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I like this beatmap alot.
I dont know much about BPM and such, but overall i like it.

Took request from #modreqs.

Overall
- Maybe that gray combocolor can be confusing while you play this in multiplayer. (When you fails a map in multiplayer, every notes turn gray.)

Eazy
- Uh... I felt beats are too consistent. In a measure, there comes one or two beat long slider comes, followed by some circles in most parts...
00:07:313 (1,4) - Uh... Delete 4 and copy & paste 1 to where(timely, I mean.) 4 was, and Edit --> Rotate by --> 180 degrees.
00:21:405 (4,1) - How about moving a grid down to make the distance same with 1-2, 2-3 & 3-4?
00:49:889 (3) - Uh... clap+whistle+finish? Personally I don't like it...
00:50:489 (4) - Finish in here would be better
01:16:274 (3,4) - Align these to 2?
01:56:451 (1) - Consider lengthen this spinner? This might be too short for 'Easy'. (Well, you need to move this backward, I mean, make it starts ealier than now, then lengthen.)

Normal
00:20:506 (3,4,5,6) - Finish-finish-finish-whistle, or something similar like that? (Considering the music, there's similar sound in 3,4,5 and somewhat different sound in 6.)
00:45:692 (1,2,3,4) - Uh... How about not to stack this with 00:45:092 (4,5)? I'm not sure though.
01:18:073 (4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:20:506 (3,4,5,6).

Intensive
- Somewhat overmapped? I'm not sure though.
00:13:160 (1,2) - How about a slider from 00:13:160 to 00:13:460?
00:36:097 (X) - Add a circle here?

Uh... Please ask me for star someday. I think there can be some more improovements and I'll star then.

[Easy]
00:21:705 (1) - Maybe line this up with the stream before it?
Rest looks fine to me.

[Normal]
01:16:274 (5,6) - Line these up with the end of the slider

[Hard]
00:13:910 (4,5,6,7,1) - Hit circles are overlapping the slider...I'd remap that little part.


Overall, this looks considerably well done compared to other beatmaps with only one star. Find someone to help you with hitsounds and you'll be very close to being done. The mapping itself needs only some minor adjustments to be finished.

Starred!

Green = Request
Blue = Would be nice if you change
Red = Change plz


[Easy]
00:43:293 (3) - 1 Grid left (looks nice imo :3)
00:44:492 (4) - New Combo
01:55:552 - Make an slider from 01:55:552 to 01:56:152 and start spinner at 01:56:451

[Normal]
00:20:506 (3) - New Combo
00:28:901 (1) - 1 Grid left
00:44:792 - add circle?
01:18:073 (4) - New Combo

[Intesive]
00:30:400 (2) - 1 Grid left and 1 Grid down
00:30:700 (4) - 1 Grid right
01:15:525 (1) - 1 Grid left
01:17:773 (5) - ^


Nice map :3
Here's your star~

Everything's a suggestion and is minor. I'm just very opinionated. I'll try to be quick.

[general]
intensive is pretty much lolbannedforever, but significantly easier because it's slower. I hope its rankable. However, there's a pretty big jump from normal to intensive. If you could make normal harder or make a hard, that would be excellent.
don't forget to delete the osb on your next full submit if you're not going to make a storyboard. It's not required anymore, but it's good practice.

[easy]
00:12:111 (1) - section's fine, but maybe end some sliders on a sixteenth? Maybe I overestimate easy. http://puu.sh/O5x
00:21:405 (4) - delete or
00:45:392 - add note? I think a run of 5 notes is kind of normal, but it's a slow song
AIMod is telling me the slider at the end isn't long enough.

[normal]
I don't like the fact that there's a hitsound on each beat. The easiest way to fix this is to remove just a couple notes or move them around like this:
00:21:705 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/O5P
maybe I'm overestimating difficulties again.
00:50:189 (5) - slider?

[intensive]
I feel this is both overmapped and undermapped, so I'm going to point out those spots where I don't hear anything in the background, or I don't think you should map this because the note isn't important.
00:10:612 (5) - not important
00:12:036 (12) - no note
00:12:261 (2) - not important, start slider on 1.
00:16:458 (5) - not important
00:21:705 - I don't like the stacked notes in this section. I can also recommend some slider positioning that I would like better if you ask.
00:31:225 (8) - no note
00:50:114 - add a note? very questionable.
01:09:078 this is the undermapped section. It would be better to map that drum in the background too.
01:10:577 4 note run starting here
01:13:801 add note
01:14:100 ^
01:15:375 - 4 note run starting here
01:17:474 - ^
01:20:397 - add note
01:23:395 - ^
01:23:695 - ^
01:28:192 - ^
01:28:492 - ^
01:32:090 - ^
01:32:990 - ^
01:33:290 - ^
01:34:489 (4) - no note
01:34:789 - add note
01:51:504 (6) - make it a circle and continue mapping. This part is really easy.
01:52:404 (7) - not important
01:53:378 add note
01:56:451 (1) - does this map really need spinners?

Song's fun, and I personally don't mind overmapping so long as there is a note there to back it up. After all, if the creator of the music we like enough to map it decided to put a note there, who are we to say "that sounds bad, I'm going to put it here instead"?

two stars, because this is when you need the stars, isn't it?