1. Easy (1.46 stars, 194 notes)
2. Extra (5.43 stars, 855 notes)
3. Hard (3.36 stars, 559 notes)
4. Insane (4.64 stars, 733 notes)
5. Normal (2.18 stars, 362 notes)

: Natsu : Satellite

Lami wrote:

• [General]

1. no tags..? lol will add soon. tbh I'm lazy. looking for modder to feed me.
   
2. mp3 volume is bit small for me than others (old ranked maps include mine) umm idk, maybe I will ask you for use that mp3?
   
3. check preview time in hard diff (-10ms status) umm actually other diffs should be -10 not hard diff. fixed
   
   [Easy]
   
4. 00:54:090 (1) - even if it's just easy diff. but i think 00:56:771 - ~ 00:58:112 - is too empty feeling..
   maybe you keep for recovery time after spinner...
   then consider to reduce spinner's length at 00:55:431 - . maybe it's enough length for beginner i guess.. i agreed that it's too empty, let's consider it later.
   
   [Hard]
   
5. 00:26:855 (6) - same with other diff I think this one is correct.
   
6. 03:27:526 (5) - ^ remove other diff instead.
   
7. 01:49:900 (4) - change one circle? for simple rhythm in just Hard diff. I think it's ok
   
   [Insane]
   
8. 02:50:570 (6) - ^ same
   
9. 01:24:760 (1) - change to 2 circle, it more good follow to lyrics. ummm yea but I used that in extra diff so I want this to be easier.
   
10. 03:14:034 (4,1) - no jump..? you already put jump at other similar partten... woops, I count that as a same set so let's remove NC. I did like that in extra as well.
    
11. 03:27:526 (4) - add nc? remove in extra instead.
    
    [Extra]
    
    
12. 00:56:269 (2,4) - if you switch these, player can feel more circle flow in here. jump like that is fit for the start of kiai imo.
    
13. 02:50:570 (4) - why don't you use 1/4 slider owo,, for fill up 02:50:654 - I still hesitate about this but I think circle is enough for here.
    
14. 01:54:676 - add note? since 01:53:168 (2) - , 01:53:838 (2) - look like to follow lyric. ahhhh will add if many modder complain about it, tbh I can't here it.
    it's same purpose
    
15. 03:27:526 (1) - remove whistle on head? I heard it owo

not much to say in lower diff. cuz im noob ;w;

P A N wrote:

[notice][list][General]

umm idk, maybe I will ask you for use that mp3?

Not need for this. just use without asking, if you want.

[Insane]

01:24:760 (1) - change to 2 circle, it more good follow to lyrics. ummm yea but I used that in extra diff so I want this to be easier.
i mention it for reason. Because hard diff use 2 circle xd.
but slider is fine too owo.

Lami wrote:

P A N wrote:

[notice][list][General]

umm idk, maybe I will ask you for use that mp3?

Not need for this. just use without asking, if you want.

[Insane]

01:24:760 (1) - change to 2 circle, it more good follow to lyrics. ummm yea but I used that in extra diff so I want this to be easier.
i mention it for reason. Because hard diff use 2 circle xd.
but slider is fine too owo.

Shad0w1and wrote:

m4m
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/405053

[Ex]
AR too low I think its fine

01:06:753 (4,5,6,7,8) - sample is weird reconsider plz, usually i suggest have samples on all notes and use green line to reduce volume will consider
01:11:446 - this reversed slider does not make me feel good because it is on downbeat um i follow vocal. will fix if many ppl complain.
01:16:474 (5) - this note been hide on slider and because of ar it is really confusing. move it out, or AR 9.2 plz umm all of testplayer got that.

[In]
01:37:591 (3) - C+j for what
03:28:038 - spinner maybe noooooot yet

[Har]
00:42:452 (3,4) - red stick sliders really confusing eh no
02:56:697 (3) -

SPOILER

umm no for hard
02:58:541 - fill this out? ^

[Nor]
01:03:234 - 01:02:563 - 01:47:982 - fill this out? no for normal

skipped ez

thanks

BriedisLT wrote:

Overall, I think that this map set has by nature places where there are awkward pauses, you should consider making them bigger spacing to not get confused.

03:09:435 - I think that the kiai should end here according to the music. I think right now is correct. also if make it like that, kiai will be very short.

Hard

00:09:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern can be extremely confusing for the player base that your difficulty caters to. it's not confusing imo and now i raise ar to 7.5 too. would be help.
00:28:876 (3,4) - this place is a bit missed up in beat placement I think no, I followed vocal here.

Insane

00:09:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern can be extremely confusing for the player base that your difficulty caters to. no.
00:17:815 (1,2) - wakward placement, maybe rotating them might do the trick how are they awkward :/ and that's intentional.
02:49:993 (3,4,5) - placing these next to each other doesn't play well. I think it's playing well and easy to play too.

Extra

01:11:278 (1) - i dont think that backsliders on kiai are that enjoyable. I tried other but I think backsliders fit best.
02:37:591 (2,3,1) - these are different from 02:36:753 (6,7,8) - for example, i'd guess a different pattern would be beneficial. tried little thing
02:56:865 (6) - this red tick slider feels kinda out of place I think no
03:22:675 (7) - circle under slider, can be harder to see with HD it's pretty visible because it's not completely stack.

I can't stand the wallpaper. Pls be less of a weeb.
I have nothing else to say, your map is solid as expected. Cheers & good luck!

I love this bg and I cut it myself so thats why. thanks for mod. no mention / blue = fixed.

IamKwaN wrote:

Oh god, I disapprove the BG because of wrong couple :C (jk

Okoratu wrote:

Oh god, I disapprove the BG because of the way these mouths are drawn

AkinOppai wrote:

Hello my friend!

Insane

01:10:105 (1,2,3,4) - http://prntscr.com/9u4xt9 It's very odd while playing you should change these up like scramble them around a litte that would do it! it's already like that if you turns on "stacking" or you can see in gameplay.
01:44:966 (1,2,3,4) - http://prntscr.com/9u4zse Same thing in here you should scramble them around it's a little odd! ^
02:20:496 (4) - You should move the 4 a little further like this http://prntscr.com/9u50iz so the gameplay gets better! what, not like that. it's very harder and it's 1/4.
03:23:836 (4) - Same thing here move it a little further like this http://prntscr.com/9u51nc ^
03:27:368 (3) - You MUST remove that 3 it is off the beat and very weird... please... it really has a beat there, you can use playback rate 25% to hear it properly.

Hard

03:27:368 (4) You MUST remove that 4 it is off the beat and very weird again... same

That's it!
I really loved your map
I hope to see it ranked soon!
Have a great day! CYA ^^

thanks

CookieKivi wrote:

Random Mod.

[Extra]
00:00:552 (2) - x:124 y: 40 00:00:887 (4) - x:212 y:36 Looks better and more playable. ummm I tried yours,yes... but I love mine more and the up-down zigzag is more playable imo.
00:07:759 (2) - Place it like this: http://puu.sh/mHR8U.jpg Why? ^ same here, slider makes straight way to note is more playable.
00:40:105 (4,5,6) - ^ http://puu.sh/mHReC.jpg o.........k
01:33:401 (2) - Overlap. ~ Like that should be better http://puu.sh/mHRmr.jpg ok fixed to something.
01:34:910 (3) - x: 172 y:348 More playable ummm not for here.
01:39:100 (4,5,6) - Triples don't really fit there. Create a stream until that ends 01:39:435 (7) eh but I think it's fit. 01:39:183 is strong unlike 01:39:351
03:12:116 (1) - x:164 y:344 ahh no, recent spacing is already fit imo.
03:12:787 (1) - x:348 y: 344 ^

[Hard]
It feels like an Light Insane.. welp.
Change the CS to 3,5 or smth. interesting, let's try this.

Insane should be oki.
Idk how to Mod Normal and Easy lol.
Good luck and i hope that was helpful. ~ I would love it to see this map here ranked. :3

wajinshu wrote:

Hentai

1. that slider border looks so bad tbh, just use the default one pls
2. Your background its more than 2 mb, what about reducing the file size by using :
   
   SPOILER

   

1. This diff needs OD 8 atleast, current one its too low for this level of difficulty
2. 00:21:837 (1,2,3,4,5) - OMG please PAN, make a perfect star pattern with the polygon tool, to be honest your current one looks so bad
3. 00:29:882 (1) - nop, slider patch its confused to play, plus looks really bad and don't fit with your clean mapping, redo shape thanks.
4. 00:53:513 (4,5,1) - flow its really bad to play. please improve te flow between 4 and 5, its so uncomfortable to play atm, my suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:56:027 (1,2,3,4,1) - sorry I can't agree with this just use a single circle stream like you did at the second kiai 02:00:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - fit alot better the music.
6. 01:02:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - those unperfect polygon patterns make me so sad, common pan, I'm sure you make those looks cleaner and cute to play
7. 01:04:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
8. 02:50:664 (1) - to 02:59:882 (8) - need to use less spacing really, its the calm part of the song nothing its suggesting to have huge jumps

1. Same as the insane diff your OD its too low, used 7 here.
2. 00:09:100 (3,4) - just use single circles they will fit alot better with the rhythm that you build with 00:08:429 (1,2) - , since you were just mapping the drums and ignoring the piano? otherwise use 1/2 sliders for 00:08:429 (1,2) - both suggestions work better, just be consistent
3. 00:29:882 (1,2) - the stacked object feels so weird to play, I'd just use proper spacing or stack 2 with 3
4. 00:56:027 (1,2,3,4) - cute, but circle stream fit better the music as you did at the second kiai
5. 01:47:479 (1,2,3) - make the spacing the same between them, to be honest looks a bit weird and plays a bit weird
6. 02:38:597 (2) - sounds so bad how you leave the tail as an active beat, just do like your extra a 3/4 slider + circle, fit alot better the music
7. 02:41:278 (1) - same as above
8. 02:45:301 (1) - missing NC
   

1. Same as the other diffs your OD its too low, go for OD 6 here
2. 01:32:898 - missing NC -_-
3. 01:40:776 (4) - ^
4. 02:38:597 (1,2) - swap NC for obvious reasons, the hit at your actual 2 its far stronger than in your actual one, also will be consistent with your extra diff and with 02:41:278 (5,1) -
5. 03:15:971 (5) - missing NC too
6. 03:21:334 (4) - ^
7. 03:24:351 (4) - ^
   

1. AR max I'd agree its 5,5, also OD can be a bit lower, I'd use just 4
2. 00:00:385 (1,2,3,4,5) - its basically the same rhythm at hard diff just starting the map, reduce it a bit.
3. 00:03:066 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
4. 00:09:770 (1) - nop, this spinner make the rhythm so wrong, you know it is ending where the new section in the music its starting 00:11:111 - just map the spinner properly.
5. 00:12:787 (3,4) - a single 1/1 slider will be more new player friendly
6. 00:15:468 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:24:351 (7) - remove this circle it doesn't add too much to the melody and will be really stressful to play for new players
8. this normal diff its too hard and the spread between easy and this its too huge, specially because there are too much patterns like 00:46:977 (5,6,1,2,3) - that are super hard to play for a normal lvl player, basically make easy diff harder or make your current normal easier.
   

Natsu wrote:

yo

General:

Extra:

1. 00:29:882 (1) - nop, slider patch its confused to play, plus looks really bad and don't fit with your clean mapping, redo shape thanks. want to do something new and I see that this shape is as cute as me so i want to keep it.
2. 00:53:513 (4,5,1) - flow its really bad to play. please improve te flow between 4 and 5, its so uncomfortable to play atm, my suggestion: I tried to make zigzag there
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:56:027 (1,2,3,4,1) - sorry I can't agree with this just use a single circle stream like you did at the second kiai 02:00:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - fit alot better the music. please reconsider about this, I made this different because I follow vocal and strong beat which is 1/2 but there have stream sound on background so I used kick slider.
4. 01:02:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - those unperfect polygon patterns make me so sad, common pan, I'm sure you make those looks cleaner and cute to play hmm tried to make 01:02:060 (1,3,4,5,6) more symmetry.
5. 01:04:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
6. 02:50:664 (1) - to 02:59:882 (8) - need to use less spacing really, its the calm part of the song nothing its suggesting to have huge jumps
   I also use spacing to follow how strong of vocal, reduce spacing anyway.

Insane:

1. Same as the insane diff your OD its too low, used 7 here.
2. 00:09:100 (3,4) - just use single circles they will fit alot better with the rhythm that you build with 00:08:429 (1,2) - , since you were just mapping the drums and ignoring the piano? otherwise use 1/2 sliders for 00:08:429 (1,2) - both suggestions work better, just be consistent um I follow both drum and piano, there have piano on red tick on that two sliders so I used sliders for that.
3. 00:56:027 (1,2,3,4) - cute, but circle stream fit better the music as you did at the second kiai hm same reason as Extra.

Normal:

1. 00:09:770 (1) - nop, this spinner make the rhythm so wrong, you know it is ending where the new section in the music its starting 00:11:111 - just map the spinner properly. not understand