hi
-00:16:604 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - seems pretty boring compared to wat u did before for this 1/1 section
-00:20:250 (1) - this confused me while playing thought it was 1/2 maybe cuz of the stack so reconsider its placing?
-00:25:554 (1,2,3,4) - 00:26:217 (1,2,3,4) - these 2 patterns feels random placed it doesnt really feel like theres a transition between them mostely cuz of this jumps 00:25:885 (3,4,1,2) - they dont have enough movementand doesnt really describe any form of jump patterning
-00:41:797 (2) - stack
-00:43:786 (6) - dunno why the clap here i dont hear anything in the song, better put it here 00:43:620 -
-00:54:394 (5) - here too, clap should be on the tail not head
-00:57:046 (5) - ^
-01:11:300 (3) - not really fan of the shape, try this? http://puu.sh/pAX9I/06f138ef73.jpg
-01:18:593 (1,2) - maybe switch nc since it got me confused there, spacing doesnt fit the 1/1 gap, or maybe space them more thats your choice
-01:30:526 - why not using your custom finish here? i think its a nice opportunity
-01:57:046 - from here you spamming 1/1 clap and its really annoying and doesnt fit the song sorry, why not only follow the song's drums, i can give u examples of the unneeded claps like 01:58:040 - 01:58:372 - 01:59:200 - and more...
the things is, in this part of the song most of the claps are on 1/2 so you better focus there and try to listen carefully to the song, same goes for other kiais
so i will not comaplain about sounds anymore
-04:10:802 (3,4,5,6) - omg sorry but i couldnt ignore this blanket xd
-how about ctrl+g 02:44:780 (1) - and 02:45:112 (2) - better flow i guess
-04:33:510 - circle here and spinner from 04:33:593 - to 04:35:167 -
-04:38:814 (1) - idk if its just me but i really dont like lack of movements between notes especially here it doesnt emphasize at all so try x447 y288
-04:52:736 (3,4,1) - better? http://puu.sh/pAYxg/5311eb12f4.jpg
good luck
-00:16:604 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - seems pretty boring compared to wat u did before for this 1/1 section
-00:20:250 (1) - this confused me while playing thought it was 1/2 maybe cuz of the stack so reconsider its placing?
-00:25:554 (1,2,3,4) - 00:26:217 (1,2,3,4) - these 2 patterns feels random placed it doesnt really feel like theres a transition between them mostely cuz of this jumps 00:25:885 (3,4,1,2) - they dont have enough movementand doesnt really describe any form of jump patterning
-00:41:797 (2) - stack
-00:43:786 (6) - dunno why the clap here i dont hear anything in the song, better put it here 00:43:620 -
-00:54:394 (5) - here too, clap should be on the tail not head
-00:57:046 (5) - ^
-01:11:300 (3) - not really fan of the shape, try this? http://puu.sh/pAX9I/06f138ef73.jpg
-01:18:593 (1,2) - maybe switch nc since it got me confused there, spacing doesnt fit the 1/1 gap, or maybe space them more thats your choice
-01:30:526 - why not using your custom finish here? i think its a nice opportunity
-01:57:046 - from here you spamming 1/1 clap and its really annoying and doesnt fit the song sorry, why not only follow the song's drums, i can give u examples of the unneeded claps like 01:58:040 - 01:58:372 - 01:59:200 - and more...
the things is, in this part of the song most of the claps are on 1/2 so you better focus there and try to listen carefully to the song, same goes for other kiais
so i will not comaplain about sounds anymore
-04:10:802 (3,4,5,6) - omg sorry but i couldnt ignore this blanket xd
-how about ctrl+g 02:44:780 (1) - and 02:45:112 (2) - better flow i guess
-04:33:510 - circle here and spinner from 04:33:593 - to 04:35:167 -
-04:38:814 (1) - idk if its just me but i really dont like lack of movements between notes especially here it doesnt emphasize at all so try x447 y288
-04:52:736 (3,4,1) - better? http://puu.sh/pAYxg/5311eb12f4.jpg
good luck