1. Ami-Insane (4.93 stars, 270 notes)
2. Kitamura-Normal (2.8 stars, 104 notes)
3. lovhin's Ryuji-Easy (1.26 stars, 73 notes)
4. Ono's Taiko (4.94 stars, 389 notes)
5. Taiga-Hard (4.44 stars, 168 notes)
6. vincerio's Minori-Insane (4.98 stars, 314 notes)

Saten-san wrote:

The link on your signature doesn't work btw

Star~

jameskong1 wrote:

NICE~~
can I make a hard diff?.?
star~

Weezy wrote:

jameskong1 wrote:

NICE~~
can I make a hard diff?.?
star~

Sure go right ahead

jameskong1 wrote:

Wow a quick response~

Saten-san wrote:

Happy New Year Weezy!

Here's something unexpected

ziin wrote:

Good news everyone, I like toradora, so I guess I'll mod this.

[general]
Delete the osb if you're not using it and redo the full submit. Doesn't have to happen immediately.

[sounds]
this is a clapping song, at least during kiai. usually claps are found on beats 2 and 4, but there are some spots where it goes 2,4,2,4,2,4,2,e of 3,+ of 3,4 (go play http://osu.ppy.sh/s/12216 for the last part of this rhythm). I think a whistle on beats 1 and 3 or wherever there is a bass drum hit sound really good.

[easy]

SPOILER

this is too hard for an easy IMO. The map's not fun due to lack of a downbeat. Since I think easy is better than normal, I'll try to provide suggestions to get the beats off the red notes and onto the white ones.
00:04:330 copy what you did before or do this:

00:11:663 keep on with the sliders, ignore the lyrics.
00:13:219 (3,4) good, keep these.
00:22:108 go with the half beat here.
00:29:219 half beat sliders here so it seems like it picks up, but you're still hitting the same beats. You can add in a few red notes, but keep it mostly white.
00:57:441 get rid of this beat
01:01:219 repeat what you did earlier
01:06:552 shorten the slider to make it have a red beat in the middle, and add a beat where the end of the slider used to be.
01:11:663 repeat what you did earlier, perhaps spice it up a little with a note on every white beat now.
01:14:774 extend the previous slider to here (remove repeater and add a clap to go with music)
silence the spinner at the end.

[normal+]

SPOILER

You've got a perfect clapping song, yet you're using zero claps. There's only a few sections with claps built in. You've got a nice bass drum going most of the time but only on the beat. I think emphasizing that with a whistle on every bass hit sounds good.
00:13:219 this is like, the perfect spot for a spinner.
00:44:997 finish
00:50:108 not digging the slider
00:52:108 finish
00:52:330 this doesn't match the previous two.
00:53:663 just stack 3 and 4
00:54:552 If you put in a spinner earlier, take out this spinner and put in beats plus a long slider.
01:27:219 end spinner here
01:27:886 start a straight slider here until 01:28:552

The kiai section doesn't really follow either the lyrics or the beat faithfully, and there's breaks in the beats for no apparent reason (where there should be claps!).

[palm top tiger]

SPOILER

insane is anything goes. I sort of like the map, but there are parts which are overstepped. If there's one thing I hate, it's notes or beats on something that is not in the BGM, and this map is chock full of them, so that's the only thing I'm going to point out (if I don't say anything it's because there is no beat in the BGM at this spot). Don't get me wrong, I like streams, just not when you made it up.
00:03:997
00:06:997
00:07:552
00:11:330 there IS a beat here
00:13:663
00:14:108 to 00:14:997 is rageworthy.
00:27:663 to 00:29:219 has beats on most of those notes, but there's a ewi playing which leaves out a few beats, and you should too.
00:42:663
00:42:886
00:53:997 the notes in this section which have that mid range note in the background need a finish (you've got it right in normal+
00:55:886
00:56:219
00:56:441
00:56:886
01:19:663 double check that you want this slider here and not on the blue note. She sings something different which sounds better than just following the beat IMO.
01:27:663 most of these beats are made up.

I like the maps and the song, but the made up notes are a deal breaker for me, so I can't give you a star unless you fix the streams. I think that taking away notes makes a rhythm much more interesting (and somewhat harder too).

vincerio wrote:

offset 110
Audio lead-in 2000

[attachment=0:4091d]Yui Horie - Silky Heart (TV Size) (Weezy) [vincerio].osu[/attachment:4091d]

Weezy wrote:

vincerio wrote:

offset 110
Audio lead-in 2000

[attachment=0:aaffd]Yui Horie - Silky Heart (TV Size) (Weezy) [vincerio].osu[/attachment:aaffd]

fixed the offset and will fix the audio leading in the next update (forgot to now and im pretty lazy )

thanks for the diff If you don't like the name let me know!

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

とらドラ!

vincerio's Minori has a different audio lead-in Changed earlier

Ryuji

fine

Kitamura

00:04:109~00:05:221 like the pic that i shown

00:04:109 (x) - add a circle and 00:04:554(1) - make this slider start at 00:04:332
00:04:544(1) - make more smooth?
[attachment=1:0314e]1.png[/attachment:0314e]

01:16:766(4) - look not pretty enough since overlap with (1) (2)

try it
[attachment=0:0314e]2.png[/attachment:0314e]

01:23:887(3) - change the shape to make a symmetry

Taiga

00:00:998(2) - del?
00:47:665(5) - X:216 Y:168
00:48:109(1) - X:380 Y:168
00:48:998(2) - move 1 grid down (lv3)

at kiai time

it would be better to add hitsounds like Kitamura or Ami Nope seems ok now

Ami

00:24:998(3) - move 1 grid left (lv4)
00:57:665(1) - finish
01:12:332(3) - move 1 grid down (lv4)


overall,quite well

starrrrrrrr

loveFantasy wrote:

Hi~

[Ryuji]
some notes are 2 beat away from each other while some are 3/2 beat away, this might confuse newbies Really don't see a problem with this

<00:06:775> (3,4,5) you should change up the pattern, dont stack 4 nope
<00:15:220> (1,2,3,4) is empty, suggest makes 2,3,4 into slider that start at 00:16:109, 00:16:998 and 00:17:887 Did something else along these lines
<00:26:331> this is what i mentioned at the start nope
<00:46:998> (1,2) combine into slider Nope
<01:01:220> (1,2) you're following lyrics, but 2 is uncomfortable at this place than 01:02:109, especially when this combo is after one at 00:57:664, which is the regular pattern Fixed

[Kitamura]

<00:04:109> (6,1) add new combo on 6, and stack with 1 (remove new combo), you may need to rearrange position Will stack but No combo change
<00:53:664> (1) suggest move closer to the middle and remove new combo nope

[Taiga]
is a comfortable diff

<01:00:775> a bit empty, you may try to add a note here or extend slider at 00:59:442
<01:04:331> ^ to make gameflow symmetrical, you should modify here if you modify above part
<01:14:998> a bit empty, i'd like a hitsound here rather than at 01:14:775 done

this is individual feeling and you may ignore them, but hope you try it
^Not all done^

[Ami]

<00:54:775> a bit weird jump nope.

star

Shiirn wrote:

General
I don't like your difficulty names, but tough shit for me, eh? Might add the actually diff name like Ami's Insane later on but I'm not ditching the character's name

Ryuji
I honestly don't know what this is following. This diff was kinda hard to make :/
01:25:887 (1,1) - These are a bad idea for an easy diff. Fixed

Kitamura
00:20:776 (4) - This isn't perfect. Fix it up a bit.
00:41:442 (6) - ^. This looks 90% better symmetrizededed.
Done

Taiga
01:28:775 (1) - Spinner's pretty short. auto gets 2000 fine here

Ami
00:37:664 (4) - Spacing. Fiddle with it on grid4 until it's 0.97 to 3/5. Fixed
The entire thing is rather linear and uninteresting, but I really liked the jump bit at 00:53:664 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). Try to make more like that?
I can't find any other good spots :/

Star'd

lovhin456 wrote:

Hey ~ >w<

General;
- I really think Ryuji is better than Kitamura >w<
- You have 2 osb. files, 1 is okk but 2 is bad, delete both and full-sub

Ryuji;
- Ehhh, well is a good Easy, it makes a good Easy, kind of boring . . . and that's it, it just makes a good "easy" I don't like it ;w;
- At the spinner at the very end, you use soft sample set, but in Kitamura you use normal O:
- Umm, I made . . . I made an Easy for you !! I hope is okk and that you like it >w< Of course is your choice to use it or not ~
[attachment=0:c823b]Yui Horie - Silky Heart (TV Size) (Weezy) [Ryuji].osu[/attachment:c823b]

Kitamura;
- 00:06:553 (4,5) >> Aling (4) with (2) and (5) with (3)
- 01:15:887 (2,3) >> Make a slider instead ~

Taiga;
- Wtf ? Taiga is not the hardest diff ? >w<
- Errm, again nice, just nice . . .

Ami;
- 00:02:998 >> Delete
- 00:03:442 >> ^
- 00:29:109 >> Aling better with (4)

vincerio's Minori;
- Minorin will suit better ~
- I hate Minori . . . really, just a little ~ xD
- 00:48:554 >> New combo

Overall;
- I totally hate whistles for this song, sorry, but I don't think they fit the song at all

* Star

1. Suggesting to remove "2" from tags in all diffs. That is a too generic search term.

1. 00:10:998 - Add a note here and a clap on it. After doing that, reposition (4) a little, so the (5) can be just like in this picture. Also notice that the slider was "evened out" and the highlighted note in the picture is (2) in the next combo (which is mirrored to (5) after some positioning).
2. 01:23:887 (2) - (nazi) Move the endpoint (the arrow) of the slider by 1 grid up.

1. 00:07:887 onward - I suggest to add occasional claps here. Would make it sound better.

1. AR+1, OD+1.
2. 00:07:887 onward - Same as in the previous diff. Try matching claps to the beats and whistles to the voice.
3. 00:38:331 (1,2,3,4,5) - (nazi) Move (2) 1 grid to the left, (3) 1 grid to the left and (5) 1 grid down and 3 to the right.
4. 00:53:664 (1,2,3,4) - (ULTIMATE NAZI) Swap to grid level 4 and move them by 1 grid to the left so they are centered. Return to grid level 3 afterwards. Feel free to completely ignore this, I wonder why did I write this, so pointless.

1. 00:07:887 onward - Same as in the previous diff(s). Try matching claps to the beats and whistles to the voice.
2. 00:57:442 (1) - Change this slider into a triplet. Put a whistle on the 3rd note once you do that. After you do that, move the notes backwards, so they keep the current shape but (3) is found where currently (2) is.
3. 01:11:442 (6) - Move this note where (3) is located in the same combo.
4. 01:28:109 (4) - (nazi) Move this note by 2 grids up and 1 to the right so 2-3-4 make a nice triangle.

1. 00:07:887 onward - Same as in the previous diff(s). Try matching claps to the beats and whistles to the voice.
2. 00:13:110 (5) - I suggest to move this note to 00:13:220 and fix the spacing afterwards.
3. 00:48:332 (9) - New combo.
4. 01:13:665 (10) - New combo.
5. 01:17:443 (11) - New combo.
6. 01:17:887 (1) - Remove new combo.

OnosakiHito wrote:

Omg, omg! Toradora! Star!
I'm begging you, may I make a Taiko guest diff.? >_<"

lolcubes wrote:

Hey, here's my mod. Green stuff can be ignored completely, they're merely a design opinion.

[General]:

1. Suggesting to remove "2" from tags in all diffs. That is a too generic search term.

[lovhin's Ryuji]:

1. 00:10:998 - Add a note here and a clap on it. After doing that, reposition (4) a little, so the (5) can be just like in this picture. Also notice that the slider was "evened out" and the highlighted note in the picture is (2) in the next combo (which is mirrored to (5) after some positioning).
2. 01:23:887 (2) - (nazi) Move the endpoint (the arrow) of the slider by 1 grid up.

[Kitamura]:

1. 00:07:887 onward - I suggest to add occasional claps here. Would make it sound better.

[Taiga]:

1. AR+1, OD+1.
2. 00:07:887 onward - Same as in the previous diff. Try matching claps to the beats and whistles to the voice.
3. 00:38:331 (1,2,3,4,5) - (nazi) Move (2) 1 grid to the left, (3) 1 grid to the left and (5) 1 grid down and 3 to the right.
4. 00:53:664 (1,2,3,4) - (ULTIMATE NAZI) Swap to grid level 4 and move them by 1 grid to the left so they are centered. Return to grid level 3 afterwards. Feel free to completely ignore this, I wonder why did I write this, so pointless.

[Ami]:

1. 00:07:887 onward - Same as in the previous diff(s). Try matching claps to the beats and whistles to the voice.
2. 00:57:442 (1) - Change this slider into a triplet. Put a whistle on the 3rd note once you do that. After you do that, move the notes backwards, so they keep the current shape but (3) is found where currently (2) is.
3. 01:11:442 (6) - Move this note where (3) is located in the same combo.
4. 01:28:109 (4) - (nazi) Move this note by 2 grids up and 1 to the right so 2-3-4 make a nice triangle.

[vincerio's Minori]:

1. 00:07:887 onward - Same as in the previous diff(s). Try matching claps to the beats and whistles to the voice.
2. 00:13:110 (5) - I suggest to move this note to 00:13:220 and fix the spacing afterwards.
3. 00:48:332 (9) - New combo.
4. 01:13:665 (10) - New combo.
5. 01:17:443 (11) - New combo.
6. 01:17:887 (1) - Remove new combo.

I usually don't mod 5 diffs, but since you were kind enough to mod my map, atleast wanted to return the favor.
Sorry for nazi stuff, but that's just the way I mod (that pointless nazi was a bit out of the line, but I included it anyway, atleast so everyone can have a laugh at me for doing so ).
Star and good luck. :3

Kite wrote:

[General]
Artist Horie Yui instead?.. Other maps are listed under that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/64568
You should raise the volume in all difficulties; I can barely hear the hitsounds.
You could convert the BG picture into jpg format to reduce the size of the osz.

[Kitamura]
00:15:220 (1,2,3,4) - Those just don't feel right... 1/2 earlier and add beat at 00:16:775
Everything else seems alright

vincerio's Minori
A bit overmapped.. but yeah still fine I guess
00:08:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those feel really awkward on red ticks; with the drum playing loud on all the white ticks... I'd say place them 1/2 earlier (remove 1)
00:11:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same here (remove 1)

[Overall]
Mapset is fine, it's just the volume that needs to be increased IMO.
I am not so keen on the overmapping but it seems to work.

EnPassant wrote:

Not going to mod Taiko. Otherwise, all modding

Easy looks Fine~

Normal:
00:18:109 (X) - I die a little every time you don't map this note in sequences like this (anything where your sliders start and end on 1/2 sequences, I'll give more examples). Please add this note, the difficulty is not that low. Also it's Counter-intuitive to the player to have to hold out this note Not changing this. Seems fine when playing on my end.
00:34:553 (X) ^
00:46:775 (X) ^
Done
Test the map with these notes added. It makes the map much smoother and, in my opinion, more playable.
There are other places where it would help to add notes like this, but these are the only ones that really merit complaint.

Fine otherwise~

Taiga:
Why must the patterns act different. They're my patterns >_>

00:05:664 (3) - (nitpick) Make this slider a curve or at an angle, to make 00:06:109 (4) line up horizontal to it? nope
00:26:553 (7) - (nitpick) This note is weird =/. try to make it look a little more nice? Just added a whistle

The rest is fine (not naggable)

Ami:
00:53:664 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Scale down just a little? Please? (maybe. It looks alright to me now, but still questionable) Noooooooo, my favourite jump in the whole map, not changing
01:09:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Confusing to the player. Possibly remap, but it's not a really big problem. should have seen it before, fine to me
Fine~

Map looks good. Star~