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Draftnell
okee here

[HD]
00:25:412 (25412|0) - move to col 3 and then 00:25:595 (25595|2) - move to col 1 ( make hand balance in here )
00:30:899 - http://puu.sh/rPogx/aab37775e1.jpg
00:32:363 (32363|2,32546|0) - to col 1 and 2 please
00:33:826 - http://puu.sh/rPok8/db85499f5a.jpg (PLEASE PRIORITY FOR HAND BALANCE)
00:36:021 (36021|2) - 3 note for what ??? JUST DELETE is diff hard !!! so 2 note is enough
00:36:387 - http://puu.sh/rPorD/a10a423d73.jpg
00:37:851 - http://puu.sh/rPouC/ab84d58242.jpg
00:38:765 (38765|3,38826|2,38887|1) - GHOST NOTE -_- isn't have a sound drum on there
00:38:765 - add
00:42:607 (42607|3,42790|3,42973|3) - avoid like this -_-
00:46:082 (46082|2) - delete -_-
01:28:521 - 01:28:613 - add in col 2 and 3
01:29:802 (89802|2) - delete ( just 2 note is enough !!! )
03:02:729 - http://puu.sh/rPoVE/cbb039f1ab.jpg
03:04:558 (184558|2) - move to col 2
03:06:021 (186021|1) - ^ col 3
03:06:753 (186753|0) - ^ col 4
03:07:119 (187119|3) - ^ col 2
03:07:485 (187485|1) - ^ col 3
03:07:851 - http://puu.sh/rPp7P/c849a995cf.jpg
AHHH BANYAK NYA
sisanya lu aja deh

w saranin : penggunaan jack nya macem kek gini 01:12:241 (72241|2,72424|2,72607|2) - TOLONG ITU RE-ARRANGE KALAU BISA DIHINDARKAN karena gak hand balance banget, dan penggunaan 3 note ny seperti 01:25:412 - 01:25:960 - WTF THIS LIKE DIFF MX !!, nah itu pleaseee cukup 2 note aja ( berlaku semua yg lu gunain 3 note ),

moga lu ngerti ><

#Good Luck
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UPDATED! Makasih atas bentak bentak draftnell :u
AchsanLovers

REUSE-ABLE wrote:

UPDATED! Makasih atas bentak bentak draftnell :u
njir :v
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Dead. this beatmap is dead.
puxtu
Try harder.
juankristal
is this dead?
puxtu
Apparently yes.
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juankristal wrote:

is this dead?
Nah, its just because i do request so much mods but none of the request do mods so.. its just metafor XD
wamster2
Hello!

HD
00:12:607 (12607|2) - This LN should end here 00:13:156 -
00:36:021 to 00:44:802 - In this section, some of the snare sounds have triples, while some has doubles only
01:10:960 (70960|1) - I think this LN should start here 01:10:778 - But you can keep it if you intended this
01:21:021 (81021|0,81113|1,81204|2,81296|1) - Might want this to be a jack (just my suggestion, can keep yours)
01:21:021 (81021|0,81113|1,81204|2,81296|1) - Might want to add note here to emphasize the cymbals?
02:14:710 - add 2 notes here to be consistent with the previous part
02:40:046 to 02:44:436 - The snares in this section should be triples
02:51:387 to 03:01:265 - You should add 1note for every cymbal sound in this section

Sorry for little mod, but Ill try to mod other diffs if this thread will be revived XD. And can I make a GD for this?
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wamster2 wrote:

Hello!

HD
00:12:607 (12607|2) - This LN should end here 00:13:156 -
00:36:021 to 00:44:802 - In this section, some of the snare sounds have triples, while some has doubles only
01:10:960 (70960|1) - I think this LN should start here 01:10:778 - But you can keep it if you intended this
01:21:021 (81021|0,81113|1,81204|2,81296|1) - Might want this to be a jack (just my suggestion, can keep yours)
01:21:021 (81021|0,81113|1,81204|2,81296|1) - Might want to add note here to emphasize the cymbals?
02:14:710 - add 2 notes here to be consistent with the previous part
02:40:046 to 02:44:436 - The snares in this section should be triples
02:51:387 to 03:01:265 - You should add 1note for every cymbal sound in this section

Sorry for little mod, but Ill try to mod other diffs if this thread will be revived XD. And can I make a GD for this?
Ah thanks for the mod >w<
sorry but this map already on Pre-check by BN so... i have to wait
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY MAP!
Nivrad00
BN check

Frst of all, I'm sorry it's been so long and that you haven't been able to find another BN. The truth is I lost a lot of time and motivation for osu ;_; But anyway, I'm here now, so let's do this
General
02:27:973 - The measure lines after this point are incorrect ;n; you should add a red line here to fix it (BPM 164, 4/4)

You should take "REOL" out of the tags, since it's in the artist field as well. (Capital letters don't make a difference.) Also, could you explain the source of the "Monstah" tag for me?

How come the OD on EZ is higher than on NM?

EZ needs to be hitsounded before I can bubble ;n;
Hitsounds
EZ
lol no hitsounds

NM
00:12:973 - missing claps v
00:23:217 -
00:36:387 -
00:51:753 -
00:54:680 -
01:01:265 -
01:03:460 -
01:10:046 -
02:30:534 -
02:33:460 -
02:40:046 -
02:42:241 -
00:22:485 (22485|3) - shouldn't this be a clap
01:36:021 (96021|0) - don't think this should be a clap
02:45:534 (165534|2,165899|2,166265|3) - why whistles?

HD
00:12:973 - missing claps v
00:15:899 -
00:21:753 -
00:23:217 -
00:36:387 -
00:37:851 -
00:42:241 -
01:02:729 -
01:37:119 -
00:57:058 (57058|2) - wrong place for clap, should be at 00:56:875 -
03:03:460 - 03:04:558 - 03:04:924 - 03:08:948 - 03:09:680 - 03:10:412 - 03:12:241 - 03:12:607 - missing whistles

puxtu's MX
00:38:948 (38948|0) - think this is supposed to be soft
01:36:021 (96021|3) - same
01:42:058 (102058|3) - same

Crono's SC
00:19:924 (19924|2) - unneeded clap?
00:37:119 - missing claps v
00:38:582 -
00:53:948 -
02:04:192 -
02:45:899 -
03:01:814 (181814|2) - this should definitely be drum, not soft l0l
soft-hitnormal is used very inconsistently in this diff. I won't point out each inconsistency, but pls try to improve it before I recheck

I would appreciate if you checked each difficulty again for hitsound mistakes! it's a bit sloppy right now :(
Diffs
There are a few places where it's hard to hear the snare, but I made judgements based on what would make sense for the drum line as well as what I could hear :P

EZ
00:12:607 - double for crash?
00:11:875 - it might be better if this LN ends here at the beginning of the next sound
00:33:095 (33095|0,33095|3,33460|2,33460|1,33826|3) - i'm not sure what the purpose of this section is. Maybe you could just follow the previous pattern?
00:50:656 - how come you only use two lanes here?
01:36:021 - it's probably best not to repeat this pattern so many times here. http://puu.sh/uxc2l.png
02:29:345 (149345|3) - this should be on 1/1 snap.
02:33:278 (153278|0) - same
02:51:387 (171387|0) - 03:01:631 (181631|3) - these LNs are inconsistent in length with the other LNs. You should end them on the 1/1 snap
02:57:058 (177058|0) - should be on 1/1 snap
03:14:710 (194710|0,194802|1) - you need to make these snaps consistent with HD, MX, and SC ;n;

NM
00:36:021 - there should probably be two note here, it's a very strong beat. Or at least one ;n;
00:36:387 - 00:42:241 - 00:51:753 - 00:54:680 - 01:10:046 - 02:40:778 - double for snare?
00:56:875 - 01:53:948 - 02:35:656 - suggest double to follow the pattern
01:52:119 - again, double for the crash (also to follow the pattern)
02:02:729 - this double is inconsistent with the rest of the section, should be a single
02:03:826 - what an omission! I suggest adding a LN
02:11:387 (131387|1) - should be on 1/4 snap
02:23:491 (143491|0,143674|2,143857|0,144040|2) - this rhythm is ill-advised; the strong beats are on the 1/2 snap. I might suggest something like this http://puu.sh/uxdis.jpg (remember to mind the hitsounds)
02:34:009 - missing note? also 02:33:826 - should be a double to follow the pattern and for the crash
02:42:424 - missing note again
03:00:534 - 03:01:265 - 03:02:363 - 03:02:729 - these doubles just seem to be randomly placed. you should either use a regular pattern or only use singles until 03:03:095 -
03:14:802 (194802|2,194848|1) - make consistent with HD, MX, and SC pls
the crashes in this diff are inconsistent. some of them are doubles and some of them are singles. I would really appreciate if you tried to make them more consistent ;n;

HD
00:12:973 -00:15:899 - 00:22:119 - these should be double for consistency
00:19:924 - same, but you might also want to move 00:20:107 (20107|3) - to the first lane to avoid a three-note jack
00:21:021 - 00:21:387 - no reason for triples, i think. May be better to stick with doubles.
00:27:241 - add a single note for consistency with the other chords in the section
00:44:070 (44070|2,44253|3) - these should both be doubles for the kicks
01:09:589 - it's a bit weird that there's no notes here. Can I suggest this? http://puu.sh/uxeg8.jpg (make sure to replace hitsounds)
01:11:143 - this should be a double (for the kick), not 01:11:326 -
01:21:021 - 1/4 doesn't quite fit here. I suggest using one LN instead ;n;
01:25:412 - 01:27:607 - 01:28:339 - possibly triples for consistency with earlier triples?
01:29:070 - missing note i believe
01:30:534 - double for snare? also might want to add a note at 01:30:442 -
02:03:735 - I'm not sure if this jack is appropriate for this level. It seems to be the only 1/4 jack in the whole map ;n;
02:06:753 - to 02:08:582 - looks a bit strange to me that the fourth lane is empty for so long
02:23:765 - I think the double should be here for the snare, not at 02:23:674 -
03:00:899 - should be a double to follow the pattern, i think
03:02:637 - 03:08:674 - 03:12:607 - 03:13:979 - might be better to add notes here for the drums

puxtu's MX
no suggestions

Crono's SC
00:02:546 - missing note on guitar (compare with 00:08:399 -)
00:33:095 - missing LN for guitar?
00:36:021 - suggest changing to short LN on third lane for electric guitar
01:10:046 - 01:15:899 - add notes for snare?
01:42:241 - I think this should just be a double 'cus no snare
Awaiting your response 8-)
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awaiting other respond...
puxtu
Don't need to wait for me just to fix some hitsounds, I'm sure you can handle it by yourself.
Crono

Nivrad00 wrote:

BN check

Frst of all, I'm sorry it's been so long and that you haven't been able to find another BN. The truth is I lost a lot of time and motivation for osu ;_; But anyway, I'm here now, so let's do this
General
02:27:973 - The measure lines after this point are incorrect ;n; you should add a red line here to fix it (BPM 164, 4/4)


Crono's SC
00:19:924 (19924|2) - unneeded clap?
00:37:119 - missing claps v
00:38:582 -
00:53:948 -
02:04:192 -
02:45:899 -
03:01:814 (181814|2) - this should definitely be drum, not soft l0l
soft-hitnormal is used very inconsistently in this diff. I won't point out each inconsistency, but pls try to improve it before I recheck I wa completely unaware of these :?

I would appreciate if you checked each difficulty again for hitsound mistakes! it's a bit sloppy right now :(
Diffs
There are a few places where it's hard to hear the snare, but I made judgements based on what would make sense for the drum line as well as what I could hear :P


Crono's SC
00:02:546 - missing note on guitar (compare with 00:08:399 -)
00:33:095 - missing LN for guitar?
00:36:021 - suggest changing to short LN on third lane for electric guitar compared to the rest of the guitar it's too subtle. so no LN
01:10:046 - 01:15:899 - add notes for snare?
01:42:241 - I think this should just be a double 'cus no snare
Awaiting your response 8-)
no answer = fixed! Ty nivrad00
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UPDATED!
Waiting for respond...
Nivrad00
Sorry for the wait. I know you're excited about this ;n;

EZ
The new hitsounds on EZ look good!
00:52:119 (52119|2,53582|1,55046|2,56509|1,57973|2) - this two-lane section still looks out of place
02:51:387 (171387|0) - 03:01:631 (181631|3) - LN lengths are still incosistent (should end on 1/1)
03:14:710 (194710|0,194802|1) - snaps still don't match other diffs

HD
03:03:460 - missing whistle still
03:00:899 - again, should be a double to follow the pattern

Crono's SC
Still needs a red line at 02:27:973 -
02:45:899 - 02:47:729 - missing hitsounds on these beats?

The tags are also inconsistent in Crono's diff. You can also remove the "Japanese" tag from all diffs, because the language of the song will be added to the metadata after it's qualified ;n;
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ok done :)
Nivrad00
After fixing some offsnap issues, looks good ^^

Thanks for your patience through this stupidly long process, Reuse-able :?
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Nivrad00 wrote:

After fixing some offsnap issues, looks good ^^

Thanks for your patience through this stupidly long process, Reuse-able :?
UUUU thankyou >w<
Long process doesn't mean not going to the finish LOL :lol:
puxtu
Finally ^^
You can do it bro
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juankristal be ready XD
alacat
hi hi
This song was made by 梅とら so please add "梅とら umetora" to Tags.


Then, The unicode artist should be "れをる"

Link :
http://www.jvcmusic.co.jp/reol/
http://www.jvcmusic.co.jp/-/Discography/A025153/VIZL-850.html

Please fix these before getting Qualify from next BN. Good luck!
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alacat wrote:

hi hi
This song was made by 梅とら so please add "梅とら umetora" to Tags.


Then, The unicode artist should be "れをる"

Link :
http://www.jvcmusic.co.jp/reol/
http://www.jvcmusic.co.jp/-/Discography/A025153/VIZL-850.html

Please fix these before getting Qualify from next BN. Good luck!
Thank you very much 'w'
DustMoon
hi~REUSE-ABLE sorry only EZdiff mod
1|2|3|4|
EZ
00:24:314 (24314|3) - delete or move to 2
00:28:339 (28339|2) - move to 2
00:35:290 (35290|2) - delete
00:46:082 (46082|2) - change to LN and delete 00:46:265 (46265|3) -
00:38:765 (38765|1,39131|1) - 00:39:863 (39863|2) - delete 00:39:314 - add
01:06:387 (66387|3) - move to 3
01:14:436 (74436|2) - move to 4
01:40:412 (100412|0,100412|1) - move to (3,4) and 01:40:778 (100778|2) - move to 4
02:07:302 (127302|0,127485|1) - ^
02:07:028 (127028|2,127302|0,127485|1) - change pattern to (3,4,2)
02:16:265 (136265|1) - move to 1
02:47:363 (167363|0) - move to 3
03:04:558 (184558|2,184558|0,184924|1,184924|3,185290|2,185290|0,185655|3,185655|1) - 03:07:485 (187485|2,187485|1,187851|0,187851|3,188216|2,188216|1,188582|3,188582|0) - 03:13:338 (193338|0,193338|3,193704|2,193704|1,194070|3,194070|0,194436|1,194436|2) - ?^
03:14:847 (194847|1) - plz delete
Good luck! :)
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DustMoon wrote:

hi~REUSE-ABLE sorry only EZdiff mod Its kay lol
1|2|3|4|
EZ
00:24:314 (24314|3) - delete or move to 2 If you hear closely. the sound of next note is same like this and it also for start the beat
00:28:339 (28339|2) - move to 2 I think this is fine, because the range from previous note is tooooooo far from this note.
00:35:290 (35290|2) - delete This is the sound for start the drum roll. so this is why i'm using 2 notes
00:46:082 (46082|2) - change to LN and delete 00:46:265 (46265|3) - if i change it to LN. i think its not balancing with previous notes. because the previous note also had 1 long voice but using click note.
00:38:765 (38765|1,39131|1) - 00:39:863 (39863|2) - delete 00:39:314 - add I follow the vocal. not the drum
01:06:387 (66387|3) - move to 3 OKAY 'w'
01:14:436 (74436|2) - move to 4 I follow the guitar-repeat sound
01:40:412 (100412|0,100412|1) - move to (3,4) and 01:40:778 (100778|2) - move to 4
02:07:302 (127302|0,127485|1) - ^ I do this with my own style
02:07:028 (127028|2,127302|0,127485|1) - change pattern to (3,4,2)Nice catch!
02:16:265 (136265|1) - move to 1Fixed with my own style
02:47:363 (167363|0) - move to 3 Fixed with my own style
03:04:558 (184558|2,184558|0,184924|1,184924|3,185290|2,185290|0,185655|3,185655|1) - 03:07:485 (187485|2,187485|1,187851|0,187851|3,188216|2,188216|1,188582|3,188582|0) - 03:13:338 (193338|0,193338|3,193704|2,193704|1,194070|3,194070|0,194436|1,194436|2) - ?^ This is for comfort and fun play, let's say this is logic note and just for fun
03:14:847 (194847|1) - plz delete Rejected. this is same like u hit 2 notes so i said this is okay
Good luck! :) Thank youuuu so much ;) ;)
Nivrad00
Changes look good :3
Eldergleam
jancok, lagu reol udah kebalon

ayo mas, gw simpan pertamax nih di scoreboard
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Eldergleam wrote:

jancok, lagu reol udah kebalon

ayo mas, gw simpan pertamax nih di scoreboard
:V Yang mau ngasih hati lagi sebuk :v ntar kalo lebih dari 1 bulan baru gua minta prostatic :u
Eldergleam

REUSE-ABLE wrote:

Eldergleam wrote:

jancok, lagu reol udah kebalon

ayo mas, gw simpan pertamax nih di scoreboard
:V Yang mau ngasih hati lagi sebuk :v ntar kalo lebih dari 1 bulan baru gua minta prostatic :u
sip mhanxxx
notice me kalo udah ada hatinya yak~

<3 for REOL~
alacat

alacat wrote:

The unicode artist should be "れをる"


:cry:
puxtu
Smh tbh fam
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oops clicked the kudos :?
puxtu

REUSE-ABLE wrote:

oops clicked the kudos :?
gblg
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puxtu wrote:

REUSE-ABLE wrote:

oops clicked the kudos :?
gblg
asw
Eldergleam

REUSE-ABLE wrote:

oops clicked the kudos :?
too lol

semangat terus bang
Etsu
rip map? :c
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Etsu wrote:

rip map? :c
Still searching BN ;w;
Nivrad00
rebub as requested 8-)
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Nivrad00 wrote:

rebub as requested 8-)
sekyuuu ;)
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