[First skin] Saber

Zaffira_old

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

Zaffira_old 2010-12-31T12:59:12+00:00

Hi !
I hope you'll like it ^o^
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Skin Name: Saber
Creator: Zaffira
Theme: this skin is about Saber (Fate/stay night)
Version: 1.0
Tags: Saber skin Fate
Download: http://www.mediafire.com/?oh77cu8hwzut51v

If you find something strange or that you want to change, don't hesitate to tell me.
I accept all the opinions, good or bad.

Screenshots :

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Changed elements :

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http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/9641/menuback.png
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/8728/playskip.png
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/5152 ... ground.png
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/5778 ... iontab.png
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/6236/starmx.png
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/8088/hitcircle.png

Screenshots :

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Last edited by Zaffira_old 2010-12-31T16:15:17+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Faust

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4,785 posts

Joined January 2009

Faust 2010-12-31T13:03:07+00:00

I feel that rather just have "Saber" herself all over the entire skin, you could make more elements BASED on her instead.
Think of her accessories, like her clothes, armor. Even the color scheme. Rather just have visual representations of Saber. Seeing Saber practically everywhere in the skin can be quite sickening.

I'll give you 2 suggestions for you get the gist of what I'm trying to say.
Perhaps for the cursor, make it a look a little like the front piece of armor Saber wears on her chest? insignia and all.
As for the spinner, for some dramatic-inspiration pseudo effect, you could make it look like a stream of light.

Zaffira_old

10 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

Zaffira_old 2010-12-31T13:14:41+00:00

Faust wrote:
I feel that rather just have "Saber" herself all over the entire skin, you could make more elements BASED on her instead.
Think of her accessories, like her clothes, armor. Even the color scheme. Rather just have visual representations of Saber. Seeing Saber practically everywhere in the skin can be quite sickening.

I'll give you 2 suggestions for you get the gist of what I'm trying to say.
Perhaps for the cursor, make it a look a little like the front piece of armor Saber wears on her chest? insignia and all.
As for the spinner, for some dramatic-inspiration pseudo effect, you could make it look like a stream of light.

I have done this skin with thing I have found on internet.
I'm not very good in graph', so I do things that I can (I don't know use photoshop ^^")
For the spinner, the begin is in black and white (I have screen this too late~)
and I'm not english and I don't understand all you said x)

Faust

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Joined January 2009

Faust 2010-12-31T13:18:11+00:00

Zaffira wrote:
Faust wrote:
I feel that rather just have "Saber" herself all over the entire skin, you could make more elements BASED on her instead.
Think of her accessories, like her clothes, armor. Even the color scheme. Rather just have visual representations of Saber. Seeing Saber practically everywhere in the skin can be quite sickening.

I'll give you 2 suggestions for you get the gist of what I'm trying to say.
Perhaps for the cursor, make it a look a little like the front piece of armor Saber wears on her chest? insignia and all.
As for the spinner, for some dramatic-inspiration pseudo effect, you could make it look like a stream of light.
I have done this skin with thing I have found on internet.
I'm not very good in graph', so I do things that I can (I don't know use photoshop ^^")
For the spinner, the begin is in black and white (I have screen this too late~)
and I'm not english and I don't understand all you said x)

I understand. It will be immensely difficulty for you to produce a high quality skin of you lack necessities like Photoshop.
It's just that like a lot of other skins, the main theme is simply, literally, the character itself. If you want to look at a good skin, perhaps you can take a look at the Gurren Lagann skin. Open osume.exe and download it from the "Extras" option.

Zaffira_old

10 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

Zaffira_old 2010-12-31T13:29:00+00:00

I'm not as good as the one who done the Gurren skin ^^'
As I have already said, I do juste things that I can do (versy basicly things so).
I'll wait other opinion and I think I'll modify my skin but don't expect very good things (I can be a master in graph in one night XD It's too good for be real ^^).

Faust

osu! Alumni

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Joined January 2009

Faust 2010-12-31T13:30:09+00:00

I don't expect you to be a master, don't worry.
All I offered was my insight and my vision. It's up to you.
Good luck on the skin.

Zaffira_old

10 posts

Joined October 2010

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Zaffira_old 2010-12-31T16:15:29+00:00

So, I have changed some elements.
-> Menu-back
-> Play-skip
-> menu-button-background
-> hit- circle (circle of invoquation)
-> selection tab
-> star (card of Saber)

These elements are on the frist topic.

It is better like that ?

jameskong1

403 posts

Joined December 2008

jameskong1 2011-01-01T02:30:41+00:00

A very nice one~
put in favourite~

http://fetish.iiichan.net/src/1313791175776.jpg
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Zaffira_old

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Joined October 2010

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Zaffira_old 2011-01-01T22:45:11+00:00

jameskong1 wrote:
A very nice one~
put in favourite~

I'm happy to see you like it ^^

Thanks

You prefer the changement or not ?

Tomoya Okazaki

151 posts

Joined August 2010

Tomoya Okazaki 2011-04-19T06:01:52+00:00

wow..!!!

I think your first skin is awesome...

Can you make another Fate Stay Night skin..???
Like Archer skin or another servant

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Zaffira_old

10 posts

Joined October 2010

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Zaffira_old 2011-04-19T06:48:33+00:00

Tomoya Okazaki wrote:
wow..!!!
I think your first skin is awesome...
Can you make another Fate Stay Night skin..???
Like Archer skin or another servant

Thanks