Damn, there you go again with your monster mods ^^ Thanks man
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Thanks for all the work you put into this mod :3snowball112 wrote:
Heya, here's the promised modGeneral Stuff
- Correct Artist and Title should be "Shawn Wasabi + YDG - Burnt Rice (feat. YUNG GEMMY)" as on the artist's soundcloud. Fixed
- From the video, you should put Midi Fighter 64 in the tags for the device the song is performed on. You can also remove "electro" from the tags as the song would be assigned the "electronic" genre once it is ranked, Fixed
- Maybe change the hardest diff to "Burnt Oni" or something? Might be more appropriate for taiko, but this is up to you. Called it Oni as I am getting a higher guest diff
- Preview point at 00:36:421 or 00:37:171 would be better imo. Hm sure, why not
Not sure if you really need all of those timing points, I'd consider removing: Ah yeah, I mapped this before I properly started using bookmarks, so some timing points were just for myself *derp*Also, it might be better to go for 80-90% volume for all timing points starting from 00:18:889 , 100 feels like just a bit too much. 85 it is then
- 00:21:327 and 00:21:889, this volume decrease doesn't really do much for your map. This is there so the played notes don't overpower the 2 sounds in the song which are a little quieter than the rest
- 00:25:171 is not needed Is removed
- 00:49:171 , I think its better if you just leave it as one kiai burst for simplicity. While the Kiai/normal ratio is a little on the igh side for this map I kind of really want to map the whole "awesome part" as kiai and not have it stop half way through. Hope this is alright ^^
- 01:37:171 ^ This right here is the hardest part of the song so I do prefer having it mapped as Kiai time tbh
- 01:13:171 Removed
- 01:54:796 Removed
OniI know I suggested to take out several finishes, but I really think these are overdone and that it is better to have lower amounts of finishes outside of the kiai time to make this stand out more. Some are gone, some stayed ^^. Rip most of them though
- 00:09:421 (36,37,38) - these just sound way too strong, I'd recommend a simple d d k for emphasis on the last note, sounds better imo. Hmm how about ddK ?
- 00:12:421 - k? You have a sound here like at 00:12:046. I want to keep pattern consistency with 00:09:421 (36)
- 00:13:733 (55,56) ctrl+g? I think it would be nice to have a k on the last note for the clap, maybe even make the pattern of 00:13:546 (54,55,56) ddk, but kdk works too. This pattern is clearly melody mapped, listen to the chirping like meldoy. If any other melody mapping suggestion denies like this one will follow those will be only labeled as "melody mapping"
- 00:15:421 - This finish doesn't really make sense at all, I'd suggest you change this to a k, you have the same sound here as at 00:13:921. Changed to d
- 00:14:671 (58,59) - ctrl+g? You have 2 deeper sounds on the last two notes and something like a clap on the first, kdd would be better imo. Melody mapping
- You may want to add a d at 00:15:983 for the deep sound in the music. I will leave that to the higher difficulty ^^
- 00:16:546 (64,65,66) - I'd recommend kdk, strong clap on the last note. Melody mapping
- 00:17:296 (67,68,69,70) - I feel like kkdk would be better here, the music doesn't really call for a finish at this point, and also plays nicer without one here. Changed
- You have similar sounds on 00:19:171 and 00:18:796, I'd suggest you make both these notes k, or change 00:18:796 (79,80,81) to d k D, this might fit your style better. K finish just sounds overdone, but D would sound nice I think. The second suggestion it is then
- 00:19:546 (82,83,84) maybe try kdk for the clap? What you're following currently works as well, but the clap sounds is pretty strong here. Melody mapping
- 00:21:421 - k? Melody mapping
- If you wanted, you could start a 1/4 ddddk pattern here, the music would support this. I'd rather be consistent and stick with the melody ^^
- I'm pretty sure 00:24:171 (21,22,23) is not on the beats. If you slow down the song, you should be able to hear that the first note should snap to 1/4. I've tried around with this and find that it plays best if you remove 00:24:171 and 00:24:296 and change 00:24:421 to d. I went in an listened to the whole thing again on different speeds. The first part is 1/8 and the second 1/4 so I went with that ^^
- The spacing of 00:24:702 seems kind of random. I'd suggest you move this to 00:24:608 and maybe add d at 00:24:796 or map to the 1/6 that you can hear starting from 00:24:796 if you slow down the music.
- I think you could change 00:27:702 to k, would be a further emphasis for this note aside from the spacing. For these 2 points: I went with mapping the "ba" with a don instead, got rid of the issues
- Remove the finish from 00:28:171. The sound is the same as 00:28:546 (12,13). Changed
- 01:04:171 - ^ ^
- I feel like 00:29:296 should be a k for the snare in the music, you might even consider having a kdk pattern starting from 00:29:108 for further emphasis. kat it is
- 00:30:421 (19,20,21,22,23) kkddK as suggested in IRC. Changed
- 01:18:421 (254,255,256,257,258) - ^ ^
- 00:32:296 (26,27,28,29) - This would work better as either k d dk or k d kk. If you want to put more on the emphasis on the instrument I think k d kk is the best choice. changed
- I feel like you could change 00:33:983 to k for the higher sound here. I think a d plays better here with the K's following
- I think it's better for your structure if you change 00:34:171 (35,36,37,38,39,40) to dkkkdk to follow the instruments more closely, the finishes seem overdone. Those are here to stay. Changed to KKDDKK though
- You can remove 00:36:702, it doesn't really add much to your map in my opinion. Changed
- 01:24:702 - ^ ^
- Maybe try a k at 01:03:702? No, the pitch is too low for that
- 01:07:171 remove finish, same sound as 01:01:171. Okay
- You may want to ctrl+g 01:08:483 (208,209) to put more emphasis on the doublet of 01:08:671 (209,210). Hm I think I will stick to Melody mapping :p
- Maybe change 01:09:702 to k as well for emphasis of 01:09:514 (214,215). Melody mapping
- I feel like the pattern of 01:09:983 (216,217,218,219,220,221) would sound much better as DKddkD. You have a stronger finish on 01:10:171, so K would be nice here, while 01:10:358 (218,219) as dd would be nice for contrast with the clap on 01:10:733. Changed the pattern slightly to dKkkkD
- 01:11:296 - k. Okay
- I think 01:12:046 (226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234,235) would sound much better as something like dkkkk ddddk to represent the drum sounds better. The first one is definitely a ddddk. second one now is a dkdkd ^^
- 01:15:702 k? Melody mapping
- 01:16:171 remove finish. Okay
- I suggest you bring the part of 01:20:296 until the beginning of the second kiai in line with the suggestions from 00:32:296 to beginning of the first kiai. It is in line with what I did change
- I'd remove the finishes from 01:49:546 (428,429,430,431), I feel this is too much. I feel you might be right
- 01:54:046 - d nope. I like it this way better
- I think 01:54:796 works better as D for the lower pitch compared to 01:54:421. Okay
- The last part from 01:57:608 feels really unexpected, I would have thought the song would end at 01:54:796. Maybe use a spinner from 01:55:546 to 01:56:671 at low volume to bridge that gap or remove the last part to bring this diff in line with the others. I have some suggestions for this part, so poke me ingame if you decide to keep it and we can discuss them. That's why it's in only the Oni. Kinda wanna keep it
As for the kiai:I went over both kiai sections again and made things more consistent. Still a lot of Finishers though
- 00:37:733 sounds much better as k imo.
- I suggest you remove the finish on 00:38:296 to bring this part more in line with 00:39:796 (64,65,66,67).
- The triplets in the kiai are slightly different, but you have mapped them all as ddk, maybe bring in a bit of variety? eg. 00:38:483 (57,58,59) and 00:39:983 (65,66,67) as ddd and 00:41:483 (73,74,75) as kdk for example.
- 00:42:421 k.
- I think you should change 00:43:452 (84,85,86,87,88) to D DkdK or something like that, you have lower notes on 00:43:452 (84,85) so I think D finish would be best here. You have a fairly strong finish sound on 00:44:296 too, so just make this K and leave 00:43:921 (86,87) as normal notes kd. I think this spreads out the emphasis better.
- You have a couple of D finishes on clap sounds like 00:45:421, this really sounds off. Try to change these to k instead.
- 00:47:577 k.
- Maybe try something like kdkdk or ddkdk for 00:48:046 (110,111,112,113,114)? You have a fairly strong clap on the last note.
- 00:50:202 - delete, remove finish from 00:49:921 and change 00:50:296 to K. Sounds much better imo.
Quick summary of stuff that also applies to second Kiai:This is more of a structural thing in general, so I think you should look over your kiai times based on the above suggestions and aim to structure your use of finishes better. I really like this idea of mapping, but in some parts it conflicts with the song. Did I mention: Melody mapping
- Some of your finishes feel really weird because you mapped D over claps. Change these to k please. Melody mapping ^^
- I think it would be good to use finishes on sounds like 01:26:296 because these justify their use more.
That's all for now, good luck