Lia - Toki o Kizamu Uta - TV animation Ver. - · forum

Yohanes

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2016-07-08T01:29:06+00:00

ProfessionalBox wrote:
Yohanes' insane
00:05:299 (3,1) - This blanket is off by quite a bit,consider making it look better
00:16:656 (1) - Unsnapped slider!
00:20:514 (2,3) - This blanket can be improved aswell :p
00:40:802 (1,2) - This spacing is inconsistent with 00:41:234 (2,3) - and is therefore confusing
00:42:528 (7,2) - These aren't properly stacked It's stacked on the slidertail
01:02:384 (1,2) - Same here! Make sure these are stacked properly aswell after the fix 01:03:031 (2,2) - Uh, it stacked properly already (?)

Other are fixed, thank you ProBox!

hoya

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: CAS.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40694
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Toki o Kizamu Uta - TV animation Ver. -
TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Lanturn
Version:Yohanes' Insane
Source:CLANNAD AFTER STORY
Tags:wo Maeda Jun Key Sounds Label TORCH 麻枝准 OP Opening Size クラナド アフターストーリ Yohanes
BeatmapID:986228
BeatmapSetID:438531

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"CAS.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-07-10T02:20:53+00:00

ProfessionalBox wrote:
Fuuko's Light Insane
00:08:299 (5,1) - This overlap is a bit confusing for the players of this difficulty to read. I suggest you come up with something else for this retry
00:18:356 (5,8) - Stack properly peppy fix ur damn game
00:45:765 (2,4) - Same here me2
01:01:952 (4,1) - ^
01:02:168 (5,2,4) - ^ yehaj
01:04:974 (7,1) - I like the idea of this overlap aswell but it is a bit too confusing for most people to read. same
01:18:138 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - I think you should do these in pairs since now it gets really repeatitive it isnt repetitive im just being consistent xd

That's it for the mod, hope it helped. Good luck with the set!

thanks

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-07-10T07:04:54+00:00

requested by pkhg
[Fuuko's Light Insane]
00:08:299 (5,1) - Este overlap luce raro D:
00:24:831 (8) - ¿Esto debería terminar en blue tick?
01:04:974 (7,1) - ¿Soy yo o los bordes de los sliders se inclinan unos 1-2 pixeles? xd
01:08:427 (6) - Intenta este ritmo en su lugar:

01:18:138 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - parecen escaleras xd

gl!

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-07-10T07:20:18+00:00

Underforest wrote:
requested by pkhg
[Fuuko's Light Insane]
00:08:299 (5,1) - Este overlap luce raro D: xd
00:24:831 (8) - ¿Esto debería terminar en blue tick? no veo porque no. si me reclaman mas lo cambio xd
01:04:974 (7,1) - ¿Soy yo o los bordes de los sliders se inclinan unos 1-2 pixeles? xd es culpa de peppy xd
01:08:427 (6) - Intenta este ritmo en su lugar: no quiero hacer nada complicado :p
01:18:138 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - parecen escaleras xd stairway to heaven

gl!

!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-07-10T08:28:13+00:00

pkhg wrote:
!

¿

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-07-10T18:50:57+00:00

M4M from your queue

[Doyak's Insane]

00:06:370 (3,2,2,2) - imo NC on these would be nicer since they got a stronger sound then 00:06:584 (1,1,1) - , same here 00:02:941 - 00:09:799 -
00:44:254 (6) - NC for emphasized the instrument
00:46:413 (5,6) - try ctrl + g? flow is better this way
00:45:765 (3,1) - stack perfect lol
00:47:708 (6) - 00:58:067 (6) - 01:01:521 (7) - same
01:25:260 (3,4) - imo you should stack here either for consistent

[Insane]

00:04:870 (8,9,1) - 00:08:299 (9,10,1) - 00:11:727 (9,10,1) - inconsistent spacing lol, and maybe NC on 00:04:870 (8) - 00:08:299 (9) - 00:11:727 (9) - for emphasized
00:17:924 (6,7,8,9) - lol this shape could be improved xd
00:44:254 (6) - 00:47:708 (6) - 00:58:067 (7) - 01:01:521 (6) - 01:08:427 (6) - NC for emphasized the instrument
01:19:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:21:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - shape could be improved

[Yohanes' Insane]

00:26:989 (5) - move to 397 224 so the shape would look nicer since 00:26:989 (5) - is at the middle of 00:26:342 (2,3) -
00:35:622 (3,4,1) - increased the sapcing a bit cuz the vocal
00:48:571 (2) - NC here instead of 00:48:139 (1) - , and 00:49:866 (1) - unnecessary NC
00:52:024 (5) - NC here for vocal
01:08:427 (4) - NC for emphasized the instrument
01:23:965 (2) - inconsistent with your structure here, change to 2 notes

sry this is the best i can do ;w;
GL~
mod this mapu : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/476595
thanks >w<

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-07-11T02:05:27+00:00

Thanks. Will reply later. Just did your mod from me.

Yoges

896 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoges 2016-07-13T20:23:05+00:00

Yo, M4M from your queue.

[Ultra Beginner]

I don't think that anyone would be this inept at osu lol. The diff seems unnecessary to me you could just have the Beginner on it's own and get rid of this. I don't see any need for it other than "why not".

[Beginner]

00:02:299 (1,2,1) - A bit of an anal complaint but you usually don't see sliders with more than 1 repeat on diffs as easy as this. It might throw new players off the first time around because of that.
Maybe increase the DS to like 1.2x so that 00:16:630 (1,2,3) - these kind of notes aren't overlapped the way they are? Large noticeable overlaps or having the notes be spaced apart from each other look good, very slight overlaps and touching notes don't look good imo.
You're also NC spamming a lot. It wouldn't do any harm to let the combo go up to like 4 or 8.

[Easy]

00:21:809 - Add a note here? You were following the vocals with the notes before but the vocals also lined up with the drums so having this be empty is a little unexpected.
00:27:421 - ^
00:29:579 (2) - Doesn't look good against the (1) imo.
01:25:691 - Add a note here before the spinner?

[Normal]

00:38:428 (4) - That's really awkward because you haven't switched polarity. Deleting it would be better.
01:25:691 (1) - Add note before spinner?

[Hard]

01:03:679 (3,4) - Nein! Fiksh de blanket!
01:11:879 (3) - Ctrl+J and move to (172,128)?
01:17:275 (3,1) - The spacing is misleading because (1) is just as close to the (3) as the 1/2 notes.
I've just noticed you've used gridsnap. I'd recommend turning it off and resnapping everything to avoid weird looking spacing inconsistencies like 01:19:217 (1,2,3) -
01:20:296 (1,2,3,1,2) - What is that flow? And in a slow part of the song as well.
01:25:691 (1) - Note before spinner?

[Fuuko]

For a light insane stuff like 00:08:299 (5,1) - and 00:20:946 (3,1) - is a bit cruel.
Yeah definitely increase the stack latency. For less experienced players patterns like 00:29:147 (5,6) - might appear as if they're just one slider.
01:04:974 (7,1) - This one is especially strange and unexpected as the (1) is the exact same length and follows the exact same path as the (7).

I can't seem to find anything in any of the other diffs. Gl.

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-07-31T06:47:12+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
M4M from your queue

[Insane]
00:04:870 (8,9,1) - 00:08:299 (9,10,1) - 00:11:727 (9,10,1) - inconsistent spacing lol, and maybe NC on 00:04:870 (8) - 00:08:299 (9) - 00:11:727 (9) - for emphasized Fixed spacing, but leaving NCs out.
00:17:924 (6,7,8,9) - lol this shape could be improved xd It uses similar DS for the jumps and the regular spacing actually.
00:44:254 (6) - 00:47:708 (6) - 00:58:067 (7) - 01:01:521 (6) - 01:08:427 (6) - NC for emphasized the instrument I don't think it's necessary.
01:19:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:21:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - shape could be improved I believe they're fine.

Thanks :3

Yoges wrote:
Yo, M4M from your queue.

[Ultra Beginner]
I don't think that anyone would be this inept at osu lol. The diff seems unnecessary to me you could just have the Beginner on it's own and get rid of this. I don't see any need for it other than "why not". yup. I could probably delete beginner as well tbh.

[Beginner]
00:02:299 (1,2,1) - A bit of an anal complaint but you usually don't see sliders with more than 1 repeat on diffs as easy as this. It might throw new players off the first time around because of that. Maybe, maybe not. The player has a full second to react to the extra reverses. I'd like to think they'd be able to play this to be honest. I'll change if others complain about it.
Maybe increase the DS to like 1.2x so that 00:16:630 (1,2,3) - these kind of notes aren't overlapped the way they are? Large noticeable overlaps or having the notes be spaced apart from each other look good, very slight overlaps and touching notes don't look good imo. The major problem with overlaps is if they are at that point where some touch and some don't. In this case, they all overlap over and clearly too, so it doesn't detract as bad as you think from the aesthetics. I could give you examples, but if you look at easy or normal maps in pending, you'll probably notice worse lol.
You're also NC spamming a lot. It wouldn't do any harm to let the combo go up to like 4 or 8. good point. I'll let them go at least 4 measures or something lol.

[Easy]
00:21:809 - Add a note here? You were following the vocals with the notes before but the vocals also lined up with the drums so having this be empty is a little unexpected. it does still follow the vocals with the gap. If anything it would have to be a 1/1 slider since its just held.
00:27:421 - ^
00:29:579 (2) - Doesn't look good against the (1) imo. hmm, it was actually 0.03 off, so I fixed it I guess XD
01:25:691 - Add a note here before the spinner? Not for me really. I prefer it this way.

[Normal]
00:38:428 (4) - That's really awkward because you haven't switched polarity. Deleting it would be better. not at all. This plays perfectly fine.
01:25:691 (1) - Add note before spinner? same as easy.

[Hard]
01:03:679 (3,4) - Nein! Fiksh de blanket! uh.. ok
01:11:879 (3) - Ctrl+J and move to (172,128)? I like how it curves with 01:09:721 (3,3) - tbh.
01:17:275 (3,1) - The spacing is misleading because (1) is just as close to the (3) as the 1/2 notes. nah. The vocals make it pretty clear there's a gap. I don't use jumps once in this part anyways.
I've just noticed you've used gridsnap. I'd recommend turning it off and resnapping everything to avoid weird looking spacing inconsistencies like 01:19:217 (1,2,3) - Fixed a couple of these.
01:20:296 (1,2,3,1,2) - What is that flow? And in a slow part of the song as well. I changed a few things around.
01:25:691 (1) - Note before spinner? same as easy.

I can't seem to find anything in any of the other diffs. Gl.

Thanks for the mods!

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

samplefish 2016-07-31T10:34:19+00:00

shan ran ran ran

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2016-07-31T16:32:21+00:00

Sorry for the late reply,
Everything is fixed from SnowNiNo_'s mod except for 01:23:965 (2) - because I believe it still fits well to pattern & music
I also made some adjustment here and there

Toki

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40694
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

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TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Lanturn
Version:Yohanes' Insane
Source:CLANNAD AFTER STORY
Tags:wo Maeda Jun Key Sounds Label TORCH 麻枝准 OP Opening Size クラナド アフターストーリ Yohanes
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Doyak

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Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-07-31T17:39:09+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
M4M from your queue

[Doyak's Insane]
00:06:370 (3,2,2,2) - imo NC on these would be nicer since they got a stronger sound then 00:06:584 (1,1,1) - , same here 00:02:941 - 00:09:799 - I forgot to change the hitsounds, but what I emphasize is different. I focused on the low 're' sound to discriminate a set of rhythms, so the NC pattern should follow that too. These jumps kinda emphasize those high pitched sounds before the jump too, yeah.
00:44:254 (6) - NC for emphasized the instrument fixed
00:46:413 (5,6) - try ctrl + g? flow is better this way I prefer the current flow
00:45:765 (3,1) - stack perfect lol Why this alwlays happen
00:47:708 (6) - 00:58:067 (6) - 01:01:521 (7) - same fixed
01:25:260 (3,4) - imo you should stack here either for consistent That's literally the last part of this, so that can be a bit different to emphasize.

Thanks for the mod~

Doyak's Insane

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Lanturn

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Lanturn 2016-07-31T17:44:53+00:00

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DeRandom Otaku

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DeRandom Otaku 2016-08-02T09:24:17+00:00

Hello~ M4M from ur queue

General

Tags and countdown and blah blah conflicts with Yohane's Insane

Ultra Beginner

00:16:630 - from here u have NC'd every single note .... there are a few notes u could remove nc from such as 00:22:241 (1) - 00:52:024 (1) - 01:05:837 (1) - 01:18:138 (1) - ... Maybe? NC'ing every single note is not a good idea anyway i guess .-.

Beginner

00:28:284 (1,2) - DS should be 1x not 0.9x

Doyak's Insane

00:19:219 - 00:19:651 - these is kinda loud sounds so making them clickable would be cool i guess ... u could easily put 1/2 slider on the white ticks and it wont hurt at all , like its done in insane and light insane
00:24:831 - and here aswell
01:07:995 (1) - remove nc?
01:08:858 (5) - nc?
01:25:691 (1) - whistle

Thats all ~ nice song and set ~ gl gl

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2016-08-02T09:42:06+00:00

thank you :3

Will reply soon and get your mod done before.

Izzywing

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Izzywing 2016-08-02T09:43:11+00:00

NM from your queue (what do you mean that's not how it works???)

as someone who can't single tap above 170 bpm without being in pain, i love you

[General]

01:25:691 (1) - Maybe lower the sound of this spinner in all diffs? There's practically no sound when it ends.

That ultra beginner diff...lol

Check AI-mod and fix some tags inconsistencies in Yohanes' diff

[Beginner]

00:38:428 (1) - I actually suggest starting this on 00:38:212. Since this is a beginner, doing this would act like a buffer for the player to react to spinning for the intended sound of the "ruuu"

00:48:571 (1,2) - Hm...neaten these curves a bit? They look kinda messy to me.

[Easy]

Just as a general thing, I think the combos are too long. 7 and 8 length combos in an Easy feel out of place to me.

00:40:802 - A slider starting here that ends on 00:41:234 - would be kinda cool.

00:41:665 (1) - Center the bend for neatness?

Overall this is a fantastic Easy. The rhythm varies without being too complex, and it's a perfect blend of 1/2 and 1/1 rhythm. Good stuff!

[Normal]

00:25:263 (2) - Someone's probably pointed this out already, but distance here varies. I think jumps can be done well in Normal diffs but this one doesn't really feel needed to me. I think this pattern just works better if 00:24:831 (1,2,3) - is an equilateral triangle. You can do this and still maintain the symmetry.

00:44:254 (5) - I think this slider flows better, both into and out if it's angled slightly down instead of slightly up.

01:09:290 (1) - Everything after here is a bit intense compared to the rest of the diff, but I think it's probably fine. Fun section, too!

[Hard]

01:25:691 (1) - You could put a note here and start the spinner on the blue or white tick. I think this would feel better to play.

[Fuuko's Light Insane]

00:13:870 (5,6) - Considering these sounds are of equal intensity, it might be need to have the spacing to them be equal. I like the jump from 5 to 6, maybe have 4 to 5 have the same spacing?

00:16:656 (1) - Check the snapping of this note, it should be on the downbeat after the BPM change (at 00:16:630) but you put it on the red tick.

00:24:831 (8,1) - I think these should be closer together. It's not exactly obvious that this is the rhythm you're following (ending 8 on the blue tick) based on spacing, and I think for a light insane it should be a bit more clear.

01:00:441 (4) - move this so that it doesn't intersect with 01:01:521 (1,2,3) - (or move the triplet, whichever works)

01:25:691 (3) - hm...maybe NC for this consistency? As this entire section has combos of length 2, so making this it's own combo would be neat.

[Yohanes' Insane]

00:41:665 (3) - NC! the kiai starts here.

00:42:959 (1) - move the NC to 00:43:391 (2) -

00:44:902 (1) - move the NC to 00:45:118 (2) -

00:49:866 (1) - this NC feels unnecessary. Also, properly wrap the slider around 00:49:218 (2), right now it's uneven.

01:00:441 (4) - NC for consistency, you usually NC a slider if the downbeat is in the middle of it

01:03:679 (1) - again, feels like an unnecessary NC

The last part was super fun since single tapping 139ish bpm is orgasmic

[Insane]

00:22:241 (1) - Hm...really powerful vocal, I think you could emphasize this with a jump.

01:25:691 - ahhh you have to make the "kuuu" clickable, it would feel so much better. Like, a final jump to to it would be super satisfying.

139 single tapping \o/

Couldn't find anything for Doyak's diff.

Good luck!

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2016-08-02T11:51:28+00:00

oh wow, thanks Hobbes :3

Map should be pretty much ready for BNs after your mod. Gonna respond tomorrow as I'm a bit sleepy to do this tonight. thank you!

Yohanes

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Yohanes 2016-08-03T08:47:00+00:00

Everything about NC is fixed, Thank you Hobbes

wo

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edit: Lanturn, pls fix the video for me thanks!

Last edited by Yohanes 2016-08-04T11:04:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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pkhg 2016-08-04T04:03:38+00:00

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Hobbes2 wrote:
[Fuuko's Light Insane]

00:13:870 (5,6) - Considering these sounds are of equal intensity, it might be need to have the spacing to them be equal. I like the jump from 5 to 6, maybe have 4 to 5 have the same spacing? different pitch

00:16:656 (1) - Check the snapping of this note, it should be on the downbeat after the BPM change (at 00:16:630) but you put it on the red tick. ok[/b]

00:24:831 (8,1) - I think these should be closer together. It's not exactly obvious that this is the rhythm you're following (ending 8 on the blue tick) based on spacing, and I think for a light insane it should be a bit more clear. its clear enough trust me

01:00:441 (4) - move this so that it doesn't intersect with 01:01:521 (1,2,3) - (or move the triplet, whichever works) it isnt visible while playing and i dont wanna increase the spacing

01:25:691 (3) - hm...maybe NC for this consistency? As this entire section has combos of length 2, so making this it's own combo would be neat. 1 note combos makes me cry more than this anime

Good luck!

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Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-08-05T09:23:07+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
NM from your queue (what do you mean that's not how it works???)

as someone who can't single tap above 170 bpm without being in pain, i love you yay :3

[General]

01:25:691 (1) - Maybe lower the sound of this spinner in all diffs? There's practically no sound when it ends. Done.

That ultra beginner diff...lol

Check AI-mod and fix some tags inconsistencies in Yohanes' diff Blame Yohanes XD

[Beginner]

00:38:428 (1) - I actually suggest starting this on 00:38:212. Since this is a beginner, doing this would act like a buffer for the player to react to spinning for the intended sound of the "ruuu" Might as well yeah. Gives more time anyways.

00:48:571 (1,2) - Hm...neaten these curves a bit? They look kinda messy to me. Hard to tidy these up and keep the intended bounce so yikes.

[Easy]

Just as a general thing, I think the combos are too long. 7 and 8 length combos in an Easy feel out of place to me. It's hard to combo that spot, so just having them as a full combo works the best imo.

00:40:802 - A slider starting here that ends on 00:41:234 - would be kinda cool. ahh, no. That's leadin

00:41:665 (1) - Center the bend for neatness? done, and with it's symmetry friend as well.

Overall this is a fantastic Easy. The rhythm varies without being too complex, and it's a perfect blend of 1/2 and 1/1 rhythm. Good stuff!

[Normal]

00:25:263 (2) - Someone's probably pointed this out already, but distance here varies. I think jumps can be done well in Normal diffs but this one doesn't really feel needed to me. I think this pattern just works better if 00:24:831 (1,2,3) - is an equilateral triangle. You can do this and still maintain the symmetry. bleh, I don't need the symmetry. Fixed it though.

00:44:254 (5) - I think this slider flows better, both into and out if it's angled slightly down instead of slightly up. Did something with notes before it.

01:09:290 (1) - Everything after here is a bit intense compared to the rest of the diff, but I think it's probably fine. Fun section, too! yeah, it's more intense on every diff actually lol.

[Hard]

01:25:691 (1) - You could put a note here and start the spinner on the blue or white tick. I think this would feel better to play. No can do I want the vocals to start the spinner.

[Insane]

00:22:241 (1) - Hm...really powerful vocal, I think you could emphasize this with a jump. I agree, but then it ruins the consistency with 00:24:399 (6) - and 00:17:493 (3) - or whatever.

01:25:691 - ahhh you have to make the "kuuu" clickable, it would feel so much better. Like, a final jump to to it would be super satisfying. same as hard :3

139 single tapping \o/

Couldn't find anything for Doyak's diff.

Good luck!

thank you :3

Also used everything from DRO's mod. thanks.

Yohanes' and pkhg Updated.

MokouSmoke

495 posts

Joined May 2013

MokouSmoke 2016-08-06T20:40:52+00:00

hi hi~
Clannad! <3 T.T I'll look at everything~

Lanturn

Insane:

00:18:572 (9) - feels a little visually unbalanced. maybe move this to (335,255)
00:19:651 (3,4) - flow feels a little awkward since I don't think (4) deserves a flow break. Try stacking (4) on sliderhead of 00:19:219 (2) - instead? Compare to similar part at 00:25:263 (3,4) - where flow break occurs on (3), not (4)
00:25:694 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - it plays well, but I guess I'm not seeing the visual structure here. how about stacking 00:26:126 (5) - on tail of 00:24:831 (2) - and adjust 00:26:773 (8) - so spacing between 00:26:126 (5,6,8) - look visually similar?
00:28:284 (1,2,3) - uneven visual spacing triggered me so hard during playtest. move 00:28:716 (2) - to (364,219). Also copy/pasta to 00:30:874 (1,2,3) - as well
00:44:254 (6,7,8,9,10) - uses 0.18x spacing and 00:47:708 (6,7,8,9,10) - uses 0.2x spacing. not sure if intentional, but I noticed it even in-game and would prefer if they were identical
01:12:527 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - just a personal preference, but the first musical phrase after the kiai section ends at 01:13:606 (1) - but the pattern you use here ends at 01:14:469 (5) - instead :/ Well, idk if you're up for rearranging the sequence of your jump patterns, but I would either start or end this specific pattern at 01:13:606 (1) - instead of your current way
01:20:296 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a fan of this specific pattern, looks like 2007 mapping style lol. how about something like this? http://puu.sh/qs2Jb/30fa2677cb.jpg
I kinda prefer how your GD-ers do the ending by adding a note/sliderend at 01:25:691 - to make it a more active sound and then start the spinner either on the following blue or red tick. Consider apply this to your other diffs as well

Hard:

00:35:838 (6,1,2,3,4) - the flow and visuals feel really forced here, since symmetry is not aligned and flow breaks aren't even. mmm, there's many possibilities for other patterns, but I'll just throw out one quick idea http://puu.sh/qs5bU/c172a9fb5f.jpg http://puu.sh/qs5qX/1c4bad9683.jpg http://puu.sh/qs5s9/9bd0748135.jpg
00:52:672 (3) - this would be even more awesome of it blanketed the other sliders http://puu.sh/qs61i/8cf690b06b.jpg Same thing at 00:56:772 (3) -
01:16:196 (3) - your monstrata triangle is a little off if that's what you're going for
01:17:275 (3,1) - with slider leniency, these play a lot closer than DS suggests, maybe move farther apart or different location?

Normal:

00:24:831 (1,2,3) - rotate this a little bit so 00:23:968 (5,1,3) - forms a straight line for more m a p _ s t r u c t u r e ?
00:26:558 (5) - I think musically, the vocals could be nicer represented by using same shape slider as 00:26:126 (4) -
01:18:138 (1) - nice slidertrain lol

Easy:

nice. your most polished diff of the set imo

Beginner:

why not 1.1 DS? all these slight overlaps could be avoided with just a slight increase in spacing
I do like the multi-repeat slider usage here

Ultra Beginner:

...well, it's fine according to your style, but I just can't fundamentally agree with this diff. The insanely slow SV and low density make this boring to play even for beginners at the lowest level. What level of players are you trying to cater to with this diff? The other issue that arises with this mapping style is that you lose all sense of map aesthetics because the notes are so far apart in time that you only ever see 1 note/slider, maybe 2 at a few points. Longer sliders with a lot of different sliderart would have been visually better for an ultra beginner diff. Mmm...idk, it just feels like this was mapped for memes and detracts from a really nice mapset. I hope my opinion doesn't offend you, but I wish you would reconsider including this in your mapset.

Doyak

00:40:802 (1) - just my preference, but you could try breaking this into two extended sliders at ~0.75 SV and mute the sliderends so both vocals are clickable? Current way feels a little lacking going into kiai section and I think it would be nice to do something more similar like 00:54:614 (5,6) -
reminds me of 2012 mapping style, really nice diff

Yohnnes

00:14:191 (1,1) - transition from spinner to slider felt really abrupt to me. While the spinner does follow that wind-up sound well, consider just removing it and using a break instead like other diffs. I think it fits more for a calm song like this
00:21:809 (5,2) - consider changing to stack leniency 5 so these stack perfectly
00:40:802 (1,2) - mute sliderends pls. also why is 00:40:802 (1,2) - a clean blanket and 00:41:234 (2,1) - has overlap? would prefer both to be blankets instead
00:49:218 (2,3,1,2) - I think aesthetics can be improved by making these all visually same spacing http://puu.sh/qs3tc/33f9080926.jpg
00:54:614 (4,5,6,7) - mmm, sounds similar to me. try using either both repeat sliders or both triplets for consistency?
01:09:290 (1) - all those hexagrid patterns lol
01:19:648 (2,1) - fail blanket?
01:20:727 (2,1) - I guess not, patterns start to look less structured here, not sure if intentional or what
01:23:965 (2,3,4,1) - ctrl+g this for rhythmic consistency. Don't break the pattern on the 2nd to last phrase x.x either do it more often or wait until the last phrase at 01:24:612 -

pkhg

why Fuuko lol. she's barely even mentioned in afterstory :/
00:08:299 (5,1) - idk, for people that don't use transparent skins this is kinda risky
00:25:263 (1) - whistle on sliderhead pls
00:37:349 (3) - probably just me, but 3/2 slider played strange. Could try to shorten this to the drum sound on the white tick or make it an extended slider and mute the sliderend?
01:22:454 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - could you change up the pattern here, gets pretty boring after awhile. Your previous patterns always changed after 4 NCs

Aside from my issue with the lowest diff, mapset is really good and I look forward to seeing this ranked! Good luck~

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2016-08-07T02:07:05+00:00

thank you. I'll respond when I get a chance :3

Yohanes

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Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2016-08-07T06:15:50+00:00

MokouSmoke wrote:
hi hi~

Yohnnes
00:14:191 (1,1) - transition from spinner to slider felt really abrupt to me. While the spinner does follow that wind-up sound well, consider just removing it and using a break instead like other diffs. I think it fits more for a calm song like this Uh I personally would like to keep spinner here, and it's not absurd btw I use the start of a spinner in all of my maps lol
00:21:809 (5,2) - consider changing to stack leniency 5 so these stack perfectly Ok
00:40:802 (1,2) - mute sliderends pls. also why is 00:40:802 (1,2) - a clean blanket and 00:41:234 (2,1) - has overlap? would prefer both to be blankets instead Sliderend muted But I like my current looks better lol idk why
00:49:218 (2,3,1,2) - I think aesthetics can be improved by making these all visually same spacing http://puu.sh/qs3tc/33f9080926.jpg I like my looks better tbh
00:54:614 (4,5,6,7) - mmm, sounds similar to me. try using either both repeat sliders or both triplets for consistency? No, because I want more emphasis towards the next 1/1 slider, and by changing it into repeat slider would kinda kills of the emphasis
01:09:290 (1) - all those hexagrid patterns lol
01:19:648 (2,1) - fail blanket? not really, If I blanket it all the way, the slider head would be waay to near to the bottom of the playingfield
01:20:727 (2,1) - I guess not, patterns start to look less structured here, not sure if intentional or what Yeah, thats kinda intended
01:23:965 (2,3,4,1) - ctrl+g this for rhythmic consistency. Don't break the pattern on the 2nd to last phrase x.x either do it more often or wait until the last phrase at 01:24:612 - Woo, I like it! changed

Thank you MokouSmoke!

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-08-07T08:33:09+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Doyak's Insane
00:19:219 - 00:19:651 - these is kinda loud sounds so making them clickable would be cool i guess ... u could easily put 1/2 slider on the white ticks and it wont hurt at all , like its done in insane and light insane There are only very tiny sounds on 1/2 ticks and I don't want to spam 1/2s on this quiet part.
00:24:831 - and here aswell same
01:07:995 (1) - remove nc? 01:07:564 (1,2) - and 01:07:995 (1,2) - have different kind of drums, and the latter one is stronger. That's also why the distance is different.
01:08:858 (5) - nc? On the other hand, these 8 are just same drums, so I think keeping the same color is better.
01:25:691 (1) - whistle okay

MokouSmoke wrote:
Doyak
00:40:802 (1) - just my preference, but you could try breaking this into two extended sliders at ~0.75 SV and mute the sliderends so both vocals are clickable? Current way feels a little lacking going into kiai section and I think it would be nice to do something more similar like 00:54:614 (5,6) - I was hating my pattern too, so fixed now!
reminds me of 2012 mapping style, really nice diff Thanks

Thanks for the mods~

Doyak's Insane

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TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
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Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2016-08-09T16:19:49+00:00

hi from q xd

[Ultra Beginner]
this diff is just a meme please remove it if youre going for ranked

[Beginner]
same here,its unnecessary imo :/ might as welll remove it with the ultra meme beginner

[Easy]
00:38:644 - let the spinner start here?
00:54:614 (3,4,2) - aaaaaaaaaaa?

[Normal]
00:20:083 (3,4,5) - wh is this triangle
00:20:946 (5,6) - blanket pls
01:00:441 (4) - use this slider 00:59:578 (2) - here
01:07:132 (3,4) - blanket

[Hard]
00:41:665 (1,2,3) - why is 3 not the same as 1 and 2

[Fuuko's Light Insane]
00:07:441 (2,4) - stack?
00:08:299 (5,1) - dunno if thats rankable
01:04:974 (7,1) - ^ also why do they have an anchor point in it?

[Yohanes' Insane]
00:04:227 (1) - remove nc
00:07:656 (1) - ^
some of your sliders have a red anchor point at the end why aslasdio

[Insane]
looks good to me

[Doyak's Insane]
remove the NC spam in the intro

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-08-09T22:21:02+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
[Doyak's Insane]
remove the NC spam in the intro

Thanks for your mod. But please, at least think why I did that, and tell me the reason why I should remove them. They might be a bit spam-ish, but still they're used to emphasize the piano sound along with the jumps. Is there anything wrong with that?

Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2016-08-09T23:51:11+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Mazziv wrote:
[Doyak's Insane]
remove the NC spam in the intro
Thanks for your mod. But please, at least think why I did that, and tell me the reason why I should remove them. They might be a bit spam-ish, but still they're used to emphasize the piano sound along with the jumps. Is there anything wrong with that?

i know what youre trying to do,still i dont think it fits to spam nc. also,a mod is just a suggestion. doesnt mean you have to apply any changes

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2016-08-10T06:45:58+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
[Yohanes' Insane]
00:04:227 (1) - remove nc Why? That NC is needed to show different section of the map. Besides the combo would be too long if I remove the NC
00:07:656 (1) - ^
some of your sliders have a red anchor point at the end why aslasdio why not lol

Thanks Mazziv, but sorry no change from your mod

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-08-12T09:25:32+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
hi from q xd

[Ultra Beginner]
this diff is just a meme please remove it if youre going for ranked

[Beginner]
same here,its unnecessary imo :/ might as welll remove it with the ultra meme beginner

[Easy]
00:38:644 - let the spinner start here? It's fine because of the 'ru'
00:54:614 (3,4,2) - aaaaaaaaaaa? aaa?

[Normal]
00:20:083 (3,4,5) - wh is this triangle What triangle?
00:20:946 (5,6) - blanket pls ok
01:00:441 (4) - use this slider 00:59:578 (2) - here nah, I like the current slider as is.
01:07:132 (3,4) - blanket ok

[Hard]
00:41:665 (1,2,3) - why is 3 not the same as 1 and 2 I dunno. It looks fine though.

thanks ;3

MokouSmoke wrote:
hi hi~
Clannad! <3 T.T I'll look at everything~
[box=Lanturn]Insane:
00:18:572 (9) - feels a little visually unbalanced. maybe move this to (335,255) looks good.
00:19:651 (3,4) - flow feels a little awkward since I don't think (4) deserves a flow break. Try stacking (4) on sliderhead of 00:19:219 (2) - instead? Compare to similar part at 00:25:263 (3,4) - where flow break occurs on (3), not (4) Did some things here like you said.
00:25:694 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - it plays well, but I guess I'm not seeing the visual structure here. how about stacking 00:26:126 (5) - on tail of 00:24:831 (2) - and adjust 00:26:773 (8) - so spacing between 00:26:126 (5,6,8) - look visually similar? Did some of my own changes to this.
00:28:284 (1,2,3) - uneven visual spacing triggered me so hard during playtest. move 00:28:716 (2) - to (364,219). Also copy/pasta to 00:30:874 (1,2,3) - as well I don't think it would be the uneven spacing
00:44:254 (6,7,8,9,10) - uses 0.18x spacing and 00:47:708 (6,7,8,9,10) - uses 0.2x spacing. not sure if intentional, but I noticed it even in-game and would prefer if they were identical I doubt you'd notice this unless you actually looked. 0.02 isn't much spacing difference and more than fine as is.
01:12:527 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - just a personal preference, but the first musical phrase after the kiai section ends at 01:13:606 (1) - but the pattern you use here ends at 01:14:469 (5) - instead :/ Well, idk if you're up for rearranging the sequence of your jump patterns, but I would either start or end this specific pattern at 01:13:606 (1) - instead of your current way Leaving as is. This allows the reverse up to the next section even if it doesn't follow the measures.
01:20:296 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a fan of this specific pattern, looks like 2007 mapping style lol. how about something like this? welcome to 2007 then. Leaving as is.http://puu.sh/qs2Jb/30fa2677cb.jpg
I kinda prefer how your GD-ers do the ending by adding a note/sliderend at 01:25:691 - to make it a more active sound and then start the spinner either on the following blue or red tick. Consider apply this to your other diffs as well Nope. I've been denying this for personal preference and leaving it this way. It's just how I map.
Hard:
00:35:838 (6,1,2,3,4) - the flow and visuals feel really forced here, since symmetry is not aligned and flow breaks aren't even. mmm, there's many possibilities for other patterns, but I'll just throw out one quick idea http://puu.sh/qs5bU/c172a9fb5f.jpg http://puu.sh/qs5qX/1c4bad9683.jpg http://puu.sh/qs5s9/9bd0748135.jpg I'd rather use my own instead of that personally, so I'm going to just leave it as is.
00:52:672 (3) - this would be even more awesome of it blanketed the other sliders http://puu.sh/qs61i/8cf690b06b.jpg Same thing at 00:56:772 (3) - Eh, I could adjust this a little I guess. The blanketing doesn't really need to be shown here though.
01:16:196 (3) - your monstrata triangle is a little off if that's what you're going for Triangle? What?
01:17:275 (3,1) - with slider leniency, these play a lot closer than DS suggests, maybe move farther apart or different location? Not a single jump in this section, People would be below "hard" skill if they couldn't play this.
Normal:
00:24:831 (1,2,3) - rotate this a little bit so 00:23:968 (5,1,3) - forms a straight line for more m a p _ s t r u c t u r e ? This isn't necessary at all. If it was a pattern, then yes, but these are completely different notes that aren't meant to be together, so a straight line is kinda pointless in this sense.
00:26:558 (5) - I think musically, the vocals could be nicer represented by using same shape slider as 00:26:126 (4) - It's straight so it doesn't send the flow directly downwards, if I added in a right curve, then it'd flow down, and a left curve would look ugly.
01:18:138 (1) - nice slidertrain lol um thanks lol.
Easy:
nice. your most polished diff of the set imo
Beginner:
why not 1.1 DS? all these slight overlaps could be avoided with just a slight increase in spacing Overlaps are there on purpose so it's easier for a new player to tell 1/1 and 2/1 apart.
I do like the multi-repeat slider usage here oh nice.

Thanks for the mods!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-08-30T06:32:32+00:00

When

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-08-30T19:40:53+00:00

This will be soon. I'm busy with council/real life/wow at the moment but I'll start up again in a bit.

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2016-09-14T08:50:57+00:00

Sorry, but can you update my diff? minor pattern & hitsound change

as

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TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
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ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Lanturn
Version:Yohanes' Insane
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Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-09-17T19:52:07+00:00

Done, revived, removed Ultra Beginner because I don't care about it anymore, and also removed Beginner because it really isn't that great.

Will BN hunt for this map soon. Time to get my projects moving again.

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-10-13T13:34:03+00:00

hey

[Easy]
00:16:630 (1,2,3,4) - distance seems inconsistent here. double check your distance snap values
00:22:241 (1) - this actually ends up off screen in 4:3 res http://puu.sh/rHmM4/e47a2d3dc5.jpg

[Normal]
ar 4.5? 5 is a bit unecessary given you dont have a lot of overlaps and bpm is low
01:18:138 (1) - really long train of 1/2 rhythms here. can you try replace some 1/2 sliders with circles instead to allow for 1/1 gaps

[Hard]
00:03:584 (3,4,5) - why not use a variation of 00:02:299 (1,2) - ? the dominant piano lands on a slider end 00:04:227
00:05:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this seems to completely contrast the density of the previous combo 00:02:299 (1) - in that it is a lot less dense when the same kinda sounds are being played. achieving some sort of balance would probably play more consistently and make more sense.
00:03:584 (3,4,5) - 00:10:441 (3,4,5,6) - like u could change these parts here to use less dense rhythm and follow the piano on the red tick 00:11:084
00:12:584 (1,2,3,4) - quite sloppy aethetically. could you try make the blankets nicer
01:21:375 (1,2,3) - map this differently? sounds are different since theres piano on 01:22:022

[Fuuko's Light Insane]
good

[Yohanes' Insane]
01:05:837 (1) - intentional old slider? if not i'd re do this cos the slider curve algorithm got messed up
01:11:879 (3) - slightly unstacked with the rest of these notes 01:12:743 (2,2,2) -
01:19:648 (2,1) - 01:20:727 (2,1) - these would look a lot nicer as blankets :d
01:25:260 (4,5) - better to ctrl g and have the red tick clicked here imo so u can end on the piano downbeat with a click 01:25:691

[Insane]
01:09:937 (4,5,1) - can u make spacing consistent here? linear flow is quite awkward with varying spacing

[Doyak's Insane]
good

got metadata?

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-10-13T14:09:16+00:00

Doyak wrote:
When

Finally

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2016-10-13T14:40:38+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Finally

Pentori wrote:
[Yohanes' Insane]
01:05:837 (1) - intentional old slider? if not i'd re do this cos the slider curve algorithm got messed up Yea, that's intentional. If you look closer, you can find more on my diff lol
01:11:879 (3) - slightly unstacked with the rest of these notes 01:12:743 (2,2,2) - true
01:19:648 (2,1) - 01:20:727 (2,1) - these would look a lot nicer as blankets :d ok
01:25:260 (4,5) - better to ctrl g and have the red tick clicked here imo so u can end on the piano downbeat with a click 01:25:691 nice catch

Thank you Pentori!

update

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TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
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Lanturn

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Pentori wrote:
hey

[Easy]
00:16:630 (1,2,3,4) - distance seems inconsistent here. double check your distance snap values Fixed.
00:22:241 (1) - this actually ends up off screen in 4:3 res http://puu.sh/rHmM4/e47a2d3dc5.jpg oops. I just rotated it I guess. a little ugly but it'll work.

[Normal]
ar 4.5? 5 is a bit unecessary given you dont have a lot of overlaps and bpm is low Sure.
01:18:138 (1) - really long train of 1/2 rhythms here. can you try replace some 1/2 sliders with circles instead to allow for 1/1 gaps Might as well nerf them all really. I swapped them to a circle each. shouldn't be too much of an issue now hopefully.

[Hard]
00:03:584 (3,4,5) - why not use a variation of 00:02:299 (1,2) - ? the dominant piano lands on a slider end 00:04:227 Done
00:05:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this seems to completely contrast the density of the previous combo 00:02:299 (1) - in that it is a lot less dense when the same kinda sounds are being played. achieving some sort of balance would probably play more consistently and make more sense. To be honest, when I hear this second part, the high piano notes stick out stronger than the lower ones, and even more so than the first or third combo, which is why I mapped it like this.
00:03:584 (3,4,5) - 00:10:441 (3,4,5,6) - like u could change these parts here to use less dense rhythm and follow the piano on the red tick 00:11:084 changed piano rhythms in some parts.
00:12:584 (1,2,3,4) - quite sloppy aethetically. could you try make the blankets nicer Changed the rhythm a bit here so fixed this as well.
01:21:375 (1,2,3) - map this differently? sounds are different since theres piano on 01:22:022 It would really break the consistency of the vocals here and probably cause problems for the player.

[Insane]
01:09:937 (4,5,1) - can u make spacing consistent here? linear flow is quite awkward with varying spacing I rotated them a little to make it a little bit closer, but I'd rather not break the patterns here. Should be fine hopefully.

got metadata?

Metaderpa: http://key.soundslabel.com/discography. ... 44/ksl0044

Thanks a ton for the mod! Updated Yohanes

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2016-10-17T03:46:20+00:00

Fuuko..?? But why??

There's an old mapper named "Fuuko" and naming that way was highly misleading.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2016-10-17T03:47:28+00:00

pkhg is pretty set on that name because it's 'cute'.

Description is hopefully enough to clear any confusion. Otherwise I'll change it.

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Sonnyc 2016-10-17T03:52:37+00:00

? ..? Only that? Doesn't feel sufficient or anything as a valid explanation personally... Maybe pkhg's Fuuko Insane might work if he really insists the Fuuko stuff, but the current naming feels highly inapproproate at least for me...

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