Mami Kawada - Contrail ~Kiseki~ · forum

Del05

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Del05 2016-01-12T13:01:37+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, June 27, 2016 at 4:22:53 PM

Artist: Mami Kawada
Title: Contrail ~Kiseki~
Source: 蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags: sprite opening ao no kanata four rhythm beyond the sky into the firmament aokana tv size Chocox walaowey Delis Anxient IamKwaN
BPM: 168
Filesize: 26653kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Anxient's Insane (4.48 stars, 329 notes)
Chocox's Insane (4.22 stars, 289 notes)
Delis' Advanced (2.61 stars, 198 notes)
Easy (1.53 stars, 104 notes)
Hard (3.23 stars, 247 notes)
Insane (4.04 stars, 303 notes)
KwaN's Normal (1.82 stars, 145 notes)
walao's Kiseki (4.85 stars, 325 notes)

Download: Mami Kawada - Contrail ~Kiseki~
Download: Mami Kawada - Contrail ~Kiseki~ (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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蒼の彼方のフォーリズム Opening

Re-download. Change video on June 27, 2016
Special thanks to IamKwaN, Delis, Chocox, Walaowey for GD

Easy by me
Normal by IamKwaN
Adavanced by Delis
Hard by me
Insane by me
Insane by Chocox
Insane by Anxient
Insane by walaowey

Last edited by Del05 2016-06-27T09:23:59+00:00, edited 45 times in total.

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2016-01-13T03:33:28+00:00

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IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-01-17T06:39:43+00:00

All done.

http://puu.sh/mBxj5/be295cbb85.rar

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2016-01-26T09:37:40+00:00

Hi del xd

done with my diff o/

asdasd

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Contrail ~Kiseki~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61056
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Contrail ~Kiseki~
TitleUnicode:Contrail~軌跡~
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Del05
Version:Walao's Insane
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:sprite opening ao no kanata four rhythm beyond the sky into the firmament aokana
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:8
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SliderTickRate:2

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R1T5U

7 posts

Joined August 2014

R1T5U 2016-02-04T11:16:09+00:00

want video grab here lol... http://bit.ly/1TFXeMV

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Del05 2016-02-13T14:39:34+00:00

R1T5U wrote:
want video grab here lol... http://bit.ly/1TFXeMV

lol
sorry but i use my video xD

Anxient

1,568 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 2016-02-16T18:51:00+00:00

http://puu.sh/naiEX/300dc5ada8.rar

my gd
pls use my bg \;D/

deadpon3

531 posts

Joined April 2013

deadpon3 2016-02-17T13:48:08+00:00

hi

Easy:

It has to go below 1.50* to be classified as Easy diff.

Sliders may bee a bit too fast for that diff. Also, remember to keep the same distance for every note on easy/normal diffs, I suggest using distance snap.

00:28:734 (1,2,3) - Example, the circle has to be in middle of the sliders.
00:50:163 (2) - That slider looks strange, especially for easy diff.
00:58:199 (2) - ^

KwaN's Normal:

Make it CS3.
00:31:591 (1,2,3) - This pattern is a bit spam in one place.
00:39:627 (4,1) - Rotate the first slider a bit.
00:41:056 (3,4,5) - Looks ugly.
00:50:341 (4) - Weird slider.
01:00:341 (1) - Change it to repeater so it's more accurate. http://puu.sh/nbepy/8608c8f9cb.jpg

Hard:

00:20:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - May be hard to read.

This diff looks really nice and it's fun to play

Insane:

00:03:734 (2,3,1) - Make the second slider upside-down.
00:06:591 (2,3) - The note should be placed at the end of previous slider.
01:24:984 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - You can make it more interesting.

Good luck

vick

260 posts

Joined August 2014

vick 2016-02-17T13:53:47+00:00

Hi del05

General for Insane : I feel like the spacing its really confusing and there are some overlaps that are hard to read, the other its ok

00:27:841 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is really confusing when you try to play it, the spacing change a lot from 1 - 2 compared to 3 - 4 or even 6 - 7
00:36:949 (3,2) - stack ?
00:36:591 (2,3,4) - spacing changes a lot here
00:42:485 (3,4,5,1) - same
00:55:699 (6,3,4) - maybe stack here ?
00:57:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here i would do something like this http://puu.sh/nbevN/12c4293917.jpg
01:09:091 (2,3,4) - spacing too big ?
01:12:127 (3,4) - same

Thats everything I can find

Good luck

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Del05 2016-02-17T14:10:23+00:00

Thanks everyone for the mod
My first experience for very fast mod at the same time lol xD

deadpon3 wrote:
hi

Easy:

It has to go below 1.50* to be classified as Easy diff.

Sliders may bee a bit too fast for that diff. Also, remember to keep the same distance for every note on easy/normal diffs, I suggest using distance snap.

00:28:734 (1,2,3) - Example, the circle has to be in middle of the sliders. what do you mean ??
00:50:163 (2) - That slider looks strange, especially for easy diff. Fixed
00:58:199 (2) - ^ Fixed

Hard:

00:20:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - May be hard to read. Yeah actually, will consider it first cause i like it lol xD

This diff looks really nice and it's fun to play

Insane:

00:03:734 (2,3,1) - Make the second slider upside-down. What do you mean ?? again xD
00:06:591 (2,3) - The note should be placed at the end of previous slider. Fixed
01:24:984 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - You can make it more interesting. Fixed

Good luck

vick wrote:
Hi del05

General for Insane : I feel like the spacing its really confusing and there are some overlaps that are hard to read, the other its ok

00:27:841 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is really confusing when you try to play it, the spacing change a lot from 1 - 2 compared to 3 - 4 or even 6 - 7 Will consider it
00:36:949 (3,2) - stack ? Fixed
00:36:591 (2,3,4) - spacing changes a lot here Fixed
00:42:485 (3,4,5,1) - same Fixed
00:55:699 (6,3,4) - maybe stack here ? nope
00:57:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here i would do something like this http://puu.sh/nbevN/12c4293917.jpg will consider it
01:09:091 (2,3,4) - spacing too big ? hm... i think not xD
01:12:127 (3,4) - same nope. cause 4 have cymbal sound. So, i want make bigger jump for kiai cycmbal sound

Thats everything I can find

Good luck

Anxient

1,568 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 2016-02-18T17:30:16+00:00

easy diff bg ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

no kds

Chocox' Light Insane
01:13:198 (5,6) - overlapping note

Abraxos

855 posts

Joined October 2014

Abraxos 2016-02-19T13:20:46+00:00

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MOD MARK

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-02-19T17:07:10+00:00

Hi~

[General]
* Add GDers' name on the tags
* Integrate Countdown (I suggest turn them off)
* Turn off Widescreen Support on Insane and and anx's Insane
* Would be great to put a burst effect on 01:13:199 - (turn off kiai and turn on again)
* I'm concerned about the gap between Normal and Hard, as that's the overwhelmingly biggest gap than between any other diffs. Look, Normal - Hard gap is almost similar as Hard - (Light Insane - Insane1 - Insane2 -) Insane3. So I suggest to add an Advanced diff or something.

[Easy]
* AR4 is usually for Normal diff that has some 1/2 gaps on this bpm, but this one has only 1/1s, so it's just a regular Easy. In this case, AR3 would be following the current mapping meta. (Also Normal is only AR4.5 so need to give some difference)
* 00:00:342 - Uhh can we just fill this out? It's also a part of a song and newbie players deserve to enjoy that part as well.
* 00:48:913 (1) - End on 00:49:449 - ? There is a strong drum sound.
* 00:54:627 (1,2) - I suggest http://puu.sh/ndMRE/068b9f022d.jpg The current one follows multiple things, like 00:55:163 - is a vocal but ignored 00:55:520 - and 00:55:877 - . Also 00:55:699 - is a drum but you ignored 00:54:984 - this drum.
* 00:59:627 (4) - I don't agree with this slider. It ends on nowhere. I know you're trying to simplify the rhythm, but I also think even Easies should follow the song and not put notes where no sound exists. A solution for this would be just putting a circle on 00:59:627 - .
Other than that, really solid diff. I hope you would fix some blankets but it's not important though.

[KwaN's Normal]
OMG first time meeting KwaN on modding
* 00:11:770 - I feel this part needs some more complicated rhythm, as it's more intense than the previous part. 00:06:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm is quite hard but the song is less intense. So I suggest to make the later part harder.
* 01:00:163 - I hope there a circle here. 00:59:627 (7,1) - 3/2 gap feels to be breaking the flow.
* 01:04:627 (1,2,3,1) - Could you make this part a little more harder? It's kiai and this looks too boring for here.

[Hard]
* 00:01:591 (1) - 00:04:449 (1) - Even though you're keeping the same NC term, these look too spam-ish since there are too few notes. So how about removing NC from them?
* 01:21:234 (4) - I assume you're representing a musical instrument here on the start but for me I hardly realized that there's such a sound and it was a bit wierd to click at the red tick while putting 01:21:413 - this vocal on the end of the slider. Unlike 01:19:806 - the vocal doesn't support it at all. So suggestion 1 2 3 4 and Yeah, same for Insane.
* 01:24:627 - I suggest adding a circle here, as the spinner start doesn't give much impact to players.
* If you're not going to make an Advanced or something, lower the AR to 7.5 at least and nerf some hard parts. The curent gap is way too big.

[Chocox's Light Insane]
* You should lower the AR to around 8.5 This is a 'Light' Insane so it's not really intense. (And hey, even Insane is AR8.5)
* 00:24:270 (4,5) - Put a note on 00:24:984 - or something. 00:23:199 (1,2,3) - These three notes having nothing to do with the vocal but now you're suddenly focusing only on the vocal while neglecting any other sounds, so that 3/2 gap is weird.
* 00:26:056 (1) - Continuing, I suggest http://puu.sh/ndQ90/54381e8f66.jpg to not miss 00:26:413 - sound and also make 00:27:127 - clickable.
* 00:28:556 (1,2) - Switching NC would make more sense. 00:28:556 (1) - should be included on the previous part and 00:28:734 - is a new section. Same for 00:39:984 (1,2) - 00:41:413 (1,2) - 00:17:306 (1,2) - 00:29:984 (1,2) - 00:32:841 (1,2) - 00:48:734 (1,2) - 00:49:806 (1,3) - 01:05:877 (4,1) - 01:07:127 (1,3) - 01:14:270 (1,2) - 01:15:877 (1,2) - 01:17:127 (1,2) -
* 00:35:341 (1) - Spamming NC when there's nothing to emphasize is not a good idea. Remove NC from this.
* 00:36:056 (1,2) - I don't understand this too. What made you put a jump there? I think you don't care about those 2/4th drum beat too much. Having that bigger distance than 00:35:699 (3,1) - is weird. Also you suddenly ignored 00:36:591 - this vocal while you're mostly following the vocals on this map.
* 00:38:020 - Same for this beat, idk why you suddenly stopped representing all prominent vocals.
* 00:42:484 (5,6) - This jump is really random. It's not like you put jumps on 00:28:199 (6,7,1) - 00:39:270 (2,3,1) - or any other simlar parts. Including 00:42:127 (4,5) - , I suggest to keep 1.0x distance there.
* 00:31:056 (4,5) - 00:43:913 (3,4) - Some other jumps I don't understand. Keep in mind, putting a jump means you're focusing on a specific sound and you felt it being strong there, so the similar parts should have jumps too.
* 00:54:627 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - for this part you can consider this NC: http://puu.sh/ndRYz/d2eacdf05d.jpg This is because 00:54:627 - 00:55:163 - 00:55:877 - are strong and that's why you put a jump there. So why not follow it with NC too?
* 01:08:734 (5) - Ctrl+G would be better flow. Also having a jump only 01:09:092 (1,2) - feels bad. It's better to make 01:08:734 (5,1,2) - as a whole a jump part, dividing 01:09:270 (2) - into 2 circles too.
* 01:13:198 (5) - There is a circle at the same tick as the slider if you didn't notice.
* 01:18:199 (1) - Unnecessary NC imo
Yeah, you need to organize the jumps. Jumps are not something you can put somewhere and not on similar parts and suddenly emphasizing something else. Try to make consistent jump logic. Also making a linear movement of a jump like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4566074 makes sort of awkward flow.
And secondly, NCs should be used where the 'new section' starts. So downbeats are generally really good idea to put NCs on consistently. If you're going to follow the vocal, then strictly focus on them (but I don't recommend).

[Insane]
* 00:01:591 (1,1) - Same as Hard
* I hope you would make some difference depending on how the electric guitar sounds. Like 00:14:806 - 00:17:663 - these are different than 00:13:199 (1) - 00:18:913 (1) - but there's no difference on the rhythm pattern at all...
Well not much to say, good diff

[anx's Insane]
* 00:13:020 (6,1) - Between all these downebeats only this one is not a jump. Not gonna make it consistent?
* From 00:11:770 - I wanna say the same thing as I mentioned on Insane, so check that.
I don't like overlapped 1/2s between big jumps since they really disconnect the flow but well, the diff is fine overall. Also I hope this diff have some more sliders instead of jumps everywhere. I can't point out much when that 'jump everywhere' is the map's identity.

[Walao's Insane]
* 00:11:770 - omg why do all of you want to repeat the same rhythm over and over again even though there is a change in the melody... Personally it's really boring and can't feel the rhythmic change of the song.
Okay not much to say here too, those jumpy maps are just jumpy, can't tackle much of it lol

Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2016-02-20T02:54:49+00:00

Doyak wrote:
[Chocox's Light Insane]
* You should lower the AR to around 8.5 This is a 'Light' Insane so it's not really intense. (And hey, even Insane is AR8.5) I was too lazy to fix it before , fixed now.
* 00:24:270 (4,5) - Put a note on 00:24:984 - or something. 00:23:199 (1,2,3) - These three notes having nothing to do with the vocal but now you're suddenly focusing only on the vocal while neglecting any other sounds, so that 3/2 gap is weird. Because there is something besides the vocal to map to before 00:24:270 (4,5) , lol , not gonna change it just yet.
* 00:26:056 (1) - Continuing, I suggest http://puu.sh/ndQ90/54381e8f66.jpg to not miss 00:26:413 - sound and also make 00:27:127 - clickable. Try suggesting patterns of how I can do it next time too , right now I focus on vocal at the first 'soft part' , no fix.
* 00:28:556 (1,2) - Switching NC would make more sense. 00:28:556 (1) - should be included on the previous part and 00:28:734 - is a new section. Same for 00:39:984 (1,2) - 00:41:413 (1,2) - 00:17:306 (1,2) - 00:29:984 (1,2) - 00:32:841 (1,2) - 00:48:734 (1,2) - 00:49:806 (1,3) - 01:05:877 (4,1) - 01:07:127 (1,3) - 01:14:270 (1,2) - 01:15:877 (1,2) - 01:17:127 (1,2) - Some fixed , some not fixed , reason being I'll NC the one that is stacked above the slider.
* 00:35:341 (1) - Spamming NC when there's nothing to emphasize is not a good idea. Remove NC from this. Fixed.
* 00:36:056 (1,2) - I don't understand this too. What made you put a jump there? I think you don't care about those 2/4th drum beat too much. Having that bigger distance than 00:35:699 (3,1) - is weird. Also you suddenly ignored 00:36:591 - this vocal while you're mostly following the vocals on this map. My conscience I guess , I won't fix this until I find something better.
* 00:38:020 - Same for this beat, idk why you suddenly stopped representing all prominent vocals. Cause there are beats there to emphasise.
* 00:42:484 (5,6) - This jump is really random. It's not like you put jumps on 00:28:199 (6,7,1) - 00:39:270 (2,3,1) - or any other simlar parts. Including 00:42:127 (4,5) - , I suggest to keep 1.0x distance there. Tbh , I forgot why I put a jump here , but I guess since it's consistent with 00:31:056 (4,5) , there is no point changing it.
* 00:31:056 (4,5) - 00:43:913 (3,4) - Some other jumps I don't understand. Keep in mind, putting a jump means you're focusing on a specific sound and you felt it being strong there, so the similar parts should have jumps too. Nah
* 00:54:627 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - for this part you can consider this NC: http://puu.sh/ndRYz/d2eacdf05d.jpg This is because 00:54:627 - 00:55:163 - 00:55:877 - are strong and that's why you put a jump there. So why not follow it with NC too? I fixed this my own way.
* 01:08:734 (5) - Ctrl+G would be better flow. Also having a jump only 01:09:092 (1,2) - feels bad. It's better to make 01:08:734 (5,1,2) - as a whole a jump part, dividing 01:09:270 (2) - into 2 circles too. Ctrl-g'ed only.
* 01:13:198 (5) - There is a circle at the same tick as the slider if you didn't notice. Completely missed it , fixed.
* 01:18:199 (1) - Unnecessary NC imo Removed
Yeah, you need to organize the jumps. Jumps are not something you can put somewhere and not on similar parts and suddenly emphasizing something else. Try to make consistent jump logic. Also making a linear movement of a jump like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4566074 makes sort of awkward flow.
And secondly, NCs should be used where the 'new section' starts. So downbeats are generally really good idea to put NCs on consistently. If you're going to follow the vocal, then strictly focus on them (but I don't recommend). I NC everything at downbeats and when they interfere with my flow , making it more neat. You make it sound like I'm a 5 year old mapper , and true enough I'm not really experienced. I might consider re-doing this diff if I'm not lazy , but right now I focus on playability issues to be fixed. If every other mod that comes is similar to this , I'll redo it.

http://puu.sh/neq2t/4d6bb66d9c.rar

Anxient

1,568 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 2016-02-21T00:54:02+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Hi~
[anx's Insane]
* 00:13:020 (6,1) - Between all these downebeats only this one is not a jump. Not gonna make it consistent? - applied
* From 00:11:770 - I wanna say the same thing as I mentioned on Insane, so check that. - nah i think its fine
I don't like overlapped 1/2s between big jumps since they really disconnect the flow but well, the diff is fine overall. Also I hope this diff have some more sliders instead of jumps everywhere. I can't point out much when that 'jump everywhere' is the map's identity. - jumps are the only to make this song interesting tho ;a;

turned off widescreensupport and countdown.

thanks for modding http://puu.sh/nfuz1/923617516d.osu

Abraxos

855 posts

Joined October 2014

Abraxos 2016-02-26T14:44:25+00:00

hey ho here for insane

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insayne

Insane

00:08:377 (4,5,6) - given how the stacking makes the player assume that 00:08:734 (5,6) - is on a 1/2 beat as previous sections dont feature 1/4s, id suggest you remove the stacking. a crude example would be this, try and have a distinction between 00:08:377 (4) - and 00:08:734 (5,6) - so the transition is smoother in a sense
00:09:627 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - the asymmetry of this pattern makes me itch. try to keep the patterns linked in some way, as of now i cant deduce what you are trying to get here with the irregularity of the shapes and maybe even the irregularity of the spacing.my suggestion is shit, but it kinda gives a hint as to what im driving at.
00:21:949 (1,2) - felt as if this should be larger in spacing, since you were going at a increasing trend for these jumps
00:22:306 (3,4,5) - im extremely picky when it comes to aesthetics, and this is driving me off. remove the stacking first, and then use a single note to adjust accordingly. you should get something like this
00:39:806 (4,5,1) - adjust accordingly
00:40:878 (3,4) - spacing is off
00:48:020 (4,5,6) - spacing is off
00:53:913 (3) - spaciggngngngngngn
00:54:627 (1,3,4) - would be great if these could align
01:01:413 (1,2) - them kicksliders, also threw me off the first time i tested this map. maybe try to reduce the spacing between the two of them
01:03:199 (1,2) - are you sure these two are symmetrical
01:06:770 (4,5,6) - spacingggg plz
01:27:484 (1) - end off with kickslider? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

nothing much, flow is solid. spacing makes some patterns look weird, but overall its pretty good.

apologies if it seems small, but hey smaller mod = better map amirite joafasdfasdfsadfsadfsadfsa

good luck with rankz <3

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-02-26T18:54:27+00:00

I remember this having only 4 diffs the other day xD

the metadeta for anx's Insane has bugged

Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Del05 2016-02-28T05:08:42+00:00

Hi
Thanks abra

@Doyak = All fixed

Abraxos wrote:
hey ho here for insane

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insayne
Insane
00:08:377 (4,5,6) - given how the stacking makes the player assume that 00:08:734 (5,6) - is on a 1/2 beat as previous sections dont feature 1/4s, id suggest you remove the stacking. a crude example would be this, try and have a distinction between 00:08:377 (4) - and 00:08:734 (5,6) - so the transition is smoother in a sense Will consider it
00:09:627 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - the asymmetry of this pattern makes me itch. try to keep the patterns linked in some way, as of now i cant deduce what you are trying to get here with the irregularity of the shapes and maybe even the irregularity of the spacing.my suggestion is shit, but it kinda gives a hint as to what im driving at. Will consider it
00:21:949 (1,2) - felt as if this should be larger in spacing, since you were going at a increasing trend for these jumps Fixed
00:22:306 (3,4,5) - im extremely picky when it comes to aesthetics, and this is driving me off. remove the stacking first, and then use a single note to adjust accordingly. you should get something like this Nope. I can hear beat at 00:22:395
00:39:806 (4,5,1) - adjust accordingly Fixed
00:40:878 (3,4) - spacing is off Fixed
00:48:020 (4,5,6) - spacing is off
00:53:913 (3) - spaciggngngngngngn Fixed
00:54:627 (1,3,4) - would be great if these could align Fixed
01:01:413 (1,2) - them kicksliders, also threw me off the first time i tested this map. maybe try to reduce the spacing between the two of them Will consider it
01:03:199 (1,2) - are you sure these two are symmetrical Yes, it is
01:06:770 (4,5,6) - spacingggg plz Fixed
01:27:484 (1) - end off with kickslider? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Fixed

nothing much, flow is solid. spacing makes some patterns look weird, but overall its pretty good.

apologies if it seems small, but hey smaller mod = better map amirite joafasdfasdfsadfsadfsadfsa

good luck with rankz <3

Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2016-02-28T10:15:18+00:00

<3

4399guangguang

75 posts

Joined April 2013

4399guangguang 2016-03-02T13:52:39+00:00

[Chocox's Light Insane]

AR should be lower for light insane diff

00:17:306 (1) - Cancel NC
00:29:984 (1) - ^
00:32:841 (1) - ^
01:07:127 (1,2) - Move to the previous combo

[Hard]

00:03:199 (1,2) - These should be mapped at the top
00:59:627 (3,4) - Stack them together or put them a bit closer

[Insane]

00:08:734 (5,6) - Quite strange for this short stream
00:10:877 (3) - Move to (x=200,y=292)

Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2016-03-04T10:32:34+00:00

4399guangguang

4399guangguang wrote:
[Chocox's Light Insane]

AR should be lower for light insane diff Ok

00:17:306 (1) - Cancel NC Fixed
00:29:984 (1) - ^ Stacked note , so I NC the one that comes FIRST.
00:32:841 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:07:127 (1,2) - Move to the previous combo Nope , but I changed NC

Thank you for the mod!! http://puu.sh/nulJA/d13887bb4d.rar

EDIT: Sorry del can you change my AR to 8.5 , I forgot .. thanks! <3

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-03-04T14:33:52+00:00

Feom my queue
as you request XD

1pc test play( i can FC this XD
[Chocox's Light Insane]
really nice, nothing i can mod at this diff

but there are some patterns like 00:10:163 (6,1) - 00:10:877 (3,1) - 00:20:342 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 00:46:591 (2,1) - 00:53:913 (2,1) - 00:57:127 (4,1) - 00:59:091 (1,2,1,2,1) - i suggest to do like this, i mean to map the next 1/1 note(00:10:520 (1) - ) at the same place(00:10:163 (6) - ) where you have map the note, something like this, or you can look at 00:06:949 (3,1) - and 00:08:377 (4,5) - in the Insane diff
this is just a suggestion tho, cause this is better to play when you are playing

1pc test play
[Insane]
00:08:020 (3,4) - make the same DS with 00:07:306 (1,2,3) - ?
00:10:163 (5) - NC
00:10:520 (1) - suggest to stick with 00:10:163 (5) - like i mentions in Chocox's Light Insane
00:42:663 (4,5,1) - avoid straight jumps, cause is difficult to play
00:47:841 (3,4) - awkward spacing here and 00:48:377 (6,7) - and straight jumps, try this
00:51:591 (8,1,2,3) - same as 00:10:520 (1) -
00:59:806 (4,5,6,1) - ^
01:01:413 (1,2) - i prefer streams since the music is more like stream
01:18:020 (3,4,5) - awkward spacing like 00:47:841 (3,4) -, try to make a better shape/flow
01:27:484 (1) - a note is just fine here, music doesnt sound like a kickslider here

1pc test play
[anx's Insane]
00:01:591 (3,4) - here is a 1/1 slider idk why you make a note and a slider here, this doesnt even fit the music
00:26:056 (1,2,3) - make DS the same ?
i dont like the straight jump tho, they just make the maps hard to play, consider to remap these part if you want to make your map better to play
00:16:591 (4,5,6) - 00:30:699 (2,3,4) - 00:32:127 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:41:056 (3,4,5) - 01:04:270 (6,7,1) -

GL~

Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2016-03-05T08:16:07+00:00

SnowNiNo_

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
Feom my queue
as you request XD

1pc test play( i can FC this XD
[Chocox's Light Insane]
really nice, nothing i can mod at this diff Woahhh , so weird. You like this map , but others dislike it. Hahaha , anyways thank you!
but there are some patterns like 00:10:163 (6,1) - 00:10:877 (3,1) - 00:20:342 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 00:46:591 (2,1) - 00:53:913 (2,1) - 00:57:127 (4,1) - 00:59:091 (1,2,1,2,1) - i suggest to do like this, i mean to map the next 1/1 note(00:10:520 (1) - ) at the same place(00:10:163 (6) - ) where you have map the note, something like this, or you can look at 00:06:949 (3,1) - and 00:08:377 (4,5) - in the Insane diff
this is just a suggestion tho, cause this is better to play when you are playing Hmm , I changed 00:22:306 (1,2,3,4,5) - because I feel that the pattern is bad. I get your point , but right now I have no idea how to fix it. I'll use your comment to continue working on this GD , and I will change anything I find suitable. Thank you very much for mentioning this!

GL~

Thanks for the mod!! <3 http://puu.sh/nvqSr/b00adbc4b7.rar

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2016-03-12T12:00:59+00:00

[General]

about title thing:～ is different from ranked version, maybe not an issue tho, just notify u about this
111

[Delis' Advanced]

I think u forgot to set volume for the very first part? and widescreen uncheck btw
00:06:056 (1,2,3,4,1) - a possibility that u end them on blue ticks by accident?

[Hard]

od6 fits the diff thread better
00:20:877 (3,5) - maybe nc these for emphasizing?
00:19:984 (3,1,2) - straight movement here feels a bit clumsy in a hard imo.. I suggest exchanging 00:20:341 (1,2) - with 00:21:413 (5,6) -

[Chocox's Light Insane]

00:18:020 (2) - can fix blanket a bit
00:31:234 (5) - 00:42:663 (6) - imo it makes more sense if u only do a jump to new combo to emphasize the vocal
but this something just simply looks inconsistent to me
00:56:234 (1,2,3,4) - the vocal pitch starts to rise here, i suggest spacing out a bit for these 4 objects, or else large spacing here 00:57:484 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - feels too sudden
01:15:341 (5) - appearance fix this way?
asdf
01:23:377 (2,3) - song starts to calm down here, better reduce spacing between these

[anx's Insane]

00:26:591 (2,3) - I don't see the point in this spacing, a possibility that u would like to space 2 out a bit and have it stacked with the sliderend of 4
normal sampleset is fine but u can mute the volume a bit, now it hurts my ears qAq

Anxient

1,568 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 2016-03-13T09:46:18+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
[anx's Insane]
00:01:591 (3,4) - here is a 1/1 slider idk why you make a note and a slider here, this doesnt even fit the music - but the beats for it exist :c so i make it like this. fits imo :cccc
00:26:056 (1,2,3) - make DS the same ? - okay dad. i had to remap a few things
i dont like the straight jump tho, they just make the maps hard to play, consider to remap these part if you want to make your map better to play
00:16:591 (4,5,6) - 00:30:699 (2,3,4) - 00:32:127 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:41:056 (3,4,5) - 01:04:270 (6,7,1) - but i like them :c

GL~

Garden wrote:
anx's Insane]
00:26:591 (2,3) - I don't see the point in this spacing, a possibility that u would like to space 2 out a bit and have it stacked with the sliderend of 4 - fixed during NiNO's mod
normal sampleset is fine but u can mute the volume a bit, now it hurts my ears qAq - i am a generous god.

thanks for modding you two!

code

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TitleUnicode:Contrail~軌跡~
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Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
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Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2016-03-15T04:08:18+00:00

I'll probably be remapping this later when I get home , so if anyone is modding before I edit this post , don't mod my diff yet.

EDIT: New Diff.
To Del05 : Maybe you can help me change Diff Name , and AR + OD + HP to fit the spread , because my Insane is harder than yours now.

Anze

266 posts

Joined April 2012

Anze 2016-03-15T11:34:42+00:00

hi
these are just my opinion, feel free to reject if you don't think like my mod.

[Walao's Insane]

00:49:984 (5,1) - This rhythm is bit awkward. i suggest this rhythm.

pattern

00:58:734 (1) - Change slider angle like this. it is more comfortable moving cursor, i think..

pattern

01:08:734 (1,2,1) - Remove NC at 01:08:734 (1) - , 01:09:270 (1) - and Add NC at 01:09:091 (2) - . 01:09:091 (2,1,2) - i think these are set melody.

01:15:341 (3) - Try to bend a bit..?

pattern

[anx's Insane]

00:16:770 (5) - 00:16:591 (4,5,6) - Too hard to move cursor. try x356 y240.

00:19:984 (5) - move x149 y174 ? Sound tone is changed at 00:19:984. so need to move cursor the other way.

01:16:056 (1,2) - why make a space between (1,2)? snap at 01:16:234 (2) - .

[Insane]

00:42:842 (5) - x180 y300 is better to emphasize 00:43:020 (1) - note.

00:50:341 (1,2,3) - 1.22, 1.27 DS isn't too high? try 0.8x.

00:59:627 (3,4,5) - 1/2 is the same distance as 1/1, and it makes some confusion. try to move 00:59:806 (4) - x115 y228.

01:10:163 (6,7,1) - 6,7 notes' DS are 1.02x and 01:10:252 (7,1) - are 0.90x?

I cant find any problem in the other diffs.
Good Luck~

Last edited by Anze 2016-03-15T21:56:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Anxient

1,568 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 2016-03-15T13:45:44+00:00

Ayalis wrote:
[anx's Insane]

00:16:770 (5) - 00:16:591 (4,5,6) - Too hard to move cursor. try x356 y240. - not reallu?

00:19:984 (5) - move x149 y174 ? Sound tone is changed at 00:19:984. so need to move cursor the other way. applied

01:16:056 (1,2) - why make a space between (1,2)? snap at 01:16:234 (2) - . - just an aesthetic i like to use coz i dont really like autostack. plus, 01:16:056 (1,2,6) - this tiny triangle is pretty.
Good Luck~

update

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IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2016-03-15T15:25:37+00:00

Those fixed aren't mentioned.

deadpon3

Make it CS3. I make it CS3.3 to fit the spread and at least give me a reason why I should change it.
00:31:591 (1,2,3) - This pattern is a bit spam in one place. I don't quite understand xD
00:41:056 (3,4,5) - Looks ugly. Why?
00:50:341 (4) - Weird slider. Why?
01:00:341 (1) - Change it to repeater so it's more accurate. Not manage to do repeated reverses in this difficulty even though I know there are exactly four beats throughout the slider.

Doyak

00:11:770 - I think I only follow drums here.
01:04:627 (1,2,3,1) - If I make them harder, then the whole rhythm would be based on the vocal which it's quite inconsistent with other parts in the kiai.

Thank you for mods!

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Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2016-03-16T08:07:07+00:00

request in gane.

[easy]
00:11:770 (1,2) - how about make blanket..
00:43:020 (1) - http://puu.sh/nImHF/46ec26cf4f.jpg

[kwan's normal]
http://puu.sh/nImR3/90312753b6.png Is this sv okay?

[Delis' advanced]
00:10:520 (4) - If you use nc, reading will be easy.
00:32:663 (4) - Avoid overlap with 00:33:734 (7) - . http://puu.sh/nImYY/5e7e809276.jpg
01:06:591 (4,2) - how about stack?

[Hard]
00:20:341 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I know your intend, But it is too difficult. how about 1.5x ds?
00:42:841 (5) - how about stack at 00:43:020 (1) - this tail?

[Insane]
00:13:199 (1,3) - they are too near, move this 00:13:913 (3) - 167.231
01:06:949 (5,3) - stack will be better.

[chocox]
nothing

[anx]
00:05:163 (5,1,2) - It is hard to read because of 00:03:199 (1,2) - . make other pattern please.
00:03:199 (1,2,1,3) - you can avoid this overlap like this http://puu.sh/nInBY/1813fdf417.jpg

[walao]
Idk.....

During mod, site crashed//
Good luck....Sorry for poor mod ~~Because of computer~~

Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2016-03-16T10:30:39+00:00

I changed a minor star shape , new diff.

Posted here since you went offline

Anxient

1,568 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 2016-03-16T12:59:06+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
[anx]
00:05:163 (5,1,2) - It is hard to read because of 00:03:199 (1,2) - . make other pattern please.
00:03:199 (1,2,1,3) - you can avoid this overlap like this http://puu.sh/nInBY/1813fdf417.jpg

all rejected coz the overlaps is intentional, and to me, they look fine. as for the hard to read, it shouldnt be for any insane tier player.
sorry >.<

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2016-03-17T14:54:23+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Hi~

[Walao's Insane]
* 00:11:770 - omg why do all of you want to repeat the same rhythm over and over again even though there is a change in the melody... Personally it's really boring and can't feel the rhythmic change of the song. yeah i know what u mean here, the same flow is not showing the changes in rhythm, but it play fine to me tbh, nvm though, i'll think about it><
Okay not much to say here too, those jumpy maps are just jumpy, can't tackle much of it lol

Thanks for the mod xD

Ayalis wrote:
hi
these are just my opinion, feel free to reject if you don't think like my mod.

[Walao's Insane]

00:49:984 (5,1) - This rhythm is bit awkward. i suggest this rhythm. sorry i'll keep the current rhythm bcoz i dont want to miss the beat on 00:48:913 (1)

pattern

00:58:734 (1) - Change slider angle like this. it is more comfortable moving cursor, i think.. imo its better to be this way bcoz this beat is the strongest, thus having the biggest jump, and the flow should be reset here bcoz of the rhythm changed

pattern

01:08:734 (1,2,1) - Remove NC at 01:08:734 (1) - , 01:09:270 (1) - and Add NC at 01:09:091 (2) - . 01:09:091 (2,1,2) - i think these are set melody. alright

01:15:341 (3) - Try to bend a bit..? i prefer it to be straight bcoz it looks neater stacking with previous slider..although its not that noticeable LOLOLL

pattern

I cant find any problem in the other diffs.
Good Luck~

Thanks for the mod xD

update

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Title:Contrail ~Kiseki~
TitleUnicode:Contrail~軌跡~
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Del05
Version:Walao's Insane
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:sprite opening ao no kanata four rhythm beyond the sky into the firmament aokana tv size Chocox walaowey Delis Anxient IamKwaN
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Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-03-21T06:47:18+00:00

Hi, hope I'm not too late

[General]

Video offset conflicts in Delis' Advanced and anx's Insane.
Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
soft-hitwhistle10.wav,
normal-hitclap10.wav (I can't check this with Audacity right now so I'll mention this just in case)

[Easy]

00:30:163 (3,4) - Dude this blanket is slightly off, not sure if it's just me.
00:49:806 - Map something here? When I was playing this I already had troubles from reading 1/1 and 3/2 spacings so this is might be even more confusing.
01:00:341 (1) - Making this a 2/2 slider starting from 01:00:163 is better so the spacing there will be consistent with 00:58:199 (2,3) which will be easier to read.

Didn't find anything in Kwan's Normal.

[Delis' Advanced]

No kiai?
00:11:234 (4) - Is this intentionally unsnapped?
00:09:270 (1,2,3) - Really hard to follow, like, you ignored the guitar sound on that downbeat and it's really hard to follow these two circles 00:09:984 (2,3) while they're based on a different instrument, tbh for this part I would recommend the rhythm in Kwan's diff here.
00:12:663 (2) - The way you placed the tail here makes the flow towards 00:13:199 (3) quite uncomfortable imo, my suggestion would be rotate the tail of 00:12:663 (2) a bit to the left side.
00:13:913 - 00:14:538 - I think these beats should be clickable, also the way you placed a stack like this 00:13:556 (4,5) is really hard to read because most players gonna interpret it as a 1/2 spacing. At least it would be easier to read if you stacked them completely like what you did on 00:46:056 (1,2) . (Well they are a few stacks like these throughout the diff so up to you then)
00:20:520 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - Combined with AR6, this is really hard to read for Advanced, how about changing those 2 circles into a slider?
00:27:127 (5) - Considering how you followed the vocal earlier, 00:27:306 should be a slider because that way covers the vocal that had been left empty better.
00:50:341 (4,5) - I think it's better to follow the vocal here because it's pretty much prominent. Same applies to 00:56:413 (8,9) .
00:51:949 (1) - Ctrl+J? So the flow would be more friendly towards 00:52:484 (2) .
01:10:163 (1,2) - Feels weird imo because 01:10:163 (1) - Has a stronger beat on the repeat but the other one hasn't, maybe it's just me.
Dunno tho, maybe my mod in this diff might not be able to help anything at all. So don't hesitate to reject stuff I pointed out.

I felt like I lost my modding sense now after modding too many kiseki(s) so I'll continue later, don't kd me yet pls thanks.

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-03-21T06:57:46+00:00

SPOILER

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Delis 2016-03-21T18:20:11+00:00

http://puu.sh/nONlS/43ec7d8a6f.zip I would like to keep some of them as is because this is my first "Advanced" so I need more opinions from experienced mappers with advanced stuff.

micchi_chi

764 posts

Joined July 2013

micchi_chi 2016-04-02T11:11:24+00:00

Hey
Very late modding from my modding Q
Sorry for the wait
I will skip diff that I don't want (maybe because I'm not confident enough to mod it) to mod because I'm just that selfish >:D

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[Easy]

Some DS problems~
00:06:056 (1) - Since there's still guitar sound at red tick, maybe it would still be good to just end it at red tick for a better polarity?
00:08:913 (1) - ^
00:10:163 (2) - The curve is not really visible tho .-. maybe curve it more?
00:20:341 (1,2) - I somehow prefer it to be like this http://puu.sh/o3auO/90f5e54d2e.jpg since there's different sound at 00:22:484 so it should be separated... But maybe you won't like double reverse so maybe like this http://puu.sh/o3ay8/125f910161.jpg but it would cause even more polarity problem tho xD
00:23:199 (1) - Kinda unfitting imo since there's no really sound at big white tick :/ I prefer to just start it at 00:22:841 since after the big sound, it go straight to silent and the slider would map the silent part perfectly... Maybe make it tight like this http://puu.sh/o3aCr/bb33249bbf.jpg or keep it as 2/1 slider so it would be a short pause, either would fit well.
00:28:734 (1,2) - Like this would fit better imo :/ http://puu.sh/o3aHI/6583933a12.jpg just like this one 00:31:591 (1,2) - but with reverse slider first. Even would fit better than that second rhythm because the big vocal here 00:30:163 got mapped with slider's head instead of slider's reverse like on the second rhythm...
00:59:627 (4) - Since (3) is placed at the second sound of that I-don't-know-what double sound, maybe it would be better to place (4) on the second sound as well which is here 00:59:806 would cause polarity problem tho, but I thought it would be okay cause you have many of it at this map xD
01:10:163 (1) - Because the vocal sound here is pretty weak (unlike this one 01:11:591 (3) - which is very strong), maybe just ignore the vocal and follow the instrument at white tick? .-. just like what you did here 01:04:627 (1) - like http://puu.sh/o3b3w/1366e96469.jpg or something else you feel fitting.

[Hard]

00:20:341 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'm kinda disappointed that this form nothing :/
00:23:199 (1) - I think single long slider without reverse would fit better tho...
00:40:699 (2,3) - I personally think they're too close >.< maybe move them further away? http://puu.sh/o3bl6/55acd0a912.jpg
00:48:199 (4,5) - Oh the drum sound at red tick... okay I hear it. But don't you think vocal + even bigger drum sound more worth mapping? .-. ctrl+g these should be better imo...
01:21:056 (3,4) - uhh, ctrl+g? I don't really see the point of starting a slider on red tick here :/

[Insane]

00:12:841 (5,1) - Ehm... add jump because of new combo emphasis?
00:13:556 (2,3) - Why are they so close
00:21:949 (1,2) - Since the whole rhythm 00:20:341 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - goes down after one another, maybe this one should too.... Out of place? I think you should move the entire rhythm then :/ I mean like... move them apart 00:19:984 (5,1) - to emphasize big sound and adjust the next http://puu.sh/o3bKr/820a9225df.jpg might be a little bit too far tho...
00:27:306 (1,2,4,5,6) - Nazi : the triangle shape is kinda imperfect, move the triplet a bit upward.
00:29:091 (2,3,4,5) - I think it feels better if you ctrl+g these rhythm since it would cover the vocal better, maybe no if you indeed want to cover two vocal sounds with 1/2 slider tho :/
The rest are fine

[Chocox's Insane]

Maybe AR 8.7 or 8.8 for a slightly increase from prev diff
00:06:056 (1,6) - Nazi : unstacked
00:50:699 (7,8) - Better if ctrl+g-ed imo :/
00:55:877 (6,1) - Would be better if you switch NC imo since the big sound and the finish hitsound is here 00:55:877 and this is not blanketed perfectly. Note : NC should not be always placed after big white tick, before it is okay too as long as it is fitting.
00:58:734 (9,1) - ^
01:05:877 (5,1) - ^
01:08:199 (3) - For case like this, I think it would be better to blanket the body instead of the head, like http://puu.sh/o3cik/9ee009ecdc.jpg
01:09:806 (3,4) - Ctrl+g~~~ fit much better~~~

Ummm, I'll end this here I think
Just a simple suggestion, for the last hardest Insane, maybe you could use some custom name to like "indicate" that it the special hardest diff. It's also close to 5 stars so it could be classified as extra and you already have 4 Insanes xD
Good luck~~~

Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2016-04-03T13:15:03+00:00

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:
Hey
Very late modding from my modding Q
Sorry for the wait
I will skip diff that I don't want (maybe because I'm not confident enough to mod it) to mod because I'm just that selfish >:D

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[Chocox's Insane]
Maybe AR 8.7 or 8.8 for a slightly increase from prev diff Sure I guess , 8.7 will do...
00:06:056 (1,6) - Nazi : unstacked It's already stacked , I think I fixed it before but didn't submit xD
00:50:699 (7,8) - Better if ctrl+g-ed imo :/ I think so too , fixed!
00:55:877 (6,1) - Would be better if you switch NC imo since the big sound and the finish hitsound is here 00:55:877 and this is not blanketed perfectly. Note : NC should not be always placed after big white tick, before it is okay too as long as it is fitting. Fixed. Good point ~
00:58:734 (9,1) - ^ Fixed. ~
01:05:877 (5,1) - ^ Fixed. ~
01:08:199 (3) - For case like this, I think it would be better to blanket the body instead of the head, like http://puu.sh/o3cik/9ee009ecdc.jpg I think it's all good , no change.
01:09:806 (3,4) - Ctrl+g~~~ fit much better~~~ Fixed. ~

Ummm, I'll end this here I think
Just a simple suggestion, for the last hardest Insane, maybe you could use some custom name to like "indicate" that it the special hardest diff. It's also close to 5 stars so it could be classified as extra and you already have 4 Insanes xD
Good luck~~~

My update .. , thanks for the good mod <3!~

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2016-05-30T14:57:24+00:00

Nuuuuu... I'm really sorry that this went to the graveyard due my inactivity. ;w;

Do you still plan to rank this? /w\

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