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Kay Hanley - Follow Me

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Topic Starter
machol30
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, August 06, 2008 at 5:53:45 PM

Artist: Kay Hanley
Title: Follow Me
BPM: 166
Filesize: 0kb
Play Time: 03:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Light (2.23 stars, 173 notes)
  2. Standard (3.8 stars, 243 notes)
  3. Heavy (4.72 stars, 340 notes)
Download: Kay Hanley - Follow Me
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This is going to be part of my Sonic Heroes Vocal Trax Set 1 (here).

edit: Did a few things here and there. Mainly spacing and sounds (whistles/finishes).
edit2: Fixed some spacing and timing errors.
edit3: edit thanks to James.
edit4: Echo fixes.
edit5: color changes thanks to Hitoshirenu Shourai.
Behon
Yeah, add them separately so they can each be individually critiqued, then make a RAR or ZIP file when you're done. This is a good choice for a set; Sonic Heroes has some of the best vocal songs in the series.

First, I think that each difficulty should have its name bumped up due to how hard they actually are. Light should be Normal, Normal should be Heavy, and Heavy should be Insane or whatever you want to call it, while you should come up with a new Light in the 1-1.5 star range. And I think Heavy may have too many circles at points; the 35-second mark is a mess.

I'll go through the Normal map and say some stuff about the spacing:

0:14:21- 4 is too close, so fix that section from there.
01:27:22- 1 is too close, fix from there.
02:46- 4 is too far, fix from there.
Topic Starter
machol30
Okay, Timing and Spacing errors mostly corrected.

I agree that each difficulty maybe a bit too hard for its name, so I should lighten some parts just a little.
but...

Behonkiss wrote:

0:14:21- 4 is too close, so fix that section from there.
It looks fine to me...

Also, will wait to upload other beatmaps for some of my other maps to get ranked.
Topic Starter
machol30
Updated again. Hope I didn't miss anything. Also, changed Normal to Standard.
James
heavy:
00:29:39 - farther
01:06:35 - !?!whats this?
01:44:39 - extend the slider to the white tick, same as slider 3
01:50:08 - same as above
02:11:68 - wow can you hit that far spacing? heheheh
02:17:10 - !?!whats this?

standard:
basically some parts of hard that needs to be fixed here

no problems i guess:
i got bored looking at it > 1/2 of the song because it looks like the other two diffs

Topic Starter
machol30

James wrote:

01:06:35 - !?!whats this?
02:17:10 - !?!whats this?
Awesomeness. fully intended. lol

James wrote:

02:11:68 - wow can you hit that far spacing? heheheh
Yup! :D
James
ahh intentional. all good.
but the other one...
James
we discussed this on irc yesterday, i just forgot to post here.
/me bubbles
Topic Starter
machol30
bump
Echo
easy (kinda applies to all difficulties really)
01:04:27 (4,5,6) (and all other instances) - spacing is kinda misleading (should be O----O--O but it's equal distances atm), but if you know the song you can't notice it at all, so up to you whether to change it or not

hard:
01:10:05,02:20:89,03:07:16 (12,13) - spacing represents a full beat time interval but it's only 1/2 (not so much the last one)
01:44:75 (2) - a bit wonky (nitpick)
01:44:93 (3,4) - spacing represents a full beat time interval but it's only 1/2
01:50:53 (4,5,6) - kinda dodgy, make the 4 and 5 a bit closer maybe
01:51:07 (7,8,9) - 7-8 is longer than 8-9 but spacing is opposite
01:54:87 (3,4,5) - spacing is opposite to timing
01:57:22 (7,8,9) - i guess this applies to the "awesomeness" argument?
02:50:35 (7,8,9) - same as above?

i like your repeating double-back slider (01:55:77 (6)) :P

for now
Topic Starter
machol30

Echo49 wrote:

easy (kinda applies to all difficulties really)
01:04:27 (4,5,6) (and all other instances) - spacing is kinda misleading (should be O----O--O but it's equal distances atm), but if you know the song you can't notice it at all, so up to you whether to change it or not
I decide not to.

Echo49 wrote:

01:57:22 (7,8,9) - i guess this applies to the "awesomeness" argument?
02:50:35 (7,8,9) - same as above?
Yes and yes. :P

Echo49 wrote:

i like your repeating double-back slider (01:55:77 (6)) :P
Thanks! :)
Hitoshirenu Shourai
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
machol30

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

My only problem with this is the colors. D=

Pink: 255,128,192
Tan: 240,207,145
Purple: 123,0,206

>_>
Done. :)
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Then you get a .
Echo
And rank.
Zerostarry
Dammit, if i hadn't taken a break from osu, this would have one of my difficulties ~.~
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