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Mei

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2016-04-03T05:31:22+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年6月17日 at 1:20:19

Artist: Ray
Title: a-gain
Source: 蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags: ending ao no kanata four rhythm sprite sahuang Momochikun again ed
BPM: 133.4
Filesize: 19341kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Insane (3.58 stars, 235 notes)
Mochi's Insane (3.33 stars, 244 notes)
Normal (1.44 stars, 80 notes)
sahuang's Hard (2.57 stars, 186 notes)

Download: Ray - a-gain
Download: Ray - a-gain (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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(=^・ω・^=)

update video~

Last edited by Mei 2016-06-17T05:20:50+00:00, edited 21 times in total.

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2016-04-03T07:14:06+00:00

(=^・ω・^=)

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2016-04-06T15:45:54+00:00

(=^・ω・^=) Please <3

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2016-04-07T03:35:23+00:00

01:05:559 (3) - 这个还是去掉比较好整段的节奏感更强一点
01:09:270 (4) - 放到蓝线上弄成两个二连可能更好一点 clap下在3和5上但是好像太鬼畜了
01:27:036 (2) - 拉个滑条啊

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2016-04-07T04:18:04+00:00

imoutosan wrote:
01:05:559 (3) - 这个还是去掉比较好整段的节奏感更强一点 ok
01:09:270 (4) - 放到蓝线上弄成两个二连可能更好一点 clap下在3和5上但是好像太鬼畜了songfen
01:27:036 (2) - 拉个滑条啊我要创作一下

谢谢mod

alacat wrote:
(=^・ω・^=) Please <3

(=^・ω・^=) <— araneko san
thank you for star~~

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-04-10T09:24:06+00:00

Code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56676
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 455,7651,14847,29240,36437,43633,58026,72419
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:a-gain
TitleUnicode:a-gain
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Mei
Version:sahuang's Hard
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:ending ao no kanata four rhythm sprite sahuang
BeatmapID:945604
BeatmapSetID:437998

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4.5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5.5
ApproachRate:5.5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"iine.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2016-05-22T20:36:34+00:00

[Insane]
00:26:991 (3) - 往上移一点? 到00:28:341 (5) - 这里附近?
结尾要不要加个转盘?..

[Mochi]
00:57:351 (2) - maybe add a NC here to make it better to read?
01:27:261 - How about adding a spinner at the end?

[Sahuang]
00:47:681 (2,3) - feel like a circle followed by a 1/2 slider would fit here better. I would do something like this:

01:13:768 (4,5) - try ctrl+g？

[Normal]
00:04:053 (2) - NC

实在摸不出什么东西。。给个星好惹;w; (没用就别给kds啦)
Nice mapset, star~

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-05-27T10:45:32+00:00

FreeSongs wrote:
[Sahuang]
00:47:681 (2,3) - feel like a circle followed by a 1/2 slider would fit here better. I would do something like this:
yes
01:13:768 (4,5) - try ctrl+g？
i think it's fine now

顺便修了下其他地方

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Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-05-28T05:42:21+00:00

hi

General

You don't want to use a BG that's not ranked already, it's a bit lame to use a already ranked one.

Insane

00:17:096 (2) - I don't like the fact that you finish your slider on a high section of the song. I would put 2 single taps instead, could be better for the emphasis.
00:34:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't get why you use a intense jump at a section wich there are no voice or something to make them emphasized. Like 00:32:838 (1,2,3,4) - here you have all the reasons to put a jump but you don't, like here you have the voice to emphasis. 00:31:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same for here, you put jumps where there's no need to put some... Like it feels so forced for me.
01:22:988 (3,4,1) - This spacing is way too farm for this kind of SR, I would make them stacked a little bit with the slider.

Insane

00:04:053 (1) - Why stack it underneath this other slider, since it's a NC and a new voice section better space it from 00:03:603 (4) - plays totally better.
00:04:952 (4,1) - tbh this blanket can be improved, it's totally off..

sorry i'm bad to mod low bpm songs, feel free to not give me kudosu if it didn't help much

GL with this!

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2016-05-28T05:43:54+00:00

<3

Normal

00:16:422 - 00:20:020 - 00:23:618 - 都可以放个圆圈，因为你在00:27:216 - 放了。
00:43:633 (1) - 把尾巴往上面拉一下，尾巴埋身子里太深容易被针对。
00:48:805 (2) - 统一前后间距
00:58:925 - 01:02:523 - 01:04:323 - 01:09:720 - 01:16:916 - 01:20:514 - 01:23:213 - 忘记whistle了
01:08:820 (1) - 统一前后间距

其他的我懒。好运

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2016-05-28T06:05:36+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
hi

General
You don't want to use a BG that's not ranked already, it's a bit lame to use a already ranked one.changed one

Insane
00:17:096 (2) - I don't like the fact that you finish your slider on a high section of the song. I would put 2 single taps instead, could be better for the emphasis.I prefer follow the vocal here
00:34:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't get why you use a intense jump at a section wich there are no voice or something to make them emphasized. Like 00:32:838 (1,2,3,4) - here you have all the reasons to put a jump but you don't, like here you have the voice to emphasis. 00:31:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same for here, you put jumps where there's no need to put some... Like it feels so forced for me.I just emphasis the drum and use sliders to perform vocal
01:22:988 (3,4,1) - This spacing is way too farm for this kind of SR, I would make them stacked a little bit with the sliderfixed.

fixed all others mod, thank you modders!

Momizi

275 posts

Joined June 2013

Momizi 2016-05-30T05:16:16+00:00

hi，m4m
[Insane]
00:02:029 (5) - 感觉这个滑条尾的vocal还是用note比较好，00:02:703 (1) - 删了这个，从红线拉一个滑条过来也比较符合这个拖长的音？
00:25:192 (7) - 往右边放一点会跟家符合flow，我指的是顺着6的尾巴出来，大概是408 96的位置附近吧，滑条头
00:36:437 (1) - ctrl+G可能更加好玩，因为之前的到8是挺大的跳，感觉到这里也跳的大一点比较好衔接
01:09:045 (2,3,4) - 这里我感觉用这样的节奏更加好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5272733
01:18:715 (2) - stack with 01:17:141 (1) - ？
00:32:389 (7) - 这里的两个whistle音感觉用note替代滑条会更加好？
01:22:988 (3) - 滑条头尾whistle
[Mochi's Insane]
00:01:129 (4) - not stack will with 00:02:029 (1) - ,should be 188 307
00:05:402 (6,1) - jump a liittle to big on soft part,may be 00:05:177 (5,6) - ctrl+G will be better
00:11:249 (1,3) - overlap dont look good
00:12:149 (4,1) - same
00:50:380 (1,2) - 1 whistle and 2 remove
01:27:149 - add a spinner to end?
[sahuang's Hard]
没加视频
00:38:460 (1,2) - 这种尾巴叠一起的overlap不好看，其实不一定要ds，你可以稍微动一下比如这样子https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5272798，好像也不怎么样。。
00:59:375 (4) - 往下移一点，更加符合3出来的flow
01:05:222 (1,2) - 和箭头擦边了

fine，good luck

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2016-05-31T10:16:49+00:00

Hi~
From Game chat

I am not too good of a mapper so this mod may not be great but...

[Normal]
[*]Using AImod ・Spacing is too far 00:15:522 (2,3) - 00:19:121 (2,3) - 00:22:718 (2,3) - 00:26:316 (2,3) -

[*]00:32:838 (1,2) - Blanket is slightly off

Great map without much mistakes

[sahuang's Hard]
[*]00:27:666 (4) - Maybe place an NC

[*]00:38:910 (2) - Adjust the ending slightly to the left to make it a nice blanket

[*]00:47:231 (4) - Again maybe place an NC

[*]00:54:428 (4) - ^

[*]01:03:648 (2) - Make it a 1/2 beat slider?

[*]01:18:041 (1) - ^

[Mochi's Insane]
[*]00:02:928 (3,1) - Perhaps stack these?

[*]00:15:522 (2,4) - Make it a blanket

[*]00:18:446 (3,4) - Blanket is slightly off

[*]00:31:714 (3) - Ending hitsound is a bit overwhelming, either make it a ½ slider or reduce its volume

[*]00:58:700 (2,3) - Make it a blanket

[Insane]
[*]00:08:326 (3,4,1) - Blanket is slightly off

[*]00:41:159 (4,1) - ^

[*]00:56:002 (1) - Maybe make it as the picture shows

→

[*]00:58:700 (3,5) - Blanket is slightly off

[*]01:04:547 (2,1) - ^

[*]01:08:820 (1,5) - ^

[*]01:13:093 (3,5) - ^

The blankets are often off by a little so be more cautious on those

Good luck

Lavender

886 posts

Joined January 2014

Lavender 2016-05-31T20:38:24+00:00

大师

[General]

Fine. 这个spread星标有点厉害

[Normal]

Fine.

[sahuang]

00:27:216 (3,4) - 00:56:452 (1,2) - 这个stack误导性太强了，最好是移开，不想移的话最好加上nc
00:37:561 (4) - 怎么不用折返1/2切vocal
00:38:460 (1,2) - 00:56:452 (1,2) - overlap不好看
00:47:231 (4) - 00:54:428 (4) - 按梗下nc的话这里要下
00:48:805 (8,1,2) - 节奏比较难，建议用折返带过去

[Mochi]

00:02:928 (3,1) - stack pls?
00:19:120 (4,1) - blanket well pls?
00:22:718 (2) -
this'll be good-looking imo

[大师]

我被大师的神图震出了内伤，说不出话了

Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Binguo 2016-06-01T01:52:52+00:00

[Insane]
00:01:129 (3) - whi 纯粹觉得好听而已
00:07:201 (4,5) - 4滑条头叠到5哪里去
00:12:598 (5,1) - 5 whi 1whi不加试试看
00:31:489 (3) - 有些近
01:23:550 (4,1) - 星数并不是很高图不难突然分开放比较坑还可能会被找茬
打起来很舒服为什么不改改难度名呢233
[萨皇耶耶]
00:07:651 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:12:823 (4) - 拖到大白线吧没必要拉那么远
00:17:096 (6) - whi
01:22:763 (4) - 不要叠一起和前面一组对比起来很违和
转盘可以不用
[Normal]
00:07:651 (1) - 屏外
00:38:685 (4) - 略丑

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2016-06-01T05:18:44+00:00

Momizi wrote:
hi，m4m
[Insane]
00:02:029 (5) - 感觉这个滑条尾的vocal还是用note比较好，00:02:703 (1) - 删了这个，从红线拉一个滑条过来也比较符合这个拖长的音？这个滑调尾我觉得还可以接受
00:25:192 (7) - 往右边放一点会跟家符合flow，我指的是顺着6的尾巴出来，大概是408 96的位置附近吧，滑条头
00:36:437 (1) - ctrl+G可能更加好玩，因为之前的到8是挺大的跳，感觉到这里也跳的大一点比较好衔接感觉差不多，于是我选择送一点
01:09:045 (2,3,4) - 这里我感觉用这样的节奏更加好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5272733
01:18:715 (2) - stack with 01:17:141 (1) - ？
00:32:389 (7) - 这里的两个whistle音感觉用note替代滑条会更加好？会有点太难了，滑条也差不多
01:22:988 (3) - 滑条头尾whistle

fine，good luck

Binguo wrote:
[Insane]
00:01:129 (3) - whi 纯粹觉得好听而已有whistle啊
00:07:201 (4,5) - 4滑条头叠到5哪里去
00:12:598 (5,1) - 5 whi 1whi不加试试看
00:31:489 (3) - 有些近
01:23:550 (4,1) - 星数并不是很高图不难突然分开放比较坑还可能会被找茬这没分太开吧.-.
打起来很舒服为什么不改改难度名呢233

[Normal]
00:07:651 (1) - 屏外没有啊
00:38:685 (4) - 略丑这是我全力了

Yasaija 714 wrote:
Hi~
From Game chat

I am not too good of a mapper so this mod may not be great but...

[Normal]
[*]Using AImod ・Spacing is too far 00:15:522 (2,3) - 00:19:121 (2,3) - 00:22:718 (2,3) - 00:26:316 (2,3) - this 43 are fine dont worry

[*]00:32:838 (1,2) - Blanket is slightly off

Great map without much mistakes

[Insane]
[*]00:08:326 (3,4,1) - Blanket is slightly off

[*]00:41:159 (4,1) - ^

[*]00:56:002 (1) - Maybe make it as the picture shows
→

[*]00:58:700 (3,5) - Blanket is slightly off

[*]01:04:547 (2,1) - ^

[*]01:08:820 (1,5) - ^

[*]01:13:093 (3,5) - ^

The blankets are often off by a little so be more cautious on those

Good luck

others are fixed, thank you guys!

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2016-06-01T05:24:13+00:00

FreeSongs wrote:
[Mochi]
00:57:351 (2) - maybe add a NC here to make it better to read? i want to keep the vocal link
01:27:261 - How about adding a spinner at the end? other diffs dont have it

实在摸不出什么东西。。给个星好惹;w; (没用就别给kds啦)
Nice mapset, star~

Sotarks wrote:
hi

Insane
00:04:053 (1) - Why stack it underneath this other slider, since it's a NC and a new voice section better space it from 00:03:603 (4) - plays totally better. keeping this on purpose. let' see if i changd my mind later
00:04:952 (4,1) - tbh this blanket can be improved, it's totally off.. fixed

sorry i'm bad to mod low bpm songs, feel free to not give me kudosu if it didn't help much
GL with this!

Momizi wrote:
hi，m4m

[Mochi's Insane]
00:01:129 (4) - not stack will with 00:02:029 (1) - ,should be 188 307 done
00:05:402 (6,1) - jump a liittle to big on soft part,may be 00:05:177 (5,6) - ctrl+G will be better err not that big imo
00:11:249 (1,3) - overlap dont look good nah, keeping this two
00:12:149 (4,1) - same
00:50:380 (1,2) - 1 whistle and 2 remove ok !
01:27:149 - add a spinner to end? aa other diff dont have it

fine，good luck

Yasaija 714 wrote:
Hi~

[Mochi's Insane]
00:02:928 (3,1) - Perhaps stack these? cant due to game setting
00:15:522 (2,4) - Make it a blanket i dont intend blanket there
00:18:446 (3,4) - Blanket is slightly off okay
00:31:714 (3) - Ending hitsound is a bit overwhelming, either make it a ½ slider or reduce its volume not that loud xD
00:58:700 (2,3) - Make it a blanket
Good luck

Lavender wrote:
大师
[Mochi]
00:02:928 (3,1) - stack pls? cant because game setting ._.
00:19:120 (4,1) - blanket well pls? let's see if its better
00:22:718 (2) -
this'll be good-looking imo made a slight changes
[大师]
我被大师的神图震出了内伤，说不出话了

thanks for modding :3

diff

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56676
Countdown: 0
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sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-06-01T10:11:18+00:00

Momizi wrote:
hi，m4m
[sahuang's Hard]
没加视频 加了
00:38:460 (1,2) - 这种尾巴叠一起的overlap不好看，其实不一定要ds，你可以稍微动一下比如这样子https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5272798，好像也不怎么样。。这边我自己改了下，当初做太垃圾
00:59:375 (4) - 往下移一点，更加符合3出来的flow fixed
01:05:222 (1,2) - 和箭头擦边了 fixed
fine，good luck

Yasaija 714 wrote:
Hi~
From Game chat

I am not too good of a mapper so this mod may not be great but...

[sahuang's Hard]
Fixed all,thanks a lot!

Good luck

Lavender wrote:
大师
[sahuang]
00:27:216 (3,4) - 00:56:452 (1,2) - 这个stack误导性太强了，最好是移开，不想移的话最好加上nc
毕竟是hard，不想太简单（虽然和zzh一样跟了ds2333），加了NC
00:37:561 (4) - 怎么不用折返1/2切vocal 1/1没问题。。
00:38:460 (1,2) - 00:56:452 (1,2) - overlap不好看 fixed
00:47:231 (4) - 00:54:428 (4) - 按梗下nc的话这里要下 fixed
00:48:805 (8,1,2) - 节奏比较难，建议用折返带过去
没什么问题

Binguo wrote:
[萨皇耶耶]
00:07:651 (1) - Ctrl+G ok
00:12:823 (4) - 拖到大白线吧没必要拉那么远这边大白线没啥音，拖到蓝线无可厚非
00:17:096 (6) - whi k
01:22:763 (4) - 不要叠一起和前面一组对比起来很违和 fixed
转盘可以不用没转盘没分数差啦

thx for mod

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Version:sahuang's Hard
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2016-06-01T16:48:40+00:00

made some small change on combo color, update!

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2016-06-03T09:18:05+00:00

没总
[Normal]

01:10:170 - 试试这样? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5302423
01:12:419 - 这里也建议节奏改下把01:11:969 (6) - 换成1/2滑条然后那个1/1从01:12:419 - 开始吧
01:20:514 (2,3) - 可以把节奏换下低难度还是不要把滑条尾放那个长白线上吧

[Hard]

00:14:173 - 加个圈?
00:33:288 (3) - 感觉这里不用放1/1滑条啊拆开放1/2吧
00:38:236 - 这里也可以加个圈有个鼓

[Mochi's Insane]

00:24:293 (5,7) - anti jump made the flow bad, consider to move them further?
00:28:341 (4,5) - they are too closed imo, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5302485
00:31:714 (3) - 3/4 slider didn't work well here, it's better to use a 1/1 slider imo, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5302488
00:44:083 (2) - also suggest to move away from previous slider, about 360 340?
01:15:567 (5,1) - try to make the blanket better?

[Insane]

01:24:900 (5,1) - 感觉可以和01:22:988 (3,4,1) - 一样放远点

好了喊我吧

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-06-03T14:33:33+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
没总

[Hard]
00:14:173 - 加个圈?
added
00:33:288 (3) - 感觉这里不用放1/1滑条啊拆开放1/2吧
00:33:288 - 和00:33:738 - 两个鼓音，加上前面那么多1/2，所以决定1/1，顺便00:37:561 (4) - 同理。
00:38:236 - 这里也可以加个圈有个鼓
加啦
好了喊我吧

thx for mod zzh

别搞事

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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2016-06-03T17:19:48+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
没总
[Normal]
01:10:170 - 试试这样? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5302423 hao
01:12:419 - 这里也建议节奏改下把01:11:969 (6) - 换成1/2滑条然后那个1/1从01:12:419 - 开始吧感觉不太好改
01:20:514 (2,3) - 可以把节奏换下低难度还是不要把滑条尾放那个长白线上吧讲道理，感觉这样下对人声更好
[Insane]
01:24:900 (5,1) - 感觉可以和01:22:988 (3,4,1) - 一样放远点hao
好了喊我吧

谢谢z总 xixii

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2016-06-04T03:14:55+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
没总

[Mochi's Insane]
00:24:293 (5,7) - anti jump made the flow bad, consider to move them further? they make a good contact with the 00:25:192 (1,2,3) - when there're few movements imo
00:28:341 (4,5) - they are too closed imo, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5302485 tbh i want to keep the stack
00:31:714 (3) - 3/4 slider didn't work well here, it's better to use a 1/1 slider imo, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5302488 ughh i know, but somehow even if it's skipped the drum, it make good cover with vocals and 00:32:164 (4,5,1) - i like this lol
00:44:083 (2) - also suggest to move away from previous slider, about 360 340? i stacked this with next slider instead
01:15:567 (5,1) - try to make the blanket better? fixed
好了喊我吧

Thanks for modding

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ZZHBOY

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Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2016-06-06T07:39:34+00:00

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Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2016-06-06T15:13:22+00:00

谢谢z总

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2016-06-17T05:05:39+00:00

found metadata

http://aokana-anime.com/products/cd/202/

log

SPOILER

00:39 Mei: hihihi kibbleru
00:40 Mei: can i know if you are free to take a look on my map?
00:40 Mei: or m4m
00:40 Mei: if you are not busy
00:40 Mei: ;w
00:40 Kibbleru: hi
00:40 Kibbleru: whats the map
00:41 *Mei is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/943019 Ray - a-gain]
00:41 Mei: it is a short map
00:41 Mei: feel free if you dont like it
00:41 Mei: *feel free ignore
00:41 Mei: I know most bn have taste to choose what they want to mod
00:42 Kibbleru: is this from the game o_O
00:43 Mei: i think it is from the anime
00:43 Mei: ed
00:43 Kibbleru: o_O
00:43 Kibbleru: p sure this is ending
00:43 *Kibbleru is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/931126 Ray - Kimi Toita Sora]
00:43 Mei: ?!
00:44 Mei: lol i dont even watch this anime
00:44 Mei: but i think this one is ed,because i get the video
00:45 Kibbleru: k can u mod this then https://osu.ppy.sh/s/454893
00:45 Kibbleru: set isnt finished but dw about it
00:46 Kibbleru: just mod the 3 complete diffs or something
00:46 Mei: sure
00:46 Mei: you need it now or later
00:46 Mei: that long diff name
00:47 Kibbleru: just do it whenever u have free time
00:47 Kibbleru: im checking ur map rn xD
00:47 *Kibbleru is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/943019 Ray - a-gain [Insane]]
00:48 Mei: wow
00:48 Mei: thank you!
00:48 Kibbleru: 01:09:495 (3) - can u make this smoother just center that slider point http://puu.sh/pvEi1/81aec3aac7.jpg
00:48 *Mei hugs kibb
00:48 Kibbleru: leme c if i can dt this xD
00:48 Mei: sure
00:49 Kibbleru: holy
00:49 Mei: free pp
00:49 Kibbleru: free pp
00:49 Kibbleru: xd
00:50 Mei: lol
00:50 Mei: i fixed the slider stuff
00:53 Kibbleru: in 2 insanes maybe u can consider adding spinners
00:53 Kibbleru: just so top scores wouldnt be all the same lol
00:53 Kibbleru: and end it here or something 01:29:060 -
00:55 Mei: i guess i cannot fix for Momochikun
00:55 Kibbleru: i think it shud be fine LOL its just a spinner xD
00:55 Kibbleru: unless he told u not to fix stuff for him
00:55 Mei: he didnot say no but also not yes
00:55 Mei: i think it will be fine
00:55 *Kibbleru is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/945604 Ray - a-gain [sahuang's Hard]]
00:56 Kibbleru: 01:04:098 (3) - uh i think whistle should be at slider tail not head
00:56 Kibbleru: 01:09:495 (2) - same
00:56 Kibbleru: 01:13:093 (3) - should be on repeat
00:57 Kibbleru: 01:16:691 - yea
00:57 Kibbleru: 01:18:266 - miss clap
00:57 Kibbleru: 01:20:290 -
00:58 Kibbleru: 00:31:039 - skipping downbeat is weird ><
00:58 Kibbleru: can u fix stuff for lie or should i post
00:59 Mei: i can fixed for him
00:59 Mei: he said it is fine
00:59 Kibbleru: ok
01:00 Kibbleru: fix those and rest are ok
01:00 Kibbleru: did u check metadata?
01:00 Mei: and i also add spiners for the insane
01:00 Mei: ummm
01:00 Mei: no
01:00 Mei: ;w;
01:01 Kibbleru: fuk xD
01:01 Mei: maybe i will try ask some one to do it for me now
01:01 Mei: is it that necessary?
01:01 Kibbleru: metadata?
01:01 Kibbleru: yes :S
01:02 Mei: wait
01:03 Kibbleru: dw found it
01:03 Kibbleru: http://aokana-anime.com/products/cd/202/
01:03 Mei: i am asking Kwan to check for me
01:03 Mei: she said she will check for me now
01:03 Kibbleru: ok
01:03 Kibbleru: well get her to doublecheck too i guess xD
01:04 Mei: btw do you think if i need to add "again" into tags?
01:04 Kibbleru: hm
01:04 Kibbleru: u can do that yeah
01:04 Kibbleru: u can also add 'ed' for ending
01:05 Kibbleru: i will post this log then update and ill recheck then

Mei

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Topic Starter

Mei 2016-06-17T05:12:00+00:00

update

metadata check by KwaN

2016-06-17 01:01 Mei: 骏马！
2016-06-17 01:01 IamKwaN: ACTION is away: 在下骏喵，有何贵干
2016-06-17 01:01 Mei: ?!?
2016-06-17 01:01 IamKwaN: ?!?!
2016-06-17 01:01 Mei: qiuqiu
2016-06-17 01:01 Mei: ballball
2016-06-17 01:02 IamKwaN: sha
2016-06-17 01:02 Mei: 我要飞了，但是kibb说不查meta不敢飞
2016-06-17 01:02 Mei: 能不能帮我快速查下
2016-06-17 01:02 Mei: 差metadata吗不麻烦的啊
2016-06-17 01:02 Mei: 麻烦就留到晚点好了
2016-06-17 01:02 IamKwaN: 好
2016-06-17 01:03 IamKwaN: 理啊啊l
2016-06-17 01:03 IamKwaN: 来啊
2016-06-17 01:03 Mei: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/945604 Ray - a-gain [sahuang's Hard]]
2016-06-17 01:03 Mei: 谢谢！！
2016-06-17 01:03 Mei: 君大人
2016-06-17 01:05 IamKwaN: 就这里回覆算了
2016-06-17 01:05 IamKwaN: http://puu.sh/pvF5Z/8cb324d1e8.png from http://aokana-anime.com/products/cd/202/
2016-06-17 01:05 IamKwaN: http://db2.nbcuni.co.jp/contents/hp0004/list.php?CNo=4&AgentProCon=32729
2016-06-17 01:05 Mei: 君大人！！！
2016-06-17 01:05 Mei: 爱你
2016-06-17 01:06 IamKwaN: http://nbcuni-music.com/ray/contents/hp0004/index00170000.html
2016-06-17 01:06 IamKwaN: 都对啊
2016-06-17 01:06 IamKwaN: OST没tv size
2016-06-17 01:06 Mei: 不用说了

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2016-06-17T05:22:43+00:00

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Mei

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Mei 2016-06-17T05:24:04+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
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thankyoukibbleru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-06-17T05:27:02+00:00

对话下半部分我觉得是时候公开

2016-06-17 13:07 Mei: 不用说了
2016-06-17 13:07 Mei: 爱你
2016-06-17 13:07 IamKwaN: eh
2016-06-17 13:07 Mei: 你说，想要多少钱
2016-06-17 13:07 IamKwaN: 好吧
2016-06-17 13:07 IamKwaN: 我想要两千万
2016-06-17 13:07 IamKwaN: 美金
2016-06-17 13:07 Mei: 祝你工作顺利
2016-06-17 13:08 IamKwaN: 艹 欺骗感情
2016-06-17 13:08 Mei: ?
2016-06-17 13:08 Mei: 不好好工作怎么有钱？
2016-06-17 13:09 IamKwaN: 我还是学生
2016-06-17 13:09 IamKwaN: 去援交好了
2016-06-17 13:09 Mei: 。。
2016-06-17 13:09 IamKwaN: [那个艹的表情]
2016-06-17 13:09 Mei: 祝你生意兴隆？
2016-06-17 13:10 IamKwaN: 谢谢

恭喜qua 这位客官别忘了付款

sahuang

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sahuang 2016-06-17T05:33:08+00:00

Grats

IamKwaN wrote:

2016-06-17 13:07 Mei: 不用说了
2016-06-17 13:07 Mei: 爱你
2016-06-17 13:07 IamKwaN: eh
2016-06-17 13:07 Mei: 你说，想要多少钱
2016-06-17 13:07 IamKwaN: 好吧
2016-06-17 13:07 IamKwaN: 我想要两千万
2016-06-17 13:07 IamKwaN: 美金
2016-06-17 13:07 Mei: 祝你工作顺利
2016-06-17 13:08 IamKwaN: 艹 欺骗感情
2016-06-17 13:08 Mei: ?
2016-06-17 13:08 Mei: 不好好工作怎么有钱？
2016-06-17 13:09 IamKwaN: 我还是学生
2016-06-17 13:09 IamKwaN: 去援交好了
2016-06-17 13:09 Mei: 。。
2016-06-17 13:09 IamKwaN: [那个艹的表情]
2016-06-17 13:09 Mei: 祝你生意兴隆？
2016-06-17 13:10 IamKwaN: 谢谢

恭喜qua 这位客官别忘了付款

/KwaN slaps

Mei

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Mei 2016-06-17T05:36:23+00:00

我还是个宝宝，不要污了我的萌妹图

puxtu

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puxtu 2016-06-17T07:09:21+00:00

nice spread yo

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