Asonate wrote:

yo, took me a while, but here's the NM you wanted :3

[Something that might possible exceed the limits of realness]

1. 00:20:414 (1) - maybe blanket this with 00:21:091 (2) - it's totally not i wanted lol
2. 00:21:091 (2) - also, this slider might look cleaner if you made the loop more round, this can be achieved by making the "top" longer is pretty nice imo
3. 00:28:475 (2) - not sure if you want feedback on these, but this slider isnt perfectly symmetrical to the x-axis, you can check that by ctrl+j'ing the slider cause i rotate the slider = =, you can turn 10 degree back and see it again
4. 00:49:667 (7,8,1) - this spacing feels way too low for me, maybe move 00:49:782 (8) - to be blanketed by 00:49:321 (6) - i dont want to make diffcuclt jumps tho, and this part sint that intense to make the big jumps as 01:14:821 (1,2,3,4) -
5. 01:17:591 (1,2,3) - maybe make that a repeat-slider? The 1/3 caught me kinda offguard when playing nah actually it wont since ive played it myself and it seems pretty fine to me
6. 01:45:758 (2) - why is this one curved? consider making it a straight slider, just like 01:45:297 (1,3,4) - are express the juitar sound here
7. 03:28:680 (1) - tbh, i dont think that should be 4 repeats long. like this, the sliderend falls on a pretty heavy kick, and the following slider starts on a weaker tick, then the slider before ended. Really consider making that section 2 repeat 1/3 sliders. mainly following the synth sound here, so if the "heavy kick" you mentioned is the drum sound then it wont matter since the player can play it by listening the synth sound
8. 03:48:988 (1) - get someone to check if that distortion sound is 1/4, it sounds a bit off to me. Maybe try 1/6 yap, fixed to 1/6
9. Pretty general, but i kinda feel like the SV is too high for the end... Not a lot to do about it now, so i guess its pointless to bring that up haha lol i slow down the sv at the last part tho

All in all, a fun map, it poses quite the challenge!ty
GL

Zexous wrote:

nice map

Monstrata wrote:

Fixed some minor snapping and concurrent red/green line issues. Looks good to me so let's get this approved!

Tokido Haku wrote:

congratulations!

not sure if this is an issue but 00:45:744 (1,2,3,4) - with the current combo colour isn't very clear with the storyboard on.

Sotarks wrote:

RIP Rabbit meme style
Hello NiNO v2!

Gratz my boy <3

Bonsai wrote:

00:17:397 (2,1) - You stacked all future sliders like that, seems like this is an accident? lol really wont effect the player when there are play the map lol

I read that you already answered about 03:28:680 -, but I don't really understand your reasoning - You say you follow the synth, but the synth has no special note at the heads of the (2)s at all, if anything the notes at 03:28:911 have the highest pitch (which shouldn't be an argument either), but other than that I don't see any reason to completely ignore the basic rhythm here. I even played this with HalfTime (even though I can kinda play it nomod too) and still couldn't get any of them right because it felt so unnatural and unreasonable to me. welp this part was mainly fixed by nerova, maybe you should slow down to 50% or 25% to hear it (25% is clearer, there are a clean separate synth sound between 1 and 2, and yea there was a drum sound at every 1s sliderend, but i think the synth sound is more intense then the drum sound here, so i rather follow the synth instead of drum

Also on a sidenote, I don't really understand why you did 05:07:447 (1,2,3,4) like that, because you never overmapped like that before, even though the three previous combos are exactly the same, and it doesn't add gameplay-iintensity either - As a player, you just completely stop on those sliders and then make just tiny movements to get to the next slider, emphasis-wise this seems very understating to me, would be cool to hear your thoughts behind this too dont you think if there are all 1/2 slider at the most intense part would be very boring? well i think it is, so i map sth different at the last measure, and the spacing issue, i want to make an effect that you are going to the calm part soon, so just dont let the spacing that big, and imo the spacing here isnt really a problem since is not small either

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

Tokido Haku wrote:

congratulations!

not sure if this is an issue but 00:45:744 (1,2,3,4) - with the current combo colour isn't very clear with the storyboard on.

well the combo colour isnt totally white, so is still readable

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.

jonathanlfj wrote:

rebub #1

RikiH_ wrote:

5.37 stars.

SURE

Despite this, before re-qualifying I think 00:21:091 (1) - this slider can be made better, since at the moment it's not very good imo :c

Kaitjuh wrote:

I took one look at the Storyboard again and I ran into a problem I hadn't fixed yet.

During the "Bonetrousle" part of the song the Orange Background image was bigger than the other Background Images.

Here's the updated osb.

Sorry for not noticing this sooner, since it's bubbled and all ><

smallboat wrote:

Okay, confirm the SB issue fixed. #2 Re-bubbled