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Nekomata Master - Silence

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6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
6th
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on vendredi 30 septembre 2016 at 17:15:52

Artist: Nekomata Master
Title: Silence
Source: REFLEC BEAT
Tags: Exile- Shyotamaze
BPM: 175
Filesize: 6177kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,57 stars, 111 notes)
  2. Exile-'s Blossom (5,67 stars, 395 notes)
  3. Hard (3,42 stars, 290 notes)
  4. Insane (4,16 stars, 308 notes)
  5. Normal (2,01 stars, 175 notes)
  6. Shyo's Insane (4,61 stars, 375 notes)
Download: Nekomata Master - Silence
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Nekomata Master - Silence
This map has nothing really unusual or innovative, but it's still fun to play.
Ready for ranking.
Last edited by 6th , edited 16 times in total.
Lumin
224 posts
Joined July 2014
Lumin
Doing my behalf of M4M here

[General]
  1. Make your background 1366x768
[Easy]
  1. You should leep 1x distance snap, this is easy u know
  2. 00:07:700 (3) - make this end at 00:08:385 - sound better and dont use red ticks here
  3. 00:21:071 (1,2) - overlap
  4. 00:32:385 (2) - asymmetrical
  5. 00:48:842 (2) - sounds better if ends at white spike
  6. 00:52:957 (1) - Nc off if you want to keep consistency in NC
  7. 00:53:985 (3) - NC this, and fix all NCs from here on
  8. 00:58:100 (1,2) - I don't like this lapping
  9. 01:14:557 (1) - ens this at white spike so it wouold even land on some beat (same for all this kind of sliders)
  10. 01:22:785 (1,2) - just coppypaste (little asymmetry)
  11. 01:27:757 (2) - you shouldn't use 1/2 beats on as circles easy diff (just sayin')
[Normal]
  1. Why don't you just use cs 3 (pretty worthless decimal)
  2. Nice 124 combo dude
  3. 00:15:928 (29) - nice idea but badly made
  4. 00:21:412 - 00:21:757 - 00:22:442 - 00:22:785 - I'd add notes here
  5. 01:10:957 - I'd add note here
  6. 01:21:242 (26,28) - looks like overlap
[Hard]
  1. 00:14:900 (1,2) - bit ugly overlap
  2. 00:16:957 (1) - I don't like these aesthetically, consider changing
  3. 00:23:814 (3,4) - flows bit badly You should place 4 in a way that it touches red arrow
  4. 00:27:242 (1,2,3,4) - imperfect square
  5. 00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - realy hard to read
  6. 00:53:300 (6,7,8,1) - more space between these, player might click this too early because DS is only 0.93x and its chronoligcally further than 5 was from 6 and 7
  7. 01:02:214 (7) - NC
  8. 01:22:442 (3,1) - this overlap is bad and you should feel bad
  9. 01:25:357 (2,3) - here snare is cirlce and here 01:25:871 (1,2,3) - sliderend, feels weird
  10. 01:29:985 (5) - NC if you want to keep consistency
[Insane]
  1. 00:59:127 (38) - aimod: object end is not snapped, and please NC map properly before you ask for mods, it doesn't even take much time
  2. 00:04:442 (8) - this should be lower
  3. 00:08:557 (7) - pretty bold spacing
  4. 00:10:785 (1) - wait what, I think this is unrankable
  5. 00:16:443 (6) - place this somewhere x:256 y:224
  6. 00:18:671 (7,2) - maybe try to blanket or smth
  7. 00:25:185 (1,2) - little space between
  8. 00:26:214 (3,4) - ^
  9. 00:32:214 (3,4) - pretty bad flowbreak I'd say
  10. 00:45:757 (1,2) - pls
  11. 00:52:271 (13,14,15) - same space between but chronologically different, just no
  12. 01:27:928 (84) - ugly shape
[Shyo's Insane]
  1. 00:01:528 (4) - what's this sudden space, i'd understand if it would be between new and old combo but not in a combo, that note is not so much stronger beat anyways
  2. 00:39:585 (1) - polish to something like this
  3. 00:55:014 (5,6) - what's this sudden spacing
  4. 00:59:042 (4,5) - looks better imo
  5. 01:01:700 (6,7) - there are pretty much this kind of sudden spacing even though those jumps are linear, easily missed
  6. 01:05:300 (6) - NC prehaps? (combo 15 ugly)
  7. 01:15:585 (6) - ^
  8. 01:27:928 (6) - ^
  9. 01:27:928 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - pls purify that curve
  10. 01:32:385 (5) - easily clicked too early, more space between 5 and 4
[Nothingspecial's Another]
  1. I think that you use NC too often at the beginning, every second downbeat would be fine
  2. 00:04:957 (2,3) - breaks flow imo
  3. 00:05:814 (2,3,4,5) - pretty hard to read
  4. 00:08:557 (4) - really hidden
  5. 00:12:328 (3,1) - overlap
  6. 00:15:928 (1,1) - overlap
  7. 00:16:614 (1,1) - not necessary NC
  8. 00:22:785 (3,2) - overlap
  9. 00:23:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these just are really hard to read
  10. 00:24:842 (1,1) - mentioned earlier, not gonna point out this anymore, but your NC usage is not consistent
  11. 00:34:442 (1,4) - looks like overlap
  12. 00:42:842 (2,3) - pretty bold jump
  13. 00:47:814 (1,4) - hidden 4
  14. 00:51:585 (1,2,1) - yes these jumps are interesting but hard to read
  15. 00:55:871 (4,5,6,1) - 4 note long stream is like an anus to play, and anyway sudden higher bpm stream is bad
  16. 01:15:842 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you think that this is easy to play?
  17. 01:17:642 (1,2) - just make this space so big that these wont touch
  18. 01:25:871 (6) - NC? 01:28:957 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,2) - here you NC that way)
[Exile-'s BLossom]
  1. Name should be Exile's Blossom imo
  2. 00:32:214 (2,3,4,5) - plays weirdly
  3. 00:42:928 (2,3) - proper stack
  4. Nice map nothing mutch found good job
That's all folks!
Exile-
Elite Storyboarder
449 posts
Joined April 2013
Exile-

Lumin wrote:

Doing my behalf of M4M here

[Exile-'s BLossom]
  1. Name should be Exile's Blossom imo Why?
  2. 00:32:214 (2,3,4,5) - plays weirdly Seems ok to me
  3. 00:42:928 (2,3) - proper stack Fixed
  4. Nice map nothing mutch found good job Thanks
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Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Shyotamaze

Lumin wrote:

Doing my behalf of M4M here

[Shyo's Insane]
  1. 00:01:528 (4) - what's this sudden space, i'd understand if it would be between new and old combo but not in a combo, that note is not so much stronger beat anyways The piano is stronger here so it needs more emphasize
  2. 00:39:585 (1) - polish to something like this That shape is intended, I'll keep it like it is
  3. 00:55:014 (5,6) - what's this sudden spacing 00:55:357 (6) - Is strong enough to get more emphasize imo and a high SV slider jump isn't too difficult imo
  4. 00:59:042 (4,5) - looks better imo Fixed I guess?
  5. 01:01:700 (6,7) - there are pretty much this kind of sudden spacing even though those jumps are linear, easily missed 01:01:871 (7,1) - Are really strong beats imo, I won't make jumps only on NCs
  6. 01:05:300 (6) - NC prehaps? (combo 15 ugly) Fixed
  7. 01:15:585 (6) - ^ ^
  8. 01:27:928 (6) - ^ ^
  9. 01:27:928 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - pls purify that curve Intended
  10. 01:32:385 (5) - easily clicked too early, more space between 5 and 4 Fixed
That's all folks!
Thanks for the mod!

neko
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68385
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.799999

[Metadata]
Title:Silence
TitleUnicode:Silence
Artist:Nekomata Master
ArtistUnicode:Nekomata Master
Creator:6th
Version:Shyo's Insane
Source:Reflec Beat
Tags:Exile- N0thingSpecial Shyotamaze
BeatmapID:954261
BeatmapSetID:437720

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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492,182,50814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
498,143,50900,2,0,B|490:88|451:48|451:48|410:64|361:64,1,195.500003728867
209,45,51414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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137,301,51842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,310,51928,6,0,P|271:293|333:224,1,195.500003728867
365,63,52442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,165,52614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
415,156,52785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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201,165,53471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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446,227,53900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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215,243,54500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,115,54671,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,115,54842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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286,290,55357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,309,55528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,232,55700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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93,105,56042,6,0,B|127:74|171:56|171:56|225:65|275:60,1,195.500003728867
449,34,56557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,131,56728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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477,212,57071,2,0,B|447:287|447:287|351:352,1,195.500003728867
234,363,57585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,294,57757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,265,57842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,228,57928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,188,58014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,149,58100,6,0,B|161:88|161:88|274:60,1,195.500003728867
409,56,58614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,146,58785,2,0,L|211:170,1,97.7500018644333
157,226,59042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,262,59128,2,0,B|124:291|96:319|96:319|150:359|210:359,1,195.500003728867
323,335,59642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
385,235,59814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,122,59985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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47,252,60842,2,0,B|93:265|93:265|144:261,1,97.7500018644333
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297,349,61528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,364,61700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,252,61871,2,0,P|31:204|31:153,1,97.7500018644333
227,174,62214,6,0,P|275:160|316:130,1,97.7500018644333
164,70,62557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,184,62728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,274,62900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,264,63071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,352,63242,5,0,0:0:0:0:
488,247,63413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
429,146,63585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,132,63756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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370,320,64271,2,0,P|427:238|427:141,1,195.500003728867
413,119,64700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,97,64785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,58,64957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,70,65128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,176,65300,5,0,0:0:0:0:
171,277,65471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,279,65642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
321,278,65727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,268,65813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,248,65899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,221,65984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,188,66070,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,154,66156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,120,66242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66328,12,0,68042,0:0:0:0:
340,44,68385,6,0,B|385:79|385:79|415:124,1,106.25
460,272,68728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,340,68900,2,0,L|209:358,1,106.25
68,285,69242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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234,44,69928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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149,8,70442,6,0,B|96:32|96:32|61:67,1,106.25
15,219,70785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,287,70957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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292,372,71471,2,0,P|395:342|436:246,1,212.5
411,119,71985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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329,91,72500,6,0,B|257:65|257:65|126:103,1,212.5
15,219,73014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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217,154,73871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,281,74042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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50,259,76099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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48,206,76271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
53,180,76357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,156,76442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,133,76528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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418,241,77128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,243,78157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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177,56,78671,6,0,B|240:137|240:137|273:248,1,212.5
240,344,79185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,181,79357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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137,181,80214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,243,80385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,164,80557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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7,268,81071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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132,130,81414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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161,377,82100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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332,134,82442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,262,82614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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58,24,83300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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314,103,84842,6,0,P|284:147|279:200,1,106.25
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396,187,87414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
6th
SPOILER

Lumin wrote:

Doing my behalf of M4M here

[General]
  1. Make your background 1366x768
[Easy]
  1. You should leep 1x distance snap, this is easy u know
  2. 00:07:700 (3) - make this end at 00:08:385 - sound better and dont use red ticks here Why couldn't I use red tick ?
  3. 00:21:071 (1,2) - overlap It's okay
  4. 00:32:385 (2) - asymmetrical
  5. 00:48:842 (2) - sounds better if ends at white spike
  6. 00:52:957 (1) - Nc off if you want to keep consistency in NC
  7. 00:53:985 (3) - NC this, and fix all NCs from here on What's the point of that, both work
  8. 00:58:100 (1,2) - I don't like this lapping Playable
  9. 01:14:557 (1) - ens this at white spike so it wouold even land on some beat (same for all this kind of sliders) What's wrong with it
  10. 01:22:785 (1,2) - just coppypaste (little asymmetry)
  11. 01:27:757 (2) - you shouldn't use 1/2 beats on as circles easy diff (just sayin') Why ?
[Normal]
  1. Why don't you just use cs 3 (pretty worthless decimal)
  2. Nice 124 combo dude Will fix
  3. 00:15:928 (29) - nice idea but badly made Fixed
  4. 00:21:412 - 00:21:757 - 00:22:442 - 00:22:785 - I'd add notes here Overload
  5. 01:10:957 - I'd add note here I'd need to map other red ticks to keep it consistent which wouldn't fit to Normal.
  6. 01:21:242 (26,28) - looks like overlap doesn't matter
[Hard]
  1. 00:14:900 (1,2) - bit ugly overlap It's nice imo
  2. 00:16:957 (1) - I don't like these aesthetically, consider changing okai
  3. 00:23:814 (3,4) - flows bit badly You should place 4 in a way that it touches red arrow Does it really change anything ? ):
  4. 00:27:242 (1,2,3,4) - imperfect square I can't even notice it lol
  5. 00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - realy hard to read Nobody missed here when I asked for testplay. Will wait for other opinions
  6. 00:53:300 (6,7,8,1) - more space between these, player might click this too early because DS is only 0.93x and its chronoligcally further than 5 was from 6 and 7
  7. 01:02:214 (7) - NC
  8. 01:22:442 (3,1) - this overlap is bad and you should feel bad It's definitely fine
  9. 01:25:357 (2,3) - here snare is cirlce and here 01:25:871 (1,2,3) - sliderend, feels weird I got what you meant. I'll probably change
  10. 01:29:985 (5) - NC if you want to keep consistency
[Insane]
I'm really sorry, I fixed none.[/list]

That's all folks!

Thank you ! useful
N0thingSpecial
2,355 posts
Joined November 2015
N0thingSpecial

Lumin wrote:

[Nothingspecial's Another]
  1. I think that you use NC too often at the beginning, every second downbeat would be fine
  2. 00:04:957 (2,3) - breaks flow imo using drop off flow
  3. 00:05:814 (2,3,4,5) - pretty hard to read that's kinda my style
  4. 00:08:557 (4) - really hidden
  5. 00:12:328 (3,1) - overlap
  6. 00:15:928 (1,1) - overlap not glaringly eye cancerous so no change
  7. 00:16:614 (1,1) - not necessary NC
  8. 00:22:785 (3,2) - overlap it's not an overlap but still made it less cluttered anyways
  9. 00:23:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these just are really hard to read style
  10. 00:24:842 (1,1) - mentioned earlier, not gonna point out this anymore, but your NC usage is not consistent
  11. 00:34:442 (1,4) - looks like overlap it's not, plus it would ruin the blanket and spacing if I move either notes
  12. 00:42:842 (2,3) - pretty bold jump pitch increase = larger spacing for me
  13. 00:47:814 (1,4) - hidden 4
  14. 00:51:585 (1,2,1) - yes these jumps are interesting but hard to read only nerfed the spacing for first two set but after that they should be able to adapt to it
  15. 00:55:871 (4,5,6,1) - 4 note long stream is like an anus to play, and anyway sudden higher bpm stream is bad
  16. 01:15:842 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you think that this is easy to play? it's not unFCable
  17. 01:17:642 (1,2) - just make this space so big that these wont touch
  18. 01:25:871 (6) - NC? 01:28:957 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,1,2) - here you NC that way)
No reply = change
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Janpai
M4M via PM

General
  1. Disable Widescreen support since no SB
  2. BG is 1514x768, consider changing it to 1366x768(preferrably because it is near at the width) or 1024x768
  3. Make Combo Color 3 darker? seems alike with Combo Color 1 a little bit or its just my skin

Easy
  1. 00:06:671 (1,2) - Why sudden change of objects? it's the same as the others beat.
  2. 00:11:814 (2) - I think 3/4 slider fits here, just my opinion
  3. 00:13:185 (2,3) - Why not repeat 00:13:185 (2) - instead of placing a 1/2 reverse slider , it follows the drum if you listen carefully
  4. 00:21:071 (1,2) - Nearly overlap doesn't look good here
  5. 00:23:128 (1) - Make it slider cuz there is a drum sound on 00:23:471 idk why did you ignore that sound ik
  6. 00:28:271 (2) - End at the white tick, sound stops on that if you listen carefully
  7. 00:46:785 (3) - Ctrl+J?
  8. 00:52:957 (1) - Remove NC and NC here 00:53:985 (3) -
  9. 00:55:014 (1) - Remove NC
  10. 00:58:100 (1,2) - Overlap isn't nice maybe try to blanket them?
  11. 01:01:185 (1) - Remove NC
  12. 01:11:814 (3,3) - Overlap doesn't look good
  13. Seems other structure looks like normal (1/2 beats) but diff needs to be polished more (sorry I'm not a fan of overlaps xD)

Normal
  1. 00:02:557 (5) - NC
  2. 00:03:585 (1) - Remove NC, try to be consistent on NCing on big white ticks
  3. 00:16:785 - Should be clickable
  4. 00:54:500 (2) - Ctrl+J?
  5. 01:21:242 (2,4) - Nearly overlapping

Hard
  1. 00:03:242 - Must be clickable imo
  2. 01:15:414 (3,1) - This should be a triple

Insane
  1. 00:03:242 - Same as hard
  2. 00:45:757 (1,2) - overlapzxczxc
  3. 00:51:585 (3) - Tail should be clickable
  4. 00:54:614 - why did you leave this blank o.o
  5. 00:55:700 (3,1) - Why not make the rhythm same as 00:56:557 (2,3,1) - they have the same sound imo
I guess thats all from me xDDD I can't pass NothingSpecial's diff rofl I can't mod properly cuz no hitsounds xD
wajinshu
1,579 posts
Joined April 2015
wajinshu
M4M
[Easy]
00:06:671 (1,2) - Ctrl+G this rhythm is better imo.
00:12:842 (1,2) - you can improve this blanket
00:53:985 (3,1) - ^^
00:11:814 (2) - http://puu.sh/orD6Z/e84c7180a4.png imo it's better
00:13:185 (2) - How about changing these to repeat slider?
00:28:271 (2) - ^^
00:21:071 (1,2) - overlap and imo rhytm it must be http://puu.sh/orDrO/b6866acb0e.png
00:23:814 (2) - put in 00:23:642 (2) -
00:30:328 (2) - maybe this http://puu.sh/orDSz/dff9e26e97.png ?
00:52:957 (1) - 00:55:014 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:985 (3) - Put NC
01:11:814 (3,3) - eeh overlap

[Normal]
00:13:185 (4,2) - Overlap, This can be confusing players and it's doesn't look good
00:15:928 (4,5) - Can it be blanket? I don't really like this pattern.
00:21:071 (1,2) - try this http://puu.sh/orEtz/e7cd234af5.png or http://puu.sh/orEwe/024a764822.png
looks good

[Hard]
00:03:071 (2) - imo it's better http://puu.sh/orEHu/3ce5eccfa4.png
00:18:328 (4,5) - Ctrl+G, I wanted to see 00:18:500 - clickable.
00:37:871 (3,5) - overlap

[Insane]
00:16:614 - eeh where circle
00:45:757 (1,2) - overlap..
00:51:757 - it must be clicable
gl~
hyouri
390 posts
Joined June 2012
hyouri
Hello M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/421561 hyouri's Extra



  • General
  1. Background resolution is 1514 x 768. RC says "Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9" (Also AiMod), so just downscale it
  2. Consider some hitsounds from LKs profile
  3. I think you should skip all Kiai and go for a storyboard instead

    Exile's Bloom
  4. 00:08:728 - Increase volume here to 55-60%
  5. 00:39:242 (3) - Rotate this a little, it doesn't fit the rest
  6. 00:40:614 (1,2) - Spacing too high
  7. 00:40:957 (2) - NC here instead of 00:40:614 (1) -
  8. Not so important but if you haven't noticed, there's a beat 00:56:900 - and 00:56:942 - . But almost impossible to hear at 100% so maybe just keep them unticked
  9. 00:59:128 (5) - NC?
  10. 01:10:100 (4,5) - Maybe little too large spacing?
  11. 01:20:728 (1) - Finish hitsound (E)
  12. 01:32:042 (1,2,3,4) - Clap hitsound (R)


Exile-
Elite Storyboarder
449 posts
Joined April 2013
Exile-

hyouri wrote:

Hello M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/421561 hyouri's Extra



  • General

    Exile's Bloom
  1. 00:08:728 - Increase volume here to 55-60%
  2. 00:39:242 (3) - Rotate this a little, it doesn't fit the rest Should be better
  3. 00:40:614 (1,2) - Spacing too high It was here to emphasize NC but since there wasn't NC I just added it
  4. 00:40:957 (2) - NC here instead of 00:40:614 (1) - Just added it
  5. Not so important but if you haven't noticed, there's a beat 00:56:900 - and 00:56:942 - . But almost impossible to hear at 100% so maybe just keep them unticked Its not even the sound im following now
  6. 00:59:128 (5) - NC? Sure
  7. 01:10:100 (4,5) - Maybe little too large spacing? Tried some different patterns and didn't come up with a better idea
  8. 01:20:728 (1) - Finish hitsound (E)
  9. 01:32:042 (1,2,3,4) - Clap hitsound (R)
This beatmap isn't even hitsounded yet so no reply for hitsound suggestions

-> http://puu.sh/orYks/c7caee1f2b.txt <-
LQA20Ans
1,344 posts
Joined November 2011
LQA20Ans
I saw your map in your modding queue.
Unfortunately, I'm not a good modder ;ㅅ;

[Blossom]

- I can't find what to fix... I'm sorry.


[Another]

- 00:49:528 (1) - move to x:192, y:40

- 00:46:442 (3,4,1) - It looks like 1/4. give more distance would be better.

- 00:53:814 (5,1) - NC in 5 and delete NC in 1.

- 01:00:500 (1,1) - delete NC

- 01:18:157 (3,4) - ctrl+g, so give consistency with former pattern.


[shyo's Insane]

- 00:59:985 (8,1) - decrease distance to 1.20x. If you want to emphasize the pattern, increase distance of 00:59:642 (6,7) would be better.


[Insane]

- 00:20:385 (4,5) - circle move to 00:20:385, and slider move to 00:20:557. It fits to music imo.

- 00:36:500 (5,6) - can you change this pattern like 00:48:328 (2,3)?

- 01:00:500 (2) - ctrl+g

- 01:15:242 (4) - move to 01:14:557 (1) slider's head.

-01:32:728 (2,3) - place these two circles with more distance.


[Hard]

- 00:05:642 (4) - NC

- 00:17:985 (3,4,5,6) - How about this one?

circle 4 is on the slider 5's head

- 00:35:814 (2,3) - It looks confuse in hard diff. Please make it more easy to read.

- 01:02:214 (7) - NC

- 01:13:528 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern suggestion


- 01:29:985 (1) - move to x:160, y:268


[Normal]

- NC looks weird in first half of diff. Can you change these NC like in Kiai time?

Rest of things are fine.


[Easy]

-00:07:700 (3,2) - decrease the length of slider. Ends at 00:08:385

-01:27:757 (2) - delete circle

-01:08:385 (1,2) - delete circle and increase the slider's length to 01:08:385 (1).

-01:09:414 (3,4), 01:16:614 (1,2), 01:17:642 (3,4) - ^



Good luck for rank!
__Hatsune_Miku
598 posts
Joined July 2014
__Hatsune_Miku
M4M

[First]
  1. Metadata artist: [ 猫叉Master ] / Romanised [ Nekomata Master ]
  2. Trun off Widdescreen Support
  3. look AiMod : Make BG size 1366 x 768
[Easy]
  1. No hit sound ?! :(
  2. 00:05:642 (2) - no Overlap
  3. 00:15:928 (2) - ^
  4. 00:59:128 (2) - ^
  5. 01:03:242 (2) - little down
[normal]
  1. 01:20:214 (4,1,2,3,4) - This part seems to be too gathered.
  2. 01:28:957 (1) - at less , you need 3 white tick end of spinner
[Hard]
  1. 00:35:300 (6,2) - This stack is not good
  2. 01:32:728 (2,3) - outspread is better
[insane]
  1. i pont some. 00:00:500 (1,3,5,1) - 00:04:614 (1,3,5,1,3) - 00:08:728 (1,3,5) - add whistle Slider start
  2. 00:03:585 (3,5,7) - 00:08:214 (5) - add whistle
  3. 00:08:557 (7) - No repeat Slider?
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
6th

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:

M4M

LQA20Ans wrote:

I saw your map in your modding queue.
Please make sure I accepted your request before starting M4M...

Anyway, thanks for the mods ! I'll take a look at them soon
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
6th
Fixed some. Waiting for GD replies, thank you !
N0thingSpecial
2,355 posts
Joined November 2015
N0thingSpecial

LQA20Ans wrote:

[Another]

- 00:49:528 (1) - move to x:192, y:40

- 00:46:442 (3,4,1) - It looks like 1/4. give more distance would be better. it's an insane diff people should learn to read these

- 00:53:814 (5,1) - NC in 5 and delete NC in 1. NC on downbeats is not really a problem

- 01:00:500 (1,1) - delete NC SV change needs NC

- 01:18:157 (3,4) - ctrl+g, so give consistency with former pattern. eh, I'll give it a try I guess nope apparently it plays really weird
No reply = changed/fixed

EDIT: http://puu.sh/osMCS/4f182d8176.osu
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Shyotamaze

LQA20Ans wrote:

[shyo's Insane]

- 00:59:985 (8,1) - decrease distance to 1.20x. If you want to emphasize the pattern, increase distance of 00:59:642 (6,7) would be better. The strong is quite strong for 00:59:985 (8,1) - so I'll keep it like this, 00:59:642 (6,7) - is not strong enough to emphasize it imo, but I could emphasize 00:59:814 (7,8) - if I get more complains

Good luck for rank!
Thanks for the mod! No change
Ah oui oublie pas de mettre AR9 pour ma diff 6th stp :(
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding
hi m4m

Easy
  1. 00:07:700 (3) - end this on the whit tick 00:08:385. It feels smoother to play and Im pretty sure matches the music better too
  2. 00:08:728 (1) - end at 00:09:414. I get that you were trying to end on the drum tick but think you should end it on the white tick as you've used a rhythm very similar to this earlier
  3. I kinda have a problem with some objects that are 1/2 beat apart such as 00:13:185 (2,3) I wouldnt recommend it at this bpm
  4. 00:16:957 (1,2) - You might really hate this but I would recommend changing this to slider like 00:17:985 (3) . It wouldnt become boring and repetitive if you do this
  5. 00:19:014 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:27:242 (1) - I would have this just a bit lower down http://puu.sh/ovFiM/1797244022.jpg
  7. 00:32:385 (2) - Because this is your only straight edge slider in the map it looks out of place. Because I like overlaps xd ---> http://puu.sh/ovFHL/a2bb7b440b.jpg
  8. 00:48:842 (2) - end on white tick and I'd also move 00:49:871 (1) to the left a bit. Having it under placed directly under 00:47:814 (1) - makes the pattern look a bit weird and messy
  9. 00:52:957 (3) - I'd have this as a slider to map the traingle like instrument thats played at 00:51:928 (1) . I'd just ctrl g these 2 00:52:957 (3,4) -
  10. 00:56:042 (1) - If you really want to map the red tick then do it this way http://puu.sh/ovFOe/0674e4720a.jpg . Every BN would say no to the current rhythm
  11. 00:58:100 (1,2) - I think underlaps look unattractive when both sliders curve the same way, try a blanket http://puu.sh/ovFAZ/1ce05e0018.jpg
  12. 01:01:185 (4,5) - ctrl g, same reason as - I'd have this as a slider to map the traingle like instrument thats played at 00:51:928 (1) . I'd just ctrl g these 2 00:52:957 (3,4) -
  13. Yh I kinda do have a problem with some beats being 1/2 spacing from each other. Also I kinda wish you started sliders on 01:11:471 (2) - and 01:19:700 (2) - etc. As if you listen to the music you've started sliders mapping the same sound at places such as 01:14:557 (1) - 01:16:614 (1) - 01:18:671 (1) - etc
Normal
  1. 00:19:528 (2) - Would do the pattern a lot more justice if you made this a normal curve
  2. 00:21:071 (1) - the rhythm is kinda awkward and does lack a bit of flow. try making this a 4/1 slider
  3. 00:23:128 (1) - ^
  4. 00:33:071 (4,5) - I'd prefer to have this as a 1/2 slider just to keep the note density down where you can
  5. 00:35:985 (2) - This overlap would look better if you moved the body a bit higher up than the tail of 00:35:471 (1) . Also I think perfectly horizontal sliders are a bit bleh, 2009 ish. try this? http://puu.sh/ovGrn/d7df158b37.jpg
  6. 01:00:157 (1,2,3,4) - I think the angles are a bit too sharp. Make them less narrow
  7. 01:03:242 (8,9) - ctrl g
  8. Overall I think you should follow the jungle sounds more than the drums as they are easier to follow with the ear and would be more fun to paly along with imo. For example at 01:10:442 (1) - you could follow the jungle sounds and still have the note density of a normal diff http://puu.sh/ovGYd/0e80849534.jpg
Hard
  1. 00:08:557 (7) - turn into 1/4 slider
  2. 00:14:557 (7,1) - fix blanket
  3. 00:15:414 (2) - would look better if you overlapped it a bit more
  4. 00:17:985 (3) - use 2 1/1 sliders like you did at 00:16:957 (1,2) -
  5. 00:27:585 (2) - use drum finish here?
  6. 00:27:928 (3) - drum clap?
  7. 00:56:900 (3) - same as 00:08:557 (7)
  8. 00:57:757 (7,1) - This is currently misleading. As the gap between these 2 objects would make you think 7 is a single reverse. Move a bit closer http://puu.sh/ovHb3/c4c6fe4bbf.jpg
  9. 01:16:271 (4,1) - same as above
  10. 01:22:442 (3,1) - Overlap these 2?
Insane
  1. 00:10:785 (1) - I havent seen this kinda of slider in ages xD. Dont have this kinda of sliders, theyre known as burai sliders https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Burai_Sliders
  2. 00:16:614 - I would map this. If you want the pause you can have it pause here 00:15:928 (3) -
  3. 01:12:500 (1) - open this slider up a bit
Allow me to finish this mod sometime later orz
Start
289 posts
Joined December 2012
Start
From your M4M: You have already modded mine


Extra
  1. 00:06:500 (7) - move to 5's place or Ctrl+G this: 00:06:157 (5,6)
  2. 00:16:614 (1,2) - Ctrl+G to make flow better.


Another
  1. 00:16:614 (2,3,1,2) - making this pattern start from the bottom seems have a better spacing with the previous slider due to this rhythm.
  2. 00:50:557 (1) - ctrl+G all those sliders in the similar patterns to make a larger spacing.
  3. 00:58:014 (7,1) - ???
  4. Good map XD

shyo's Insane
  1. 00:50:814 (4,5) - for all patterns in the sone like this, move the 4 away from last object and make a small jump to the next slider seems better, i.e.,in this one, move 4 to 512,67
  2. 00:57:071 (5) - imo we should avoid sliders like this: long and bent to two strait parts with similar length and obtuse angle. Make the length obviously different from each part or try to add more in both parts if you want to keep the lengths same.
  3. All the other issues are just mapping style issue so I can't give any advise.


Insane
  1. 00:10:785 (1) -unrankable
  2. 00:13:528 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - move 4 to the last one and move 5678 earlier.
  3. 00:20:900 (6) - add note at 463,244
  4. 00:44:728 (5,6,1,2) - seperate them away.
  5. 00:52:271 (2,3) - ctrl+G
  6. 01:16:614 (1) - make it curve upward.
  7. 01:17:642 (1) - ctrl+G and smaller the spacing between it and the previous and next objects
  8. 01:18:157 (3) - same
  9. 01:29:985 (1) - add something here, a spinner is too simple
  10. 01:28:957 (1,2,3,4) - move 4 to the head of 1

Hard
  1. 00:20:042 (3,4) - I'd like to use straight sliders here
  2. 00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - The two sliders are too short so looks not good if you put the two notes on the tails of them.
  3. 00:36:328 - Add a note here
  4. 00:38:728 (6) - 421,153
  5. 01:24:842 (1) -I'd like to change it as 3 points curve slider [212,92 275,118 311,177]
  6. 01:32:728 (2) -I'd like to move it to 1's place

Normal
  1. 00:15:928 (1) - move the red dot to 216,316 may looks better
  2. 00:33:071 (4,5,1) - NG for a Normal..and same opinion for all of the same triplet patterns after this
  3. 01:19:357 (3) - I think use this rhythm at this point will be better

EASY
  1. 00:13:185 (2,3) - Too many spacing like this in EASY might cause issues for ranking
  2. 00:58:100 (1,2) - Too hard to read for new players, might be unrankable
  3. those 1/2 spacing is kinda Normal level pattern and not appreciated to put into the EASY diff.

Good luck XD
xDololow
467 posts
Joined July 2014
xDololow
Hi. I just Hitsounded 4 diffs 4 u ;)
Nekomata Master - Silence (6th) [Insane].osu
Nekomata Master - Silence (6th) [Shyo's Insane].osu
Nekomata Master - Silence (6th) [N0thingSpecial's Another].osu
Nekomata Master - Silence (6th) [Exile-'s Blossom].osu
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
From M4M


  • General
  1. Metadata: Artist:猫叉Master Source:REFLEC BEAT
  2. The maximum pixels of a background is 1366x768, yours exceed the limit. Here is the fixed verison for you: http://puu.sh/owCYR/35b9837ba2.jpg

    Easy
  3. 01:04:614 - 01:06:328 - map it out, I don't hear any pause here
  4. 00:56:557 (2) - Use a 1/1 at 00:56:728 - is more suitable. Using 1/2s often in high-bpm Easy is not a good thing to new players, and in this case of this song, it's a waltz tempo song which is 1/1 tempo based, I wish you remove 1/2s as far as possible to make a proper Easy
  5. 00:58:100 (1,2) - such overlay is unkind for new players, I believe you can make a better one whose track is clear to see.

    Normal
  6. 00:00:842 (2) - unify the spacing
  7. 00:15:928 (1) - think twice before you make a slider in lower diffs, they should be clear enough, have a clean path which is easy to follow. In this case, I believe new players would get confused at the first sight. Try a new one please.
  8. 00:25:014 - miss a beat
  9. 01:05:300 - 01:06:328 - map it out please
  10. 01:32:900 (3) - unify the spacing

    Hard
  11. 01:16:271 (4) - shorten it to 01:16:442 -

    N0thingSpecial's Another
  12. 00:55:871 - 00:56:900 - it's not a good idea missing the beats, it's tricky and hard to catch, use 1/6 reverse sliders please

    Exile-'s Blossom
  13. 00:55:871 - 00:56:900 - no reason to miss them in the highest diff

Good luck!
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
6th
Hello ! Thank you all

I'm really sorry but I haven't got enough time to accurately reply to everyone. I fixed most of your suggestions, but I need to remap Normal's kiai.
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Shyotamaze

Remilia_CO wrote:

shyo's Insane
  1. 00:50:814 (4,5) - for all patterns in the sone like this, move the 4 away from last object and make a small jump to the next slider seems better, i.e.,in this one, move 4 to 512,67 Making a jump this big would be way too difficult for this diff and it would feel weird imo
  2. 00:57:071 (5) - imo we should avoid sliders like this: long and bent to two strait parts with similar length and obtuse angle. Make the length obviously different from each part or try to add more in both parts if you want to keep the lengths same. Changed it to a curvy slider for this one, others are fine imo
  3. All the other issues are just mapping style issue so I can't give any advise.

Good luck XD
Thanks for the mod!

1366x768
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N0thingSpecial
2,355 posts
Joined November 2015
N0thingSpecial
Remilia_CO
Another
  1. 00:16:614 (2,3,1,2) - making this pattern start from the bottom seems have a better spacing with the previous slider due to this rhythm. k sure
  2. 00:50:557 (1) - ctrl+G all those sliders in the similar patterns to make a larger spacing. not sure why would I need larger spacing
  3. 00:58:014 (7,1) - ??? 1/4 spaced stream jumps are fine in this bpm
  4. Good map XD

Frey
00:55:871 - 00:56:900 - it's not a good idea missing the beats, it's tricky and hard to catch, use 1/6 reverse sliders please fixed

here you go: http://puu.sh/oxZ5V/dffee17e72.osu
K1ayton
54 posts
Joined May 2015
K1ayton
Alright. A newbie mod is here.

[Easy]
00:16:957 (1,2) - I don't think that this pattern is clearly readable for newbies. 3/2 rhythm is very similar to 3/4 so you can change polarity correctly. I think you can look here t/55282. I think you should keep distance 1/1 between notes. (newbies get 100s and 50s here). It repeats several times in your map
00:32:385 (1) - I don't think that NC is needed here
00:50:557 (2,3) - Align them
01:23:814 (2) - A strong beat is on the end of the slider. How about make it clickable?
01:23:814 (2) - On the background of 1/1 beat 3/2 is not the best solution. Newbies would get 50 here.
01:33:071 Imo you should end a spinner here

[Normal]
I always think twice before setting 0.9 as a main spacing since it makes a map a bit boring. And I suggest you doing the same
00:11:300 (2) - How about make this rhythm like here? 00:09:242 (2) - Imo it fits better
00:51:757 A clickable object should be here since a strong beat is here
00:52:957 (3) - If you replace it with a 1/2 slider it would fit the rhythm perfectly
00:52:957 (3) - Overmapping. Otherwise I don't understand what does it follow
00:59:985 I don't think you should miss strong beats

[Hard]
00:08:557 (7) - ctrl+g?
The hard diff is clear

[Insane]
00:33:071 I think you should make this object clickable
00:58:100 (1,2,3,1) - These sliders do not follow the rhythm. The music and these objects do not match each other
01:29:985 (1) - How about map this gap instead of setting a slider here?
01:32:042 And putting a clickable object here is the best solution

[N0thingSpecial's Another]
00:08:557 (4) - Slider (2) overlaps a reverse arrow. It makes it a bit confusing
00:04:528 (4,1) - Space it properly for better play
01:17:642 (1) - Nazi: This slider is ugly :c

[Shyo's Insane]
00:16:614 (6) - I think NC should be here since music changes very fast
00:44:385 (3,4,5,6,7) - How about a perfect pentagon?

[Exile-'s Blossom]
00:19:957 (4) - A bit overmapped imo
Pretty clean

Mapset is very beatiful. The flow is good. That's why most of my suggestions are about rhythm
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
6th
Hi !

[Easy]
Fixed NC and spinner. About rhythm : even if it's easy it can be challenging. I mean, it's a rhythm game after all, they have to click at the right moment.

[Normal]
00:11:300 (2) - How about make this rhythm like here? 00:09:242 (2) - Imo it fits better - fixed
About the strong beat : it's not on red tick but on yellow tick and I don't want to overload

[Hard]
Didn't fix. I think it brings some emphasize to 00:08:728 (1) -

[Insane]
00:33:071 I think you should make this object clickable - fixed
I mapped the spinner part

Thank you !
Exile-
Elite Storyboarder
449 posts
Joined April 2013
Exile-

K1ayton wrote:

[Exile-'s Blossom]
00:19:957 (4) - A bit overmapped imo
There's a little drum sound here
N0thingSpecial
2,355 posts
Joined November 2015
N0thingSpecial

K1ayton wrote:

[N0thingSpecial's Another]
00:08:557 (4) - Slider (2) overlaps a reverse arrow. It makes it a bit confusing did something
00:04:528 (4,1) - Space it properly for better play perfectly fine fot his difficulty
01:17:642 (1) - Nazi: This slider is ugly :c welllllllllll eh did nothing
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Shyotamaze

K1ayton wrote:

[Shyo's Insane]
00:16:614 (6) - I think NC should be here since music changes very fast Fixed
00:44:385 (3,4,5,6,7) - How about a perfect pentagon? 00:44:900 (5) - is stacked with 00:42:157 (4) - , 00:45:071 (6) - with 00:44:214 (2) - and 00:45:242 (7) - with 00:44:385 (3) - so it would ruin my pattern
Thanks!

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PlasticMemor
204 posts
Joined June 2015
PlasticMemor
short m4m from your queue

[Insane]
  1. 00:00:500 (1) - i would move this a little bit upward
  2. 00:11:814 (5,6) - nice crossover
  3. 00:25:185 (1,2,3) - the distance is different from 1 to 2 than 2 to 3
  4. 00:32:214 (3,4) - if this is supposed to be overlap, it's not
  5. 00:45:757 (1,2) - spread these out a little
  6. 00:53:471 (3) - ctrl+j
  7. 00:59:471 (2,3,4,5) - move this pattern up a little
  8. 01:15:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fix this stream
  9. 01:31:528 (10,11) - this doesn't sound right

    [Shyo's Insane]
  10. 00:01:014 (2,3,4) - distance is uneven
  11. 00:06:328 (6,4) - overlap?
  12. 00:08:557 (9,1) - ^
  13. 00:41:642 (1,2,3) - this sounds weird than 00:41:128 (7,8,9)
  14. 00:55:871 (9,1) - overlap?
  15. 00:56:900 (4,5) - ^
  16. 01:01:700 (6) - make this equal to distance from 5 to 7
  17. 01:11:471 (5) - you can hitsound this to a clap or finish
  18. 01:12:500 (1) - ^
  19. 01:16:614 (1) - ^
  20. 01:28:270 (5,6,7) - this weird dip?
  21. 01:32:042 (4,5,6,7) - hitsound these?

    [Another]
  22. 00:01:528 (1,3) - overlap?
  23. 00:08:557 (4,1) - this doesn't look good
  24. 01:05:557 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this shape doesn't transists right
  25. 01:32:042 (1,1,1) - unnecessary NC

    [Blossom]
  26. 00:08:557 (7) - whistle off
  27. 00:11:642 - add a note here
  28. 00:14:214 (6,7,8,9) - spread this out a little more
  29. 00:29:300 (1,2,3) - overlap
  30. 00:57:414 (2) - whistle off
  31. 01:05:642 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - shape?
  32. 01:15:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - spread this out a little bit more
Last edited by PlasticMemor , edited 1 time in total.
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
6th
Hello, fixed the failed overlap.
N0thingSpecial
2,355 posts
Joined November 2015
N0thingSpecial

PlasticMemor wrote:

[Another]
00:01:528 (1,3) - overlap? intentional
00:08:557 (4,1) - this doesn't look good suggestion? compacted it for now
01:05:557 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this shape doesn't transists right did something
01:32:042 (1,1,1) - unnecessary NC 01:32:042 (1) - this one is needed for consistent NC pattern, 01:32:385 (1,1) - cause Polarity, NC for better read
UPDATE
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Shyotamaze

PlasticMemor wrote:

[Shyo's Insane]
  1. 00:01:014 (2,3,4) - distance is uneven Intended to emphasize
  2. 00:06:328 (6,4) - overlap? Remapped that part because it was a bit weird
  3. 00:08:557 (9,1) - ^ Fine and I must do it because they are so close in the timeline
  4. 00:41:642 (1,2,3) - this sounds weird than 00:41:128 (7,8,9) How? It follows the music
  5. 00:55:871 (9,1) - overlap? Same as before
  6. 00:56:900 (4,5) - ^ ^
  7. 01:01:700 (6) - make this equal to distance from 5 to 7 01:01:871 (7) - Needs more emphasize
  8. 01:11:471 (5) - you can hitsound this to a clap or finish My diff is not hitsounded yet, since idk if someone will hitsound it in another way I'll leave it as it is now
  9. 01:12:500 (1) - ^ ^
  10. 01:16:614 (1) - ^ ^
  11. 01:28:270 (5,6,7) - this weird dip? Intended
  12. 01:32:042 (4,5,6,7) - hitsound these? Same as before
Thanks!

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124,124,48328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
81,248,48500,2,0,P|96:287|128:319,1,85
278,314,48842,2,0,P|305:283|319:241,1,85
245,83,49185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,123,49357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,166,50385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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209,45,51414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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332,134,82442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,262,82614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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58,24,83300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Exile-
Elite Storyboarder
449 posts
Joined April 2013
Exile-

PlasticMemor wrote:

short m4m from your queue


  • [Blossom]
  1. 00:08:557 (7) - whistle off I think it fits
  2. 00:11:642 - add a note here not audible enough
  3. 00:14:214 (6,7,8,9) - spread this out a little more Why not
  4. 00:29:300 (1,2,3) - overlap On purpose
  5. 00:57:414 (2) - whistle off Its audible enough to get the whistle
  6. 01:05:642 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - shape? This is a cool shape
  7. 01:15:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - spread this out a little bit more Its fine imo

Take my energy! http://puu.sh/oPBL8/5c8ce0f569.txt
Zerss
730 posts
Joined December 2013
Zerss


hey~
m4m


    General

  1. The background is >1366*768. Use this one instead.
  2. You should put 猫叉Master as the artist name in every diffs, not only the Hard diff.
  3. I've checked every diffs and there is no storyboards, you should disable Widescreen Support.
  4. Add hitsounds.

    Easy

  1. 00:06:671 (1,2) - à mon avis, cet endroit est un peu maladroit, jusqu'à maintenant tu as appuyé le premier et le troisième temps, je vois pas pourquoi ici tu appuyerais le premier et le second, ce serait plus judicieux de faire cette partie sous la forme slider/circle
  2. 00:14:900 (1,2) - La distance entre la fin de (1) et le début de (2) et les fins de (1) et (2) semble un peu inconsistant, tu peux essayer d'avoir la même distance ici, au moins juste éviter de faire presque un overlap entre ces deux fins.
  3. 00:31:357 (1,2) - La position des sliders rend pas super bien à mon avis. Perso j'ai pas trouvé de choses qui vont bien, mais en transformant (2) en cercle, ça va tout aussi bien vu que à ce moment là, les nappes se coupent.
  4. 00:49:871 - Les NCs sont un peu inconsistants ici à mon avis.
Une diff sympa!

    Normal

  1. 00:15:928 (3) - Je m'étais déjà fait tapper sur les doigts pour avoir fait un truc du genre, apparemment avoir des éléments de sliders qui s'overlappent trop est interdit. Demande à un QAT ou à un BN, il saura mieux te dire que moi. De plus, le (3) overlap légèrement avec le prochain (1).
  2. 00:21:071 (5) - & 00:23:128 (7) - NC manquant.
  3. 00:24:842 (10,11) - Jusqu'à maintenant, tu fais ce rythme avec un slider, pourquoi le fait tu avec un cercle?
Un jeu sur le rythme impéccable; exactement ce que j'attend d'une map Normal!

    Hard

  1. 00:14:042 (5,1) - Petit overlap, tu deverais décaler le (1) plus à gauche ou rajouter de la distance pour le rendre moins "horrible"; de plus le blanket n'est pas parfait.
  2. 00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - Confus à cause du stacking, tu deverais placer les cercles un peu plus en haut à gauche pour simuler comme un stacking, ainsi les objets seraient mieux visible.
  3. 01:04:957 (6) - La fin sort de la zone de jeu.
Une diff cool.

    Insane

  1. 00:00:500 (1) - ça serait sympa d'arrondir la fin, comme ça, ça accentue l'arrivée de la prochaine note, pareil pour les prochaines
  2. 00:03:071 (2) - DS avec l'ancien objet un peu trop faible à mon avis.
  3. 00:10:785 (1) - ça relève que de mon avis, mais je n'aime pas quand la tête et la fin se touche, essaye peut-être d'éloigner le point rouge.
  4. 00:18:671 (7,8,1) - Un DS un peu trop accentué par rapport aux anciens
  5. 00:41:642 (1,2,3) - Tourne (1) et (2) comme (3).
  6. 01:29:985 (5,8,12) - NC manquants, n'oublie pas de retier 01:32:385 (1) -
Diff très jouable et amusant!

    Shyo's Insane

  1. 00:59:128 (5) - Essaye de placer le point rouge plus au centre du slider, ce serait cool d'accentuer la courbe des deux parties du slider aussi, pareil pour 00:37:528 (1) - et les autres
  2. 00:42:671 (6,7,8) - Avant tu avais un DS de 1.0x et là tu as 0.75x. Y a-t-il une raison? De plus, à 01:04:271 (6,7,8) - tu as 0.6x de DS.
  3. 01:27:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - La courbe de ce stream à l'air très bizarre; ce serait mieux de le refaire à mon avis.
  4. 01:31:871 (3,7) - Ce serait sympa de faire overlapper (7) avec (3), ça éviteras d'avoir un DS trop élevé.
Diff sympa

    N0thingSpecial's Another

  1. 00:33:071 (1,1,1) - Spamming NC? That's not a good idea because of the HP imo, same for the others.
  2. 00:50:557 (1) - Muting objects -even objects end- is not allowed, or not even recommended, that's really confusing to play.
Nice diff!

Nice map! Gogo for rank!
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
Topic Starter
6th

Zerss wrote:



hey~
m4m


    General

  1. The background is >1366*768. Use this one instead.
  2. You should put 猫叉Master as the artist name in every diffs, not only the Hard diff.
  3. I've checked every diffs and there is no storyboards, you should disable Widescreen Support.
  4. Add hitsounds.
Fixed

    Easy

  1. 00:06:671 (1,2) - à mon avis, cet endroit est un peu maladroit, jusqu'à maintenant tu as appuyé le premier et le troisième temps, je vois pas pourquoi ici tu appuyerais le premier et le second, ce serait plus judicieux de faire cette partie sous la forme slider/circle - L'instrument me paraît plus puissant
  2. 00:14:900 (1,2) - La distance entre la fin de (1) et le début de (2) et les fins de (1) et (2) semble un peu inconsistant, tu peux essayer d'avoir la même distance ici, au moins juste éviter de faire presque un overlap entre ces deux fins.
  3. 00:31:357 (1,2) - La position des sliders rend pas super bien à mon avis. Perso j'ai pas trouvé de choses qui vont bien, mais en transformant (2) en cercle, ça va tout aussi bien vu que à ce moment là, les nappes se coupent. - Certes, les débutants sont débutants, mais pas imbéciles (;
  4. 00:49:871 - Les NCs sont un peu inconsistants ici à mon avis.
Une diff sympa!

    Normal

  1. 00:15:928 (3) - Je m'étais déjà fait tapper sur les doigts pour avoir fait un truc du genre, apparemment avoir des éléments de sliders qui s'overlappent trop est interdit. Demande à un QAT ou à un BN, il saura mieux te dire que moi. De plus, le (3) overlap légèrement avec le prochain (1). - Je préfère attendre
  2. 00:21:071 (5) - & 00:23:128 (7) - NC manquant.
  3. 00:24:842 (10,11) - Jusqu'à maintenant, tu fais ce rythme avec un slider, pourquoi le fait tu avec un cercle? - C'est quasiment le seul instrument qu'on entend
Un jeu sur le rythme impéccable; exactement ce que j'attend d'une map Normal!

    Hard

  1. 00:14:042 (5,1) - Petit overlap, tu deverais décaler le (1) plus à gauche ou rajouter de la distance pour le rendre moins "horrible"; de plus le blanket n'est pas parfait. - Le flow prime sur le reste
  2. 00:35:300 (6,1,2,3) - Confus à cause du stacking, tu deverais placer les cercles un peu plus en haut à gauche pour simuler comme un stacking, ainsi les objets seraient mieux visible. - Honnêtement j'ai eu pas mal de testplay et pas un seul miss. Ca ajoute de la difficulté en terme de reading
  3. 01:04:957 (6) - La fin sort de la zone de jeu.
Une diff cool.

[notice]

    Insane

  1. 00:00:500 (1) - ça serait sympa d'arrondir la fin, comme ça, ça accentue l'arrivée de la prochaine note, pareil pour les prochaines - Mouais, est-ce que ça change tant que ça le mouvement du curseur ? :/
  2. 00:03:071 (2) - DS avec l'ancien objet un peu trop faible à mon avis. - J'ai pas voulu mettre de DS trop haut à cause du changement de rythme
  3. 00:10:785 (1) - ça relève que de mon avis, mais je n'aime pas quand la tête et la fin se touche, essaye peut-être d'éloigner le point rouge.
  4. 00:18:671 (7,8,1) - Un DS un peu trop accentué par rapport aux anciens
  5. 00:41:642 (1,2,3) - Tourne (1) et (2) comme (3). - Non, il y a un son significatif qui invite à casser le flow
  6. 01:29:985 (5,8,12) - NC manquants, n'oublie pas de retier 01:32:385 (1) -
Diff très jouable et amusant!
Merci beaucoup (:
Zerss
730 posts
Joined December 2013
Zerss

6th wrote:

  1. 00:00:500 (1) - ça serait sympa d'arrondir la fin, comme ça, ça accentue l'arrivée de la prochaine note, pareil pour les prochaines - Mouais, est-ce que ça change tant que ça le mouvement du curseur ? :/
C'est censé changer visuellement; c'est plus explicite -pour l’œil- de continuer dans la courbure.
N0thingSpecial
2,355 posts
Joined November 2015
N0thingSpecial

Zerss wrote:

N0thingSpecial's Another
  1. 00:33:071 (1,1,1) - Spamming NC? That's not a good idea because of the HP imo, same for the others. k dad
  2. 00:50:557 (1) - Muting objects -even objects end- is not allowed, or not even recommended, that's really confusing to play. slightly increased volume to 15%
Nice diff!
UPDATE
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Shyotamaze

Zerss wrote:

    Shyo's Insane

  1. 00:59:128 (5) - Essaye de placer le point rouge plus au centre du slider, ce serait cool d'accentuer la courbe des deux parties du slider aussi, pareil pour 00:37:528 (1) - et les autres Fixed
  2. 00:42:671 (6,7,8) - Avant tu avais un DS de 1.0x et là tu as 0.75x. Y a-t-il une raison? De plus, à 01:04:271 (6,7,8) - tu as 0.6x de DS. Fixed
  3. 01:27:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - La courbe de ce stream à l'air très bizarre; ce serait mieux de le refaire à mon avis. C'est fait exprès mais bon vu toutes les plaintes je changerai peut-être plus tard :(
  4. 01:31:871 (3,7) - Ce serait sympa de faire overlapper (7) avec (3), ça éviteras d'avoir un DS trop élevé. Fixed
Diff sympa

Merci ! Au fait faudrait mettre le mapset en pending non ?

6th is love, 6th is life
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N0thingSpecial
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N0thingSpecial
Welp might aswell

Exile
00:01:014 (2,3,1) - this feels kinda clustered and untidy, either curve/angle up the slider, or make the slider end for a triangles with 00:00:500 (1,2) -

00:16:614 (1,3) - better blanket?

00:27:071 (5,6,1) - I suggest manual stack them to fit in the slider like this, so it looks more tidy

01:00:157 (1,2,3) - I know it's spiral outward flow pattern, but I think you're ignoring the pattern 01:01:185 (4,5) - by doing so, I personally would prefer this

01:05:557 - I think there should be a note hear if you're mapping the drums

01:15:414 (5,6,7) - I think rotating this anti clockwise 90 degree would make it less awkwardly too flowy

01:06:328 (1) - is it even legal to end the slider this late?

N0thingSpecial
Kill yourself

shyo ma man
00:09:757 (4,5,6) - I suggest doing some anti flow, to break up the linear/oval flow have you going on, Like This, and I suggest looking at your map again and see if you used a certain type of flow too much, other wise players would get speed strain

00:37:528 (1) - just move the red anchor down a bit so it levels with the stream, looks tidier imo

00:41:128 (7,1) - not sure if it matter or not but blanket

00:41:128 (7,8,2,3) - I think you need to start implementing more variable spacing

01:09:414 (5,6,7,1) - I think for this pattern to work, 01:09:414 (5,7) - these two can't be parallel otherwise 01:10:442 (1) - would look very out of place, OR change the shape of 01:10:442 (1) - so that it doesn't relate to the two previous sliders

01:22:785 (1) - just make this slider a bit more curvy like this

01:27:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would suggest moving 01:27:928 (1,2,3,4,5) - down so that 01:28:270 (5) - would be straight with the slider at the end, rather than in between, also imo streams in 4s looks tidier

01:31:014 (1,2) - why not just copy the shape to make it more tidy?

01:32:042 (4) - NC? idk I'm not good at NC yet lol

I'm a pleb so I suck at modding lower diffs sorry 6th I tried
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