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Camellia feat. Nana Takahashi - Mushi no Sumu Tokoro [Osu|Ta

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Shiirn
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, June 22, 2016 at 2:38:36 PM

Artist: Camellia feat. Nana Takahashi
Title: Mushi no Sumu Tokoro
Source: BeatStream
Tags: AnimTribe BeatStream2 アニムトライヴ puxtu nwolf fetish cheesiest happyrocket88 mikasaserket WUBS bugs tV sIZe
BPM: 161.5
Filesize: 3729kb
Play Time: 01:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. cheesiest's Hard (3.72 stars, 325 notes)
  2. Decay (5.38 stars, 419 notes)
  3. Insane (4.48 stars, 376 notes)
  4. Mika's Advanced (2.25 stars, 135 notes)
  5. Nwolf's Muzukashii (3.36 stars, 404 notes)
  6. Nwolf's Oni (5.25 stars, 597 notes)
  7. puxtu's HD - 4Key (3.08 stars, 799 notes)
  8. puxtu's MX - 4Key (4.17 stars, 1172 notes)
  9. Rocket's Easy (1.32 stars, 85 notes)
  10. The Fetish's Extra (5.35 stars, 410 notes)
Download: Camellia feat. Nana Takahashi - Mushi no Sumu Tokoro
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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「"Life is short", as she runs off into the forest.
The snap of her ankle is the only response,
The sounds of her life fading into the empty darkness,
until a wail of anguish four weeks later.」
Last edited by Shiirn , edited 53 times in total.
Luel Roseline
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Luel Roseline
★
Shoga
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Shoga
^
Ongaku
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Ongaku
:u
Luel Roseline
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Luel Roseline
I willing to...
Shoga
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Shoga
^
EphemeralFetish
472 posts
Joined May 2014
EphemeralFetish
Let me GD you whore.
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
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Shiirn
only below, babe
SuperMIC
420 posts
Joined July 2011
SuperMIC
i only get 1 kd for this mod therefore it isnt worth it

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[Decay]

00:08:876 (4) - i think this needs more spacing to emphasize this swiggity new vocal phrase
00:14:449 (2) - this always trips me up; funnily enough i think it would be better if you just replace it with a hitcircle on 00:14:511
00:14:635 (1) - if you follow the above suggestion you can also change this to a slider + hitcircle
00:17:978 (1) - oW (for reference I only touched the two ticks after the red one)

SPOILER

00:25:316 - not sure if you want to do anything with this but there's some 1/8 here
00:30:981 (3,4,1) - fool around with the placement of (3,4) and add some sliderpoints

SPOILER

00:38:226 (4) - mm, don't like a red-tick slider here. if anything it could be a hitcircle here and then a slider on 00:38:412
00:48:350 - assuming you fixed this missing beat
00:49:929 (1) - should be spaced much further away from (4) imo
00:50:486 (1,2) - fine as is but if you could find a way to give these notes even more emphasis it would be cooler
00:59:124 - missing vocal beat again
01:00:703 (1) - i think this slider ends on a beat that should be clicked on
01:13:707 (1) - it always feels weird going to this note because the previous patterning makes me want to go back over to the left of the screen again; at the very least I think this needs more spacing
01:15:563 - there is a very distinct 1/3 rhythm here; not sure if you want to map to that instead of the 1/4

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ur edgy

-SMIC
Shiirn
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Shiirn

SuperMIC wrote:

i only get 1 kd for this mod therefore it isnt worth it

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[Decay]

00:08:876 (4) - i think this needs more spacing to emphasize this swiggity new vocal phrase nah
00:14:449 (2) - this always trips me up; funnily enough i think it would be better if you just replace it with a hitcircle on 00:14:511 not sure what to do with this eh
00:14:635 (1) - if you follow the above suggestion you can also change this to a slider + hitcircle the thing is the kick is the only 1/6 in the map except the weird shit at the end and i don't normally map the 1/3 to circles
00:17:978 (1) - oW (for reference I only touched the two ticks after the red one) k
00:25:316 - not sure if you want to do anything with this but there's some 1/8 here i know there is and it's insanely hard if i map them and doesn't fit right
00:30:981 (3,4,1) - fool around with the placement of (3,4) and add some sliderpoints did something different
00:38:226 (4) - mm, don't like a red-tick slider here. if anything it could be a hitcircle here and then a slider on 00:38:412 i like the offbeat slider here. :(
00:48:350 - assuming you fixed this missing beat not really MISSED, but whatever
00:49:929 (1) - should be spaced much further away from (4) imo I remapped this area a bit.
00:50:486 (1,2) - fine as is but if you could find a way to give these notes even more emphasis it would be cooler stuff
00:59:124 - missing vocal beat again not touching this as the sliderend before it works fine and the off-tune voice isn't worth emphasizing as it's not an important grammatical part of the sentence (in english, imagine having the word "as" off-tuned on a 1/4 that doesn't follow the beat, whereas actual words are on white and red ticks - you'd skip it too!
01:00:703 (1) - i think this slider ends on a beat that should be clicked on The wub is more important here than the "hi" of "hibiku". Again, it's about vocal emphasis. there are stressed syllables for words in every language, and here, "bi" is the stressed syllable and "hi" can largely be discarded in favor of the wub without losing anything importnat.
01:13:707 (1) - it always feels weird going to this note because the previous patterning makes me want to go back over to the left of the screen again; at the very least I think this needs more spacing k
01:15:563 - there is a very distinct 1/3 rhythm here; not sure if you want to map to that instead of the 1/4 The two 1/4 sliders fit the growl perfectly fine. The 1/3 is very very background and not worth emphasizing.

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ur edgy Fetish calls it spicy. I think that works better.

-SMIC

Peace,

-Boem-
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Hai hai, as promised.

I am a sensual Easy diff. Be gentle >w<
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: mushi.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43984
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14952,17924,29813,44673,59534,68451,74395,86283,90742,91856,92971,93992
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Mushi no Sumu Tokoro
TitleUnicode:蟲の棲む処
Artist:Camellia feat. Nana Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:Camellia feat. Nana Takahashi
Creator:Shiirn
Version:Easy
Source:Beatstream 2
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:436978

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Shiirn
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Topic Starter
Shiirn
HappyRocket or HR88?
Log Off Now
955 posts
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#memehelp M4M

[General]

Mika's Normal - Tags conflict with other difficulties / cheesiest's Hard - Audio Preview time conflicts with other difficulties

[Easy]

00:13:241 (2,3,4) - Personal preference - I would prefer a more linear flow here that also gives a bit easier access to the spinner a bit like this? idk :p

00:49:929 (5,1) - nazi blanket (so sorry)

00:53:272 (4,5) - ^ (double sorry)

00:58:102 (1) - I would prefer it if the red anchor point was where the white tick in the slider is, just adds a bit more emphasis on the kick here (kinda like how you did here 00:59:588 (3) - for the wub)

01:22:994 (4,1) - nazi blanket

nice diff m8

[Normal]

00:07:576 (3,1) - nazi blanket

00:12:220 (1) - Shouldn't the spinner start here 00:12:034 - ? Or is there a missing note? XD

00:35:068 (2,1) - blanket

00:58:102 (3,4,5) - This could potentially be a bit confusing to new players, I would recommend changing the slider angle a bit towards the 4 so it gives some sense of direction for the player

01:00:145 (2,3) - Too hard for a normal imo, Ctrl + G the (3)

01:01:631 (2,3) - ^

01:04:789 (4,1) - Distance error? Really confused as to why this is like this compared to all your other patterns that look like this

01:34:046 (2) - NC the last one? Since you NC'd all the others why not have another for the big finish?

[Hard]

4* Hard diff is a little high imo?

00:18:721 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think using this pattern over and over again might get a bit tiring for a hard diff and it is relatively hard for players at this level to keep stamina, for some of these (not all) I would suggest using a repeating slider + 2 notes just to give players a bit of a break whilst also keeping your rhythm, idk just a suggestion

00:19:464 (1) - Raise this a little higher and to the right? Would make the stream blanket this slider then :)

00:30:424 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would prefer it if you kept the spacing consistent here (except for maybe the last 2 notes) or increase the spacing gradually (since the vocals rise in pitch) for a better effect here

00:36:926 (4,1) - nazi blanket

00:59:774 (2) - The angle that this slider flows at really doesn't match the flow coming off of 00:59:588 (1) - . I would prefer it if you at least angled the first half the slider a bit higher so it's more of a triangle flow instead of a super sharp flow (even though this may be intentional I'm not much of a fan of it in this instance)

01:01:260 (2) - ^ Although this flow isn't as 'bad' as the previous one so eh idk if I would change this one much if at all

01:09:620 (6) - I would highly reccommend NCing SV changes, greatly improves readability

the mid section of this is so fun

[Insane]

Don't click this box if you don't like me pointing out blankets
00:05:718 (3,1) - (3) slider end to X:198 Y:162
00:09:805 (4,6) - (4) slider end to X:214 Y:244
00:10:548 (1,2) - (2) slider middle to X:403 Y:215 // slider end to X:369 Y:283
00:14:449 (2,4) - (2) slider middle to X:162 Y:274 // slider end to X:163 Y:220
ok i ran out of steam fixing them but at least the intro is fixed right?.... right.... *runs*

00:03:118 (1,2,3) - even spacing pls? ;D

00:12:034 - 00:15:006 - This is a thing of beauty

00:25:409 (2) - I would NC this since it's an SV change and it would really improve readability (at least for me anyway)

00:27:452 (3) - ^

00:31:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would prefer this shape to be more aggressive like you have done the previous shape, just adds a bit extra consistency

00:35:068 (1) - slider middle X:402 Y:285 // slider end X:475 Y:275 - Made this suggestion so it stays at the same angle as the previous 2 sliders, previously it looked a bit messy (aesthetics yo)

00:35:440 (2) - Again I would NC this SV change, probably more so than previous suggestions since this one is more aggressive

The kiai is so fun to play, been ages since i played a map like this

01:32:467 (3,4,5,6) - I would space this part a bit further away from 2, the spacing decreases after the first section when the pitch is rising, it would also fit the next section well since that spacing also increases

[Decay]

Ok so I tried modding this but it's so different to everything else i've modded before and I'd rather not talk shit about stuff I don't know about so i'll leave it here (sorry) q.q Hope this helped!
Ongaku
607 posts
Joined January 2014
Ongaku
inb4 Shiirn kicks me into fixing his blankets
Shiirn
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Topic Starter
Shiirn

Ongaku wrote:

inb4 Shiirn kicks me into fixing his blankets
/me kicks
Crimmi
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Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Umm, the source is NOT Beatstream 2, it's BeatStream アニムトライヴ or BeatStream AnimTribe (If you want it in engrish).

I also shot a KD for you.

Plus, isn't the gap from Normal to Hard a bit too wide?
Shiirn
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Shiirn
@crimmi k

Log Off Now wrote:

#memehelp M4M

[Insane]


00:03:118 (1,2,3) - even spacing pls? ;D k

00:12:034 - 00:15:006 - This is a thing of beautyk

00:25:409 (2) - I would NC this since it's an SV change and it would really improve readability (at least for me anyway) pass

00:27:452 (3) - ^ pass

00:31:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would prefer this shape to be more aggressive like you have done the previous shape, just adds a bit extra consistency also pass, the drop is suitable as-is

00:35:068 (1) - slider middle X:402 Y:285 // slider end X:475 Y:275 - Made this suggestion so it stays at the same angle as the previous 2 sliders, previously it looked a bit messy (aesthetics yo) made it a bit better

00:35:440 (2) - Again I would NC this SV change, probably more so than previous suggestions since this one is more aggressive nc for slider velocity changes doesn't fit this kind of wub map

The kiai is so fun to play, been ages since i played a map like this

01:32:467 (3,4,5,6) - I would space this part a bit further away from 2, the spacing decreases after the first section when the pitch is rising, it would also fit the next section well since that spacing also increases
HappyRocket88
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Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Log Off, I honestly don't see any problem with them. /w\ Would you mind providing how they should look for you? So in that way I can see what pixed I have to move to make it as you're referring. ;w;
Log Off Now
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Joined May 2014
Log Off Now

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Log Off, I honestly don't see any problem with them. /w\ Would you mind providing how they should look for you? So in that way I can see what pixed I have to move to make it as you're referring. ;w;
For 00:49:929 (5,1) - Slider middle to X:129 Y:83 (on 1)

For 00:53:644 (5,1) - Slider middle to X:395 Y:285 // Slider end to X:387 Y:334 (on 5)

For 01:22:994 (4,1) - Slider start to X:337 Y:88 // Slider middle to X:350 Y:37 // Slider end to X:341 Y:0

I told you they were tiny lmao, probably too small to pick up on but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Xenans
37 posts
Joined October 2009
Xenans
dude nice tags

Stack leniency is all the way at the left for no reason on Easy for no reason, and I doubt it is used for the other difficulties either, so consider just setting it to default.

Normal -> Hard is a bit too large, as Crimmi mentioned. I don't even think you can call that a hard anymore


Rocket's Easy
For any blanket mods, if you feel you can't see them, feel free to PM me ingame or ask for a reply on this thresd
00:46:214 (1,3,5) - Blanket is off

01:17:421 (3) - Would make more flow to move it towards the spot where the previous slider is pointing, instead of what it is blanketing.

Mika's Normal
00:09:062 (1) - Might be a bit weird putting this so close to the previous slider because of the spacing

00:12:220 (1) - Should this not be moved onto the downbeat?

00:24:666 (3,4,5) - the 3 and the 4 may need a NC because they are similar in stacking to 00:19:464 (1,2,1) - , which has the NCs

00:58:102 (3,4) - DS?

01:04:789 (4,1,2) - Very weird DS, very hard to read

Cheesiest's "Hard"
00:34:325 (1) - May want to stack under the long slider so it is similar to 00:31:353 (1,2) - and 00:29:867 (1,2) -

00:55:687 (3,4,5) - Is there a reason for the spacing of the triple other than to simply keep them inside the field while keeping them staggered? Consider just stacking the triple on top of the slider.

01:08:133 (6) - Consider pointing downwards to flow better into the next slider, or making it parallel with 01:07:762 (5) -

Insane
00:21:322 (2) - Unsnapped end

00:51:229 (5,6,7) - Spacing inconsistent with 00:47:142 (4,5,6) -
MikasaSerket
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Joined December 2014
MikasaSerket

Xenans wrote:

Mika's Normal
00:09:062 (1) - Might be a bit weird putting this so close to the previous slider because of the spacing The one white tick spacing seems fine to me? It's not too far nor too close to the previous slider.

00:12:220 (1) - Should this not be moved onto the downbeat? If you mean the big white tick, it would make sense for the spinner to begin right there. However, since this is a normal, I wanted to give time for the player to react to the spinner.

00:24:666 (3,4,5) - the 3 and the 4 may need a NC because they are similar in stacking to 00:19:464 (1,2,1) - , which has the NCs The NC's for that section are weird lol

00:58:102 (3,4) - DS? rip patterns

01:04:789 (4,1,2) - Very weird DS, very hard to read I like the pattern, I fixed the slightly crooked blanket though : >
Thank you senpai!
MikasaSerket
520 posts
Joined December 2014
MikasaSerket

Log Off Now wrote:

#memehelp M4M


[Normal]

00:07:576 (3,1) - nazi blanket FIGHT ME AND MY BLANKETS, fixed.

00:12:220 (1) - Shouldn't the spinner start here 00:12:034 - ? Or is there a missing note? XD I see what you're talking about but I wanted to give the player time to react to the spinner since it is a normal difficulty

00:35:068 (2,1) - blanket FIGHT ME, fixed

00:58:102 (3,4,5) - This could potentially be a bit confusing to new players, I would recommend changing the slider angle a bit towards the 4 so it gives some sense of direction for the player I liked how it was linear but okay : <

01:00:145 (2,3) - Too hard for a normal imo, Ctrl + G the (3) Fixed : o, same with below

01:01:631 (2,3) - ^

01:04:789 (4,1) - Distance error? Really confused as to why this is like this compared to all your other patterns that look like this because I am weird.

01:34:046 (2) - NC the last one? Since you NC'd all the others why not have another for the big finish? okok
thank you <3

Update: Posted in forums because puush isnt working rip
osu file format v14

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HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Fixed everything from mods, excep for the secodn suggestion of Xenans which I disagreed due the purpose of placing 3 where it is is to make a harder motion which matches with the pitch of the instruments in this part. ;w;

asereje ajá deje dejebe tu dejeb SEI VI NOUVA
osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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[Metadata]
Title:Mushi no Sumu Tokoro
TitleUnicode:蟲の棲む処
Artist:Camellia feat. Nana Takahashi
ArtistUnicode:Camellia feat. Nana Takahashi
Creator:Shiirn
Version:Rocket's Easy
Source:Beatstream 2
Tags:cheesiest happyrocket88 mikasaserket WUBS bugs tV sIZe
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cheesiest
721 posts
Joined September 2009
cheesiest

Xenans wrote:

Cheesiest's "Hard"
00:34:325 (1) - May want to stack under the long slider so it is similar to 00:31:353 (1,2) - and 00:29:867 (1,2) -

00:55:687 (3,4,5) - Is there a reason for the spacing of the triple other than to simply keep them inside the field while keeping them staggered? Consider just stacking the triple on top of the slider.

01:08:133 (6) - Consider pointing downwards to flow better into the next slider, or making it parallel with 01:07:762 (5) -
no to all
1nd suggestion: not same song pattern thingy
2rd suggestion: well ds kinda but also looks cool (neater, imo)
3st suggestion: i think. the way it is Right now looks cool and im . not really shure if it "flows' beter or whateer tbh.
__Phantomhive__
114 posts
Joined November 2015
__Phantomhive__
Nice Map.
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Shiirn
Updates out.
Shiirn
2,896 posts
Joined August 2010
Topic Starter
Shiirn
Modding my GDs.

HR88
  1. absolute soul
  2. also do you want me to get slidertick hitsounds for kicks?

Mikasa
  1. I went through the map and fixed up minor spacing issues for you.

cheesiest
  1. 00:04:604 (1,2) - it's weird that these stack but 00:05:347 (4,5) - don't. Stack leniency is weird like that. Fix it or ask me to.
  2. 00:19:094 (7,8) - Would work better as a 1/2 slider. This goes for all the wub rolls, so 00:25:037 (7,8) - 00:22:065 (7,8) - etcetc.
  3. 00:30:424 (2,3,4,5,6) - even these out or make the pattern neater, it looks weird from ugliness rather than weird for aesthetics.
  4. 00:33:582 (2) - goes too far up, hits HP bars, lower it a bit
  5. 00:59:124 (4) - The kick on 00:59:217 - is too strong to pass up. Make this a triple or something.
  6. 00:59:774 (2,3) - manually stack these
  7. 01:01:260 (2,3) - ^
  8. 01:09:620 (6) - i hope i can get this ranked this is cute
MikasaSerket
520 posts
Joined December 2014
MikasaSerket

Mikasa
  1. I went through the map and fixed up minor spacing issues for you.

Thanks dad
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