Thanks!newyams99 wrote:
Sup.
Basically perfect, so only small suggestions.
00:29:260 (248) - Perhaps you could delete this and make 00:29:342 (249) into a D or something. Personally thought that 00:29:179 (247,248,249) was unnecessarily placed when there's quite a strong sound on 00:29:342. Personally I don't feel like there is enough impact for a finisher here. I think the stream leading into the break feels quite nice for the song.
02:46:896 (1599) - Maybe change to k? The way the pitch changes at 02:46:135 (1592,1593,1594) 02:47:439 (1604,1605,1606) 02:48:091 (1610,1611,1612) sound similar to me. Made 02:48:200 (1611) - a don instead to have consistency because I like the switching between batters here.
03:41:893 (2062,2063,2064,2065,2066,2067) - I think this whole thing could be 1/6, idk. I suppose this was just for structural purposes with the previous 1/6. This follows the drums perfectly from what I hear. I also think a full 1/6 roll doesn't play very well without notes right before it. Also it takes the impact away from the following stream.
04:29:501 - This kiai is really enjoyable to listen on auto <3
Cool