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FictionJunction KEIKO & KAORI - Hoshikuzu

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Lizbeth
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 27, 2011 at 10:43:29 PM

Artist: FictionJunction KEIKO & KAORI
Title: Hoshikuzu
Source: The Velveteen Rabbit
Tags: Everlasting Songs Kajiura Yuki Velvet no Inori
BPM: 100
Filesize: 6402kb
Play Time: 04:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.17 stars, 158 notes)
  2. Hard (4.29 stars, 291 notes)
  3. Normal (3.21 stars, 263 notes)
Download: FictionJunction KEIKO & KAORI - Hoshikuzu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Please Re-Download if you have it before 1/23/2011

Another FictionJunction song, hope you enjoy <33
Last edited by Lizbeth , edited 13 times in total.
Sure
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Sure
I'm first! <3 :)
Lizbeth
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haha! thanks for the support yk<333
Kenezz
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I'm Second <333
Lunah_old
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Hi Lizz-chan-baka-chi-2x

General

OFFSET : 69.280


Easy

01:18:880 (2) - Snap this on end slider and not on grid, just remake it, it will snap automatically

Hard

01:14:061 (3) - 1 Grid right
01:50:061 (3) - 1 Grid right
02:50:061 (4) - Snap this on end slider and not on grid
02:52:461 (4) - ^
03:48:861 (3) - ^


Star for my love<3
Lizbeth
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Lunah wrote:

Hi Lizz-chan-baka-chi-2x

General

OFFSET : 69.280


Easy

01:18:880 (2) - Snap this on end slider and not on grid, just remake it, it will snap automatically

Hard

01:14:061 (3) - 1 Grid right
01:50:061 (3) - 1 Grid right
02:50:061 (4) - Snap this on end slider and not on grid
02:52:461 (4) - ^
03:48:861 (3) - ^


Star for my love<3
Thank you Lu-chi <33
All done
Keksi
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Keksi
Eeehhh yeah star~
vivere
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vivere
Hi Liz

[Normal]:

Approach Rate: -1
Overall Difficulty: -1



[Hard]:

02:44:961 (1,2)- Sube 2 grids
02:54:561- Borra este new combo DD:

star <333
Lizbeth
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vivere wrote:

Hi Liz

[Normal]:

Approach Rate: -1
Overall Difficulty: -1



[Hard]:

02:44:961 (1,2)- Sube 2 grids okis
02:54:561- Borra este new combo DD: esta ahi por una razon mi querido perv amiro

star <333
Grax vivere!<33
Thanks Kesi for the star <33
nimi
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nimi
ohi ^.^
SPOILER
modding as Keksi asked ~
keep in mind these are only suggestions
Normal
01:17:961 (1) - remove new combo?
01:18:561 (1) - ^
01:27:561 (1) - ^
01:28:161 (1) - ^
01:40:461 (4) - change it to this place http://puu.sh/y3N looks better imo
01:55:761 (1) - remove new combo
01:56:361 (1) - ^
02:44:361 (1) - ^
02:50:361 (1) - ^
03:03:561 (1) - ^
03:11:961 (1) - ^
03:13:161 (1) - ^
Hard
01:31:461 (4) - it's too close to 01:30:861 (3) for the break between them. consider placing it somewhere else >/<
01:33:861 (4) - same thing of 01:31:461 (4)
Relaxing song and map, really good to play and listen to. Starr'd ^_^
Lizbeth
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Wiinter wrote:

ohi ^.^
modding as Keksi asked ~
keep in mind these are only suggestions
Normal
01:17:961 (1) - remove new combo?
01:18:561 (1) - ^
01:27:561 (1) - ^
01:28:161 (1) - ^
01:40:461 (4) - change it to this place http://puu.sh/y3N looks better imo
01:55:761 (1) - remove new combo
01:56:361 (1) - ^
02:44:361 (1) - ^
02:50:361 (1) - ^
03:03:561 (1) - ^
03:11:961 (1) - ^
03:13:161 (1) - ^

Yeah, i was considering to do this, so fixed, thanks
Hard
01:31:461 (4) - it's too close to 01:30:861 (3) for the break between them. consider placing it somewhere else >/< This are called anti-jumps and can be placed depending on the music ^^
01:33:861 (4) - same thing of 01:31:461 (4)

Relaxing song and map, really good to play and listen to. Starr'd ^_^
Thank you for modding~<33
Lissette
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one~ <(**)>
Astom
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.... BAKA

[General]
-muchos timing points unsnaped xD

[Easy]
-termina el kiai time en 03:33:130 =P

[Normal]
-muchos circles unsnaped

[Hard]
-muchos circles unsnaped

Na q decir del mapping :P
Lizbeth
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Astom wrote:

.... BAKA

[General]
-muchos timing points unsnaped xD

[Easy]
-termina el kiai time en 03:33:130 =P

[Normal]
-muchos circles unsnaped

[Hard]
-muchos circles unsnaped

Na q decir del mapping :P
Grax moe <3
Niva
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Niva
A mod to a map I found upon your profile :D

[General]
-> It's quite long before the first note. Maybe add "Please Skip" SB such as in this map's easy diff?

[Hard]
01:52:480 (3) - One grid left for the last waypoint? (or it's intentional, I don't know)
03:21:280 (3) - Rotate about 80° clockwise, selection centre maybe? Looks better to me

[Normal]
01:53:680 (5,6) - (5) to (6) is too far away
02:47:080 (5) - Curve this slider facing left?
03:45:880 (4,5) - Too far compared to (2) and (3)

[Easy]
-> Can't find any problems. However I'm not a fan of 0.8 slider speed in 100BPM song, too slow for me >.< But this is just my personal opinion.

This mapset is ready to be ranked I think, my mods are all suggestion
Star, nice map once more!
GladiOol
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GladiOol
'?' = suggestion

[General]
  1. I love the flow in this map, the slow down sliders and the new combo placement. <3 good map.
[Hard]

01:15:880 (3) - Add new combo. -> 01:10:480 (3,1) - & 01:12:880 (2,1) - you did it also~
01:45:880 (1) - Remove new combo ?


[Normal]

02:38:680 (5) - Add new combo -> 02:41:080 (1,2,3) - so it will look the same as that pattern~
02:53:080 (4) - Add new combo ?


[Easy]
  1. There are some unused timing sections; I've pointed some out~
01:30:430
01:30:730
01:32:830
01:33:130
01:35:830
01:36:130
01:36:430
01:36:730
01:40:030
01:40:330

etc. Please delete 'm~
Lizbeth
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Nivalis wrote:

A mod to a map I found upon your profile :D xD <3

[General]
-> It's quite long before the first note. Maybe add "Please Skip" SB such as in this map's easy diff? yeah good idea, I'll tell liss to do this later

[Hard]
01:52:480 (3) - One grid left for the last waypoint? (or it's intentional, I don't know) lol i always notice that, but i was just lazy, fixed
03:21:280 (3) - Rotate about 80° clockwise, selection centre maybe? Looks better to me

[Normal]
01:53:680 (5,6) - (5) to (6) is too far away true, fixed
02:47:080 (5) - Curve this slider facing left? i did it, but facing right instead :P
03:45:880 (4,5) - Too far compared to (2) and (3) fixed

[Easy]
-> Can't find any problems. However I'm not a fan of 0.8 slider speed in 100BPM song, too slow for me >.< But this is just my personal opinion.

This mapset is ready to be ranked I think, my mods are all suggestion
Star, nice map once more!
Thanks for your suggestions =)

GladiOol wrote:

'?' = suggestion

[General]
  1. I love the flow in this map, the slow down sliders and the new combo placement. <3 good map.
Thank you >//< <3

[Hard]

01:15:880 (3) - Add new combo. -> 01:10:480 (3,1) - & 01:12:880 (2,1) - you did it also~ oh yes >.< I replace slider with two circles aswell
01:45:880 (1) - Remove new combo ? totally


[Normal]

02:38:680 (5) - Add new combo -> 02:41:080 (1,2,3) - so it will look the same as that pattern~ done
02:53:080 (4) - Add new combo ? done


[Easy]
  1. There are some unused timing sections; I've pointed some out~
damn I know D: lazy me.. All deleted

01:30:430
01:30:730
01:32:830
01:33:130
01:35:830
01:36:130
01:36:430
01:36:730
01:40:030
01:40:330

etc. Please delete 'm~
Thanks for modding GladiOol <3
rust45
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rust45
Sorry for the late mod.

Um, I couldn't really find anything, the maps are good, that's for sure. But there weren't really any problems with the maps. So I really have no choice but to give a star. I would bubble, but we have 1.5 pages and I'm sure someone will come by and point out something I missed.
Diasios
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Diasios
[General]

  • • Artisti: FictionJunction KEIKO & KAORI
    • Offset: 69290
[Normal]

  • • 01:46:180 (5) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 01:46:780 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 01:49:480 (1) - ^
    • 01:50:080 (3) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 01:51:880 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 01:52:480 (3) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 02:03:880 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 02:04:480 (2) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 02:04:780 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 02:05:980 (1) - ^
    • 02:51:280 (1) - ^
    • 03:02:980 (4) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 03:12:580 (5) - ^
[Hard]

  • • 01:49:480 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 01:50:080 (3) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 01:51:880 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 01:52:480 (3) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 03:02:980 (3) - ^
    • 03:03:580 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 03:04:180 (1) - ^
    • 03:11:980 (1) - ^
Lizbeth
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xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

  • • Artisti: FictionJunction KEIKO & KAORI
    • Offset: 69290
[Normal]

  • • 01:46:180 (5) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 01:46:780 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 01:49:480 (1) - ^
    • 01:50:080 (3) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 01:51:880 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 01:52:480 (3) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 02:03:880 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 02:04:480 (2) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 02:04:780 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 02:05:980 (1) - ^
    • 02:51:280 (1) - ^
    • 03:02:980 (4) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 03:12:580 (5) - ^
[Hard]

  • • 01:49:480 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 01:50:080 (3) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 01:51:880 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 01:52:480 (3) - Add a "New Combo"
    • 03:02:980 (3) - ^
    • 03:03:580 (1) - Remove the "New Combo"
    • 03:04:180 (1) - ^
    • 03:11:980 (1) - ^
Thanks alot for the help with offset, feels awesome now. <3
Artist name changed.
About combos, I didn't follow your suggestions because ruin the pattern I want :<
Lilac
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Last mod...for the day...

You know what? This is too good, I can't find anything wrong...

Actually, I will bubble this map after you fix up the spinners at the end of each map. (Make sure they have "New Combo")

Well done, Lizbeth-sempai
Lizbeth
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Thanks a lot for modding Lele<3
Spinners are fixed :3
Lilac
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Well done, Lizbeth-sempai.

Probably last bubble I'll give. Ahahaha.
Alace
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Lovely anti jumps
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Felicitaciones! :)
Niva
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Congratulations xD
deadbeat
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congrats lizzy :D
Lizbeth
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Thank you<3333
GladiOol
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I got -10 on offset.

You should've sticked on LunaH's offset posted on first page ):
Also 9/10~ like I said before lovely map, good slow downs, great new combo's. Very well done <3
Alace
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the offset is fine for me
Lizbeth
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GladiOol wrote:

I got -10 on offset.

You should've sticked on LunaH's offset posted on first page ):
Also 9/10~ like I said before lovely map, good slow downs, great new combo's. Very well done <3
xxheroxx's worked better for me actually D:
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Verdisphena
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Congratz Liz :3
Lizbeth
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Grax (>*.*)>
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