It was requested of me to get the video here for ya, but I was linked the wrong video, it seems. Won't fit for the full version of the song. >_>

Also, if you can, please try to reduce the quality on the pause-overlay and the fail-background. They're huge, file-size-wise. ;_;
BG needs to be 4:3, not 3:2. Try to aim for a 1024x768 or 800x600 image.
The fail background text looks odd when it's not centered. Think you can do that?
On the combo burst, can you horizontally flip it so she's facing outward when she pops out? Osu aligns them so it's right-facing from the left side.

But yeah, try to reduce the size of your skin elements so you can fit a video in - though honestly a 4 minute video may not be the best idea for the file size considering the set's current size already.

sry for late mod but i have not much time the last days ^^''

modding rules:

suggestions
something you should fix

[General]

i would suggest a stack leniency of 3 ticks is enough
can't see a background,but there is on in the folder,so pls add it to the map (but it can happen that i can't see it,then sry for this)
delete osb.file

[Rational]

01:44:509 (1) - is this slider easy enough for easy diff?
01:46:509 (1) - ^
03:36:509 (1) - ^
03:38:509 (1) - ^

[Logic]

01:39:509 (5,6,7,8) - make it more symmetrical
01:55:509 (5,6,7,8) - ^
03:31:509 (5,6,7,8) - ^
03:47:509 (5,6,7,8) - ^

[No Logic]

02:06:009 (x) - add note
03:57:259 (x) - ^
03:58:009 (x) - ^

[Luka's Logic]

00:32:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - that would be hard to aim for some players, can you rearrange them?
00:38:384 (1 to 12) - ^
01:02:384 (1 to 9) - ^
01:05:759 (8) - why this slider goes down and destroy the pattern?
01:07:759 (8) - ^
01:09:759 (8) - ^
01:11:759 (8) - ^
01:12:509 to 01:14:259 - this pattern sounds wrong
02:17:759 (8) - why this slider goes up and destroy the pattern?
02:19:759 (8) - ^
02:21:759 (8) - ^
02:23:759 (8) - ^
02:38:259 (1 to 10) - that would be hard to aim for some players, can you rearrange them?
02:56:634 to 02:59:634 - very hard to read and very hard to play, pls rearrange them
04:14:259 (1 to 7) - that would be hard to aim for some players, can you rearrange them?


nice work for your first map
star~

Garven wrote:

It was requested of me to get the video here for ya, but I was linked the wrong video, it seems. Won't fit for the full version of the song. >_>

Also, if you can, please try to reduce the quality on the pause-overlay and the fail-background. They're huge, file-size-wise. ;_;
BG needs to be 4:3, not 3:2. Try to aim for a 1024x768 or 800x600 image.
The fail background text looks odd when it's not centered. Think you can do that?
On the combo burst, can you horizontally flip it so she's facing outward when she pops out? Osu aligns them so it's right-facing from the left side.

But yeah, try to reduce the size of your skin elements so you can fit a video in - though honestly a 4 minute video may not be the best idea for the file size considering the set's current size already.

Yeah, I can do almost everything, but i don't wanna to insert a video ¡because this song don't have a video! or I think so o.o... Also, I think the text in fail background is ok, if I center it the fail options (Retry, back to menu) will cover it o.o, but great graphic mod, thanks!

Jagang wrote:

sry for late mod but i have not much time the last days ^^''

modding rules:

suggestions
something you should fix

[General]

i would suggest a stack leniency of 3 ticks is enough
can't see a background,but there is on in the folder,so pls add it to the map (but it can happen that i can't see it,then sry for this)
delete osb.file

[Rational]

01:44:509 (1) - is this slider easy enough for easy diff?
01:46:509 (1) - ^
03:36:509 (1) - ^
03:38:509 (1) - ^

[Logic]

01:39:509 (5,6,7,8) - make it more symmetrical
01:55:509 (5,6,7,8) - ^
03:31:509 (5,6,7,8) - ^
03:47:509 (5,6,7,8) - ^

[No Logic]

02:06:009 (x) - add note
03:57:259 (x) - ^
03:58:009 (x) - ^

[Luka's Logic]

00:32:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - that would be hard to aim for some players, can you rearrange them?
00:38:384 (1 to 12) - ^
01:02:384 (1 to 9) - ^
01:05:759 (8) - why this slider goes down and destroy the pattern?
01:07:759 (8) - ^
01:09:759 (8) - ^
01:11:759 (8) - ^
01:12:509 to 01:14:259 - this pattern sounds wrong
02:17:759 (8) - why this slider goes up and destroy the pattern?
02:19:759 (8) - ^
02:21:759 (8) - ^
02:23:759 (8) - ^
02:38:259 (1 to 10) - that would be hard to aim for some players, can you rearrange them?
02:56:634 to 02:59:634 - very hard to read and very hard to play, pls rearrange them
04:14:259 (1 to 7) - that would be hard to aim for some players, can you rearrange them?


nice work for your first map
star~

Ready! all diffs mod

Skin = good
Rational
00:39:509 (3) Try to not have this slider overlap the previous note (2)
Luka's Logic
Maximum score is higher than 20,000,000, which can be a major obstacle in ranking.

I still think this deserves a Star, though, so run with it and do what you can.

Sorry for the late mod!

[Skin]
You need a cursor-trail, your cursor doesn't look good with some cursor trails.

[Rational]
03:18:509 (3) - This goes into the HP bar and doesn't look too nice in gameplay because of that.

[Logic]
02:00:509 (1,1) - Two spinners in a row? Doesn't really work IMO and could tire out people.

[No Logic]
02:16:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern was already used and is repetitive by now. I suggest you try to think of a different pattern for this section.

[Luka's Logic]
Nearly 22,000,000 max score!?!?! Well, I don't agree with it, but I don't see a way you can fix it either. I'll let it be, but don't expect my to bubble this map as I won't for the score reason.

But I will still shoot a star the maps are still technically rankable.

SapphireGhost wrote:

Skin = good
Rational
00:39:509 (3) Try to not have this slider overlap the previous note (2)
Luka's Logic
Maximum score is higher than 20,000,000, which can be a major obstacle in ranking.

I still think this deserves a Star, though, so run with it and do what you can.

Mod complied . Also I'm doing my best to change luka's logic D:

rust45 wrote:

Sorry for the late mod!

[Skin]
You need a cursor-trail, your cursor doesn't look good with some cursor trails.

[Rational]
03:18:509 (3) - This goes into the HP bar and doesn't look too nice in gameplay because of that.

[Logic]
02:00:509 (1,1) - Two spinners in a row? Doesn't really work IMO and could tire out people.

[No Logic]
02:16:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern was already used and is repetitive by now. I suggest you try to think of a different pattern for this section.

[Luka's Logic]
Nearly 22,000,000 max score!?!?! Well, I don't agree with it, but I don't see a way you can fix it either. I'll let it be, but don't expect my to bubble this map as I won't for the score reason.

But I will still shoot a star the maps are still technically rankable.

good mod! thank you n.n, cursor-trail added, if you don't like it, I can delete the cursor D:, Map modded in Rational, logic and no logic. Now I'm doing my best to change luka's logic D:

Thanks for the mods!

Double post FFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

After a loooong vacation, I was finally able to reorder Luka's logic, now the max score is 15.059.026 :B, so now you can keep modding :B

General:
- Hello!

Rational:
0:26:509 - Mover this slider to the right or turn it 90o, reverse selection and put in distance snap. It does not look esthetic where it is now,..
1:01:009 - Like This?
1:36:509 - Add a note, remove New Combo of note after...
2:52:509 - Spin this
2:56:509 - No break please
3:28:509 - Add a note, remove NC of note after...
3:32:509 - ^
3:44:509 - ^
4:08:509 - Make ending more interesting?

Logic:
0:25:259 - Add a note here ALWAYS during this sequence
0:26:634 - ^
0:27:009 - Make it a slider going till... 0:27:259 ALWAYS during this sequence
0:27:509 - Make this a slider till red tick, then repeat once, remove what stand on your way ALWAYS during this sequence
1:27:259 - Add a note
1:39:509 - Add a note, remove New Combo of note after...
2:56:509 - No break please
3:28:509 - Add a note, remove NC of note after...
3:42:009 - Move to 3:42:509, remove one repeat. Place something before that slider...

Not hard enough,... Try getting rid of the single notes sequences (e.g 1:57:009), there is definitely more to it!

No Logic:
1:20:259 - Add a note, make this the start of the fallowing combo
1:24:259 - ^
1:28:259 - ^
1:50:009 - Check what I wrote in Logic for this point
2:06:259 - New Combo
3:16:259 - Add a note, make this the start of the fallowing combo
2:28:509 - Add a note, remove NC of note after...
3:44:509 - Add a note, make this the start of the fallowing combo
3:49:009 - No single circles please
3:58:259 - New Combo

Luka's Logic:
0:28:509 - 1/4 beat later
1:12:509 - Very lazy of you...
2:06:259 - New Combo
3:42:509 - ^
3:59:259 - ^

My queue saids no map exceeds 15 minutes (yours is 16 minutes)

Since you've breaked rule, sorry that I didn't moded your map carfully.

This is kinda Star-giving modding,


[General]

Nothing really wrong, and map doesn't look that bad, but I'm feeling a bit boring tho.. well.

[No Logic]

00:34:509 (1) and (4) can stack more properly or something else.

[Luka's Logic]

I'm assuming this as insane difficulty, and if so, this looks too easy for it
I'll say SV + 0.3 or at least Approach Late

I see someone asked you to reduce SV, but I totally disagree with that.

this is Insane difficulty.. 1.6 SV with 120 BPM, and x0.8 distance snap makes it too boring to play.


do some of these :

1. SV + 0.3
2. AR + 1
3. distance snap (press ALT and you'll see it) x0.8 => x1.1

and tbh this difficulty looks kinda mess in center of the map (like 02:38;259 ~ 02:42:384. yeah, doesnt really matter, since I'm not a good modder
maybe this can be fixed too by increasing SV or distance snap.



well very good as a first map!

Hushu wrote:

General:
- Hello!

Rational:
0:26:509 - Mover this slider to the right or turn it 90o, reverse selection and put in distance snap. It does not look esthetic where it is now. Did
1:01:009 - Like This? Did
1:36:509 - Add a note, remove New Combo of note after... In easy? No
2:52:509 - Spin this Ok
2:56:509 - No break please Let the players to rest :B
3:28:509 - Add a note, remove NC of note after... In easy? No
3:32:509 - ^ In easy? No
3:44:509 - ^ In easy? No
4:08:509 - Make ending more interesting? OK

Logic:
0:25:259 - Add a note here ALWAYS during this sequence No
0:26:634 - ^ No
0:27:009 - Make it a slider going till... 0:27:259 ALWAYS during this sequence No
0:27:509 - Make this a slider till red tick, then repeat once, remove what stand on your way ALWAYS during this sequence No
1:27:259 - Add a note No
1:39:509 - Add a note, remove New Combo of note after... OK
2:56:509 - No break please Yes, Break :B
3:28:509 - Add a note, remove NC of note after... OK
3:42:009 - Move to 3:42:509, remove one repeat. Place something before that slider... OK

Not hard enough...Why!? Try getting rid of the single notes sequences (e.g 1:57:009), there is definitely more to it!

No Logic:
1:20:259 - Add a note, make this the start of the fallowing combo OK
1:24:259 - ^ No
1:28:259 - ^ No
1:50:009 - Check what I wrote in Logic for this point OK
2:06:259 - New Combo OK
3:16:259 - Add a note, make this the start of the fallowing combo OK
2:28:509 - Add a note, remove NC of note after... OK
3:44:509 - Add a note, make this the start of the fallowing combo OK
3:49:009 - No single circles please OK
3:58:259 - New Combo OK

Luka's Logic:
0:28:509 - 1/4 beat later No
1:12:509 - Very lazy of you... Wait a minute, if I put more circles, the song will have a final score over 20,000,000, so isn't my fault
2:06:259 - New Combo OK
3:42:509 - ^ OK
3:59:259 - ^ OK

Now i'm working with haha5957 mod

Did it :B

[No Logic]
01:58:009 (3) - move this to 01:57:884 and then add circle at 01:58:259 to follow vocal better?
02:55:134 (8) - finish this at 02:55:509 or replace it with circles like this http://puu.sh/XR7 ?

[Luka's Logic]
00:59:384 (4) - move this to 00:59:259 so it could follow vocals better?

Compared to other posts, I feel like I did nothing

senaya wrote:

[No Logic]
01:58:009 (3) - move this to 01:57:884 and then add circle at 01:58:259 to follow vocal better?
02:55:134 (8) - finish this at 02:55:509 or replace it with circles like this http://puu.sh/XR7 ?

[Luka's Logic]
00:59:384 (4) - move this to 00:59:259 so it could follow vocals better?

Compared to other posts, I feel like I did nothing

Fixed, and don't worry, any mod help to improve my map

[general]
me gusta esta piel, pero es necesario que convertir sus .pngs a .jpg con ~85-95% calidad. Ahora "fail-background.png" y "nologic.png" tienen 1.25 MB, y su osz > 10 MB sin video.

General Guidelines wrote:

Try to keep osz files under 10mb, or 20mb if you include video (please remove the audio track from video files to save space. It is recommended for the video's dimensions to not exceed 800x600.)

Pienso que no necesite "hitcircleselect.png".

[rational/easy]
me diverti... en tiempo doble

[logic/normal]
muy bien

[no logic/hard]
por que no usaste "grid snap"? hay muchos circulos que lo necesiten. Por ejemplo, 04:15:009 (3,4)

[luka's logic/insane]
00:28:634 (1,2,3,4) - puedes usar esto: http://puu.sh/10d4 en vez de que tienes ahora.
00:31:009 (4,5,6,7) - y esto: http://puu.sh/10d7
01:04:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no me gusto patrones que esto, pero mira 00:28:634

1:12:509 - Very lazy of you... Wait a minute, if I put more circles, the song will have a final score over 20,000,000, so isn't my fault

1:12:509 - algo como esto? http://puu.sh/10dj
01:18:634 (2,5,8,11) - puedes usar silbatos y cymbales solo en estos circulos?
01:21:009 (3) - move a 01:20:884 -
01:22:009 (3) - ^, y mas
01:23:259 (1,2) - combina estos
02:57:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/10dy
03:57:259 (4) - http://puu.sh/10dz

lo siento si estoy confundiendo, hace mucho tiempo que hablaba espanol. Es posible que tu comprendes ingles mas de yo comprendo espanol. Quiero ir a una paiz que hablan espanol para comprender mejor, pero es dificil.

haha5957 wrote:

My queue saids no map exceeds 15 minutes (yours is 16 minutes)

3:15*4=13:00...

ziin wrote:

[general]
me gusta esta piel, pero es necesario que convertir sus .pngs a .jpg con ~85-95% calidad. Ahora "fail-background.png" y "nologic.png" tienen 1.25 MB, y su osz > 10 MB sin video. Problema arrglado, le quité ciertas cosas a mi skin que no me gustaban

General Guidelines wrote:

Try to keep osz files under 10mb, or 20mb if you include video (please remove the audio track from video files to save space. It is recommended for the video's dimensions to not exceed 800x600.)

Pienso que no necesite "hitcircleselect.png".

[rational/easy]
me diverti... en tiempo doble Sarcasmo? o.o

[logic/normal]
muy bien

[no logic/hard]
por que no usaste "grid snap"? hay muchos circulos que lo necesiten. Por ejemplo, 04:15:009 (3,4) Si usé D:, lo usé en todas las diffs

[luka's logic/insane]
00:28:634 (1,2,3,4) - puedes usar esto: http://puu.sh/10d4 en vez de que tienes ahora. Hecho
00:31:009 (4,5,6,7) - y esto: http://puu.sh/10d7 Hecho
01:04:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no me gusto patrones que esto, pero mira 00:28:634 Hecho

1:12:509 - Very lazy of you... Wait a minute, if I put more circles, the song will have a final score over 20,000,000, so isn't my fault

1:12:509 - algo como esto? http://puu.sh/10dj Hecho
01:18:634 (2,5,8,11) - puedes usar silbatos y cymbales solo en estos circulos? Hecho?
01:21:009 (3) - move a 01:20:884 - No lo haré , estoy siguiendo el ritmo aquí, no la voz
01:22:009 (3) - ^, y mas No lo haré , estoy siguiendo el ritmo aquí, no la voz
01:23:259 (1,2) - combina estos No lo haré , estoy siguiendo el ritmo aquí, no la voz
02:57:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/10dy Hecho
03:57:259 (4) - http://puu.sh/10dz Hecho

lo siento si estoy confundiendo, hace mucho tiempo que hablaba espanol. Es posible que tu comprendes ingles mas de yo comprendo espanol. Quiero ir a una paiz que hablan espanol para comprender mejor, pero es dificil.

haha5957 wrote:

My queue saids no map exceeds 15 minutes (yours is 16 minutes)

3:15*4=13:00...

Me gustó tu mod, gracias, y tu español es muy bueno

Tachanne wrote:

I like dealing with sound so I hope this helps !

[ Luka's Logic ]

00:38:509 (2,3) - These should be claps. No finishes.
00:39:009 (5) - Clap.
00:39:384 (8) - Clap.
00:39:634 (9) - No clap.
00:39:134 (6) - Finish.
00:39:259 (7) - No finish.

00:50:009 (7) - No clap here. Keep the finish though.
00:50:509 (1) - No clap.
00:50:759 (2) - Use whistle here.
00:54:509 (2,3) - 2, whistle. 3, clap.
00:59:759 (5,6) - 5, whistle and clap. 6, finish only.
01:02:509 (2) - Clap.
01:03:009 (5,6,7) - No finishes here.
01:03:759 (10) - Whistle and clap.

01:37:009 (2) - No clap here.
01:41:009 (2,3) - No claps for these.
02:08:009 (4) - No clap.
02:38:259 (1,3,5) - 1, no clap. 3 and 5, clap but no finish.
02:39:759 (11) - Clap here.
02:45:759 (7) - Whistle and clap.
02:46:009 (8) - No clap, just finish.
02:55:384 (3) - Finish.

03:07:634 (6) - No clap on this.
03:07:759 (6) - Clap here.
03:07:884 (6) - Clap and whistle.

03:29:259 (3) - No clap.

Try not to use the same patterns over and over again.
Especially for Taiko players. Sound is essential for them since they can only use 5 different sounds !
Also, don't use Finishes too too much. It's good to use them but
they get kind of loud. Too loud even.

Nice choice of song, smexy sliders and good spacing !

Good luck.

Really thanks, although i don't like taiko and my maps aren't for taiko, I needed help ith sound n.n

Nice map & song!
These are just suggestions on making your map better, in my opinion.

[Rational]
[01:40:009] Maybe make it into a 1/2 slider?
[01:56:009] ^
[01:56:759] until [02:00:259] I think this sounds too plain, maybe do something with sliders so it follows the vocals and isn't too difficult?
[02:04:259] until [02:06:259] ^
[02:16:509] Going from side to side twice... maybe make it more interesting by changing it to upwards the second time?
[03:32:009] Maybe make it into a 1/2 slider?
[03:48:009] ^
[03:48:759] until [03:52:259] I think this sounds too plain, maybe do something with sliders so it follows the vocals and isn't too difficult?
[03:56:259] until [03:58:259] ^

[Logic]
[00:29:259] Maybe add a circle?
[00:33:259] ^
[00:49:259] ^
[00:53:259] ^
[00:57:259] ^
[01:42:759] Add a 1/2 slider, then remove the note where it ends.
[01:43:259] Add a circle.
[01:56:759] until [02:00:259] I think this sounds too plain, maybe do something with sliders so it follows the vocals?
[02:04:259] until [02:06:259] ^
[02:25:259] Maybe add a circle?
[02:29:259] ^
[02:33:259] ^
[02:52:509] Maybe make sliders 3,4 & 5 start the 1/4 note after the other one ends? It would sound a lot better.
[03:34:759] Add a 1/2 slider, then remove the note where it ends.
[03:35:259] Add a circle.
[03:41:759] It would sound better as a 1/2 slider.
[03:48:759] until [03:52:259] I think this sounds too plain, maybe do something with sliders so it follows the vocals?
[03:56:259] until [03:58:259] ^
[04:09:509] Maybe change it to a 1/2 slider?
[04:11:509] ^
[04:13:509] ^

[No Logic]
[00:28:884] Maybe add a circle?
[00:56:759] Maybe change it to two 1/4 sliders?
[00:57:259] Maybe change it to a 1/4 slider?
[00:58:759] Maybe change it to two 1/4 sliders?
[00:59:259] Maybe change it to a 1/4 slider?
[01:00:759] ^
[01:01:009] Maybe change it to two 1/4 sliders?
[01:57:009] Instead of putting a circle here, put one on the 1/2 beat before and after.
[01:59:009] Instead of putting a circle here, put a 1/4 slider 1/2 beat before and a circle 1/2 after.
[01:59:759] 10 would sound better as a 1/4 slider and removed 11.
[02:04:259] Maybe instead put a 1/2 beat slider with a return arrow?
[02:53:384] Make this slider end 1/4 later and start the next one on the next 1/4 note.
[03:12:259] Maybe add a circle?
[03:16:259] ^
[03:22:259] ^
[03:24:259] ^
[03:42:009] ^
[03:48:759] ^
[03:50:259] ^
[03:50:759] ^
[03:51:579]10 would sound better as a 1/4 slider and removed 11.
[03:54:259] Maybe add a circle?
[03:56:259] Maybe instead put a 1/2 beat slider with a return arrow?
[04:14:259] Maybe add a 1/4 slider?
[04:14:509] Maybe turn 1 & 2 into 1/4 sliders?

[Luka's Logic]
[01:13:509] Move the circle 1/4 note later.
[01:16:509] until [01:18:259] Maybe make this part more interesting then just placing notes on every 1/2 beats?
[02:04:259] Maybe add a circle?
[02:35:384] Move the slider 1/4 note earlier.
[03:54:259] Maybe add a circle?
Some places would sound better with more notes, but I understand that you need to keep your score low so it stays rankable.
So I only asked you to add things where it bothered me the most for this map.

And with that, that's all I have to say
Star~

poisonedblood wrote:

Nice map & song!
These are just suggestions on making your map better, in my opinion.

[Rational]
[01:40:009] Maybe make it into a 1/2 slider?
[01:56:009] ^
[01:56:759] until [02:00:259] I think this sounds too plain, maybe do something with sliders so it follows the vocals and isn't too difficult?
[02:04:259] until [02:06:259] ^
[02:16:509] Going from side to side twice... maybe make it more interesting by changing it to upwards the second time?
[03:32:009] Maybe make it into a 1/2 slider?
[03:48:009] ^
[03:48:759] until [03:52:259] I think this sounds too plain, maybe do something with sliders so it follows the vocals and isn't too difficult?
[03:56:259] until [03:58:259] ^

[Logic]
[00:29:259] Maybe add a circle?
[00:33:259] ^
[00:49:259] ^
[00:53:259] ^
[00:57:259] ^
[01:42:759] Add a 1/2 slider, then remove the note where it ends.
[01:43:259] Add a circle.
[01:56:759] until [02:00:259] I think this sounds too plain, maybe do something with sliders so it follows the vocals?
[02:04:259] until [02:06:259] ^
[02:25:259] Maybe add a circle?
[02:29:259] ^
[02:33:259] ^
[02:52:509] Maybe make sliders 3,4 & 5 start the 1/4 note after the other one ends? It would sound a lot better.
[03:34:759] Add a 1/2 slider, then remove the note where it ends.
[03:35:259] Add a circle.
[03:41:759] It would sound better as a 1/2 slider.
[03:48:759] until [03:52:259] I think this sounds too plain, maybe do something with sliders so it follows the vocals?
[03:56:259] until [03:58:259] ^
[04:09:509] Maybe change it to a 1/2 slider?
[04:11:509] ^
[04:13:509] ^

[No Logic]
[00:28:884] Maybe add a circle?
[00:56:759] Maybe change it to two 1/4 sliders?
[00:57:259] Maybe change it to a 1/4 slider?
[00:58:759] Maybe change it to two 1/4 sliders?
[00:59:259] Maybe change it to a 1/4 slider?
[01:00:759] ^
[01:01:009] Maybe change it to two 1/4 sliders?
[01:57:009] Instead of putting a circle here, put one on the 1/2 beat before and after.
[01:59:009] Instead of putting a circle here, put a 1/4 slider 1/2 beat before and a circle 1/2 after.
[01:59:759] 10 would sound better as a 1/4 slider and removed 11.
[02:04:259] Maybe instead put a 1/2 beat slider with a return arrow?
[02:53:384] Make this slider end 1/4 later and start the next one on the next 1/4 note.
[03:12:259] Maybe add a circle?
[03:16:259] ^
[03:22:259] ^
[03:24:259] ^
[03:42:009] ^
[03:48:759] ^
[03:50:259] ^
[03:50:759] ^
[03:51:579]10 would sound better as a 1/4 slider and removed 11.
[03:54:259] Maybe add a circle?
[03:56:259] Maybe instead put a 1/2 beat slider with a return arrow?
[04:14:259] Maybe add a 1/4 slider?
[04:14:509] Maybe turn 1 & 2 into 1/4 sliders?

[Luka's Logic]
[01:13:509] Move the circle 1/4 note later.
[01:16:509] until [01:18:259] Maybe make this part more interesting then just placing notes on every 1/2 beats?
[02:04:259] Maybe add a circle?
[02:35:384] Move the slider 1/4 note earlier.
[03:54:259] Maybe add a circle?
Some places would sound better with more notes, but I understand that you need to keep your score low so it stays rankable.
So I only asked you to add things where it bothered me the most for this map.

And with that, that's all I have to say
Star~

Almost all changed xD, there are some stuffs that I dind't want to change, but thanks for the great mod!

Keep modding my map please~!

Glad to hear I have been of help
Most of this is just my personal opinion so feel free to ignore what displeases you in my mod.

[Rational]
[02:20:509] until [02:23:509] I feel like this part here is a bit too different from the rest when it goes up. Maybe just repeat the pattern?

[Logic]
[01:57:009] This slider should be 1/2 beat earlier and add a circle where it originally ended.
[01:58:009] Maybe make this slider 1/4 earlier and longer?
[01:58:759] Maybe add a circle?
[01:59:759] Either add a circle or make a 1/2 slider and delete the 5 1/2 beat later.
[02:53:384] Maybe make the slider (3) 1/2 longer, the slider (4) & (5) 1/4 beat earlier?
[03:49:009] This slider should be 1/2 earlier and add a circle where it originally ended
[03:50:009] Maybe make this 1/4 earlier and longer?
[03:50:759] Maybe add a circle?
[03:51:759] Either add a circle or make a 1/2 slider and delete the 5 1/2 beat later.

[No Logic]
[00:29:384] Maybe add a circle?
[00:59:259] Maybe make it a 1/4 slider?
[01:01:509] Move it 1/4 note later?
[01:03:259] Maybe change it to a 1/4 slider, delete 6 and add a 1/4 slider 1/4 note after where 6 was.
[01:24:259] Maybe add a circle?
[01:28:259] ^ or add a 1/2 slider
[01:30:259] Maybe add a 1/4 slider? Or add a circle or maybe even a 1/2 slider to match the previous suggestion.
[01:32:259] Maybe add a circle?
[02:02:259] ^
[02:02:509] The spinner sounds better if it ended 1/2 beat later.
[02:52:509] End the 5 slider 1/4 note earlier,
[02:53:509] start the 6 slider 1/4 note earlier and make it 1/4 note longer.
[03:16:259] Maybe add a circle?
[03:22:259] ^
[03:24:259] ^
[03:48:759] ^ This was in the last mod yet it still bothers me.
[03:48:759] until [03:52:009] Could you make this follow more the lyrics like in other parts of the map instead of just 1/2 beat notes?
[03:49:759] Maybe turn 4 & 5 into a 1/2 note slider?
[03:51:759] Maybe turn 12 & 13 into a 1/2 note slider?
[03:54:009] Maybe stack together these 2 notes?
[03:56:259] Either add a circle or add a 1/2 note slider.

[Luka's Logic]
[00:32:509] Maybe turn 1, 2 & 3 into 1/4 sliders?
[00:36:509] Maybe turn 1 & 2 into 1/4 sliders?
[00:38:884] Maybe add a circle?
[00:39:759] Maybe turn 10 & 11 into a slider?
[00:50:759] Maybe turn 2 & 3 into a slider?
[00:54:884] Maybe add a circle?
[00:57:634] Maybe make a 1/4 slider that starts here instead?
[00:58:759] Maybe make it a 1/4 slider?
[01:00:509] Maybe make 1 & 2 into 1/4 sliders?
[01:02:884] Maybe add a circle?
[01:14:509] until [01:18:384] Maybe just review the hitsounds because something doesn't seem to sound right to my ears here.
I'm not a fan of those 4 sliders in the beginning.. but I really like the change in this section by the way
[01:21:009] Maybe put it 1/4 beat earlier?
[01:22:009] ^
[01:22:259] Maybe make this a 1/4 slider?
[01:23:259] Maybe make this a 1/2 slider with a 1/4 slider 1/2 beat later. Delete the 6 if you do this.
[01:25:009] Maybe put it 1/4 beat earlier?
[01:26:009] ^
[01:27:259] Maybe put the 1/2 slider here and then add a circle 1/2 beat later.
[01:28:259] Maybe add a circle? or start a 1/2 slider here and add a circle 1/2 beat later.
[01:31:259] Maybe turn it into a 1/2 slider, but it's ok if it stays this way too.
[01:44:509] Either turn 1 to 3 into a 1/4 slider with reverse arrows or add a circle on [01:44:634] and [01:44:884]
[01:50:009] until [01:52:259] sounds plain, maybe add hitsounds?
[02:26:509] Either turn 1 to 3 into a 1/4 slider with reverse arrows or add a circle on [02:26:634] and [02:26:884]
[02:28:509] This circle should be 1/4 note later.
[02:30:509] Maybe turn this into a 1/4 slider?
[02:32:509] This should be 1/4 note later.
[02:35:384] Maybe extend 5 for 1/2 beat? or connect 6 & 7 into a slider?
[02:37:384] Maybe connect 5 and 6 with a slider?
[02:38:884] Maybe add a circle?
[02:42:643] Maybe turn 1 & 2 into 1/4 sliders?
[02:44:634] Maybe add a circle?
[02:45:759] Maybe connect 7 & 8 into a slider?
[02:47:634] Maybe instead of the 5 & 6 add 2 consecutive 1/4 slider here?
[02:56:634] Delete 1 and add a 1/4 slider with reverse arrows that end 1/4 note after circle 4.
[03:13:009] Maybe move it 1/4 beat earlier?
[03:14:009] ^
[03:15:509] Instead if you started the slider and put a circle 1/4 beat later, it would sound better.
[03:17:009] Maybe move it 1/4 beat earlier?
[03:18:009] ^
[03:19:259] If the 1/2 slider started here and you put a circle 1/2 beat later, it would sound better.
[03:21:509] Maybe make it 1/4 beat earlier?
[03:36:509] Either turn 1 to 3 into a 1/4 slider with reverse arrows or add a circle on [03:36:634] and [03:36:884]
[03:49:509] Maybe turn 3 or 4 into a 3/4 slider? I think they both sound good but I can't tell which one sounds best.
[03:54:009] Maybe stack together these 2 notes?
[04:08:509] Maybe turn both 1 & 2 into 1/4 sliders?
[04:09:759] Maybe connect 5 & 6 into a slider?
[04:10:509] Maybe turn both 1 & 2 into 1/4 sliders?
[04:11:759] Maybe turn 5 & 6 into a slider?

I hope that in Luka's Logic it doesn't add too much to the score...
I'm very happy of the changes in Luka's Logic for my simple comment on how it could use more notes.

I forgot to mention that in my opinion the part [01:16:509] to [01:20:009] is very hard (and that's a very good thing ),
but at [02:40:509] to [03:04:009] is difficult but could be more challenging. It feels weird that the first solo like part of the song is harder the the second.
I'm not asking to change the first one but to make the other one more difficult if possible.

Star~

WOW! thanks! a really great mod, but I don't change all of this, maybe all guide for the name of the diff, really i want a easy, normal, hard and insane, i don't want a normal, hard, and 2 insane, so I changed the name of diffs... But really your mod is very great!

KiriNoMorii wrote:

Star~

Gracias!

star~

Note: Take '?' as suggestions

[Overall]
The dimensions of 'spinner-background.jpg' should better be 1024x768.
Try more variations, try to use more jumps and interesting patterns since I found that the whole mapset includes of distance-snapped-notes only ;w;
Also, I saw MANY repeating patterns... D:
Just a suggestion: End all the difficulties at 04:00:509? (You can ignore this coz it's up to you)

[Easy]
00:33:509 (2) - Avoid overlapping with the previous slider, maybe put it somewhere like x:112 y:240
00:39:509 (3) - x:96 y:72
01:20:509 (1) - Finish?
01:24:509 (1) - Finish? Avoid overlapping with the previous slider
01:28:509 (4) - Avoid overlapping with the previous slider
01:32:509 (1) - Finish?
01:56:009 (5) - Clap? (Slider Head)
01:59:009 (4) - New Combo?
02:02:509 (1) - Snap this PRECISELY to the head of the previous slider
02:20:509 (5) - New Combo?
02:52:009 (2) - Put this on the left of (1)?
03:12:509 (1) - x:288 y:240
03:24:509 (1) - Finish?
03:51:009 (4) - New Combo?
03:54:509 (1) - Snap this PRECISELY to the head of the previous slider

[Normal]
Approach Rate: 4?
01:29:509 (1,2,3) - Too close to the previous combo
01:36:509 (1) - Too close to a spinner
02:04:509 (1) - ^
03:16:509 (1,2,3,4) - Snap all the ends of the sliders PRECISELY to ONE POINT
03:28:509 (1) - Too close to a spinner
03:56:509 (1) - ^

[Hard]
01:08:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try NOT to repeat the pattern D:
01:48:509 (1,2,3) - Make this parallel to the previous 4 notes?
02:02:009 (1) - Remove Whistle and Clap

[Insane]
01:42:884 (5) - Change to 2 notes instead?
01:55:509 (1) - New Combo
03:02:634 (1) - ^
03:34:884 (5) - Change to 2 notes instead?

Star~

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Note: Take '?' as suggestions

[Overall]
The dimensions of 'spinner-background.jpg' should better be 1024x768. OK, but I don't like it ;_;
Try more variations, try to use more jumps and interesting patterns since I found that the whole mapset includes of distance-snapped-notes only ;w; uhhhhh~
Also, I saw MANY repeating patterns... D: uhhhhh~
Just a suggestion: End all the difficulties at 04:00:509? (You can ignore this coz it's up to you) Great Idea

[Easy]
00:33:509 (2) - Avoid overlapping with the previous slider, maybe put it somewhere like x:112 y:240
00:39:509 (3) - x:96 y:72
01:20:509 (1) - Finish?
01:24:509 (1) - Finish? Avoid overlapping with the previous slider
01:28:509 (4) - Avoid overlapping with the previous slider
01:32:509 (1) - Finish?
01:56:009 (5) - Clap? (Slider Head)
01:59:009 (4) - New Combo?
02:02:509 (1) - Snap this PRECISELY to the head of the previous slider
02:20:509 (5) - New Combo?
02:52:009 (2) - Put this on the left of (1)?
03:12:509 (1) - x:288 y:240
03:24:509 (1) - Finish?
03:51:009 (4) - New Combo?
03:54:509 (1) - Snap this PRECISELY to the head of the previous slider

All Easy Modded

[Normal]
Approach Rate: 4?
01:29:509 (1,2,3) - Too close to the previous combo
01:36:509 (1) - Too close to a spinner
02:04:509 (1) - ^
03:16:509 (1,2,3,4) - Snap all the ends of the sliders PRECISELY to ONE POINT I can't ;_;
03:28:509 (1) - Too close to a spinner
03:56:509 (1) - ^

Normal modded

[Hard]
01:08:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try NOT to repeat the pattern D:
01:48:509 (1,2,3) - Make this parallel to the previous 4 notes?
02:02:009 (1) - Remove Whistle and Clap

All Hard Modded

[Insane]
01:42:884 (5) - Change to 2 notes instead?
01:55:509 (1) - New Combo
03:02:634 (1) - ^
03:34:884 (5) - Change to 2 notes instead?

All Insane Modded

Star~

Thanks for the mod~!

[overall]:

1. Add Tags jimmy sum p
2. Source:Vocaloid
3. Combo color 4 resembles combo color 3 please change it
4. KIAI Time Green Line All snap
5. Delete osb

[Insane]:

1. Volume change 80→60 100→80
2. 00:39:759 (10) - Delete and Slider start 00:39:759 end 00:40:009
3. 01:06:009 (9) - Delete note
4. 02:04:634 - Suggestion
   
5. 02:56:009 - add note

[Hard]:

1. 03:24:509 (1) - Finish

[Normal]:

1. Suggestion 00:39:509 - Slider start 00:39:759 - Repeat1time 00:40:009 - end
2. 01:32:509 (1) - Finish
3. 02:26:009 (4,1) - Spacing
4. 02:28:509 (1,2) - ^
5. 03:24:509 (1) - Finish
6. 03:41:759 - Slider start 03:42:009 - end I think that this rhythm is good
7. 03:52:259 (5) - move 03:52:009 -

[Easy]:
Fine

Fight~

S o r d a wrote:

[overall]:

1. Add Tags jimmy sum p
2. Source:Vocaloid
3. Combo color 4 resembles combo color 3 please change it
4. KIAI Time Green Line All snap
5. Delete osb

[Insane]:

1. Volume change 80→60 100→80
2. 00:39:759 (10) - Delete and Slider start 00:39:759 end 00:40:009
3. 01:06:009 (9) - Delete note I changed the sound
4. 02:04:634 - Suggestion
   
5. 02:56:009 - add note

[Hard]:

1. 03:24:509 (1) - Finish

[Normal]:

1. Suggestion 00:39:509 - Slider start 00:39:759 - Repeat1time 00:40:009 - end
2. 01:32:509 (1) - Finish
3. 02:26:009 (4,1) - Spacing
4. 02:28:509 (1,2) - ^
5. 03:24:509 (1) - Finish
6. 03:41:759 - Slider start 03:42:009 - end I think that this rhythm is good
7. 03:52:259 (5) - move 03:52:009 -

[Easy]:
Fine

All changes did!

Fight~

Thanks for your mod!!!!!

This map shouild be resurected e.e

-Pikachu- wrote:

This map shouild be resurected e.e

I'm back in osu! So I want to resurrect my maps and get them ranked e.e!! So let's go!!