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Shoko Nakagawa - Namida no Tane, Egao no Hana

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Cute Bunny

Xellop wrote:

문제가생겻습니다 난이도이름 노슬라이더틱으로 하고 기존 꺼 지울까요?
아니면 기존난이도 이름으로 바꾸고 덮어씌울까요?
덮어 씌우세요 ㅇㅅㅇ;
wmfchris
[general]
mp3@224kbps, compress it to 128~192

[taiko]
...fairly ok, I like the mapping in the first minute

[ykcarrot's insane]
0:09:414 (2,3) right 1 grid
can't find problems as usual >_<

[Hard]
no problem

[normal]
ok :D

seems rankable for me, star~
Sure

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
mp3@224kbps, compress it to 128~192 // I provided the mp3. It is VBR V2, not CBR 224kbps. so It's rankable.

[ykcarrot's insane]
0:09:414 (2,3) right 1 grid // fixed
can't find problems as usual >_<
Thanks for mod. :D

Download: Shoko Nakagawa - Namida no Tane, Egao no Hana (Xellop) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
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wmfchris//Thank you :)
al2e10
[ykcarrot's Insane]
- Sound
00:47:988 (2,3) - Remove wistle
01:17:508 (8-1St,9-1st) - finish

[Hard]
- Sound
01:15:828 (3-2nd) - Clap
01:33:828 (6-1st) - Remove wistle, add finish
01:34:548 (8,9) - ^

[All]
I loved your map. STAR ~
Sure

al2e10 wrote:

[ykcarrot's Insane]
- Sound
00:47:988 (2,3) - Remove wistle // removed
01:17:508 (8-1St,9-1st) - finish // added
Thank you :)

Download: Shoko Nakagawa - Namida no Tane, Egao no Hana (Xellop) [ykcarrot's Insane].osu
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al2e10//Thank you :)
frost-b-spec
thx request!
but,i think fine this map! :)

+star
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frost-b-spec//Thanks :)
Leorda
Annyong

General

1) The source must be "Gurren Lagann", not GrenRagan. Check this site if you want to see more
2) Please add "MakJang" inside the tags, since she is make a taiko diff for you
3) On second timing sections, try offset 20.882 and don't forget to resnap all object.

Normal
00:36:708 (1) - This object are little bit far from spinner. Please closer a bit to the spinner, since this is a normal diff. If you keep it, beginner/average can't reach this object during gameplay
01:16:548 (1,2) - I think this slider needs a bit creativity, since this slider a pretty uglyer. Try make a Arcs slider are make symetric like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/40562. But it's suggestion, though. Orz
01:33:828 (1,2,3) - Jumps in normal diff are inappropriate, seriously

Hard
00:31:908 (4) - Perhaps, allign with 1? If you alligned, the pattern will be nice to see
01:07:668 (2) - This 2x slider are completely sudden!
01:35:748 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - IMO, this pattern are bit messy though. Perhaps re-arrange the pattern? Try make a nice pattern to make all player interesting that pattern

MakJang's Taiko

00:08:323 (x) - Add a don here?
00:25:788 (25) - Perhaps kat here?
00:41:388 (112) - Remove this? It's sound awkward for me
01:43:428 (T) - End kiai must here

Ykcarrot's Insane
Fine

Nice song. Have my star o/
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Leorda//Thank you :)
Cute Bunny
orioncomet
[General]
- 2nd offset is late, use 20,876 as offset and don't forgot to resnap all notes
- dark blue combo color is hard to see to me, could you change it?

[MakJang's Taiko]
- add audio-lead-in? 1sec and then note is too fast i guess
- resnap all notes i tried it didn't work because those unsnapped notes are 1/8(?) so snap it youself 00:51:002 (157,158)

[Normal] - fine
01:18:482 (2) - new combo?.. too close to (1) so.. (3) will look too far @_@

[Hard] - fine
01:04:922 (1) - move this spinner 1/4 backward or toward? but end at same place

[ykcarrot's Insane] - good

well done and i like this song lol, good job.
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orioncomet//Thank you :)
hian_old
별쾅 good
Lokamp
Sorry keep you waiting, dude S:

Normal
00:31:916 (2) - quite awful hitsounds during the slider-roll... Find something better,please!
00:40:556 (2,1,1) - "disorienting" spacing between the blue slider, the previous white slider and the next white beat. Make these 3 elements nearer!
01:05:036 (spinner) - pretty unsure about its end point, compared to the next beats. Maybe let it end at 01:06:476, and then add a beat on the spinner's previous end.
01:22:796 (2,3) - I found this 2-beat quite quite ununtuitive for a Normal mode... Move these beats elsewhere if you want, but this is just an opinion of mine...
01:41:516 (spinner) - silence this spinner's end

MakJang's Taiko
I REALLY loved the originality of the beat streams of the song. Just rise the overall volume of the Don/Katsu beats and you're fine!

Hard
00:46:796 (4,5,6) - I'm quite unsure about this part's spacing...
01:17:276 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Loved this part! Nice job.
01:24:956 (2,3,4) - ...nonsense spacing? Arrange these better,please...

ykcarrot's Insane
Nothing to complain. Maybe silence the last slider's end...

Your experimental spacing techniques need still some little improvement, but it isn't a great problem for this good map. Special mention to ykcarrot's mode for the fine hitsound placing! Have your star.
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Lokamp//Thank you :)
LesTrucsRoses
*You might want to find a better background.

Hard
SPOILER
00:48:956 - Add a timing section here with the volume 4 ticks from maximum.
01:34:316 (7,8) - Combine 7 and 8 into a slider. [Suggestion]
01:41:516 - Add a beat here. Move the spinner one tick forward.

ykcarrot's Insane
SPOILER
00:02:595 (2,3,4,5) - Combine 2 and 3 into a slider. Combine 4 and 5 into a slider. Whistle hitsound on both sliders.
*But select the individual parts of the sliders and remove the whistle hitsound form them. This makes the beginning and end of the sliders to not have the hitsound, but the slider to have a 'tsssh' sound when it rolls.

00:47:756 (1) - It's hard to see this beat when it's overlayed like how it is.

Good.
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LesTrucsRose//Thank you :)
Weez
General
- Instead of Gurren Lagann for the source, change it to Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann (that is the full name of the series)
- BG image should be 800*600 or 1024*768

Normal
Fine here

Hard
00:24:236 (4) Remove one repeat
00:42:956 Add a beat
00:46:556 ^same
00:53:756 (2,3,4) Line them up properly

ykcarrot's Insane
Fine here

Nice map plus love TTGL:D
Star
VTC
~ STAR ~
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VocaloidTACU//Thanks :)
minyeob
Bubbled~
Weez
Yaaay almost ranked :)
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minyeob wrote:

Bubbled~
으악 민엽씨! 장판 2명에게 신청햇는데 이러시면! ㅠㅠ
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Weezy wrote:

Yaaay almost ranked :)
yaaay~
minyeob
왠지 터질 것 같네요 D:
관대모딩했는데 Orz
리버블 받으면 다시 알려주세요
Jarby
soft-hitclap/normal-hitclap have a slight lead-in which threw me off. Replace them with this one. In addition to that, your mp3 is a fair bit quiet, so you should amplify it. Also, I think the kiai usage in all difficulties except Insane is a bit bad. It shouldn't activate and reactive so much.

Normal:

Missing the intro bit? Probably should map it, even if just for consistency's sake.
01:16:556 (1,1) - I think these would look better centered.

Hard:

01:07:676 (2) - I did not see this coming. Either set the tick rate to 2 so that the length is made obvious or (god forbid) storyboard some kind of warning there.
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Jarby//Thank you
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뭐이 찌콥놈아
버블인데 너같으면 고치겟냐
안고칠거다이놈아
[KOR]Extream_Sigma
압박
노멀 점프가 좀 긴듯.. 되도록이면 줄여주는게 낫겠음.
그리고 스타 'ㅅ'
Card N'FoRcE
I dunno what you guys said °°

But this looks ok to me, so...

:>
minyeob
Nice Card ><
Sure
축하 :)
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Thank you guys ~ :)
Skyblue_old_1
축하드립니다.~
kiririn_
:) congratulations~
Niji_old_1
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