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Sawai Miku - Colorful (Asterisk DnB Remix)

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Hokichi
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Hokichi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, June 28, 2016 at 1:37:07 PM

Artist: Sawai Miku
Title: Colorful (Asterisk DnB Remix)
Source: 冴えない彼女の育てかた
Tags: hokichi turtlestuffs nojima asaiga bara saekano 冴えない彼女の育てかた sawai miku
BPM: 175
Filesize: 16899kb
Play Time: 00:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Asaiga's Colorful Dance (4.43 stars, 93 notes)
  2. Bara's Hard (3.18 stars, 544 notes)
  3. Collab (2.02 stars, 13 notes)
  4. Insane (4.39 stars, 444 notes)
  5. Log's Light Insane (0 stars, 0 notes)
  6. Nojima's Easy (1.5 stars, 275 notes)
  7. Turtle's Normal (1.79 stars, 232 notes)
Download: Sawai Miku - Colorful (Asterisk DnB Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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MY 4TH BEATMAP. CAN'T BELIEVE IT.

[DIFFICULTIES SPREAD]

Easy - Nojima
Normal - _DT3
Hard - Bara- FINISHED
Light Insane - Log Off Now.
Insane - Hokichi
Collab - Hokichi and havkz.
Rain - ChiGusu
Storyboard - about 50% for Collab and about 56% for the rest

Change Log
  1. 28/04/16: Add custom colors.
  2. 29/04/16: Add new thing to the SB. (New Spectrum and Credits).
  3. 02/05/16: Update SB.
  4. 03/05/16: Update SB.
  5. 07/05/16: Update with Nojima's GD.
  6. 08/05/16: Update with havkz collab part.
  7. 09/05/16: Update with Asaiga collab part.
  8. 09/05/16: Update with LMT1996 collab part.
  9. 09/05/16: Update with Collab New Custom Color and hitsound added.
  10. 10/05/16: Update with Insane diff completion.
  11. 14/05/16: Update with -Spy collab part.
  12. 25/05/16: Update with Bara-'s GD and some new SB elements.
  13. 28/05/16: Update with TurtleStuffs's GD and havkz's Collab parts.
  14. 02/06/16: Update with LMT collab parts.
  15. 05/06/16: Update Insane diff with Kalindraz's mod
  16. 06/06/16: Update Light Insane diff with Rose Melody's mod
  17. 07/06/16: Remap Insane, Easy and Light Insane
  18. 16/06/16: Remap Collab
  19. 26/07/16: Graveyarded

[Guest Difficulties]

Nojima | _DT3 | Bara- | Log Off Now | ChiGusu



Special Thanks
Bara-, Nojima, TurtleStuffs and Nojima for the GD.
havkz for the collab.
XinCrin for the lyricGenerator and spectrumGenerator
Astom for osu! dots


Modders

  1. Kalindraz

THANKS FOR CONCERNING ABOUT MY MAP. HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS



I CAN RANK THIS, I CAN RANK THIS, I CAN RANK THIS

Last edited by Hokichi , edited 46 times in total.
Bara-
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Joined April 2013
Bara-
My diff --> *CLICK*
Hokichi
825 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Hokichi

Bara- wrote:

My diff --> *CLICK*
Thanks
I'll get to mod your map really soon
Thanks again :)
Bastionior
560 posts
Joined January 2013
Bastionior
hi from #modreqs
collab wip > ignored.

General
  1. In Question of mapping is great for rhythm and hitsounding. The only problem I saw is in relation between flow of the Insane difficult is that diff has some notes that are overlap, I think it would be better for aesthetic issue fixed them. I will quote them.
  2. and the flow of the last diff is irregular means if you want to know about how to improve the flow, quality , let a utility click here:D/,just needs polishing.

Insane

  1. 00:02:455 (5,8) - I started here, citing on the meeting of these notes, I think it would be better to distance them.
  2. 00:03:140 (1,4) - overlap, i guess.
  3. 00:05:198 (3) - I could make a blanket with these notes ? 00:05:369 (4,5,6,7,8) - some like that http://puu.sh/pgs3Y.jpg.
  4. 00:06:569 (3) - I can not hear a triplet there, usually it starts at the red tick, like the one you did here 00:08:112 (3) - .
  5. 00:08:455 (4,1) - why this high distancing? and that is the only part that used this jump.
  6. 00:20:455 (6,2) - another overlap.
  7. 00:27:483 (6,1,2) - this is very random man, you have to apply symmetry or a more direct targeting/flow, a example: http://puu.sh/pgt6o.jpg.
  8. 00:34:683 (1,4) - Fix ds in relation to other notes.
  9. 00:43:598 (3,4) - I believe it is better to replace 4 single notes.
  10. 00:49:426 (5) - improve the shape of this slider, as a matter of aesthetics even.
  11. 01:03:483 (1,3,1,3) - same of first item of list.
  12. 01:06:226 (1,3) - improve blanket
  13. 01:16:683 - you miss a note here imo.
  14. 01:26:798 (1,2,3,4) - this is very irregular, you could try to make a square with these sliders with reverse arrow. a example: http://puu.sh/pgunA.jpg.
  15. 01:30:740 (6,3) -
  16. 01:32:968 (5,6,1,2) - about an irregular way.
  17. 01:51:482 - this session to this session 02:13:426 - only concerns me only the sliders 1/4 what you put in that session, the vast majority are placed in random order in which the flow is non-existent, I highly recommend it to rethink this part and improve these 1/4.
  18. 02:12:225 (1) - improve shape of this slider, to make a cool blanket with 02:12:740 (2) -
  19. 02:40:168 (3,4) - overlap imo.
  20. 02:56:626 (6,7,8,9,10) - try make a triangle pattern < suggestion.
  21. 02:57:997 (2,3) - for each velocity change only applies nc.
  22. 03:07:940 (6,2) - eeh...overlap
  23. 03:20:625 - I'm sure that here had to be 30% -35 volume, this 75% very defocuses that part.
  24. 03:46:340 (4,5,1,2,3) - I think it would be better to replace by 2 triangles made by 6 singles notes, to emphasize the last Kiai, What do you think?
  25. 03:56:968 (3,4) - lol, change the direction of 3 to not be so awkward.
  26. 03:59:025 (1,2,3,4) - same ds imo, fix that.
  27. 04:10:511 (4,5) - align them.
  28. 04:12:911 (2,3,4,5) - this is very confusing, you'd better rethink this pattern.
  29. lol, if ignored some beats which occurs here ( 04:32:111 - , 04:32:282 - , 04:32:625 - , 04:32:797 - , 04:33:140 - , 04:43:082 - , 04:43:254 - , 04:43:597 - , 04:43:768 - 04:44:111 - )

only that. bye.
Hokichi
825 posts
Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Hokichi
Red is Disagree.
Green is Considering.
Blue is Agree and fixed.
Purple is Agree but will fix in my opinion.

Kalindraz wrote:

General
  1. In Question of mapping is great for rhythm and hitsounding. The only problem I saw is in relation between flow of the Insane difficult is that diff has some notes that are overlap, I think it would be better for aesthetic issue fixed them. I will quote them.
  2. and the flow of the last diff is irregular means if you want to know about how to improve the flow, quality , let a utility click here:D/,just needs polishing.

Insane

  1. 00:02:455 (5,8) - I started here, citing on the meeting of these notes, I think it would be better to distance them. - Fixed
  2. 00:03:140 (1,4) - overlap, i guess. - Nah
  3. 00:05:198 (3) - I could make a blanket with these notes ? 00:05:369 (4,5,6,7,8) - some like that http://puu.sh/pgs3Y.jpg. - Did blanket.
  4. 00:06:569 (3) - I can not hear a triplet there, usually it starts at the red tick, like the one you did here 00:08:112 (3) - . - Fixed
  5. 00:08:455 (4,1) - why this high distancing? and that is the only part that used this jump. - Fixed, I moved them closer.
  6. 00:20:455 (6,2) - another overlap. - That's no overlap man.
  7. 00:27:483 (6,1,2) - this is very random man, you have to apply symmetry or a more direct targeting/flow, a example: http://puu.sh/pgt6o.jpg. - Changed
  8. 00:34:683 (1,4) - Fix ds in relation to other notes. - 00:35:198 (4,1) - The jump is on purpose.
  9. 00:43:598 (3,4) - I believe it is better to replace 4 single notes. - Changed into a stream.
  10. 00:49:426 (5) - improve the shape of this slider, as a matter of aesthetics even. - Improved
  11. 01:03:483 (1,3,1,3) - same of first item of list. - Something like this?
  12. 01:06:226 (1,3) - improve blanket - Improved
  13. 01:16:683 - you miss a note here imo. - No, it's silent.
  14. 01:26:798 (1,2,3,4) - this is very irregular, you could try to make a square with these sliders with reverse arrow. a example: http://puu.sh/pgunA.jpg. - I followed your suggestion.
  15. 01:30:740 (6,3) - - Not an overlap.
  16. 01:32:968 (5,6,1,2) - about an irregular way. - On purpose
  17. 01:51:482 - this session to this session 02:13:426 - only concerns me only the sliders 1/4 what you put in that session, the vast majority are placed in random order in which the flow is non-existent, I highly recommend it to rethink this part and improve these 1/4. - Will remap.
  18. 02:12:225 (1) - improve shape of this slider, to make a cool blanket with 02:12:740 (2) - Done.
  19. 02:40:168 (3,4) - overlap imo. - No, I mean yes, but not an unrankable issue here.
  20. 02:56:626 (6,7,8,9,10) - try make a triangle pattern < suggestion. - I'll try.
  21. 02:57:997 (2,3) - for each velocity change only applies nc. - Forgot, thanks.
  22. 03:07:940 (6,2) - eeh...overlap - Nah
  23. 03:20:625 - I'm sure that here had to be 30% -35 volume, this 75% very defocuses that part. - 50% sounds great to me.
  24. 03:46:340 (4,5,1,2,3) - I think it would be better to replace by 2 triangles made by 6 singles notes, to emphasize the last Kiai, What do you think? - Considering.
  25. 03:56:968 (3,4) - lol, change the direction of 3 to not be so awkward. - Seem fine to me.
  26. 03:59:025 (1,2,3,4) - same ds imo, fix that. - Considering, because I did that on purpose.
  27. 04:10:511 (4,5) - align them. - Done
  28. 04:12:911 (2,3,4,5) - this is very confusing, you'd better rethink this pattern. - Changed
  29. lol, if ignored some beats which occurs here ( 04:32:111 - , 04:32:282 - , 04:32:625 - , 04:32:797 - , 04:33:140 - , 04:43:082 - , 04:43:254 - , 04:43:597 - , 04:43:768 - 04:44:111 - ) - Considering

only that. bye.
Thank you for the mod. :) :)
DeletedUser_2179411
DeletedUser_2179411
Hi .. From #modreqs .. M4M ..

Nojima's Easy :

* in this diff i see that it should remap again .. cause the notes are not following the rhythm .. so yeah sorry for telling you this .. there is some parts should be clickable.. but you missed it ..
so i'm sorry i will not mod this diff .. : (

Light Insane :

00:25:940 (4,5,6) - change there places by stacking them to this slider 00:26:455 (1) - like this http://i.imgur.com/JtRmV06.png .. it looks really beautiful ..
00:46:683 (3) - stack this slider with previous reverse slider this one ->00:45:655 - and blanket with the next slider ..
00:47:712 (3) - Blanket this slider with the next slider ..
00:50:112 (2) - ^ Same .. and blanket the next slider too with this slider ..
01:13:083 (1) - ^ same .. blanket this slider with the next slider .. and move the next circle a little bit up just don't make it touch with the previous circles ..
01:59:369 (5,1) - blanket those two sliders ..
02:16:512 (2) - make this slider to stack with this circle -> 02:14:969 (2) -
02:16:855 (3) - ^ same blanket it with the previous slider ..
02:19:255 (2) - ^ this too ..
02:39:312 (4,1) - ^ same blanket it with the previous slider please ..
02:55:255 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these circles you can make it like honey comp -> http://i.imgur.com/pKGxjRS.png like this to look more cool ..
03:06:569 (4) - please fix this slider to blanket with other sliders ..
03:27:140 (3,4,1,2) - DS these circles perfectly and fix the curve thing too ..
03:28:855 (1,2) - these sliders are not blanketed .. please fix it ..
03:56:626 (2) - fix this slider please ..
04:12:569 (7,1) - blanket please ..
04:33:312 (1) - DS this slider with the previous circle ..

* ok this diff is need more work on it .. i hope you fix the blanket thing and the position of the notes ..

btw the SB is amazing ..

and GL on your map ..
hyouri
390 posts
Joined June 2012
hyouri
hi megumi
Hokichi
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Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Hokichi

Alveryn wrote:

hi megumi
Megumi said "Hi" to Alveryn ^^
Hokichi
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Joined June 2015
Topic Starter
Hokichi
Huge apologize, but I won't be ranking this soon
First, my aim is to get this ranked, so I'll comeback when my mapping skill is better
Second... I'm aiming at sth else stm...
So... Very sorry...
oppa1
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oppa1
good map
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