General:
BPM: 133.00. Don't forget to resnap notes. * I'll try it later *
I suggest starting the first kiai at 01:05:947, as there's nothing really special with where it starts now, if you will. I dont think so)

Easy:
Short spinners should not be used in an Easy, especially not when beats come right after. I would really suggest changing some of them to sliders. 2 beat long sliders work for the 1-2-3 and the other similar section, I find. (e.g.) Similarly...
sorry, nope. 1-2-3 was made for spinners. + if i changing some of them to sliders... distance snap will disappear. So, I'll try to save it. Wait for BAT's opinion.
02:16:768 (1) - Remove this, add a rythmic break. (drag 'break to here) fixed

Hard:
00:41:588 (7) - New combo, remove new combo on the next note. fixed
01:07:864 (6) - Delete, it's kind of out of place with the rest of the map. fixed
01:38:426 (1) - 1 grid (3) to the right, to put 01:37:974 (5,6,1) - in a straight line.fixed, (5,6,1,2) - in a straight line xD
01:48:801 (8) - ^, left fixed

Insane:
02:50:825 (7,9) - Symmetrify mo'fo nope, horizontal symm

Sandpig wrote:

hi hi !

Insane

00:21:516 (4,5,6) - I don't like this slowing down of rhythm. consider adding a note on 00:21:967 (and making 5 1/2 later?) fix
02:01:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the arrangement seems little random agree, fix


Hard

00:22:418 - add a note? nope
00:42:042 - try adding some notes here. such few notes make this part plays like Normal(no lyric doesn't equal no notes). and consider more notes for the following parts true, fix. add notes

U p d a t e d !

Easy

00:26:704 (1) - this slider feels not good. I think there should be more notes on white line. agree, fix


that's all Thanks for your mod and star!

James2250 wrote:

Put a small "not safe for work" warning in your song info for the video? How? D: fix x)
Cut all the unnecessary transparency off the "slow down" image fix

Easy:
All the spinners might confuse beginners, but it has been mentioned before~ Yup, I want to save it
00:06:855 (1,2) - add whistles to these too? fix
00:53:321 (1,1,1,1,1) - shouldn't it be "3,2,1" in that order? Hmmmm... I'll think about it

Hard:
00:21:742 (3,4,1) - small spacing error fix
01:36:629 (1) - remove new combo? fix
01:41:817 (9) - add note fix
02:07:982 (2,3) - stack slightly more? fix

Insane:
00:08:433 (8) - new combo to follow pattern fix
00:45:877 (1) - repeat sounds odd on a blue tick to me fix
01:41:817 (5) - add note? fix

Nice maps, very few problems that I see
Have a star~

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

Offset on all difficulties should be 8,208. fix
01:04:373 - I this kiai is much better starting at 01:05:xxx. fix
You really don't need that slowdown warning - your slowdown is perfectly readable without it waiting for opinions

Easy;

00:17:682 (1) - Too soon after the spinner for an easy difficulty.thinking
00:53:321 (1) - ^ thinking
00:56:930 (1) - ^ and so on I'll not point them all out. I don't really think you need all these spinners to be honest, it's really difficult for an easy difficuly. thinking

Hard;

02:33:020 (6) - 1/4 earlier. fix
02:33:922 (1) - ^ fix
02:36:629 (6) - ^ fix

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hello~!

~All Diffs~
- "slow down.png" has a lot of unnecessary transparency around the text, could you crop it? Also, the shadow of the last "!" is cropped at the end, could you fix this? fix

~Easy~
- I'm a bit concerned about the spinners here, they might be a bit short to have something after them on an Easy diff. But the diff almost feels like a normal to me so I'm not sure... =x I'm not sure too.My sister is beginner. she play this diff perfect.

00:53:320 (1,1,1) - Original~ I like it >w< :3
01:49:260 (1) - This spinner is shorter than all the other spinners on these parts. Consider making it longer? I think it's too short. You'll have to change the slider, but I'm sure you'll come out with another cool shape :3 fix

~Hard~
No problems here!

~Insane~
01:34:824 (1) - The slowdown feels pretty natural, I don't think the warning is needed, but it looks cool so it's okay if you leave it :3 leave
02:36:629 (6) - Move 1/4 earlier so it follows the guitar melody? fix, yeah )

Fun map!! Good luck with this :3
*star*

DeathxShinigami wrote:

[Easy] <--- Suggest to rename to [Normal] nope
01:13:621 (1) - Slider looks a tad weird. Seems to look a tad better when the endpoint is raised up a little. fix

RandomJibberish wrote:

"Get up and live for your life" what kind of shitty lyrics are these x__X

General
Video is pretty horrible quality - If you could find a better one, it'd be great~ finding, yeah
Use Tick Rate 2 on all diffs. fix
The slowdown warning definately isn't neccesary, I wouldn't have noticed it otherwise lol fix
Add kiai on all the choruses or none - It feels odd to have it on just a couple of random ones
I'd move the offset back to 6403, so you don't have objects before the offset. You don't technically need to, it just looks better on the main menu

Insane
I don't really like the spinner spam on the oooooh sections, but it's just personal preference.
There are lots of combos that double back on and overlap themselves very confusingly. Make them go somewhere else?
Some of the particularly confusing ones:
00:40:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nope. oh, man, it's insane o_O
00:53:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:58:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

02:33:020 (6) - Move onto the previous blue tick fix
02:33:922 (1) - ^ fix
02:36:629 (6) - ^ fix
02:37:080 (1,2,3,4) - Should follow this rhythm agree, fix


Hard
This diff starts off a normal and turns into a hard at about 01:04:373. Even it out a bit? :V nope, it's fine
02:34:824 (9) - Move back to the previous blue tick and stack under 8? relisten, fix
02:37:080 (1,2) - Same rhythm issue as insane agree, fix

Easy
02:38:884 (6) - I'd advise against stacking under sliderends in an easy I trying, but nope...

1. Offset 8215
2. Add some TAGs.

GladiOol wrote:

[General]

1. Offset 8215 fix
2. Add some TAGs. as example?

[Insane]

00:38:666 (x) - Add an extra circle here ? fix
02:50:846 (7) - Add new combo. fix

Star~

1. Add some custom colors?

2. 00:08:440 (1) - This slider (even if it looks) is not straight.
3. 00:33:929 (2,3) - Naturally the notes should be stacked under previous vanishing notes.
4. 01:09:793 (1,2,3,4,5) - This actually looks and plays horrible. First of all - the second slider is not well aligned to the first, that's why it looks random. Second thing - (4) should be intuitively placed at the second's slider beggining (just replace it with (3)).
5. 01:15:658 (3) - Look at this slider's outline (gray lines), does it look nice for you? Concentrate on creating all of the objects to be good-looking.
6. 01:43:854 (5,6) - Why exactly these sliders are stacked but these 01:44:756 (7,8) are not? Unstack them if there's no particular reason.

1. 02:47:011 - Place a kiai time here too. This is the final chorus so I think it'd fit. Do on all diffs.

1. 00:27:613 (7) - Ugly.
2. 01:14:756 (5) - ^

1. 01:45:658 (1) - Ugly.

fartownik wrote:

hi Aleks719. Here's my mod.

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[Easy]01:04:380 (1,2,3) - Too hard to be an easy, maybe try to merge in one slider. nope ^^
Only this, sorry.Star~ Thx for your checking and star, Kuroneko-sHerald !

LKs wrote:

as your request

Sallad4ever wrote:

hi aleks

SPOILER

[General]
- I kinda agree with fartownik about the last kiai, but you have your reason so ok
- no custom color? done, yeah
- see this if you're trying to make perfect a symmetry slider ok ;__;

[Easy]
the second kiai time is not on the heavy beat, move it to 02:03:703 fix
the number slider is a good idea, though I almost think 01:51:072 (1) is a failed attempt of making number 4 02:12:275 (2) D: you right
- (nazi) turn off the snap to grid, then move the end point right until it perfectly blanket the 02:14:079 (3) slider why not, done

[Hard]
02:03:703 (6) - it should be better to use normal hitsound starting from here, cause it's already on the kiai time agree, it sounds better

[Insane]
00:34:380 (4,5) - kinda unexpected with how the previous combo follow the vocal but here there is pause before 5, so maybe add note at 00:34:605
some of the double stack like in 00:56:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) looks a little cramp, this on the other hand looks very nice. It's not a big problem just be careful in your future map well, that reminded me that. slightly changed the shape of this combo
Nice map and Good luck, Star

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

o hi.

Insane
01:47:914 (6) - the slider can look better. nazi x) but ok
02:42:500 (1) - ._. you lazy ass, remove the spinner (there are already too many) and keep the previous slider pattern up Th... thanks? Oh, I think about your suggestion

Hard
02:13:628 (2) - 1 grid down agree,fix
02:42:500 (1) - same as in insane yeah, same as in insane

Easy
fine
btw 00:53:327 (1) - and so on, nice slider art. ^^
star~

Xeno32 wrote:

[Easy]

02:12:275 (2,3) - Really stood out, could be better made =o like the rest. HP drain is fine... Sliders give more score,than break. It's impotant for novices (:
02:38:891 (6) - Never hide a note in a easy! I remember when I was a noob, this really got me all the time. I could not think of anything interesting here before. But now... fixed

[Hard]

Love your sliders :3 :3

02:32:124 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - might just be me, but I didnt think this played very nicely. Maybe revisit it? Checking, nothing.

[Insane]
IRC ~ Yup, good work

Star!

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Insane
02:42:500 (1) - ._. you lazy ass, remove the spinner (there are already too many) and keep the previous slider pattern up
Hard
02:42:500 (1) - same as in insane

lepidopodus wrote:

Yeah, mod.

Overall
- No 'Normal'? hmm...

Easy
- Spinners are quite cruel for 'Easy', cause the next notes are only a beat or 1+1/2 beat away. I want to save my spinne-sliders ;__;
00:21:072 (1) - Try this? Oh, nice! I like it, fix

Hard
- Np with me.

Insane
00:41:372 (5,6) - Can you spread these to somewhere? nope
00:42:951 (3) - It's not that important, but can you move this a gird(lvl.3) down, to make 2,3,4 symmetric? why not, fix
02:01:673 (1,2) - It's not that important, but can you move this a gird(lvl.3) up, to make 1,2,3 symmetric? why not, fix
02:59:192 (5,6) - Mild jumps with new combo in 5 would be work? Just a suggestion, though. Hm, nope.

Ok, no serious problems, just some suggestions.

1. 00:51:523 (1) - (and the spinners like this) are a bit hard in an Easy. it's easy to get 300s but there are sliders after them, so maybe -2 to OD. it won't change much about the total score but makes it easier to finish the spinning and get more time to react on the sliders.
2. 00:24:004 (5) - clap cancel on the middle circle, and clap on first and last circles
3. 00:23:102 (3) - clap
4. 00:25:357 (1) - clap cancel
5. 00:26:711 (2) - clap on first circle

1. 00:22:651 (1) - use finish instead of clap
2. 00:23:102~00:35:057 (T) - claps for heavy beats, just like Easy. random claps work not good
3. 02:03:590 (T) - section like this isnot necessary anymore, remove?

1. 02:03:590 (T) - remove

Colin Hou wrote:

[Easy]:

1. 00:51:523 (1) - (and the spinners like this) are a bit hard in an Easy. it's easy to get 300s but there are sliders after them, so maybe -2 to OD. it won't change much about the total score but makes it easier to finish the spinning and get more time to react on the sliders. I made -1 OD...
2. 00:24:004 (5) - clap cancel on the middle circle, and clap on first and last circles fix
3. 00:23:102 (3) - clap fix
4. 00:25:357 (1) - clap cancel fix
5. 00:26:711 (2) - clap on first circle fix

[Hard]:

1. 00:22:651 (1) - use finish instead of clap fix
2. 00:23:102~00:35:057 (T) - claps for heavy beats, just like Easy. random claps work not good fix
3. 02:03:590 (T) - section like this isnot necessary anymore, remove? fix

[Insane]:

1. 02:03:590 (T) - remove fix

don't start work, baby ?__?

KuraiPettan wrote:

☆ ~ Easy ~ ☆

Approach rate +1 nope, too fast xD
00:19:493 (3) - Move it 1/2 earlier and add 1 reverse ? yeah, big thanks here, you found bug of rhythm
01:37:989 (5) - Add clap hm, nope

☆ ~ Insane ~ ☆

00:35:508 (1) - Begin this spinner 1/2 earlier why not, fix
02:45:996 (x) - Add note hm, nope

Nice map
Here is your star~

xierbaliti wrote:

-Hard-
I like AR+1. checking, fixed
-Insane-

00:42:275 (1) - add finish? fixed
00:42:500 (2) - remove clap? sounds noisy here. fixed
00:42:951 (3) - add clap here fixed
00:43:402 (5) - remove clap fixed
00:44:981 (4) - 2 grid up is better. fixed

+star

sonnyc wrote:

Hi ^^

Easy
- I prefer changing the difficulty name to Normal.. 2 stars, don't think so

00:14:981 (3) - One grid right agree,fix
01:37:989 (5) - Clap agree,fix
02:33:929 (3) - Clap at the start agree,fix

Hard
Nothing Found

Insane
- I like this style, but it seems to lack some jumps..(except at the last)

00:06:636 (1) - Whistle fix this combo
02:10:696 (8) - Finish agree,fix
02:16:560 (1) - Delete Finish nope
02:46:109 (3) - One grid up and right nope

Great~~ sonnyc, Thx for your mod!