hi tank and volta
[General]
[Sulit]
Please correct me if I'm wrong about what was intended here. ;;
[Gila]
[Greget]
[Oni]
[General]
- I know that, I personally had no idea what the difficulty names meant until I asked Nishizumi. So it possibly would be good if you changed the difficulties to English, like you have in your other set. But keep the last difficulty name as Greget.
- The kiai could be turned off at 00:59:473 - and turned back on at 01:00:885 - if you wanted a small break in it.
- 00:46:061 - and 00:46:767 - This could be a nice blanket.
[Sulit]
- Rather than a normal, this difficulty feels a bit like an Advanced. Considering that you have jumps like 00:11:120 - and 00:11:473 - / 00:46:414 - and 00:46:591 - / 00:54:355 - and 00:54:532 - . These seem a bit big for a Normal difficulty, like I said. As well as the density is quite a bit more than in the Biasa difficulty.
[Gila]
- 00:07:591 - This reverse slider feels a bit out of place with how you previously mapped this rhythm at 00:04:767 -.
- 00:19:238 - and 00:19:591 - For a Hard, this jump is a bit big, make it a somewhat smaller.
- 00:24:708 -, 00:25:061 -, and 00:25:591 - Same issue as above.
- 01:11:120 - and 01:11:297 - ^
- 01:11:826 - and 01:12:179 - ^
- 01:13:238 - and 01:13:591 - ^
- 01:14:297 - and 01:14:473 - ^
- 01:15:708 - and 01:15:885 - ^
- 01:18:532 - and 01:18:885 - ^
- 01:20:297 - and 01:20:650 - ^
- 01:21:708 - and 01:22:061 - ^
- 01:23:120 - and 01:23:297 - ^
[Greget]
- 00:07:502 - Change the sampleset from soft, to normal on this slider tail. Sounds weird that it's not the same as the first time this rhythm happens at 00:04:679 - .
- 00:08:120 - Why leave this unmapped? It sounds empty without a beat here when you mapped it at 00:05:473 - .
- If you're going to have 00:18:532 - and 00:18:797 - so far apart, I'd recommend Ctrl+G'ing 00:18:532 - so it's easier to read that it's a 1/4 pattern, rather than a 1/2 pattern.
- 00:20:120 - and 00:20:297 - I'd move these closer together, based on the above point.
- 00:21:532 - and 00:21:708 - Same as above.
- 00:22:944 - and 00:23:120 - ^
- 00:36:885 - , 00:37:150 - , and 00:37:238 - ^
- 00:38:297 - , 00:38:561 - , and 00:38:650 - ^
- 00:55:238 - and 00:55:591 - Move 00:55:591 - closer to the tail of 00:55:238 - to stay more consistent with this type of pattern 00:08:826 - and 00:09:179 - .
- 00:56:650 - and 00:57:002 - ^
- 01:16:414 - , 01:16:679 - , and 01:16:767 - Similar issue as 00:18:532 -.
[Oni]
- Change the HP/OD to fix a bit better between the Muzukashii and other Oni.
- 00:07:591 - / 00:07:767 - / 00:07:944 - One of these should be k. d d d sounds a bit too monotone for what is being given in the background here.
- 00:31:150 - A note could be added here so the 1/4 rhythm here stands out over the 1/2 in this section.
- 00:55:414 - Change to d. Has relatively the same pitch as 00:55:238 - .
- 01:11:297 - Could be changed to k to be more consistent with 00:48:708 - .
- 01:22:855 - Add a note to follow the melody a bit better here.