Fujiwara Marina - Daydream Syndrome (TV Size) · forum

ziin

2,632 posts

Joined January 2010

ziin 2011-01-10T21:57:16+00:00

Your sliders are very pretty.

[easy]
00:07:290 (1,3) image

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00:46:901 (5) up 1
00:48:066 (6) snake

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[gow's hard]
This is insane
00:06:707 (1...7) overmapped
00:34:086 (1,2) 4.4x jump?
01:04:377 (4,5) overmapped
01:27:605 (1,2) 4.7x jump?

[insane]
00:35:251 0.75 time?
00:53:309 (3,4) overmapped
01:16:610 (5,6) overmapped

very good, star~

Weez

2,318 posts

Joined February 2009

Weez 2011-01-12T06:02:27+00:00

Couldn't find anything wrong with this >.<
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AisamaDX

211 posts

Joined November 2009

AisamaDX 2011-01-12T07:52:44+00:00

v(￣Д￣)v ｲｴｲ

DeadAlready

1,575 posts

Joined August 2008

DeadAlready 2011-01-12T15:11:53+00:00

star~ >w</

kusakabe001

171 posts

Joined June 2009

kusakabe001 2011-01-15T13:16:02+00:00

star~ヾ(ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ゛

MayBe

46 posts

Joined November 2009

MayBe 2011-01-17T13:21:53+00:00

NatsumeRin

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4,032 posts

Joined August 2009

NatsumeRin 2011-01-18T10:48:57+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
i didn't get the video file in the folder. i think a full-submit plz~?

[Easy]
00:09:037 (2) - make it 1 grid right and don't mind the spacing.
00:39:765 (1,2) - maybe use slider instead of the 3/2 note? would be hard for beginners if they can't read the beat
00:40:930 (3,4) - ^, but for 5, since the slidertick is really annoying, i'll prefer circles then...
01:28:261 (6) - finish?

[Normal]
00:02:630 (1,2) - use a slider at the first plz... i hit a 100 there because i don't know the beat = =|||
00:06:125 (4) - try a 5/2 slider, fits better.
nice diff.

[gow's Hard]
00:10:785 (8,9,10,11,1) - this part is ugly because of the note stacking when playing. try to adjust the place of 8 and make it a really "stacked" effect (play this and you'll know what i mean.)
01:19:668 (1,2,3) - just stack them plz?
...suggest remove all the clap at the last part since the notes there follow exactly the drums and no place for claps then.
tough hard huh.

[Insane]
00:35:251 (1) - ... i think this should be a "slow" part, not hitting 1/2 notes all the way. there are even more notes than the other parts, which i think is wrong.
00:44:571 (1) - ^
despite that two soft part, fine.

mod this plz: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24782

climbb65588

435 posts

Joined August 2008

climbb65588 2011-01-21T03:15:37+00:00

Hello, may I map a taiko for this map?

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xierbaliti

osu! Alumni

999 posts

Joined August 2008

xierbaliti 2011-01-26T12:54:31+00:00

-Easy-
00:09:037 (2) - 1 gird right plz.

-gowww-
Insaneよりこの「Hard」譜面のほうが難しいと思います >_>

00:24:183 (4,5) - change spacing like this?　(just a suggestion)

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00:49:086 (2) - +finish at start of the slider?
00:50:251 (2) - ^
00:51:416 (2) - ^
00:52:727 (1) - ^
00:53:309 (3) - ^
00:55:639 (1,2) - use soft hitsounds? (1) adds whistle, and (2) adds nothing.
00:57:387 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - the rhythm seems like this:

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