It seems lucky I saw this before getting bubbled.
Suggestion Time.
[rrr]00:11:885 (1) - Start at 00:12:104? (not change the end)
00:19:550 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just a little fix.
48,82,19550,6,0,L|224:82|256:128,3,220,2|0|2|0
300,192,21083,1,0
348,264,21302,2,0,L|428:360,2,110,2|0|2
304,264,21849,1,0
256,264,21958,1,0
00:35:535 (1) - remove clap?
00:35:535 (1,2) - add clap on start point?
00:46:703 (1) - add clap?
00:56:776 (4) - add finish?
01:35:754 (1) - add clap?
01:45:827 (6) - add finish?
02:48:016 - seems empty. how about putting some circles(with fade in)?
03:04:658 (5) - add finish?
[Ai]General - I don't think the normal-whistle sound matches with this song.
00:30:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think players would get boring with this type on later part.
03:22:177 (2) - Isn't just a line or 1-curve slider fine?
03:29:842 (4) - remove finish?