I MY ME MINE - Troublemaker [Osu|CatchTheBeat|Taiko|OsuMania · forum

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-04-06T22:34:27+00:00

Don't worry ;w; I learned a lesson now but don't do drama pls

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

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Underforest 2016-04-06T23:14:43+00:00

Updated map
*Added Mk's Hard
*Only fixed hitsounds on Marianna's diff

This map is now ready

~~@Marianna If you notice so many updates for your diff is because I was changing combos and hitsounds for the overall mapset, mapping is still there~~ Changed name diff as requested

SPOILER

16:17 *Marianna is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/945175 I MY ME MINE - Troublemaker [Marianna's EX]]
16:17 Marianna: lol
16:17 Marianna: xD
16:17 Underforest: ?
16:18 Underforest: Well, you named it as EX, right XD
16:18 Marianna: Change to Marianna's Mine
16:18 Marianna: xD
16:18 Underforest: Sure, sure xD
16:18 Marianna: HP 77 pls
16:18 Marianna: 7*
16:19 Underforest: It's already 7

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-04-08T02:54:47+00:00

Fixed 1ms problem from second 23 to 30
Renamed from EX to Mine
Disabled Widescreen Support
Updated tags
Added Insane for beginners

OK, I'll stop posting change per change

Seto Kousuke

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Seto Kousuke 2016-04-08T13:17:31+00:00

Testplayed marianna's Mine

Testplay results + suggestion

As you can see, SS HDHR with 79.13 UR so my timming is right. The problem is that my first play was 90%, I had to use -20 offset to play it properly.

Idk if you're using the already ranked mapset's timing, but in any case, try listening to it with -20 offset and see if you agree with it.

In any case, no kds c: <3

Marianna

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Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-08T13:19:38+00:00

Seto Kousuke wrote:
Testplayed marianna's Mine

Testplay results + suggestion

As you can see, SS HDHR with 79.13 UR so my timming is right. The problem is that my first play was 90%, I had to use -20 offset to play it properly.

Idk if you're using the already ranked mapset's timing, but in any case, try listening to it with -20 offset and see if you agree with it.

In any case, no kds c: <3

Sankyu for the test play /o/

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-04-08T13:24:10+00:00

Yes, the timing is extracted from ranked mapset
Also, -20 offset hears so fast, so no :c Maybe is your osu! version
btw, thanks for test

-Tochi

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-Tochi 2016-04-08T14:52:41+00:00

Marianna's Mine

00:07:106 (2,3) - Spacing here is a bit low, maybe move the second slider more down?
00:24:204 (1) - You are skipping a beat here 00:24:365 - while there's nothing at 00:24:446 -
00:24:768 (4,2,4,2) - Uh, these are actually overmapped... There's no strong beat to support these. It plays awkward if u map them to the guitar, so i suggest to keep them out.

Light Insane

00:01:300 (3) - Ctrl + G? It will make a better flow from the previous and to the next slider.
00:10:655 - Why did you skip a strong beat here? You could make the pattern like: http://puu.sh/oaK2f/5c5df7d124.jpg It also removes the awkward spacing between the stream and the previous note.
00:10:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream looks a bit awkward (handmade?) You could improve it like: http://puu.sh/oaJXV/0139803062.jpg
00:16:784 (5,1) - Maybe stack these properly?
00:20:171 (4,5) - Why is the spacing so low here? D:
00:23:559 (1,3) - Please blanket the second slider properly on the first.

Mk's Hard

00:07:429 (3,1) - The spacing here is a bit way too big for a Hard Diff tbh. Ctrl+G and move the tail more up like: http://puu.sh/oaKeF/3c1186b063.jpg And then Ctrl+G again.
00:20:977 (1,2) - Please blanket properly.

Normal

Isn't the AR a bit too high?

Feedback

Nice map, good luck!

Marianna

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Marianna 2016-04-08T19:06:20+00:00

Most fixed

Thanks Tochi

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Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-08T22:31:51+00:00

-Tochi wrote:

Light Insane
00:01:300 (3) - Ctrl + G? It will make a better flow from the previous and to the next slider. oki
00:10:655 - Why did you skip a strong beat here? You could make the pattern like: http://puu.sh/oaK2f/5c5df7d124.jpg It also removes the awkward spacing between the stream and the previous note. whoops
00:10:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream looks a bit awkward (handmade?) You could improve it like: http://puu.sh/oaJXV/0139803062.jpg I converted the slider to stream but anyway, fixed
00:16:784 (5,1) - Maybe stack these properly? no, Insane beginners can get confused
00:20:171 (4,5) - Why is the spacing so low here? D: Intentional, also typical for an Insane
00:23:559 (1,3) - Please blanket the second slider properly on the first. intentional too

Normal
Isn't the AR a bit too high? 5 is the default AR for a ranked normal, so yup

Feedback

Nice map, good luck! ty!

Mekki

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Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-04-08T22:44:16+00:00

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338,49,7106,2,0,L|243:78,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,63,7429,2,0,B|180:108|180:108|166:211,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,278,7913,6,0,P|167:261|241:255,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,235,8397,1,8,0:0:0:0:
329,235,8558,2,0,P|416:270|475:273,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,191,9042,2,0,P|497:132|496:99,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,74,9364,6,0,B|268:79|268:79|225:36,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,25,9848,2,0,B|141:89|141:89|153:113|153:113|150:182,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,262,10332,2,0,L|287:255,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,171,10655,6,0,L|-1:159,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,284,11139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,284,11300,2,0,L|217:296,1,150,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,186,11945,6,0,P|430:201|501:129,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,115,12429,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,115,12590,2,0,B|435:192|401:189|425:264,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,326,13074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,359,13235,6,0,P|279:319|186:340,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,336,13719,2,0,P|177:302|192:224,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,151,14203,2,0,L|57:140,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,232,14526,6,0,L|361:220,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,149,15010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,221,15171,2,0,B|336:275|336:275|368:316|360:368,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,305,15655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,341,15816,6,0,L|122:355,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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226,29,17106,6,0,P|293:21|368:69,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,99,17590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,180,17752,2,0,B|352:181|321:212|321:212|345:243|346:285,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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231,208,19203,2,0,L|316:200,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,256,19526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,256,19606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,256,19687,6,0,P|436:182|411:115,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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252,116,20332,2,0,L|103:108,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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434,339,21461,2,0,P|464:268|430:197,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,86,21945,2,0,L|472:76,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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370,86,22752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,86,22832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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150,346,24042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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472,59,28558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
355,95,28720,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,28800,12,2,30655,0:0:0:0:

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

kunka 2016-04-09T09:05:17+00:00

Hi.
From my Q～
General

A start of offset is 333. Therefore I think that a little bit a start of the music is early. Would you change AudioLeadIn to 1,000?

Marianna's Mine

00:05:332 (4,1,2,3,4) - Would you make modifications in a regular pentagon?
00:08:558 (3) - Would you switch to 1/2slider and 1circle? It becomes the vocal follow by picking up 00:08:881 - by circle. And I recommend it because it is done snap like to flowing in the 00:09:042 (4,5) - .
00:11:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - Would you make modifications in a regular pentagon? In addition, the 00:12:106 (2,3) - thinks that a flow improves by performing ctrl+g. http://puu.sh/obDX1.jpg
00:20:897 - circle?
00:23:559 (1,2) - I feel a sense of incongruity for little bit flows. try this plz http://puu.sh/obEcN.jpg
00:24:204 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I felt a sense of incongruity in nc. I recommend nc according to consistency http://puu.sh/obETu.jpg

Light Insane

00:04:848 (3,4,5,1) - I feel a sense of incongruity in rhythm. As for the 00:04:848 - , a head of slider matches a song very much. And I think that the 00:05:413 - match a song. http://puu.sh/obEwV.jpg 00:15:170 (3,4,5,1) - same.
00:11:300 (5,6) - The (5) faces the direction of the (6). However, (5) is 5hit. The player will cause misunderstanding of 4hit. The 00:11:618 - has a sound suitable for slider. try this plz http://puu.sh/obFlX.jpg / http://puu.sh/obFnT.jpg
00:16:784 (5,6,1) - It is hard to see this overlap very much. I recommend movement of the 00:17:026 (6,1) - . http://puu.sh/obFzr.jpg
00:24:849 (4) - NC

Mk's Hard

00:11:622 - I didn't feel the need of the finish. Because finish is added to next note, tbh it is noisy lol.
00:21:945 (3) - finish

Normal

00:09:364 (1) - finish
00:11:945 (1,2) - Would you make modifications in symmetry? http://puu.sh/obGc1.jpg
00:17:106 (1) - finish
00:19:687 (1) - ^
00:20:170 (2,3) - I kinda feel a sense of incongruity in rhythm. Would you change the 00:20:170 (2,3) - by the ctrl+g?
00:21:622 (6) - finish to tail

Easy

00:08:235 (3) - I can't recommend 1/2 reverse slider in easy diff. Would you switch to 1/1slider? 00:18:558 (3) - same.
00:09:364 (1) - finish
00:17:106 (1) - ^
00:19:203 (4) - I can't recommend 1/2 slider in easy diff. 1/2slider is the same as kick slider for a beginner. I think that you should do it in the same way as 00:09:042 (4) -
00:19:687 (1) - finish
00:21:945 (4) - ^

GL

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-04-09T11:20:44+00:00

m4m return -

[General]
add audioleadin ~1000 - 2000 since the offset is earlier than 1000ms
00:23:558 - why is there a red point here? it starts on the downbeat and the bpm is the same.. just delete it cuz it doesnt necessary

[Easy]
00:07:429 (2,3) - try blanket? would look nicer imo
00:10:655 - missing downbeat is bad ;; consider change 00:09:364 (1,2) - to 1/1 + 1/1 + circle. or atleast add whistle to the downbeat to emphasize it
00:10:977 (3) - curve slider would flow better imo
00:15:816 (3) - blanket 2's head maybe
00:23:235 (7,1) - blanket
00:25:494 (3,4,1) - flows bad cuz the 3,4 are over 1's curve, consider move 1 up over 4 instead of under it

[Normal]
00:00:655 (1,2,3,1) - make a symmetry diamond pattern? would be cleaner
00:03:397 (4) - consider end the slider on vocal at 00:03:719 - and add circle since this is a normal diff
00:08:235 (4) - rotate this a bit ccw would flow better imo and you can avoid the current weird lookin blanket thing
00:10:977 (5) - consider change to 3 circles to make it constant with the start of the map

[Mkmeow's Hard]
00:03:719 - shoudnt vocals here be clickable
00:04:848 (3) - the circle is over the sliders curve right now, rotating 3 cw would make it flow better since it'll be on the curve
00:10:493 - long slider should start here instead cuz theres instrument here
00:18:719 (2) - prety strong vocals u could change to 2 circles here

[Light Insane]
00:06:461 (5) - since this is a 'light insane' u could make these 1/4s clickable
00:11:300 (5) - add finish
00:14:041 (4) - the clap supposed to be on the end?
00:22:752 (3) - could be a triple instead
00:24:526 - feels kinda empty to me, maybe change 00:24:204 (3) - to 1/2 + 1/2

[Marianna's Mine]
00:07:106 (2,1) - should stack sliderends here for aesthetics imo
00:11:622 (8) - add finish, theres cymbal crash here
00:20:977 (1) - should split to 1/2 + 1/2 to follows vocals
00:28:236 - 00:28:397 - these got ignored ;w; this is last diff u shouldnt ignore them imo

pretty cool map
good luck!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-09T18:08:18+00:00

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:
Hi.
From my Q～
General
A start of offset is 333. Therefore I think that a little bit a start of the music is early. Would you change AudioLeadIn to 1,000? Changed to 2000 in every diff

Light Insane
00:04:848 (3,4,5,1) - I feel a sense of incongruity in rhythm. As for the 00:04:848 - , a head of slider matches a song very much. And I think that the 00:05:413 - match a song. http://puu.sh/obEwV.jpg 00:15:170 (3,4,5,1) - same. it's fine
00:11:300 (5,6) - The (5) faces the direction of the (6). However, (5) is 5hit. The player will cause misunderstanding of 4hit. The 00:11:618 - has a sound suitable for slider. try this plz http://puu.sh/obFlX.jpg / http://puu.sh/obFnT.jpg ok
00:16:784 (5,6,1) - It is hard to see this overlap very much. I recommend movement of the 00:17:026 (6,1) - . http://puu.sh/obFzr.jpg I decided to delete them
00:24:849 (4) - NC ok

Normal
00:09:364 (1) - finish sure
00:11:945 (1,2) - Would you make modifications in symmetry? http://puu.sh/obGc1.jpg It's fine
00:17:106 (1) - finish added
00:19:687 (1) - ^ added
00:20:170 (2,3) - I kinda feel a sense of incongruity in rhythm. Would you change the 00:20:170 (2,3) - by the ctrl+g? ok
00:21:622 (6) - finish to tail no

Easy
00:08:235 (3) - I can't recommend 1/2 reverse slider in easy diff. Would you switch to 1/1slider? 00:18:558 (3) - same. I saw ranked mapsets with this
00:09:364 (1) - finish ok
00:17:106 (1) - ^ added
00:19:203 (4) - I can't recommend 1/2 slider in easy diff. 1/2slider is the same as kick slider for a beginner. I think that you should do it in the same way as 00:09:042 (4) - ok fixed
00:19:687 (1) - finish added
00:21:945 (4) - ^ nah
GL

Deppyforce wrote:
m4m return -

[General]
add audioleadin ~1000 - 2000 since the offset is earlier than 1000ms added from the kunkan's mod
00:23:558 - why is there a red point here? it starts on the downbeat and the bpm is the same.. just delete it cuz it doesnt necessary because without it, Nightcore have wrong positioned finishes, so that's why it's here

[Easy]
00:07:429 (2,3) - try blanket? would look nicer imo for me doesn't look
00:10:655 - missing downbeat is bad ;; consider change 00:09:364 (1,2) - to 1/1 + 1/1 + circle. or atleast add whistle to the downbeat to emphasize it I see it fine
00:10:977 (3) - curve slider would flow better imo I prefer current pattern
00:15:816 (3) - blanket 2's head maybe I don't think so
00:23:235 (7,1) - blanket ok
00:25:494 (3,4,1) - flows bad cuz the 3,4 are over 1's curve, consider move 1 up over 4 instead of under it fixed

[Normal]
00:00:655 (1,2,3,1) - make a symmetry diamond pattern? would be cleaner sure
00:03:397 (4) - consider end the slider on vocal at 00:03:719 - and add circle since this is a normal diff I'm following music and vocal lol
00:08:235 (4) - rotate this a bit ccw would flow better imo and you can avoid the current weird lookin blanket thing it's fine
00:10:977 (5) - consider change to 3 circles to make it constant with the start of the map ok

[Light Insane]
00:06:461 (5) - since this is a 'light insane' u could make these 1/4s clickable are clickable
00:11:300 (5) - add finish not needed
00:14:041 (4) - the clap supposed to be on the end? !
00:22:752 (3) - could be a triple instead ok
00:24:526 - feels kinda empty to me, maybe change 00:24:204 (3) - to 1/2 + 1/2 I'll think about it

pretty cool map
good luck!

ty for the mods

B r o k e n

364 posts

Joined May 2014

B r o k e n 2016-04-10T07:43:22+00:00

My Modding Queue

Normal

00:22:913 (2,3) - soft these too? or give 00:22:268 (1) - normal hit sound, hit sounds just sounds a bit weird to me
00:26:784 (2) - sounds weird, think about making 00:26:139 (1) - just following the guitar and finishing with it? 2 full beat slider @.75 or .50 spd
00:28:075 (4) - following guitar? change it to full beat slider

Mk's Hard

00:02:913 (1) - all notes before this are following vocals well, and this note throws it off, 1/2 slider + single note would fit better, this will require you to change the map a bit on this aera
00:04:203 (1) - you can fix this full beat slider to fit vocals better if you want
00:05:493 (1) - ^
00:13:235 (1) - ^
00:15:816 (1) - ^
00:28:720 (1) - this NC isn't really needed
only thing I feel off is following the vocals or not, not so sure if you're trying to do that

Light Insane

00:19:687 (1,2,3,4) - a box shape? Clean this up and make it neater, distance snapping all of these the same would clean it up, up on u
00:20:332 (5) - this is my personal liking, instead of a straight down slider
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4901767
00:28:075 (2,3,4) - stacking would just be better, or distance them a bit more

my mod prob didn't help much or at all, but here it is

Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,913 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2016-04-10T17:44:12+00:00

I love traps

[general]
If you want a bg with less pixels here you go:
http://puu.sh/odaHN/7e36b9a2f9.jpg
http://puu.sh/odaIe/59da8613f4.jpg

00:23:558 - what exactly does this metronome reset do? It doesn't seem necessary to reset the metronome here at all

normal-sliderslide2 and normal-slidertick2 are unused
tbh you should make your slidertricks a bit less loud in general, the ones of the normal sampleset are really noisy on lower diffs especially

[Marianna]
00:03:397 (4) - 00:05:977 (4) - and others like this: i don't know if it's just me but i feel like clicking the vocal on these sliderends might end up feeling better, because your mapping is pretty focused on the vocals. So at least try http://puu.sh/odb4G/74ff9afb2f.jpg or http://puu.sh/odb6i/02896cf0dc.jpg and tell me what you think
00:05:493 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should nerf this jump pattern a bit it's a lot larger than what you usually do
00:08:881 - i think you should be able to click this vocal so how about making 00:08:558 (3) - an 1/2 slider?
00:23:559 (1,2) - the way these overlap doesn't look too nice, i think you should either overlap them more or avoid that by moving 2 to the left
00:25:494 (3,4,5,6) - i don't think an overmap like this is necessary but the main problem i have with that is that it plays hitnormals for the entire time and that just sounds really really noisy. circles would be less loud and a bit closer to the song i guess
00:28:075 (1) - i mean you could map the instruments on white and red tick that this skips over but in itself the slider is pretty functional. otherwise http://puu.sh/odbnA/a81a4968ef.jpg would work, too

prolly good to go

[Light Insane]
hm AR could be slightly higher imo
sv 1.5x makes all sliders feel slightly too slow but uhh i guess you like that
the entire diff feels like you're just slapping 1/2 rhythm and a few patterns everywhere without paying much attentions which layer of the song you're following with them
so here a few questions:
00:01:623 (1,2) - accidentally land on vocals but you switch to instruments for 00:02:268 (3,4,5) - ? Why? you switch back to vocals in 00:02:913 (1,2,3,4) - again so mapping instruments there seems out of place to be honest same with 00:07:429 (3,4,5) -
00:05:010 (4) - nothing significant (neither a strong instrument nor anything else) is there so why do yo ustart the slider there? 00:04:848 (3,4) - could be one single 1/1 slider
00:04:203 (1,2) - seems kinda inconsequent with how you mapped 00:01:623 (1,2) - but whatever
00:06:461 (5) - there isn't even a drum 5plet, it's something like http://puu.sh/odhz8/d3ed7813f9.jpg
00:09:364 (1,2,3,4,5) - these are drums again? if you were following vocals it'd be something like http://puu.sh/odhGm/23b806bc30.jpg because 00:10:493 (6) - already follows vocals i guess.
00:16:784 (5) - similarly to 00:06:461 (5) - the triplet is in the wrong place here >_<
00:20:977 (1,2) - doesn't make much sense to start that slider on the red tick again, vocals and instruments are focused on white ticks
and the rest is basically repeating what i said above because you kept the diff consistent
00:23:559 (1,2,3,4) - for these a rhythm like http://puu.sh/odhUa/395eff6154.jpg could be more consequent and easier to predict

needs work in visuals and rhythm, though rhythm is more urgent so i talked about rhythm

[mk]
with that SV i think higher AR would be better
00:18:719 (2) - idk if you're a fan of that but replacing with 2 circles to actually jump to 3 would give this a cool touch imo, mainly because it'd allow you to click both vocals: http://puu.sh/odi1E/057a7960c2.jpg
00:22:752 (2,3,4) - enable stacking in edit if you want to make these blanket ingame because right now 00:21:945 (3,2,3,4) - these are kinda clusterfuck

good to go.

[normal]
AR 5.5 ?
00:03:397 (4) - 00:13:719 (4) - i think you should shorten these to 1/1 because that captures the vocal better
00:20:977 (4,5) - i don't understand why these have to be 1/2 sliders, circles would've worked well enough and this pattern becomes a really big chain ? at least 00:20:977 (4) - could be nerfed to a circle
00:25:494 (4,5) - slidershapes pls ;; less curve if you want to do something like that
00:27:429 (3,4,1) - tbh something like http://puu.sh/odizZ/4bfe28fa3d.jpg will be easier to comprehend for your target audience
could use more mods focusing on visuals.

[easy]
00:18:558 (3) - 00:08:235 (3) - could you avoid short repeat sliders? they usually confuse everyone who just started because reading them is more difficult. just use 1/1 lol

its okayish, can use more polishing here and there but overall okayish

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-10T18:52:08+00:00

B r o k e n wrote:
My Modding Queue

Normal
00:22:913 (2,3) - soft these too? or give 00:22:268 (1) - normal hit sound, hit sounds just sounds a bit weird to me goes to the rhythm
00:26:784 (2) - sounds weird, think about making 00:26:139 (1) - just following the guitar and finishing with it? 2 full beat slider @.75 or .50 spd yes, you're right
00:28:075 (4) - following guitar? change it to full beat slider I want a spinner here

my mod prob didn't help much or at all, but here it is don't worry, helped

Okoratu wrote:
I love traps me too

[general]
If you want a bg with less pixels here you go: applied first
http://puu.sh/odaHN/7e36b9a2f9.jpg
http://puu.sh/odaIe/59da8613f4.jpg

00:23:558 - what exactly does this metronome reset do? It doesn't seem necessary to reset the metronome here at all

normal-sliderslide2 and normal-slidertick2 are unused
tbh you should make your slidertricks a bit less loud in general, the ones of the normal sampleset are really noisy on lower diffs especially ok removed

[Light Insane]
I decided to remove this diff cause the overmap I done, so no applies here

[normal]
AR 5.5 ? sure
00:03:397 (4) - 00:13:719 (4) - i think you should shorten these to 1/1 because that captures the vocal better I don't think so
00:20:977 (4,5) - i don't understand why these have to be 1/2 sliders, circles would've worked well enough and this pattern becomes a really big chain ? at least replcad for a slider foced to vocals
00:20:977 (4) - could be nerfed to a circle ^
00:25:494 (4,5) - slidershapes pls ;; less curve if you want to do something like that sure, sure
00:27:429 (3,4,1) - tbh something like http://puu.sh/odizZ/4bfe28fa3d.jpg will be easier to comprehend for your target audience fixed
could use more mods focusing on visuals.

[easy]
00:18:558 (3) - 00:08:235 (3) - could you avoid short repeat sliders? they usually confuse everyone who just started because reading them is more difficult. just use 1/1 lol ok, reducing it

its okayish, can use more polishing here and there but overall okayish

ty

Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-10T19:04:55+00:00

Okoratu wrote:
I love traps

[Marianna]
00:03:397 (4) - 00:05:977 (4) - and others like this: i don't know if it's just me but i feel like clicking the vocal on these sliderends might end up feeling better, because your mapping is pretty focused on the vocals. So at least try http://puu.sh/odb4G/74ff9afb2f.jpg or http://puu.sh/odb6i/02896cf0dc.jpg and tell me what you think In some parts I try to focus on what is most notable in the music, this is one of them
00:05:493 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should nerf this jump pattern a bit it's a lot larger than what you usually do Idk, it is one Insane :v
00:08:881 - i think you should be able to click this vocal so how about making 00:08:558 (3) - an 1/2 slider? I used what is most prominent in music to this part
00:23:559 (1,2) - the way these overlap doesn't look too nice, i think you should either overlap them more or avoid that by moving 2 to the left Fixed
00:25:494 (3,4,5,6) - i don't think an overmap like this is necessary but the main problem i have with that is that it plays hitnormals for the entire time and that just sounds really really noisy. circles would be less loud and a bit closer to the song i guess I like this jump so I adjusted the hitsound
00:28:075 (1) - i mean you could map the instruments on white and red tick that this skips over but in itself the slider is pretty functional. otherwise http://puu.sh/odbnA/a81a4968ef.jpg would work, too The guitar is the most important sound here

prolly good to go

Note: @Deppyforce and @kunkakunkakunkakunka No changes

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ac8129464363

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Joined October 2013

ac8129464363 2016-04-10T23:32:44+00:00

[easy]
00:21:945 (4,5,6,7) - ehh 5 isn't emphasized as much as 6 and 7 in the music so I don't really get your reasoning for having 3 circles here, especially in an easy diff. it could be better to just throw a repeat on 4 somehow.

looks fine

[normal]
00:08:235 (4) - consider shortening the repeat and adding a circle, could suit the rise in vocal pitch more idk
00:20:977 (4) - could be converted to a 2 circles, one stacked on 5's head. idk it prevents the pattern from becoming too "connected" and dense for this part.

[mk]
00:02:913 (1,2) - intended blanket or not?
00:11:945 (1,2,3) - this one looks more like an intended blanket and its pretty off lol
00:18:719 (2) - could change this into 2 circles, especially considering how you've placed a whistle on the end
00:24:204 (3) - not telling you to change anything but im just curious why you chose to place that sound on the sliderhead
00:28:074 (3) - consider using a 1/2 repeat cuz of the percussion sounds. the circles between the sliders are circles that you've added as opposed to this which is an actual sound in the music. idk it could feel better

looks fine

[marianna's mining]
00:11:622 (8,9,10,1) - feels pretty awkward cuz of the linear acceleration required to play this pattern. it would feel better if there was more of an angle between these circles so consider moving 1 to the left or to the right a bit
00:15:816 (1,2) - why is this pattern really easy when 00:05:332 (4,1,2,3,4) - was one of the biggest jumps in the map
00:23:559 (1) - 00:24:204 (1) - consider soft sampleset on the tails of these so it doesnt sound so loud and out of place lol

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-10T23:49:48+00:00

deetz wrote:
[easy]
00:21:945 (4,5,6,7) - ehh 5 isn't emphasized as much as 6 and 7 in the music so I don't really get your reasoning for having 3 circles here, especially in an easy diff. it could be better to just throw a repeat on 4 somehow. I find it good

looks fine

[normal]
00:08:235 (4) - consider shortening the repeat and adding a circle, could suit the rise in vocal pitch more idk ok
00:20:977 (4) - could be converted to a 2 circles, one stacked on 5's head. idk it prevents the pattern from becoming too "connected" and dense for this part. sure

ty

Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-11T00:04:13+00:00

deetz wrote:
[marianna's mining]
00:11:622 (8,9,10,1) - feels pretty awkward cuz of the linear acceleration required to play this pattern. it would feel better if there was more of an angle between these circles so consider moving 1 to the left or to the right a bit Okay
00:15:816 (1,2) - why is this pattern really easy when 00:05:332 (4,1,2,3,4) - was one of the biggest jumps in the map Meh
00:23:559 (1) - 00:24:204 (1) - consider soft sampleset on the tails of these so it doesnt sound so loud and out of place lol

Sankyu ^^

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Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Haya 2016-04-11T00:40:54+00:00

M4M.

General

All good.

Easy

00:07:429 (2,3) - I feel like both of these sliders don't really need the clap at the ends. I think it would be better to remove them, as your hitsound pattern suggests that the claps hit on the beat, not the lyrics.
00:09:042 (4) - Insert a clap here to follow your pattern.
00:12:590 (2,3) - Since this is the only overlap in this entire difficulty I don't think that it aesthetically look good. In my eyes it looks out of place. So perhaps think about making a cleaner pattern here with no overlap or incorporate more of these overlaps in this Easy.
00:17:751 (2,3) - Here is the hitsound consistency problem again. Please remove both clap sounds from these sliders and add a Clap sound at 00:19:364 (4) - .
00:23:559 (1) - There is a slight blanket issue here. Move the sliderpoint to x318, y69 and the sliderend to x322, y18.

Normal

00:00:655 (1,2,3,1) - I have a problem with this pattern with not being symmetrical or in a perfect "diamond shape". Move (3) to x173, y195 and The slider to x104, y307.
00:09:364 (1,2) - I think that the way these two sliders are connected right now is awkward to play and disrupts the flow. You made a better connection in the following notes 00:09:848 (2,3) - . Try to keep stuff like this more linear.
00:10:977 (5,6,7,1) - This pattern is again not symmetrical. Move (6) to x501, y222. Move (7) to x432, y319. Move the Slider to x390, y209.
00:14:526 (1) - I think you forgot to place a Clap hitsound on the end of this slider.
00:20:170 (2,3) - I am not sure about this stack. In my eyes it would be very hard for a beginner to play a 1/2 bridge while stacked even. I'd say either find a different pattern or delete 00:20:170 (2) - and reassemble.
00:24:526 (1) - Remove the NC here. Since the melody is still the same and usually you only want NCs on downbeats.
00:28:719 (1) - Please don't stack the spinner on the note. Instead, Move the spinner on tick further on the blue tick.

Mk's Hard

00:10:655 (1,2,3) - Using 1/2 sliders fits this part better.
SPOILER
00:11:300 (3) - I think you forgot to add a clap hitsound here.
00:18:719 (2) - I would suggest having this slider point downwards instead of upwards to suggest a small 1/1 break. With the slider going up the flow looks like it's just a jump. Players who play hard difficulties aren't that good at differenciating Approach circles.
00:26:139 (1) - I think you forgot to add a clap hitsound here.

Marianna's Mine

00:00:655 (1) - I found it really weird to play this slider into the next one. I think a more sideways slider coming from the right would be more fitting flow/gameplay wise. Something like this
SPOILER

This Star shape is not symmetrical at all. Use this code and insert it into your .osu file.

SPOILER

339,321,5332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,126,5493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,160,5655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,298,5816,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:10:493 (1) - You can further improve this blanket. Move first sliderpoint to x129, y16.
00:12:590 (5) - Blanket issue again. Move sliderpoint to x379, y84 and sliderend to x276, y96.
00:21:461 - Insert a circle here
00:21:863 (5) - Delete this circle. The beat in this part is a triplet and not a 5-burst.

Good luck

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-11T01:03:46+00:00

Haya wrote:
M4M.

General
All good.

Easy
00:07:429 (2,3) - I feel like both of these sliders don't really need the clap at the ends. I think it would be better to remove them, as your hitsound pattern suggests that the claps hit on the beat, not the lyrics. It's for a better following to the pattern
00:09:042 (4) - Insert a clap here to follow your pattern. ok
00:12:590 (2,3) - Since this is the only overlap in this entire difficulty I don't think that it aesthetically look good. In my eyes it looks out of place. So perhaps think about making a cleaner pattern here with no overlap or incorporate more of these overlaps in this Easy. Those overlaps are allowed and it's rankable
00:17:751 (2,3) - Here is the hitsound consistency problem again. Please remove both clap sounds from these sliders and add a Clap sound at 00:19:364 (4) - . done
00:23:559 (1) - There is a slight blanket issue here. Move the sliderpoint to x318, y69 and the sliderend to x322, y18. fixed only first point

Normal
00:00:655 (1,2,3,1) - I have a problem with this pattern with not being symmetrical or in a perfect "diamond shape". Move (3) to x173, y195 and The slider to x104, y307. Of course it's a diamong shape

00:09:364 (1,2) - I think that the way these two sliders are connected right now is awkward to play and disrupts the flow. You made a better connection in the following notes 00:09:848 (2,3) - . Try to keep stuff like this more linear. It's fine
00:10:977 (5,6,7,1) - This pattern is again not symmetrical. Move (6) to x501, y222. Move (7) to x432, y319. Move the Slider to x390, y209. Fixed
00:14:526 (1) - I think you forgot to place a Clap hitsound on the end of this slider.
00:20:170 (2,3) - I am not sure about this stack. In my eyes it would be very hard for a beginner to play a 1/2 bridge while stacked even. I'd say either find a different pattern or delete 00:20:170 (2) - and reassemble. Every normal haves at least 1 stack
00:24:526 (1) - Remove the NC here. Since the melody is still the same and usually you only want NCs on downbeats. ok fixed
00:28:719 (1) - Please don't stack the spinner on the note. Instead, Move the spinner on tick further on the blue tick. I forgot to fix that

ty

Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-04-11T01:08:46+00:00

Haya wrote:
Marianna's Mine
00:00:655 (1) - I found it really weird to play this slider into the next one. I think a more sideways slider coming from the right would be more fitting flow/gameplay wise. Something like this
SPOILER
This Star shape is not symmetrical at all. Use this code and insert it into your .osu file.
SPOILER
339,321,5332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,126,5493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,160,5655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,298,5816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
If someone else complain about it I fix
00:10:493 (1) - You can further improve this blanket. Move first sliderpoint to x129, y16. No
00:12:590 (5) - Blanket issue again. Move sliderpoint to x379, y84 and sliderend to x276, y96.
00:21:461 - Insert a circle here No
00:21:863 (5) - Delete this circle. The beat in this part is a triplet and not a 5-burst. No
Good luck

Thanks ^^

Mekki

1,794 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-04-11T22:49:51+00:00

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Troublemaker.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 655
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Troublemaker
TitleUnicode:とらぶるめーかー
Artist:I MY ME MINE
ArtistUnicode:あいまいみーまいん
Creator:Underforest
Version:Mk's Hard
Source:ひめゴト
Tags:SECRET PRINCESS HIMEGOTO Toraburumeka Aimaimimain Opening TV Size 睦月周平 ミズノ ゲンキ Mutsuki Shuhei Genki Mizuno 小野早稀 東城日沙子 桑原由気  摩天楼由香 Ono Saki Toujou Hisako Yūki Kuwahara Yuka Matenrou 有川 ひめ Arikawa Hime 歩く18禁 Aruku Juuhachi-kin 霜科 十八 Shimoshina Toya 伊集院 運子 Ijūin Sadako 運子 Unko アルベルティーナ 2世 Aruberutina Albertina Ni-sei 阿部 ちな Abe China 有川 かぐや Arikawa Kaguya MkGuh Hoen Marianna
BeatmapID:944681
BeatmapSetID:438919

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,-50,"video.avi"
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Factorial

691 posts

Joined August 2013

Factorial 2016-04-12T04:43:43+00:00

Hi, M4M here:
Overall

Hitsounds normal-sliderslide2.wav and normal-slidertick2.wav seems to be unused.
This should have only one timing line, since there were no measure change

Easy

00:10:977 (3,1) - Fix blanketing
00:15:171 (2,3) - ^, with sliderhead of 00:15:171 (2)
00:12:590 (2,3) - With this pattern, players might click the reverse arrow instead:

Normal

00:02:913 (3) - This should be moved to 00:02:752 with "imini?" ending at 00:03:074
00:05:494 (3) - Move to 00:05:332, this fits better here, imo
00:13:235 (3) - This should be moved to 00:13:074 with "egao" ending at 00:13:397
00:15:816 (3) - Move to 00:15:655, same as above
00:20:977 (4,5) - This rhythm seems awkward, imo. See MK's Hard.

Hard

00:25:655 - Add something at the red tick, feels empty here (replace slider)

Light Insane

00:10:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this stream more curved?
00:19:364 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - It would be be better if these circles have same distance (DS)

Marianna's Mine

00:14:203 (5,6,7,8,1) - Blanket with 00:13:881 (3) ??
This diff's greatly mapped. Nothing moddable.

That's all I can mod!
Modded from 4/10/16 update

Mekki

1,794 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-04-13T17:04:49+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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[Editor]
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Title:Troublemaker
TitleUnicode:とらぶるめーかー
Artist:I MY ME MINE
ArtistUnicode:あいまいみーまいん
Creator:Underforest
Version:Mk's Hard
Source:ひめゴト
Tags:SECRET PRINCESS HIMEGOTO Toraburumeka Aimaimimain Opening TV Size 睦月周平 ミズノ ゲンキ Mutsuki Shuhei Genki Mizuno 小野早稀 東城日沙子 桑原由気  摩天楼由香 Ono Saki Toujou Hisako Yūki Kuwahara Yuka Matenrou 有川 ひめ Arikawa Hime 歩く18禁 Aruku Juuhachi-kin 霜科 十八 Shimoshina Toya 伊集院 運子 Ijūin Sadako 運子 Unko アルベルティーナ 2世 Aruberutina Albertina Ni-sei 阿部 ちな Abe China 有川 かぐや Arikawa Kaguya MkGuh Hoen Marianna
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-04-13T23:58:44+00:00

Mark

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-14T04:34:37+00:00

I can't apply Neil Leo's mod cause I fixed basically everything was mentioned on other mods XD
Thank you

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2016-04-15T00:30:43+00:00

Hii from my queue

Easy

All see good to me

Normal

00:16:299 (4) - i Thinks is better like This

Mk's Hard

I Think Is good after all

Marianna's Mine

Ok

No KD for this post

this map is great! Good work Underforest and the team

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-15T02:21:05+00:00

I'll give KD because anyways helped
Ty

George

George 2016-04-15T03:11:35+00:00

m4m thing
---Easy---
00:06:784 (1) - Just to add variety I would rotate this slider ~50 degrees and add a white point in the middle to make a really shallow c shape
00:07:429 (2) - I would remove the white point from this slider and move it up to accommodate my previous suggestion
00:10:332 (2) - I would add a white point to this slider so the slider has a little bump to add more flow to this section (what I mean)
00:19:364 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:23:235 (7,1) - ^

---Normal---
00:04:203 (1,2) - fix this blanket plz
00:10:332 (3,4) - personally I'd try to stay away from stacks like this in Easy and Normal diffs, they're more or something for hard
Delete this ( 00:12:590 (2) - ) slider and make it a flipped version of 00:11:945 (1) -
00:24:042 (2,3) - stack thing

---Hard---'
00:09:848 (2) - Move the end point of the slider to the left one so the slider is symmetrical

---Mine---
00:09:364 (1) - I would try to round the end of this slider out so it blankets 00:09:848 (2) - better
00:10:493 (1) - same thing here

alrighty I guess, good collab of mappers :3

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-15T03:30:48+00:00

George wrote:
m4m thing
---Easy---
00:06:784 (1) - Just to add variety I would rotate this slider ~50 degrees and add a white point in the middle to make a really shallow c shape Is not a blanket so no
00:07:429 (2) - I would remove the white point from this slider and move it up to accommodate my previous suggestion I want it curved
00:10:332 (2) - I would add a white point to this slider so the slider has a little bump to add more flow to this section fixed(what I mean)
00:19:364 (4,1) - fix blanket It's fine
00:23:235 (7,1) - ^ Same

---Normal---
00:04:203 (1,2) - fix this blanket plz
00:10:332 (3,4) - personally I'd try to stay away from stacks like this in Easy and Normal diffs, they're more or something for hard I prefer it friendly
Delete this ( 00:12:590 (2) - ) slider and make it a flipped version of 00:11:945 (1) - I think it's fine
00:24:042 (2,3) - stack thing It's fine

alrighty I guess, good collab of mappers :3

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-04-15T11:46:23+00:00

m4m here sorry for being late-
this show confuses me x-x
[Easy]

not really a big deal but i think you can make this blanket 00:04:848 (2) - for nicer aesthetics
SPOILER
you're gonna have to move this a bit to prevent overlapping with 00:06:784 (1) - though
00:18:558 (3) - just my preference so you can feel free to completely ignore me here but i'd rather you have the slider at 00:17:751 (2) - lead into this slider, e.g. have (2)'s slider end point towards the (3). makes it easier to guide beginners
00:28:397 (4) - maybe delete this to give more emphasis (3)'s slider end. i know you want to capture the drum here, but it doesn't really work that well without the beat at 00:28:235 imo
00:28:719 (1) - maybe have a circle here and start the spinner at 00:28:881 instead
yeah looks good feel free to ignore these if you want

[Normal]

00:11:945 (1,2) - can make these blankets; right now it just looks kind of ugh
00:28:720 (1) - same as easy

[Mk]

00:07:429 (3,1) - minor overlap here triggers me because it's not centred lmao
00:20:332 (3) - i think two 1/2 sliders would work over a 1/1 slider here because guitars are pretty emphasized here
00:28:075 (3) - ^same but because drums this time

[Marianna]

00:21:461 - pause here feels a little weird imo. i wouldn't ignore the beat here; circle maybe?

hope this helps!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-16T05:53:49+00:00

Doormat wrote:
m4m here sorry for being late-
this show confuses me x-x
[Easy]
not really a big deal but i think you can make this blanket 00:04:848 (2) - for nicer aesthetics ok
SPOILER
you're gonna have to move this a bit to prevent overlapping with 00:06:784 (1) - though
00:18:558 (3) - just my preference so you can feel free to completely ignore me here but i'd rather you have the slider at 00:17:751 (2) - lead into this slider, e.g. have (2)'s slider end point towards the (3). makes it easier to guide beginners I think current is okay
00:28:397 (4) - maybe delete this to give more emphasis (3)'s slider end. i know you want to capture the drum here, but it doesn't really work that well without the beat at 00:28:235 imo there's a soft drum, let's not
00:28:719 (1) - maybe have a circle here and start the spinner at 00:28:881 instead I want a diff more easier
yeah looks good feel free to ignore these if you want
[Normal]
00:11:945 (1,2) - can make these blankets; right now it just looks kind of ugh I'll think about that
00:28:720 (1) - same as easy same as easy
hope this helps!

ty

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-04-16T07:02:55+00:00

Alright then.

[Easy]

00:07:429 (2,3) - How about this rhythm? 00:07:429 (2) Plays a bit off because there isn't a vocal going on in the slider. Same applies to 00:17:751 (2,3) .
00:15:171 (2,3) - Idk maybe the symmetry here can be improved.
00:21:945 (4,5) - Ctrl+G this might fit better so that downbeat won't get ignored.

[Normal]

00:02:913 (3) - If you're using this to follow vocal, moving this to the red tick earlier 00:02:752 would make much more sense imo. Same applies to 00:13:235 (3) .
00:04:849 (2,3) - Idk what happened but you shouldn't ignore 00:05:332 - 00:05:655 if you're following vocal, the rhythm is pretty much the same with previous stanza but I think you can represent these vocals differently. Same applies to 00:15:171 (2,3) .
00:25:010 - Don't ignore this pls, it would sound a lot better if you map it.

[Mk's Hard]

00:02:752 (4,1) - Dude not sure if it's just me but I don't really see a reason for a higher spacing here even though it's a downbeat.
00:10:977 (1,2) - A slider here instead of these? Imo the vocal is building up so might as well making only vocals clickable?
00:22:752 (2,3,4,5) - Idk might flow better with Ctrl+g.
00:24:687 - Feels weird to have this empty, can you do sth about it?
00:24:849 (1) - Optional, 2 circles might capture the guitar sound better.

[Marianna's Mine]

00:05:332 (4,1,2,3,4) - The jumps are kinda overdone imo, at least you should use a similar spacing you did at 00:16:139 (2,3,4,5,6) .
00:14:848 (2,3) - Imo this really needs a higher spacing.
00:20:977 (1,2) - Maybe delete 00:21:622 (2) and make 00:20:977 (1) a repeat slider? It would feel less awkward this way cuz 00:21:461 won't be left empty imo, well if you do that you have to move some stuff there.
00:24:849 (1,2) - Just my preference but I would make a small jump here.

Hope this helps, good luck~

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-04-16T09:01:19+00:00

i only can mod insane diff and i cant find problem of it ;w;
so ill just shoot a star

GL ~

BoatKrab

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BoatKrab 2016-04-16T11:19:25+00:00

Hellow :3
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no kds pls

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Topic Starter

Underforest 2016-04-16T21:24:45+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Alright then.

[Easy]

00:07:429 (2,3) - How about this rhythm? 00:07:429 (2) Plays a bit off because there isn't a vocal going on in the slider. Same applies to 00:17:751 (2,3) . I prefer as it is now
00:15:171 (2,3) - Idk maybe the symmetry here can be improved. done
00:21:945 (4,5) - Ctrl+G this might fit better so that downbeat won't get ignored. ok
[Normal]

00:02:913 (3) - If you're using this to follow vocal, moving this to the red tick earlier 00:02:752 would make much more sense imo. Same applies to 00:13:235 (3) . I don't know about this
00:04:849 (2,3) - Idk what happened but you shouldn't ignore 00:05:332 - 00:05:655 if you're following vocal, the rhythm is pretty much the same with previous stanza but I think you can represent these vocals differently. Same applies to 00:15:171 (2,3) . ok fixed
00:25:010 - Don't ignore this pls, it would sound a lot better if you map it. I want to leave a little break here
Hope this helps, good luck~

Thank you for your mod

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
i only can mod insane diff and i cant find problem of it ;w;
so ill just shoot a star
GL ~

Thank you for the star

BoatKrab wrote:
Hellow :3
don't forget to add MkGuh and Marianna to tags
no kds pls

They are added already, just that the tags can't display correctly on forum

Mekki

1,794 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-04-16T23:00:08+00:00

electoz

Electoz wrote:
Alright then.

[Mk's Hard]

00:02:752 (4,1) - Dude not sure if it's just me but I don't really see a reason for a higher spacing here even though it's a downbeat. there is a high sound on it for sure
00:10:977 (1,2) - A slider here instead of these? Imo the vocal is building up so might as well making only vocals clickable? ok
00:22:752 (2,3,4,5) - Idk might flow better with Ctrl+g. why?
00:24:687 - Feels weird to have this empty, can you do sth about it? nah, gap seems nice here because guitar sound
00:24:849 (1) - Optional, 2 circles might capture the guitar sound better. not really, it flows better with those slider, cuz just the head is strong.

Hope this helps, good luck~

cutie doormat

Doormat wrote:
m4m here sorry for being late-

[Mk]
00:07:429 (3,1) - minor overlap here triggers me because it's not centred lmao wat
00:20:332 (3) - i think two 1/2 sliders would work over a 1/1 slider here because guitars are pretty emphasized here true
00:28:075 (3) - ^same but because drums this time not here cuz following guitar

moe

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ErunamoJAZZ

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ErunamoJAZZ 2016-04-17T01:27:07+00:00

Hi~

too short xD

[Marianna's Insane]
00:12:106 (2,3) - That felt a bit bad for me, because jump between those are diferent to others in the map. I want to suggest change spacing to 1.6: http://puu.sh/ol3Sa/2746d3f55b.jpg (1:

, 2:

)
Why id OD at 7.5??, OD8 is more appropriate here (for spread)

[Mk's Hard]
HP will be 6, imo

IRC

19:40 ErunamoJAZZ: asd
19:41 Underforest: ¿?
19:41 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/945175 I MY ME MINE - Troublemaker]
19:41 ErunamoJAZZ: los tuyos son los primeros, no?
19:42 Underforest: Si
19:42 *ErunamoJAZZ is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/944682 I MY ME MINE - Troublemaker [Normal]] +Hidden +SuddenDeath +HardRock +Nightcore
19:45 ErunamoJAZZ: ahhaha
19:45 Underforest: Si, ya se xd
19:45 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/944679 I MY ME MINE - Troublemaker [Easy]]
19:45 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:05:493 (3) - Este patron así no lo recomendaría en un easy
19:46 ErunamoJAZZ: en un normal sí, pero no en un easy
19:46 Underforest: No se, voy a pensar sobre eso
19:46 ErunamoJAZZ: porque el final del slider anterior apunta hacia la flecha
19:47 ErunamoJAZZ: pero!, buscaste testplays de nubs?
19:47 ErunamoJAZZ: (pusiste a tu mamá a jugarlo? (?) :v)
19:47 ErunamoJAZZ: jajajjaa
19:47 ErunamoJAZZ: antes de decir si es bueno o malo, es mejor ver como le va a gente nueva jugandolo
19:47 ErunamoJAZZ:

19:48 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:08:235 (3,4) - este flow definitivamente no me agrada
19:48 Underforest: Se supone que es un blanket
19:48 ErunamoJAZZ: soy de los que piensa que el flow debe ser lo más obvio posible
19:50 Underforest: Lo dejaré como es en mi opinion
19:50 Underforest: Si un BN dice lo mismo, lo cambio
19:50 ErunamoJAZZ: que piensas de algo así? http://puu.sh/ol2AG/51ac1af065.jpg
19:51 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:15:171 (2,3) - este flow tamién lo siento raro
19:51 Underforest: Suena un poco dificil para un nuevo jugador
19:51 ErunamoJAZZ: no creo, yo lo he usado un montón en mis mapas faciles xD
19:52 ErunamoJAZZ: la sugerencia la hago es por el "polarity issue" que hay ahí
19:52 ErunamoJAZZ: (00:18:558 (3,4) - y acá también)
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: muchas veces es mejor evitar esos cambios en la polaridad tan bruscos
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: se pueden dejar cuando el sonido es demasiado obvio
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: pero en este caso, haciendo el mini slider, queda bastante cool con la voz
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: eso sería con el easy

19:55 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/944682 I MY ME MINE - Troublemaker [Normal]]
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:11:945 (1,2) - la forma de estos dos podría ser más bonita >_<
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: mm... en vez de 00:24:526 (4,5) - por qué no repetiste lo mismo que en 00:23:558 (1,2,3) - ?, pienso que quedaría mejor
19:57 Underforest: Sobre el segundo 11 yo pienso que esta bien
19:57 Underforest: Lo del segundo 24 lo cambio
19:58 ErunamoJAZZ: No estan mal, pero pueden ser mejores owo
19:58 ErunamoJAZZ: la idea de modear es hacer los mapas mejore, anyway xD
19:59 ErunamoJAZZ: pregunta: Los chicos brasileros saben español?, o mejor les escribo en inglés?
19:59 Underforest: MkGuh está tomando clases de español
19:59 Underforest: pero no sabe del todo
19:59 Underforest: asi que en ingles
19:59 Underforest: Marianna solo sabe ingles igualmente
19:59 ErunamoJAZZ: English then

20:15 ErunamoJAZZ: mm...
20:15 ErunamoJAZZ: por qué el HP lo tienes tan bajito en el easy?
20:15 ErunamoJAZZ: normalmente, el lvl normal lo lleva en 5
20:16 Underforest: Es un easy
20:16 ErunamoJAZZ: es un easy de un mapa de 30 segundos xD
20:16 Underforest: Ni modo que sea CS:3 AR:10
20:16 ErunamoJAZZ: si fuera un mapa de 4 min
20:16 ErunamoJAZZ: sería diferente
20:16 Underforest: Un BN me dijo que lo cambiara a 5.5
20:17 ErunamoJAZZ: hp5.5 en el normal?
20:17 ErunamoJAZZ: suena bien
20:17 Underforest: Tampoco te pases XD
20:17 ErunamoJAZZ: no me estoy pasando
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: tener 5 de HP en un mapa hace que si te quedas quieto, no subes ni bajas
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: más de 5 si te quedasq uiero baja
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: y menos de 5, cualquier cosa recupera vida
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: yo le pondría
20:18 Underforest: prefiero dejarlo en 4
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: insane 7, hard 6, normal 5, y easy 4
20:19 Underforest: No conozco ningun mapa rankeado que tenga a Easy de 4 de HP
20:20 Underforest: Mas que los de 60BPMm y los antiguos que estan bien feos
20:21 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/206846 Last Note. - Setsuna Trip (Short Ver.)]
20:22 Underforest: Eso ya es criterio del mapper
20:23 ErunamoJAZZ: sip
20:23 ErunamoJAZZ: aun así, es mi sugerencia

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My suggestion about HP is: I:7, H:6, N:5, E:4.
This map is very short, so I think it is fine.

Good luck!

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