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TeddyLoid feat.Debra Zeer - D City Rock

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LunaticSHIKI

DiamondCrash wrote:

Brief;

00:28:191 (3,1) - Spacing.
01:25:595 (2) - Clap, no finish.
I would suggest you map up to where Garter finishes.
all fixed
thx
Orgol
fight~ :arrow:
James2250
Turn all of the normal timing sections down on your difficulties, they are pretty loud compared to the song
I would remove the countdown from Brief as none of the other difficulties use it
Not 100% on the timing at the moment..

Brief:
Slightly fast slider velocity for the easiest difficulty but its ok
Remove inherited timing sections after map finishes
Remove un-used audio lead-in

Garter:
Start kiai time at 02:30:120
02:20:997 (5,1) - space further apart

Panty&Stocking:
End kiai time at 01:33:160
00:18:401 (1) - move slightly so people don't miss the repeat?
00:43:321 (1,3) - don't overlap
02:10:095 (6,1) - spacing
04:12:246 (1) - remove new combo

Chuck:
00:31:306 (5,6,1) - spacing
02:04:087 (6,7,8) - keep spacing equal
04:30:936 (3) - add note?

Not bad
Have a star~
Sandpig

James2250 wrote:

Chuck:
00:31:306 (5,6,1) - spacing hmm..I think it plays well under 8 Approach Rate
02:04:087 (6,7,8) - keep spacing equal ok
04:30:936 (3) - add note? ..I'd rather end this map on a white tick x.x

thx

Download: TeddyLoid feat.Debra Zeer - D City Rock (LunaticSHIKI) [Chuck].osu
Topic Starter
LunaticSHIKI

James2250 wrote:

Turn all of the normal timing sections down on your difficulties, they are pretty loud compared to the song
I would remove the countdown from Brief as none of the other difficulties use it
Not 100% on the timing at the moment..

Brief:
Slightly fast slider velocity for the easiest difficulty but its ok
Remove inherited timing sections after map finishes
Remove un-used audio lead-in

Garter:
Start kiai time at 02:30:120
02:20:997 (5,1) - space further apart

Panty&Stocking:
End kiai time at 01:33:160
00:18:401 (1) - move slightly so people don't miss the repeat?
00:43:321 (1,3) - don't overlap
02:10:095 (6,1) - spacing
04:12:246 (1) - remove new combo

all fixed
thx a lot :)
MegamiUK
Star <3
lapan_old
Is it me or is the beatmap even shorter now? :/
Lesjuh
I approve (y), but wait!

James2250 wrote:

Not 100% on the timing at the moment..
It sounds perfectly fine to me but it'd be better if you get a second opinion from a MAT on this. I bubble stuff too fast anyway hehe
xierbaliti
-G2rter-
* disable countdown
00:11:281 (5) - 往右移点和(4)对齐 然后new combo
00:13:061 (4) - new combo?
00:13:061 (8) - ^
00:59:563 (3,4) - 调整下位置
01:07:796 (4) - new combo
01:13:136 (3) - 这间距在normal里有点争议 还是拿下来和(1)重合比较合适
01:13:581 (4) - new combo
01:25:595 (2) - 没有用finish的必要
01:34:940 (5) - new combo
01:35:830 (7) - 往左放点
01:58:080 (3) - new combo
02:15:880 (1) - 调整下间距
02:19:440 (2) - 往右2格
02:20:552 (4) - 往左2格


好吧其实我感觉1.4的DS在normal里有点大了:O

-Pa2ty&Stock2ng-
* disable countdown
00:03:049 (5) - 往下1格
00:21:071 (4) - 这么放比较好._.
00:21:961 (1) - 尾巴上少个clap
03:09:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这clap放的太2了
03:11:059 (1,2) - 开头+whistle
03:12:394 (3) - +whistle

-Ch2ck-
* disable countdown
喂只有这个难度你是认真做的吧..
00:08:611 (3) - 我有些不理解为什么00:08:166 (2,3)的距离和00:09:946 (2,3)的不一样
00:30:639 (4) - 把这个往下放一些 夹在(2,3)中间 视觉上比较好

2出血了
Topic Starter
LunaticSHIKI

xierbaliti wrote:

-G2rter-
* disable countdown
00:11:281 (5) - 往右移点和(4)对齐 然后new combo
00:13:061 (4) - new combo?
00:13:061 (8) - ^
00:59:563 (3,4) - 调整下位置
01:07:796 (4) - new combo
01:13:136 (3) - 这间距在normal里有点争议 还是拿下来和(1)重合比较合适
01:13:581 (4) - new combo
01:25:595 (2) - 没有用finish的必要
01:34:940 (5) - new combo
01:35:830 (7) - 往左放点
01:58:080 (3) - new combo
02:15:880 (1) - 调整下间距
02:19:440 (2) - 往右2格
02:20:552 (4) - 往左2格


好吧其实我感觉1.4的DS在normal里有点大了:O

-Pa2ty&Stock2ng-
* disable countdown
00:03:049 (5) - 往下1格
00:21:071 (4) - 这么放比较好._.
00:21:961 (1) - 尾巴上少个clap
03:09:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这clap放的太2了
03:11:059 (1,2) - 开头+whistle
03:12:394 (3) - +whistle

-Ch2ck-
* disable countdown
喂只有这个难度你是认真做的吧..
00:08:611 (3) - 我有些不理解为什么00:08:166 (2,3)的距离和00:09:946 (2,3)的不一样
00:30:639 (4) - 把这个往下放一些 夹在(2,3)中间 视觉上比较好

2出血了

fixed some
thx xiergualiti
Topic Starter
LunaticSHIKI
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Nekomura Iroha
8-)
ignorethis
hi l2b
BPM大丈夫?
feat.后面加空格

<Brief>
00:22:408 (1) - finish去掉

<Garter>
01:36:722 (1) - whistle去掉
02:49:701 (3) - 太难看了 >_>
04:20:480 (1) - whistle去掉

<Panty&Stocking>
01:11:803 (1) - 不太好看 >_> 折返的圈拉低一点
01:32:606 (6) - 这finish声太大
01:47:402 (1) - finish去掉
Topic Starter
LunaticSHIKI

ignorethis wrote:

hi l2b
BPM大丈夫?
feat.后面加空格

<Brief>
00:22:408 (1) - finish去掉

<Garter>
01:36:722 (1) - whistle去掉
02:49:701 (3) - 太难看了 >_>
04:20:480 (1) - whistle去掉

<Panty&Stocking>
01:11:803 (1) - 不太好看 >_> 折返的圈拉低一点
01:32:606 (6) - 这finish声太大
01:47:402 (1) - finish去掉
fixed.
bpm大丈夫 蕾丝说TIMING没问题
Ibuki Suika
2
Lesjuh
Chuck
Overall diff and drain rate both +1 or +2

P&S
Overall diff and drain rate both +1 or +2

Garter
Not quite a normal difficulty, approach rate +1 or +2 because it can be pretty confusing at some parts.

Brief
01:20:702 (4) - New combo (hard to read)

Just that.
Topic Starter
LunaticSHIKI

Lesjuh wrote:

Chuck
Overall diff and drain rate both +1 or +2

P&S
Overall diff and drain rate both +1 or +2

Garter
Not quite a normal difficulty, approach rate +1 or +2 because it can be pretty confusing at some parts.

Brief
01:20:702 (4) - New combo (hard to read)

Just that.

all fixed
thx :)
Rucker
:O
Lesjuh
pantsu
soulfear
ファカ 8-)
LF2magic
good map star~
LF2magic
good map star~
Colin Hou

Lesjuh wrote:

l2y's pantsu
Kyonko Hizara
:)
KiriNoMorii
:)
Sumisola
star~
yaya
go
eveless
太2了
Tenshi-nyan
Genre: Pop (English)

Eh? Isn't this an anime song? :O
Jarby

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Genre: Pop (English)

Eh? Isn't this an anime song? :O
It's obviously in English?
Derekku
Fixed online tags and added a warning for the video.

EDIT: Fixed genre/language as well.
ztrot
I was a bit disappointed with this map :( it could of had alot more tweaks done to make it better.
spacing, break placement, nazi stuff really but I was hoping for a great map and met with an average map
4/10 v.v
Sleep Powder

ztrot wrote:

I was a bit disappointed with this map :( it could of had alot more tweaks done to make it better.
spacing, break placement, nazi stuff really but I was hoping for a great map and met with an average map
4/10 v.v
Which map exactly?

I thought that "Chuck" was a decent map itself but the "Panty&Stocking" beatmap seemed to flow a lot better. "Chuck" seemed to have a lot of pattern mapping while the other had a nice flow (movement). "Panty&Stocking" was better than "Chuck". I haven't tried the other two difficulties and the difficulty spread itself bothers me a bit. I give an 8/10.
myoto
THIS IS HARAMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
ztrot
I guess I'm looking for too much creativity in the map design
Sandpig
我就笑笑
Sakura
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62146 (lasts some good 10 seconds)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62148 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62149 (lasts about half a minute)

The guidelines are pretty clear that this rule applies to VIDEOS too, plus this goes too far, it's nakedness for at least some good 30 seconds...
Jarby

Sakura Hana wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62146 (lasts some good 10 seconds)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62148 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62149 (lasts about half a minute)

The guidelines are pretty clear that this rule applies to VIDEOS too, plus this goes too far, it's nakedness for at least some good 30 seconds...
I don't know, genitals are clearly covered. I don't think anything needs to be done now, but maybe that particular rule needs to be more specific for future cases.
Firo Prochainezo

Sakura Hana wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62146 (lasts some good 10 seconds)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62148 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62149 (lasts about half a minute)

The guidelines are pretty clear that this rule applies to VIDEOS too, plus this goes too far, it's nakedness for at least some good 30 seconds...
Jeez. As Jarby said, the genitals are covered/unclear and I really doubt that it's a problem. And also, you're a little bit late, aren't you? ;)
Derekku
Sorry, but I'm gonna have to unrank this for a couple reasons.

1) The timing is incorrect. It's currently 134.833 BPM with 604 offset, but it should be 134.825 BPM with 610 offset. The incorrect timing was very noticeable while playing, and caused notes to be over 20ms early by the end of the song.
2) The video is not appropriate. Even though the naughty bits are censored, it's still near-nudity and against the guidelines/rules. Either find a way to censor these parts of the video (with a storyboard, although that would probably look odd), or remove the video completely.

The mapset as a whole isn't terrible, but I think it could still use a bit more modding. Hidden sliders like 00:02:828 (3) and some near-hidden streams in the Chuck difficulty really threw me off.

Also: You will need to find new MAT/BAT to rebubbled/rerank this (i.e. those who bubbled/ranked this before cannot do so again).
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