1. Extra (5.39 stars, 364 notes)
2. Insane (4.81 stars, 323 notes)

Yukiyo wrote:

Hey o/
I'm not that good at mappping/modding but I'll try:

Insane:

SPOILER

• 00:11:835 (3,4,5) - why not blanket these?
  00:42:707 (1,2) - let them be a bit more seperated looks better
  I think you overdid it a bit with the clap sounds at the beginning. The song is calm why make the hitsounds so wild

Extra:

SPOILER

• 00:25:440 (2) - why make the one notes close when beforre afterwards there are only jumps disrupt the flow imo
  00:30:673 (3,4,5) - why not blanket these
  00:33:289 (5,6) - why use DS 1,5 instead of staying at 1,2
  00:40:789 (7,8) - this also disrups the flow imo. Try letting the jumps end in the slider
  00:51:777 (4,5,6) - make them evenly spaced going towards the slider. would make it look much better
  01:21:428 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this whole stream looks not soo good try making it smoother more round (and don't let it have some awkward little peaks )
  01:25:673 (4,5) - those 2 have to be on 1/3 notes like http://puu.sh/o0wWw/3df94e7b53.jpg
  01:27:417 (1) - same goes for this ^^;
  hitsounds same as in the Insane version

even though it's small I hope my mod will help
some of them are just aesthetic that are totally my opinion
I like your style keep up the good work

-Yukiyo

Summer Solstice wrote:

Hello from #modreq

General

A lot of the sliders you have mapped start on the offbeat. Take a look at this page and have a quick read of offbeat sliders https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory#Downbeat.2C_onbeat - they're generally just awkward to play. It also means a lot of the map can't be modded with new combo suggestions yet because quite a bit of it is in need of an edit

Insane

00:15:847 (8) - NC here,
00:19:510 (1) - Remove the NC and start it here 00:20:207 (4) - ,
00:22:126 (1) - Remove this NC and start it here 00:22:998 (4) - , or keep it and just start a NC here 00:22:998 (4) - ,
00:34:161 (5) - NC,
00:36:428 (1) - The NC shouldn't really start here. It's more appropriate for it here 00:36:952 (3) - and removing this one 00:37:300 (1) - ,
00:42:359 (7) - The end of this slider would be a significant point to start a NC, maybe rearrange it so it's a single note with a NC at 42:533,
00:48:114 (6) - NC here and remove this one 00:48:812 (1) - , then start a NC here 00:49:510 (2) - ,
00:59:103 (8) - NC,
01:01:370 (1) - Remove this NC and start it here 01:02:068 (3) - ,
01:04:510 (1) - Remove this NC and start it here 01:04:859 (2) - ,
01:05:731 (1) - Remove NC and start it here 01:06:254 (3) - ,
01:18:812 (6) - NC here and remove this one 01:19:510 (1) - , then start it again here 01:20:207 (4) - and remove this one 01:20:556 (1) - .

Extra

00:07:126 (1) - There isn't a need for a NC here, start it here 00:07:649 (4) - instead,
00:10:440 (6) - NC and remove this one 00:10:789 (1) - ,
00:12:359 (7) - NC here to repeat the pattern like this one 00:13:056 (1,2) - and this one 00:13:754 (1,2) - ,
It would play better if you removed two of these notes 00:20:120 (4,5,6) - and closed the gap with the slider (like this http://puu.sh/o0F3I.jpg ). Start a NC on that slider and add a new note somewhere at 20:556,
00:22:998 (11) - NC here,
00:24:393 (7) - NC here and remove this one 00:25:091 (1) - ,
00:27:184 (1) - This spinner ends at the start of a new line. Move it back half a beat on the timeline (like this http://puu.sh/o0FfK.jpg ) and move this slider 00:28:754 (1) - back half a beat aswell. You could fill the gap left at 28:928 with a single note,
00:40:963 (8) - NC here, remove this one 00:41:661 (1) - and start another one here 00:42:533 (4) - ,
00:52:300 (7) - NC here and remove this one 00:52:649 (1) - ,
00:55:963 (1) - Remove this NC, start it here 00:56:486 (3) - and remove this NC 00:57:010 (1) - ,
00:57:882 (4) - Start a NC here,
00:58:579 (1) - This doesn't need to be a NC,
01:02:068 (5) - NC here,
01:04:510 (1) - Remove this NC and start it here 01:04:859 (2) - ,
01:06:254 (10) - NC here and remove this one 01:06:603 (1) - ,
01:10:091 (1) - Remove the NC and star it here 01:10:440 (2) - ,
01:15:673 (1) - Remove NC here and start it here 01:16:021 (2) - .

BEST OF LUCK

Yelo wrote:

Thanks for the mod, it helped a lot but I'm going to need you to mod it again because I had to change so much.

You fixed it

Summer Solstice wrote:

Yelo wrote:

Thanks for the mod, it helped a lot but I'm going to need you to mod it again because I had to change so much.

Okay, here goes

General

You fixed it

Insane

00:04:859 (4) - Start the NC here,
00:05:556 (4) - This doesn't really need to be a repeat slider since there isn't a strong note at the end of it - making it a standard slider will do,
00:10:440 (8) - Start a NC here and remove this one 00:11:138 (1) - ,
00:12:359 (1) - Does this need to be a NC?
00:21:603 (6) - You could split this combo up by starting a NC here,
00:25:789 (1) - Extending this spinner half a beat fits better with the song,
00:29:975 (7) - Split this combo up by starting a NC here,
00:32:766 (4) - Start the NC here,
00:35:556 (7) - Split this combo by starting a NC here,
00:38:347 (7) - Start a NC here, remove this one 00:39:394 (1) - and start it here 00:39:742 (2) - ,
00:42:533 (8) - Again you could split this combo up by starting a NC here,
00:53:696 (8) - Same again, split this combo up by starting the NC here,
00:55:091 (15) - Start the NC here and remove the one here 00:55:440 (1) - ,
00:56:138 (1) - Remove this NC and start it here 00:56:486 (3) - ,
00:59:103 (1) - Remove this NC, start it here 00:59:277 (2) - and remove this NC 00:59:626 (1) - ,
01:00:673 (7) - Could split this combo up by starting a NC here 01:00:673 (7) - ,
01:09:045 (6) - Start a NC here and remove this one 01:09:568 (1) - ,
01:13:231 (8) - Start the NC here and remove this one 01:13:579 (1) - .

Extra

00:03:114 (8) - This note doesn't really need to be here since this string of notes in the song ends here 00:02:940 (7) - ,
00:05:905 (4) - Same again ^ - The string of notes in the song ends at this sliders end 00:05:556 (3) - ,
00:11:835 (7) - Start a NC here,
00:21:602 (9) - Break this combo up by starting a NC here,
00:23:347 (1) - This doesn't need to be a NC since one has already been started before it,
00:25:789 (6) - You could break this combo up by starting a NC here,
00:29:975 (6) - This is a very long combo. Start a NC here and here 00:31:370 (13) - ,
00:36:952 (6) - Start the NC here and remove the one here 00:37:126 (1) - ,
00:39:393 (1) - Remove this NC and start it here 00:39:742 (2) - ,
00:48:376 (1) - Remove this NC on the stream and start it here 00:48:463 (2) - ,
00:48:725 (1) - Remove this NC on the stream and start it here 00:48:725 (1) - ,
00:49:074 (1) - Remove this NC and start it here 00:49:161 (1) - ,
00:53:521 (1) - Remove this NC and start it here 00:53:696 (2) - ,
00:55:091 (8) - Start a NC here,
00:58:928 (1) - Remove this NC and start it here 00:59:277 (2) - ,
00:59:800 (1) - Remove this NC and start it here 00:59:975 (2) - ,
01:00:673 (6) - Start the NC here and remove this one 01:01:021 (1) - ,
01:03:114 (1) - The start of this slider is best kept as part of the previous combo, but since it's a repeat slider it ends at the start of a NC. Maybe remap it so you can start a NC at 1:03:463,
01:13:231 (10) - Start a NC here,
01:14:277 (1) - Remove this NC and start it here 01:14:626 (2) - ,
01:17:417 (8) - Again this is a very long combo. Start a NC here and again here 01:18:812 (15) - ,
01:19:859 (1) - Remove this NC and start it here 01:20:207 (2) - ,
01:21:603 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Go through this stream and start all the combos 1 note later. Remove the NC on the last note and start a NC on the slider that follows.

BEST OF LUCK (Again)