EGOIST - KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit) · forum

Asaiga

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2016-05-16T16:19:25+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Easy
00:56:788 (4) - This overlap isnt pretty. You mean from (3) to (4)? Fixed
01:07:760 - Have a pause in the kiai here. It doesnt make much sense to me to have a break in kiai time. http://puu.sh/oTIB4/22e5bb1e2d.jpg I added a spinner, hope it works
01:14:274 (2) - underlap doenst look pretty imo, i think you should just change it to this http://puu.sh/oTIM4/6b38af928a.jpg Thanks, fixed ^^
01:18:731 - You really should map this or at least delete the kiai. but really I think you should map this, its a short song and it is mappable I mapped it
I really think you should rework the rhythm as its mostly 2/1 sliders or circles with a 2/1 pause. For example you could make 00:17:017 (2) into a 3/2 reverse slider and it would follow the vocals nicely. Same with making 01:06:388 (3) into a 1/2 reverse slider Done

Thanks :3

Vanillas wrote:
Asaiga's Easy
lack hitsound
00:15:645 (1) - Ctrl + J here ? I would love to but I'm not allowed :s
00:22:502 (1,3) - stack here can really confuse easy players, though I'm not sure whether it's unrankble, I suggest you fix it. Fixed
00:33:131 (3) - move it higher such as X:343 Y:105 to make them flow. And if you do, the same as 00:34:502 (2) - , 00:38:617 (4) - etc... Better now
01:18:731 Add a spinner here? Added

Thanks ' w'/

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PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

PlasticMemor 2016-05-16T22:58:49+00:00

Kisses wrote:
Insane
00:25:931 (7) - add circle
00:44:274 (1,2) - If you're gonna do this spacing them out would be nice http://puu.sh/oTJRJ/80963ceab9.jpg
00:52:159 (2,3) - blanket could be better
00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - reduce DS to make it easy to play. Because players would already be trying to wrap their heads around that this is 1/3 within the first 1/2 a sec whilst playing this would be a place thats very easy to sliderbreak
00:53:531 (1) - Because the end point of the slider was away from the slider head I think ctrl+g would be better. http://puu.sh/oTJZw/48a5056aba.jpg
01:04:331 (1,2,3) - slider pls. Almost no one will 300 these 1/3 circles as it comes out of nowhere
01:07:760 (1) - are you not going to add a triplet to match the vocals? I also think 01:09:131 (3) - should be a 2/1 slider if you're mapping the vocals

fixed all thx for mod

Vanillas wrote:
Hi~~ From my queue M4M

[Insane]
00:11:531 hitsound from here seems not Appropriate, a little noisy and not fit the part. And besides, I think you should silence slidders here.
00:25:588 (5,6) - Ctrl + G ?
00:38:102 (4,5,6) - blanket them well
00:50:445 (3) - move it to X: 230 Y: 274 to stack with 00:49:931 (1) - ?
00:57:045 (2,2,2) - 01:12:131 (4) - Though it's Insane diff but try to not overmapping. I here nothing here.
00:59:531 (8) - NC here?
01:07:760 (1) - missing vocal here. you can finish the slidder at 01:08:274 and add notes at 01:08:360 and 01:08:445
hitsound NC1: hitnormal isn't fit the song well. (Just my thought）
Cannot do well on beatmap over 5 stars... so sorry for that...

Good luck on your map~

thx for mod, fixed all

Kami-senpai wrote:

Welp there weren't any mods for my part of the Collab Extra I guess so I'll just give you a quick mod for your part :^)

Extra

If you could change the name to Collab Extra that would be great :^)
00:53:617 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Line these up properly. The slider curve doesn't match the stream curve. Also the placement of 00:53:131 (1,1) - doesn't look very good.
00:54:045 (1,2) - Since it's the chorus of an Extra difficulty, don't be afraid to space out sliders a lot more
00:55:245 (7,8) - Unreadable pattern. Since 00:54:902 (4,5,6) - are 1/4 spaced streams, you're going to want to unstack 7 and 8 to make it more readable
00:56:617 (4,1) - Same. These are way too close together to be 1/2 notes. It will confuse the heck out of people
00:57:302 (4,7) - Blanket
00:57:988 (8,11,1) - ^
01:04:331 (1,1,1) - Very unpredictable. Again, since it's an Extra, bump up that SV to like 1.8 or 1.9 and make these three patterned sliders. Idk, maybe write some kanji with the sliders or draw a butterfly or something lol. Just don't do three single notes so close together.
01:06:731 (1) - Unstack this and move it farther. Maybe somewhere around x:128 y:358?
01:10:502 (5,8) - Blanket
01:13:245 (1,2,3,4) - This is a nice timing pattern with the sliders, but the actual play pattern is too easy. Space them out and increase the SV
01:13:931 (4,5,1) - If you listen closely, there are more 1/3 sounds to map to in between here. Instead of leaving blank space, use some sliders or something with low SV to fill in the space. It'll also be a good way to bump up the density and star difficulty XD
01:17:360 (1,2,3) - Too close. Looks like a stream
01:18:045 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Line up slider and stream
01:18:731 (1) - From here to the end is way too easy, barely an Insane difficulty. Change up the patterns a bit.

Annnndd that's all from me. Gambatte

Edit: Here's also a self mod for my difficulty.

Kami's Insane

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lol thx for the mod

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Nitrous 2016-05-18T02:37:03+00:00

From my Modding Queue

Insane

00:00:560 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:06:731 (3,4) - Fix blanket
01:19:245 (3,4) - Fix blanket
00:36:217 (1,2) - Try blanketing
00:38:102 (4,5) - Try blanketing
01:21:474 (1,2) - Duplicate (1), CTRL + H, CTRL + J to replace (2)

I don't have issues with the rhythm and flow, just aesthetic things. Great song! Good luck on ranking!

PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

PlasticMemor 2016-05-18T02:42:25+00:00

-Nitrous wrote:
From my Modding Queue

Insane
00:00:560 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:06:731 (3,4) - Fix blanket
01:19:245 (3,4) - Fix blanket
00:36:217 (1,2) - Try blanketing
00:38:102 (4,5) - Try blanketing
01:21:474 (1,2) - Duplicate (1), CTRL + H, CTRL + J to replace (2)

I don't have issues with the rhythm and flow, just aesthetic things. Great song! Good luck on ranking!

thx 4 the mod m8

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-05-18T05:34:05+00:00

Chujitsu's mod

00:51:131 (4,1) - move cirle somewhere o,o it feels wrong when you want to hit it cuz its under slider I think you linked the wrong time, but I know what you're talking about I believe did adjutments
01:04:588 (4) - move it down a little adjusted
01:13:931 (4,1), 0115:302 (5,1) - 2big jump for hard diff adjusted DS 1.2
01:25:331 (6) - looks strange as for me o,o you can change it to spiner as alternative or to circle I don't think spin would fit that well :/

Bukkake Blast's Mod

30 seconds the song goes into its 1/3 part, although this is a hard, it sounds so wrong to just spam 1/2 over it and call it a day. You could just map to the very obvious things (vocals, guitar at the opening to the measure) and ignore the 1/3rd, or you could just use all slider's mapped to the 1/3rd. Until slider acc is implemented these are easy to play for everyone because you only need click the head and you get at least a 100. I think you could use sliders here to make it sound right. actually, it's more like 1/6, the derder part comes from a 1/6 more, pretty sure not a 1/3 I don't wanna map 1/6 sound for a hard, and I have thought about following vocals, but some part would require extended sliders and I suck at making these, some notes overall here are for vocals tho, not spamming slider
01:25:331 (6) - Maybe quiet/ silence this slider end.make it more quiet

Kisses's Mod

Hard
00:17:017 (7) - imho this would play better as a slider and I also think the 1/2 sliders in this measure should start on the white ticks. If you choose not to do this at least NC I was following vocals with the sliders, but doing sliders on white tick for guitar does sound better, adjusted
00:44:445 (7) - ^adjusted
00:52:674 (1,2,3) - These are 1/3 http://puu.sh/oTJEJ/701b43b270.jpg
01:10:245 (3) - I cant really here a sound here so I think it would be better to delete this note and move circle (2)
01:13:245 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - These should be 1/3 yes it is
01:15:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ it's already on 1/3, maybe Plastic didnt update my diff.
01:24:217 (1) - ^ ^

Vanillas's Mod

00:31:931 (5,1) - not very sure why using so large DS here... they are too far away from each other, though bgm shows that the 2 notes should using large DS. Try to put them closer. (And if you do , as well as 00:30:560 (6,1) - 00:33:302 (6,1) - etc...) music, different sound, although it's like a 1/6 sound I decided to use a large DS, I may lower the distance
01:11:102 add a note here? I don't see how a note would fit here
01:25:331 (6) - I think a note is better than a slidder, to show a sudden finish and fit the song. yah, I think a note is better too haha(Ah...I'm not sure whether my poor English can express what I want to say.)

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54045
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 43688,60402,84402
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS
TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:B r o k e n's Hard
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op
BeatmapID:962746
BeatmapSetID:440761

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"kabane.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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MBmasher

580 posts

Joined June 2014

MBmasher 2016-05-18T10:44:01+00:00

Sorry but I'm on holiday now, that's why I missed so many mods.
Luckily I brought my laptop, now's the chance!!

6th

I highly recommand increasing DS and even SV to avoid overlaps. I think my current DS and SV fits the song.
00:12:217 (2,3,4) - Too much curve, it looks ugly like that. ):Don't see what's wrong
00:14:852 - Hardly readable for beginners, also 00:14:960 (2,3) - are overmapped (or overdone at least) so I suggest making 1 unique slider from them
00:34:845 (3,4,5) - What is that triangle for ? I mean, the pattern is too harsh for no real reason. Fixed
00:55:760 (2,3,4) - Would fit for Hard. Fixed
01:13:245 (1,2,3,4) - That 1/6 rhythm is way too unpredictable for beginners, please at least use reverse slider. Fixed
01:22:845 (1,2,3) - Please don't use jumps in easiest difficulty Fixed
I don't recommand skipping 01:24:445 - and 01:25:131 - Fixed

propasy

01:22:845 (1,2,3) – I think these three notes are unnecessary I fixed the jumps in a previous mod, but the notes stay.

Lily Bread

00:14:960 (2,3) - try this. 2 short sliders in one place is not good in this part, because it's very quiet. Fixed in previous mod

00:22:502 (1,2) - ^ Fixed

00:34:502 (2,3,4,5,6) - these circles doesn't fit the music because music is very quiet in this part. try to do what you do at - 00:36:902 (2,3) - Fixed

Deadmadeon

00:30:731 (1,2) - Fix 2 (the distance between they aren't right, even you have distance snap on) Fixed
00:38:617 (4) - the sameFixed

At the time of typing this, my laptop hass low battery. So I will fix the rest later! Here is my fixed GD right now even if there is no point

Jami's Normal

osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.2

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TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:Jami's Normal
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
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tutuhara

202 posts

Joined July 2013

tutuhara 2016-05-20T10:22:33+00:00

MLG Mod Queue {M4M}

Asaiga's Easy
00:00:560 (1,2) - - fix Blanket ( 2 combo down ) http://prntscr.com/b69dbx
00:23:874 (2,4) - Overlay - change

Jami's Normal
01:13:245 (5) - Remove the slider - confuses beginners. 2 Replace slider or 3 laps
01:18:731 (1) - circle add

B r o k e n's Hard
00:53:360 (4) - Change like this - better to feel the music . In addition to the bounce is a slider rather than a circle

Insane
00:11:445 (2) - delete note
01:14:159 (5) - Delete !!!!
01:17:617 (8) - delete
01:18:045 (2,1) - Broken smooth after looped slider . He shows back when 2 combo slider is at the top - Fix It!

after diff - nice )
Good luck ! And EAT MORE DORITOS !!!

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Lami

1,756 posts

Joined June 2011

Lami 2016-05-20T16:13:23+00:00

normal-hitnormal hitsound doesn't fit with music.
it's too stressed to song.
i recommend to change other hitsound.....

Hard

01:10:160 (2,3,4,5) - too much hard in hard diff.
use 1/4 slider plz.
01:14:445 (1,2,3) - so hard for readability to hard diff player.
change to 1/3 slider. instead of.
00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same above
00:59:360 (2) - so downbeat slider. strong vocal come from 00:59:531 - .
need click rhythm here.

Kami's Insane

rename extra plz.
also od 8.

01:03:988 (2,3) - it's too huge jump without motivation.
no emphasis in (3)
01:18:045 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - i think you can make more natural stream shape.

Extra

00:08:102 (1) - remove NC
00:37:588 (1,2,3) - use different DS please. it's so confuse for playing.
00:47:360 (2,4) - unrankable, as hitburst hide reverse arrow.
it's unacceptable.
00:55:245 (7,1) - this stacking doesn't fit with music.
since 00:55:417 (1) - have strong beat than others.
need to increase DS in here.

MBmasher

580 posts

Joined June 2014

MBmasher 2016-05-21T00:07:10+00:00

Back again for more mods

Chujitsu

as for me here is everything fine, but jumps on kia feels big >.> but its just my option I think it's ok

Kisses

00:22:502 (1,2,3) - also this is kinda cramped, I espcially dont like how 00:21:817 (7,2) - touch each other. You could have made it a bit like this or something. Anything to space it out a bit Fixed in prevoius mod
00:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - if you're gonna do this there are neater and more readable patterns. one example being http://puu.sh/oTJ0Z/59b8aaa2f8.jpg Fixed
00:48:560 (3) - ctrl +h so the body isnt leaning towards (2) Fixed
00:56:788 (1,2) - because these are mapping similar vocal sounds how about chanign the curvature of (2) like (1)? They would definately compliment each other. http://puu.sh/oTJ8S/2267deefd6.jpg Fixed
01:10:160 - There is a sound here so I really think it would do justice to add a circle. Also ctrl + g 01:10:502 (1,2) - would be a better ryhthm imo as I really do feel a slider should be on the downbeat Fixed
01:13:245 (1,2,3,4) - 1/3 patterns are extremely hard for the for even the best of players let alone normal. highly recommend you do this http://puu.sh/oTJp7/896a06ff4d.jpg Makes it esily and follows the vocals nicely too. Fixed in previous mod
01:15:988 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/oTJqy/6282d816a2.jpg for the same reason as above. Makes it easier whilst still being fun to play Fixed
01:24:217 (4,5) - Why not have these as reverse sliders since there is a sound in the middle of both sliders..? Fixed in previous mod

Vanillas

00:40:331 (3,4) - Stack not looking good. Don't see any stack, probably fixed in previous mod
00:48:217 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:24:217 (4,5) - Check DS, not allowed to change DS in normal Diff. You can change DS in kiai time
00:55:760 (2,3,4) - a little hard for normal players, what about using rhythms like 00:54:045 (1,2,3) - ? Fixed in previous mod
01:13:245 (1,2,3,4) - Using slidders here! too hard for normal players! maybe unrankble! ^
01:15:074 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:16:445 (2,4,5) - ^ ^
01:22:845 (1,2,3) - replace them with repeater ^

tutuhara

01:13:245 (5) - Remove the slider - confuses beginners. 2 Replace slider or 3 laps fixed in previous mod (I think??)
01:18:731 (1) - circle add But this is the start of a spinner

Here is my fixed GD

Jami's Normal

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54045
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 43688,60402,84402
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS
TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:Jami's Normal
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
BeatmapID:960809
BeatmapSetID:440761

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HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Background and Video events
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

PlasticMemor 2016-05-21T00:45:40+00:00

Lami wrote:
normal-hitnormal hitsound doesn't fit with music.
it's too stressed to song.
i recommend to change other hitsound.....

Hard

01:10:160 (2,3,4,5) - too much hard in hard diff.
use 1/4 slider plz.
01:14:445 (1,2,3) - so hard for readability to hard diff player.
change to 1/3 slider. instead of.
00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same above
00:59:360 (2) - so downbeat slider. strong vocal come from 00:59:531 - .
need click rhythm here.

Kami's Insane

rename extra plz.
also od 8.

01:03:988 (2,3) - it's too huge jump without motivation.
no emphasis in (3)
01:18:045 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - i think you can make more natural stream shape.

Extra

00:08:102 (1) - remove NC
00:37:588 (1,2,3) - use different DS please. it's so confuse for playing.
00:47:360 (2,4) - unrankable, as hitburst hide reverse arrow.
it's unacceptable.
00:55:245 (7,1) - this stacking doesn't fit with music.
since 00:55:417 (1) - have strong beat than others.
need to increase DS in here.

tutuhara wrote:
MLG Mod Queue {M4M}

Asaiga's Easy
00:00:560 (1,2) - - fix Blanket ( 2 combo down ) http://prntscr.com/b69dbx
00:23:874 (2,4) - Overlay - change

Jami's Normal
01:13:245 (5) - Remove the slider - confuses beginners. 2 Replace slider or 3 laps
01:18:731 (1) - circle add

B r o k e n's Hard
00:53:360 (4) - Change like this - better to feel the music . In addition to the bounce is a slider rather than a circle

Insane
00:11:445 (2) - delete note
01:14:159 (5) - Delete !!!!
01:17:617 (8) - delete
01:18:045 (2,1) - Broken smooth after looped slider . He shows back when 2 combo slider is at the top - Fix It!

after diff - nice )
Good luck ! And EAT MORE DORITOS !!!
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fixed all thx for mods!

_Hou

391 posts

Joined November 2014

_Hou 2016-05-22T06:51:40+00:00

m4m
started as IRL
finishing here

Insane

00:30:560 - 00:41:017 - during this part strong beats are made way randomly. this strong beat is made as 3 circles with high spacing, as 3 circles with low spacing, as 1/2 slider with RA, as 2 sliders 1/2. U'd better make them more consistently i thing. (these high beats 00:33:474 (1) - 00:33:474 (1) - 00:34:845 (1,2,3) - etc.)
01:07:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is weird actually, it neither follows the melody nor vocals, rework it.

mighty way

01:15:302 (5) - avoid stack here

IRL

03:00 Hou Rearu: hi o/
03:00 PlasticMemor: hi o/
03:00 Hou Rearu: you recently did m4m
03:00 Hou Rearu: mind if I do IRL back?
03:01 PlasticMemor: i don't mind
03:01 *Hou Rearu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/975175 EGOIST - KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)]
03:01 Hou Rearu: 00:13:760 (5,6,1) - 
03:02 Hou Rearu: feels a little bit uncomfortable
03:02 Hou Rearu: making same spacing as here 00:12:902 (2,3,4) -  mighty be a solve
03:03 Hou Rearu:  00:20:788 (3,1) - 
03:03 Hou Rearu: 3 better have direction right in the start of 1
03:05 PlasticMemor: i moved 3 so that it goes directly to 1
03:05 Hou Rearu: here
03:05 Hou Rearu: it is just suggestion
03:05 Hou Rearu: 00:22:502 (1,2,1) - 
03:06 Hou Rearu: mighty not decrease spacing so sharp
03:07 Hou Rearu: like, at least 1/2  spacing of 00:22:502 (1,2) - between 00:22:674 (2,1) - 
03:08 Hou Rearu: 00:17:360 (2,3) - 
03:09 Hou Rearu: previously it was circle flow
03:09 Hou Rearu: so putting it in the same flow might be reasonable
03:09 Hou Rearu: sec
03:09 Hou Rearu: making screenshot
03:11 Hou Rearu: [https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/GEolkQF.jpg this way]
03:11 Hou Rearu: 00:35:274 (3) - 
03:11 Hou Rearu: ?
03:12 Hou Rearu: there is no sound here
03:13 Hou Rearu: 00:47:188 (1,2,3,4) - this flow feels kinda weird, really
03:13 Hou Rearu: or
03:13 Hou Rearu: wait
03:14 Hou Rearu: well, nevermind fine in game
03:15 Hou Rearu: :P
03:15 PlasticMemor: :/
03:15 Hou Rearu: my bad
03:19 Hou Rearu: these are awkward for sure 00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - they 'd better be more similar to those  01:13:245 (1,2,3,4) - 
03:20 *Hou Rearu is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/969372 EGOIST - KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit) [Insane]]
03:21 Hou Rearu: I don't hear a triple here tbh
03:23 Hou Rearu: 00:25:588 (5,6,7) - probably slider 1/2 w/ RA better, just the same as 00:26:102 (1) - 
03:24 PlasticMemor: sorry to stop you here but
03:24 PlasticMemor: my internet is dying
03:24 PlasticMemor: could you add the rest of your mod to forum?
03:24 Hou Rearu: okay, I'll finish at your map thread
03:24 Hou Rearu: y
03:25 Hou Rearu: more consistantly
03:25 PlasticMemor: thank you
03:25 Hou Rearu: hope there were some useful tips
03:26 PlasticMemor: thank you
03:26 Hou Rearu: oh
03:26 PlasticMemor: there were thx!

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2016-05-22T07:42:57+00:00

Hello ~

[Insane]

00:00:560 (1) - add a finish to the head
00:00:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Please add some hitsounds to this part.
00:19:245 (5) - add a new combo for jump
00:52:331 (3) - prefer to use two circles and jumps on here
00:54:045 (1) - add a finish to the head

[Kami's Insane]

00:38:274 (3) - try to move this note for reading
SPOILER
01:18:045 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - overmapping, Please remake this part.

[Collab Extra]

00:34:845 (1,2,3) - I can't read this rhythm for playing. Please use more distance between 2 and 3
00:35:531 (1,2,3) - ^
00:57:474 (5,6,7) - It's Extra diff so It's better to use more distance over x1.0 ... it would be fun for playing
00:57:988 (8,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:59:531 (7) - add a new combo to here ?
01:01:588 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm, try to use circles instead 1/2 slider ?
01:06:988 (3,5,7) - seems overmapping, pls remove them .

Good luck

Asaiga

848 posts

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2016-05-22T08:24:08+00:00

tutuhara wrote:
MLG Mod Queue {M4M}

Asaiga's Easy
00:00:560 (1,2) - - fix Blanket ( 2 combo down ) http://prntscr.com/b69dbx Fixed
00:23:874 (2,4) - Overlay - change Right, fixed

Thanks, I actually did a remap lol. I know I would eventually do so anyways.

Remap

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ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:Asaiga's Easy
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
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PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

PlasticMemor 2016-05-22T12:47:41+00:00

alacat wrote:
Hello ~

[Insane]
00:00:560 (1) - add a finish to the head done
00:00:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Please add some hitsounds to this part. i changed from S:C1 to D
00:19:245 (5) - add a new combo for jump done
00:52:331 (3) - prefer to use two circles and jumps on here done.
00:54:045 (1) - add a finish to the head done

[Collab Extra]
00:57:474 (5,6,7) - It's Extra diff so It's better to use more distance over x1.0 ... it would be fun for playing done
00:57:988 (8,1,2,3,4) - ^ done
00:59:531 (7) - add a new combo to here ? done
01:01:588 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm, try to use circles instead 1/2 slider ? i changed to triangle jumps :/
01:06:988 (3,5,7) - seems overmapping, pls remove them . done and made them jumps
Good luck

thank you for your mod

Hou Rearu wrote:

m4m
started as IRL
finishing here

Insane

00:30:560 - 00:41:017 - during this part strong beats are made way randomly. this strong beat is made as 3 circles with high spacing, as 3 circles with low spacing, as 1/2 slider with RA, as 2 sliders 1/2. U'd better make them more consistently i thing. (these high beats 00:33:474 (1) - 00:33:474 (1) - 00:34:845 (1,2,3) - etc.) the sliders are to emphasize the vocal extends and the circles are for normal vocals
01:07:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is weird actually, it neither follows the melody nor vocals, rework it. this is supposed to emphasize the oh oh ah

mighty way

01:15:302 (5) - avoid stack here moved so that it goes towards the middle

IRL

03:00 Hou Rearu: hi o/
03:00 PlasticMemor: hi o/
03:00 Hou Rearu: you recently did m4m
03:00 Hou Rearu: mind if I do IRL back?
03:01 PlasticMemor: i don't mind
03:01 *Hou Rearu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/975175 EGOIST - KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)]
03:01 Hou Rearu: 00:13:760 (5,6,1) - 
03:02 Hou Rearu: feels a little bit uncomfortable
03:02 Hou Rearu: making same spacing as here 00:12:902 (2,3,4) -  mighty be a solve
03:03 Hou Rearu:  00:20:788 (3,1) - 
03:03 Hou Rearu: 3 better have direction right in the start of 1
03:05 PlasticMemor: i moved 3 so that it goes directly to 1
03:05 Hou Rearu: here
03:05 Hou Rearu: it is just suggestion
03:05 Hou Rearu: 00:22:502 (1,2,1) - 
03:06 Hou Rearu: mighty not decrease spacing so sharp
03:07 Hou Rearu: like, at least 1/2  spacing of 00:22:502 (1,2) - between 00:22:674 (2,1) - 
03:08 Hou Rearu: 00:17:360 (2,3) - 
03:09 Hou Rearu: previously it was circle flow
03:09 Hou Rearu: so putting it in the same flow might be reasonable
03:09 Hou Rearu: sec
03:09 Hou Rearu: making screenshot
03:11 Hou Rearu: [https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/GEolkQF.jpg this way]
03:11 Hou Rearu: 00:35:274 (3) - 
03:11 Hou Rearu: ?
03:12 Hou Rearu: there is no sound here
03:13 Hou Rearu: 00:47:188 (1,2,3,4) - this flow feels kinda weird, really
03:13 Hou Rearu: or
03:13 Hou Rearu: wait
03:14 Hou Rearu: well, nevermind fine in game
03:15 Hou Rearu: :P
03:15 PlasticMemor: :/
03:15 Hou Rearu: my bad
03:19 Hou Rearu: these are awkward for sure 00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - they 'd better be more similar to those  01:13:245 (1,2,3,4) - 
03:20 *Hou Rearu is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/969372 EGOIST - KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit) [Insane]]
03:21 Hou Rearu: I don't hear a triple here tbh
03:23 Hou Rearu: 00:25:588 (5,6,7) - probably slider 1/2 w/ RA better, just the same as 00:26:102 (1) - 
03:24 PlasticMemor: sorry to stop you here but
03:24 PlasticMemor: my internet is dying
03:24 PlasticMemor: could you add the rest of your mod to forum?
03:24 Hou Rearu: okay, I'll finish at your map thread
03:24 Hou Rearu: y
03:25 Hou Rearu: more consistantly
03:25 PlasticMemor: thank you
03:25 Hou Rearu: hope there were some useful tips
03:26 PlasticMemor: thank you
03:26 Hou Rearu: oh
03:26 PlasticMemor: there were thx!

thanks for your mod

stUwUpid

608 posts

Joined January 2015

stUwUpid 2016-05-25T03:37:50+00:00

Lami wrote:
Kami's Insane

rename extra plz. Extra is 5.25 and above
also od 8.

01:03:988 (2,3) - it's too huge jump without motivation.
no emphasis in (3) I think vocals have plenty emphasis
01:18:045 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - i think you can make more natural stream shape. Not sure what can be more natural than a curve, but I did make it more fun i guess

Extra

00:08:102 (1) - remove NC
00:37:588 (1,2,3) - use different DS please. it's so confuse for playing. It's the same as before.
00:47:360 (2,4) - unrankable, as hitburst hide reverse arrow.
it's unacceptable.
00:55:245 (7,1) - this stacking doesn't fit with music.
since 00:55:417 (1) - have strong beat than others.
need to increase DS in here.

alacat wrote:
[Kami's Insane]
00:38:274 (3) - try to move this note for reading
SPOILER
01:18:045 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - overmapping, Please remake this part. I mean, there's a drum roll in the music. That's not overmapping.
[Collab Extra]
00:34:845 (1,2,3) - I can't read this rhythm for playing. Please use more distance between 2 and 3
00:35:531 (1,2,3) - ^
00:57:474 (5,6,7) - It's Extra diff so It's better to use more distance over x1.0 ... it would be fun for playing
00:57:988 (8,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:59:531 (7) - add a new combo to here ?
01:01:588 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm, try to use circles instead 1/2 slider ?
01:06:988 (3,5,7) - seems overmapping, pls remove them .

Here's my mods.

Kami's Insane

osu file format v14

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Title:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:Kami's Insane
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
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88,164,45988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,56,46160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,208,46331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,60,46502,5,0,0:0:0:0:
148,260,46674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,64,46845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,320,47017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,120,47188,5,0,0:0:0:0:
464,271,47360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,320,47531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,48,47702,2,0,L|431:212,2,190
128,72,48560,6,0,L|128:184,1,95
364,320,48902,2,0,L|364:225,1,95
128,72,49245,2,0,L|240:72,1,95
364,320,49588,2,0,L|269:320,1,95
112,320,49931,5,0,0:0:0:0:
316,112,50102,2,0,L|205:172,1,95
69,241,50445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,244,50788,2,0,L|86:170,1,56.9999982604981
118,71,51131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,84,51302,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,188,51474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,98,51645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,180,51817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,320,51988,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,44,52160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,309,52331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,57,52502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,320,52674,6,0,L|149:254,1,95.0000036239625
479,115,52902,2,0,L|369:93,1,95.0000036239625
381,258,53131,2,0,L|449:339,1,95.0000036239625
70,35,53360,2,0,P|101:89|126:107,1,95.0000036239625
146,124,53531,5,0,0:0:0:0:
171,144,53617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,157,53702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,166,53788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,53874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,174,53960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,171,54045,6,8,P|381:162|437:121,1,95
231,296,54388,2,8,P|308:331|317:379,1,95
448,352,54731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,192,54902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
318,192,54988,1,8,0:0:0:0:
318,192,55074,2,8,L|239:138,1,95
139,170,55417,6,0,L|77:241,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,32,55760,2,2,L|344:88,1,95
242,218,56102,5,2,0:0:0:0:
87,33,56274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
259,36,56445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
57,169,56617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
91,264,56788,5,8,0:0:0:0:
119,293,56874,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,312,56960,2,8,P|190:327|243:313,1,95
219,66,57302,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57645,2,8,P|404:234|368:246,1,95
160,214,57988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
355,36,58160,5,8,0:0:0:0:
355,36,58245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,36,58331,2,8,P|406:51|438:91,1,95
188,141,58674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
88,252,58845,2,2,L|142:338,1,95
301,323,59188,2,2,L|250:240,1,95
289,60,59531,6,8,P|317:111|301:160,1,95
393,102,59874,2,8,P|384:149|404:191,1,95
478,296,60217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,319,60388,1,4,0:0:0:0:
382,319,60474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,319,60560,2,8,L|312:252,1,95
104,248,60902,6,8,L|122:185,2,47.5
198,71,61245,2,8,L|232:137,2,47.5
295,233,61588,5,2,0:0:0:0:
251,34,61760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
438,131,61931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,227,62102,5,2,0:0:0:0:
265,41,62274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,138,62445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
269,221,62617,5,2,0:0:0:0:
277,47,62788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,144,62960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,242,63131,2,0,P|418:289|378:300,1,95
288,288,63474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
251,284,63560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
218,297,63645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,87,63817,6,0,L|180:168,1,95
118,290,64160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,39,64331,2,0,B|422:95|362:75|363:137,2,95
305,164,64845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,344,65017,5,6,0:0:0:0:
158,129,65188,1,2,0:0:0:0:
350,40,65360,5,2,0:0:0:0:
415,351,65531,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,228,65702,5,2,0:0:0:0:
455,220,65874,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,44,66045,5,2,0:0:0:0:
455,220,66217,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,322,66388,5,2,0:0:0:0:
457,42,66560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
65,206,66731,5,10,0:0:0:0:
344,44,66902,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,281,67074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
113,29,67245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
206,137,67417,2,0,P|255:128|312:138,1,95
256,64,69817,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,69988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,69,70160,5,0,0:0:0:0:
109,69,70245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,69,70331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,69,70417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,69,70502,2,0,P|174:93|227:196,1,190
48,197,71017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,197,71102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,197,71188,2,0,L|136:155,1,95
248,104,71531,2,0,P|274:182|264:220,1,95
396,28,71874,2,8,L|444:120,1,95
447,143,72131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
447,143,72217,2,0,P|425:180|376:216,1,95
280,122,72560,5,2,0:0:0:0:
356,320,72731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,252,72902,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,196,73074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,122,73245,6,0,B|239:78|272:45|272:45,1,63.3333333333333
114,184,73474,2,8,L|8:215,1,63.3333333333333
479,192,73702,2,8,L|522:267,1,63.3333333333333
234,340,73931,2,8,L|314:289,1,63.3333333333333
251,168,74360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,55,74617,6,8,L|313:110,1,63.3333333333333
206,248,74845,2,8,L|151:195,1,63.3333333333333
140,143,75074,2,8,L|163:213,1,63.3333333333333
332,142,75302,2,8,L|268:65,1,63.3333333333333
183,326,75988,6,2,L|255:360,1,75.9999976806641
372,30,76217,2,2,L|288:14,1,75.9999976806641
413,264,76445,2,2,L|443:190,1,75.9999976806641
141,61,76674,2,2,L|106:132,1,75.9999976806641
250,128,76902,2,2,P|219:51|219:51,1,82.3333295644126
284,232,77131,2,2,L|324:317,1,82.3333295644126
156,123,77360,5,2,0:0:0:0:
29,197,77588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
146,245,77817,2,0,B|185:332,1,88.6666639607748
128,64,78045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,95,78131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,123,78217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,150,78302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,174,78388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,194,78474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,214,78560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,229,78645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,252,78731,6,0,P|360:271|430:233,1,95
471,303,79074,2,0,P|480:262|464:206,1,95
279,47,79417,2,0,B|319:85|319:85|323:85,1,47.5
511,81,79588,2,0,L|441:93,1,47.5
298,184,79760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,28,80102,6,0,P|126:68|115:103,1,95
277,253,80445,2,0,P|257:297|205:317,1,95
211,129,80788,2,0,L|164:169,1,47.5
81,294,80960,2,0,L|95:239,1,47.5
75,157,81131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,81474,2,0,L|463:217,1,95
451,322,81731,2,0,L|496:288,1,47.5
318,298,81902,2,0,L|291:260,1,47.5
382,219,82074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,147,82160,2,0,P|354:89|415:18,2,142.5
257,147,82845,6,0,L|258:247,2,63.3333333333333
231,51,83188,2,0,L|162:109,2,63.3333333333333
303,298,83531,2,0,P|378:279|404:289,2,63.3333333333333
215,298,83874,2,0,P|182:283|146:281,2,63.3333333333333
304,30,84217,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,224,84445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,306,84674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,49,84902,5,2,0:0:0:0:
464,152,85131,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,339,85360,1,2,0:0:0:0:

Also, please refrain from modding my part of the Collab Extra. Thanks.

just click

245 posts

Joined May 2014

just click 2016-05-25T22:37:26+00:00

Hey, M4M from my queue.

Asaiga's Easy

00:00:560 (1,2) - Uneven blanket.

00:14:274 (4,1) - ^

00:27:988 (1,2) - I guess this rhythm works, but it feels empty afterwards. As a preference I would continue mapping out the current rhythm you had previously.

00:30:731 (1) - I won't point out every v-shape slider, but I personally think they look better symmetrical. The current ones you have throughout the map look uneven in various different shapes, which sort of makes the map look a little messy.

00:40:331 (3) - Lessen the curve on this for a more smooth blanket with the next slider.

00:52:674 - A note here would be better, you skip a mappable beat that is emphasized.

00:56:788 (4,5) - Would look nicer if these were blanketed.

00:58:160 (5,1) - Slightly uneven blanket if you look at the approach circle.

01:06:388 (3,4) - Would look better if (4) was at the same slope as (3).

Jami's Normal

00:00:560 - Why not map the beginning of the song? All the other difficulties have it mapped, and it's already a short song. Please consider mapping it.

00:12:217 (2) - I would change this slider into a different shape simply because the curve is way too large compared to (3) and (4) in this combo, which makes it look random.

00:21:131 (6,7) - Make these symmetrical? These go by the same noise in the music. Also, the curve on (7) is way too sharp, so it would look nicer if you did this suggestion.

00:22:502 (1,2) - A longer slider would fit in better with the song and rhythm than these two sliders since you have nothing around 00:24:217

00:33:474 (1,2,3) - Not sure why the spacing is different between these notes.

00:34:845 (3,4) - Same slider shapes would look better.

00:44:445 (1) - Awkward slider shape, I would change it.

00:56:788 (1,2) - Same slider shapes for these? It would go with the vocals more.

01:06:388 (5,6) - ^

B r o k e n's Hard

00:00:560 (1) - Make symmetrical to y-axis.

00:06:045 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing the same here. I'm not sure if you did this to emphasize the (1) more, but it would really be much better to have the same spacing.

00:09:474 (3,4) - Try to make the (4) at the same slope as (3)'s slider end, it looks a little uneven as it is.

00:10:331 (2) - Lessen the curve on this for a smooth blanket, also rotate it a bit for better flow to (3).

00:12:988 (2,3,4) - I would adjust these sliders so that they are clickable on the white ticks instead of the red ones. The current rhythm sounds weird as a result since you mapped the rhythm on the white ticks previously.

00:14:102 (1) - The large white tick would be better clickable, so I suggest changing this reverse slider to something else.

00:15:988 (2,3) - Same curvature would look nicer.

00:22:160 (4) - Sounds better ending at 00:22:417

00:36:160 (1) - Incorrectly snapped note.

00:51:131 (4) - Bland slider shape, I would try a better shape.

00:52:674 (1,4) - Uneven blanket.

01:13:674 (3,4) - Unnecessary rhythm with the (4).

Insane

00:02:617 (7) - Awkward curve on this, lessen the curvature for a smoother blanket with (6).

00:02:960 (8) - Doesn't flow well with the current position, I would place it stacked on (6) as an example.

00:04:502 (2,3,4) - Awkward flow with this also, try not to have sliders completely facing away from notes. The awkward flow mostly comes from (2).

00:05:017 (4,5) - Lessen the curve on (4) for a smoother blanket. If applied, make it the same slider shape as (2) in this combo since they are nearly identical in curvature.

00:07:760 (6) - Plays better facing the (7) more.

00:08:102 (7) - Plays better rotated vertically so that the slider ends facing downwards.

00:09:988 (6,7) - Uneven blanket.

00:10:331 (7,8) - ^

00:10:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - A stream of 5 circles doesn't fit that well to me, the (1,2,3) is currently fine. My suggestion with this rhythm is to remove (4) entirely and then space (5) somewhere else depending on how you structure this.

00:12:902 (7) - The ticks forming the slider shape seem extremely random, fix it up?

00:15:817 (5) - Triplet isn't really necessary here since you don't use them anywhere else in this section of the song other than the vocals later on.

00:19:245 (1,2) - I'm not really sure why you mapped these two notes like this, but the flow is bad with them and the spacing is too large. Nothing is emphasized here to account for the large spacing.

00:19:760 (1,2) - Uneven blanket.

00:20:274 (3) - Rotate to form a more even blanket with the notes.

00:22:845 (2) - Awkward flow with current position, move it somewhere else so that it faces the next note more.

00:23:874 (6,1) - Uneven blanket.

00:25:245 (3,4,5) - Why is the spacing so large? The song is calm here.

00:26:102 (1) - Awkward flow with this ending facing away from the next note, adjust so that it flows better.

00:27:131 (4) - Rhythm of this slider sounds weird since you switch from the white ticks being clickable to red ticks. Change the rhythm so that white ticks are clickable. Also, I'm not sure why red ticks are needed to structure these sliders in this section, they can be structured with 2 white ticks alone.

00:31:588 (4) - CTRL + G for better flow to the next note, and then adjust (5) so that the spacing is even.

00:32:102 (6) - Lessen the curve for a smoother blanket with (7).

00:34:674 (4,1,2,3) - Unnecessary spacing again here, you drastically decrease the spacing at 00:36:045 (5,1,2) even though the song is emphasized nearly identical to this section.

00:35:188 (3,4) - Uneven blanket, lessen the curve on (3).

There are many other issues similar to these, mainly pertaining to flow and aesthetics, so I'll just stop here on this one because this mod post will probably be huge if I point out everything.
Kami's Insane

hi again lol

00:05:017 (2) - This slider shape doesn't really fit in too much with the sharp curve, a simple straight slider that is slightly tilting downwards to the right would play nicely.

00:08:102 (4) - You can stack this similarly to 00:07:931 (3) for consistency.

00:09:474 (4) - Nothing wrong with the slider shape, but it would look cooler if you make a symmetrical one out of this.

00:10:845 (4) - Similar to the stacking suggestion two above ^^

00:11:360 (5,6,1) - Would look nicer if it was blanketed closer in my opinion.

00:12:731 (4) - If you did my previous suggestion above, I would stack this note on the triplet to form a blanket as well. I personally don't how it plays being stacked on the same note afterwards.

00:16:331 (6) - Blanket would look nicer with a slightly greater curve to it.

00:20:617 (5) - Stack looks slightly different compared to (4) and (6) in this combo.

00:22:674 (2) - I think this plays better stacked on (4)'s tail, the spacing is kind of large here.

00:23:702 (2) - Feels too far, try 264/244. Adjust it also if you want to stack it differently.

00:24:217 (4) - Kind of an awkward flow here, maybe try somewhere below the previous slider?

00:24:388 (5) - Curve this a little more to form a more even blanket with (3) in the next combo since it's uneven. It wouldn't be good to adjust the (3) since it would ruin the upcoming pattern you have.

00:28:160 (4) - Plays better stacked on (2) in the previous combo in my opinion.

00:28:845 (2) - Curve to match the pattern more? All the piano noises here are curved sliders.

00:33:302 (2) - Doesn't fit in as a kick-slider, I would suggest a triplet instead.

00:47:017 (8) - Move to 328/284 for more of an isosceles triangle appearance.

00:49:417 (2,3,4) - Make this more equilateral, if you look at the approach circle of (3) as an example, you will see that the distance is uneven.

00:51:645 (2) - Uneven triangle because of this note's position.

00:53:531 - With the stream here, have you considered using the tool for converting a slider to a stream? It creates a much neater looking stream, and I think it would work great here. If you don't know where it is, go to the top at "Compose" and click on a slider to convert it to a stream. It should be easy to do once you know how it works.

00:57:817 (7,1) - Uneven blanket.

01:04:331 (3,4) - Possible move these somewhere else? The flow to (1) in the next combo is kind of awkward and adjusting that note would ruin the jump pattern you have.

01:06:560 (2,3,4) - I think the current jump patterns you have here are a better choice than this triplet, but it's your choice.

01:11:188 (4,5) - Increase the curvature on both of these so that they are symmetrical? The reason why I suggest this is because (5) forms an uneven blanket with (2) in the next combo.

01:17:817 (3) - Maybe try a different position for this? The spacing between this note and then to the stream is really small even though the rhythm of the song uses the same emphasis still.

01:18:045 - Same suggestion with the streams that I made.

01:20:102 (1,2) - Blanket these with (1) in the previous combo?

Collab Extra

00:02:617 (4) - Would look better if slightly unstacked in my opinion.

00:09:988 (4) - I would adjust this curve slightly where it blankets (3) since it appears to be uneven.

00:13:760 (5,6,1) - Make the spacing with these more even?

00:15:645 (1,2,3) - A triplet does not sound right here at all, I would delete this and change it to a slider similar to (4) in this combo.

00:17:360 (2) - I think a more even distance between (1) and (3) would be better for this note.

00:18:388 - In this section, the NC spam isn't really necessary, even though it's for the sake of the appearance with these jumps. If you accept this suggestion, then adjust the patterns at 00:19:074 since these will look weird afterwards without the NC's.

00:21:131 - Kicksliders don't really fit in well to me with this current pattern, reverse sliders would match this section of the song more mixed in with streams.

00:23:702 (2) - Plays better stacked on (4) in the previous combo because the large spacing doesn't seem necessary.

00:33:302 (6,1) - Triplet sounds better to me than a kickslider.

00:34:845 - Rhythm is really weird here in this section of the song, I would fix it.

00:38:702 (5) - This should be on the red tick.

00:39:474 (3,5) - Slightly uneven blanket.

00:40:331 - Same thing with the NC spam.

00:47:360 (2) - I think the spacing is more appropriately stacked on the tail of (4).

00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing on these seem very random, it makes transitions into notes uncomfortable to play, such as with (3) and (4). I would try something different with this section.

00:54:388 (2) - Plays better curved the opposite way because of the flow.

00:58:760 - Why skip the mappable triplet here? The vocals allow it.

01:01:588 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This pattern would look nicer with more equilateral triangles.

01:05:017 - NC spam not necessary here.

01:07:417 (5) - Kind of awkward ending it on a slider? Try jumps still since it's still emphasized here.

01:07:760 - A note here would also be better.

01:09:817 (1,2) - These note aren't really needed in my opinion, I would delete them.

I think I'll just stop here, many recurring things occur throughout the rest of the map and it's hard to properly mod.

There's quite a few aesthetics throughout some of the difficulties that made it look really messy and unpolished such as blankets, inconsistent slider shapes, etc. Good luck with this, feel free to contact me if you have any questions on anything I posted or if any help is needed.

PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

PlasticMemor 2016-05-26T03:06:40+00:00

Breezy wrote:
Hey, M4M from my queue.

Insane

00:02:617 (7) - Awkward curve on this, lessen the curvature for a smoother blanket with (6). not supposed to be blanketed...

00:02:960 (8) - Doesn't flow well with the current position, I would place it stacked on (6) as an example. ^

00:04:502 (2,3,4) - Awkward flow with this also, try not to have sliders completely facing away from notes. The awkward flow mostly comes from (2).

00:05:017 (4,5) - Lessen the curve on (4) for a smoother blanket. If applied, make it the same slider shape as (2) in this combo since they are nearly identical in curvature. once again, not supposed to be blanket

00:07:760 (6) - Plays better facing the (7) more.

00:08:102 (7) - Plays better rotated vertically so that the slider ends facing downwards.

00:09:988 (6,7) - Uneven blanket.

00:10:331 (7,8) - ^

00:10:845 (1,2,3,4,5) - A stream of 5 circles doesn't fit that well to me, the (1,2,3) is currently fine. My suggestion with this rhythm is to remove (4) entirely and then space (5) somewhere else depending on how you structure this.

00:12:902 (7) - The ticks forming the slider shape seem extremely random, fix it up?

00:15:817 (5) - Triplet isn't really necessary here since you don't use them anywhere else in this section of the song other than the vocals later on.
uhm... 00:17:017 (1)

00:19:245 (1,2) - I'm not really sure why you mapped these two notes like this, but the flow is bad with them and the spacing is too large. Nothing is emphasized here to account for the large spacing.

00:19:760 (1,2) - Uneven blanket. this is not supposed to be blanket

00:20:274 (3) - Rotate to form a more even blanket with the notes. ^

00:22:845 (2) - Awkward flow with current position, move it somewhere else so that it faces the next note more.

00:23:874 (6,1) - Uneven blanket.

00:25:245 (3,4,5) - Why is the spacing so large? The song is calm here.

00:26:102 (1) - Awkward flow with this ending facing away from the next note, adjust so that it flows better. then the slider arrow is blocked=unrankable

00:27:131 (4) - Rhythm of this slider sounds weird since you switch from the white ticks being clickable to red ticks. Change the rhythm so that white ticks are clickable. Also, I'm not sure why red ticks are needed to structure these sliders in this section, they can be structured with 2 white ticks alone.
this is to emphasize the piano downwards....

00:31:588 (4) - CTRL + G for better flow to the next note, and then adjust (5) so that the spacing is even.

00:32:102 (6) - Lessen the curve for a smoother blanket with (7). once again not a blanket

00:34:674 (4,1,2,3) - Unnecessary spacing again here, you drastically decrease the spacing at 00:36:045 (5,1,2) even though the song is emphasized nearly identical to this section. emphasizes the tooeh

00:35:188 (3,4) - Uneven blanket, lessen the curve on (3). it. is. not. supposed. to. blanket.

There are many other issues similar to these, mainly pertaining to flow and aesthetics, so I'll just stop here on this one because this mod post will probably be huge if I point out everything.
it's flow is fine, it is passable, this is also an insane not a light insane so there must be jumps.....
Kami's Insane

hi again lol

00:05:017 (2) - This slider shape doesn't really fit in too much with the sharp curve, a simple straight slider that is slightly tilting downwards to the right would play nicely.

00:08:102 (4) - You can stack this similarly to 00:07:931 (3) for consistency.

00:09:474 (4) - Nothing wrong with the slider shape, but it would look cooler if you make a symmetrical one out of this.

00:10:845 (4) - Similar to the stacking suggestion two above ^^

00:11:360 (5,6,1) - Would look nicer if it was blanketed closer in my opinion.

00:12:731 (4) - If you did my previous suggestion above, I would stack this note on the triplet to form a blanket as well. I personally don't how it plays being stacked on the same note afterwards.

00:16:331 (6) - Blanket would look nicer with a slightly greater curve to it.

00:20:617 (5) - Stack looks slightly different compared to (4) and (6) in this combo.

00:22:674 (2) - I think this plays better stacked on (4)'s tail, the spacing is kind of large here.

00:23:702 (2) - Feels too far, try 264/244. Adjust it also if you want to stack it differently.

00:24:217 (4) - Kind of an awkward flow here, maybe try somewhere below the previous slider?

00:24:388 (5) - Curve this a little more to form a more even blanket with (3) in the next combo since it's uneven. It wouldn't be good to adjust the (3) since it would ruin the upcoming pattern you have.

00:28:160 (4) - Plays better stacked on (2) in the previous combo in my opinion.

00:28:845 (2) - Curve to match the pattern more? All the piano noises here are curved sliders.

00:33:302 (2) - Doesn't fit in as a kick-slider, I would suggest a triplet instead.

00:47:017 (8) - Move to 328/284 for more of an isosceles triangle appearance.

00:49:417 (2,3,4) - Make this more equilateral, if you look at the approach circle of (3) as an example, you will see that the distance is uneven.

00:51:645 (2) - Uneven triangle because of this note's position.

00:53:531 - With the stream here, have you considered using the tool for converting a slider to a stream? It creates a much neater looking stream, and I think it would work great here. If you don't know where it is, go to the top at "Compose" and click on a slider to convert it to a stream. It should be easy to do once you know how it works.

00:57:817 (7,1) - Uneven blanket.

01:04:331 (3,4) - Possible move these somewhere else? The flow to (1) in the next combo is kind of awkward and adjusting that note would ruin the jump pattern you have.

01:06:560 (2,3,4) - I think the current jump patterns you have here are a better choice than this triplet, but it's your choice.

01:11:188 (4,5) - Increase the curvature on both of these so that they are symmetrical? The reason why I suggest this is because (5) forms an uneven blanket with (2) in the next combo.

01:17:817 (3) - Maybe try a different position for this? The spacing between this note and then to the stream is really small even though the rhythm of the song uses the same emphasis still.

01:18:045 - Same suggestion with the streams that I made.

01:20:102 (1,2) - Blanket these with (1) in the previous combo?

Collab Extra

00:02:617 (4) - Would look better if slightly unstacked in my opinion.

00:09:988 (4) - I would adjust this curve slightly where it blankets (3) since it appears to be uneven.

00:13:760 (5,6,1) - Make the spacing with these more even?

00:15:645 (1,2,3) - A triplet does not sound right here at all, I would delete this and change it to a slider similar to (4) in this combo.

00:17:360 (2) - I think a more even distance between (1) and (3) would be better for this note.

00:18:388 - In this section, the NC spam isn't really necessary, even though it's for the sake of the appearance with these jumps. If you accept this suggestion, then adjust the patterns at 00:19:074 since these will look weird afterwards without the NC's.

00:21:131 - Kicksliders don't really fit in well to me with this current pattern, reverse sliders would match this section of the song more mixed in with streams.

00:23:702 (2) - Plays better stacked on (4) in the previous combo because the large spacing doesn't seem necessary.

00:33:302 (6,1) - Triplet sounds better to me than a kickslider.

00:34:845 - Rhythm is really weird here in this section of the song, I would fix it.

00:38:702 (5) - This should be on the red tick.

00:39:474 (3,5) - Slightly uneven blanket.

00:40:331 - Same thing with the NC spam.

00:47:360 (2) - I think the spacing is more appropriately stacked on the tail of (4).

00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing on these seem very random, it makes transitions into notes uncomfortable to play, such as with (3) and (4). I would try something different with this section.

00:54:388 (2) - Plays better curved the opposite way because of the flow.

00:58:760 - Why skip the mappable triplet here? The vocals allow it. it doesn't sound good

01:01:588 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This pattern would look nicer with more equilateral triangles.

01:05:017 - NC spam not necessary here. NC spam is for each new lyric.

01:07:417 (5) - Kind of awkward ending it on a slider? Try jumps still since it's still emphasized here. enough jumps.

01:07:760 - A note here would also be better.

01:09:817 (1,2) - These note aren't really needed in my opinion, I would delete them. why? it would be weird with the vocals starting out.

I think I'll just stop here, many recurring things occur throughout the rest of the map and it's hard to properly mod.

There's quite a few aesthetics throughout some of the difficulties that made it look really messy and unpolished such as blankets, inconsistent slider shapes, etc. Good luck with this, feel free to contact me if you have any questions on anything I posted or if any help is needed.

thanks for the mod, whatever is blank i fixed

Last edited by PlasticMemor 2016-05-26T23:07:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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B r o k e n 2016-05-26T05:11:32+00:00

tutuhara's mod

00:53:360 (4) - Change like this - better to feel the music . In addition to the bounce is a slider rather than a circle confused

Lami's mod

01:10:160 (2,3,4,5) - too much hard in hard diff. I personally believe 5 notes is perfectly fine for hard 6+ is no no for hard for me
use 1/4 slider plz.
01:14:445 (1,2,3) - so hard for readability to hard diff player.it's not gonna sound too good in my opinion, so i rather leave it as it is, unless a BN does see it as too hard for hard I'll change it, I rather had kept the map mapped 1/4 all the way but mods kept suggestion to fix, so I did
change to 1/3 slider. instead of. I rather not, I wanna keep it as singles
00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same above ^
00:59:360 (2) - so downbeat slider. strong vocal come from 00:59:531 - .adjusted
need click rhythm here.

Breezy's mod

00:00:560 (1) - Make symmetrical to y-axis. adjusted

00:06:045 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing the same here. I'm not sure if you did this to emphasize the (1) more, but it would really be much better to have the same spacing.I believe this is fine, emphasize these 2 stronger beats

00:09:474 (3,4) - Try to make the (4) at the same slope as (3)'s slider end, it looks a little uneven as it is. adjusted, looks pretty even to me

00:10:331 (2) - Lessen the curve on this for a smooth blanket, also rotate it a bit for better flow to (3). adjusted, but not rotating

00:12:988 (2,3,4) - I would adjust these sliders so that they are clickable on the white ticks instead of the red ones. The current rhythm sounds weird as a result since you mapped the rhythm on the white ticks previously. i rather not, these notes fits well with vocal here

00:14:102 (1) - The large white tick would be better clickable, so I suggest changing this reverse slider to something else. you're right, adjusted

00:15:988 (2,3) - Same curvature would look nicer.adjusted, looks the same to me now

00:22:160 (4) - Sounds better ending at 00:22:417 this is fin as it is

00:36:160 (1) - Incorrectly snapped note. ops, fixed

00:51:131 (4) - Bland slider shape, I would try a better shape. I suck at shaping, it'll be great if someone screenshot a nice shape for me

00:52:674 (1,4) - Uneven blanket. adjusted

01:13:674 (3,4) - Unnecessary rhythm with the (4). this is fine

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324,280,47702,2,0,L|268:212,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,156,48045,2,0,L|272:88,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,76,48388,6,0,P|400:68|440:84,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,48731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,48902,2,0,P|436:220|472:296,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,316,49417,2,0,P|352:308|316:320,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,260,49760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,204,49931,6,0,L|356:120,2,70
260,148,50445,2,0,P|220:140|184:148,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,208,50788,2,0,P|101:212|67:205,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,132,51131,2,0,B|132:60|200:52|274:67|304:60|324:68,1,245
340,92,52674,5,4,0:0:0:0:
232,168,52902,1,4,0:0:0:0:
232,168,53131,1,4,0:0:0:0:
364,168,53360,2,0,P|416:108|388:36,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,260,54045,6,0,L|340:348,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,320,54388,2,0,L|184:236,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,168,54731,2,0,P|336:188|416:164,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,108,55245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,56,55417,6,0,P|196:48|152:60,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,116,55760,2,0,L|36:188,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,56102,2,0,P|204:220|204:312,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,276,56617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,360,56788,5,2,0:0:0:0:
264,348,56960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,264,57131,2,0,P|368:256|416:280,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,188,57474,2,0,P|432:88|380:56,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,156,57988,5,0,0:0:0:0:
364,156,58160,2,0,P|340:192|276:212,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,228,58502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,180,58674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,180,58760,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,180,58845,2,0,P|144:144|180:128,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,132,59188,5,2,0:0:0:0:
340,52,59360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,52,59531,2,0,P|384:44|432:60,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,131,59874,2,0,P|322:139|278:131,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,60,60217,2,0,P|180:124|232:224,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,264,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,288,60902,6,0,P|408:340|392:380,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,348,61245,2,0,P|256:356|216:348,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,284,61588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,184,61760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,100,61931,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,44,62102,6,0,P|300:36|352:52,1,83.9999974365235,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,132,62445,2,0,P|340:140|296:128,1,83.9999974365235,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,100,62788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,62960,2,0,P|264:280|236:368,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63645,6,0,L|288:268,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,176,63988,2,0,L|292:176,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,64331,2,0,P|148:108|172:52,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,64588,2,0,P|244:40|304:60,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,72,64845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
268,196,65017,6,0,P|312:208|352:196,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,84,65360,1,6,3:0:0:0:
420,84,65531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,216,65702,2,0,P|444:260|428:308,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,348,66045,2,0,P|296:304|316:252,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,144,66388,5,6,0:0:0:0:
380,344,66731,1,4,0:0:0:0:
276,172,67074,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,352,67417,1,6,0:0:0:0:
340,224,67760,6,0,P|392:212|444:232,1,105.000004005432
392,292,68274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,68360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,68445,2,0,L|445:348,1,52.5000020027161
360,368,68788,2,0,L|304:304,1,78.7500030040742
272,296,69131,6,0,P|168:328|64:292,1,210.000008010865
160,168,70160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70502,6,0,P|248:152|336:184,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,232,71017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,148,71188,2,0,P|468:104|452:52,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,28,71531,2,0,P|320:16|284:24,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,120,71874,6,0,P|224:204|128:236,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,136,72560,2,0,L|296:256,1,167.999994873047
312,228,73245,5,2,3:0:0:0:
348,96,73474,1,4,3:0:0:0:
428,204,73702,2,0,P|436:248|428:292,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,312,73931,2,0,P|372:316|324:296,1,55.9999982910157,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,74445,5,4,3:0:0:0:
168,72,74660,1,4,3:0:0:0:
240,140,74874,1,4,3:0:0:0:
184,220,75045,2,0,P|144:228|100:220,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,248,75302,2,0,P|52:292|60:336,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,60,75988,5,4,3:0:0:0:
232,192,76245,1,4,3:0:0:0:
384,192,76417,2,0,P|396:240|376:284,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,76674,2,0,P|312:320|252:308,1,83.9999974365235
244,276,76931,2,0,P|204:264|160:276,1,83.9999974365235
68,224,77360,6,0,P|44:140|92:44,1,167.999994873047,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,104,78045,2,0,P|272:76|368:120,1,183.750007009506
256,192,78731,12,0,81474,0:0:0:0:
112,100,84217,5,4,3:0:0:0:
160,220,84445,1,4,3:0:0:0:
248,124,84674,1,4,3:0:0:0:
308,240,84902,1,4,3:0:0:0:
424,184,85131,1,4,3:0:0:0:
376,80,85331,1,0,0:0:0:0:

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-05-27T05:04:47+00:00

M4M
2diff=2diff since the drain time is almost the same XD

[Collab Extra]

00:11:531 - low the volume to 30% or 20%, 50% is too loud for this calm vocal
00:31:588 (3,4) - just a suggestion, use a slider instead of 2 note to fit the vocal more
00:33:645 (2) - change to a 1/2 slider, there is a weak sound at 00:33:817 - so you shouldnt ignore it since is the highest diff
00:34:845 - imo the 3/4 snap here didnt fit the music, there isnt any sound to support the 3/4 notes here
00:37:588 (1,2,3) - same here
00:39:731 - mute
00:58:845 (5) - move to 359 121 to have a better flow, the original is a linear flow and thats kinda bad lol
00:59:531 (1,2) - awkward spacing, make the spacing bigger
01:05:360 (1,1) - NC off, the vocal here is 4 4 not 2 2 2 2 (uh hope you understand XD
01:21:902 (8,9,10) - hmm why dont make the spacing the same?

[Kami's Insane]

00:06:045 - lower the volume to 40%
00:11:531 - lower the volume to 30% or 20%, same as Collab Extra
00:38:617 (4) - stack
01:04:331 (3,4) - the vocal sound here should be like this
01:06:560 (2,3,4) - although there was a weak drum spund to support the triplet, but ill still change to 2 notes to make this part jumpy
01:23:874 (5) - delete, no sound to support this note here

GL~

PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

PlasticMemor 2016-05-28T02:00:22+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
M4M
2diff=2diff since the drain time is almost the same XD

[Collab Extra]
00:58:845 (5) - move to 359 121 to have a better flow, the original is a linear flow and thats kinda bad lol, lol changed to what you suggested
00:59:531 (1,2) - awkward spacing, make the spacing bigger done
01:05:360 (1,1) - NC off, the vocal here is 4 4 not 2 2 2 2 (uh hope you understand XD) yes i now do
01:21:902 (8,9,10) - hmm why dont make the spacing the same? adjusted DS

GL~

thx for your mod!

Lefia

674 posts

Joined August 2014

Lefia 2016-05-28T12:13:32+00:00

From my queue

mod

[General]

recheck the timing points, there are some timing points that not attached

[Easy]

- Set OD into 2

00:00:560 - 00:08:788 Try smth like this:
you can add it from here

SPOILER

192,200,560,2,0,P|124:185|56:202,1,139.999995727539,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,314,1931,2,0,P|127:328|195:311,1,139.999995727539,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,226,3302,2,0,B|292:322|292:322|360:382,1,139.999995727539,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,282,4674,2,0,B|388:186|388:186|328:124,1,139.999995727539,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,44,6045,6,8,P|260:96|248:136,1,139.999995727539
144,80,7417,2,0,P|145:157|190:208,1,139.999995727539
276,144,8788,2,8,P|300:208|244:288,1,139.999995727539
184,340,10160,2,2,B|256:298|256:298|309:332|309:332|381:281,1,209.999993591309,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:52:674 add 2/1 slider here
00:58:160 (5) increase blanket

[Normal]

- OD > 4

00:35:531 (4,1) Bad flow
00:42:388 (2) bad flow, try smth like this

00:44:445 (1,2,3) bad flow
00:48:560 (3) Ugly shape
Try smth like this

00:55:760 (2) remove the curve
00:56:788 (1,2) bad flow, try smth like this

00:58:845 (5) ctrl + j
01:00:560 (2) remove the curve
01:03:302 (4) ^
01:06:388 (5) remove this slider, copy this slider 01:07:074 , ctrl + v , ctrl + h , ctrl + j

You can have my kudosu

Good Luck~

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-05-29T01:53:40+00:00

Hi ~ NM Request from my queue

[General]
01:21:474 - end of kiai time must be here

[Easy]
00:00:560 (1) - finish
00:01:931 (1) - remove clap for this slider
00:08:788 (3) - ^
00:19:760 (1) - remove whistle and add clap for this slider
00:30:731 (1) - finish
00:41:702 (1) - ^
00:52:674 - put spinner here

[Normal]
00:34:845 (2) - fix the DS
00:41:702 (1) - finish
01:05:017 (1) - ^
01:10:502 (1) - ^
01:13:245 (1) - ^
01:14:617 (1) - ^ and unsnapped slider
01:15:045 (2) - unsnapped circle
01:15:817 (1,2,3,4) - unsnapped
01:16:674 (3) - finish

[Hard]
00:00:645 (1) - finish
00:06:045 - 00:52:331 - add hitsound around here

[Insane]
00:54:045 (1) - finish
01:05:017 (1) - ^
01:10:502 (1) - ^
01:15:988 (1) - ^
01:18:731 (1) - ^

[Kami's Insane]
00:07:245 (1) - remove finish
00:10:674 (3) - ^

[Collab extra]
None

GL ~

Hokichi

825 posts

Joined June 2015

Hokichi 2016-05-29T07:37:02+00:00

[Asai's Easy]
00:04:674 (4,1) - Improve blanket
00:19:760 (4,5) - Same
01:14:617 (3,4) - Flow break

[Jami's Normal]
00:30:731 (1,2,3) - Flow break
00:39:988 - Put something here
01:10:160 - Same
00:43:674 - Unnecessary bookmark
00:48:217 (2,3) - DS

[B r o k e n's Hard]
00:06:045 - The volume here should be about 40%
00:14:617 (6,7) - Should blanket
00:19:074 (2,3) - Flow break
00:34:845 (1,2,3) - Same

I've done the best I could.
Good luck

PM me if you have some part that is unclear or need an example

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-05-30T05:52:10+00:00

m4m

[General]
make sure video is enabled for all diffs
drum-hitwhistle2.wav is unused. unless you can prove it is being used you should delete it
lots of unsnapped things. get you and your gder's to snap timing lines/objects

[Asaiga's Easy]
you can delete like every timing point that isn't changing kiai time or sampleset because it isn't being used
00:27:988 (1,2) - this doesn't really follow the music well since no obvious beats are used and some are missed. i would change it to something more like this http://puu.sh/p9UPp/778286ae49.jpg
00:33:131 (3) - be careful of your placement of beats like this. sections should not be harder than your kiai time in easy. here you include most of these beats yet in kiai time you ignore them (such as 00:56:445 (4) ), making this section harder than the chorus (which isn't good)
00:40:331 (3,1) - blanket
00:44:102 (1,2) - swap nc
00:46:845 (1,2) - ^
01:03:645 (4,1) - flow here is a little awkward
01:07:760 (1) - finish the spinner here 01:09:131 . recovery time for easy should be longer

[Jami's Normal]
fix all spacing errors in AIMod
00:12:217 (2,3,4,1) - hard to understand what you're following here
00:17:360 - gaps like these aren't really good because it feels like your ignoring a whole bunch of the beats
00:24:560 (5) - players will mistake this for landing on the vocal note here 00:24:388 . i suggest you follow the vocals with your mapping
00:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - density of notes suddenly spikes from your slower section beforehand with no clear change in music. you should mix in sliders here to lower the density
00:39:988 - map this gap
00:40:331 (4,5) - bad overlap, space it out
00:48:217 (2,3) - ^

[B r o k e n's H a r d]
00:20:445 (4,5) - i'd ctrl g this rhythm
00:22:502 (1,6) - playing sliders for the intense drum sound feels anticlimatic. i feel it would be much better if you did something like you did earlier 00:06:045 (1,2)
00:36:388 (2,3) - use the same slider
00:40:160 (5) - nc to indicate sv change
00:51:131 (4) - ^
00:52:674 (1,2,3) - noo don't stack these. supposed to be the most intense part
01:02:274 - should defs be a clickable beat because its an accented vocal
01:10:502 (1) - finish
01:14:445 (1,2,3,4,5) - this goes on 1/3 snap http://puu.sh/p9WmF/b57372a888.jpg
01:15:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - so does this
01:16:417 (3,4,5) - i think this is something that belongs to an insane not hard. consider making this a little simpler
01:17:131 - this is an important beat that u missed
01:25:331 (6) - 1/3 snap

[Insane]
00:04:502 (2,4) - curve these less so they look nicer
00:10:502 (8) - snap this
00:05:874 (7,8,1) - increase distance to add emphasis
00:08:617 (8,4) - these two notes were ignored before 00:03:302 (1,2,3) - you should maintain consistency and either ignore them or add them for both
00:22:502 (1) - break this into 2 notes to add emphasis to drums
00:47:017 (1,2) - swap nc
01:07:245 (5) - add a note here. you included these two beats earlier 01:03:817 (2,4) - that arent vocals so there's no need to follow vocals here
01:13:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this section is way too difficult in comparison to other sections of the map. you really should lower the ds to like 3.0x at maximum.
01:14:159 (5) - delete this. isn't part of the music

[Kami's Insane]
you have different combo colours here. this is ok but you should consider making all diffs the same for consistency
hp 7 is higher than the extra (hp 6)
this section here 00:30:731 - 00:41:531 is supposed to be a build up from this section 00:22:502 - 00:30:560 yet it gets wayyy easier. consider addressing this issue
01:04:331 (3,4) - this is actually a 1/3 snap beat (check other diffs) so this isn't following the music correctly
01:10:502 (1) - where did kiai time go?

[Collab Extra]
00:15:645 (1,2,3) - triplet should be leading into the big white tick with the note here 00:15:560
00:25:245 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - honestly this is too much single tapping
00:34:845 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the sound you are mapping to is being played in the background and when you choose to randomly map to it, it makes it very difficult for the player to realise the rhythm has changed
00:37:588 (1,2,3) - ^
00:51:302 (1) - the downbeat should not be stacked
01:04:331 (3) - should be 1/3 snap
01:11:874 (10) - nc
01:12:560 (1) - remove nc

remember to mod my map ^^
hope this helped. gl with rank !

- Frontier -

1,854 posts

Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2016-05-30T12:32:30+00:00

Hi ~ From TH Modding Group !!

[Kami's Insane]
00:01:245 (4) - IMO ctrl+g better flow lmao
00:05:874 (4,5,1) - asymmetry ds D:
00:07:245 (1) - I think it's not compatible with the song

00:10:502 (3) - ^
00:41:017 (4,6) - I think stack is better

01:18:045 (4) - maybe NC here cuz you start stream here

[Collab Extra]
Is this really collab diff? It's like the same style

00:04:502 (1) - IMO ctrl+g better flow lmao
01:07:760 (6) - Break after this note it's a bad idea D:
01:11:874 (10) - NC plz ;w; having non-stream notes with 2-digits looks weird

Good luck !!

PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

PlasticMemor 2016-05-30T17:13:52+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
Hi ~ NM Request from my queue

[Insane]
00:54:045 (1) - finish
01:05:017 (1) - ^
01:10:502 (1) - ^
01:15:988 (1) - ^
01:18:731 (1) - ^

GL ~

hitsounded them

Pentori wrote:
m4m

[General]
make sure video is enabled for all diffs done
drum-hitwhistle2.wav is unused. unless you can prove it is being used you should delete it done
lots of unsnapped things. get you and your gder's to snap timing lines/objects, checked, legit no unsnapped things except 1 timing point

[Insane]
00:04:502 (2,4) - curve these less so they look nicer done
00:10:502 (8) - snap this done
00:05:874 (7,8,1) - increase distance to add emphasis done
00:08:617 (8,4) - these two notes were ignored before 00:03:302 (1,2,3) - you should maintain consistency and either ignore them or add them for both 8 and 4 are a faster part, build up, 1, 2 and 3 were veryslow
00:22:502 (1) - break this into 2 notes to add emphasis to drums done
00:47:017 (1,2) - swap nc done
01:07:245 (5) - add a note here. you included these two beats earlier 01:03:817 (2,4) - that arent vocals so there's no need to follow vocals here extension of the previous vocal
01:13:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this section is way too difficult in comparison to other sections of the map. you really should lower the ds to like 3.0x at maximum. done
01:14:159 (5) - delete this. isn't part of the music, again emphasizing the instrumental

[Collab Extra]

01:04:331 (3) - should be 1/3 snap done
01:11:874 (10) - nc done
01:12:560 (1) - remove nc done

remember to mod my map ^^
hope this helped. gl with rank !

thanks for mod

- Frontier - wrote:
Hi ~ From TH Modding Group !!

[Collab Extra]
Is this really collab diff? It's like the same style , it is collabed with Kami-senpai
01:07:760 (6) - Break after this note it's a bad idea D: i think its fine the way it is
01:11:874 (10) - NC plz ;w; having non-stream notes with 2-digits looks weird done

Good luck !!

thx for the mod

Asaiga

848 posts

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2016-05-30T18:28:15+00:00

Lol, Applying everything in one go now

Applied mod

Pentori wrote:
[Asaiga's Easy]
you can delete like every timing point that isn't changing kiai time or sampleset because it isn't being used
00:27:988 (1,2) - this doesn't really follow the music well since no obvious beats are used and some are missed. i would change it to something more like this http://puu.sh/p9UPp/778286ae49.jpg Fixed :3
00:33:131 (3) - be careful of your placement of beats like this. sections should not be harder than your kiai time in easy. here you include most of these beats yet in kiai time you ignore them (such as 00:56:445 (4) ), making this section harder than the chorus (which isn't good) Ahhh, I have the whole thing fixed
00:40:331 (3,1) - blanket
00:44:102 (1,2) - swap nc deleted
00:46:845 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:03:645 (4,1) - flow here is a little awkward You are right, fixed
01:07:760 (1) - finish the spinner here 01:09:131 . recovery time for easy should be longer Done

Hokichi wrote:
[Asai's Easy]
00:04:674 (4,1) - Improve blanket Done
00:19:760 (4,5) - Same Done
01:14:617 (3,4) - Flow break I think it's fine, since that slider is at the end anyways.

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[Easy]
00:00:560 (1) - finish Added
00:01:931 (1) - remove clap for this slider Done
00:08:788 (3) - ^ ^
00:19:760 (1) - remove whistle and add clap for this slider ^
00:30:731 (1) - finish ^
00:41:702 (1) - ^ ^
00:52:674 - put spinner here I don't think it will work, the spinner would be to short and since easy requires more rest.

Breezy wrote:

[centre][size=150]Asaiga's Easy

00:00:560 (1,2) - Uneven blanket. Fixed

00:14:274 (4,1) - ^ ^

00:27:988 (1,2) - I guess this rhythm works, but it feels empty afterwards. As a preference I would continue mapping out the current rhythm you had previously. Fixed as Pentori mentioned

00:30:731 (1) - I won't point out every v-shape slider, but I personally think they look better symmetrical. The current ones you have throughout the map look uneven in various different shapes, which sort of makes the map look a little messy. You are right, fixed

00:40:331 (3) - Lessen the curve on this for a more smooth blanket with the next slider. Done

00:52:674 - A note here would be better, you skip a mappable beat that is emphasized. Added along with clap

00:56:788 (4,5) - Would look nicer if these were blanketed. No free spacing in Easy ._. //blame the rule//

00:58:160 (5,1) - Slightly uneven blanket if you look at the approach circle. Fixed

01:06:388 (3,4) - Would look better if (4) was at the same slope as (3). Changed the shape :<

Updated, sorry for being late

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Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2016-05-31T23:31:33+00:00

from modding queueueueue

[Asaiga's Easy]
00:00:560 (1,2) - tad bit not straight according to followpoint
00:01:931 (2,3,4) - why the overlap? xd
00:07:417 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:08:788 (3,4) - dunno bout this since its a bit hard to read for easy
00:10:160 (4,1) - ^
00:13:588 (3,4) - maybe blanket?
00:17:017 (2) - this doesnt match any rhythm imo
00:27:988 (1,2) - doesnt match the song??
00:30:731 - just maybe

img

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5286093

00:36:217 (1,2) - overlap again
00:38:960 (1,2) - make this similar?
00:41:702 (1,2) - overlapp aopngg[apgnsw
00:43:074 (2,3) - blanket?
00:43:074 (2,3) - overoveroveroverlap
00:49:931 (1,2) - similar pls
01:24:217 (2) - its just really pretty

[Jami's Normal]
00:12:217 (2) - maybe less curvy?
00:25:245 (1) - dunno if its just me or is this too long for normal?
00:34:845 (3,4,1) - wai not similar though its purdy now
00:40:331 (3,4) - dont really like the random overlap here
00:48:217 (2,3) - ^
00:56:102 (3,2) - blanket
01:13:245 (5) - repeating 3x?
01:25:588 - spinner to finish? xd
nice map

[ B r o k e n's Hard]
00:00:560 (1) - i think you can do some slider art in this beginning here
00:06:388 (3,4) - blanket pls
00:08:102 (4) - tad bit higher
00:14:960 (7) - turn it to the left so itll be blanketing 00:14:617 (6) - sliderend?
00:17:360 (2,3) - loosen it some up or make it similar?
00:17:360 (2,1) - you can overlap 1 with 2's sliderend

00:20:102 (3) - lower?
00:21:131 (1) - i dont really get the rhythm with these repeats
00:31:931 (5,1) - huuge jampu
00:33:302 (6,1) - ^
00:51:131 (4) - this is kinda ugly imo but you can keep it!
00:51:131 (4,1) - huh but why
00:56:102 (3,4) - fix blanket
01:00:902 (1,2) - ^
01:02:960 (4,1) - kinda hard to read
01:05:017 (1,2) - random jump
01:06:045 (5,2) - you can blanket these 2

01:10:160 (2) - why not separate this stream?
01:12:560 (2,1) - weird overlap again
01:13:931 (4,5) - same length?
01:14:445 (1,2,3) - ugly triangle but what do i know
01:21:817 - you can do things here

[Insane]
00:01:245 (2,3,5) - equal spacing?
00:04:502 (2) - ctrl+g for flow?
00:09:988 (6,7,8) - equal spacingg
00:15:817 (5) - triplet?
00:23:702 (6,7) - spacing again
00:23:874 (7,1) - just wanted to appreciate this blanket

00:34:674 (4,1) - random jump?
yes! nice map~
you can complain to him
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5286228

thats all for this mod since its a nm :^)
call me for a recheck/do the rest of the diff anytime!

also, im sure you know this but you dont have to listen to my mod, you do you xd hope it helped

PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

PlasticMemor 2016-06-01T00:11:26+00:00

Shiratoi wrote:
from modding queueueueue

[Insane]
00:01:245 (2,3,5) - equal spacing? done
00:04:502 (2) - ctrl+g for flow? done
00:09:988 (6,7,8) - equal spacingg done
00:15:817 (5) - triplet? done,
00:23:702 (6,7) - spacing again done
00:23:874 (7,1) - just wanted to appreciate this blanket lol thanks
00:34:674 (4,1) - random jump? it emphasizes the guitar in bg
yes! nice map~
you can complain to him
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5286228

thats all for this mod since its a nm :^)
call me for a recheck/do the rest of the diff anytime!

also, im sure you know this but you dont have to listen to my mod, you do you xd hope it helped

thx for your mod

naliem

88 posts

Joined September 2013

naliem 2016-06-01T10:25:21+00:00

Hi from queue

m4m

Collab Extra
00:03:988 (4,2) - stack?
00:09:474 (3,4) - try to do same shape, looks weird
00:16:331 (5,6) - could improve this blanket a bit
00:16:331 (5,6) - would try to blanket this
00:41:360 (1,2) - move up 1 to be like this

00:44:960 (3,2) - blanket fix
00:56:960 (3,4) - open angle of slider to get the 4 centered
01:11:017 (6,7,8) - could blanket the triple with 01:10:502 (5) - and the sliderend with 01:11:531 (9) -
01:14:617 (1,2,3,4) - I think they are not stacked
01:14:360 (5,1,2,3,4) - 5 is not in center
01:15:988 (1,2) - fix angle of slider 2
01:18:731 (1) - fix spacing, it's smaller than stream

Kami's Insane
00:01:245 (4,5,1) - blanket? or make slider not curved
00:06:388 (3,4) - blanket fix
00:07:245 (1,3) - stack with sliderend
00:11:360 (5,6,1,3) - blanket fix
00:41:017 (4,6) - stack
00:48:560 (1,4) - ^
00:51:131 (1,3) - ^
00:59:531 (1,2) - blanket fix
01:14:845 (2,5) - blanket?

Insane
00:01:245 (2) - lower the angle?
00:03:302 (1,1) - could blanket this
00:10:331 (7,8) - blanket fix
00:11:874 (4,5) - ^
00:21:131 (1,2,3,4) - would move the angle of 3 and 4 to something like this

00:23:702 (6) - move a bit left so it's not that vertical
00:32:102 (6,7) - fix angle and cntrl+g 6?
00:35:188 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:45:302 (4) - open angle
00:46:160 (7) - red point? also blanket sliderend
00:57:131 (3) - open angle
00:59:874 (2,4) - blanket fix
01:02:102 (6,1) - ^
01:02:274 (1,4) - stack with sliderend and blanket it with 01:02:959 (3) -
01:05:702 (5,6,1) - fix angle of 5 so it blankets 1 ; 01:06:045 (6) - remove red point and make the 2 sliders same shape
01:10:160 (9,1) - blue tick ¿?
01:11:874 (3) - random red point attacks again and also I would put them further away (01:11:874 (3,4) - )
01:12:902 (6) - red point
01:17:131 (6,8,1) - stack
01:17:131 (6,8,1) - same shape

Broken's Hard
00:06:388 (3,4) - cntrl+g 3 and blanket with 4
00:13:760 (4,5,6) - distance is not equal and you could try somehow blanket 00:14:617 (6) - with 00:14:960 (7) - ?
00:17:360 (2,3) - shape fix
00:18:388 (5,1,2) - distance not equal
00:19:760 (1) - move up so it's not that horizontal?
00:20:617 (5,1) - blanket fix
00:24:388 (3,4) - looks weird, might be the shape
00:26:274 (5) - ^
00:28:331 (3,5) - blanket sliderend
00:29:360 (1,2) - not a fan of these 2 being stacked
00:29:874 (4,5) - insert shape thing here
00:30:731 (1) - open angle so it "blankets" 2
00:33:474 (1,3) - insert shape thing here
00:36:388 (2,3) - angle
00:37:074 (4,1,4,5,1,3,4) - shapes
00:45:474 (5,1) - ^
00:52:674 (1,4) - fix blanket
00:59:360 (2,3,4) - blanket
00:59:874 (4) - move angle to blanket with 01:00:217 (5) -
01:00:902 (1,2) - blanket
01:05:702 (4,5,2) - move 2 a bit right so it's between 5 and 4
01:08:788 (5) - I'd keep it ending on red tick but it's also right in blue, your choice
01:17:360 (1,2) - blanket?
01:24:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - take a look into angles here

Nice map and song! GL

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-06-02T01:44:18+00:00

sorry, I'm getting quite a bit lazy over summer vacation, not even doing self mod like I always do

-NanoRIPE-'s Mod

00:00:645 (1) - finish k
00:06:045 - 00:52:331 - add hitsound around here I added hit sounds at one point, but it was awful, so I removed it all haha

Hokichi's Mod

00:06:045 - The volume here should be about 40% sure, seems fine
00:14:617 (6,7) - Should blanket I rather not
00:19:074 (2,3) - Flow break 2 sliders into a single note in between both the slider is just something I like to do, so I rather have it like this
00:34:845 (1,2,3) - Same did an adjustment

Pentori's Mod

00:20:445 (4,5) - i'd ctrl g this rhythm adjusted
00:22:502 (1,6) - playing sliders for the intense drum sound feels anticlimatic. i feel it would be much better if you did something like you did earlier 00:06:045 (1,2) adjusted
00:36:388 (2,3) - use the same slider adjusted
00:40:160 (5) - nc to indicate sv change k
00:51:131 (4) - ^k
00:52:674 (1,2,3) - noo don't stack these. supposed to be the most intense part I wonder why did I stack them haha, did some adjustments
01:02:274 - should defs be a clickable beat because its an accented vocaldid quite some adjustments, got rid of the 3 single notes into sliders
01:10:502 (1) - finish k
01:14:445 (1,2,3,4,5) - this goes on 1/3 snap http://puu.sh/p9WmF/b57372a888.jpg it's already on 1/3 snap
01:15:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - so does this k, thought I fixed all of them already I guess I didnt haha
01:16:417 (3,4,5) - i think this is something that belongs to an insane not hard. consider making this a little simplerI think it's fine, I might just make it all single notes instead
01:17:131 - this is an important beat that u missedslider's end is one it, not sure if I should make it clickable
01:25:331 (6) - 1/3 snaphow did I not snap this on 1/3 when I did it for the others e.e, I must had been in a rush

Shiratoi's Mod

00:00:560 (1) - i think you can do some slider art in this beginning here naw I'm awful at making nice looking extened sliders so this is fine for me xD
00:06:388 (3,4) - blanket pls adjusted
00:08:102 (4) - tad bit higherk
00:14:960 (7) - turn it to the left so itll be blanketing 00:14:617 (6) - sliderend? naw I dont want this to blanket
00:17:360 (2,3) - loosen it some up or make it similar? adjusted
00:17:360 (2,1) - you can overlap 1 with 2's sliderend confused here, note 2 is so far away from note 1
00:20:102 (3) - lower? just a little bit
00:21:131 (1) - i dont really get the rhythm with these repeatswell it is for the music, but I do know it's ugly lmao xD
00:31:931 (5,1) - huuge jampu it's fine
00:33:302 (6,1) - ^ ^
00:51:131 (4) - this is kinda ugly imo but you can keep it! yah i know it is, I suck at slider art lmao
00:51:131 (4,1) - huh but why fixed on a different mod
00:56:102 (3,4) - fix blanket adjusted
01:00:902 (1,2) - ^k
01:02:960 (4,1) - kinda hard to readfixed in a different mod
01:05:017 (1,2) - random jump no it's not a random jump
01:06:045 (5,2) - you can blanket these 2 naw it's 1.2 DS from note 1 to 2 to 3, but I did something else tho
01:10:160 (2) - why not separate this stream? I don't separate streams for hard
01:12:560 (2,1) - weird overlap again it's an anti-jump, but this is the only area I did it,, I distanced it
01:13:931 (4,5) - same length?
01:14:445 (1,2,3) - ugly triangle but what do i know adjusted
01:21:817 - you can do things here

naliem's mod

00:06:388 (3,4) - cntrl+g 3 and blanket with 4 adjusted
00:13:760 (4,5,6) - distance is not equal and you could try somehow blanket 00:14:617 (6) - with 00:14:960 (7) - ?ds the same, not blanketing, but everyone is suggesting it, maybe I will
00:17:360 (2,3) - shape fix did it in a different mod
00:18:388 (5,1,2) - distance not equal it is, maybe I did it on a different mod
00:19:760 (1) - move up so it's not that horizontal? I like horizontal
00:20:617 (5,1) - blanket fix I changed this area in a different mod
00:24:388 (3,4) - looks weird, might be the shape adjusted
00:26:274 (5) - ^ adjusted
00:28:331 (3,5) - blanket sliderend I rahter not
00:29:360 (1,2) - not a fan of these 2 being stacked its fine
00:29:874 (4,5) - insert shape thing here
00:30:731 (1) - open angle so it "blankets" 2
00:33:474 (1,3) - insert shape thing here
00:36:388 (2,3) - angle adjusted
00:37:074 (4,1,4,5,1,3,4) - shapesmake shapes? ughh idk, maybe I'm just too lazy, fix quite a couple of sliders
00:45:474 (5,1) - ^
00:52:674 (1,4) - fix blanket changed this area in a different mod
00:59:360 (2,3,4) - blanket this is fine
00:59:874 (4) - move angle to blanket with 01:00:217 (5) - I did an adjustment in a different mod
01:00:902 (1,2) - blanket did in a different mod
01:05:702 (4,5,2) - move 2 a bit right so it's between 5 and 4 changed this area in a different mod
01:08:788 (5) - I'd keep it ending on red tick but it's also right in blue, your choice this is fine
01:17:360 (1,2) - blanket? might as well
01:24:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - take a look into angles hereadjusted in a different mod

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PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

PlasticMemor 2016-06-02T02:04:15+00:00

naliem wrote:
Hi from queue

[box=m4m]Collab Extra
00:56:960 (3,4) - open angle of slider to get the 4 centered
01:11:017 (6,7,8) - could blanket the triple with 01:10:502 (5) - and the sliderend with 01:11:531 (9) -
01:14:617 (1,2,3,4) - I think they are not stacked
01:14:360 (5,1,2,3,4) - 5 is not in center
01:15:988 (1,2) - fix angle of slider 2
01:18:731 (1) - fix spacing, it's smaller than stream

Insane
00:01:245 (2) - lower the angle?
00:03:302 (1,1) - could blanket this
00:10:331 (7,8) - blanket fix
00:11:874 (4,5) - ^
00:21:131 (1,2,3,4) - would move the angle of 3 and 4 to something like this i fixed the entire section into a pattern
00:23:702 (6) - move a bit left so it's not that vertical
00:32:102 (6,7) - fix angle and cntrl+g 6? for flow
00:35:188 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:45:302 (4) - open angle
00:46:160 (7) - red point? also blanket sliderend
00:57:131 (3) - open angle it is a sliderjump
00:59:874 (2,4) - blanket fix
01:02:102 (6,1) - ^
01:02:274 (1,4) - stack with sliderend and blanket it with 01:02:959 (3) -
01:05:702 (5,6,1) - fix angle of 5 so it blankets 1 ; 01:06:045 (6) - remove red point and make the 2 sliders same shape its not supposed to blanket
01:10:160 (9,1) - blue tick ¿?
01:11:874 (3) - random red point attacks again and also I would put them further away (01:11:874 (3,4) - )
01:12:902 (6) - red point
01:17:131 (6,8,1) - stack
01:17:131 (6,8,1) - same shape
Nice map and song! GL

what i didn't write a comment on is fixed
thx for mod

_Stan

Beatmap Nominator

767 posts

Joined June 2012

_Stan 2016-06-02T03:32:31+00:00

hey~ for M4M

[Easy]
00:43:074 (2,3) - blanket?

EZ is great that I can find any problem~

[Jami's Normal]
00:21:817 (7,1,2) - why different ds?
00:34:502 (2,3,4) - ds 1.2?
00:59:531 (1,2) - ds

great, climax has diferent ds I think it's ok but it's not necessary for NM to adjust DS in a part. Only personal suggestion

[B r o k e n's Hard]
perfect

[Insane]
01:11:874 (3,4) - 01:12:560 (5,6) - same rhythm, different ds

Honestly it's great map~ I cannot mod more (sorry), I'll shoot you a star cuz I think this map is great

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-06-03T09:05:49+00:00

Self Mod, Update,thx

osu file format v14

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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:B r o k e n's Hard
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
BeatmapID:962746
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Seijiro

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Seijiro 2016-06-04T09:07:36+00:00

General

I don't know what's up with the ping-pong sounds but I highly suggest changing them. They look like they've been taken from a skin and placed here. For now I checked the Extra only, but the hitsounding is almost non-existant since you just switch from a sampleset to another, without using any additions.
Edit: it was just a problem on the Extra, but the general hitsounding may be improved everywhere.

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Collab Extra

00:00:560 - Unrankable: do not place 2 timing points at the same timing with different volumes

00:10:417 (1) - I would silence the spinner's end since it's a bit too loud and breaks the rhythm for the next part

00:17:360 (2) - since this object is stacked under the previous slider's tail you create an awkward jump on a red tick on the next slider. Why don't you try stacking this on top of 00:17:531 (3) - instead?

00:24:388 (3) - just personal preference here: maybe a Ctrl + G to emphasize even more the vocals?

00:30:388 (4,1) - nazi stuff, but they're a bit too close to each other imo. Can you separate them more?

00:36:217 (1,2,3) - This spacing is a bit awkward too. Visually, there is the same spacing between these 3 objects, yet they have a different snap on the time line.
00:38:960 (1,2,3) - same

00:38:102 (3,4,5) - Since this section is using a lot those 3/4 beats I would rather avoid placing little pieces of 1/2 rhythms

00:41:531 (2,2) - I don't really like overlaps :/

00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - There isn't much telling me this is going to be a 1/3 slider jump section tho. They just appear and go at their own pace.
I would give some visual sign to recognize the 1/3 parts, like a different combo color just for them or a similar pattern used over and over, and so on

01:01:245 (2,2) - again, overlap :/

01:03:131 (4) - this feels too weak, since you have an awfully low spacing between 01:02:960 (3,4) - after having a lot of spacing before.

01:04:331 (3,4) - Trust me, no one can read this at first sight. You literally have a 1/6 jump on a repeat slider the opposite way of the slider's direction: it's an overkill lol

01:05:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Well, maybe I'm just dumb, but I can't really figure out the idea behind these random jumps tbh. Just because the song goes full burst it doesn't mean you can place objects here and there xD

01:13:245 (1,2,3,4) - As I mentioned before, it would be cool to put a visual warning for these 1/3 sections

01:17:360 (1,2,3) - I find this spacing way too low compared to the other patterns around

01:22:074 (9,10) - another really big jump, this time it is the first seeing another jump after the circle . This jump feels strange because you made the player play 01:19:417 (3,4,5) - this pattern already twice, so once he arrives at this one he will think it is the same and it will miss on the slider

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Kami's Insane

00:00:560 - Unrankable: 2 timing sections at the same timing have different volumes

Your custom drum finish should be used as a finish, and not as a whistle here: 00:06:731 (4,1,4) - there are too many
Remove finish from 00:07:245 (1) -
00:10:502 (3) - same

00:20:102 (3,6) - again, those finishers are too much. Try with a soft whistle instead (the default one)
00:36:731 (3) - remove finish
00:39:474 (3) - same
00:47:702 (3) - same
00:50:102 (2) - same (from repeat only)

00:37:760 (2) - it feels a bit forced as it is now. Ctrl + G?

01:07:760 (1) - Can you maybe improve this shape a little? x) It's a bit sloppy imo

Really nice diff *^*

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Insane

00:00:560 - Unrankable: 2 timing points at the same timing with different volumes and samplesets aren't allowed

00:44:274 (1) - imo this slider should be in the opposite direction, otherwise feels forced on the jump. Like this

01:06:902 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing here. Make sure that visually, you can tell what snaps the notes are following

01:11:874 (3,4) - Intentional spacing here? Imo it is too short

01:20:445 (2) - How did you creater this slider to make it have so many waypoints on it? o.O
Once you fix that , try doing a Ctrl + G on it for flow reasons

01:22:845 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - that ping-pong sound is terrible, really

Reduce OD to 7, since this is an Insane and it has just 4 stars and a half (also the Extra is already OD8, so there's no need for other diffs like that)

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B r o k e n's Hard

00:30:731 - 00:41:702 - in this section I would reduce note density, since it feels too heavy for a Hard diff

01:13:702 (3) - slider end not snapped
01:15:074 (4) - slider end not snapped

The spacing between 01:22:845 (2,3,4) - and 01:24:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is misleading. In particular, the first section feels too slow (aka, spacing is too short)

Generally, the map is solid, but feels a bit too cramped in the first half. See if you can remove some beats and increase spacing there.

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Jami's Normal

Open AIMod and check all the spacings. There are 5 places where you break DS, please fix them

00:57:474 (2,5) - overlap kinda ugly

01:13:245 (5) - It's a bit hard to read even number of repeats for beginners, be careful

Apart from the fact you didn't map the first 10 seconds of the song, I would like to point out that the diff itself is rhythmically correct, but the aethetical side of it is lacking quality. What I mean is mostly "tidiness", "meaning for patterns" and "basic flow".
00:21:131 (6,7,1) - "tidiness". This pattern isn't really tidy imo as well as many other patterns. The reason I say this is because there are curved sliders which are usually meant for blanketing, yet they're used loosely just to move the cursor from a point to another

00:38:960 (1,2,3,4) - "meaning of patterns". What is this pattern supposed to tell the player? How is it good to use it for this part of the song? Are there particular reason as to why the objects are placed as they are? And so on... Try to ask you these questions when placing objects

00:42:388 (2,3) - "basic flow". The slider is curved towards the right side of the screen, but the next circle is on the left side: why? In case you have particular reasons to break a natural flow like this, it's fine, but on Normal/Easy diffs we try to make it so beginners catch the flow and the rhythm at first sight with not many "tricks" or such.

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Asaiga's Easy

00:01:931 (2,3) - One of the most basic rules of Easy diffs is to avoid overlaps. Please, try to change this pattern with something else
00:03:302 (3,4) - same

00:08:788 (3,4) - another basic rule of making Easy diffs: no stacks, no matter what is the situation. They are hard to read because the player doesn't see the starting point of it
00:10:160 (4,1) - same

00:17:017 (2,3) - 2 is pointing upwards of the screen, while 3 is sitting below it. This is aclled forced flow, and unless there is a particular trick into the music, this feels off.

00:36:217 (1,2) - overlap

00:38:960 (1,2) - I assume these sliders are following the same sound, right? If that's the case, you should use the same slider shape for similar sounds, since music is almost a matter of repetition. The same should happen in the map.
The map as to follow the song, and if the song is like that you should follow it.

00:41:702 (1,2) - overlap

00:45:817 (4,5) - same. You also forgot a New Combo on 00:44:445 (3,5) - both of them

01:14:274 (2) - I wouldn't use this circle, since this part is playing with 1/3 beats and it might become confusing

01:15:988 (4) - You forgot a NC here

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PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

PlasticMemor 2016-06-04T12:34:30+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
General

I don't know what's up with the ping-pong sounds but I highly suggest changing them. They look like they've been taken from a skin and placed here. For now I checked the Extra only, but the hitsounding is almost non-existant since you just switch from a sampleset to another, without using any additions.
Edit: it was just a problem on the Extra, but the general hitsounding may be improved everywhere.

Collab Extra

00:00:560 - Unrankable: do not place 2 timing points at the same timing with different volumes

00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - There isn't much telling me this is going to be a 1/3 slider jump section tho. They just appear and go at their own pace.
I would give some visual sign to recognize the 1/3 parts, like a different combo color just for them or a similar pattern used over and over, and so on
adjusted the jump patterns and added new combo color

01:01:245 (2,2) - again, overlap :/ done

01:03:131 (4) - this feels too weak, since you have an awfully low spacing between 01:02:960 (3,4) - after having a lot of spacing before. changed slider intirely

01:04:331 (3,4) - Trust me, no one can read this at first sight. You literally have a 1/6 jump on a repeat slider the opposite way of the slider's direction: it's an overkill lol done

01:05:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Well, maybe I'm just dumb, but I can't really figure out the idea behind these random jumps tbh. Just because the song goes full burst it doesn't mean you can place objects here and there xD it is suppose to be emphasize on the vocal

01:13:245 (1,2,3,4) - As I mentioned before, it would be cool to put a visual warning for these 1/3 sections done

01:17:360 (1,2,3) - I find this spacing way too low compared to the other patterns around done

01:22:074 (9,10) - another really big jump, this time it is the first seeing another jump after the circle . This jump feels strange because you made the player play 01:19:417 (3,4,5) - this pattern already twice, so once he arrives at this one he will think it is the same and it will miss on the slider changed pattern

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Insane

00:00:560 - Unrankable: 2 timing points at the same timing with different volumes and samplesets aren't allowed

00:44:274 (1) - imo this slider should be in the opposite direction, otherwise feels forced on the jump. Like this

01:06:902 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing here. Make sure that visually, you can tell what snaps the notes are following

01:11:874 (3,4) - Intentional spacing here? Imo it is too short

01:20:445 (2) - How did you creater this slider to make it have so many waypoints on it? o.O
Once you fix that , try doing a Ctrl + G on it for flow reasons

01:22:845 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - that ping-pong sound is terrible, really

Reduce OD to 7, since this is an Insane and it has just 4 stars and a half (also the Extra is already OD8, so there's no need for other diffs like that)
fixed all above^

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Battle

2,862 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2016-06-04T21:11:48+00:00

m4m from q lol

[General]
Green lines unsnapped, snap them

[Easy]
00:01:931 (2,3,4) - You should avoid overlaps in easy, they look visually unappealing and can lead to reading complications for beginners
00:10:160 (4) - I don't really see a reason to stack here due to the fact that the pitch in the music got higher, so you would expect some emphasis
00:10:160 (4,1) - Players may not expect how fast 1 comes since all this time there's been a beat that was skipped
01:24:217 (2) - You'd want to make the turns go along with the white ticks

Overall the diff is pretty meh, like, a lot of the things could be improved visually, and overall it's just bland, because of the fact that it just feels like you're mindlessly clicking in a pretty set rhythm up until the kiai. The increased density of the kiai may catch people off-guard, so that's another thing to watch out for

[Normal]
Start is really inconsistent, there's no rhythm structure that you vary from really, it's just a bunch of random variation tbh
00:14:960 (2,3) - ds
00:17:702 (6,1) - Why is there a gap before and after .-.
00:21:131 (6,7) - There is a pretty prominent string instrument playing, but you continue to go with 1/2 slider which leaves it unemphasized and rather boring
00:23:188 (2,3) - ds
00:23:874 (3,4) - ds
00:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - Do you really feel like making them all single taps with no clear reason, without anything really increasing intensity in the song makes sense?
00:32:102 (3,4,1) - An extremely curved into a lightly curved slider doesn't look good visually lol
00:33:474 (1,2,3) - ds
00:34:845 (3,4) - ds
00:34:502 (2,3,4,1) - having the directional change on 3 makes the direction change w/ 1 less emphasized, it would be better if you just made it flow up until 1 and broke the flow there since it was the downbeat
00:36:217 (1) - Need to mention how a really urved slider like this plus the adjacent sliders to this make it look really visually unappealing
00:40:331 (3,4) - Should avoid overlaps tbh
00:57:474 (2,5) - these are on the screen at the same time so it looks REALLY bad
01:13:245 (5) - inconsistent w/ 01:14:617 (1,2,3) - shouldn't this have an nc as well? plus two repeats on a normal is very unexpected
01:24:217 (4) - nc maybe

needs a lot of work

[Hard]
00:06:217 (2,3,4) - shift this part of the pattern down a bit, overlaps w/ slider body :/\
00:40:160 (1) - maybe try sv of like .6, the change of .75 to .5 may be too drastic, slider shape could improve tbh
00:52:674 (1,2,3) - Make the 1/3 equal distance or visually similar, it might be hard to read if it isn't
01:10:160 (2,3,4) - aren't the vocals 1/3?

[K. Insane]
The hitsound you use for D:C1 finish really doesn't fit
00:10:502 (3,4) - Emphasizing 3 really takes away from 4, might as well try to prioritize 4's emphasis since the intensity is rising
00:23:531 (1,2) - Strong drums on both beats, so why is 1 not emphasized?
00:31:931 (1) - Why not make the fourth node red as well for a nicer shape?
01:04:331 (3,4) - rhythm would be better if you had 3 be a 1/2 slider, place 4 on 01:04:588 - and add a note on 01:04:845 -

[Insane]
00:11:874 (4,5) - lol u could blanket this if u really wanted to, it kinda just looks awkward w/ how curved 4 is
00:32:102 (6) - Since the claps really fit, you might want to try to add emphasis to these notes, mayb make them single taps and jumps or sth idk lol
00:33:474 (1) - head and repeat should have clap to keep consistency w/ ^
00:34:845 (1,2) - same, im not too picky on hitsounds so you kinda need to fix it yourself lol cuz I'm not pointing any more out zz
01:13:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - all these patterns are extremely, boring

y a

Asaiga

848 posts

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2016-06-06T16:57:44+00:00

Shiratoi wrote:
[Asaiga's Easy]
00:00:560 (1,2) - tad bit not straight according to followpoint
00:01:931 (2,3,4) - why the overlap? xd
00:07:417 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:08:788 (3,4) - dunno bout this since its a bit hard to read for easy
00:10:160 (4,1) - ^
00:13:588 (3,4) - maybe blanket?
00:17:017 (2) - this doesnt match any rhythm imo Fixed to a slider
00:27:988 (1,2) - doesnt match the song??
00:30:731 - just maybe
img
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5286093
00:36:217 (1,2) - overlap again
00:38:960 (1,2) - make this similar?
00:41:702 (1,2) - overlapp aopngg[apgnsw Isn't this allowed :s
00:43:074 (2,3) - blanket? It wasn't meant to be a blanket, due to no space.
00:43:074 (2,3) - overoveroveroverlap
00:49:931 (1,2) - similar pls I will take note
01:24:217 (2) - its just really pretty Thanks

MrSergio wrote:
Asaiga's Easy

00:01:931 (2,3) - One of the most basic rules of Easy diffs is to avoid overlaps. Please, try to change this pattern with something else Okay I got it
00:03:302 (3,4) - same

00:08:788 (3,4) - another basic rule of making Easy diffs: no stacks, no matter what is the situation. They are hard to read because the player doesn't see the starting point of it Haaaiii
00:10:160 (4,1) - same

00:17:017 (2,3) - 2 is pointing upwards of the screen, while 3 is sitting below it. This is aclled forced flow, and unless there is a particular trick into the music, this feels off. I will watch out

00:36:217 (1,2) - overlap I see

00:38:960 (1,2) - I assume these sliders are following the same sound, right? If that's the case, you should use the same slider shape for similar sounds, since music is almost a matter of repetition. The same should happen in the map.
The map as to follow the song, and if the song is like that you should follow it. Learned

00:41:702 (1,2) - overlap I thought it was allowed since it's easy to see. I should not map Easy lol

00:45:817 (4,5) - same. You also forgot a New Combo on 00:44:445 (3,5) - both of them Fixed

01:14:274 (2) - I wouldn't use this circle, since this part is playing with 1/3 beats and it might become confusing Deleted

01:15:988 (4) - You forgot a NC here

Contact me in PM if any of you need more clarification about my mod~

Battle wrote:
[img]
https://i.ppy.sh/508fc745b70140a8d27afaca0f34294f68947ee5/687474703a2f2f7075752e73682f70673531702f666238306533666265652e676966[/img]
[Easy]
00:01:931 (2,3,4) - You should avoid overlaps in easy, they look visually unappealing and can lead to reading complications for beginners To be honest, I did not know these were overlapped. I understand it now
00:10:160 (4) - I don't really see a reason to stack here due to the fact that the pitch in the music got higher, so you would expect some emphasis Got it
00:10:160 (4,1) - Players may not expect how fast 1 comes since all this time there's been a beat that was skipped
01:24:217 (2) - You'd want to make the turns go along with the white ticks Attempted to change.

Overall the diff is pretty meh, like, a lot of the things could be improved visually, and overall it's just bland, because of the fact that it just feels like you're mindlessly clicking in a pretty set rhythm up until the kiai. The increased density of the kiai may catch people off-guard, so that's another thing to watch out for Okay

I will post my remap soon this week, since a few lines of mods could change a lot of stuffs in Easy and I'm busy with school works now ;(
I took down notes that I could use to improve on my next version. If you ask people for mods, exclude my diffs until I update it. Thanks :3

PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

PlasticMemor 2016-06-08T02:00:12+00:00

Battle wrote:

m4m from q lol

[General]
Green lines unsnapped, snap them done on my diffs lol

[Insane]
00:11:874 (4,5) - lol u could blanket this if u really wanted to, it kinda just looks awkward w/ how curved 4 is
00:32:102 (6) - Since the claps really fit, you might want to try to add emphasis to these notes, mayb make them single taps and jumps or sth idk lol
00:33:474 (1) - head and repeat should have clap to keep consistency w/ ^
00:34:845 (1,2) - same, im not too picky on hitsounds so you kinda need to fix it yourself lol cuz I'm not pointing any more out zz
01:13:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - all these patterns are extremely, boring

^ fixed all, but pattern i will keep same because it is only insane
y a

thank you for mod i will mod your map by either thursday or friday
edit:mod please deny kudos because i made mistakeeee

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-06-08T05:44:27+00:00

MrSergio's Mod

00:30:731 - 00:41:702 - in this section I would reduce note density, since it feels too heavy for a Hard diff did some adjustments, removed most double stack single note, changed 5 sliders into 1/1 sliders

01:13:702 (3) - slider end not snapped snapped on 1/6, not sure if I should keep it like this tho, seems a bit hard for hard?
01:15:074 (4) - slider end not snapped ^

The spacing between 01:22:845 (2,3,4) - and 01:24:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is misleading. In particular, the first section feels too slow (aka, spacing is too short)k, same distance

Generally, the map is solid, but feels a bit too cramped in the first half. See if you can remove some beats and increase spacing there.looked thourgh the first half a couple times, not even sure what to remove or to make into 1/1 sliders, I pretty much like it the way it is

Battle's mod

00:06:217 (2,3,4) - shift this part of the pattern down a bit, overlaps w/ slider body :/\ this area has been adjusted in a different mod, or I have no idea what you ment
00:40:160 (1) - maybe try sv of like .6, the change of .75 to .5 may be too drastic, slider shape could improve tbh this is fine, I SUCK AT SLIDER SHAPE OK, T.T
00:52:674 (1,2,3) - Make the 1/3 equal distance or visually similar, it might be hard to read if it isn't what the heck, was pretty sure I did same DS it, adjusted
01:10:160 (2,3,4) - aren't the vocals 1/3? pretty sure it is, but I wasn't sure to map it on 1/3 because it seems a bit hard to read so I left it on 1/4 and just did a 4note stream into slider for easy read

Update

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Version:B r o k e n's Hard
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191,145,52674,5,4,0:0:0:0:
280,252,52902,1,4,0:0:0:0:
384,288,53131,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,168,53360,2,0,P|340:88|376:32,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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328,104,55245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,52,55417,6,0,P|192:44|148:56,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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136,180,56102,2,0,P|196:216|204:308,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,276,56617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,368,56788,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,360,56960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,276,57131,2,0,P|360:268|408:292,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,192,57474,2,0,P|432:100|364:64,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,57988,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,58160,2,0,P|328:200|264:220,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,58502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58760,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58845,2,0,P|140:132|176:116,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,132,59188,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,48,59360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,52,59531,2,0,P|384:44|432:60,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,131,59874,2,0,P|318:139|274:131,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,60217,2,0,P|180:120|232:220,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,260,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,296,60902,6,0,P|408:340|392:388,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,344,61245,2,0,P|260:352|220:344,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,61588,2,0,L|64:208,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,136,61931,2,0,L|188:216,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,100,62274,6,0,L|148:32,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,8,62617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,100,62788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,62960,2,0,P|276:280|212:360,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,268,63560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63645,6,0,L|288:268,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,176,63988,2,0,L|292:176,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,64331,2,0,P|148:108|172:52,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,64588,2,0,P|244:40|304:60,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,72,64845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
268,196,65017,6,0,P|312:208|352:196,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,84,65360,1,6,3:0:0:0:
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432,216,65702,2,0,P|444:260|428:308,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,348,66045,2,0,P|296:304|316:252,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,148,66388,5,6,0:0:0:0:
312,348,66731,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,160,67074,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,352,67417,1,6,0:0:0:0:
340,224,67760,6,0,P|392:212|444:232,1,105.000004005432
392,292,68274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,68360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,68445,2,0,L|445:348,1,52.5000020027161
360,368,68788,2,0,L|304:304,1,78.7500030040742
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160,168,70245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70502,6,0,P|248:152|336:184,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,232,71017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,148,71188,2,0,P|468:104|452:52,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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260,120,71874,6,0,P|224:204|128:236,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,136,72560,2,0,L|296:256,1,167.999994873047
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300,160,73474,1,4,3:0:0:0:
428,204,73702,2,0,P|436:248|428:292,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,312,73931,2,0,P|376:316|336:308,1,55.9999982910157,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,74445,5,4,3:0:0:0:
192,88,74617,1,4,3:0:0:0:
296,176,74845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
168,224,75074,2,0,P|128:232|84:224,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,180,76217,1,4,3:0:0:0:
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Kisses wrote:

Vanillas wrote:

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Asaiga's Easy

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