Ceryuia wrote:

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Hihi~ From my Queue

[tasuke's Muzukashii]
On both of your diffs, some of your timing points aren't snapped They actually are snapped on the 1/6 ticks.
00:29:681 (8) - Change this to a kat as there is a high note here d is fine. I'd keep it.
01:42:213 (2,3) - Ctrl+G, there is a higher note on 01:42:213 I don't mind pitch in this part, It's just ddkkdkdk pattern. If I mind pitch, pattern will be dkdkdkdk and it's so boring.
03:45:251 (2,3) - ^ also for consistency in your Ura Oni Who cares. Players normally never notice difference since we can't play 2 difficulties at the same time. Also, both pattern actually fit to the song.

[tasuke's Ura Oni]
01:21:833 (11) - This beat here feels a little odd, either remove it or add a don at 01:21:706 hmm, sorry, not to me.
01:24:871 (20) - ^
03:24:871 (11) - ^
03:27:909 (19) - ^
03:34:238 (17,18,19) - Change this to ddk I couldn't get why.
03:49:808 (5) - Change this to a don

That is all from me ~! Good Luck ~!

No update, thank you though c:

1. 00:40:694 - hapus supaya lebih menekankan strong beat di 00:41:073 (38,39) - ?
   00:43:732 - sama seperti ^
2. 00:28:922 - ini juga bisa dihapus, karena pada section ini agak lebih kalem dari sesi selanjutnya, lebih enak kalo densitynya lebih rendah.
   00:31:960 - sama seperti ^
   00:34:997 - sama seperti ^
3. 00:47:529 - ganti jadi k? lebih ngalir dan rasanya nadanya lebih tinggi dari note setelahnya
4. 01:16:390 ~ rasanya sesi ini dapat dibuat lebih intens, misalnya dengan menambahkan note di 01:18:668 - dan 01:24:744 -
   01:28:162 - lalu ini pindahkan ke 01:26:643 - supaya dapet break lebih sebelum masuk sesi selanjutnya
   01:15:630 - note ini juga bisa dihapus untuk memberi break dan penekanan lebih sebelum masuk sesi ini
5. 01:28:542 ~ di sesi ini juga bisa ditambah beberapa note seperti di 01:29:681 - , 01:30:820 - , 01:35:757 - , 01:36:896 - , 01:32:719 -
6. 02:03:478 - ganti jadi d? rasanya lebih enak kalo dijatuhkan setelah nadanya meninggi sebelumnya
7. 02:53:985 (5,6,7) - certainly will need 4/1 break in the middle of kiai for rest. delete.
   03:18:289 (44,45,46) - can delete too

1. 01:09:808 - maybe add k here to make contrast with 01:06:770 - ?
2. 01:34:111 - try move to 01:34:491 - and change to d? this can reflect the difference in the music better imo
3. 03:37:149 - same as ^

1. 00:01:960 - add finish? nice emphasis to the first beat
2. 00:46:516 - deleting this note can emphasis the melody better imo
3. 01:19:301 - add d for better spread with futsuu?
   01:22:339 - same as ^
4. 02:03:605 (45,46) - delete? it's nice to have a break here before entering next section
   02:02:592 - and can add k here to match the piano
5. 02:37:656 - can delete for longer break. kiai seems very dense and a moment for rest here seems nice
   02:42:086 - maybe delete this too?
6. 02:54:871 - delete? looks hard for muzu.
   03:18:415 - same as ^
7. 03:05:884 (45,46,47,48,49) - maybe you should give a break here?
8. 03:22:339 - add d? same as 01:19:301
   03:25:377 - ^

• 
  hmmm.. spread needs improvement, Oni has a wide gap with Muzu. i think it's better if can remove around ~50 notes. e.g:

1. 00:26:263 ~ 00:38:415 - bagian ini relative kalem dibanding sesi selanjutnya, jadi lebih baik kurangi kerapatan notenya supaya bisa merepresentasikan musiknya lebih baik, misal: 00:28:415 - , 00:31:453 - , 00:34:491 - , 00:37:529 -
2. 01:21:833 - hapus supaya menekankan melodinya lebih baik
3. 01:27:149 - delete? looks dense and hard
   01:38:922 - same as ^
4. 01:52:846 ~ 02:04:997 - bagian ini rasanya juga bisa dikurang-kurangin. coba sendiri?
5. gile gw males banget benerin spread x_x

Volta wrote:

hello~

[Kantan]

1. 00:40:694 - hapus supaya lebih menekankan strong beat di 00:41:073 (38,39) - ?
   00:43:732 - sama seperti ^ oh deleted
2. 00:28:922 - ini juga bisa dihapus, karena pada section ini agak lebih kalem dari sesi selanjutnya, lebih enak kalo densitynya lebih rendah.
   00:31:960 - sama seperti ^
   00:34:997 - sama seperti ^ i see, deleted them. also 00:25:884
3. 00:47:529 - ganti jadi k? lebih ngalir dan rasanya nadanya lebih tinggi dari note setelahnya gw ngerasa di sini itu rendah di musik breakcore(?)nya. harusnya yg tinggi tu di 00:47:339 - imo
4. 01:16:390 ~ rasanya sesi ini dapat dibuat lebih intens, misalnya dengan menambahkan note di 01:18:668 - dan 01:24:744 -
   01:28:162 - lalu ini pindahkan ke 01:26:643 - supaya dapet break lebih sebelum masuk sesi selanjutnya
   01:15:630 - note ini juga bisa dihapus untuk memberi break dan penekanan lebih sebelum masuk sesi ini I agree
5. 01:28:542 ~ di sesi ini juga bisa ditambah beberapa note seperti di 01:29:681 - , 01:30:820 - , 01:35:757 - , 01:36:896 - , 01:32:719 - added some notes from 01:16:390 - to 01:40:694 - by myself
6. 02:03:478 - ganti jadi d? rasanya lebih enak kalo dijatuhkan setelah nadanya meninggi sebelumnya nope, buat mencapai klimaks ke akhir bagian ini di nada tinggi
7. 02:53:985 (5,6,7) - certainly will need 4/1 break in the middle of kiai for rest. delete. oh my bad. deleted
   03:18:289 (44,45,46) - can delete too deleted only (44), soalnya gw pikir akhir kiai lebih bagus dengan klimaks banyak note kalo di sini. dan selanjutnya juga banyak small breaks

[Oni]

• 
  hmmm.. spread needs improvement, Oni has a wide gap with Muzu. i think it's better if can remove around ~50 notes. e.g:

1. 00:26:263 ~ 00:38:415 - bagian ini relative kalem dibanding sesi selanjutnya, jadi lebih baik kurangi kerapatan notenya supaya bisa merepresentasikan musiknya lebih baik, misal: 00:28:415 - , 00:31:453 - , 00:34:491 - , 00:37:529 - delete dari gw sendiri
2. 01:21:833 - hapus supaya menekankan melodinya lebih baik ok
3. 01:27:149 - delete? looks dense and hard well
   01:38:922 - same as ^ ^
4. 01:52:846 ~ 02:04:997 - bagian ini rasanya juga bisa dikurang-kurangin. coba sendiri?
5. gile gw males banget benerin spread x_x gw malah bingung mana lagi yg gw benerin spreadnya :/ tapi ada yg gw apus beberapa di akhir

Good luck!

Volta wrote:

abis gw liburan gw cek lagi deh, kalo bisa cari beberapa mod lagi :>

Nishizumi wrote:

gw nyari modder ga membantu mulu bagi gw

Surono wrote:

Nishizumi wrote:

gw nyari modder ga membantu mulu bagi gw

ehem........

PatZar wrote:

klo lo ga bisa ngemap, ga usa ngemap :v :v :v :v

Volta wrote:

hello~

[Nardo's Futsuu]

1. 01:09:808 - maybe add k here to make contrast with 01:06:770 - ? fixed
2. 01:34:111 - try move to 01:34:491 - and change to d? this can reflect the difference in the music better imo It's a good idea, but I would prefer keeping the difficulty simple by using 1/3 monotone doublets only.
3. 03:37:149 - same as ^ same as ^

Good luck!

Surono wrote:

Nishizumi wrote:

gw nyari modder ga membantu mulu bagi gw

ehem........

PatZar wrote:

ah lu aja yang gblk awokawokawokwa

G E N O C I D E

Volta wrote:

hello~

SPOILER

[tasuke's Muzukashii]

1. 00:01:960 - add finish? nice emphasis to the first beat I prefer normal note here
2. 00:46:516 - deleting this note can emphasis the melody better imo It doesn't work well imo, since melody is not 1/3 rhythm.
3. 01:19:301 - add d for better spread with futsuu? Added kat instead.
   01:22:339 - same as ^ ^
4. 02:03:605 (45,46) - delete? it's nice to have a break here before entering next section fixed.
   02:02:592 - and can add k here to match the piano fixed
5. 02:37:656 - can delete for longer break. kiai seems very dense and a moment for rest here seems nice This density is still okay for Muzukashii. Since Oni is pretty hard, I'd like to keep hard for spread.
   02:42:086 - maybe delete this too?
6. 02:54:871 - delete? looks hard for muzu. It should be fine
   03:18:415 - same as ^
7. 03:05:884 (45,46,47,48,49) - maybe you should give a break here? no need i think
8. 03:22:339 - add d? same as 01:19:301 fixed too
   03:25:377 - ^ ^

Good luck!

Thanks Volta c:
http://puu.sh/slfmS/f45f0afb45.zip

Nishizumi wrote:

bcd lu pada

Volta wrote:

no kd

[Inner Oni]
00:44:238 - hmm hapus? rasanya gak ada suara yang mendukung disini, dan agak awkward karena sebelumnya finisher di 1/3 pattern. sama warna pula. terus gak konsisten kalo mau dibandingin dengan 03:25:251 - atau 01:22:213 -
> 00:32:086 - supaya konsisten ini bisa dihapus juga oh ya, deleted all

02:24:744 - mending ganti jadi d biar ga abis finisher sama warna. lebih enak dimainin. atau 02:24:491 (259,260) - ganti jadi kD, atau finishernya dihapus. sebaiknya kalau mau pasang finisher di pattern yang panjang2 itu warnanya dibedain biar aman changed to kD, ya ya lupa gw =.= thanks


[Oni]
01:16:137 - pas sama drumnya sih, tp mungkin lebih ngalir kalo dipindah ke 01:16:010 - buat ngikutin main melodynya? terus 01:15:884 - ganti jadi k nope, lebih milih fokusin drumnya kek yg di inner. penekanan drumnya lebih enak soalnya

01:53:858 - bagian ini bisa dibikin sedikit lebih kalem dengan mendelete note ini. melodinya masih sama seperti 01:53:099 - , dan bikin pembeda juga buat part selanjutnya (e.g: 02:06:010 - )
>01:56:896 - ^
>01:57:909 - tambah k agar konsisten dengan 01:54:871 -
>01:59:934 - hapus
ajaib jadi 1000 combo
deleted all and 02:02:972 - . also added 01:57:909 - and 02:03:985 - for keeping consistency

itu aja sih. ngecek map 1/3 susah banget. mappernya bagus2 pula

Volta wrote:

All mappers have different style, but it spread nicely. let's try.

Bubbled~

newyams99 wrote:

Hello, checking GDs~

Nardo's Futsuu

02:19:301 (258,259) - 02:22:339 (266,267) - These 1/3 pairs seemed kinda isolated. Maybe connect them to a pattern somehow? Hmm, this is intentional to bring a greater impact for the pattern chain starting at 02:23:225 -

Tbh I don't see any big issues anywhere, so call me back

Also rechecked the other diffs, and there didn't seem to be much to say.

newyams99 wrote:

Reduced some overused 1/6 in the Inner Oni, and made many finisher changes for better finisher organization. Looking good

Qualified!

Congrats