1. Hard (2.03 stars, 85 notes)
2. Normal (1.4 stars, 63 notes)

[TimingPoints]
4703,946.372239747634,4,2,0,70,1,0
23630,949.367088607595,4,2,0,70,1,0
55908,949.367088607595,4,2,0,70,1,0

Bonsai wrote:

Heyho, now here's the timing as promised:

[TimingPoints]
4703,946.372239747634,4,2,0,70,1,0
23630,949.367088607595,4,2,0,70,1,0
55908,949.367088607595,4,2,0,70,1,0

Just open the .osu-files of your diffs and replace the current timing point with these three, and then resnap all notes.
Looks pretty good for your first map, just mind those few things I told you and this might be very promising Good luck!
(no kudosu needed)

Swegmec wrote:

From my NM/M4M queue.
I'm only doing hard, since this is your 1st map, and you have some issues that make it a little harder to mod.

Hard
00:25:291 (3,1) - Put something here. - Added.
00:29:088 (5) - Change this. - Changed to a slider.
00:56:976 (16) - Unnecessary. - Removed.
00:38:819 (1,2,3) - You can't stack these sliders. Unrankable. - Unstacked and fixed.
00:44:397 (5) - Umm, confusing. Starting/ending on 3/4 times are weird. - Fixed.
00:48:788 (5) - New combo here, but I don't even recommend using the stream. - Fixed & removed.
01:07:775 (1) - Pretty long for a spinner. - Fixed.

Okay, general points:
-Double the BPM's, to avoid 1/8 notes. This will get very important if you want to do an insane. This also means your velocity will be messed up, so I would remap all the sliders to fix this. - Bonsai did the timing so I better stick on it.

-This is what your diff setup should be:
-HP: 5
-CS: Whatever you want, 4.5 is fine, but just don't go over 5.2.
-AR: 6.5-7 (8 is too high)
-OD: 5.5-6 (In between HP and AR)
- Fixed.

-Decent for your 1st map, but a bit scattered. Try sticking to a theme of mapping. - Thank you.

DeltaLeeds wrote:

Hello, from your M4M queue. Seeing you're a beginner mapper, read all the text in bold, it's pretty important for your future edits. Not many like pointing out and teaching stuff like this, so check it out and give feedback. :3

General

SPOILER

1. Check AIMod for all your diffs by pressing ctrl+shift+a.
   For example in normal:
   
2. Object's end not snapped means you changed the timing points but didn't change the objects, thus making it not fit with the timing...
3. To fix this, go to timing at the top tab next to design, and click resnap all notes. If the problem still persists, go to the note and move it around yourself. Note that you must check the whole map after doing this.
4. Set a preview point that must be the same for all diffs by going to timings at the top of the screen, and set as preview point.
5. Change the quality of your MP3 using audacity or something... (If you want me to change it for you because you don't know how, PM me.)
   
6. The distance snapping is all wrong in these two difficulties. You still need DS (distance snapping) in Easy, Normal, and Hard. Check out the distance snapping at the top-right of your screen (Like 0.91x, 1.51x etc), keep it constant throughout the whole map by moving your notes around to make it constant.
   
7. Add the source of your beatmap in song setup! - Read everything and fixed all mentioned issues.

Normal

SPOILER

1. Keep the distance snapping at 0.9x... For instance at one point of your map, it is at 0.9 until suddenly a huge jump appears out of nowhere making it 2.59x as seen in the top right part of the screen:
   - Will do.
2. Check every note and slider's DS and keep it constant. - Checked and fixed.
3. Lower the OD to 3-5 - Fixed.

00:01:390 (1): The spinner recovery time is waaay too short. In normal it has to be at least 2 bars, but in your case 1 bar away from another note, because your BPM is slow. I'd advise you to drag the spinner to the white tick at 00:00:917, and end it at 00:03:756, like so:
- Fixed.

00:04:703 (1,2): I don't think 1/4 is advised in normal, plus it fits more if you extend the slider at (1) to 00:05:649 instead. - Fixed.
00:07:542 (3,4): Same goes for this, just make (4) a normal note instead of a slider as the end of the slider and next slider is a 1/4 beat. Not recommended. - Fixed.
In normal or easy diff, keep all notes at the red or white tick, it is not recommended to put them in the blue tick. - Ok.

Fix the slider as well, make it more symmetrical.
To do this, make sure the x of the head and tail of the slider are at the same value, and the middle of the slider's y right between the x of the head and tail of the slider, like in my case, the x|y values of the anchor points of the slider is: 138|120, 160|224, 138|328. It'll become like this
Check your other sliders to see if it's symmetrical or not if you put 3 anchor points in the sliders. - Ok.

00:12:273 (1,2): If 1/4 is not recommended for normal, then 1/8 is a big no-no for normal difficulty. At the slider's end, you used 1/8, I'd advise changing the rhythm to this: http://puu.sh/nhalv/ddf8f79445.jpg - Seems like I forgot to snap them. Fixed.

00:14:876 (3,4,5): These beats don't suit the music, and remember, in normal just put the beats in red and white ticks like so:

Move (3) to 00:14:639, (4) to 00:15:113. - Okay, moved.

00:18:898 (1,2): Disable NC and erase the reverse arrow at (1), and do a NC and add a reverse arrow at (2) like:
- Fixed.

00:27:427 (1,2,3,4,5): Extend 1's slider to 2, delete 2, and delete 4, like:
- Fixed.

00:32:055 (1): Delete this note. - Removed.

00:34:973 (5): NC - Fixed.

00:35:259 (1): Make this slider start at 00:35:971 and end at 00:38:819 and delete the slider at 00:39:057 (1). - Fixed.

00:49:262 (6): NC - Fixed.

00:55:908 (7): NC - Fixed.

01:00:892 (11): Move this beat to 01:01:129. - Moved.

01:03:502 (1): Make the slider shorter... Ending at 01:11:097. As the song fades, make timing points that reduce the hitsound audio for a nice fade effect. - Fixed.

Hard

SPOILER

1/8 is not recommended in hard, avoid putting the beats at the yellow tick, or just make it 1/4 by ctrl+mousescrolldown
Fix the distance snapping, hard still requires the distance snapping and this diff's distance snapping is out of control. Make it constant. (Larger than normal like if normal is 0.9x make hard 1.2x or something over 0.9x

00:05:531 (2): Delete this note. - Deleted.

00:17:597 (4): ^ - Deleted.

00:23:038 (5): ^ - Deleted.

00:29:088 (5): Don't make too many reverse arrows in sliders. Why not make it a long slider that ends at 00:30:987, or maybe this:

Not too sure of the latter though, so it's up to you. - Fixed in a previous mod.

00:33:005 (4): Delete note. - Deleted.

00:39:650 (2): ^ - Deleted.

00:43:448 (3): ^ - Deleted.

Well, I won't point out all of the notes at yellow ticks, so delete the rest yourself.

00:49:262 (7): NC - Fixed in a previous mod.

01:07:775: Fade effect in spinner as stated in normal. - Fixed.

I know you can be a great mapper one day, and this is not bad for your first map! Good luck on the map. - Aww, thank you very much.

Black Emptiness wrote:

- Thank you guys for your time & help.

General

Normal

You're not allowed to make jumps on normal difficulties, your spacing has to be constant

Hard

1. http://puu.sh/njSEb/9a4540923b.wav - take this hitsound to make your map more epic
2. Audio bitrate is higher than 192kbps. Consider recompressing to CBR 192kbps or VBR ~1.0. (AIMod)
3. 01:11:097 - Silence the spinner here

1. 00:08:488 (1,2,3) - Use Distance Snap
2. 00:24:579 (2,3,4) - ^
3. 00:27:427 (6) - NC
4. 00:31:224 (1) - This slider should start from another place. It looks unsightly with 00:29:326 (10) - because they have a similar shape
5. 00:34:073 (1) - Too far from the previous slider. If you dont want to change that, at least place it one x:256 (also applies to 00:34:547 (2) - )
6. 00:35:022 (3) - This should at least look like a blanket.
7. 00:58:518 (5) - Off-beat slider. The end of the slider is a lot stronger than its beginning. Not only starts a new sound but it is also a big white tick. Try this:
   
8. 01:01:604 (3) - Same as above.
   
9. 01:07:775 (1) - Start it from 01:08:249 -

1. If you are going for rank, you have to use constant Distance Snap for the whole diff.
   
   You have to fix this
2. 00:35:259 (1) - start this spinner from 00:36:921 - and fill in the empty space
3. 00:46:414 (5,1) - That's unsightly overlap. You can do a lot better than this!

• 
  00:14:639 (4) - This would be better spaced at the same distance as the next circles. Also the previous slider's curve isn't round enough for a blanket
  00:17:794 (4,5) - in a diff of only 2 stars, I would recommend against having a stack followed by a jump at all the same interval
  00:46:256 (7,1) - ^
  00:25:528 (3) - you should really add more points to the curved part if you want to blanket like that
  00:35:022 (1,1) - honestly the spinner should end where the circle is, and the circle can just be removed
  01:07:300 (1) - the part of this slider that has the 2 red points could maybe be opened up a little more
  
  Like this

  

• 
  00:16:059 (1) - this slider overlaps itself just a little too much, open up the middle part a little
  00:24:579 (2,3) - this blanket is a little off, 3 should be moved up and left a little bit

1. 00:04:703 (1) - Add something here other than just the spinner end. There should be some clickable objects here
   
   
2. 00:05:649 (1) - This slider could lead into the next note better, something like this
   
   
3. 00:18:898 (1) - Similar thing here, try moving 3 upwards a bit and adjusting the slider accordingly
   
   
4. 00:35:022 (1) - I would make sure that there is a clickable object here, probably stacked on the previous circle. Timeline should look like this
   
   
5. 00:38:819 (1) - Same as 00:04:703
   
   
6. 01:11:097 (1) - Same as 00:35:022

1. 00:00:000 (0) - Personally, I really like the cs5. Keep it
   
   
2. 00:21:579 (2) - This needs to be changed to a triple, even though it is a strange one. It is a 1/12 division triple, and looks like this on the timeline.
   
   
3. 00:32:174 (2) - IDK why, but this looks weird to me.
   
   
4. 00:45:940 (5) - This jump is awkward, I would change to this. (Use .7 distance snap if you want exactly as it is here).
   
   
5. 00:51:992 (5) - Delete this note, but it's still fine if you keep it. It's just a little bit weird sounding. You could even get away with changing it to the weird 1/12 triple from 00:21:579 lol.
   
   
6. 01:11:097 (1) - Same as Normal

KittyAdventure wrote:

Wuf what? Are you seriouly about metadata? It's look cool xD
okay, you make me afraid with your scary avatar ;__;