 2 on all diffs. dammit why do I forget

Toxic Tower
01:28:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Aaaah 1/2 stack with triplet in the middle. I'd spread out the whole thing so there would be no uneven stacks, but at least move 6 somewhere else. Fixed

I'd also avoid stacking under sliderends on the easier diffs, but it's probably 'k I used them on rhythms I had already used before, so I think it's okay ? I'll keep that in mind though

so yeah nothing really wrong, have fun thanks~

Krisom wrote:

General-
·"the best game ost ever", do you REALLY need this on tags? removed
·You have countdown enabled on Castle Crush, remove it like in the other diffs or add it to the other ones countdown enabled = EEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW *slaps self against a wall until his head explodes*
·Disable letterboxing during breaks? what does that do

SB-
·Don't forget that there are other mods aside from osu!. In CtB, the dissapearance of the toxic would be really sudden and look horrible, even if there's a spinner. I'd advise you to add a fade out, make the poison lower it's level during the spinner, or make it fill the screen. Your choice. The poison first filled the screen completely. Then I was yelled at for it and changed. done

Toxic-
00:38:882 - Colorhax around dis area bugs me a bit. I know what you're trying to do with the green, but after each green combo you get the same brown combo again for a while. Why not go "Green -> brown1 -> Green -> Brown 2 -> Green -> Gray" and so on? Also, have you considered adding another green? It'd look nicer imo. At first it was suppose to have a brown scale, but I had to completely redo that part, and forgot to re-add it. And no, I won't add another green, because in the game, the poison has only one colour.

Chain-
nothin' worth mentioning.

Crush-
nothin' worth mentioning.

Ruisu-kun wrote:

Your song won my first mod in the life xD, if you want, follow it

Castle Crush

00:34:600 (1,2) - Why this notes aren't sliders? Because it's three separate notes in the song.
01:26:820 (4) - nonlinear with (2) It's not supposed to be.

Chain Link Chamber

00:42:776 (x) - add a note There is no note here for a reason. Mainly, stacking three notes then placing another note unstack plays rather bad, and stacking all four would break the symmetry of the pattern.
00:46:995 (x) - ^
00:51:215 (x) - ^

Toxic Tower

*I love the acid effect *w*, just like the game * mwahaha

00:40:138 (2) - nonlinear with (1 & 3) Not supposed to be.
00:45:413 (2) - ^ Same.
00:57:677 (x) - add a note Having a triple at that calmer part of the song feels weird - not adding.
01:01:896 (x) - ^ Same.
01:02:951 (x) - ^
01:10:336 (x) - ^
01:35:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make it linear The acid is supposed to be a liquid, so I avoided linear patterns in it.

That's it! I enjoyed my first mod xD, Lucky with your map!

ByE~!

Lybydose wrote:

Mentioned in IRC about how many of the hitsounds are SUPER QUIET and can't be heard at all, which is pretty stupid. The soft hitnormals are waaaaaay too quiet.

Also, try using more soft whistles. They would work well on some of these notes for example: 00:14:026 (2), 00:15:081 (4) - 00:15:608 (1) - 00:16:663 (6) - 00:17:190 (8) - 00:18:245 (3) - 00:19:300 (4) - 00:19:827 (1). It seems odd that you've got no whistles here, but then you start spamming them later in the song.

Also, the part where you have slightly increased volume whistles (00:43:032 (1) and those other notes like it) sound better to me with soft finishes instead of whistles, but only if you keep the volume pretty low (like where it is already) and only if you also increase the volume of the other notes to be audible. Otherwise, it would seem too loud and out of place.