Hellzero wrote:

02:22:384 (5) - ^ huh?

TicClick wrote:

Easy
01:12:966 (1) - make it.. umm.. wider,
01:20:640 (3) - oh. ^
01:27:617 (2) - straight edge?

pieguy1372 wrote:

impossiblexu's Easy:

01:04:594 (3) - new combo Fixed

ziin wrote:

[impossiblexu]
01:20:640 (3) - looks bad to have start and end so close together

IceBeam wrote:

[Saten's Hard]
a bit low OD for a hard difficulty,increase by 1(2)? if possible, I would like to use this OD.

00:38:954 (7) - looks a bit weird make the spacing similar to previous objects,please done
00:57:617 (5) - add a new combo mark here or rebuild the pattern,as the distance between (4) and (5) looks similar to (5) & (6)
This thing confused me,I thought there's another 1/2 jump and was about to missclick done
01:17:849 (3) - mirror this slider from 01:18:198 (4)? it'd look better,otherwise 4-th looks a bit odd and out of pattern done
01:28:140 (1) - place it under 01:28:140 (1) please,it looks much better if it's symmetrical I didn't get this one
01:46:280 (4) - covered by the slider,but at least it's readable and expected,so..ok ok

Saten-san wrote:

IceBeam wrote:

[b]01:28:140 (1) - place it under 01:28:140 (1) please,it looks much better if it's symmetrical I didn't get this one

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IceBeam wrote:

I meant something like this:

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The whole pattern is symmetrical,but the (6)-th object looks a bit out
Well,it's minor,so up to you

IceBeam wrote:

[impossiblexu's Easy]
00:08:082 (3) - I really don't like to see such sliders,especially in easier diffs.
Personally,simple plain sliders like 00:05:291 (4) look better.anyway,I think these tiny holdups affect the gameplay and beginners might not read it well and get a sliderbreak..

I won't point such sliders throughout the map,but I hope you will follow my suggestion and fix all of them or at least the most..

00:10:001 (2) - why not to extend it up to 00:10:524? it'll be easier to read,and the rhytm will be more consistent Fixed
00:14:361 (3) - I'dd add a finish here and after each 1 downbeat (long white tick)
soo,like this:
00:17:152 (1) - here
00:19:942 (1) - ^
00:25:524 (1) - ^ and so on

00:15:059 (4) - 1 grid up and right to make it symmetrical?
00:43:663 (3) - Add finishes to both notes?
01:53:431 (3) - 1 grid up
01:54:128 (5) - 1 grid up and right to make a perfect square shape

It's fine gameplay wise,but those finishes would improve hitsounds,they're a bit raw atm :<

1. 00:14:361 (3) - NC this, the majority of your combo are new combo on each 2 stanzas but not for this one here
2. 01:27:617 (2) - I suggest to made the slider end on x:128 y:264. I think the straight angle slider is not very appealing and how it touches 4 make the whole pattern looks crumpled
3. 01:49:942 (2) - (Nazi) try moving the 2 red anchors on the middle of the slider a little bit to the right (using grid lv4 move them 1 grid right) to make them also move the slider so it in a straight line with the previous slider

1. 01:22:559 (2) - the repeat sounds very awkward cause I don't hear any beat on the particular place. It's better if you use a long slider start from 01:22:559 to 01:23:082 or you can remove the repeat then add a circle at 01:23:082
2. 01:26:221 (6) - remove the finish, it doesn't suit the current position (the finish is more suitable in 01:26:919 imo)

1. 00:10:524 (1,2) - This stack has been shoot down by A BAT before because this are basically stack 0 which is unrankable. So please re-position it
2. 01:04:594 (1) - finish?

1. 3 unsnapped object!!
2. 00:07:209 (37) - big don is more suitable here
3. 00:08:779 (45) - ^
4. 00:14:361 (83,84,85) - kkd is more suited here
5. 01:40:175 (86,87,88,89,90) - you should add finish on these just like on 00:22:035 (128,129,130,131,132)
6. 01:54:826 (186) - big don
7. 02:29:361 (128,129) - change to katsu to follow the increasing pace on the music?
8. 02:31:106 (139) - make this a big don/katsu too. This will balance the rhythm on 02:30:757 (137) and it also fit the finish on the music
9. 02:42:442 (1) - this spinner should start on 02:42:355 cause most of your spinner are directly after the stream but this is the only one that's not

1. 00:11:221 (3) - why do you use 50% on this? it doesn't make any difference and the music doesn't indicate any rising or lowering volume
2. 00:45:059 (1) - finish this
3. 00:24:826 (7,8,9) - this totally break the flow, not only because of the jump but also because how it goes from below to up which is against the flow from the previous objects. I suggest to CTRL+R 00:24:826 (7,9)

IceBeam wrote:

[Saten's Hard]
00:57:617 (5,6) - same and btw in case of previous jump you should add new combo or increase a distance between them,as I pointed out earlier
something like this would be perfect:

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Done

IceBeam wrote:

27 unsnapped objects

also..

01:24:041

02:42:181

IceBeam wrote:

[Insane]
01:28:140 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ты не исправил это? может все же лучше в одном направлении крутить? Мне больше нравится так, а то когда сильный flow иногда заносит (:

Hellzero wrote:

maybe, cuz i'm loser orz

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
00:57:442 (7,1) - Kind of a big jump, and doesn't flow very well I guess it didn't, fixed
01:22:035 (3,4) - I'd like a little more spacing between these. Left/right 2 grids looks good. done~
01:28:140 (1) - This is really pushing it for a hard difficulty. Way soon after a very short spinner. I guess you're right ;w;

Garven wrote:

[General]
The BG looks kinda low quality with all those artifacts replace BG
Tick rate 2 fits best with this song ok

[Normal]
00:34:245 (1) - This spinner was... kind of awkwardly placed. Especially since you don't follow up with similar usage during same parts of the music. remapped

[Insane]
AR -1 no
OD +1 added (not 2 OD cuz map have many streams and not so hight bpm. IMO it more fit)

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:16:628 (5) - Looks like you accidentally set this slider a little too long for some reason. wtf... fixed

[Saten]
Why did you increase the AR? Bring it back to 7. And while you're at it, increase OD to at least 6. fixed

Sander-Don wrote:

00:02:152 (8) - change to k
00:02:849 (10) - ^
00:04:070 (16) - change to d
00:04:245 (17) - change to k
00:04:245 (17) - ??
00:08:431 (35) - change to K
00:09:652 (41) - change to d
00:09:826 (42) - change to k
00:10:785 (47) - remove
00:10:873 (48) - change to D
00:11:221 (50) - change to K
00:11:570 (52) - change to D
00:12:442 (57) - change to d => kkkk 1/2s.
00:12:530 (58) - remove
01:47:675 (128) - change to d same as earlier 57.
01:47:849 (129) - remove
01:48:024 (130) - ^

That's about it seeings how it is very repetitive, doesn't fit the music very well either. ikr.

Flow 2/5
Patterns 2/5
Creativity 2/5 => Repetitive = refuse to make 1569740981897 different patterns for 1 same song, that'd be stupid, don't you agree ? :V
overall 6/15 :V

Nice map, Gezo ^.^ ♥
Nice pain in the ass to fix it... Went under 20 FPS to fix my map ._. (I highly hesitate if I can delete the latter part. So 2 taikos)

Sander-Don wrote:

Flow 2/5
Patterns 2/5
Creativity 2/5
overall 2/5

Nice map, Gezo ^.^ ♥

Backfire wrote:

Sander-Don wrote:

Flow 2/5
Patterns 2/5
Creativity 2/5
overall 2/5

Nice map, Gezo ^.^ ♥

...Uh huh.