1. Hard (4.78 stars, 419 notes)
2. MM's Taiko (5 stars, 1286 notes)
3. Normal (4.25 stars, 332 notes)
4. SapphireGhost's Easy (2.4 stars, 232 notes)

dkun wrote:

Hello.

key:
fix me!
just a suggestion
comment/compliment

General
You need a background.
You need hitsounds. got background so far

Hard
I suggest remap with vvv
Increase your Distance Snapping rate, this is a big clusterfuck in itself.done
Reduce tick rate to ~1.

If not, well...
00:27:742 (5,6,7,8,9) - No, this is confusing, and the map is just starting. done
00:29:804 (2,3,4,5) - No as well, this is confusing.
00:31:865 (8,9,10) - ^ done and done
00:33:177 (5,6,7) - don't stack these for the sake of spacing. done
00:43:485 (1-6) - This is okay, but it seems a bit... eh. done
00:47:796 (6,7,8,9) - Re-arrange this.
00:55:292 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing on 1,2,3 seems a bit edge-y, and repeat 4 to go with the music.
01:07:287 (1,2,3) - ^ without the slider remark, though.
01:10:098 (6,7,8,9) - No. Spacing issues yet again. all of the above done
01:39:898 (12) - ^ - rearrange done
01:43:834 (2,3,4,5) - Clusterrrrrr, no.
02:08:948 (6,7) - The placement of these two make it confusing to click. done
02:12:321 (13,14,15,16) - This is a bit nazi, but the spacing looks a bit off compared to the rest.
02:17:944 (8,9,10,11) - Rearrange these. done done
02:33:687 (4,5,6) - Stack 5,6 like this.

SPOILER

02:58:988 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - These are off beat. Re-arrange on timeline. annnnnnnddd all of those done

Haneii wrote:

~General~
Re-encode your mp3. Mp3 max is 192kps
Set a preview point for the song.

~Hard~
AIMOD picked up some spacing errors - go through them and check if they really are errors.

01:44:577 (6) – extend slider so it ends at 01:44:952
01:46:096 – add a note here?
01:48:513 (6) – don’t stack it under 5?
01:48:700 – add a note here? And if you decided to unstack 6 place this new note under (stack it) 6
01:48:888 (1) – end spinner at 01:50:574
01:57:508 (7) – remove repeat?
02:01:444 (1) – end spinner at 02:04:255
02:10:065 (8) – end this slider at 02:10:252, end the slider at 02:10:627 (9) at 02:10:814, and finally add a note on 02:11:002.
02:24:120 – add a note here
02:24:682 (15) – remove the repeat (btw the way it’s overlapped under 12 kind of looks ugly :/ )
02:28:805 (5) – end it at 02:28:993
02:33:490 (4) – move to 02:33:303
02:33:678 (5) - move to 02:33:678
02:34:615 (1) – start spinner 02:34:427 (end same place as before though)
02:55:042 (1,2,3) – delete these three and place a slider that goes from 02:55:042 to 02:55:417. Then add a note to 02:55:792
03:07:598 – add a note here?
03:15:844 (12) – remove note (don’t forget to adjust spacing after)
03:16:969 (2) – move to 03:16:781 (adjust spacing)
03:18:843 (5) – start at 03:19:030 and shorten it so it ends at 03:19:218
03:20:342 (11) – move this slider to 03:20:529 and place a note 03:20:342 (stack it on top of the beginning of the slider)

Honestly I modded this with trying to make things "sound right" in mind. Didn't focus on slider/note choices or arrangements. Everything "looks" randomly placed and thrown around - try and make patterns where each part flows/transitions into the next part smoothly.

No star for now since there's a lot of work that needs to be done. Fix up these corrections + remap it a bit so its aesthetically appealing + finish up normal, and ask me for a remod =]

Good luck!

SapphireGhost wrote:

General
Is there storyboarding? If not, take out the .osb file and Full Submit
Normal
01:55:447 (1) This note fits the music, but confused me...

Oh, and have an unfinished guest diff.
And a Star.

MMzz wrote:

Could I taiko this please? :3

SapphireGhost wrote:

Yeah, no hitsounds yet

ztrot wrote:

I'll need to look over this later I'm glad the hit sounds I gave you worked out ^_^

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Finally, I got around to modding this shit.
Sorry Muffy

[Overall]
There are TWO .osb's in your song folder. Get rid of both please.
Preview points for the map isn't set. Set one please. May I suggest 02:07:254?did those

[Easy]
02:34:240 (1) - What? For an easy? I would think not.
03:48:828 (2) - No. Remove this.
This is a good difficulty.i'll leave this to SG

[Normal]
00:38:423 (x) - Add a note here, like on the end of the slider.
00:38:610 (x) - ^done
00:49:480 - Move this to 00:49:293, and make it end at 00:52:291, with a finish. Also consider using soft-hit to make the spinner end sound better. Add a break after?done
00:56:227 (4) - Ugly slider, make it look better.it is prettified
01:08:970 (4) - This sounds off with the singing.. Look at the easy guest difficulty to see what he did during these times that sound off. Just listen and you will find them. This is just one of themI'm gonna keep it the way it is <3
03:13:033 (1) - This will confuse people, since some will see the approaching circle and think it only rebounds once, but it rebounds twice. Consider making it less confusing.less confusing away!
03:46:204 - Extend this by 1/2 on the timeline.done
This difficulty needs work.I worked on it

[Hard]
00:35:799 (5) - Ugly slider, pretty it up.done
00:43:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix your spacing.done
00:55:196 - Make your Kiai time start at 00:55:290.done
01:16:841 (5) - Make this slider more curvy. Fix the points.fixed it
02:10:627 (9,10,11,12) - During gameplay, these get covered by the HP bar. Move them someplace else.moved
This difficulty needs work too. There's alot of sliders that need prettying up. And some spacing needs to get fixed. If you tried, you can look through the map and spot them easily (because they aren't just one grid off, they are a couple to several grids off, which makes it look ugly.)worked on it and made it pretty

[Taiko]
I don't mod Taiko.

No star. Fix what I've said and I'll come back and recheck.

dkun wrote:

Hard
00:32:239 (11) - Align with 8, looks better.
00:33:176 (5) - Make this align with 1? Looks like you were going for a shape here.
00:41:047 (1,2,3) - 3 is off.
00:48:168 (8) - Align with 5.
02:18:311 (8,9,10) - What the hell? Align.
02:22:059 (6) - This slider looks a bit, eh.
02:24:308 (14) - Align with 12
02:59:352 (10) - Off from 9, re-align.
^ - Fix the rest according with snap.
03:25:589 (2,3,4,5) - Re-align.
03:28:213 (1,2,3,4) - You could go with making this a square. Just a suggestion.

Normal
00:32:426 (4) - Out of alignment with 1,2,3.
00:48 (4,5,6,7,8) - Re-align 8, maybe in a form like this? http://puu.sh/Sa0
02:01:444 (1-10) - I'm pretty sure 1-4/7-10 could be aligned better to look prettier. But this is just me. EX: http://puu.sh/Sa4
02:33:397 (4,5,6) - Re-align. http://puu.sh/Sa6
03:11:159 (3) - Align with 1.

I have no problems with the Easy/Taiko.

To end this overall, good job!
☆got all that done haha

Charles445 wrote:

Normal
A lot of the map is boxy, I.E. going straight left up right and down.
Add some more curves in their placement, right angles are ok in mdoeration.i'll fix those when i have more time
01:10:095 Make the 5 not touch the 4
01:41:766 (2,3,4) These are noticably not straight, and even if they were meant to be curvy it's inconsistent
03:08:535 The 11 should be under the 8, would look nice
03:37:209 This combo is confusing as poopfixed all those

Hard
00:32:239 Put that 11 under the 8's reverse point and reposition the 1done
00:59:225 4 touching 6 is ooglayfixed
01:00:537 Those 3 are under the slider, doesn't look that gooddone
01:42:891 A bit weirdonly a bit
01:47:388 Make this slider not touch the otherdone
03:07:036 The 1 shouldn't touch the 3fixed
03:19:218 That 5 would look nice in the middlekept that the way it was

IceBeam wrote:

Kay let's see.

Tags in Hard diff are completely different to others,moreover,you should add nicknames of guest mappers.Please,fix it.

[SG's Easy]
00:39:922 - Whistle fits really well here.
00:40:297 (1) - Finish?
00:55:290 (1) - ^
01:01:287 (1) - ^
01:07:284 (1) - ^
01:13:281 (1) - ^
01:19:278 (1) - ^
Oh well..you really should add more hitsounds,not just only finishes,but others too,it's ranking criteria.
01:58:258 (1,1,1,1) - It's combo spamming,please,fix.
02:34:427 (1) - Awesome,but..it's Easy,I'm not sure if it's rankable stuff..moreover,(2)-nd is just out of any rhytm.If you still want to keep this slider,continue it to 02:36:864,and (2)-nd must be placed at 02:37:239.
02:48:858 (1) - Remove NC?
03:48:828 - Nah,uggly,please silence it.leaving this to SG

[Normal]
00:38:423 (9,10) - Stack it properly?fixed
01:04:098 - Prolly it'd be hard for Normal diff,but I'd add a note,sounds much better.
01:17:966 - Add a note?decided against those
01:51:137 - Sounds bad,silence/use soft sampleset here?should be fixed
Hey,not bad,just the only thing that bugs me is flow.Anti-direction plays not that good,really.will work on the flow later lol

[Hard]
00:39:547 - Silence/use soft sampleset/finish hitsound.fixed
00:51:541 - Why not to add a note here?added
02:04:255 - Add finish/whistle?done
02:28:056 (1) - Oh,it's too close to previous object,please place it farther or at least stack with 02:27:306 (6).stacked
03:47:703 - Whistle?whistle it is

Quite solid for the first map.
Also,song is just awesome.
Good luck and have my star.

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Recheck.

[Easy]
02:34:427 (1) - You like messing with new players, don't you? Lol.

[Normal]
00:48:918 (8) - Align with 4,5.fixed
It's better, I'll give you that. But it's so linear. You need to add some patterns.
However this difficulty is ok the way it is.ty <3

[Hard]
00:51:916 - Personally I would extend this to 00:54:915. It sounds better that way.extended....hawt
Eh, it's okay.thanks?

Well... yeah okay. Star.

SapphireGhost wrote:

And kill kill kill the stupid .osb

RandomJibberish wrote:

Hi
General
Set tick rate 2 on all diffs I never really likes Slider tick 2

Hard
00:31:302 (1) - It's a bit awkward how this points over the rest of the combo. Point it towards the top right?did that
03:07:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks pretty clustered - something this might be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57177
03:19:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This also seems a bit like it's all in one place i like those two combos lol

Normal
This diff gets a bit square at times - try using some more interesting patterns?you are now the third person to say that and a MAT so i'll fix it XD
02:04:068 (1) - End 1/2 laterdone
02:22:996 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm doesn't seem to be following much :/fixed
03:46:204 (1) - End 1/1 earlierdone

Saphireghost's Easy
You shouldn't be so scared of using red ticks in easy diffs - You're probably making it more confusing than it would be if you followed the vocals properly
01:10:282 (1) - random spinner out of nowhere much
02:31:242 (1) - Maybe end 1/2 earlier?i'll let SG take that one

Good map.

SapphireGhost wrote:

To add some flavor to this otherwise completely boring post, I made a star.png that lets me score songs out of ten.
By the way, anyone who is about to write

"omg this is gumi star"

Was just saved around half a minute by me.

<- you know this is epic