UNDEAD CORPORATION - Karakurenai · forum

TheProsecutor

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

TheProsecutor 2016-01-08T08:53:33+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, April 25, 2016 at 3:07:24 PM

Artist: UNDEAD CORPORATION
Title: Karakurenai
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Yuugi Hoshiguma subterranean animism パインツリー Pinetree DTM9 Nowa Touhou chireiden Benizome no Oni ga Naku Crimson zun team shanghai alice toho complete box Comiket85 ランコ Ranko buta otome 豚乙女特 SPECIAL
BPM: 170
Filesize: 3454kb
Play Time: 03:07
Difficulties Available:

Crimson (5.08 stars, 643 notes)
Easy (1.48 stars, 202 notes)
Hard (3.74 stars, 568 notes)
Lunatic (4.38 stars, 569 notes)
Normal (2.3 stars, 378 notes)
Nowa's Insane (4.31 stars, 542 notes)
Yuugi Hoshiguma (5.58 stars, 841 notes)

Download: UNDEAD CORPORATION - Karakurenai
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Easy - Complete Jan/12/2016
Normal - Complete Jan/11/2016
Hard - Complete Mar/15/2016
DTM9 Nowa's Insane added Jan/28/2016
Lunatic - Complete Jan/28/2016
Crimson - Complete Jan/8/2016
Yuugi Hoshiguma - Complete Feb/4/2016

Mapset is complete

All diffs except, DTM9 nowa's insane, are made by me

Last edited by TheProsecutor 2016-04-25T19:07:40+00:00, edited 57 times in total.

Video

232 posts

Joined June 2014

Video 2016-01-16T18:53:33+00:00

good luck

TheProsecutor

23 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

TheProsecutor 2016-01-16T19:32:10+00:00

Weegle wrote:
good luck

Thanks!

Weber

1,254 posts

Joined May 2015

Weber 2016-01-18T08:46:24+00:00

hi

Crimson:

00:14:588 (4,5) - make the distance between these match 00:14:411 (3,4) -
00:39:117 (8) - this would probably work better here instead of it's current awkward position http://puu.sh/mA3zD/018b43fe7d.jpg
00:46:352 (2,3,4) - This is extremely awkward to play, as with later examples of the same thing, I would really suggest spreading out 3 and 4##
02:41:941 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:47:588 (7,8,9,10,11) - This is very difficult to react to properly and isn't really good use of spaced notes, bring (7) closer, along with all later examples
00:58:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:588 (1) - This slider's position is slightly off-flow coming out of the stream, move to x:432, y:184 for better results
01:37:529 (8,9) - This slider really doesn't need to come back in the direction you came to hit it in the first place, plays very awkwardly
03:07:617 (1,2) - stream is EXACTLY two notes too long, remove the last 2

TheProsecutor

23 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

TheProsecutor 2016-01-18T19:56:57+00:00

Tatsumaki wrote:
hi

Crimson:

00:14:588 (4,5) - make the distance between these match 00:14:411 (3,4) - (fixed)
00:39:117 (8) - this would probably work better here instead of it's current awkward position http://puu.sh/mA3zD/018b43fe7d.jpg (fixed)
00:46:352 (2,3,4) - This is extremely awkward to play, as with later examples of the same thing, I would really suggest spreading out 3 and 4## (fixed)
02:41:941 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:47:588 (7,8,9,10,11) - This is very difficult to react to properly and isn't really good use of spaced notes, bring (7) closer, along with all later examples (fixed)
00:58:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ (fixed)
01:17:588 (1) - This slider's position is slightly off-flow coming out of the stream, move to x:432, y:184 for better results (fixed)
01:37:529 (8,9) - This slider really doesn't need to come back in the direction you came to hit it in the first place, plays very awkwardly (fixed)
03:07:617 (1,2) - stream is EXACTLY two notes too long, remove the last 2 (fixed)

Ty for the mod!

Nowaie

1,021 posts

Joined December 2014

Nowaie 2016-01-28T21:19:05+00:00

My GD

Changelog

2/2 Made changes according to - Milhofo -'s mod. Thank you <3

Nowa's Insane

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Vocal UNDEAD CORPORATION - .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 104058
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Karakurenai
TitleUnicode:Karakurenai
Artist:UNDEAD CORPORATION
ArtistUnicode:UNDEAD CORPORATION
Creator:TheProsecutor
Version:Nowa's Insane
Source:Touhou
Tags:Yuugi Hoshiguma, subterranean animism
BeatmapID:890691
BeatmapSetID:402146

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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232,248,102294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,88,102470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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282,178,103529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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282,268,103882,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,150,104058,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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320,248,111470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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80,128,115705,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,112,115882,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,208,116058,6,4,P|96:256|168:352,1,150,5|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,360,116588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,256,116764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,112,158058,2,0,P|338:73|328:18,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,104,158411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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168,240,158764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,248,158941,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,184,159117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,176,159294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,163,159470,2,0,P|193:121|170:101,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,175,159823,5,8,0:0:0:0:
106,200,160176,1,2,0:0:0:0:
122,225,160529,1,2,0:0:0:0:
134,252,160882,1,2,0:0:0:0:
258,244,161235,5,4,0:0:0:0:
320,304,161941,6,0,P|272:312|240:304,1,75
152,232,162823,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,120,162999,2,0,P|168:80|208:64,1,75
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312,200,163617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,163705,2,0,P|263:237|216:232,1,75
128,168,164058,6,0,B|144:88|176:88|176:88|176:104,1,112.5
208,184,164411,2,0,P|192:224|104:240,1,112.5
56,184,164764,2,0,P|48:144|64:104,1,75
144,48,165117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,165294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,72,165823,2,0,P|304:72|352:88,1,75
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296,248,168294,1,4,0:0:0:0:
288,240,168647,5,0,0:0:0:0:
280,144,168823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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198,327,169529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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240,248,170058,2,0,B|248:264|248:264|256:264|304:184,1,112.5
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368,168,170764,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,264,170941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,171117,2,0,P|280:128|336:40,1,150
416,48,171647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,136,171823,2,0,L|440:224,1,75
443,225,172088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
438,241,172176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,252,172352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,144,172529,2,0,P|288:80|368:88,1,150
352,288,173058,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,173235,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,144,173411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,208,173588,1,6,0:0:0:0:
352,304,173764,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,173941,5,4,0:0:0:0:
168,168,174117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,64,174294,2,0,P|256:56|304:72,1,75
360,136,174647,2,0,P|312:152|264:144,1,75
264,144,174911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,129,174999,2,0,P|221:97|221:41,1,75
336,56,175352,6,0,L|360:200,1,112.5
304,240,175705,2,0,P|248:208|224:152,1,112.5
288,96,176058,2,0,P|336:112|352:144,1,75
256,256,176411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,168,176588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,96,176764,6,0,P|368:80|424:128,1,150,5|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,224,177294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,296,177470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,200,177647,2,0,P|352:152|384:144,2,75
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Shyotamaze

916 posts

Joined December 2014

Shyotamaze 2016-01-29T23:50:14+00:00

Hi, from #modreqs

General

Add combo colours
Don't use x2 SV, x1,75 should be fine imo
The spacing is really weird, try to get consistent spacing and make jumps only when it's needed

Crimson

00:14:588 (4,5) - Fix blanket
00:20:764 (5) - It's not properly centered
00:23:764 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe space it a bit more and make a curvy shape
00:26:411 (12) - NC
00:38:411 (4,5,6,7) - Not sure about this, it can be tricky to read
00:46:176 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make a simple square
00:47:588 (7,8,9,10,11) - Ctrl + J and make a better shape for the circles
00:47:588 (7,8,9,10,11) - Make a curvy shape
01:36:999 (7,8) - Stack
01:44:411 (3,4) - Weird spacing
02:45:471 (6) - Stack with 02:44:765 (4) - 's end
03:04:352 (1) - Remove NC
03:05:235 (4) - Add NC
03:07:352 (13) - Add NC
03:07:617 (1) - Remove NC

That's it! Be careful with the spacing
Good luck!

TheProsecutor

23 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

TheProsecutor 2016-01-30T04:44:04+00:00

Hi, from #modreqs

General
Add combo colours
Don't use x2 SV, x1,75 should be fine imo
The spacing is really weird, try to get consistent spacing and make jumps only when it's needed
Crimson
00:14:588 (4,5) - Fix blanket (done I think)
00:20:764 (5) - It's not properly centered (done)
00:23:764 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe space it a bit more and make a curvy shape (done)
00:26:411 (12) - NC (done)
00:38:411 (4,5,6,7) - Not sure about this, it can be tricky to read (I thought that too at first but in all my test plays it always felt like one of the easier things to hit)
00:46:176 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make a simple square (done)
00:47:588 (7,8,9,10,11) - Ctrl + J and make a better shape for the circles (done)
00:47:588 (7,8,9,10,11) - Make a curvy shape (done)
01:36:999 (7,8) - Stack (done)
01:44:411 (3,4) - Weird spacing (done)
02:45:471 (6) - Stack with 02:44:765 (4) - 's end (done)
03:04:352 (1) - Remove NC (done)
03:05:235 (4) - Add NC (done)
03:07:352 (13) - Add NC (done)
03:07:617 (1) - Remove NC (done)
That's it! Be careful with the spacing
Good luck!

Ty for the mod!

- Milhofo -

683 posts

Joined February 2014

- Milhofo - 2016-01-31T12:19:21+00:00

Hi, from my 東方Project Queue

[General]

You use a lot of constant spaced patterns, when you could highlight the vocals more by playing a bit more with the spacing, for me personaly that's fine, but for most BN's and if you want to get this ranked it's better to do it, I've been through it with my maps as well
Use "東方Project" for the source, as that's the most widely used, or "Touhou Project" if you prefer, just add the project at least xd
Add more stuff to the tags, the album name is "The Scarlet-Dyed Oni Howls" ("紅染の鬼が哭く"), vocals from "桂琳" and arrangement from "パインツリー" that also goes by "Pinetree" in english I think?

[Nowa's Insane]

00:56:323 - maybe add a note here? to make it consistent with 00:47:588 (1,2,3) -
01:04:705 (5,1) - should be blanketed
01:07:617 - add a note?
01:10:882 (5) - NC
02:58:176 (1,3) - this plays fine for me but idk how a BN will take this overlap in the future

[Insane]

00:20:058 (3,4,5,6,7) - the triple doesn't feel very well to play with that spacing from the other notes, you could change the triple or simply ctrl+g (3) and (4) as a solution
00:22:705 (4,5) - the vocals ask for a bit more spacing here
00:50:941 - why no note here? both vocals and a low volume drum part play here (you could add a single note on 00:50:676 - and push the reverse one blue tick forward)
00:58:529 (5,6,7) - you can push this a bit more to the right because the player will have the cursor at the edge of that reverse slider, but the game still thinks the cursor will come from the starting circle, which makes the space feel really small and clunky
01:01:882 (5,6,7,8) - this doesn't flow very well x.x (compared to the rest)
01:03:470 (1,2) - you can pretty much blanket this
01:26:941 (6,7) - why the sudden decrease in spacing when you have been using a consistent one?
01:31:882 (3,4) - you can also blanket this just by playing around with positioning for a bit
02:07:352 - add a note here and start the spinner at 02:07:529 - ?
02:25:352 - this note should be clickable, why do you put the slider so soon? there's a really high power note in the song here, and it feels really weird not to play it
02:30:294 - same thing
02:42:470 (4,5,6,7) - blanket?
02:57:647 (6) - maybe replace by a triple?
03:05:235 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ok this is fine on paper, but while playing I think the stream is going to be 1/6 because you just introduced 1/6 sliders for the first time, and most players will think the same thing, you should warn us before hand what timing the stream will be by putting a 1/8 slider before the stream (by replacing the first notes of it)

[Crimson]

00:22:882 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - spacing is too short, consider changing it a bit
01:16:352 (7,1) - and 01:17:499 (11,1) - have different spacing from the rest of the stream, try making it consistent
02:31:882 (3,4) - the vocal here hits the highest note but you use the smallest spacing
It's a nice diff and I enjoyed playing it a lot, it's fun, but if you want to get it ranked you need to make your spacing and patterns a lot more consistent as a whole (consistent on the whole map), this is also the mistake I do the most and I hate hearing it but what can we do.. Good luck ^^

[Overall]
Fun and nice map, but needs some work if you want to go for ranking, imo it has been really hard to rank this style of maps, simply because the ranked maps are stagnating a lot in style and everything looks the same ;w; I wish you the best of luck!

~~Have to go lunch, might come back and mod the other insane too if I have time.~~

TheProsecutor

23 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

TheProsecutor 2016-01-31T23:12:42+00:00

- Milhofo - wrote:

Hi, from my 東方Project Queue

[General]
You use a lot of constant spaced patterns, when you could highlight the vocals more by playing a bit more with the spacing, for me personaly that's fine, but for most BN's and if you want to get this ranked it's better to do it, I've been through it with my maps as well
Use "東方Project" for the source, as that's the most widely used, or "Touhou Project" if you prefer, just add the project at least xd
Add more stuff to the tags, the album name is "The Scarlet-Dyed Oni Howls" ("紅染の鬼が哭く"), vocals from "桂琳" and arrangement from "パインツリー" that also goes by "Pinetree" in english I think?
[Nowa's Insane]
00:56:323 - maybe add a note here? to make it consistent with 00:47:588 (1,2,3) -
01:04:705 (5,1) - should be blanketed
01:07:617 - add a note?
01:10:882 (5) - NC
02:58:176 (1,3) - this plays fine for me but idk how a BN will take this overlap in the future
[Insane]
00:20:058 (3,4,5,6,7) - the triple doesn't feel very well to play with that spacing from the other notes, you could change the triple or simply ctrl+g (3) and (4) as a solution (fixed)
00:22:705 (4,5) - the vocals ask for a bit more spacing here (fixed)
00:50:941 - why no note here? both vocals and a low volume drum part play here (you could add a single note on 00:50:676 - and push the reverse one blue tick forward) (fixed)
00:58:529 (5,6,7) - you can push this a bit more to the right because the player will have the cursor at the edge of that reverse slider, but the game still thinks the cursor will come from the starting circle, which makes the space feel really small and clunky (fixed)
01:01:882 (5,6,7,8) - this doesn't flow very well x.x (compared to the rest) (fixed)
01:03:470 (1,2) - you can pretty much blanket this (fixed)
01:26:941 (6,7) - why the sudden decrease in spacing when you have been using a consistent one? (fixed)
01:31:882 (3,4) - you can also blanket this just by playing around with positioning for a bit (fixed)
02:07:352 - add a note here and start the spinner at 02:07:529 - ? (fixed)
02:25:352 - this note should be clickable, why do you put the slider so soon? there's a really high power note in the song here, and it feels really weird not to play it (fixed)
02:30:294 - same thing (fixed)
02:42:470 (4,5,6,7) - blanket? (fixed)
02:57:647 (6) - maybe replace by a triple? (fixed)
03:05:235 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ok this is fine on paper, but while playing I think the stream is going to be 1/6 because you just introduced 1/6 sliders for the first time, and most players will think the same thing, you should warn us before hand what timing the stream will be by putting a 1/8 slider before the stream (by replacing the first notes of it) (fixed I think)

[Crimson]
00:22:882 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - spacing is too short, consider changing it a bit (fixed)
01:16:352 (7,1) - and 01:17:499 (11,1) - have different spacing from the rest of the stream, try making it consistent (fixed)
02:31:882 (3,4) - the vocal here hits the highest note but you use the smallest spacing (fixed)
It's a nice diff and I enjoyed playing it a lot, it's fun, but if you want to get it ranked you need to make your spacing and patterns a lot more consistent as a whole (consistent on the whole map), this is also the mistake I do the most and I hate hearing it but what can we do.. Good luck ^^
[Overall]
Fun and nice map, but needs some work if you want to go for ranking, imo it has been really hard to rank this style of maps, simply because the ranked maps are stagnating a lot in style and everything looks the same ;w; I wish you the best of luck!

~~Have to go lunch, might come back and mod the other insane too if I have time.~~

I'm really glad you enjoyed the map, i'm going to try my best to keep the style of crimson as I continue to go for rank also thanks for the meta data stuff I always dont know what to put there

LigerZero

2,429 posts

Joined August 2013

LigerZero 2016-02-05T12:18:38+00:00

2nd Favorite songs after everything will freeze in UNDEAD CORPORATION touhou project (in all song karakurenai 6th songs after the revolution, xing niose, everything will freeze, yoru naku usagi yume o miru, and chase the rabbit)

in Tags remove "," and added " Touhou chireiden Comiket82 紅染の鬼が哭く Benizome no Oni ga Naku Crimson zun team shanghai alice" and added name guest diff

no kudosu

okay i'm waiting your map to ranked....

discography: t/365678

TheProsecutor

23 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

TheProsecutor 2016-02-05T18:50:57+00:00

LigerZero wrote:
2nd Favorite songs after everything will freeze in UNDEAD CORPORATION touhou project (in all song karakurenai 6th songs after the revolution, xing niose, everything will freeze, yoru naku usagi yume o miru, and chase the rabbit)

in Tags remove "," and added " Touhou chireiden Comiket82 紅染の鬼が哭く Benizome no Oni ga Naku Crimson zun team shanghai alice" and added name guest diff

no kudosu

okay i'm waiting your map to ranked....

discography: t/365678

Thanks for the tag info

LigerZero

2,429 posts

Joined August 2013

LigerZero 2016-02-08T14:13:52+00:00

Sorry i'm here again...

In tags change " The Scarlet-Dyed Oni Howls 桂琳, Comiket82 紅染の鬼が哭く Benizome no Oni ga Naku" to "toho complete box Comiket85 ランコ Ranko buta otome 豚乙女特 SPECIAL"

Because i'm done check again in my computer and listening version ranko and original vocal....

Sorry wrong tags because i'm checking in internet cafe... In internet cafe i'm can't open osu and folder computer because computer in internet cafe is locked by administrator

Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Lumin 2016-02-28T15:54:21+00:00

NM from queue here

[Lunatic]

00:14:764 (5) - fits better as 1/2 repslider
00:17:588 (5) - ^
00:20:058 (3,4,5,6,7) - very hard shape to play and there is no sound at circle 6
00:22:882 (5) - use only one anchor in simply curved sliders.. unrankable and it even looks the same
00:31:794 (6) - no sound
00:32:058 (7,1) - overlap
00:36:999 (7) - slider this long could have some kind of uniqueness
00:42:647 (7) - NC
00:46:882 (5) - ^ just do something about those combos going over 10 it is not good looking in 4 star map and easily fixable (not gonna mention these anymore)
00:57:470 (1,2,3,4) - either follow drums like stream 00:57:470 (1) ->00:58:176 or make that rep end at 00:58:176
01:29:941 (7,1) - overlap
01:32:058 (4) - purify blanket and don't make that anchorspam at the end
01:34:882 (7) - this sudden slider velocity change = NC
01:36:999 (5,7) - overlaps and 7 is a bit ugly slider
01:44:058 (1,2) - lame to stack these notes like this in this part
01:51:117 (5) - this might come as a real surprise under 01:50:411 (3) - , easily un notable
01:53:235 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - slider doesn't fit with that stream
02:11:058 (1,2) - copypaste
02:14:411 (4) - rework that ugly curve at the beginning of this slider
02:16:882 (2) - this should be actually made like this and that slider is ugly
02:24:294 (1) - only one anchor
02:30:823 (6) - sliderend should be clickable circle
02:32:764 (7) - make this slider end at 02:33:823
02:36:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make enough space between notes so they wouldn't lap each other
02:44:764 (17) - did you really think that combo 17 is pretty?
03:06:999 (1) - just make this to circles
only major problem is long combos

[Crimson]

Okay you have 2 major problems in your map
1)ugly sliders, I'll get into this later
2)Like 70% of your map is only straight sliders use VARIATION few good slider shape examples
00:25:705 (8) - NC
at the beginning you use a lot of overlapping, don't really know about some of them
00:36:999 (3) - wow this slider is ugly
00:39:823 (2) - if you're going to make an S make it properly
00:39:823 (2,3) - overlap
00:51:117 (9) - this anchor spam pls. purify it
00:52:529 (3) - just straight sliders this long are bad
00:58:352 (5,1) - overlap
01:06:294 (1,2) - overlap
01:08:058 (7) - I could only see straight sliders here? Meh. VARIATION (make curved or cornered or something)
01:26:411 (3) - put this timing point to 01:27:823 (1) -
01:34:176 (9,2) - ugly sliders~ watch from other people's maps what a good slider looks like (tip: variating between red and white anchors cleverly gives nice looks)
01:33:117 (5) - NC
01:34:705 (1,2) - NC to 2
01:37:705 (9) - shaping
01:53:235 (3) - Slider Velocity change this major -> NC
02:03:117 (5) - REALLY? just learn to make proper sliders this kind of anchor spamming is nono made in 10 seconds and looks better
02:29:941 (10) - major SV change, you know what to do~
02:32:764 (6) - never make simply curved sliders with more than one anchor, unrankable
02:35:588 (7) - ^

[Yuugi Hoshiguma]

00:14:411 (5) - NC
00:22:882 (5) - okay this diff is having same slidershaping problems, by checking my last diff mod i think that you know how to do something so I will not point out bad sliders anymore
00:48:999 (18) - 18 long combo, does this look good for you?
01:00:294 (15) - 15^ just check your combos here, watch that they do not become too big and make it pretty
01:06:647 (3) - this map had same problem as diff earlier but this has 80% slightly curved sliders
01:31:352 (3,5) - avoid notes being this close to each other
01:34:882 (7) - purify
Okay I must go now but pretty much all the same things applies to this diff than I have mentioned in earlier ones.
Take notes. Proper shapes. And learn to map better and more pure. And see yourself becoming a great mapper

I'm out!

TheProsecutor

23 posts

Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

TheProsecutor 2016-02-28T21:45:02+00:00

Lumin wrote:
NM from queue here

[Lunatic]
00:14:764 (5) - fits better as 1/2 repslider (changed)
00:17:588 (5) - ^ (changed)
00:20:058 (3,4,5,6,7) - very hard shape to play and there is no sound at circle 6 (changed pattern)
00:22:882 (5) - use only one anchor in simply curved sliders.. unrankable and it even looks the same (fixed)
00:31:794 (6) - no sound (fixed)
00:32:058 (7,1) - overlap (changed looks better)
00:36:999 (7) - slider this long could have some kind of uniqueness (changed)
00:42:647 (7) - NC
00:46:882 (5) - ^ just do something about those combos going over 10 it is not good looking in 4 star map and easily fixable (not gonna mention these anymore) (fixed no more combos over 10)
00:57:470 (1,2,3,4) - either follow drums like stream 00:57:470 (1) ->00:58:176 or make that rep end at 00:58:176 (not too sure what you mean here)
01:29:941 (7,1) - overlap (changed also looks better)
01:32:058 (4) - purify blanket and don't make that anchorspam at the end (fixed)
01:34:882 (7) - this sudden slider velocity change = NC (fixed)
01:36:999 (5,7) - overlaps and 7 is a bit ugly slider (changed ugly slider into a round slider and blanketed 5,7 instead of overlap)
01:44:058 (1,2) - lame to stack these notes like this in this part (changed)
01:51:117 (5) - this might come as a real surprise under 01:50:411 (3) - , easily un notable (swapped 5 and 6 around)
01:53:235 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - slider doesn't fit with that stream (made slider move the same way as stream)
02:11:058 (1,2) - copypaste
02:14:411 (4) - rework that ugly curve at the beginning of this slider (fixed)
02:16:882 (2) - this should be actually made like this and that slider is ugly (fixed)
02:24:294 (1) - only one anchor (fixed)
02:30:823 (6) - sliderend should be clickable circle (fixed)
02:32:764 (7) - make this slider end at 02:33:823 (fixed)
02:36:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make enough space between notes so they wouldn't lap each other (fixed)
02:44:764 (17) - did you really think that combo 17 is pretty?
03:06:999 (1) - just make this to circles (changed)
only major problem is long combos
[Crimson]
Okay you have 2 major problems in your map
1)ugly sliders, I'll get into this later
2)Like 70% of your map is only straight sliders use VARIATION few good slider shape examples
00:25:705 (8) - NC
at the beginning you use a lot of overlapping, don't really know about some of them
00:36:999 (3) - wow this slider is ugly (changed)
00:39:823 (2) - if you're going to make an S make it properly (fixed)
00:39:823 (2,3) - overlap (fixed)
00:51:117 (9) - this anchor spam pls. purify it (fixed)
00:52:529 (3) - just straight sliders this long are bad (fixed)
00:58:352 (5,1) - overlap (fixed)
01:06:294 (1,2) - overlap (fixed)
01:08:058 (7) - I could only see straight sliders here? Meh. VARIATION (make curved or cornered or something) (fixed)
01:26:411 (3) - put this timing point to 01:27:823 (1) - (fixed)
01:34:176 (9,2) - ugly sliders~ watch from other people's maps what a good slider looks like (tip: variating between red and white anchors cleverly gives nice looks) (fixed)
01:33:117 (5) - NC (fixed)
01:34:705 (1,2) - NC to 2 (fixed)
01:37:705 (9) - shaping (fixed)
01:53:235 (3) - Slider Velocity change this major -> NC (fixed)
02:03:117 (5) - REALLY? just learn to make proper sliders this kind of anchor spamming is nono made in 10 seconds and looks better (fixed)
02:29:941 (10) - major SV change, you know what to do~ (fixed)
02:32:764 (6) - never make simply curved sliders with more than one anchor, unrankable (fixed)
02:35:588 (7) - ^(fixed)
[Yuugi Hoshiguma]
00:14:411 (5) - NC (fixed)
00:22:882 (5) - okay this diff is having same slidershaping problems, by checking my last diff mod i think that you know how to do something so I will not point out bad sliders anymore (fixed)
00:48:999 (18) - 18 long combo, does this look good for you? (fixed)
01:00:294 (15) - 15^ just check your combos here, watch that they do not become too big and make it pretty (fixed)
01:06:647 (3) - this map had same problem as diff earlier but this has 80% slightly curved sliders (fixed)
01:31:352 (3,5) - avoid notes being this close to each other (fixed)
01:34:882 (7) - purify (fixed)
Okay I must go now but pretty much all the same things applies to this diff than I have mentioned in earlier ones.
Take notes. Proper shapes. And learn to map better and more pure. And see yourself becoming a great mapper
I'm out!

thx for the mod, i'm pretty sure i fixed all the sliders

Nowaie

1,021 posts

Joined December 2014

Nowaie 2016-03-05T21:00:01+00:00

Small inside mod
(No kudos)

For me it feels like the kiai time in your difficulties starts just a little bit too early

First one should start from here 00:46:882 -

Second one from here 01:44:764 -

And the third one from here 02:42:647 -

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Also fixed some ugly patterns in my GD

Feedback to Milhofo

- Milhofo - wrote:
Nowa's Insane
00:56:323 - maybe add a note here? to make it consistent with 00:47:588 (1,2,3) - Fixed
01:04:705 (5,1) - should be blanketed Fixed
01:07:617 - add a note? I changed the notes into a kick slider
01:10:882 (5) - NC Fixed
02:58:176 (1,3) - this plays fine for me but idk how a BN will take this overlap in the future BN would've qq'd about it so i made a new pattern to it

Updated map

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Vocal UNDEAD CORPORATION - .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 104058
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Karakurenai
TitleUnicode:Karakurenai
Artist:UNDEAD CORPORATION
ArtistUnicode:UNDEAD CORPORATION
Creator:TheProsecutor
Version:Nowa's Insane
Source:東方Project
Tags:Yuugi Hoshiguma subterranean animism パインツリー Pinetree DTM9 Nowa Touhou chireiden Benizome no Oni ga Naku Crimson zun team shanghai alice toho complete box Comiket85 ランコ Ranko buta otome 豚乙女 特 SPECIAL
BeatmapID:890691
BeatmapSetID:402146

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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2,71082,81576
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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186470,-100,4,1,0,75,0,1
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TheProsecutor

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Joined August 2015

Topic Starter

TheProsecutor 2016-03-05T21:54:28+00:00

DTM9 Nowa wrote:

Small inside mod
(No kudos)

For me it feels like the kiai time in your difficulties starts just a little bit too early

First one should start from here 00:46:882 -

Second one from here 01:44:764 -

And the third one from here 02:42:647 -

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Also fixed some ugly patterns in my GD

Feedback to Milhofo

- Milhofo - wrote:
Nowa's Insane
00:56:323 - maybe add a note here? to make it consistent with 00:47:588 (1,2,3) - Fixed
01:04:705 (5,1) - should be blanketed Fixed
01:07:617 - add a note? I changed the notes into a kick slider
01:10:882 (5) - NC Fixed
02:58:176 (1,3) - this plays fine for me but idk how a BN will take this overlap in the future BN would've qq'd about it so i made a new pattern to it

Updated map

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You are right fixed and updated your map

Kyrot_old

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Kyrot_old 2016-03-17T18:17:22+00:00

Quick skim in editor (pls no kudosu)

Yuugi Hoshiguma:
I hear 1/4 drums at 01:12:470 (2) and 01:15:294 (5) - Maybe add circles?

Normal:
Maybe add a 1/4 repeating slider at 00:22:705 (3) - rather than the long slider?

TheProsecutor

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TheProsecutor 2016-03-17T19:50:48+00:00

Kyrot wrote:
Quick skim in editor (pls no kudosu)

Yuugi Hoshiguma:
I hear 1/4 drums at 01:12:470 (2) and 01:15:294 (5) - Maybe add circles? (I have the notes follow the guitar rhythm here so I want to keep it 1/2)

Normal:
Maybe add a 1/4 repeating slider at 00:22:705 (3) - rather than the long slider? maybe but I want to keep the map 1/2

Thanks

Yoratama

424 posts

Joined February 2016

Yoratama 2016-03-20T01:00:07+00:00

Hi, From #Modreqs, im not good at this

SPOILER

NORMAL
in normal and easy diff, distance snap warning are not allowed (open AiMod mod and check "check distance snap"). so it musn't have a jumps note.
Also, I think you need to remove some of circle in normal Diff, like ( 00:14:411 (3,4,5,6,7) - delete 4 and 6 ) and similliar pattern like that, because it's too hard for normal.
in beatmap information that normal diff is show as hard icon.
HARD
00:14:411 (1,2,3,4) - move a bit, till both stacked
00:38:411 (1) - move to 00:38:941 (4) -
00:38:588 (2) - move toX:368 Y:20
01:03:470 (1,2) - Stack again
02:03:117 (1,2,3) - Not match with vocal, change like 01:05:235 (1,2,3) - ?
02:54:647 (3) - move end slider 1 beat earlier, and add circle 02:54:999 - to follow sound. or make like 01:45:470 (4) -

Hope it Helped

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