Nekomata Master - Silence · forum

K1ayton

Joined May 2015

K1ayton 2016-05-08T07:50:04+00:00

Alright. A newbie mod is here.

[Easy]
00:16:957 (1,2) - I don't think that this pattern is clearly readable for newbies. 3/2 rhythm is very similar to 3/4 so you can change polarity correctly. I think you can look here t/55282. I think you should keep distance 1/1 between notes. (newbies get 100s and 50s here). It repeats several times in your map
00:32:385 (1) - I don't think that NC is needed here
00:50:557 (2,3) - Align them
01:23:814 (2) - A strong beat is on the end of the slider. How about make it clickable?
01:23:814 (2) - On the background of 1/1 beat 3/2 is not the best solution. Newbies would get 50 here.
01:33:071 Imo you should end a spinner here

[Normal]
I always think twice before setting 0.9 as a main spacing since it makes a map a bit boring. And I suggest you doing the same
00:11:300 (2) - How about make this rhythm like here? 00:09:242 (2) - Imo it fits better
00:51:757 A clickable object should be here since a strong beat is here
00:52:957 (3) - If you replace it with a 1/2 slider it would fit the rhythm perfectly
00:52:957 (3) - Overmapping. Otherwise I don't understand what does it follow
00:59:985 I don't think you should miss strong beats

[Hard]
00:08:557 (7) - ctrl+g?
The hard diff is clear

[Insane]
00:33:071 I think you should make this object clickable
00:58:100 (1,2,3,1) - These sliders do not follow the rhythm. The music and these objects do not match each other
01:29:985 (1) - How about map this gap instead of setting a slider here?
01:32:042 And putting a clickable object here is the best solution

[N0thingSpecial's Another]
00:08:557 (4) - Slider (2) overlaps a reverse arrow. It makes it a bit confusing
00:04:528 (4,1) - Space it properly for better play
01:17:642 (1) - Nazi: This slider is ugly :c

[Shyo's Insane]
00:16:614 (6) - I think NC should be here since music changes very fast
00:44:385 (3,4,5,6,7) - How about a perfect pentagon?

[Exile-'s Blossom]
00:19:957 (4) - A bit overmapped imo
Pretty clean

Mapset is very beatiful. The flow is good. That's why most of my suggestions are about rhythm

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2016-05-08T12:52:39+00:00

Hi !

[Easy]
Fixed NC and spinner. About rhythm : even if it's easy it can be challenging. I mean, it's a rhythm game after all, they have to click at the right moment.

[Normal]
00:11:300 (2) - How about make this rhythm like here? 00:09:242 (2) - Imo it fits better - fixed
About the strong beat : it's not on red tick but on yellow tick and I don't want to overload

[Hard]
Didn't fix. I think it brings some emphasize to 00:08:728 (1) -

[Insane]
00:33:071 I think you should make this object clickable - fixed
I mapped the spinner part

Thank you !

Exile-

Elite Storyboarder

449 posts

Joined April 2013

Exile- 2016-05-08T13:06:19+00:00

K1ayton wrote:
[Exile-'s Blossom]
00:19:957 (4) - A bit overmapped imo

There's a little drum sound here

N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2016-05-08T13:12:39+00:00

K1ayton wrote:
[N0thingSpecial's Another]
00:08:557 (4) - Slider (2) overlaps a reverse arrow. It makes it a bit confusing did something
00:04:528 (4,1) - Space it properly for better play perfectly fine fot his difficulty
01:17:642 (1) - Nazi: This slider is ugly :c welllllllllll eh did nothing

Shyotamaze

917 posts

Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2016-05-08T15:56:26+00:00

K1ayton wrote:
[Shyo's Insane]
00:16:614 (6) - I think NC should be here since music changes very fast Fixed
00:44:385 (3,4,5,6,7) - How about a perfect pentagon? 00:44:900 (5) - is stacked with 00:42:157 (4) - , 00:45:071 (6) - with 00:44:214 (2) - and 00:45:242 (7) - with 00:44:385 (3) - so it would ruin my pattern

Thanks!

猫叉Master

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PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

PlasticMemor 2016-05-09T23:52:05+00:00

short m4m from your queue

[Insane]

00:00:500 (1) - i would move this a little bit upward
00:11:814 (5,6) - nice crossover
00:25:185 (1,2,3) - the distance is different from 1 to 2 than 2 to 3
00:32:214 (3,4) - if this is supposed to be overlap, it's not
00:45:757 (1,2) - spread these out a little
00:53:471 (3) - ctrl+j
00:59:471 (2,3,4,5) - move this pattern up a little
01:15:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fix this stream
01:31:528 (10,11) - this doesn't sound right

[Shyo's Insane]
00:01:014 (2,3,4) - distance is uneven
00:06:328 (6,4) - overlap?
00:08:557 (9,1) - ^
00:41:642 (1,2,3) - this sounds weird than 00:41:128 (7,8,9)
00:55:871 (9,1) - overlap?
00:56:900 (4,5) - ^
01:01:700 (6) - make this equal to distance from 5 to 7
01:11:471 (5) - you can hitsound this to a clap or finish
01:12:500 (1) - ^
01:16:614 (1) - ^
01:28:270 (5,6,7) - this weird dip?
01:32:042 (4,5,6,7) - hitsound these?

[Another]
00:01:528 (1,3) - overlap?
00:08:557 (4,1) - this doesn't look good
01:05:557 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this shape doesn't transists right
01:32:042 (1,1,1) - unnecessary NC

[Blossom]
00:08:557 (7) - whistle off
00:11:642 - add a note here
00:14:214 (6,7,8,9) - spread this out a little more
00:29:300 (1,2,3) - overlap
00:57:414 (2) - whistle off
01:05:642 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - shape?
01:15:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - spread this out a little bit more

Last edited by PlasticMemor 2016-05-10T22:16:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2016-05-10T15:39:23+00:00

Hello, fixed the failed overlap.

N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2016-05-12T17:18:08+00:00

PlasticMemor wrote:
[Another]
00:01:528 (1,3) - overlap? intentional
00:08:557 (4,1) - this doesn't look good suggestion? compacted it for now
01:05:557 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this shape doesn't transists right did something
01:32:042 (1,1,1) - unnecessary NC 01:32:042 (1) - this one is needed for consistent NC pattern, 01:32:385 (1,1) - cause Polarity, NC for better read

UPDATE

Shyotamaze

917 posts

Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2016-05-12T19:05:45+00:00

PlasticMemor wrote:
[Shyo's Insane]
00:01:014 (2,3,4) - distance is uneven Intended to emphasize
00:06:328 (6,4) - overlap? Remapped that part because it was a bit weird
00:08:557 (9,1) - ^ Fine and I must do it because they are so close in the timeline
00:41:642 (1,2,3) - this sounds weird than 00:41:128 (7,8,9) How? It follows the music
00:55:871 (9,1) - overlap? Same as before
00:56:900 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:01:700 (6) - make this equal to distance from 5 to 7 01:01:871 (7) - Needs more emphasize
01:11:471 (5) - you can hitsound this to a clap or finish My diff is not hitsounded yet, since idk if someone will hitsound it in another way I'll leave it as it is now
01:12:500 (1) - ^ ^
01:16:614 (1) - ^ ^
01:28:270 (5,6,7) - this weird dip? Intended
01:32:042 (4,5,6,7) - hitsound these? Same as before

Thanks!

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Exile-

Elite Storyboarder

449 posts

Joined April 2013

Exile- 2016-05-12T20:27:49+00:00

PlasticMemor wrote:
short m4m from your queue

[Blossom]
00:08:557 (7) - whistle off I think it fits
00:11:642 - add a note here not audible enough
00:14:214 (6,7,8,9) - spread this out a little more Why not
00:29:300 (1,2,3) - overlap On purpose
00:57:414 (2) - whistle off Its audible enough to get the whistle
01:05:642 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - shape? This is a cool shape
01:15:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - spread this out a little bit more Its fine imo

Take my energy! http://puu.sh/oPBL8/5c8ce0f569.txt

Zerss

730 posts

Joined December 2013

Zerss 2016-05-14T14:24:18+00:00

hey~
m4m

General

The background is >1366*768. Use this one instead.
You should put 猫叉Master as the artist name in every diffs, not only the Hard diff.
I've checked every diffs and there is no storyboards, you should disable Widescreen Support.
Add hitsounds.

Easy

00:06:671 (1,2) - à mon avis, cet endroit est un peu maladroit, jusqu'à maintenant tu as appuyé le premier et le troisième temps, je vois pas pourquoi ici tu appuyerais le premier et le second, ce serait plus judicieux de faire cette partie sous la forme slider/circle
00:14:900 (1,2) - La distance entre la fin de (1) et le début de (2) et les fins de (1) et (2) semble un peu inconsistant, tu peux essayer d'avoir la même distance ici, au moins juste éviter de faire presque un overlap entre ces deux fins.
00:31:357 (1,2) - La position des sliders rend pas super bien à mon avis. Perso j'ai pas trouvé de choses qui vont bien, mais en transformant (2) en cercle, ça va tout aussi bien vu que à ce moment là, les nappes se coupent.
00:49:871 - Les NCs sont un peu inconsistants ici à mon avis.

Une diff sympa!

Normal

00:15:928 (3) - Je m'étais déjà fait tapper sur les doigts pour avoir fait un truc du genre, apparemment avoir des éléments de sliders qui s'overlappent trop est interdit. Demande à un QAT ou à un BN, il saura mieux te dire que moi. De plus, le (3) overlap légèrement avec le prochain (1).
00:21:071 (5) - & 00:23:128 (7) - NC manquant.
00:24:842 (10,11) - Jusqu'à maintenant, tu fais ce rythme avec un slider, pourquoi le fait tu avec un cercle?

Un jeu sur le rythme impéccable; exactement ce que j'attend d'une map Normal!

Hard

00:14:042 (5,1) - Petit overlap, tu deverais décaler le (1) plus à gauche ou rajouter de la distance pour le rendre moins "horrible"; de plus le blanket n'est pas parfait.
00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - Confus à cause du stacking, tu deverais placer les cercles un peu plus en haut à gauche pour simuler comme un stacking, ainsi les objets seraient mieux visible.
01:04:957 (6) - La fin sort de la zone de jeu.

Une diff cool.

Insane

00:00:500 (1) - ça serait sympa d'arrondir la fin, comme ça, ça accentue l'arrivée de la prochaine note, pareil pour les prochaines
00:03:071 (2) - DS avec l'ancien objet un peu trop faible à mon avis.
00:10:785 (1) - ça relève que de mon avis, mais je n'aime pas quand la tête et la fin se touche, essaye peut-être d'éloigner le point rouge.
00:18:671 (7,8,1) - Un DS un peu trop accentué par rapport aux anciens
00:41:642 (1,2,3) - Tourne (1) et (2) comme (3).
01:29:985 (5,8,12) - NC manquants, n'oublie pas de retier 01:32:385 (1) -

Diff très jouable et amusant!

Shyo's Insane

00:59:128 (5) - Essaye de placer le point rouge plus au centre du slider, ce serait cool d'accentuer la courbe des deux parties du slider aussi, pareil pour 00:37:528 (1) - et les autres
00:42:671 (6,7,8) - Avant tu avais un DS de 1.0x et là tu as 0.75x. Y a-t-il une raison? De plus, à 01:04:271 (6,7,8) - tu as 0.6x de DS.
01:27:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - La courbe de ce stream à l'air très bizarre; ce serait mieux de le refaire à mon avis.
01:31:871 (3,7) - Ce serait sympa de faire overlapper (7) avec (3), ça éviteras d'avoir un DS trop élevé.

Diff sympa

N0thingSpecial's Another

00:33:071 (1,1,1) - Spamming NC? That's not a good idea because of the HP imo, same for the others.
00:50:557 (1) - Muting objects -even objects end- is not allowed, or not even recommended, that's really confusing to play.

Nice diff!

Nice map! Gogo for rank!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2016-05-14T15:09:14+00:00

Zerss wrote:

hey~
m4m

    General
The background is >1366*768. Use this one instead.
You should put 猫叉Master as the artist name in every diffs, not only the Hard diff.
I've checked every diffs and there is no storyboards, you should disable Widescreen Support.
Add hitsounds.
Fixed

    Easy
00:06:671 (1,2) - à mon avis, cet endroit est un peu maladroit, jusqu'à maintenant tu as appuyé le premier et le troisième temps, je vois pas pourquoi ici tu appuyerais le premier et le second, ce serait plus judicieux de faire cette partie sous la forme slider/circle - L'instrument me paraît plus puissant
00:14:900 (1,2) - La distance entre la fin de (1) et le début de (2) et les fins de (1) et (2) semble un peu inconsistant, tu peux essayer d'avoir la même distance ici, au moins juste éviter de faire presque un overlap entre ces deux fins.
00:31:357 (1,2) - La position des sliders rend pas super bien à mon avis. Perso j'ai pas trouvé de choses qui vont bien, mais en transformant (2) en cercle, ça va tout aussi bien vu que à ce moment là, les nappes se coupent. - Certes, les débutants sont débutants, mais pas imbéciles (;
00:49:871 - Les NCs sont un peu inconsistants ici à mon avis.
Une diff sympa!
    Normal
00:15:928 (3) - Je m'étais déjà fait tapper sur les doigts pour avoir fait un truc du genre, apparemment avoir des éléments de sliders qui s'overlappent trop est interdit. Demande à un QAT ou à un BN, il saura mieux te dire que moi. De plus, le (3) overlap légèrement avec le prochain (1). - Je préfère attendre
00:21:071 (5) - & 00:23:128 (7) - NC manquant.
00:24:842 (10,11) - Jusqu'à maintenant, tu fais ce rythme avec un slider, pourquoi le fait tu avec un cercle? - C'est quasiment le seul instrument qu'on entend
Un jeu sur le rythme impéccable; exactement ce que j'attend d'une map Normal!
    Hard
00:14:042 (5,1) - Petit overlap, tu deverais décaler le (1) plus à gauche ou rajouter de la distance pour le rendre moins "horrible"; de plus le blanket n'est pas parfait. - Le flow prime sur le reste
00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - Confus à cause du stacking, tu deverais placer les cercles un peu plus en haut à gauche pour simuler comme un stacking, ainsi les objets seraient mieux visible. - Honnêtement j'ai eu pas mal de testplay et pas un seul miss. Ca ajoute de la difficulté en terme de reading
01:04:957 (6) - La fin sort de la zone de jeu.
Une diff cool.
[notice]
    Insane
00:00:500 (1) - ça serait sympa d'arrondir la fin, comme ça, ça accentue l'arrivée de la prochaine note, pareil pour les prochaines - Mouais, est-ce que ça change tant que ça le mouvement du curseur ? :/
00:03:071 (2) - DS avec l'ancien objet un peu trop faible à mon avis. - J'ai pas voulu mettre de DS trop haut à cause du changement de rythme
00:10:785 (1) - ça relève que de mon avis, mais je n'aime pas quand la tête et la fin se touche, essaye peut-être d'éloigner le point rouge.
00:18:671 (7,8,1) - Un DS un peu trop accentué par rapport aux anciens
00:41:642 (1,2,3) - Tourne (1) et (2) comme (3). - Non, il y a un son significatif qui invite à casser le flow
01:29:985 (5,8,12) - NC manquants, n'oublie pas de retier 01:32:385 (1) -
Diff très jouable et amusant!

Merci beaucoup (:

Zerss

730 posts

Joined December 2013

Zerss 2016-05-14T15:14:50+00:00

6th wrote:
00:00:500 (1) - ça serait sympa d'arrondir la fin, comme ça, ça accentue l'arrivée de la prochaine note, pareil pour les prochaines - Mouais, est-ce que ça change tant que ça le mouvement du curseur ? :/

C'est censé changer visuellement; c'est plus explicite -pour l’œil- de continuer dans la courbure.

N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2016-05-14T18:30:29+00:00

Zerss wrote:
N0thingSpecial's Another
00:33:071 (1,1,1) - Spamming NC? That's not a good idea because of the HP imo, same for the others. k dad
00:50:557 (1) - Muting objects -even objects end- is not allowed, or not even recommended, that's really confusing to play. slightly increased volume to 15%
Nice diff!

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Shyotamaze

917 posts

Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2016-05-15T15:42:04+00:00

Zerss wrote:
Shyo's Insane
00:59:128 (5) - Essaye de placer le point rouge plus au centre du slider, ce serait cool d'accentuer la courbe des deux parties du slider aussi, pareil pour 00:37:528 (1) - et les autres Fixed
00:42:671 (6,7,8) - Avant tu avais un DS de 1.0x et là tu as 0.75x. Y a-t-il une raison? De plus, à 01:04:271 (6,7,8) - tu as 0.6x de DS. Fixed
01:27:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - La courbe de ce stream à l'air très bizarre; ce serait mieux de le refaire à mon avis. C'est fait exprès mais bon vu toutes les plaintes je changerai peut-être plus tard
01:31:871 (3,7) - Ce serait sympa de faire overlapper (7) avec (3), ça éviteras d'avoir un DS trop élevé. Fixed
Diff sympa

Merci ! Au fait faudrait mettre le mapset en pending non ?

6th is love, 6th is life

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70,307,75928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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418,241,77128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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137,181,80214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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348,164,80557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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247,243,81242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,130,81414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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332,134,82442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,262,82614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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113,19,92900,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Last edited by Shyotamaze 2016-05-16T19:57:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2016-05-16T04:00:50+00:00

Welp might aswell

Exile

00:01:014 (2,3,1) - this feels kinda clustered and untidy, either curve/angle up the slider, or make the slider end for a triangles with 00:00:500 (1,2) -

00:16:614 (1,3) - better blanket?

00:27:071 (5,6,1) - I suggest manual stack them to fit in the slider like this, so it looks more tidy

01:00:157 (1,2,3) - I know it's spiral outward flow pattern, but I think you're ignoring the pattern 01:01:185 (4,5) - by doing so, I personally would prefer this

01:05:557 - I think there should be a note hear if you're mapping the drums

01:15:414 (5,6,7) - I think rotating this anti clockwise 90 degree would make it less awkwardly too flowy

01:06:328 (1) - is it even legal to end the slider this late?

N0thingSpecial

Kill yourself

shyo ma man

00:09:757 (4,5,6) - I suggest doing some anti flow, to break up the linear/oval flow have you going on, Like This, and I suggest looking at your map again and see if you used a certain type of flow too much, other wise players would get speed strain

00:37:528 (1) - just move the red anchor down a bit so it levels with the stream, looks tidier imo

00:41:128 (7,1) - not sure if it matter or not but blanket

00:41:128 (7,8,2,3) - I think you need to start implementing more variable spacing

01:09:414 (5,6,7,1) - I think for this pattern to work, 01:09:414 (5,7) - these two can't be parallel otherwise 01:10:442 (1) - would look very out of place, OR change the shape of 01:10:442 (1) - so that it doesn't relate to the two previous sliders

01:22:785 (1) - just make this slider a bit more curvy like this

01:27:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would suggest moving 01:27:928 (1,2,3,4,5) - down so that 01:28:270 (5) - would be straight with the slider at the end, rather than in between, also imo streams in 4s looks tidier

01:31:014 (1,2) - why not just copy the shape to make it more tidy?

01:32:042 (4) - NC? idk I'm not good at NC yet lol

I'm a pleb so I suck at modding lower diffs sorry 6th I tried

Frey

1,205 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2016-05-16T15:34:32+00:00

please check my mod about General part again, Thanks @6th

DreaM117er

1,596 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2016-05-16T16:29:08+00:00

If any problem, call me back.

Sounds: http://puu.sh/oU4Sy/236a64154e.rar

Heart Attack

151 posts

Joined December 2013

Heart Attack 2016-05-16T18:27:44+00:00

м4м

ok, so there's a lot of diffs in this one so I will be brief

Blossom

OD=9????
01:29:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - doing that twice if kinda annoying considering the fact that it's a super boring jump, maybe you can be a bit more creative with that? add some geometry stars or something.
Also the 1/6s here 00:55:871 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - feel very nasty, I suggest you subsitute them with 1/6 reverse slider.

Another

01:10:100 (4,5) - That doesn't feel right.
01:15:242 (4,5,1) - I didn't see that much spacing in the hardest diff.
01:32:728 (1) - place that somewhere else and maybe you can stack it with 2

Shyo

01:32:042 (4,5) - new combo for both of these
something I noticed throughout the whole map is that nothing interesting was happening it felt like a hard with more spacing.
also, lower the OD 7-7.5 max

Insane

OD=7, AR=8,5/8,8
00:16:614 (4,5) - you never stacked like that later
00:32:214 (3,4) - that's weird
00:45:757 (1,2) - so is that

Hard

00:35:471 (1,2,3) - apart from these, the whole map seems flawless

GL with this and sorry for the late reply T.T

Exile-

Elite Storyboarder

449 posts

Joined April 2013

Exile- 2016-05-16T18:45:26+00:00

N0thingSpecial wrote:
Welp might aswell

Exile
00:01:014 (2,3,1) - this feels kinda clustered and untidy, either curve/angle up the slider, or make the slider end for a triangles with 00:00:500 (1,2) -
sure

00:16:614 (1,3) - better blanket? okay #blankettihngs

00:27:071 (5,6,1) - I suggest manual stack them to fit in the slider like this, so it looks more tidy I didnt use any manual stacks so I wont use since it would be inconsistent

01:00:157 (1,2,3) - I know it's spiral outward flow pattern, but I think you're ignoring the pattern 01:01:185 (4,5) - by doing so, I personally would prefer this Idk how it ignores these next notes but your pattern flows worse to 01:01:185 (4) - imo

01:05:557 - I think there should be a note hear if you're mapping the drums Drums are clearly starting from 01:05:642 (2) -

01:15:414 (5,6,7) - I think rotating this anti clockwise 90 degree would make it less awkwardly too flowy I dont think so but I curved it a bit to improve the flow

01:06:328 (1) - is it even legal to end the slider this late? Its illegal in 33 countries since its not a slider

Heart Attack wrote:
OD=9???? Why not? more pp
01:29:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - doing that twice if kinda annoying considering the fact that it's a super boring jump, maybe you can be a bit more creative with that? add some geometry stars or something. Well, its not boring if people fail at this
Also the 1/6s here 00:55:871 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - feel very nasty, I suggest you subsitute them with 1/6 reverse slider. Naah, this sound is very streamy imo

http://puu.sh/oUdP4/a22ae3c939.txt <-----

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2016-05-16T19:38:42+00:00

No change, sorry ! And fixed again General section from Frey, thanks!

DreaM117er wrote:
If any problem, call me back.

Sounds: http://puu.sh/oU4Sy/236a64154e.rar

Thanks a lot!

Shyotamaze

917 posts

Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2016-05-16T20:32:09+00:00

N0thingSpecial wrote:
N0thingSpecial
Kill yourself I agree

shyo ma man
00:09:757 (4,5,6) - I suggest doing some anti flow, to break up the linear/oval flow have you going on, Like This, and I suggest looking at your map again and see if you used a certain type of flow too much, other wise players would get speed strain idk it seems fine for me

00:37:528 (1) - just move the red anchor down a bit so it levels with the stream, looks tidier imo It was fixed but 6th didn't update rip

00:41:128 (7,1) - not sure if it matter or not but blanket wow such nazi

00:41:128 (7,8,2,3) - I think you need to start implementing more variable spacing People told me to keep the DS consistent for that kind of thing and it's better imo

01:09:414 (5,6,7,1) - I think for this pattern to work, 01:09:414 (5,7) - these two can't be parallel otherwise 01:10:442 (1) - would look very out of place, OR change the shape of 01:10:442 (1) - so that it doesn't relate to the two previous sliders Changed the curve of 1

01:22:785 (1) - just make this slider a bit more curvy like this It's a blanket

01:27:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would suggest moving 01:27:928 (1,2,3,4,5) - down so that 01:28:270 (5) - would be straight with the slider at the end, rather than in between, also imo streams in 4s looks tidier I tried to fix it I swear I'm not making this kind of stream for a long time no one likes it

01:31:014 (1,2) - why not just copy the shape to make it more tidy? Fixed

01:32:042 (4) - NC? idk I'm not good at NC yet lol Fixed

I'm a pleb so I suck at modding lower diffs sorry 6th I tried git gud

Thanks dude

Heart Attack wrote:
Shyo
01:32:042 (4,5) - new combo for both of these NCed 4
something I noticed throughout the whole map is that nothing interesting was happening it felt like a hard with more spacing.
also, lower the OD 7-7.5 max 7.5

Thanks!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2016-05-16T21:16:48+00:00

I'm a pleb so I suck at modding lower diffs sorry 6th I tried

I hate you

Updated. Everything should be fine now

DeletedUser_6181859

DeletedUser_6181859 2016-05-17T17:01:09+00:00

Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.

Song and beatmaps

None here!

Easy

00:04:614 (1,2) - i think it's strange overlap
00:31:357 (1,2) - okay, this is very strange overlap

Normal

00:06:671 (1,3) - maybe identical?
00:15:928 (3) - it's rankable?
Nice diff!

Hard

00:09:757 (4,5,6,7) - doubles is boring
00:25:185 (1) - make sliderpoints away from each other
00:49:357 (5) - ^

00:24:842 (5,6,1) - strange but good:D
00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - i don't like patterns like this, can you fix?
01:01:871 (6) - nc
01:26:900 (1) - remove nc or nc in 01:26:385 (3)
01:32:728 (2,3) - maybe jump here?

Insane

00:32:214 (3,4) - same as in Hard
00:36:500 (5,6) - stack?
00:52:271 (2,4,5) - this stack is so hard

Good luck!
{end of mod}

N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2016-05-26T08:01:36+00:00

Minor update btw: http://puu.sh/p5xXy/4aa593a133.osu

CookieBite

1,486 posts

Joined August 2014

CookieBite 2016-05-26T12:44:27+00:00

Hello there, from your queue.
*M4M

[Easy]
00:12:842 (1,2) - blanket improve

nice difficulty

[Normal]
nice

[Hard]
AR is too high, make it ~7
00:35:814 (2,3) - unclear, make the slider stack with the circle

kk for me the mapset is good
shoot star
gl with your map

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2016-05-26T13:52:16+00:00

Fixed the blanket, thank you.

Prismetical

274 posts

Joined October 2015

Prismetical 2016-05-26T15:16:59+00:00

Yoyoyo! ♥M4M♥

Easy

00:10:785 (1) - put this right there so we have a triangle formation, looks better

00:10:785 (1,2) - stack sliderendings?, doesn't look good when overlapping
00:15:928 (2) - I would prefer this slider ending either here 00:16:271 - or there 00:16:528 - , at the moment it sounds wrong
00:23:128 (1) - flip the slider and put it deeper to avoid an overlap with 00:25:185 (1) -

00:31:357 (1,2) - good idea, execution is not that good, some ideas:

00:43:700 (1,1) - ugly overlap
00:47:814 (1,1) - ^
00:57:414 (4,2) - stack
01:01:185 (2,3,1) - triangle formation
01:12:156 (3,3) - ugly overlap
01:22:785 (1,1) - ^

Normal

00:04:957 (2) - rotate by -3°
00:13:185 (2,1,2) - ugly overlaps
00:46:442 (6) - NC
00:58:614 (2,2) - stack
01:01:700 (5,2) - ^
01:14:214 (4,4) - ugly overlap

Hard

00:19:528 (2,4) - isn't stacked properly
00:28:271 (4,1) - dislike that overlay
00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - hard to read
This thing is beautiful! *-*

That's all I can find! Hope I could help!
Waiting for your mod! ^.^
Good luck!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2016-05-26T16:23:38+00:00

Fixed 1 NC, 1 stack and 1 triangle. Thanks!

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,812 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2016-05-26T23:23:46+00:00

...

BLOSSOm
i wish you paid attention to how stacks appear ingame:( like there are at least 20 times stacks get fucked which kinda defeats the purpose of perfect stacks (being readability/neatness). your best friend pls get along
00:02:385 (4,5,1) - 00:10:700 (7) - 1/6 tho like half these triples in the intro are 1/4 and half arent

oh and 00:08:557 (7) - ya
00:07:700 (4,7) - 00:48:842 (1) - since your spacing isnt indicating 1/1 vs 1/2, comboing is your best bet to make this somewhat intuitive gl
00:16:614 (1,2,3) -
00:50:785 (5) - gonna need a way to make these actually um understandable as 1/3. like either through super strict spacing, dumb comboing, or sliders (ends or even thisnonsense are more understandable). constant large variable spacing works when things are all 1/2 apart, but mixing in other snaps = murder.
aside from those things the map is nice tho

nothin
00:02:385 (4) - what i said on the last diff gg
00:16:614 (2) - nc to show 1/1 and not 1/2 its a thing
00:39:585 (1,2) - beter follow through slider
00:50:814 (2) - theeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee your whole section here is structured around a wrong snap for all these 1/3 things. reading what i said to the other guy could benefit

shYO
00:18:842 (9,10,1) - literallyfirstpoint on every diff so far read those
00:50:814 (4) - and last point on nothing's diff pls

insane
when replying to mods, try to explain why u didnt fix things. that's how modders learn how2modbetter (and other things but this isnt a lecture)
00:02:557 (1,2) - kinda needs mroe spacing. if you're going for antijump stuff, dedicate to it with more of an overlap and be consistent about it elsewhere
00:45:757 (1,2) - similarly more spacing bueno. can easily expand the whole symmetrical thing with 00:44:728 (5,6,1,2) - so that 1 and 2 have at least some spacing
00:56:985 (3) - 1/6 tho
also the way you ignore the loud 1/3 bell things like 00:58:785 (3) - in this section hurts but its technically rankable since you're not missnapping anything. still tho getting those 1/3s on sliderends even is strong. dont do what the other 3 difficulties above this do tho since they are screwed
01:10:785 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - something to think about is how close you make objects within any patterns. like 01:08:385 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 01:09:757 (2,3,4,5) - have objects like decent distances apart which looks great, but when objects are like 2 pixels from each other you're making stuff super crowded

hard
00:08:557 (7) - 00:56:900 (3) - cant really undermap things as wrongly snapped for the sake of lowering difficulty

just going with 1/2 and ignoring the piano thing is best u can do
01:02:214 (7) - your 2 measure comboing gets off by a measure here lol

normal
00:15:928 (3) - sliderbody overlapping itself is kinda a difficulty element you shouldnt introduce til harder stuff lol. understanding when to click 00:16:957 (1) - is ambiguous since scrubs cant tell when 00:15:928 (3) - is going to reach the sliderend

easy
00:31:357 (1,2) - full body overlaps arent gonna work on an easy dood. gonna need clearer placement
01:28:957 (1) - ending 1/2 earlier so it's on the actual last sound >>>>>>>

m117
01:26:214 - clap

...

rs_fadeaway

264 posts

Joined May 2010

rs_fadeaway 2016-05-27T00:58:20+00:00

Hello m4m, and im glad to mod nekomata master's song)

[insane]
00:10:785 (1) - the angle of slider is tOO sharp , but music doesn't show this，maybe a curve will be better
00:11:300 (2,3,4,5) - im sure this pattern can be improved
00:38:214 (5,6) - i know you want to show the emphasis here， but change the direction not good idea，the music here still same as 1,2 and 3,4. Try to increase the DS between 1-2 , 3-4 ,5-6
00:49:871 (1) - rotate this slider 5° looks better
00:54:671 (3) - copy 00:55:700 (3) - and ctrl+g
01:02:214 (1) - blanket better
01:04:785 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this flow seems not good，especially the part of stream
01:15:071 (3,4,5) - increase the DS pls， its a peak of this song.
01:12:500 (1,2,3,4) - this slider just not very suit of this part, try make a slider like >
01:31:357 (3,4) - DS ++
01:31:528 (4) - dont understand why slider here,the sound on 01:31:700 is clear

[shyo's insane]
00:16:957 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - music here is quite same repeat,you can think of some pattern to fit this
00:49:871 (1,5,1) - used too many long sliders , its boring.
00:46:442 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - try to make flow not so sharp.
01:20:042 (6,7,8,9) - increase the DS, but not decrease
01:21:071 (2,3,4,5) - same ^
This diff is worse than Insane. its hard to say this have unrank problems, but need to improve flow and pattern, to let players have more fun.

[NothingSpecial's another]
00:05:814 (2,3,4,5) - this is fun, but just suggest replace 4 a little upon 1
00:08:557 (4) - rarote a little will better
00:39:585 (1,2) - increase DS
01:10:100 (4,5) - i feel not do this in kiai time,just separate them.
01:32:728 (1,2) - this too far,even in EX is not like this

[Exile-'s]
00:08:385 (6) - move this to x363y333 looks better
00:16:614 (1,2,3) - something goes wrong here

its good, cant get more

GL

N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2016-05-27T01:02:20+00:00

pishifat wrote:
nothin
00:02:385 (4) - what i said on the last diff gg ok
00:16:614 (2) - nc to show 1/1 and not 1/2 its a thing ok
00:39:585 (1,2) - beter follow through slider did something else
00:50:814 (2) - theeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee your whole section here is structured around a wrong snap for all these 1/3 things. reading what i said to the other guy could benefit EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHKILLMEPLZHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH sure I guess

rs_fadeaway wrote:
00:05:814 (2,3,4,5) - this is fun, but just suggest replace 4 a little upon 1 don't have much to say it's fine as it is I think
00:08:557 (4) - rarote a little will better ok
00:39:585 (1,2) - increase DS did from last post
01:10:100 (4,5) - i feel not do this in kiai time,just separate them. OK GOD DAMMIT FINE T_T WHY MUST PEOPLE DIS MY STACKS
01:32:728 (1,2) - this too far,even in EX is not like this Lower DS

UPDATE

Exile-

Elite Storyboarder

449 posts

Joined April 2013

Exile- 2016-05-27T12:15:14+00:00

pishifat wrote:
BLOSSOm
i wish you paid attention to how stacks appear ingame:( like there are at least 20 times stacks get fucked which kinda defeats the purpose of perfect stacks (being readability/neatness). your best friend pls get along Cant do anything with it since I cant set stack leniency to 0
00:02:385 (4,5,1) - 00:10:700 (7) - 1/6 tho like half these triples in the intro are 1/4 and half arent oh and 00:08:557 (7) - ya
00:07:700 (4,7) - 00:48:842 (1) - since your spacing isnt indicating 1/1 vs 1/2, comboing is your best bet to make this somewhat intuitive gl
00:16:614 (1,2,3) - Who the hell messed up with my slider
00:50:785 (5) - gonna need a way to make these actually um understandable as 1/3. like either through super strict spacing, dumb comboing, or sliders (ends or even thisnonsense are more understandable). constant large variable spacing works when things are all 1/2 apart, but mixing in other snaps = murder.
aside from those things the map is nice tho dumb combos

rs_fadeaway wrote:
00:08:385 (6) - move this to x363y333 looks better Triangles are better :>

Not mentioned = fixed
http://puu.sh/p6RLa/28c19ebdb3.txt

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2016-05-27T14:01:32+00:00

Hello!

Insane (pishi)

00:02:557 (1,2) - kinda needs mroe spacing. if you're going for antijump stuff, dedicate to it with more of an overlap and be consistent about it elsewhere
00:45:757 (1,2) - similarly more spacing bueno. can easily expand the whole symmetrical thing with 00:44:728 (5,6,1,2) - so that 1 and 2 have at least some spacing I think it gives some emphasize to next objects without exagerating spacing but you're not the first person pointing this out so I will probably fix
00:56:985 (3) - 1/6 tho
also the way you ignore the loud 1/3 bell things like 00:58:785 (3) - in this section hurts but its technically rankable since you're not missnapping anything. still tho getting those 1/3s on sliderends even is strong. dont do what the other 3 difficulties above this do tho since they are screwed
01:10:785 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - something to think about is how close you make objects within any patterns. like 01:08:385 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 01:09:757 (2,3,4,5) - have objects like decent distances apart which looks great, but when objects are like 2 pixels from each other you're making stuff super crowded

Hard

00:08:557 (7) - 00:56:900 (3) - cant really undermap things as wrongly snapped for the sake of lowering difficulty just going with 1/2 and ignoring the piano thing is best u can do
01:02:214 (7) - your 2 measure comboing gets off by a measure here lol

Normal

00:15:928 (3) - sliderbody overlapping itself is kinda a difficulty element you shouldnt introduce til harder stuff lol. understanding when to click 00:16:957 (1) - is ambiguous since scrubs cant tell when 00:15:928 (3) - is going to reach the sliderend

Easy

00:31:357 (1,2) - full body overlaps arent gonna work on an easy dood. gonna need clearer placement
01:28:957 (1) - ending 1/2 earlier so it's on the actual last sound >>>>>>>

Insane (rs)

00:10:785 (1) - the angle of slider is tOO sharp , but music doesn't show this，maybe a curve will be better It's not really a playable angle, it's just to make the player go back!
00:11:300 (2,3,4,5) - im sure this pattern can be improved Please explain why ): if I made it like that it means that I don't get why it's bad lol
00:38:214 (5,6) - i know you want to show the emphasis here， but change the direction not good idea，the music here still same as 1,2 and 3,4. Try to increase the DS between 1-2 , 3-4 ,5-6
00:49:871 (1) - rotate this slider 5° looks better I'm sure you don't like it because it's vertical lol
00:54:671 (3) - copy 00:55:700 (3) - and ctrl+g Why ? It's not even noticeable and they don't follow the same sound ):
01:02:214 (1) - blanket better Not a blanket
01:04:785 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this flow seems not good，especially the part of stream I think the "break" just before the stream makes it cool
01:15:071 (3,4,5) - increase the DS pls， its a peak of this song. Triplet here, I don't want to make it too hard
01:12:500 (1,2,3,4) - this slider just not very suit of this part, try make a slider like > meh, looks fine tbh, fits with the song
01:31:357 (3,4) - DS ++
01:31:528 (4) - dont understand why slider here,the sound on 01:31:700 is clear I wanted to give some emphasize to red tick

Thank you !

Shyotamaze

917 posts

Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2016-05-27T16:46:28+00:00

pishifat wrote:
shYO
00:18:842 (9,10,1) - literallyfirstpoint on every diff so far read those aaaah idk how to fix this so I'll see if someone tells me how
00:50:814 (4) - and last point on nothing's diff pls Fixed I guess? I hope it doesn't play poorly now

rs_fadeaway wrote:
[shyo's insane]
00:16:957 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - music here is quite same repeat,you can think of some pattern to fit this Pattern fits the music and is fine imo
00:49:871 (1,5,1) - used too many long sliders , its boring. It follows the "bell" sound or whatever that is really loud, but I see your point
00:46:442 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - try to make flow not so sharp. It plays fine so I'll see if more complains
01:20:042 (6,7,8,9) - increase the DS, but not decrease Made the spacing of that part more consistent
01:21:071 (2,3,4,5) - same ^ ^
This diff is worse than Insane. its hard to say this have unrank problems, but need to improve flow and pattern, to let players have more fun. R O A S T E D

Thank you!

rip me

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rs_fadeaway

264 posts

Joined May 2010

rs_fadeaway 2016-05-28T21:45:16+00:00

6th wrote:
Hello!

Insane (rs)
00:11:300 (2,3,4,5) - im sure this pattern can be improved Please explain why ): if I made it like that it means that I don't get why it's bad lol i mean that 4-5 not on the perpendicular bisector of 2-3,but if you not mean to do that,ignore me
00:49:871 (1) - rotate this slider 5° looks better I'm sure you don't like it because it's vertical lol:S
00:54:671 (3) - copy 00:55:700 (3) - and ctrl+g Why ? It's not even noticeable and they don't follow the same sound ): here is my mistyped, should be ctrl+J and ctrl + g, just looks better, the slope
Thank you !

just some after sales service :3

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2016-05-30T20:08:47+00:00

Hello! changed 1st, looks better now. Thank you

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Seijiro 2016-06-02T06:59:51+00:00

General

the title is screwed on Nothing's and Exile's diffs. Since they sent you the .osu via browser it got corrupted

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Exile-'s Blossom

00:19:528 (3,4) - Apart from this which may be confused for a 1/2 pattern, I have nothing to say. Good job

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N0thingSpecial's Another

00:02:328 (4) - you clearly added an extra beat here. Just remove the last repeat and it should be fine

00:19:871 (4,5,1) - how can I tell the difference between this and 00:20:385 (2,3) - while playing? .-.
At first I thought "He's gonna use different spacings for streams and stacks for sure" but then I see this which is totally confusing.
I would suggest to use 00:16:957 (1,2) - 's spacing for the stream, so the player can tell them apart

00:20:900 (4,5,1) - reduce spacing here too for consistency

00:37:528 (1,2) - I just find these shapes a bit random, even if it doesn't change a thing...

01:01:185 (1,2) - you should make up your mind and use just one kind of spacing for this 1/4 pattern.
Check 00:39:585 (1,2) - 00:47:814 (1,2) - 00:51:928 (1,2) - 00:52:957 (1,2) - 00:58:100 (1,2) - . They're all different and seeing how you use the short spacing to tell apart stacks from stream, it's really confusing because I always have to think at what might come next since the spacing changes

01:06:071 (2,3,4) - select them all and move 2 to 444;165 (nazi stream not being straight)

01:12:500 (1,2) - weren't you going to use larger spacing here? As I see for 01:10:442 (1,2) - or 01:09:414 (1,2) - and so on

01:15:242 (4,5) - I would think this is a 1/2 snap tbh... :/

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I don't have much to say here. It just looks a bit unpolished (or should I say un-experienced?) due to some slider shapes being a bit sloppy and some patterns being just a big circle, like 00:44:385 (3,4,5,6,7) - and other similar ones.
Maybe it's just my mapping style that's speaking here, sorry.

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00:06:671 (1,2) - it just bothers me why they aren't of the same shape

00:08:557 (7,1) - I would reduce spacing between these: it's this way on higher diffs and it may be confused with 00:08:214 (5,6) - (similar visual distance)

00:10:785 (1) - uh, barely, but safe. Try to not make a 180 degrees turn with the slider body

00:32:385 (4) - why isn't this Ctrl + G'd? The jump itself is also weak this way

00:45:757 (1,2) - I'm not a fan of short spacings + overlaps :/

01:04:785 (3,4) - weak jump on 4. I'd rather stack 3 on top of 4, like this

01:15:242 (4,5) - I would increase spacing here, feels weak

01:32:042 (1,2,3) - I would keep a nice triangle here and stack 01:32:728 (3,4) - (just for aesthetics)

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Hard

00:08:214 (6) - don't skip the beat on the white tick please. The slider should start from 00:08:042 -

00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - really confusing. Stacking those circles on top of the slider heads (and not tails) is that ugly? x)

00:38:214 (4,5) - unclean overlap :/

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Normal

00:34:957 (4,1,2,3,4) - Changing so frequently between 1/1 and 3/2 might be hard to read for beginners

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Easy

00:13:185 (2,3) - uh, 1/2 snap on Easy is a bit hard imo
00:48:842 (2,1) - same, but they are sliders, so you can leave them as they are I guess

01:28:957 (1) - make it end at 01:32:900 -

Shyotamaze

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Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2016-06-02T08:55:16+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
Shyo's Insane

I don't have much to say here. It just looks a bit unpolished (or should I say un-experienced?) due to some slider shapes being a bit sloppy and some patterns being just a big circle, like 00:44:385 (3,4,5,6,7) - and other similar ones. I don't see where my shapes are "sloppy" maybe if you could provide examples I could understand :/ and that pattern follows the music imo since I'm not mapping the bell sound for that part but the background thingy
Maybe it's just my mapping style that's speaking here, sorry. No problem I still love you bro DAMN SON I JUST GOT ROASTED
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6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2016-06-02T19:11:28+00:00

Hello!

[Easy]
00:13:185 (2,3) - uh, 1/2 snap on Easy is a bit hard imo It is, but still playable I guess
00:48:842 (2,1) - same, but they are sliders, so you can leave them as they are I guess
01:28:957 (1) - make it end at 01:32:900 -

[Normal]
00:34:957 (4,1,2,3,4) - Changing so frequently between 1/1 and 3/2 might be hard to read for beginners Since what I'm mapping is clearly hearable it should stay intuitive, I'll get some testplays.

[Hard]
00:08:214 (6) - don't skip the beat on the white tick please. The slider should start from 00:08:042 -
00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - really confusing. Stacking those circles on top of the slider heads (and not tails) is that ugly? x) I like this pattern tbh ):
00:38:214 (4,5) - unclean overlap :/ moved it a bit

[Insane]
00:06:671 (1,2) - it just bothers me why they aren't of the same shape
00:08:557 (7,1) - I would reduce spacing between these: it's this way on higher diffs and it may be confused with 00:08:214 (5,6) - (similar visual distance)
00:10:785 (1) - uh, barely, but safe. Try to not make a 180 degrees turn with the slider body curved it to make it smoother
00:32:385 (4) - why isn't this Ctrl + G'd? The jump itself is also weak this way
00:45:757 (1,2) - I'm not a fan of short spacings + overlaps :/ looks fine tbh, can't say something more convincing
01:04:785 (3,4) - weak jump on 4. I'd rather stack 3 on top of 4, like this
stacked (2) and (3)
01:15:242 (4,5) - I would increase spacing here, feels weak I prefer making triplets easier to play
01:32:042 (1,2,3) - I would keep a nice triangle here and stack 01:32:728 (3,4) - (just for aesthetics) the sound is continuing between the 2 last notes so it's cool imo

Thank you!

Shyotamaze

917 posts

Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2016-06-28T20:31:03+00:00

rip N0thingSpecial's Another

TEAM BARD

Featured Artist

53 posts

Joined September 2014

TEAM BARD 2016-07-13T21:09:58+00:00

Hi! Love Nekomata Master so I decided to mod.

Easy

01:06:328 - break here?
I didn't really find much to complain about for this diff, other than from 00:00:500 - to 00:08:728 - maybe lower the volume of the loud, echoing drum hitsound. It's a bit jarring and doesn't fit as well with the music. This applies for all the other difficulties as well.

Normal

01:06:328 - Break here as well...
Essentially nothing to complain about here either, except for at 01:28:957 - the spinner just seems a bit lazy, honestly. Especially because you still mapped 3 more objects after it, I'd say just eliminate the spinner and map those last few seconds, or just remove the last 3 objects.[/box]

Hard

I think that OD6.5 or OD7 would be more fitting for this diff.
00:35:471 (1,2,3) - For a hard difficulty, this seems to be a bit of an annoying pattern to read. Idk I guess it's subjective but personally I wouldn't stack the circles directly on top of the sliderends.
00:41:128 (6,7,8) - Replace this with a kickslider?
01:05:642 (1,2,3,4) - I'd use 2 short sliders instead
01:15:414 (3,4,1) - same as at 41 seconds

Insane

Ar9? 9.2 seems a bit much for a 4 star difficulty
01:15:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This seems like it should be linear. The jagged stream could be annoying to aim.

Shyo's Insane

00:37:357 (10,11) - Don't think these should be NCed
00:50:785 (1) - This circle should be spaced evenly between the two sliders?
00:51:814 (1) - ^
00:53:871 (1) - ^
00:59:014 (1) - ^
01:32:728 (3,4) - ctrl+g

Exile-'s Blossom

I don't think this should be OD9, it should probably be more in the range of OD8.3-8.6 but I won't be bothered if you didn't change it.
The entirety of the song after 01:24:842 - seems sort of overmapped to me. The spacing on the airman-esque jumps should be reduced just a bit. I understand that this should be an extra difficulty, but it just seems like the difficulty of the jumps doesn't really match the music.

Other than those minor edits, I couldn't really find anything wrong with this map. It's a fantastic song and I hope to see it ranked soon. Good luck!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2016-08-19T15:13:52+00:00

Hey, fixed the breaks. About the jagged stream, yes it's a bit hard to read but it fits with the song so I keep it. And the short streams in hard diff are okay at such bpm. Thanks !

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-09-28T12:30:44+00:00

g
why is "N0thingSpecial" in tags?

metadata of exile's diff needs to be fixed

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exile
00:01:014 (2,3) - spacing like 00:02:042 (2,3) - seems better fitting since it's the same thing
00:08:042 (2,3,4) - things like this are just really awkward, you need nearly twice the speed to move to 4, while the angle doesn't really support it
00:08:557 (4) - you made 1/6 clickable before, but not this one, which is way stronger?
00:08:728 (1,2,3) - check this with stacking enabled, things like 00:11:814 (4,6,7) - have similar issues visually // 00:39:242 (3,2,3,4) - and many more
the whole 1/4 and 1/6 stacks the just look the same is really anoying to read, even if you focus on approach circles
00:19:528 (3,4,1) - randomly huge 1/4 gap that makes like no sense with your other pattern and the music
00:25:014 (8,9) - think this would be better as 1/4 slider since 8 is pretty important
00:27:071 (5,6,1) - 1/6
00:48:157 (2,3,4) - looking at your other stacking, stacking 00:48:157 (2,3) - would make more sense
00:50:785 (1) - sounds like it should be on the 1/8 tick just before, also move nc to (2) so people won't mistake 4-1 for a 1/1 gap
00:51:800 (1) - ^ // 00:52:842 (1) - //00:52:842 (1) -
00:59:014 (1) - probably here too, also kinda weird to skip drums on 00:58:957 -
01:05:728 (3) - would look nicer if you moved this just a little more right to make the "wobble" a bit more noticeable http://i.imgur.com/DDKXgUM.jpg
01:13:528 (1) - seems weird to reduce spacing here when it's more important
01:20:557 (6) - feels completely overdone, nothing in the song is that differen/much stronger from before but you spacing goes crazy
01:32:900 (4) - now this is where a huge jump would actually fit really well, even something like http://i.imgur.com/nsGcuQq.jpg

most of the kiai (especially second half) feels like you'r ejust putting jumps with no respect to the music/concept behind your spacing ; /
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shyo
00:03:585 (5) - according to your downbeat spacing this should be 2x
00:10:271 (6,7,1) - so many spacing changes with rather obtuse angles becomes really annoying to snap to
00:27:071 (5,6,1) - 1/6 either map as repeat or not at all
00:27:585 (2,3,4,5) - could have less spacing to make the cymbal spam on 00:28:271 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - feel more important cause of spacing
00:38:042 (2,3,4) - you seemed to vary spacing based on instruments before, but here it's just all the same which doesnt feel fitting
00:49:871 (1,2,3,1,2) - whole pattern is lol spacing wise + snapping thing from exile's diff here too (00:50:771 (1) - etc)
mainly 00:50:771 (1,2) - ??
also the difference between 00:50:385 (2) - 00:51:414 (3) - though they are basically the same musically
00:55:014 (6,7,8) - linear slowdown is like the worst pattern to snap to
similar things happen for most of the chorus. spacing and patterns seems like really random to me
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insane
visuals like 00:06:671 (1,2) - are _-
00:08:385 (6) - why does this suddenly have like no spacing at all?
00:10:614 - 1/1 gap when there is so much going on in the song doesnt really fit
00:11:814 (5,6) - there are so many patterns you could go for here instead of something this clumped ; / // 00:36:500 (5,6) - etc
00:17:985 (5) - most important sound here, but stack doesnt make it feel like that // similar for spots like 00:32:214 (3,4) -
00:18:842 (8) - and then such high spacing on an insignificant beat while 00:19:014 (1) - gets much less? // 00:36:328 (4) - etc
could just stack 8 on 00:17:985 (5) - tail
00:21:757 (2) - feels really weird
00:33:242 (6,1) - stack here is even worse emphasis wise than others
00:52:271 (2,4,5) - check this with f5/stacking enabled
00:53:471 (3,1) - like no spacing at all for such an important beat on 1
00:56:957 (3,4) - 1/6 you never mapped before feels really unfitting, even more so for a pretty easy insane
kiai looks a bit better but still lots of above issues repeated
lots of those things apply for many more spots
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hard
00:08:385 (7) - dont' think the 1/6 gap here is needed at all, ending 1/6 earlier would most likely be nicer
00:07:700 (3,4,5,6) - 00:09:757 (4,5,6,7) - 00:12:328 (4,5,6,1) - can't really understand when you decide to stack and when not???
00:32:385 (5) - should def. be spaced, (musically) stacking 00:32:042 (3,4) - makes much more sense
00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - isn't really something you would put on hards // 01:25:357 (2,3) -
00:47:471 - ignoring this feels so wrong since it's liek the same sound as sliderend
01:13:871 (3,4,5) - straight line kinda kills emphasis on 5
01:16:271 (4,1) - http://i.imgur.com/uWcyePF.jpg can you not
01:23:642 (4,1) - what are those random downbeat stacks : (
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normal
00:11:642 - 3/2 gap feels so awkward here http://i.imgur.com/rEIppS3.jpg would be nicer
00:58:957 (3,4,1) - feels so clumped, the playfield offer so you so many more spots for this..
01:32:728 - making this clickable would be great, it's so strong
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easy
01:14:557 (1,2) - is this sudden 1/2 really needed? ending first slider 1/2 earlier seems okay too
01:26:214 (3,1) - ^

good luck with this!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

6th 2016-09-28T17:56:56+00:00

Hello

[Insane]
visuals like 00:06:671 (1,2) - are _- I think that gameplay matters more than visuals
00:08:385 (6) - why does this suddenly have like no spacing at all?
00:10:614 - 1/1 gap when there is so much going on in the song doesnt really fit
00:11:814 (5,6) - there are so many patterns you could go for here instead of something this clumped ; / // 00:36:500 (5,6) - etc About the first one : I used this because the song sounds like it's repeating itself. Patterns like the 2nd are already clean
00:17:985 (5) - most important sound here, but stack doesnt make it feel like that // similar for spots like 00:32:214 (3,4) -
00:18:842 (8) - and then such high spacing on an insignificant beat while 00:19:014 (1) - gets much less? // 00:36:328 (4) - etc
could just stack 8 on 00:17:985 (5) - tail
00:21:757 (2) - feels really weird In what way ?
00:33:242 (6,1) - stack here is even worse emphasis wise than others
00:52:271 (2,4,5) - check this with f5/stacking enabled What about it ? :/
00:53:471 (3,1) - like no spacing at all for such an important beat on 1
00:56:957 (3,4) - 1/6 you never mapped before feels really unfitting, even more so for a pretty easy insane But they are mapped lol

[Hard]
00:08:385 (7) - dont' think the 1/6 gap here is needed at all, ending 1/6 earlier would most likely be nicer
00:07:700 (3,4,5,6) - 00:09:757 (4,5,6,7) - 00:12:328 (4,5,6,1) - can't really understand when you decide to stack and when not??? They are not musically the same
00:32:385 (5) - should def. be spaced, (musically) stacking 00:32:042 (3,4) - makes much more sense
00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - isn't really something you would put on hards // 01:25:357 (2,3) - I fixed the first one because everyone is complaining about it but the second one is really fine
00:47:471 - ignoring this feels so wrong since it's liek the same sound as sliderend
01:13:871 (3,4,5) - straight line kinda kills emphasis on 5
01:16:271 (4,1) - http://i.imgur.com/uWcyePF.jpg can you not
01:23:642 (4,1) - what are those random downbeat stacks : ( It emphasizes (1)

[Normal]
00:11:642 - 3/2 gap feels so awkward here http://i.imgur.com/rEIppS3.jpg would be nicer
00:58:957 (3,4,1) - feels so clumped, the playfield offer so you so many more spots for this.. I think it's readable
01:32:728 - making this clickable would be great, it's so strong

[Easy]
01:14:557 (1,2) - is this sudden 1/2 really needed? ending first slider 1/2 earlier seems okay too Yes, it emphasizes (2)
01:26:214 (3,1) - ^

metadata fixed.

Thanks !

Shyotamaze

917 posts

Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2016-09-28T18:49:39+00:00

Lasse wrote:
shyo
00:03:585 (5) - according to your downbeat spacing this should be 2x Fixed
00:10:271 (6,7,1) - so many spacing changes with rather obtuse angles becomes really annoying to snap to Not really a problem imo, flow seems alright to me but I changed a pattern earlier to make it a bit less "annoying"
00:27:071 (5,6,1) - 1/6 either map as repeat or not at all Fixed
00:27:585 (2,3,4,5) - could have less spacing to make the cymbal spam on 00:28:271 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - feel more important cause of spacing imo the intensity of drums/cymbals are almost the same here and it would be really difficult to change the spacing here without ruining the stucture/aesthetics or whatever
00:38:042 (2,3,4) - you seemed to vary spacing based on instruments before, but here it's just all the same which doesnt feel fitting Fixed
00:49:871 (1,2,3,1,2) - whole pattern is lol spacing wise + snapping thing from exile's diff here too (00:50:771 (1) - etc)
mainly 00:50:771 (1,2) - ?? Fixed I guess?
also the difference between 00:50:385 (2) - 00:51:414 (3) - though they are basically the same musically Fixed
00:55:014 (6,7,8) - linear slowdown is like the worst pattern to snap to Fixed
similar things happen for most of the chorus. spacing and patterns seems like really random to me

Thanks!

Looking at my old maps makes me want to kill myself

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Exile-

Elite Storyboarder

449 posts

Joined April 2013

Exile- 2016-09-29T15:46:12+00:00

Lasse wrote:
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exile
00:01:014 (2,3) - spacing like 00:02:042 (2,3) - seems better fitting since it's the same thing Spacing is the same (1.4)
00:08:042 (2,3,4) - things like this are just really awkward, you need nearly twice the speed to move to 4, while the angle doesn't really support it
00:08:557 (4) - you made 1/6 clickable before, but not this one, which is way stronger? It doesn't matter how strong it is. The previous stream plays like an entrance for the next sound but in this case the triple before the slider is a different sound so it has to be emphasized
00:08:728 (1,2,3) - check this with stacking enabled, things like 00:11:814 (4,6,7) - have similar issues visually // 00:39:242 (3,2,3,4) - and many more
the whole 1/4 and 1/6 stacks the just look the same is really anoying to read, even if you focus on approach circles
I guess I can change stack leniency to 3.
00:19:528 (3,4,1) - randomly huge 1/4 gap that makes like no sense with your other pattern and the music
00:25:014 (8,9) - think this would be better as 1/4 slider since 8 is pretty important And 8 is clickable already
00:27:071 (5,6,1) - 1/6
00:48:157 (2,3,4) - looking at your other stacking, stacking 00:48:157 (2,3) - would make more sense 00:48:328 (3) - has higher pitch so it cannot be stacked with the previous note
00:50:785 (1) - sounds like it should be on the 1/8 tick just before, also move nc to (2) so people won't mistake 4-1 for a 1/1 gap
I disagree. This sound is clearly placed on 1/6. Also there are 2 reasons why combos are placed like that:
1. The sound is different from previous combo.
2. The polarity changes from 1/2 to 1/6. This is the only way to make it instinctive for players
00:51:800 (1) - ^ // 00:52:842 (1) - //00:52:842 (1) - ^
00:59:014 (1) - probably here too, also kinda weird to skip drums on 00:58:957 - ^
01:05:728 (3) - would look nicer if you moved this just a little more right to make the "wobble" a bit more noticeable http://i.imgur.com/DDKXgUM.jpg
You probably missed one thing.
http://puu.sh/rrSoK/054506ff59.jpg
Red lines are straight. You suggestion would destroy the pattern here
01:13:528 (1) - seems weird to reduce spacing here when it's more important
01:20:557 (6) - feels completely overdone, nothing in the song is that differen/much stronger from before but you spacing goes crazy
01:32:900 (4) - now this is where a huge jump would actually fit really well, even something like http://i.imgur.com/nsGcuQq.jpg

most of the kiai (especially second half) feels like you'r ejust putting jumps with no respect to the music/concept behind your spacing ; /
Changed some jumps
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Not mentioned = fixed
Thanks for your patience and time.

http://puu.sh/rrT2b/621493dee6.osu
Please change tags for me

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-09-30T04:34:08+00:00

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Tags and artist Unicode are inconsistent.

Exile-'s Blossom
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I love high OD, but with your polarity issues, the 1/6 - 1/2 - 1/4s, that's why I don't agree with the OD at this map, sorry.
00:08:557 (4) - I totally disagree with this, you're mapping really no important sounds as click'able objects, but you are using a slider here were the music is stronger and yes the music being stronger matters, if not then you're not mapping to the song.
00:24:842 (7,8,9) - The music is really strong at 7 and 8, since they are going with the main song melody, that's why click 9 feels so empty like clicking in nothing (despite that there is a super little sound in the background music), that's why I think using a 1/4 slider at 00:25:014 (8,9) - is better, rhythmically talking.
00:33:242 (2,3) - this looks like a fail blanket, even if you didn't intended to have one, it looks like you tried, blank it properly or move the slider tail a bit down.
00:33:242 (2,3) - nazi, stack them properly
00:00:500 (1) - volume lvls are different between the green and red timing points.
00:39:242 (3,2,3,4) - be careful when stacking things, you should map with stacking on in the editor or test play your map to avoid things like this, check it in game or turn on stacking at the editor and you'll notice what I mean.
00:50:557 (4,1) - 00:51:585 (5,1) - 00:52:614 (5,1) - Those transitions play so bad, I strongly recommend you to do something else, I know why you did it, but I guess sacrificing a bit and using a slider would be better.
I really dislike the high OD with those polarity issues

Shyo's Insane
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00:17:642 (5) - Can you follow the song melody instead? the white tick is not that important here, I'd suggest this 00:17:471 (4,5) - :
00:42:157 (4,5,6) - the spacing and the linear movement made this super uncomfortable to play, I don't see the reason for this, you can improve the flow a lot.
00:50:385 (2,3,1) - I'm sure that a big number of players will click 1 early, really early, because the spacing and the polarity issue and man there is nothing in the music at the tail of this sliders 00:50:771 (1) - 00:51:800 (1) - 00:53:857 (1) -
Generally is fine, but I think you can use more patterns, actually most of the map are linear movements, which make the map a bit monotonous.

Insane
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Why are you using such high AR in a 175 bpm song that you mapped with really low spacing, AR 9 fits the map nicely the ,2 is totally unnecessary.
00:06:671 (1,2) - man this looks so bad, you are arguing about the game play, but the game is also a visual game, you can make it play the same with better visuals, of course if you care about your beatmap design.
00:14:042 (5,6,7,8) - music is the same, why 8 have different spacing, this plays so weird also, linear movement + jump.
00:14:900 (1,2) - again the visuals need to rework, I understand that you think the game play is more important than the visuals, but that doesn't means your map have to look bad, you can easily make it looks good and play good. Another case: 00:47:814 (1,2) - be careful with blankets
00:17:642 (3) - sounds out of place, since that beat is not going with the main melody of the song, make a slider 00:17:471 (2,3) - instead.
00:36:157 (3) - This is touching the HP bar, it's bad for the design of your map and also looks unprofessional, since you're overlapping the game elements. Same 01:20:728 (1) -
00:49:528 - why are you ignoring such important beat? I can't agree with this tbh.
00:56:957 (3,4) - suddenly 1/6 circles at this diff, personally I don't agree, since this diff is really soft to play, I guess you should keep it like that.
You need to care more about your beatmap design, even tiny things can make your map better.

Hard
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Again why AR need to be that high? Is just a regular hard diff in a 175 bpm song, use 7,5 as max.
00:49:528 - This sound is more important and your are basically ignoring it, what make your rhythm really bad is that basically you are mapping the same sound with the head and tail of this slider 00:48:842 (4) - , but ignoring the next one.
01:06:328 (1) - why you have a spinner here, but you have a break at your insane? is rankable, yes, but not consistent and taking in consideration that both are mapped by you...
01:16:271 (4,1) - this kind of spacing is something I don't agree at this hard diff, it can be really confuse to play, for the players that are supposed to be playing hard diffs.
01:25:357 (2,3) - again this is too confuse for a hard diff not only because the stack, but also the slider being too short make it super hard to read, again for the players supposed to be playing hard diffs, no the ones who can SS in one try.

Exile-

Elite Storyboarder

449 posts

Joined April 2013

Exile- 2016-09-30T12:37:03+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Exile-'s Blossom
[]
I love high OD, but with your polarity issues, the 1/6 - 1/2 - 1/4s, that's why I don't agree with the OD at this map, sorry.
00:08:557 (4) - I totally disagree with this, you're mapping really no important sounds as click'able objects, but you are using a slider here were the music is stronger and yes the music being stronger matters, if not then you're not mapping to the song.
I still disagree but fine
00:24:842 (7,8,9) - The music is really strong at 7 and 8, since they are going with the main song melody, that's why click 9 feels so empty like clicking in nothing (despite that there is a super little sound in the background music), that's why I think using a 1/4 slider at 00:25:014 (8,9) - is better, rhythmically talking.
Duplicated suggestion so fixed
00:33:242 (2,3) - this looks like a fail blanket, even if you didn't intended to have one, it looks like you tried, blank it properly or move the slider tail a bit down.
00:33:242 (2,3) - nazi, stack them properly
Failed to link the correct ones?
00:00:500 (1) - volume lvls are different between the green and red timing points.
00:39:242 (3,2,3,4) - be careful when stacking things, you should map with stacking on in the editor or test play your map to avoid things like this, check it in game or turn on stacking at the editor and you'll notice what I mean.
It looks like it looks but I can't do anything about it. Less stack leniency is unrankable.
00:50:557 (4,1) - 00:51:585 (5,1) - 00:52:614 (5,1) - Those transitions play so bad, I strongly recommend you to do something else, I know why you did it, but I guess sacrificing a bit and using a slider would be better.
But that's how the music plays. Can't do much about it. New combos are supposed to make is easier to read and reset the polarity.
I really dislike the high OD with those polarity issues

Not mentioned = fixed
Thanks for your time and patience.

http://puu.sh/rsRAE/4830a16c16.osu

Shyotamaze

917 posts

Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2016-09-30T14:42:13+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Shyo's Insane
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00:17:642 (5) - Can you follow the song melody instead? the white tick is not that important here, I'd suggest this 00:17:471 (4,5) - : Fixed
00:42:157 (4,5,6) - the spacing and the linear movement made this super uncomfortable to play, I don't see the reason for this, you can improve the flow a lot. Fixed
00:50:385 (2,3,1) - I'm sure that a big number of players will click 1 early, really early, because the spacing and the polarity issue and man there is nothing in the music at the tail of this sliders 00:50:771 (1) - 00:51:800 (1) - 00:53:857 (1) - Tried my best to fix it
Generally is fine, but I think you can use more patterns, actually most of the map are linear movements, which make the map a bit monotonous.

Thanks!

Why isn't that bell sound 1/4 aaaaa

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6th 2016-09-30T15:14:26+00:00

Hey

[Insane]

Why are you using such high AR in a 175 bpm song that you mapped with really low spacing, AR 9 fits the map nicely the ,2 is totally unnecessary. Reduced to 9
00:06:671 (1,2) - man this looks so bad, you are arguing about the game play, but the game is also a visual game, you can make it play the same with better visuals, of course if you care about your beatmap design. Do they look necessarily bad because they are not blanketed ? ):
00:14:042 (5,6,7,8) - music is the same, why 8 have different spacing, this plays so weird also, linear movement + jump.
00:14:900 (1,2) - again the visuals need to rework, I understand that you think the game play is more important than the visuals, but that doesn't means your map have to look bad, you can easily make it looks good and play good. Another case: 00:47:814 (1,2) - be careful with blankets Fixed the 2nd but the 1st one is pretty.
00:17:642 (3) - sounds out of place, since that beat is not going with the main melody of the song, make a slider 00:17:471 (2,3) - instead.
00:36:157 (3) - This is touching the HP bar, it's bad for the design of your map and also looks unprofessional, since you're overlapping the game elements. Same 01:20:728 (1) -
00:49:528 - why are you ignoring such important beat? I can't agree with this tbh. Is it really important ? I didn't even notice it.
00:56:957 (3,4) - suddenly 1/6 circles at this diff, personally I don't agree, since this diff is really soft to play, I guess you should keep it like that. I can't modify what the song provides, I won't place a circle on blue tick

[Hard]
Again why AR need to be that high? Is just a regular hard diff in a 175 bpm song, use 7,5 as max. According to the note density AR 8 looks fine
00:49:528 - This sound is more important and your are basically ignoring it, what make your rhythm really bad is that basically you are mapping the same sound with the head and tail of this slider 00:48:842 (4) - , but ignoring the next one. Same as Insane, I didn't even notice that sound xD
01:06:328 (1) - why you have a spinner here, but you have a break at your insane? is rankable, yes, but not consistent and taking in consideration that both are mapped by you...
01:16:271 (4,1) - this kind of spacing is something I don't agree at this hard diff, it can be really confuse to play, for the players that are supposed to be playing hard diffs. The AR makes it easily readable.
01:25:357 (2,3) - again this is too confuse for a hard diff not only because the stack, but also the slider being too short make it super hard to read, again for the players supposed to be playing hard diffs, no the ones who can SS in one try. I will fix if someone else points it out.

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