1. Beginner (1,01 stars, 73 notes)
2. Hard (3,13 stars, 329 notes)
3. Master (6,05 stars, 839 notes)
4. Normal (1,85 stars, 122 notes)

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Swegmec wrote:

Hi, NM from my queue.

I guess I will just do Master, b/c that's the only complete one.

Master
00:12:634 (11) - New combo fixed
00:16:879 (9,11) - I would make these triple stacks (add a note before each one) removed a note before next slider
00:19:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Horrible (sorry). These are just randomly placed notes and the DS isn't even right. Try something more creative. DS fixed but generally seems fine to me
00:20:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Were these meant to increase in DS ? I guess there is some background for acceleration
00:31:172 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You need to work on this section. There are a lot of random notes with no good rhythm, and it looks like you just spammed notes on the screen. now should be better
00:35:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Okay. If you are going to have large jumps, be consistent with them. You go from a full-screen jump to a tiny jump to a full-screen jump. It makes no sense. You don't need distance snap for everything, but be somewhat consistent with your jumps. I'm not mentioning this many more times b/c I think you get it, but go and change these. You may have to fix/remap your whole difficulty. now should be better
00:47:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Consistency is key. The shorter jumps need to have shorter delays; longer jumps have longer delays. I think exactly these jumps are following song's rhytm but some others was changed
01:04:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't quite go with the music. mostly replaced by sliders
--- Okay.---
Now, after this point, the lyrics start coming in. And let me just say, a lot of your timings are REALLY odd. You have 3/4 delays (which is almost completely obsolete), 5/4 delays, and a bunch of weird timing all over the place. If you are a new mapper (which I'm assuming you are), try sticking to 1/2 beats or 1/4 streams. Only experienced mappers can pull this off, and you have not. By no means am I an experienced mapper, I'm just saying that is isn't really a map I would enjoy playing and it would be an EXTREMELY frustrating experience if I could play 6 star maps. I'm still bad at timings need some examples. No more 1/4 single beats though


I'm going to finish this here. You need to work on this a lot. If you need a GD, I may be able to help you on this. next post

Thx

Zing wrote:

I can also help timing if you need that, though I haven't done a mod before.

Zing wrote:

So, are you just doing the first part of the song, or is the whole thing going to be mapped by you at some point?

Zing wrote:

I'm working on a map for Orion right now!