senya - Hitomi ni Kakusareta Omoi [Taiko] · forum

Surono

Joined November 2013

Surono 2016-05-09T13:35:32+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
Hello mod as your request!

[Sur's Inner Oni]

00:01:521 (5) - I know you put k because of high pitch, but the same time it doesn't fit because previous note is k too but the pitch isn't same as this note. So I'll keep as d. I see, ddkddkd looks better yeah. and next ddkkdkd lol
00:04:709 (19) - Move this to 00:04:615 - here as you do at 00:05:084 (21,22,23) - these notes? hmm no, bcus I follow the piano
00:11:084 (46) - Change this to slider or spinner to represent the "ra" sound? I like here as blank
00:15:021 (63) - Since you put k at previous and after piano sound, why not this too? 00:14:834 (62,63,64) - bcus this for contrast, have differ high and low sound
00:22:240 - & 00:22:427 - I think both of these should have a note if you hear the song rhythm, so it should be like dkdkddk. noo, to over4me ;w;
00:23:927 - I think you should connect by add a note at here since the rhythm song (you need to change big note too if you apply). ... this current cus the drum fade sound sir
00:26:271 - Add a note at here to represent the vocal? oke
00:30:584 (149) - Change this to big note since the break between previous and after note is quite far? yes, D
00:51:209 - Maybe you misheard, but this place should have a note too. You can hear by 25% playback. 00:51:302 - I like started from here cuz goes up
01:04:146 - The break at here is quite weird imo lol, add a note? noo this fine xd
Good luck!

thanks pak Lingtong xd

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Prophecy

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Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Prophecy 2016-05-10T06:02:52+00:00

Lingtong what's that?

kek, updated

JUDYDANNY

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Joined October 2011

JUDYDANNY 2016-09-19T08:02:26+00:00

Hello, M4M~ ( ・∀・)ﾉ

Introduction

Kantan~ Muzukashii
- Some parts have Overemphasized
Inner Oni
- Its lack of plays. you need the more follwed something, e.g. the vocal slar , or more drum rhythm.
  doublet1/4s are very questionable. Its not suitable with music.

Symbol meaning

No need for NM.

[Kantan]

remove+no comments → overemphasized.
add+no comments → less consistency or less flow as the pattern.

00:07:707 - , 00:08:834 - , remove , 00:10:709 - suggest to k. for new flows.
00:12:959 - move to 00:13:334 - . its too surprised flows as begins.
00:15:209 - remove
00:17:646 - D? no pitch up from before.
00:19:334 - add k?
00:26:834 - , 00:27:209 - remove , 00:28:334 - suggest to k for new flows.
00:33:959 - remove.
00:47:834 - , 00:59:834 - change to k, same as other diffs.
00:50:834 - consider to remove, it sounds be quiet at once.

[Futsuu]

remove+no comments → overemphasized.
add+no comments → less consistency or less flow as the pattern.

00:04:896 - , 00:09:396 - move to ½ left,sounds piano too.Its high priority imo to put the 1/1 bar lines for beginers kindly.
00:06:396 - remove.
00:13:146 - move to 1/2right,00:13:521 - move to 00:13:896 - and change to k ( D-k-d-kkd) the reason is same as Kantan.
00:15:959 - add k, same as 00:12:959 - flow.
00:16:521 - add d,00:16:709 - change to k?
00:18:021 - move to ½ right, to make a little break for beginners.
00:18:959 - change to k , same as 12:959 flow.
00:19:334 - ,00:19:521 - add d. for consistency with patterns.
00:22:521 - can add d. ^
00:26:646 - ,00:27:209 - remove,
00:38:459 - add d, 00:39:396 - add k . to adjust the balance of the power comparing with 00:12:584 - ~ part.
00:45:021 - add d . ^
00:48:396 - add k ^
00:49:146 - remove?
00:51:959 - , 00:54:396 - add k ^^
00:56:084 - change to d for consistency with 00:44:084 -
00:56:646 - move to 00:57:021 - change to d.
00:58:146 - add k or d?
00:59:646 - move to 01:00:021 - and change to d.
01:00:771 (146,148) - remove?
01:09:209 -add d, 01:10:709 - move to 01:11:459 - , 01:11:646 - add d ,01:12:209 - add k? Its very lack of notes. You can add more likeMuzukashii.

[Muzukashii]

remove+no comments → over emphasized.
add+no comments → less consistency or less flow as the pattern.

00:04:896 (1,2) - kd?
00:10:709 (23,24) - dd or kk? pitch is same .
00:13:615 - remove.
00:15:115 - remove, 00:15:021 - change to k.
00:15:959 - add k, 00:16:334 (39,40) - dk?
00:18:959 - change to k (or remove?), 00:19:334 - add d, 00:19:896 - add k , 00:20:459 - add k? its no need imo 2 times break.
00:21:396 - can add k.
00:21:959 - change to k? 00:22:521 - add d.
00:24:771 - remove? it sounds to be quiet, lower frequency of dense plays better imo.
00:26:271 - remove too? 00:26:646 - change to d? don sounds to be emphasized for cool down( comparing with 00:28:146 - ) too.
00:27:771 - remove ?
00:30:771 - ^?
00:35:927 - move to 00:36:115 - ?
00:38:365 - , 00:38:646 - remove ? and 00:38:271 - change to d, 00:40:146 - add k instead? Its very surprised to appear the ¼ -2times.
00:44:646 - remove,
00:44:084 (138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148) - how about kdk-ddkdk-dkd instead? it plays well too.
00:56:084 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191) - same.
00:51:771 -, 00:51:865 - remove?
01:09:396 - ,01:10:146 - add d,k?

[Oni]

٩(๑>◡<๑)۶

[Inner Oni]

remove+no comments → over emphasized.
add+no comments → less consistency or less flow as the pattern.

00:14:365 - move to 00:14:271 - , or 00:14:271 - add? Its very shorten pattern as noisy part. Its not suitable on there sounds pressure high.
00:17:834 - 00:17:927 - remove.
00:18:771 - add.
00:20:365 - move to ¼ right or add 00:20:271 - instead.
00:21:302 - move to 00:21:396 - , 00:21:490 - move to 00:21:677 - instead? it sounds better well.
00:22:146 - k to follow the snare reverb.
00:24:959 (128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137) - consider to change the rhythm some. this is usual bass+snare drum flow, but they sounds not well or players cant hear. It sounds very questionable.
00:39:302 - move to 00:38:552 - ? it sounds better to early 1/5 plet emphasized for build up (and kiai pattern).
00:40:896 - add k, and can add ¼ more there.
00:51:302 (86,87,88) - unneed the lower SV and ¼ 4plet, how about 9 plet from 00:50:834 - there? synthesizer sounds there.
00:52:896 - can add.

Inner Oni mapping is harder(so I can disagree to submit( http://puu.sh/rgnnX/cb5d4af76d.zip ) as you known lol
Oni mapped well, I think 4diffs are OK too.

You can still improve the mapset a lot ,It still not reach the high quality as rank.
Good Luck(¦3[___]

Last edited by JUDYDANNY 2016-10-03T16:09:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Prophecy

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Prophecy 2016-09-20T12:38:23+00:00

No mention and comment = fixed

JUDYDANNY wrote:
Hello, M4M~ ( ・∀・)ﾉ
Introduction
Kantan~ Muzukashii
Some parts have Overemphasized
Inner Oni
Its lack of plays. you need the more follwed something, e.g. the vocal slar , or more drum rhythm.
doublet1/4s are very questionable. Its not suitable with music.
Symbol meaning
No need for NM.

[Kantan]
00:17:646 - D? no pitch up from before. The pitch is little bit higher than 00:17:084 (8) - and the background music can support this kat.
[Futsuu]
00:58:146 - add k or d? Using kat here, it is very boring if dd
[Muzukashii]
00:10:709 (23,24) - dd or kk? pitch is same . kk
00:18:959 - change to k (or remove?), changed to kat
You can still improve the mapset a lot ,It still not reach the high quality as rank.
Good Luck(¦3[___]
Updated with all difficulties (fixing tags) and added Juda's Inner~ (Upload when I got a slot)

Surono

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Joined November 2013

Surono 2016-09-20T22:33:21+00:00

JUDYDANNY wrote:
[Introduction]
Inner Oni
Its lack of plays. you need the more follwed something, e.g. the vocal slar , or more drum rhythm. bcus I bad mapping on pop song :^]
doublet1/4s are very questionable. Its not suitable with music.
[Inner Oni]

remove+no comments → over emphasized.
add+no comments → less consistency or less flow as the pattern.
00:14:365 - move to 00:14:271 - , or 00:14:271 - add? Its very shorten pattern as noisy part. Its not suitable on there sounds pressure high. I like here as 2plet bcus 00:14:459 - good to catch the synthesis with snare n its for a minirest.,
00:17:834 - 00:17:927 - remove. a
00:18:771 - add. but 00:12:771 - here is blank
00:20:365 - move to ¼ right or add 00:20:271 - instead. and again, I think is not bad pls sir..
00:21:302 - move to 00:21:396 - , 00:21:490 - move to 00:21:677 - instead? it sounds better well. 00:21:021 (101,102,103,104,105,106) - I think the current is fits as vocal and piano flow emphasis
00:22:146 - k to follow the snare reverb. okok
00:24:959 (128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137) - consider to change the rhythm some. this is usual bass+snare drum flow, but they sounds not well or players cant hear. It sounds very questionable. oh I see, I will rearranged till 00:27:584 - here ( I guess there is had a drum but it just pitch lol *sniff*
00:39:302 - move to 00:38:552 - ? it sounds better to early 1/5 plet emphasized for build up (and kiai pattern). it fits with flow and the vocal, oke
00:40:896 - add k, and can add ¼ more there. added and I make it as kkd
00:51:302 (86,87,88) - unneed the lower SV and ¼ 4plet, how about 9 plet from 00:50:834 - there? synthesizer sounds there. oke, I agreed it
00:52:896 - can add. I make it as kdk

thank you very much, Judy!

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Prophecy

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Topic Starter

Prophecy 2016-09-20T22:52:33+00:00

Updated!

Ayyri

Ayyri 2016-09-24T13:05:31+00:00

Go, go. :3/

Prophecy

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Prophecy 2016-09-24T13:06:18+00:00

Ayyri wrote:
Go, go. :3/

Let's go ahead :3/

iloveyou4ever

825 posts

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iloveyou4ever 2016-09-24T15:07:50+00:00

PROphecy lwl
M4M here

[Kantan]
00:35:084 - change to k
better show the vocal contrast between here and 00:32:084 -

Other things are all fine :3

[Futsuu]
Better lower the SR a bit to let the diff spread more evenly
00:36:021 - Change to d
To emphasis the next finisher and I think changing to d fits the vocal pitch more too

00:39:209 - Why no note here?

01:00:959 - change this to D next note to K
I think it could better emphasis each other and also changing 01:01:334 - this to K can emphasis 01:02:084 - this finisher too

01:12:209 - k?

[Muzukashii]
00:02:084 - change to k to show the contrast bewteen this and next note?

00:21:209 - again empty?

00:40:146 - move this note to 00:40:521 - seems better

00:52:427 - no 1/4 sound here,better delete this

[Nardo's Oni]
00:31:334 -change to k
無咁悶 :3

00:52:615 - maybe delete this?

01:04:990 - no pitch change here,change to d seems better

Nice difficulty

[JuDa's Inner Oni]
00:15:115 - remove this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6168396
The selected notes are more important because it's mapped by piano
I think there shouldn't any 1/4 in between them
Also it's better to seperate 00:13:334 - 00:14:834 - and 00:15:584 - 00:17:084 - them
Using 1/2 in between them can make the pattern more clear and unterstandable

00:33:490 - remove this
Like the reason above

Other things are fine tho :3

[Sur's Inner Oni]
00:10:334 - swap this and next note

00:21:396 - Using 7-notes pattern here seems better

00:30:771 - not adding note here to be consistent as 00:32:271 - ?

00:40:990 - remove this

00:52:146 - change to kdkkd?

01:10:240 - change to d to emphasis the pitch change

01:14:084 - Better end the sllider here because the music ends here too

Nice song and every GD are done very good
I hope it can rank asap

Prophecy

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Prophecy 2016-09-24T15:16:59+00:00

Fixed all except

[Muzukashii]
00:40:146 - move this note to 00:40:521 - seems better the vocal continues here and moving this notes is a little bit of strange.

00:52:427 - no 1/4 sound here,better delete this I think it should be fine with this 1/4.

Thanks for mod!

Surono

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Joined November 2013

Surono 2016-09-24T16:09:27+00:00

hir wi go? yoy lol

iloveyou4ever wrote:
[Sur's Inner Oni]
00:10:334 - swap this and next note good point, the 3plet 1/2 are low piano, then the kat is for vocal and high flow? okok!

00:21:396 - Using 7-notes pattern here seems better dem... I just realised on here have a flow sound, oke I think is fine to applied it

00:30:771 - not adding note here to be consistent as 00:32:271 - ? I keep it, the sound are fits as 2plet imo

00:40:990 - remove this no, on here have a pitch

00:52:146 - change to kdkkd? why I make it as dkkkd, 00:52:240 (288) - bcus the strong flow on here

01:10:240 - change to d to emphasis the pitch change 2plet are high sound, I keep it

01:14:084 - Better end the sllider here because the music ends here too oke lol

Nice song and every GD are done very good
I hope it can rank asap

thank you ver much!

Sure Inn-er

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Creator:Prophecy
Version:Sur's Inner Oni
Source:東方Project
Tags:touhou ハルトマンの妖怪少女 hartmann's youkai girl komeiji koishi 古明地 こいし かませ虎 kamase-tora HiZuMi ikuo NEKO コミックマーケット89 c89 comiket 89 東方地霊殿 Subterranean Animism Yuuhei Satellite Nardo Nardoxyribonucleic Sur Surono
BeatmapID:963801
BeatmapSetID:440885

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HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:10
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2016-09-26T08:00:30+00:00

iloveyou4ever wrote:
PROphecy lwl
M4M here

[Nardo's Oni]
00:31:334 -change to k Retained to keep it consistent with 00:25:334 -
無咁悶 :3

00:52:615 - maybe delete this? Hmm, I would prefer a denser second kiai.

01:04:990 - no pitch change here,change to d seems better I think dkk here would result in a good contrast with 01:05:646 (305,306,307) - . This could accompany the high-pitched sound at 01:05:084 - as well.

Nice difficulty

Nice song and every GD are done very good
I hope it can rank asap

Thanks for your mod~

Stefan

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Joined January 2011

Stefan 2016-10-02T20:44:39+00:00

WHA

[Sur's Inner Oni]
00:16:334 (73,74,75,76,77) - I think this actually should go o oo oo instead of oo oo o, the vocals clearly shows that the current doubles are too early as it follows them properly.
00:50:834 (274,275,276,277) - my personal suggest is to remove 00:50:927 (275,277) - and to change (276) as d, I think to continue with a stream on 00:50:834 - sounds unnatural when on 00:51:209 - is the actual music increase.
01:13:334 - Just as little suggestion to reduce the volume to fade out better.

[JuDa's Inner Oni]
nice bookmarks but looks good so far.

[Oni]
00:09:115 (21) - Wouldn't you change the note to d to emphasize the k k usage on 00:09:396 (22,23) - ? It'd help imo.
00:50:834 (219,220) - could be me but somehow I feel it's not urgent to have them here - they're not bad, but I am saying they aren't necessary either.
01:04:990 (301) - it's weird to play and.. it doesn't really looks like it has any purposes than being different (since you never used dkk before). Change to d, so it's ddk.
01:05:459 (304,305,306,307) - it relates to the triplet before: you could change this to kdk k (or d) to not having ddk twice in a short time. What do you think?
01:07:896 (317) - k note? I guess that's the personal taste but it sounds nicer than kkddd.

[Muzukashii]
00:12:584 - 00:24:584 - I feel this section could be nerfed in the density, it has significantly less notes than Oni but it still feels too much.
00:14:646 (33) - remove
00:15:959 (39) - remove
00:16:615 (41) - since Oni works with this rhythm, you could hold it simpler by following the background instead of the vocals. move to 00:16:709 - .
00:18:396 (49,50) - change them to k D, it feels better to jump from the ddd triplet to a k note and back to D.
00:19:896 (54,56) - remove
00:21:209 (58,59) - remove (to emphasize the vocals on 00:20:834 (57,60) - better)

00:24:584 - 00:36:209 - this is also a similar case, especially because of the second half
00:27:959 (81) - I find it's okay to remove this note to have a small break and not continous mapping.
00:32:271 (96,103,105) - remove
00:33:584 (101) - ^ following that, you could change the note to d, it sounds better to differ from the note on 00:33:959 - .

00:40:146 (127) - you could emphasize the vocals better by removing the note and to add finishers on 00:39:959 (126,128,129) -
00:46:709 (151) - this also looks like a good idea to remove, I think it sounds more natural at this density level to use less and to emphasize more with the smaller amount of notes.
00:50:834 (164,165) - Same case like Oni.
00:58:709 (194) - it's the same usage like 00:46:709 (151) - so apply to this in case you accepted the first.
01:03:959 (212) - another break you could add to emphasize the guitar riffs.
01:05:084 (216,217,218,219) - that sounds and plays... pretty annoying. It doesn't feel right so I'd re-do this.

my concern is the current density level which should be nerfed (like said at the begin), if you decide to follow my ideas, that's cool. Else, you should find your way.

[Futsuu]
00:13:896 (21) - You could place the note on 00:13:521 - and change to d too. I even think it sounds better and makes a better flow by ddk d ddk.
00:45:959 (106,107,108) - and 00:58:146 (138,139) - I would try to decide one of these two, since they're almost the same way from following it's weird you mapped them differently. Although, I'd prefer to change 00:58:146 (138,139) - from kd to dkd.
00:53:271 (124,125) - Something you could try is to remove (124) and move (125) to 00:53:646 - . This actually could work well.

I find this difficulty could also use some lesser notes but it works the way Muzukashii is designed.

[Kantan]
Fine here, I think it actually can live at this way if you don't decide to buff Futsuu or nerf it too much at any time.

Good luck!

Prophecy

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Topic Starter

Prophecy 2016-10-03T13:01:57+00:00

Thanks for modding, basically I accepted anything but I disagree some issue in Muzukashii.

I slightly nerfed the Muzukashii and ofc added notes in Futsuu to improve the spread.

Thanks a lot <3

Updated!

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2016-10-03T13:33:20+00:00

Stefan wrote:
WHA

[Oni]
00:09:115 (21) - Wouldn't you change the note to d to emphasize the k k usage on 00:09:396 (22,23) - ? It'd help imo. fixed
00:50:834 (219,220) - could be me but somehow I feel it's not urgent to have them here - they're not bad, but I am saying they aren't necessary either. I would prefer keeping them for better transition to the second kiai.
01:04:990 (301) - it's weird to play and.. it doesn't really looks like it has any purposes than being different (since you never used dkk before). Change to d, so it's ddk. Apart from variety, dkk could highlight the higher-pitched guitar at 01:05:084 - compared to 01:05:834 - . There are also patterns that appear only once in the map like kdkkd at 00:57:584 - , so I think it would be fine to keep dkk there.
01:05:459 (304,305,306,307) - it relates to the triplet before: you could change this to kdk k (or d) to not having ddk twice in a short time. What do you think? Refer to ^
01:07:896 (317) - k note? I guess that's the personal taste but it sounds nicer than kkddd. The pitch of piano keeps decreasing across 01:07:521 (313,314,315,316,317) - , so kkddd would help reflect the change better.

Good luck!

Thanks for your mod~

Update: https://puu.sh/rwieB.rar

Prophecy

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Topic Starter

Prophecy 2016-10-09T04:21:08+00:00

Updated.

Surono

7,196 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 2016-10-22T21:34:41+00:00

Stefan wrote:
WHA

[Sur's Inner Oni]
00:16:334 (73,74,75,76,77) - I think this actually should go o oo oo instead of oo oo o, the vocals clearly shows that the current doubles are too early as it follows them properly. but on kk is heard to weild.,.. I keep it as layering flow.. not rearry follow da vocals
00:50:834 (274,275,276,277) - my personal suggest is to remove 00:50:927 (275,277) - and to change (276) as d, I think to continue with a stream on 00:50:834 - sounds unnatural when on 00:51:209 - is the actual music increase. d d kkdkd
01:13:334 - Just as little suggestion to reduce the volume to fade out better. okeh

Good luck!

ty ty dem sri.,

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Prophecy

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Prophecy 2016-10-28T07:49:18+00:00

~~Updated Sur's Inner Oni.~~

Updated!

Zpmzpm

85 posts

Joined August 2015

Zpmzpm 2017-04-27T13:19:28+00:00

hi im here for kds
[kantan and futsuu]
no significant problems imo, probably because so many pros modded it and i am going to sound like i didn't pay a lot of sincerity in the mod
[muzukashii]
00:15:959 (38) - add k? fill up the space and keep the density similar to nearby streams (1/2+1/4 with 1/1 short breaks)
00:16:615 (40) - add k too? you seem like youre mapping to both the vocals and the drums lol
00:35:084 (107,108,109,110,111) - all finishers?
[nardo's oni]
one small problem:
00:55:521 (246,247,248,249,250) - i didn't hear anything worth mapping here, and if youre mapping that background melodu, i think dkddd will be better
[juda's inner]
lmao juda why do you put so many bookmarks
00:41:459 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - ddkkdkddk? fits the song better imo
00:43:334 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - d ddkkdkd? ^
00:48:584 (81,82,83,84,85) - why KDKDK? for me it should be either KKDKK or KKKKK
[sur's inner]
following the drums, nice. no significant problems here btw congrats for bn

all hail prophecy dalao
modding twice was fun, thx peppy

Prophecy

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Prophecy 2017-04-27T13:35:18+00:00

Hmm, I still finding few more mod until I find the BN.

Last edited by Prophecy 2017-04-27T15:36:50+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2017-04-27T13:35:27+00:00

Zpmzpm wrote:
hi im here for kds

[nardo's oni]
one small problem:
00:55:521 (246,247,248,249,250) - i didn't hear anything worth mapping here, and if youre mapping that background melodu, i think dkddd will be better Well, the background instrument is rather obvious and I think ddkkd would be fine for accompanying that.

all hail prophecy dalao
modding twice was fun, thx peppy

Thanks for your mod though~

Prophecy

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Prophecy 2017-04-27T15:35:52+00:00

Zpmzpm wrote:
[kantan and futsuu]
no significant problems imo, probably because so many pros modded it and i am going to sound like i didn't pay a lot of sincerity in the mod Many pro modder ;w;, I am not ;w;

[muzukashii]
00:15:959 (38) - add k? fill up the space and keep the density similar to nearby streams (1/2+1/4 with 1/1 short breaks) Yes, I forget to add this, As I am following 00:18:959 (50,51), thank you!
00:16:615 (40) - add k too? you seem like you are mapping to both the vocals and the drums lol hmm, I am following the previous pattern, Plus, I am following Vocal part.
00:35:084 (107,108,109,110,111) - all finishers? Well, if I use all finisher, it's mostly like over emphasising the rhythm,
using small notes instead.

all hail prophecy dalao
modding twice was fun, thx peppy

Thanks for modding! Updated.

Edit #1: @GDer: Updated the whole set for fixing the tags (Add Nardo/Nardoxyribonuclei/Surono/Sur)

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2017-04-28T17:46:21+00:00

Prophecy wrote:
Edit #1: @GDer: Updated the whole set for fixing the tags (Add Nardo/Nardoxyribonuclei/Surono/Sur)

Where is my "c"...

Prophecy

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Prophecy 2017-04-29T07:45:08+00:00

Sorry ;w;, Added the 'c'

JUDYDANNY

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Joined October 2011

JUDYDANNY 2017-04-29T10:42:18+00:00

"Zpmzpm"

[juda's inner]
lmao juda why do you put so many bookmarks
00:41:459 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35) - ddkkdkddk? fits the song better imo
00:43:334 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - d ddkkdkd? ^

no change for variation.
00:48:584 (81,82,83,84,85) - why KDKDK? for me it should be either KKDKK or KKKKK

changed the strategy about the finishers.

Thanks for mod~ (¦3[___]

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Prophecy

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Prophecy 2017-07-31T06:00:17+00:00

Updated JuDa's Inner Oni.

Faputa

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Faputa 2017-10-05T13:19:20+00:00

From PM request
Taiko NM
萌新摸图，大佬放过我xD

[General]
⏩For one thing that’s bothering me is that the fade-out of last part is kinda awkward. Should be fading at a slower rate instead. It is not saying that it affects the mapset itself but that’s strange.
⏩Tag problem: Futsuu’s tags are doubled.
⏩Ending time inconsistency: Sur's Inner Oni ends at 01:14:084, but others end at 01:13:334,
from Ranking Criteria

Your difficulties should all end at the same spot.

⏩Disable countdown at JuDa's Inner Oni.

[General Spread Related issues]
⏩Notes at 00:10:709 - and 00:11:084 - , Host diffs use k k for Kantan and Muzukashii but d k for Futsuu, please check.
⏩Notes at 00:17:084 - and 00:17:646 - , Host diffs use D K for Kantan, K D for Futsuu and D D for Muzukashii, I recommend changing them to the format of D K because of rising percussion intensity.
⏩Note at 00:24:584 - , Host diffs use d for Kantan but D for Futsuu and Muzukashii, That would make Kantan feels awkward, and I don’t have say on these parts when it comes to the other Guest Difficulties so please have a look.
⏩Note at 00:27:584 - , Host diffs use d for Kantan and Futsuu but k for Muzukashii. I think this section should be using d because of same vocal intensity with 00:26:084 - .

[Kantan]
No problem when looked separately.

[Futsuu]
⏩00:36:209 (83) - Should be K because it has not much support for being a big note plus all the other diffs use k here.
⏩00:48:209 (112,113,114) - Can change to kdK since all the other diffs use K at 00:48:584 - and only this diff with kkD seems awkward.

[Muzukashii]
⏩00:26:459 (75,76,77) - Maybe kkd? Same pitch for 00:26:459 (75) - and 00:26:647 (76) - .

[Nardo’s Oni]
Everything looks fine.

[Sur’s Inner Oni]
⏩01:13:334 (19) - I said that there is ending time inconsistency above, so maybe you can replace this slider with just one note here?

[JuDa’s Inner Oni]
Too good for me xD.

That’s all. Sorry for the short mod because you guys are too gud.
Good luck with the set!

Prophecy

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Prophecy 2017-10-05T14:05:15+00:00

Faputa wrote:
[Muzukashii]
⏩00:26:459 (75,76,77) - Maybe kkd? Same pitch for 00:26:459 (75) - and 00:26:647 (76) - . emphasizing the pitch of previous notes.

Not mentioned = fixed, Thanks for modding!

Update notes:

Disabled Widescreen support on Sur's Inner Oni and JuDa's Inner Oni
Disabled Countdown on JuDa's Inner Oni
Fixed tags on Futsuu
Unified the note pattern on Kantan, Futsuu and Muzukashii
Fixed minor pattern on Kantan, Futsuu and Muzukashii
Fixed SV issue on Futsuu

- Prophecy

xtrem3x

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xtrem3x 2017-12-31T23:33:17+00:00

-w-

General:

Don = d
Kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

> your spread at the beginning is quite spacious, consider adding 2 or 3 notes in Futsuu.
> Preview point in 00:38:084-
> in each touhou song must be (obligatory) ZUN in tags, and delete "Sur" of your tags (with Surono is sufficient).

[Kantan]
00:00:584 (1,2,3,4) - according to the vocal sound these notes could be kkdd to fix the problem and make the pattern more natural.

00:23:084 (16,17,18) - at this point I would suggest that these 3 notes be of a single color as they have the same sound.

00:39:584 (40,41,42,43,44) - I suggested it in the previous point and it is better to focus on the vocal leaving this pattern as dkkkd, appears the same thing in 00:42:959 (47,48)- but with big notes, applies too in 00:51:584 (60,61,62,63,64)- as Dkkkd.

[Futsuu]
00:05:084 - applying suggestion in kantan, this note must be kat for consistence.

00:14:646 - at this point I have seen an inconsistency because this point has no sound for a triple, on the contrary in 00:14:834- if it has a discrete sound to be triple (kkk), then it is possible to erase this note and add a kat in 00:15:021-

00:23:084 (48,49,50) - in this triplet I have noticed that it has a difference of sound in the second and third note, which makes me think that it would be better to leave it as DDK to couple it with the sound of the previous note.

00:29:646 - I would prefer that you erase this note because it has the same triple in muzukashii and that breaks the spread somewhat.

00:39:959 (89,90,91) - As I suggested in Kantan, it's preferable to have this pattern as dkkkd to focus on the vocal sound, same in 00:51:584 (118,119,120,121,122)-

[Muzukashii]

00:14:834 (33,34,35,36,37) - I would suggest leaving this as kkkkd to intone the piano sound.

00:23:084 (64,65,66,67,68) - the rhythm in this section is a little confusing, although is correct to follow with the obvious sounds of bass, I would suggest to follow another type of pattern to vary it (a pattern like that seems pretty predictable to me), which my suggestion would be to leave it as DDKDK.

00:25:334 (71,72,73) - you don't need have different patterns to focus a very obvious vocal, it could be the same as 00:31:334 (91,92,93) -

00:33:021 (98,99) - definitely here is a swap, since it repeats the pattern later and here is preferable have a difference, in addition to that it intones with the vocal.

01:06:396 - kat? this note dulls the next one according to your rhythm tracking.

[Nardo's Oni]

00:09:115 - In this pattern it has as a kind of variations related to the vocal, my suggestion would be to change this note to Don to notice those differences of tones (atteru kara ).

00:20:834 (70,71,72,73,74) - in this section it has 2 variants, in one where you could follow the low tones of piano and another where you can complete the follow-up of vocals, which might suggest changing this by kdkkd (to complement the vocal and start following the sounds of blow) or kkkdk (to focus on low piano sounds).

00:36:490 - This suggestion is questionable but in my opinion add a kat should intone in this point.

00:56:459 (255,256,257) - for some reason I see that the consistency is broken here because in all the kiai time the vocal tracking is evident, I would suggestchanging it by dkd and the point 00:57:209 (260,261)- changing by kk, specifically to follow the vocal flow.

[JuDa's Inner Oni]
00:09:959 (39) - At this point I see that you follow a kind of discrete sounds, but in my opinion this note is a bit out of place, because if you put kkdd you can better appreciate that change in the low tones, in addition to completing the long vocal sound.

00:26:459 (89,90) - definitely these notes should be kat for follow-up to the vocal, why in 00:27:584 (94,95,96,97,98,99,100)- the pattern is similar, but it would be like "here my pattern ends and now I'm going in reverse".

00:29:271 - Would you consider removing this finish? It doesn't have an adequate emphasis to be a big note.

00:36:296 - I personally would prefer to use the spinner to follow the vocal than the BG sound, until 00:37:146-

00:49:521 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - in this segment you can clearly hear a wind sound, which leads me to suggest changing the note to kat in 00:49:802- to not lose that emphasis.

00:55:146 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - totally contrary to what I have seen in point 00:43:334- this part has less intensity in vocal, which could suggest changing this pattern where most notes are Don, something like d kdkkddddk to have a considerable difference with the point mentioned above.

01:08:084 - this note seems to me somewhat inadequate considering point 01:02:084 (177,178)- and it is preferable to repeat what you did in that point mentioned.

01:12:584 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267) - in my opinion I would prefer to see more kats in this last pattern since it has a high pitch, a suggestion would be to leave it as kdkdkkddk.

[Sur's Inner Oni]
00:36:584 - I feel that this note is leftover, focusing mainly on the BG sound.

00:49:521 (267,268,269,270,271,272,273) - At this point you could consider combining it with the wind sound, which my suggestion would be to change this by kkdkkkkd, keeping in mind that d (note 269 and 273) would emphasize the hit between high tone.

00:51:209 (276,277,278,279,280) - according to my previous suggestion, at this point the beep sound is explicitly followed and at the end it can be a big note (kkkkD) to emphasize the start of the 2nd kiai time.

00:52:896 (290,291,292,293,294,295) - you would consider changing the meaning of these 2 triples as ddk kdk, mainly to intone the vocal.

Last edited by xtrem3x 2018-01-17T02:04:32+00:00, edited 7 times in total.

Prophecy

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Prophecy 2018-01-04T11:01:34+00:00

xtrem3x wrote:
-w-)/

\(-w-

xtrem3x wrote:
-w-

General:

> your spread at the beginning is quite spacious, consider adding 2 or 3 notes in Futsuu. Oh yes, I missed this point at previous mod =w=
> Preview point in 00:38:084 Yea
> in each touhou song must be (obligatory) ZUN in tags, and delete "Sur" of your tags (with Surono is sufficient). Right,
Added "ZUN" and Deleted "SUR" in all difficulties

Kantan

00:00:584 (1,2,3,4) - according to the vocal sound these notes could be kkdd to fix the problem and make the pattern more natural.
Sounds resonable, changed 3rd note to k

00:23:084 (16,17,18) - at this point I would suggest that these 3 notes be of a single color as they have the same sound.
Maybe no, I keep it as constant, following kiai DKK

00:39:584 (40,41,42,43,44) - I suggested it in the previous point and it is better to focus on the vocal leaving this pattern as dkkkd, appears the same thing in 00:42:959 (47,48)- but with big notes, applies too in 00:51:584 (60,61,62,63,64)- as Dkkkd.
All dkdkd -> dkkkd, great point!

Futsuu

00:05:084 - applying suggestion in kantan, this note must be kat for consistence.
Same as Kantan

00:14:646 - at this point I have seen an inconsistency because this point has no sound for a triple, on the contrary in 00:14:834- if it has a discrete sound to be triple (kkk), then it is possible to erase this note and add a kat in 00:15:021-
dd kk instead.

00:23:084 (48,49,50) - in this triplet I have noticed that it has a difference of sound in the second and third note, which makes me think that it would be better to leave it as DDK to couple it with the sound of the previous note.
Alright.

00:29:646 - I would prefer that you erase this note because it has the same triple in muzukashii and that breaks the spread somewhat.
I will consider it later because it following vocals.

00:39:959 (89,90,91) - As I suggested in Kantan, it's preferable to have this pattern as dkkkd to focus on the vocal sound, same in 00:51:584 (118,119,120,121,122)-
Same as Kantan

Muzukashii

00:14:834 (33,34,35,36,37) - I would suggest leaving this as kkkkd to intone the piano sound.
OK

00:23:084 (64,65,66,67,68) - the rhythm in this section is a little confusing, although is correct to follow with the obvious sounds of bass, I would suggest to follow another type of pattern to vary it (a pattern like that seems pretty predictable to me), which my suggestion would be to leave it as DDKDK.
Considered other difficulties, changed to DDKDK.

00:25:334 (71,72,73) - you don't need have different patterns to focus a very obvious vocal, it could be the same as 00:31:334 (91,92,93) -
fixed to ddk

00:33:021 (98,99) - definitely here is a swap, since it repeats the pattern later and here is preferable have a difference, in addition to that it intones with the vocal.
Right.

01:06:396 - kat? this note dulls the next one according to your rhythm tracking.
OK

Update log:
> Applied xtrem3x's mod for Kantan, Futsuu, Muzu
> Fixed Preview time for all difficulties
> Fixed Tag issue for all difficulties

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2018-01-11T14:06:44+00:00

xtrem3x wrote:
-w-

General:

Don = d
Kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

Nardo's Oni

00:09:115 - In this pattern it has as a kind of variations related to the vocal, my suggestion would be to change this note to Don to notice those differences of tones (atteru kara ). I think either k or d is fine as 00:07:709 (18,21) - also has the same pitch.

00:20:834 (70,71,72,73,74) - in this section it has 2 variants, in one where you could follow the low tones of piano and another where you can complete the follow-up of vocals, which might suggest changing this by kdkkd (to complement the vocal and start following the sounds of blow) or kkkdk (to focus on low piano sounds). Retained to reflect the vocal pitch increase with d k at 00:20:834 (70,74) -

00:36:490 - This suggestion is questionable but in my opinion add a kat should intone in this point. Remain unchanged to focus on the vocals.

00:56:459 (255,256,257) - for some reason I see that the consistency is broken here because in all the kiai time the vocal tracking is evident, I would suggestchanging it by dkd and the point 00:57:209 (260,261)- changing by kk, specifically to follow the vocal flow. It is obviously not broken. k d at 00:57:209 (259,260) - could follow the pitch drop while k k d at 00:56:459 (254,255,256) - could emphasize the neighbouring low/high-pitched notes at 00:56:271 (252,259) - respectively.

Thanks for your mod though~

qoot8123

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Joined March 2011

qoot8123 2018-02-01T11:04:36+00:00

hi, here comes my mod as request.

[Kantan]

00:30:584 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - how about trying this pattern? it would be more consistent
01:05:084 (4) - you may change to d to distinguish the hitsound on 01:03:584 (3) -
01:11:834 (13) - similar case as 01:05:084 (4) -.

[Futsuu]

00:00:584 (1,2,3,4) - try to use similar pattern like 00:05:084 (8,9,10,11) - ?
00:12:584 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - consider this part lacks of 2/1 rest moment, I think you can put a 2/1 break within this pattern like this(by following piano,vocal and beat).
00:27:584 (58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - consider this pattern's density is similar with muzukashii, you may change 00:27:584 (58) - to d and remove 00:28:334 (60) -
00:33:959 (76,78) - these two notes could be removed in order to make better spread with kantan and muzu.

[Muzukashii]

00:01:896 (5) - you may move it to 00:01:709 - to make the rhythm more clear
00:09:396 (21,22) - I think k d would be better for vocal's pronunciation if you refer to 00:06:209 (14,15,16,17,18) -
00:24:584 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - this pattern could be less density considering oni has similar density as muzu.

[Nardo's Oni]

00:09:584 (23) - consider the vocal's pronunciation , you may change it to d if you refer to 00:06:209 (15,16,17,18,19) -
00:10:709 (24,25) - similar case as above, you can change it to k k

[JuDa's Inner Oni]

01:12:584 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267) - how about just use 1/2 finisher instead of 1/4 stream? i think it could emphasize the guitar sound.

[Sur's Inner Oni]

00:07:896 (33,34) - you may change to k d in order to make consistent with 00:02:084 (8) - .
00:36:584 (188) - this note could be removed
01:04:896 (373,374,1,2,3,4,5) - I think this pattern should stop on 01:05:365 -because of guitar sound ,so you may change the pattern like this

good luck!

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2018-02-01T12:16:02+00:00

qoot8123 wrote:
hi, here comes my mod as request.

[Nardo's Oni]
00:09:584 (23) - consider the vocal's pronunciation , you may change it to d if you refer to 00:06:209 (15,16,17,18,19) - The vocal pitch here is the same as 00:09:396 (22) - so I would prefer k here.
00:10:709 (24,25) - similar case as above, you can change it to k k As the pitch becomes slightly lower than the previous note, d would be fine to me.
good luck!

Thanks for your mod qoot~

Prophecy

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Prophecy 2018-02-01T12:36:17+00:00

All fixed, except:

00:24:584 (69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79) - this pattern could be less density considering oni has similar density as muzu.

Seems it's fine for the spread.

Thank for modding <3

@Surono and Judy : please check qoot's mod and xtrem3's mod

Jonarwhal

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Jonarwhal 2018-02-21T23:19:25+00:00

Sh1n1 was going to mod this before his removal.
[General]

Consider adjusting the background. I recommend this in each difficulty.
```
0,0,"BG.png",0,70
```

[Kantan]

00:40:709 (43) - I think you should switch this to d because the pitch is falling here. (00:52:709 (63) - )

[Futsuu]

00:08:834 (14,15,16) - I recommend dkk or ddk here because it is more accurate for the pitches.
00:36:209 - Finisher here is inconsistent with other difficulties. Please remove or add it in other difficulties.
00:40:709 - Same as kantan

[Muzukashii]

00:08:834 (19,20,21,22) - Similar to Futsuu, this could be completely inverted though.
00:12:584 - / 00:23:834 - Please include a 3/2 or greater break in this location. I recommend removing the notes in between here 00:17:646 - / 00:18:209 - here to create a nice little 3/2 gap.
00:24:584 - / 00:36:209 - Please include a 3/2 or greater break in this location. I recommend simply removing 00:30:959 - this.

Call me back owo

Prophecy

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Topic Starter

Prophecy 2018-02-22T05:49:41+00:00

Jonawaga wrote:
Sh1n1 was going to mod this before his removal.
[General]
Consider adjusting the background. I recommend this in each difficulty.
0,0,"BG.png",0,70
Done.
[Kantan]
00:40:709 (43) - I think you should switch this to d because the pitch is falling here. (00:52:709 (63) - ) Done.
[Futsuu]
00:08:834 (14,15,16) - I recommend dkk or ddk here because it is more accurate for the pitches. I prefer ddk.
00:36:209 - Finisher here is inconsistent with other difficulties. Please remove or add it in other difficulties. Removed finisher
00:40:709 - Same as kantan Changed to d
[Muzukashii]
00:08:834 (19,20,21,22) - Similar to Futsuu, this could be completely inverted though. Changed to ddkk
00:12:584 - / 00:23:834 - Please include a 3/2 or greater break in this location. I recommend removing the notes in between here 00:17:646 - / 00:18:209 - here to create a nice little 3/2 gap. Removed 2 1/4 notes.
00:24:584 - / 00:36:209 - Please include a 3/2 or greater break in this location. I recommend simply removing 00:30:959 - this. Alright
Call me back owo

Updated all difficulties.

Jonarwhal

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Jonarwhal 2018-02-22T21:18:40+00:00

waiting on responses from JuDa and Surono~

Surono

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Surono 2018-02-24T06:33:19+00:00

xtrem3x wrote:
-w-

General:

Don = d
Kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

> your spread at the beginning is quite spacious, consider adding 2 or 3 notes in Futsuu.
> Preview point in 00:38:084-
> in each touhou song must be (obligatory) ZUN in tags, and delete "Sur" of your tags (with Surono is sufficient).

[Sur's Inner Oni]
00:36:584 - I feel that this note is leftover, focusing mainly on the BG sound. hmm..

00:49:521 (267,268,269,270,271,272,273) - At this point you could consider combining it with the wind sound, which my suggestion would be to change this by kkdkkkkd, keeping in mind that d (note 269 and 273) would emphasize the hit between high tone. I kept here but applied kkdkkkd in 01:07:521 - here as more accurate

00:51:209 (276,277,278,279,280) - according to my previous suggestion, at this point the beep sound is explicitly followed and at the end it can be a big note (kkkkD) to emphasize the start of the 2nd kiai time. ah normal notes is fine

00:52:896 (290,291,292,293,294,295) - you would consider changing the meaning of these 2 triples as ddk kdk, mainly to intone the vocal. vocal emphasized its finest, thanks applied~

qoot8123 wrote:
hi, here comes my mod as request.

[Sur's Inner Oni]
00:07:896 (33,34) - you may change to k d in order to make consistent with 00:02:084 (8) - .hmm kept it as variation
00:36:584 (188) - this note could be removed alright, seems nothing to emphasis at there. as xtr3me suggest too
01:04:896 (373,374,1,2,3,4,5) - I think this pattern should stop on 01:05:365 -because of guitar sound ,so you may change the pattern like this applied your suggestion, but I changed kkd as dkk.. flows better for me
good luck!

thank you dudes~

Prophecy

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Prophecy 2018-02-24T06:41:27+00:00

Updated Surono's difficulty. Waiting JuDa's response. AND BUBBLE!

JUDYDANNY

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JUDYDANNY 2018-02-25T05:51:53+00:00

rechecked on my diff, Thanks for mod (¦3[___]
http://puu.sh/zva9F/1fd0f77a93.zip

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xtrem3x wrote:
[JuDa's Inner Oni]
00:09:959 (39) - At this point I see that you follow a kind of discrete sounds, but in my opinion this note is a bit out of place, because if you put kkdd you can better appreciate that change in the low tones, in addition to completing the long vocal sound.
I changed to kat and somewhere too.

00:26:459 (89,90) - definitely these notes should be kat for follow-up to the vocal, why in 00:27:584 (94,95,96,97,98,99,100)- the pattern is similar, but it would be like "here my pattern ends and now I'm going in reverse".
Because of sounds not snare, I make a single kat not to emphasize to kat sound than latter ddkkdkk,.

00:29:271 - Would you consider removing this finish? It doesn't have an adequate emphasis to be a big note.
keeping for vocal accent.

00:36:296 - I personally would prefer to use the spinner to follow the vocal than the BG sound, until 00:37:146-
rearranged there.

00:49:521 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - in this segment you can clearly hear a wind sound, which leads me to suggest changing the note to kat in 00:49:802- to not lose that emphasis.
nope on purpose. Sounds nearly to light but I want to make a emphasized don on 00:49:709 - that sounds clear.

00:55:146 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - totally contrary to what I have seen in point 00:43:334- this part has less intensity in vocal, which could suggest changing this pattern where most notes are Don, something like d kdkkddddk to have a considerable difference with the point mentioned above.
rearranged there.

01:08:084 - this note seems to me somewhat inadequate considering point 01:02:084 (177,178)- and it is preferable to repeat what you did in that point mentioned.
rearranged there.

01:12:584 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267) - in my opinion I would prefer to see more kats in this last pattern since it has a high pitch, a suggestion would be to leave it as kdkdkkddk.
rearranged there.

qoot8123 wrote:
[JuDa's Inner Oni]
01:12:584 (259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267) - how about just use 1/2 finisher instead of 1/4 stream? i think it could emphasize the guitar sound.
rearranged there, draw the stream to 01:14:084 - .

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Prophecy

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Prophecy 2018-02-25T06:01:38+00:00

Updated JuDa's difficulty, we're ready!

Jonarwhal

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Jonarwhal 2018-02-25T20:55:59+00:00

woohoo

Aloda

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Aloda 2018-03-11T13:50:08+00:00

Surprise check hi

Kantan seems okay

[Futsuu]
00:28:521 (60,61) - this 1/2 pattern feels pretty out of place, and the gap starting at 00:27:959 - is a little weird too. Try moving 00:28:521 (60) - to 00:28:334 - for a simpler, more fluid structure.

I'm not a fan of how you've left a gap at 00:30:584 - right as the intensity of the song is rising. You could probably restructure this a little to improve the flow and have a nicer build up of density from 00:24:584 - through to 00:36:209 - . That might be a little vague, so you're welcome to send me a message if you want more specifics.

I really don't see a reason to leave the gap at 00:41:459 - so I recommend adding a note here. Having the gap at the start of a measure like this is kind of unintuitive.

[Muzukashii]
00:30:584 - More or less the same thing I mentioned in the Futsuu applies here. I think you'd be fine just adding a note at 00:30:959 - and adding a gap or two elsewhere where they'd fit.

00:41:271 - and 00:53:271 - feel pretty empty to me, try adding a note into each.

01:05:084 (207,208,209,210) - This doesn't play all that well imo. Try to make it a little simpler and more fitting with the other kinds of patterns you've used throughout the map. Just moving 01:05:646 (209) - to 01:05:459 - could be fine.

Nardo's is good.

Sur's is fine.

[JuDa's Inner Oni]
フェードアウトと共にストリームを叩くのはあまり相応しくないと思うから最後のストリームを変えてみませんか？他の難易度のように01:13:334 - に終わらせて、それともこのようなパターンにすればいいかもしれません。

Let's go with that for now. lmk when you've applied.

Prophecy

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Prophecy 2018-03-11T14:33:27+00:00

Aloda wrote:
Surprise check hi

Kantan seems okay

[Futsuu]
00:28:521 (60,61) - this 1/2 pattern feels pretty out of place, and the gap starting at 00:27:959 - is a little weird too. Try moving 00:28:521 (60) - to 00:28:334 - for a simpler, more fluid structure. Agree, fixed.

I'm not a fan of how you've left a gap at 00:30:584 - right as the intensity of the song is rising. You could probably restructure this a little to improve the flow and have a nicer build up of density from 00:24:584 - through to 00:36:209 - . That might be a little vague, so you're welcome to send me a message if you want more specifics. Added some note to the specified range.

I really don't see a reason to leave the gap at 00:41:459 - so I recommend adding a note here. Having the gap at the start of a measure like this is kind of unintuitive. Alright, added kat

[Muzukashii]
00:30:584 - More or less the same thing I mentioned in the Futsuu applies here. I think you'd be fine just adding a note at 00:30:959 - and adding a gap or two elsewhere where they'd fit. Same as Futsuu

00:41:271 - and 00:53:271 - feel pretty empty to me, try adding a note into each. Added a don into each

01:05:084 (207,208,209,210) - This doesn't play all that well imo. Try to make it a little simpler and more fitting with the other kinds of patterns you've used throughout the map. Just moving 01:05:646 (209) - to 01:05:459 - could be fine. Right, fixed

Nardo's is good.

Sur's is fine.

[JuDa's Inner Oni]
フェードアウトと共にストリームを叩くのはあまり相応しくないと思うから最後のストリームを変えてみませんか？他の難易度のように01:13:334 - に終わらせて、それともこのようなパターンにすればいいかもしれません。

Let's go with that for now. lmk when you've applied.

Thanks for modding!