Gezoda wrote:

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00:41:601 (3) - Try to reduce this jump if you can (Or mirroring it to reduce it like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43610 )
Good suggestion but i'll leave it and list 2 reasons below.
1.I have an easier diff for new players.
2.Actually,this is not a jump,and i think its kind of a big spacing.it could exsit in a normal diff
00:44:662 (4,5,6) - Snaping errors. didnt find the errors you mentioned?

I'll look on the others levels later, but I think that this deserves a star =w=

Thanks for your modding and star =)

Lissette wrote:

I like 07th Expansion <3

I feel timing off, but since I'm not very good with timing, I could not fix it, will get Liz to check it ^^
Yup, i re-checked and found a better timing.

Hard
add at least a little break time
Sorry, I guess it might be ok even no break in whole diff as i've already mapped the full length =)

Normal
add at least a little break time
Check with AIMod there are some unsnapped notes
ahh,resnapped all notes
01:49:560 (1) - too far from prev note
kk,Shortened distance between both sliders
i would preferred if your new combo pattern be like this: new combo at: 00:01:804 - 00:06:702 - 00:11:600 - 00:16:498 - 00:21:396 - etc (every 8 beats) but there are end of sliders there >< (the new combos in Easy and Hard are well set)
Not changed.

Star!

EDIT: I got this Offset: 1,835 is not perfect, but is better than yours
Thanks a lot.but i got a better one already =)

Lissette wrote:

Sorry for the delay T.T
That's all right ^^

Re-check

Offset: +5ms (by Alace) Fixed

Hard
00:21:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use new combo to mark jumps to make it more readable please
It doesnt look nice with new combo on these jump patterns. x.x I caught some of my friends who never played this map to try the jump part. And the result is that they're not confused and feel these jumps are easy to read. So, i decide to leave them. Sorry. xD
00:40:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same ^
01:29:813 - is that a volume change, or just an useless timing section? Removed
add a spinner to variety scores Errm...its my styple with less spinners even no spinner. Hopefully, you can respect this.

Normal
01:29:813 - same as hard Removed
add a spinner to variety scores Same reason with Hard

Easy
01:35:170 (7) - new combo kk, fixed
01:37:313 (1) - remove new combo kk, fixed

1. Easy and Normal difficulty Kiai time is wrong (it comes by a 1/4 too soon). Correct Kiai times are: 01:10:37-01:20:17, 01:49:56-01:59:35, 02:04:25-02:09:15.

1. 00:12:828 (3,4) - Move the third point of the slider (3) by 1 grid up and the last point of the slider (3) by 1 grid to the right. This will make (4) look in line with the end of this slider. It will look like this.
2. 00:37:318 (3,4) - These sliders don't look nice. Try shaping slider (3) like this, and slider (4) like this. This looks much better to me.
3. 01:36:093 (2,3) - Why not change this to a repeating slider?
4. 02:06:705 (4,5,6,7) - Why not change these into a square shape, like this?

1. 00:05:787 (6,7) - There is no need to stack this. Try this. The slider is rotated by 9 degrees clockwise and this way it's mirrored to slider (5). The highlight you see in the picture is the next combo, just to show you that spacing is right.
2. 00:25:073 (1) - Remove new combo.
3. 00:25:991 (2) - New combo.
4. 00:30:277 (1) - Remove new combo.
5. 00:30:583 (2) - New combo.
6. 00:58:440 (4) - Flip this slider so it's shaped like this. This way 3-4-5 looks like a cyclone which looks nice.
7. 01:47:420 (5,6) - Also, no reason to stack these. Just move circle (6) a bit lower so it has proper spacing between 5-6-7. Like this. They also form a nice triangle now.

1. AR -1. The song is too slow for AR this fast.
2. 00:02:420 (5,6) - No reason to stack these. Move 6 to the right, but watch the spacing between 5-6-7.
3. 00:11:297 (6,1) - Also, no reason to stack these. Move 6 to the left, but watch the spacing between 5-6-1. Like this. They form a nice triangle now as well.
4. 00:46:807 (6) - New combo.
5. 00:48:032 (11) - New combo.

lolcubes wrote:

Hey, here's my mod. Green stuff can be ignored if you wish, they are design opinions and some nazi stuff.

[General]:

1. Easy and Normal difficulty Kiai time is wrong (it comes by a 1/4 too soon). Correct Kiai times are: 01:10:37-01:20:17, 01:49:56-01:59:35, 02:04:25-02:09:15.

[Easy]:

1. 00:12:828 (3,4) - Move the third point of the slider (3) by 1 grid up and the last point of the slider (3) by 1 grid to the right. This will make (4) look in line with the end of this slider. It will look like this.
2. 00:37:318 (3,4) - These sliders don't look nice. Try shaping slider (3) like this, and slider (4) like this. This looks much better to me.
3. 01:36:093 (2,3) - Why not change this to a repeating slider?
4. 02:06:705 (4,5,6,7) - Why not change these into a square shape, like this?

[Normal]:

1. 00:05:787 (6,7) - There is no need to stack this. Try this. The slider is rotated by 9 degrees clockwise and this way it's mirrored to slider (5). The highlight you see in the picture is the next combo, just to show you that spacing is right.
2. 00:25:073 (1) - Remove new combo.
3. 00:25:991 (2) - New combo.
4. 00:30:277 (1) - Remove new combo.
5. 00:30:583 (2) - New combo.
6. 00:58:440 (4) - Flip this slider so it's shaped like this. This way 3-4-5 looks like a cyclone which looks nice.
7. 01:47:420 (5,6) - Also, no reason to stack these. Just move circle (6) a bit lower so it has proper spacing between 5-6-7. Like this. They also form a nice triangle now.

[Hard]:

1. AR -1. The song is too slow for AR this fast.
   I even want AR+1 and rename to Insane instead Lol.
   
2. 00:02:420 (5,6) - No reason to stack these. Move 6 to the right, but watch the spacing between 5-6-7.
3. 00:11:297 (6,1) - Also, no reason to stack these. Move 6 to the left, but watch the spacing between 5-6-1. Like this. They form a nice triangle now as well.
4. 00:46:807 (6) - New combo.
5. 00:48:032 (11) - New combo.

And that's it. The maps look nice. Hope this helped and good luck. :3