Weezy wrote:

General
- Either add Kiai Time for all the diffs or remove it from the Zakuro diff
- Remove countdown from all the diffs (its not being used)
- Background image should be 1024*768 or 800*600 fix please
- For the audio, it should have a bit rate of 192kbps or less for it to get ranked. Please fix or you can PM for help

Easy
00:03:174 (2) Make it end at the previous white tick (00:04:374)
00:17:424 (2) move it to the next white tick (00:17:574)
00:27:024 (2) ^same

Normal
Increase the cirlce size by 1
00:17:424 (2) lol guess. Same as before
00:27:024 (2) ^same

Hard
Seems fine to me

Zakuro
01:00:474 (5,6) Move them 3 grids to the right

Nice map
and good luck on getting this ranked

Gezoda wrote:

Hey.

General

About Kiai time : It is not very good if you leave Kiai for too long. (Easy/Hard : 24.0% to 100% isn't good - Normal/Zakuro are okay, but I think that you can cut it once more)


Easy
Fine but consider cutting the Kiai.


Normal

00:11:635 (5) - Too many repetitions, consider cutting it
00:14:335 (2) - ^

I didn't have a look on Zakuro and Hard, since I'm not modding beyond Normal+ but it seems fine to me. It deserves a star.

Good luck for ranking ~

Vass_Bass wrote:

Zakuro
00:33:685 (1) - divided into 3 parts
00:54:835 - 00:59:635 - don't sure about this part...

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Normal

SPOILER

00:13:585 (3) - Move this beat 4 grids down.
00:32:335 (4) - New combo.

Hard

SPOILER

00:16:435 (1) - This slider is too close to the HP bar.
00:37:210 - This break is too short. delete it.
00:39:501 - This break is too short. delete it.
*Consider mapping those breaks.

Well done.

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

General
Remove "original soundtrack" in tags
Remove kiai and add new on 00:45:235 - 00:53:635

Easy
Good

Normal
Fast speed of the sliders, it's hard for normal
00:17:635 (3) - move it there 00:17:485
00:27:085 (2) - ^ 00:27:085
00:44:035 (1) - short slider, remove
00:47:635 (7) - do it simmetrical
00:48:835 - remove this break

Hard
00:18:835 (2,3) - 1 grid right
00:37:135 - delete break and next too
00:46:735 (3) - spacing

Zakuro
00:33:685 (1) - divided into 3 parts
00:54:835 - 00:59:635 - don't sure about this part... Updated

Good luck, star

1. 00:16:435 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider?
2. 00:21:235 (1)-^
3. 00:26:035 (1)^
4. 00:27:835 (3)-Add a clap on the end of that slider.
5. 00:30:835 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider?
6. 00:31:885 (2, 3)-^
7. 00:35:635 (1)-^
8. 00:38:035 (1)-^
9. 00:40:435 (1, 2)-http://puu.sh/BPZ O_o I think you made some kind of mistake on this... Fix it. Now!
10. 00:45:235 (1)-^
11. 00:50:035 (1)-^
12. 00:52:435 (4)-^
13. 00:59:635 (1)-Add a finish.

1. 00:035 (1)-Add a finish.
2. 00:06:835 (1)-^
3. 00:11:635 (1, 3)-On 1, add a finish on the beginning of that slider. And add a finish on 3.
4. 00:14:035 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
5. 00:16:534 (1, 2, 3)-Fix the spacing on this... Even if this difficulty is a Normal+, I still find that to be hard. =P After that, fix the spacing on 2 and 3.
6. 00:23:835 (5)-Add a finish.
7. 00:23:785 (1)-^
8. 00:29:035 (2, 5, 6 ,7)-On 2, Fix the spacing on this? On 5, Add a clap on the end of that slider and fix the spacing on this. On 6 and 7, Add some finishes.
9. 00:30:835 (1)-Add a finish and fix the spacing.
10. 00:32:335 (1)-Fix the spacing...
11. 00:45:235 (1)-Add a finish.
12. 00:50:035 (1)-^
13. 00:53:485 (1)-^
14. 01:01:135 (1)-^

1. 00:09:235 (1)-Add a finish.
2. 00:11:635 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
3. 00:14:035 (1)-Add a finish.
4. 00:21:235 (1)-^
5. 00:26:035 (1)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
6. 00:30:835 (1, 6)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider on 1. Fix the spacing on 6 when possible....
7. 00:44:185 (1)-Add a finish.
8. 00:53:485 (1)-^
9. 00:57:767 (1, 2, 3, 4)-Add some finishes, man.
10. 01:01:510 (1)-Add a finish.

1. 00:03:235 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12 ,13)-... Might I suggest having them closer and making the angles less sharp? Like this.
2. 00:08:635 (2, 3, 4, 5)-Have the spacing on this more closer....
3. 00:10:435 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12 ,13)-Same thing I mentioned about 00:03:235.
4. 00:29:035 (5, 6, 7, 8 9)-This right here confused me a little bit... especially 6 and 8... Probably not a good idea not to stack them on the end of those sliders because it would make the player hit them early and since its 1/2 away in the time-line, it would result getting a miss or lesser accuracy. Its a nice idea but it plays bad.
5. 00:54:835 to 00:59:635 (1)-Same thing I mentioned on 00:03:235.

Roddie wrote:

Zakuro:

* 00:03:235 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12 ,13)-... Might I suggest having them closer and making the angles less sharp? Like this.
* 00:08:635 (2, 3, 4, 5)-Have the spacing on this more closer....
* 00:10:435 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12 ,13)-Same thing I mentioned about 00:03:235.
* 00:29:035 (5, 6, 7, 8 9)-This right here confused me a little bit... especially 6 and 8... Probably not a good idea not to stack them on the end of those sliders because it would make the player hit them early and since its 1/2 away in the time-line, it would result getting a miss or lesser accuracy. Its a nice idea but it plays bad.
* 00:54:835 to 00:59:635 (1)-something I mentioned on 00:03:235.


And done. Sorry if I'm being to harsh on the Kakuro difficulty. xD If you guys have any questions, let me know in-game.

Roddie wrote:

00:40:435 (1, 2)-http://puu.sh/BPZ O_o I think you made some kind of mistake on this... Fix it. Now!

Combo1 : 88,98,167
Combo2 : 193,62,118
Combo3 : 153,56,173
Combo4 : 249,134,157

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- Try these colors

Combo1 : 88,98,167
Combo2 : 193,62,118
Combo3 : 153,56,173
Combo4 : 249,134,157

Nice colors

Zakuro;
- 00:32:785 >> Align with (5) end done

Rukarioman wrote:

Zakuro:
00:44:035 (1) - start this one 1/4 tick earlier, but let it end on the same time as before. done
01:00:535 (5,6) - One grid left. Done, I thought I already did that O.o

Hyguys wrote:

Zakuro
+1 Circle size :3~ +1
OMFG your overall difficulty is really easy, -4 Increased with 1 The reason why I had so low OD is because of the auto-playing mode need to get at least 2k on the spinners (at least the first spinner)

noneed to feed kds I think you deserve a kds

Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Zakuro

00:22:885 (7) - this slider seems to have too many repeats in compare with the others
00:31:885 (3,4) - I don't like this stack. it seems better to seperate them. (and I think you have too many this kind of stack and some of them plays really awkward,

this one is strongly recommanded being changed)
00:33:685 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer if you change them into 4 3-note-sliders instead of 3 4-note-sliders (plays awkward to me)
00:49:285 (1) - I don't like a lonely note on red line. I think there should be some notes on white line, too.


Hard

seems too few notes in this diff

00:18:685 - add a note here or fix the spacing
00:28:435 (2,3,4,5,6) - add more notes here instead of just following that all you hear in the music!


Normal

00:30:085 (7,1) - more notes plz
00:31:435 (2,3) - this kind of arrangement is not recommanded in Normal diff


Easy

00:17:935 - add a note here or fix spacing

that's all

Leorda wrote:

Hi

General
1) You should double-check the spinner, and make sure ALL the spinner is turn on the new combo. Because you get 300 katu in spinner, if you get 100 point on last combo. Example, you get 100 point in 00:20:716 (4) and then, you get 300 katu in spinner when the spinner metre is full. That is call spinner bug.
2) Your BG is ugly, try this one http://www.animewallpapers.com/wallpape ... _5_800.php

Easy
Nice one

Normal
00:28:435 (4) - New combo?
00:39:085 (4) - This slider are pretty ugly
00:50:335 (2,4) - I don't like the overlapping slider, please re-arrange them

Hard
00:02:335 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I really don't like the clap at end, try re-arrange the clap
00:08:035 (1) - Ugly slider
00:19:885 (6) - ^

Zakuro
Approach Rate is higher than OD is makes no sense

00:06:085 (2) - Move 1 grid up?

Well, nice job

Leorda wrote:

Zakuro
Approach Rate is higher than OD is makes no sense

Lunah wrote:

Zakuro

00:36:685 (5) - 1 grid down and 2 left
00:39:085 (5) - 1 grid down and 2 right


Star*

Biribiri-chan wrote:

Starred this map!

Just love it.

Altough I would appreciate some original Mew Zakuro transformation footage on the background but ohwell..

This map will be qued to my rieviews!

Keep up the good work!

Xgor wrote:

Hej Hej Igen.

[General]
Preview point is awful I suggest you use 00:45:235 as the preview point.

[Zakuro]
Maybe raise the OD a bit? It's quite low considering that it has AD 8 and is the hardest difficulty OD increased and removed the first spinner

Pretty nice, just some rhythms that I felt was a bit weird
00:17:335 (4) - Rhythm feels a bit weird here. I suggest you remove a repeat, move this forward 1/2 on the timeline and add circles at 00:17:335 and 00:18:235 done
00:18:385 (1,2,3) - I suggest you remove these circles and make a 1/1 long slider here instead. alright

And more suggestion prettiness stuff
00:32:335 (5,7) - Can you please use copy-paste so (5) and (7) looks exatly like each other expect for that (7) has a repeat arrow. copy no problem, just a bit strange when I Reversed it, but it's fixed now
00:47:335 (6) - I think it looks prettier like this but that might be just me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48239 :3
00:52:135 (6) - Pretty much the same thing as above.mhm

Nice map, I probably bubble this later as pretty much all this is things that would make this map much better an prettier and I would say that they are rankible (I still want you to do them though)
Well here's a star for now
*star*

Xgor wrote:

Hej Hej Igen.

[General]
Preview point is awful I suggest you use 00:45:235 as the preview point.

[Easy]
Why not map the part where you placed a break too, doesn't make much sense

00:16:435 (1,2) - (Suggestion) To make this more readable for newcomers I suggest you make the slider start into a circle and a slider from where the old slider ended before to where the circle is
00:26:035 (1,2) - ^Same thing as above^
Also I suggest you make the ending slider a bit shorter more like the other difficulties.I don't get this

Pretty nice easy and the 1/2 worked for a easy and that's not you see usually in a fast BPM song like this.

[Normal]
Raise the stacking letency

Kinda nazied on the spacing here but it felt like the spacing was aligned unintentionally here and some part that could have better symmetry
These is far from important but will make your map look a lot prettier (Unless you want them that way of course )


00:15:235 (2) - Move one grid down.
00:20:485 (2) - Move two grids up.
00:21:835 (2,3) - Move one grid to the right
00:23:335 (4,5) - Move one grid to the left (Two if you don't do the thing above)
00:42:835 (7,8,9) - Move two grids up and two grids to the left.
00:51:085 (4) - Move the last slider point two grids up.
00:51:835 (5,6,1,2) - Move up two grids.
00:53:185 (3) - Move up one grid (Or one down if you didn't the one above)

00:39:085 (4) - This looks much much better if you do something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48226 (Might wanna change the spacing after it so that doesn't get screwed.

[Hard]
00:01:435 (1) - (Suggestion) Remove two repeats and add a 1/2 long slider at 00:02:035
00:02:335 (1) - Remove new combo if you did my suggestion above.
00:12:835 (3) - Why isn't this distance snapped? (2) is so why shouldn't this then.

Also more prettiness modding 00:15:535 (4) - Move down two grids
00:33:235 (3) - (Suggestion) Move the two last slider points down a grid.
00:43:735 (3) - (Suggestion) Move this so it's looks like an triangle like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48232

[Zakuro]
Maybe raise the OD a bit? It's quite low considering that it has AD 8 and is the hardest difficulty

Pretty nice, just some rhythms that I felt was a bit weird
00:17:335 (4) - Rhythm feels a bit weird here. I suggest you remove a repeat, move this forward 1/2 on the timeline and add circles at 00:17:335 and 00:18:235
00:18:385 (1,2,3) - I suggest you remove these circles and make a 1/1 long slider here instead.

And more suggestion prettiness stuff
00:32:335 (5,7) - Can you please use copy-paste so (5) and (7) looks exatly like each other expect for that (7) has a repeat arrow.
00:47:335 (6) - I think it looks prettier like this but that might be just me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/48239
00:52:135 (6) - Pretty much the same thing as above.

Nice map, I probably bubble this later as pretty much all this is things that would make this map much better an prettier and I would say that they are rankible (I still want you to do them though)
Well here's a star for now
*star*

1. The playtime is 1:00, kinda short. Make sure this play time is ok for ranking.

1. 00:52:435 (4) - This slider is placed like under the last slider, use a vertical flip to fix this.Also you can improve that slider like it's showed in the pic.
2. 00:12:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - In compare with the whole diff, This combo is too long, use new combo on (5).
3. 00:12:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - This whole pattern is not following the rhythm correctly, fix the following things.
4. 00:13:435 (2) - This must start here: 00:13:585 and end here 00:14:035.then:
5. 00:14:635 (3) - start this one here: 00:14:335 - and finish it here: 00:15:235.
6. 00:15:535 (4) - The rhythm for this slider should end here: 00:15:985.

1. AR -1 (High BPM)
2. 00:26:635 (1) - Move this closer to the center. (Due to the last spinner)
3. 00:33:835 - This break is unnecessary, continue mapping here like you did with the other diffs.
4. I find this difficulty very hard for a Normal it's probably because the BPM is high so 1.30 slider-speed is kinda fast for Normal.

1. 00:23:335 (7,8) - (8) breaks all the flow, place it on the opposite side. (horizontal flip)
2. 00:59:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't look good also it's not easy to read it, try this (Basically stack some notes)

1. 00:11:785 - This break is not necessary at all, the song is just 1 min long, Continue mapping please!
2. I find this difficult quite nice (nice flow, correct spacing, etc).
3. 00:19:885 (1,2,3) - Oh While playing I noticed this ugly overlap (1 and 3), Please fix it.

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. The playtime is 1:00, kinda short. Make sure this play time is ok for ranking.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Zakuro

1. 00:11:785 - This break is not necessary at all, the song is just 1 min long, Continue mapping please! hmm ok then
2. I find this difficult quite nice (nice flow, correct spacing, etc). :3
3. 00:19:885 (1,2,3) - Oh While playing I noticed this ugly overlap (1 and 3), Please fix it. Likely fixed

Good Luck =D =D

Xgor wrote:

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. The playtime is 1:00, kinda short. Make sure this play time is ok for ranking.

This is fine and 1 minute+ has always been fine, just sayin'

Xgor wrote:

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. The playtime is 1:00, kinda short. Make sure this play time is ok for ranking.

This is fine and 1 minute+ has always been fine, just sayin'

Xgor wrote:

[Zakuro]
Maybe lower the HP drain one tick. okay :3

00:01:435 - I just realized that a slider could work pretty well instead of the spinner you had before. Slider added~
Otherwise please add a circle at 00:02:035.
00:15:835 (3,4) - It sounds much better if you remove these add a circle at 00:15:835 and a 1/1 long slider at 00:15:985. done
00:41:035 (3,4,5) - I think this would sound much better if you moved (3) 1/2 forward on the timeline and removed all repeats and move (4) to 00:41:485 and make it a 3/2 long slider, no big deal but makes far more sense to the song. hope it went well

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Zakuro:
Align the kiai with the other diffs?

blissfulyoshi wrote:

The map looks great now. The only thing I noticed that slightly annoys me is that Hard: 00:35:635 (1,2,3,4) and 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) are exact replicas of each others now, so it feels slightly change. Just tell me if you want to change it or not and I'll rebubble.

(No need for kds if you decide to change it)