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Kalafina - To the beginning (TV Size)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lundi 7 mars 2016 at 12:56:46

Artist: Kalafina
Title: To the beginning (TV Size)
BPM: 153
Filesize: 3027kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3,13 stars, 194 notes)
  2. Insane (4,19 stars, 326 notes)
Download: Kalafina - To the beginning (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Insane - 100%
Hard - 100%
-M4x
General
  1. Fix AI mod
  2. Use soft sampleset and reduce samplevolume (Maybe switch to normal in Kiai)
  3. Possible combo colors:
    Combo1 : 159,0,0
    Combo2 : 242,60,60
    Combo3 : 248,147,35
    Combo4 : 255,187,119

Insane
  1. 00:00:000 - You have two redundant timing points here and one here 00:06:548 - remove them please
  2. 00:03:354 (1) - spinner isnt snapped
  3. 00:06:646 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - I would make them parallel.
  4. 00:07:038 (1) - why NC?
  5. 00:07:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make this an even curve please
  6. 00:08:018 (7) - NC here
  7. 00:08:018 (1,2) - Why aren't those snapped like 00:08:214 (2,3,4) -
  8. 00:09:391 (6) - NC here
  9. 00:10:175 (8) - That slider looks weird imo.
  10. 00:10:763 (3) - Remove and set the sliderend here.
  11. 00:11:155 (5) - NC here
  12. 00:11:940 (4,1) - Maybe remove these? Since the song doesn't support them.
  13. 00:12:136 (4) - Stack with 00:11:744 (3) -
  14. 00:14:292 (6) - NC (this note is highlighted by the song)
  15. 00:15:665 (5) - NC here
  16. 00:17:038 (3,4) - Remove and set sliderend 00:17:038 (3) - here.
  17. 00:17:038 (5,6,7) - Snap them please.
  18. 00:17:430 (5) - NC here
  19. 00:18:802 (4) - NC here
  20. 00:19:587 (1) - Set sliderend 00:20:175 - here.
  21. 00:20:469 - Why increase the sv when you decrease it again right here 00:23:214 - this makes no sense. In addition, don't place them on blue ticks please.
  22. 00:22:136 (2) - NC here
  23. 00:23:312 (3) - Remove sliderkick and replace it with a NC-hitcircle
  24. 00:24:489 (2) - NC here
  25. 00:28:410 (4,3,4,5) - These are not stacked correctly.
  26. 00:25:273 (1,1) - Remove NC and put it here 00:26:842 (3) -
  27. 00:27:822 (1) - Remove NC
  28. 00:28:410 (4) - NC here
  29. 00:29:979 (2) - NC here
  30. 00:31:548 (2) - NC here
  31. 00:32:332 (8,1,2,3) - This doesn't sound right. Try this instead.
  32. 00:40:567 (4) - Consider making this beat clickable. Same to this one 00:42:136 (4) -
  33. 00:48:802 (3,5) - NC here (both)
  34. 00:52:724 (4,4,3) - Maybe remove them? Sounds better without them imo. (Adjust the patterns then)
  35. 00:55:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wouldn't a straight stream fit better here?
  36. 00:55:861 (9) - NC here
  37. 01:01:743 (4,5,5,5,1) - I would make all of the sliderends clickable
  38. 00:58:998 (2) - NC here
  39. 01:19:390 (3,4,5) - This triplet doesn't sound right.

    General things to improve in this difficulty:
  40. Most of the notes are placed very centred which makes your map look very inelegant. This is what you get when you press CTRL+A.
    As an example: This is a screenshot from a ranked TV size map with almost the same star rating.
  41. No offense, but the patterns you use lack quality sometimes. You should work on that.
  42. Also how you use new combos is very weird. Try to focus on the notes, that are emphasized by the music or the vocals. You can give your map much more quality, by setting the right NC's.

I hope this helps you at least a bit improving the map and your mapping techniques :)

Good Luck with this!

-M4x
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