BigEarsMau wrote:

Hi there, NazuSan
M4M
Can't mod Extra cuz I can't play Extras yet

[Normal]

1. 00:02:610 (5,1) - Fix the blanket I think it's ok
2. 00:15:410 (5,1) - ^ fixed
3. 02:16:610 (4,5) - ^ fixed
4. 02:19:410 (3,4) - ^ done
5. 02:33:810 (1,2) - ^ It's ok imo
6. 00:17:410 (3,4) - Blanket these two I won't blanket all, It would be too near to 2
7. 03:23:163 (4,1) - ^ done

[Advanced]

1. 00:08:210 (4,5) - Maybe make them curved like this so it flows better They have a good flow
2. 00:13:010 (1,2) - Blanket for better flow It doesn't make the flow better maybe looks nicer, but done
3. 01:41:010 (5) - NC this bc the song transitioned to a new melody of course but I used longer combos than in hard or insane and to be consistent, I won't change it, just look at similar combos in this diff 01:34:210 (3,4) - 01:37:610 (4,5) - 01:47:010 (3,4) - , there is always another melody/sound but I didn't make NC
4. 02:37:010 (1,2) - Blanket could be better It's a bit far away but I've tried to fix it

[Hard]

1. Check AIMod. There are some unsnapped objects
2. 00:53:010 (4,5) - A blanket would be nice lol, of course
3. 01:05:210 (3,4) - Fix the blanket fixed
4. 02:23:610 (7,8) - ^ ^
5. 02:35:610 (5,6) - ^ ^
6. 02:13:810 (4) - Make it curved and blanket it with 02:14:210 (5) done

[Insane]

1. This diff is fine imo. Gotta be honest though, I enjoyed this a lot thx

Nice mapset

That's all I can find. Hope this helps
Good luck in being ranked

1. I strongly recommend to change drum-hitfinish to bass drum sound. using same sound as normal-whistle2 will be better.

1. I strongly suggest changing Sampleset to Normal at these points. drum-finish isn’t cymbal sound, so it doesn’t feel strong sound.
   
   1. 00:13:010 -
   2. 00:19:410 -
   3. 00:25:810 -
   4. 00:32:210 -
   5. 00:38:610 -
   6. 02:14:610 -
   7. 02:17:810 -
   8. 02:21:010 -
   9. 02:24:210 -
   10. 02:27:410 -
   11. 02:30:610 -
   12. 02:33:810 -
   13. 02:37:010 -
   14. 02:40:210 -
2. 03:03:494 (3,4,5,1) - you can make better flow
   
   image

   
3. 03:06:267 (3,4,5,1) - ^
   
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1. check same points I suggested about hitsounds in Normal dif.
2. 00:03:410 (1,3) - not to meet is better I feel
3. 01:17:410 - clap isn’t necessary imo.
4. 01:21:810 - add finish
5. 01:33:810 (2) - add whistle
6. 03:06:267 (4) - NC here?

1. same as above about hitsounds
2. 00:21:410 - add finish
3. 00:31:010 - ^
4. 02:53:010 (1,2,3,4) - make square?

1. same as above about hitsounds
2. 00:20:210 - add whistle
3. 02:31:810 - add finish
4. 03:59:698 - add finish
5. add finishes these points
   
   1. 04:00:732 -
   2. 04:01:422 -
   3. 04:04:180 -
   4. 04:06:249 -
   5. 04:06:939 -
   6. 04:09:008 -

1. 00:06:610 (1,2) - just my preference but I feel these are near a bit.
   
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   then, you should think about overlapping with 00:05:810 (4) -

thzz wrote:

hi~
M4M request from DeRandom Otaku. Your ambition for this mapset is overwhelming Ren


[General]

1. I strongly recommend to change drum-hitfinish to bass drum sound. using same sound as normal-whistle2 will be better. changed

[Normal]

1. I strongly suggest changing Sampleset to Normal at these points. drum-finish isn’t cymbal sound, so it doesn’t feel strong sound. I don't get this, to me it sounds right
   
   1. 00:13:010 -
   2. 00:19:410 -
   3. 00:25:810 -
   4. 00:32:210 -
   5. 00:38:610 -
   6. 02:14:610 -
   7. 02:17:810 -
   8. 02:21:010 -
   9. 02:24:210 -
   10. 02:27:410 -
   11. 02:30:610 -
   12. 02:33:810 -
   13. 02:37:010 -
   14. 02:40:210 -
2. 03:03:494 (3,4,5,1) - you can make better flow fixed
   
   image

   
3. 03:06:267 (3,4,5,1) - ^ ^
   
   image

   

[Normal] I guess u mean advanced?

1. check same points I suggested about hitsounds in Normal dif. same
2. 00:03:410 (1,3) - not to meet is better I feel fixed
3. 01:17:410 - clap isn’t necessary imo. oh just a mistake
4. 01:21:810 - add finish added
5. 01:33:810 (2) - add whistle done
6. 03:06:267 (4) - NC here?agreed

lovely way to use 2-repeat sliders <3 thx


[Hard]

1. same as above about hitsounds same
2. 00:21:410 - add finish okay thx ^^
3. 00:31:010 - ^
4. 02:53:010 (1,2,3,4) - make square? it is one, maybe a small fix and then it's ok

[Insane]

1. same as above about hitsounds ^
2. 00:20:210 - add whistle
3. 02:31:810 - add finish
4. 03:59:698 - add finish added all hitsounds
5. add finishes these points
   
   1. 04:00:732 -
   2. 04:01:422 -
   3. 04:04:180 -
   4. 04:06:249 -
   5. 04:06:939 -
   6. 04:09:008 - done for all maps from me

(...)

that’s all
gl~

thzz wrote:

hi~
M4M request from DeRandom Otaku.

[Ren’s Extra]

1. 00:06:610 (1,2) - just my preference but I feel these are near a bit. just wanted to make a proper blanket
   
   image

   
   then, you should think about overlapping with 00:05:810 (4) - Gooood Idea , Done

nice map Thanks <3
I couldn’t find nothing much, sorry~ Its fine~


that’s all
gl~

BoatKrab wrote:

Halooooo, as 6th req me on PM.
I gotta check it soon

wajinshu wrote:

[Insane]
00:03:410 (1,2) - fix this blanket fixed
00:19:410 (1,2) - ^^ ^
01:41:810 (4,1) - try this http://puu.sh/optED/5ad13610f8.png because i hear strong bit in big white tick the circle on the red tick there is overmapping but I changed it
02:19:010 (4,1) - fix this blanket hopefully fixed xD, nazi blanket
03:02:076 (1,2) - ^^ done
03:18:336 (6,1) - ^^ fixed
02:24:810 (2) - maybe 327 130 hmm okay
03:29:025 (5,6) - blanket? done
03:38:680 (3) - really? 2 repeat? yeah that's ok, the slider is not too short and it fit's to the sound imo
03:56:267 (5) - NC I agree
02:22:210 (7,3) - overlap? fixed
sry but i modding only insane every mod is helpful even if it's just 1-3 diffs

1. Disable Countdown it's no need
2. This map not have any storyboard so disable "Widescreen support"

1. Change diff name to Easy? it's doesn't not fit with Normal Hard Insane and Extra
2. 00:14:610 (3,4) - Would you like to make them blanket? maybe . 3.
3. 00:29:010 (1) - Move to right side a bit, it's really in center of the screen just place it to the right place
4. 00:35:410 (1,2) - If you see carefully, you'll notice it they is not blanket at all Click
5. 01:42:610 (1,2) - like above suggestion
6. 01:53:810 (1) - I think this is big problem to newbie player, this sliderart is so confused. try to make new one that not complicated like this
7. Move a break to 01:55:410 - insteads
8. 02:11:410 (1) - are you forgot to add clap hitsound?
9. 02:22:210 (2) - Like above suggestion ;w;
10. 02:30:610 (1,2) - I found this again, LOL. so make them blanket too
11. 02:53:010 - 03:14:542 - If you see carefully you'll notice about BPM. they got changes up and upper. so how? Don't forget this is an Easy difficulty ,Newbie player might be get miss hit because changes BPM. Just try to add slider instead.
12. 02:53:010 - 03:14:542 - Almost forgot, I want you follow all of rhythm is this part not just only paino sound :3
13. 03:58:680 (1) - NC is too weried for me. Consider to remove this NC becuz the rhythm is going down in 03:58:680 - and it's no reason for me to NC in 03:58:680 -

1. 00:12:610 (2) - Hmm, drum-hitclap is not fit with music at all but I think drum-hitfinish is okay for me
2. 00:58:210 (5) - Consider to NC here becuz it's start new part of the music
3. 00:57:810 - It's not Kiai time, right? so reduce a volume to 70-80% is okay
4. 01:04:210 (1,2) - They're not perfectly blanket
5. 01:34:610 (4,5) - This one too
6. 01:42:610 (1,2) - too
7. 02:19:410 (3,4) - They almost got perfectly blanket
8. 03:26:784 (5,1) - You never place circle like this it's might make player confusing about rhythm.

1. I don't know about DS in Advanced diff, you might be use equal in term of spacing (Professional Thailand's mapper ever told me about this)
2. 00:05:010 (4) - Why don't make 1/1 slider? it's not have any sound in 00:05:210 -
3. 00:12:610 (7) - Change HS to drum-hitfinish at head and tail of the slider it's really fit with song more than old
4. 00:33:010 (2,3) - Alright, make them blanket
5. 01:41:010 (5,6,7) - When you make them linked you should not ignore to take care them too it's not blanket please

1. What is "Ren" stand for? I don't understand ._.
2. Tag conflict with other difficulty
3. 00:05:810 (4,1) - They're too close ;_;
4. 01:06:010 (2) - Move it to stack with 01:07:410 (1) - on head? it's okay imo
5. 01:11:610 (2) - Maybe NC in here to make signal to player about slider SV has changed
6. 01:13:010 (6) - 01:13:210 (7) - 01:13:410 (1) - I think you should CTRL+G in them for 1 time to make it flow together
7. 01:41:110 - I didn't hear any sound in here so you should make 01:41:110 (4) - this slider to start in01:41:010 -
8. 02:11:410 (1) - Forget to add clap?
9. 02:17:810 (1,2) - They're too close try to move 02:18:210 (2) - to the right
10. 02:22:210 (8) - NC should be here not 02:22:610 -. Vocals is start in 02:22:210 -
11. 02:35:010 (7) - Like above suggestion
12. 03:32:129 (1) - This slider should end at 03:32:387 - and make new slider in 03:32:473 -
13. 03:46:784 (2,3) - Overmapped try to leave it blank
14. 03:48:680 (1) - Ctrl+G would be better
15. 03:52:301 (2,3) - Like above suggetsion
16. 03:57:818 (2,3) - ;_;
17. 04:02:456 (1) - This slider should to be 1/2 slider. it's not make sense for me when you do it in 1/4 and also reversed it ._.
    and 04:02:801 - new part is start at here
18. 04:04:870 (1) - You should remove reversed in this slider and make new slider in 04:05:560 -

BoatKrab wrote:

Halooooo, as 6th req me on PM.
I can't ignore dubstep song becuz I really like it xDDDDD
Let's start

[6th's Basic]

1. Change diff name to Easy? it's doesn't not fit with Normal Hard Insane and Extra Useless ruleeeeeee
2. 00:14:610 (3,4) - Would you like to make them blanket? maybe . 3. They're already blanketing aren't they ?
3. 00:29:010 (1) - Move to right side a bit, it's really in center of the screen just place it to the right place
4. 00:35:410 (1,2) - If you see carefully, you'll notice it they is not blanket at all
5. 01:42:610 (1,2) - like above suggestion Already blanketed
6. 01:53:810 (1) - I think this is big problem to newbie player, this sliderart is so confused. try to make new one that not complicated like this They are newbies, but they still have got their brains lol
7. Move a break to 01:55:410 - insteads
8. 02:11:410 (1) - are you forgot to add clap hitsound?
9. 02:22:210 (2) - Like above suggestion ;w;
10. 02:30:610 (1,2) - I found this again, LOL. so make them blanket too
11. 02:53:010 - 03:14:542 - If you see carefully you'll notice about BPM. they got changes up and upper. so how? Don't forget this is an Easy difficulty ,Newbie player might be get miss hit because changes BPM. Just try to add slider instead. No, it's a rhythm game; they have to hit it right or they will get 100 instead of 300 that's all, sorry ):
12. 02:53:010 - 03:14:542 - Almost forgot, I want you follow all of rhythm is this part not just only paino sound :3
13. 03:58:680 (1) - NC is too weried for me. Consider to remove this NC becuz the rhythm is going down in 03:58:680 - and it's no reason for me to NC in 03:58:680 -

BoatKrab wrote:

Halooooo, as 6th req me on PM.
I can't ignore dubstep song becuz I really like it xDDDDD
Let's start

[General]

1. Disable Countdown it's no need huh?! I remember I turned it off but it's on... lol
2. This map not have any storyboard so disable "Widescreen support" done

[6th's Basic]
(...)

[Normal]

1. 00:12:610 (2) - Hmm, drum-hitclap is not fit with music at all but I think drum-hitfinish is okay for me I think it fits
2. 00:58:210 (5) - Consider to NC here becuz it's start new part of the music I'll do this ofc
3. 00:57:810 - It's not Kiai time, right? so reduce a volume to 70-80% is okay done :3
4. 01:04:210 (1,2) - They're not perfectly blanket those nazi blankets...
5. 01:34:610 (4,5) - This one too fixed
6. 01:42:610 (1,2) - too uff... done
7. 02:19:410 (3,4) - They almost got perfectly blanket haha xD fixed, hopefully
8. 03:26:784 (5,1) - You never place circle like this it's might make player confusing about rhythm. fixed!

[Advanced]

1. I don't know about DS in Advanced diff, you might be use equal in term of spacing (Professional Thailand's mapper ever told me about this) I think you wouln't even notice that it's changed while playing, moreover I only did some easy jumps that, u don't really realize, I think it's fine
2. 00:05:010 (4) - Why don't make 1/1 slider? it's not have any sound in 00:05:210 - lol? ofc there is a sound a guitar sound, it's loud actually
3. 00:12:610 (7) - Change HS to drum-hitfinish at head and tail of the slider it's really fit with song more than old oh you're right
4. 00:33:010 (2,3) - Alright, make them blanket done
5. 01:41:010 (5,6,7) - When you make them linked you should not ignore to take care them too it's not blanket please fixed

[Ren's Extra]
(...)

[]
This is not full mod becuz i'm really busy, sorry.
This is good map I like it and hope you guys will get rank!

Good luck! thx! :3

1. 01:42:610 (1,1) - ok I know it's not even noticeable anymore but make them stack?
2. 01:55:410 - drag your break here?
3. 02:22:210 (2) - I personally don't like this kind of slider on low diffs even though it's wub material audio, as a simple diff, just make it simple blanket slider as well?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:31:810 (2) - blanket :^)
5. 03:24:198 (1) - I think it's too forced just to make some flow with 03:25:232 (2,3,4) - maybe you can move your red points to make it more smooth?
   
   SPOILER

   you can just stack back to 4 after doing this anyway
6. 03:36:611 (1) - unnatural flow with 03:35:232 (1,2) - I would like to put this on somewhere lower part (around 186|281)
7. 03:53:853 (4,5) - touching on HP bar so consider to place it on lower place according to BNs lul it's your choice if you believe me or not

1. I should put NC on 00:58:210 (5) - not on 00:59:410 (1) -
2. 01:09:010 (3) - idk I don't have a fetish with 1/1 stacks on normal but yea for some consistency thingy you can unstack this how you did on 01:05:410 (2,3) -
3. 01:52:610 (2) - ^
4. 02:30:610 (1) - Blanket xd (and yes I can see more nazi blanket but I'll stop here lol)
5. 02:33:010 (4,5) - this asymmetrical sliders looks a bit messy lel, you can just copypasta the 02:33:010 (4) - then rotate to 45degree or sth
6. 02:46:610 - this spinner end sound is pretty noisy lol maybe reduce volume?
7. 03:07:301 (5,2) - yes it's not really noticeable on playing but maybe avoid them from touching
8. 03:42:818 (4) - suggest to blanket it with 03:43:508 (1) - because whynot xd
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 03:58:336 (3) - can you just use same slider with 03:57:991 (2) - for some neatness thingy?

Akitoshi wrote:

I was middle of doing GD but ok

[6th]
(...)

[Normal]

1. I should put NC on 00:58:210 (5) - not on 00:59:410 (1) - this is already fixed sry xD
2. 01:09:010 (3) - idk I don't have a fetish with 1/1 stacks on normal but yea for some consistency thingy you can unstack this how you did on 01:05:410 (2,3) - It sounds like a break after 2, so a different sound and I think that's fine in this case
3. 01:52:610 (2) - ^ it's a repeating sound, so also fine for me
4. 02:30:610 (1) - Blanket xd (and yes I can see more nazi blanket but I'll stop here lol) I already fixed this xD
5. 02:33:010 (4,5) - this asymmetrical sliders looks a bit messy lel, you can just copypasta the 02:33:010 (4) - then rotate to 45degree or sth ok I fixed it
6. 02:46:610 - this spinner end sound is pretty noisy lol maybe reduce volume? reduced volume to 30% and used soft soundsample
7. 03:07:301 (5,2) - yes it's not really noticeable on playing but maybe avoid them from touching I agree
8. 03:42:818 (4) - suggest to blanket it with 03:43:508 (1) - because whynot xd It did this on purpose 4 sounds like a very curvy slider, so I won't change it
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 03:58:336 (3) - can you just use same slider with 03:57:991 (2) - for some neatness thingy? okay xD

sorry if I modded only 2 diffs, I'm busy atm

BoatKrab wrote:

Halooooo, as 6th req me on PM.
I can't ignore dubstep song becuz I really like it xDDDDD Ur "xD"s are always funny xd
Let's start

[General]

1. Disable Countdown it's no need done in my diff
2. This map not have any storyboard so disable "Widescreen support" done in my diff

[Ren's Extra]

1. What is "Ren" stand for? I don't understand ._. No fix .. jk its my nickname that my kawaii senpai gave me 3 years ago *^* i still love it
2. Tag conflict with other difficulty fixed
3. 00:05:810 (4,1) - They're too close ;_; fixed
4. 01:06:010 (2) - Move it to stack with 01:07:410 (1) - on head? it's okay imo eue its okay as it is
5. 01:11:610 (2) - Maybe NC in here to make signal to player about slider SV has changed So many NCs already 01:09:810 (1,1,1) - so not changing it for now
6. 01:13:010 (6) - 01:13:210 (7) - 01:13:410 (1) - I think you should CTRL+G in them for 1 time to make it flow together Good idea
7. 01:41:110 - I didn't hear any sound in here so you should make 01:41:110 (4) - this slider to start in01:41:010 - nah , the note at blue tick is important
8. 02:11:410 (1) - Forget to add clap? lel fixed
9. 02:17:810 (1,2) - They're too close try to move 02:18:210 (2) - to the right Oki
10. 02:22:210 (8) - NC should be here not 02:22:610 -. Vocals is start in 02:22:210 - oki
11. 02:35:010 (7) - Like above suggestion like above fix
12. 03:32:129 (1) - This slider should end at 03:32:387 - and make new slider in 03:32:473 - i guess its fine , if someone else notices this i will change it according to ur idea
13. 03:46:784 (2,3) - Overmapped try to leave it blank umm i used soft hitsound samplesets on them cuz if u listen closely , u will hear the same in the song
14. 03:48:680 (1) - Ctrl+G would be better good idea
15. 03:52:301 (2,3) - Like above suggetsion like above non-fix
16. 03:57:818 (2,3) - ;_; ;_;
17. 04:02:456 (1) - This slider should to be 1/2 slider. it's not make sense for me when you do it in 1/4 and also reversed it ._.
    and 04:02:801 - new part is start at here u made me change the whole pattern
18. 04:04:870 (1) - You should remove reversed in this slider and make new slider in 04:05:560 - and same here

This is not full mod becuz i'm really busy, sorry.
This is good map I like it and hope you guys will get rank!

Good luck!

Akitoshi wrote:

I was middle of doing GD but ok

[6th]

1. 01:42:610 (1,1) - ok I know it's not even noticeable anymore but make them stack? You really want it to be perfect right ? lol
2. 01:55:410 - drag your break here?
3. 02:22:210 (2) - I personally don't like this kind of slider on low diffs even though it's wub material audio, as a simple diff, just make it simple blanket slider as well? No, sorry ): I like it as it is
4. 02:31:810 (2) - blanket :^) Fixed
5. 03:24:198 (1) - I think it's too forced just to make some flow with 03:25:232 (2,3,4) - maybe you can move your red points to make it more smooth? It's intended and not forced at all ):
6. 03:36:611 (1) - unnatural flow with 03:35:232 (1,2) - I would like to put this on somewhere lower part (around 186|281)
7. 03:53:853 (4,5) - touching on HP bar so consider to place it on lower place according to BNs lul it's your choice if you believe me or not I prefer waiting

abanes16 wrote:

Ren's Extra

00:15:010 (3) - move a little bit to the left done and changed the pattern around it a bit
01:12:210 (1) - add Nc eue there was nc .. wait where did it go -w-
02:21:810 (1) - add Nc i guess its fine as it is

hao2mod xD its ez , u just did
Good luck xD

abanes16 wrote:

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Normal

00:08:210 (4,5) - adjust the sliders a bit and make it like this I think they're fine, it would ruin the blanket imo


03:02:785 (2) - adjusted it a bit

(...)

hao2mod xD
Good luck xD

Yukiyo wrote:

Irc for Ren's Extra

2016-04-23 22:19 Yukiyo: 01:16:010 (9,1) - overlap
2016-04-23 22:20 Yukiyo: 01:22:610 (7,1) - make stay evenly spaced
2016-04-23 22:20 DeRandom Otaku: in which map?
2016-04-23 22:20 DeRandom Otaku: my GD?
2016-04-23 22:20 Yukiyo: lost in idk
2016-04-23 22:20 Yukiyo: ye
2016-04-23 22:21 DeRandom Otaku: lost in time? -w- are u modding ur on map?
2016-04-23 22:22 Yukiyo: no
2016-04-23 22:22 Yukiyo: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949508 Extra Terra & Urbanstep - Lost In Time [Ren's Extra]]
2016-04-23 22:22 DeRandom Otaku: oh
2016-04-23 22:23 DeRandom Otaku: can u give me 5 more mins? i need to mod one more diff .w.
2016-04-23 22:23 Yukiyo: ye
2016-04-23 22:23 Yukiyo: just ignore what I'll write done here then
2016-04-23 22:23 DeRandom Otaku: ayy
2016-04-23 22:23 Yukiyo: 01:12:210 (5,2) - stack
2016-04-23 22:24 Yukiyo: 01:15:010 (3) - make it fit into gap of slider
2016-04-23 22:25 Yukiyo: 01:47:610 - maybe add a note?
2016-04-23 22:26 Yukiyo: 02:11:410 (1) - dunno about this overlap but blanket .w.
2016-04-23 22:27 Yukiyo: 02:31:810 (5,9) - stack lol
2016-04-23 22:28 Yukiyo: 02:34:410 (2) - put into middle of 02:33:410 (8,9,) -
2016-04-23 22:29 Yukiyo: 03:06:094 (4,2) - overlap
2016-04-23 22:30 Yukiyo: 03:25:232 (5,2,3,1) - stack?
2016-04-23 22:32 Yukiyo: 03:51:784 (1) - end a bit higher
2016-04-23 22:33 Yukiyo: 04:01:249 (6) - I think having a white tick on a return thingy is meh
2016-04-23 22:33 Yukiyo: should be clickable
2016-04-23 22:35 DeRandom Otaku: applied a few changes , are u done?
2016-04-23 22:35 Yukiyo: yes

1. 00:23:810 (1) - fix blanket
   
   
2. 01:29:210 (1,1,2) - my idea
   01:29:410 (1) - change location x:258 y:96
   01:29:610 (2) - ^ x:416 y:152
   
   
3. 01:40:610 (3,1,2) - I think change part
   
   
   
4. 03:29:715 (1) - blanket ?
   
   
5. 03:53:508 (3) - change location x:200 y:74

A s h e m u wrote:

Hi ~ from M4M

I'm sorry for my poor English.
but I will do my best.

Ren's Extra

1. 00:23:810 (1) - fix blanket Fixed
   
   
2. 01:29:210 (1,1,2) - my idea
   01:29:410 (1) - change location x:258 y:96
   01:29:610 (2) - ^ x:416 y:152 Changed but a bit different than ur idea
   
   
3. 01:40:610 (3,1,2) - I think change part Oki
   
   
   
4. 03:29:715 (1) - blanket ? Done
   
   
5. 03:53:508 (3) - change location x:200 y:74 oki

so fun map :3 Thanks :3

Good Luck ~ <3

Bulldog wrote:

hey here for the m4m. I hope i can help but form just playing the mapset it's pretty solid

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Insane

00:54:610 (1) - i think this would flow better if it were a curved slider I think this doesn't matter

00:57:010 (1) - I think if this was at a .75x sv reduction rather then a .5 it would feel better the whole part is already .75 reduced so I have to reduce it even more to emphasize the sound

01:05:010 (2) - I dont really like the stack but its fine but it's a mistake, fixed

02:53:010 (1) - weird slider shape for the music that is playing I just want the blanket there

03:26:267 (5) - going with the patter of misshaped sliders on the wub shouldn't this be a oddly shaped slider mmh I don't want to change it

Hope i was of some help . gl with the mapset i loved it. Best wishes - Bulldog

Bulldog wrote:

hey here for the m4m. I hope i can help but form just playing the mapset it's pretty solid

Ren's

03:06:956 (3,4) - these kinda kill the hype bc theya re so slow. you could at least put a note inbetween imo. i would put a circle in there even if there was a very very quite noise ~ but i dont hear anything at all~

03:11:956 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - so the second stack of triples are 2.0 away form the third stack while the second triple is only 1.8 away which is fine but it could be moved so that they match Fixed

03:16:956 (5,6,1) - stack 5 and 1 ? nvm its a repeating thing and its not bad Yea~ it was on purpose

Hope i was of some help . gl with the mapset i loved it. Best wishes - Bulldog

Hobbes2 wrote:

M4m with DeRandom Otaku:

Ren's Insane

- This is super specific and probably isn't worth a change, but I thought I'd point it out. The slider at 01:23:010 (1) could be adjusted a tad to line up with the slider right before a bit better. Here's a picture of what I'm talking about - http://imgur.com/PXFzT1K Done

Compare it to the one you have and it looks a little better.

- Sliders like the one at 03:23:508 (3) and 03:23:680 (4) - sound like they need to be 3 ticks long. This might be something you considered already so disregard if so, but if you haven't I'd think about it. i dont get it @-@

More examples include 03:40:060 (1) and 03:40:232 (2). same

Overall this is an excellent map and I had a ton of fun testing it. Good luck! I might come back and edit this post if I find anything else to talk about.

-Space- wrote:

Reserving for m4m, please contact me before asking.

General

BPM & Offset: Double checked both and they seem fine
Folder: Looks Clean
AiMod: Nothing to bring up

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Normal

00:05:010 (4,6) - I would perhaps like to see these at the same angle? Better consistency imo done

00:56:210 (3) - Curve this a little less so the flow onto the next slider is better, it also looks slightly better aesthetically. right

02:53:810 (2,3) - Maybe it could be better if you align it so they either blanket eachother, or create a circle like pattern? I don't think this is necessary

02:56:168 (1,2) - ^ same

Another solid difficulty really well structured and placed together, nice job. Thx

Advanced

00:19:410 (1,2) - Not a huge fan of the stacking here, I feel it kind of puts a quick halt to the flow of the slider before and after it.

(An example is 00:25:810 (1,2) this works due to the change in the song, it is a dramatic change everyone can easily recognise and distinguish, since new players will be using this difficulty it will be slightly jarring to see a halt in the song with the same (or similar) sound in the song I have to gree with u and changed that part

01:21:010 (2,3) - Not a big fan of the inverse sliders here, I think it will be better just as a regular blanket between both the sliders. Imo it really fits here

Well played! Lovely difficulties so far

Hard

I can't find anything on hard or insane kek no problem

Insane

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All of these are well made difficulties, looking forward to seeing this in ranked. Best of luck Thx I hope it get ranked soon^^

-Space- wrote:

Reserving for m4m, please contact me before asking.

General

BPM & Offset: Double checked both and they seem fine
Folder: Looks Clean
AiMod: Nothing to bring up

Ren's Extra

00:03:410 (1,2) - The blanketing here is not consistent, if I bring the slider closer you can see where it isn't correct. If you add another white anchor like in the last image you can see it is now blanketed consistently Fixed

Blanket

http://puu.sh/oH7dF/d43a5c54d8.jpg

New Blanket

http://puu.sh/oH7gv/089d77c542.jpg

00:07:810 (2) - Just move this out a bit more, the blanket will be perfect that way. Fixed

00:21:610 (2) - Move this right two tiny grids, it will be more consistent that way. (Make sure to change this too 00:22:210 (4) Fixed

01:01:810 (1,1) - I don't think this plays right, the gap between the slider is one issue it is complete different and splits the buildup, I would revise this part. That might end up being a sliderbreak but ~ Fixed

01:17:010 (1) - The end of this slider isn't consistent with the angle in which the first part is done, I would make sure they're the same Fixed

01:49:010 (1) - Move the front of the slider out a bit to make the end less curved, consistency Fixed

03:13:163 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Questionable difficulty spike here, this is just over 1 second of the drain time it constitutes for 0.2* Welp the triplets before the stream indicates that the maps gonna be on fire xD

03:24:198 (1) - (Nazi Mod) Move it to x:241 Fixed

03:40:405 (3) - Move the middle anchor out a little bit more for a consistent curve and blanket fixed blanket a bit but didnt do anything with anchor point

All of these are well made difficulties, looking forward to seeing this in ranked. Best of luck

VEZOK wrote:

btw Props for handling that tempo-acceleration-part so well

VEZOK wrote:

Wombu-wombu-wombu! XD

Nice Map-Set, as i can see u already spent much effort on this one (not much to do here)
btw Props for handling that tempo-acceleration-part so well

Here's my Mod

Important:

- in Basic-Diff: 02:40:210 (1) delete this circle and start the spinner @ this point 6th's part
- The Hitsound-Volume changes way too often (at some points u cant even hear those) well, I don't think that it changes too often, we adjust the sound to the music so it's all fine, if u find a hitsound volume that DOES NOT fit to the music show it to me, but in this case it seem's fine

Suggestions:

- U might wanna lower the difficulty-settings of basic - so becomes an easy 6th~
- The Spinner @ 2:40 (in basic as well as normal and advanced) might be too long >>end it earlier or cut it into 2 I've seen worse things than this, morover it fit's to the melody, splitting the spinner doesn't change anything because u also spin all the time and don't have a moment to recover
- Do a fitting storyboard with either flashing or screen goin dark? sry to disappoint u :/ I can't do very nice SB's they just look... unprofessional and I can't handle SB tools (no knowledge about programming language)

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

VEZOK wrote:

btw Props for handling that tempo-acceleration-part so well

All le credits goes to Dark Meyrick ~ he should get some kd for the timing tbh

- in Basic-Diff: 02:40:210 (1) delete this circle and start the spinner @ this point

- U might wanna lower the difficulty-settings of basic - so becomes an easy

- The Spinner @ 2:40 (in basic as well as normal and advanced) might be too long >>end it earlier or cut it into 2

- Do a fitting storyboard with either flashing or screen goin dark?

01:53:810 (1) - I'm not a huge fan of the end of this ( the slider idea itself is great I love that, it just doesn't feel consistent) I attempted to make the end of this slider more circular. I will leave some co-ords that I used for the white anchors and a puush of the end result I got

00:15:410 (4) - Consider moving this to these co-ords for a better consistency with the slider end and tip distance (x:392 y:144)

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

i made some minor (unnoticeable) Changes : http://puu.sh/oTRZ7/608e410792.txt

Retorical wrote:

great map, Im sure it will be ranked soon

CookieKivi wrote:

umm hii

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NazuSan wrote:

Can I give kds for this?