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Frederic Chopin - Etude Op. 10-4 [Osu|Taiko]

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jericho2442
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jericho2442
Normal

01:29:306 (5) - new combo here to follow your pattern
01:42:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - i find the timing here makes the spacing hard to read for only a normal diff, maybe try to make the spacing follow the timing changes here more

Hard

00:23:246 (1,2,3) - this timing pattern dont really suit the song, maybe something like this


(suggestion) 00:30:072 (8) - this plays better not being a jump, just try giving it the same spacing as the rest of the combo and see what you think
02:00:482 (1) - remove this newcombo, there aint really a need for it

Insane

01:04:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these streams kinda feel odd to the music, they sound and play better if you take off (6,7) on them both
01:05:856 - if you do the above add a note here, works great ;)
02:00:482 (1) - combo aint really needed again, plays better if you remove this

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great maps, im not good enough with taiko to give a full power mod on them yet so try to get some good mods on them ;)
Frank7654321
42 posts
Joined August 2008
Frank7654321
finally it comes....I just FC inner oni a few weeks ago on AC-3-
anyway,star~
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
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lepidopodus
@jericho2442: All fixed, thank you for modding!
James2250
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2008
James2250
Interesting song to map~
Timing is perfect which means I don't have to try and mod it rightttttt? :P

Normal:
Not the easiest thing for your easiest difficulty but I guess it can pass
01:00:030 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why does this part sound so odd to me....hummm ok --- same for other difficulties, idk if its timing or just odd placement. Look into it?

Hard:
Nice

Insane:
Nice

Really have nothing to complain about (and would prob bubble if there weren't 100 timing sections)
Take a star for now~ (don't kudosu btw)
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
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lepidopodus
@James2250: Well, that part is somewhat ambiguous. So, I need to confirm this one to some one else, well, I should find someone. Thanks for modding!
Leorda
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Joined June 2009
Leorda
Annyong

General
1) I think the Normal diff isn't the beginner-friendly, though. I think I suggest you to make an easy diff with a slow SV and lower AR, OD, HP Drain, and CS. But it's up to you then~
2) Are you sure that ALLLL offset are really fit to the beat?

Normal
00:05:895 (2) - Perhaps make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/40454
00:15:908 (1,2,3) - Maybe, make a blanket combo like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/40456 I think the previous pattern you make doesn't interesting for me, but just suggestion though~
01:00:030 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These timing pattern are very confusing for average player!

Hard
Nice slider fan. BTW, 00:41:210 (7,1) - Are these are jumps or spacing error? Also, just suggestion. Maybe decrease the Approach Rate? Only 1 tick? That's all I can find. Nice diff

Insane
The high Approach Rate are uncomfortable for me, maybe?


Very clasical, though
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
@Leorda: Oh well, the song itself has too much actual BPM change, it's somewhat hard to make nice easy map for this. For timing, someone will confirm, I guess. For AR, if I get more complains about that, I'll fix.
Fixed 00:15:908 (1,2,3) in Normal. Very nice suggestion indeed.
mekadon_old
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Selee
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Joined February 2010
Selee
Star ^^
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
The piano. The timing sections. D: scary timing

[Normal]

01:24:995 (5) - Add a Finish at start of slider
01:29:306 (1) - ^


[Hard]

Nothing here...

[Insane]

01:59:642 (1) - Make this a slider instead? or just be consistent with the ending.

Overall, I think your sliders in Normal could use a bit of fixing. Other than that everything else is fine.

Starr'd
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
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lepidopodus
@animask: Some fixed. Thanks for modding~
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
[Insane]
Crazy and a perfect map !!!
Just a little thing.
01:42:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - The timing isn't the same but using the same combo. I think it should be a new combo for 3 and 5. Or change it to be another like slider.
02:00:482 (2) - Remove finish is sound better.

[Hard]
00:56:033 (6) - 1/4 is better to Hard. Because 1/3 is too hard to play. When it is come suddenly.
01:42:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - Also the problem in Insane
02:00:482 (2) - Remove finish is sound better.

[NOrmal]
01:42:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing and combo problem.

[All]
Great map ever.
And happy B-Day to Chopin////

STAR!
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
@al2e10: Thanks for modding. About new combo in 01:42:474, hmm, I think it's ok for Hard and Insane so I just fixed Normal. About 02:00:482, I tried lowered volume finish sound in there. 00:56:033 in Hard is 1/3, but I used return slider so I think it's ok, but if other modder complains about that, I'll consider to fix it. Again, thanks for modding!
Nakagawa-Kanon
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Nakagawa-Kanon
삼일절에게 준 인세인을 여기에 어프로 용으로 넣어도 될까요

물론 다 완성해서
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
어프루브드쪽은 제가 감당이 힘들 듯 하군요...
Curisu
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Joined January 2010
Curisu
[Insane]
00:01:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - W-What? You don't need hitsounds?Too quiet..Use soft whistle?
00:13:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:15:046 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:20:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:26:432 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:20:012 (5) - Whistle.
00:21:449 (5) - ^
01:01:048 (9) - Clap.
01:02:530 (9) - ^
01:04:011 (9) - ^

[Hard]
Like Insane,use soft whistle in the quiet part.
01:37:804 (4) - Volume+10

[Normal]
Like Insane,use soft whistle in the quiet part.
00:25:402 (2) - copy 00:24:683 (1) and rotate 180°.
02:00:482 (2) - Reverse selection.

~star :D
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
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lepidopodus
@yangzd88: Oh, thanks for modding, almost everything fixed!
Verdisphena
4,240 posts
Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
Insane:

Approach rate +1?

00:04:342 (1) - Add a Finish
00:04:680 (5) - ^
00:05:019 (9) - ^
00:05:358 (13) - Add a finish but only in the begin of the slider
SPOILER
00:05:697 (1) - Add a finish
00:06:889 (7) - ^
00:11:866 (3) - ^
00:12:136 (6) - Add a finish but only in the finish of the slider
SPOILER
00:24:683 (T) - It's better than kiai begins in 00:24:683 and finish in 00:44:803 or 00:47:638
01:00:770 (9) - Add a finish but only in the repetition of the slider
SPOILER
01:02:252 (9) - ^
01:03:733 (9) - ^
01:17:740 (1) - Add a finish
01:18:078 (5) - ^
01:18:417 (9) - ^
01:18:756 (13) - Add a finish but only in the begin of the slider
01:19:095 (1) - Add a finish
01:20:287 (7) - ^

Hard:

00:04:342 (1) - Add a finish but only in the begin of the slider
00:04:680 (2) - ^
00:05:019 (3) - ^
00:05:358 (4) - ^
00:05:697 (1) - Add a finish
00:06:889 (5) - ^
00:11:597 (1) - Add a finish but only in the finish of the slider
00:24:683 (T) - It's better than kiai begins in 00:24:683 and finish in 00:44:803 or 00:47:638
01:00:770 (4) - Add a finish but only in the repetition of the slider
01:02:252 (4) - ^
01:03:733 (4) - ^
01:17:740 (1) - Add a finish but only in the begin of the slider
01:18:078 (2) - ^
01:18:417 (3) - ^
01:18:756 (4) - ^
01:19:095 (1) - Add a finish
01:19:889 (4) - Add a finish but only in the finish of the slider

Normal:

00:06:889 (6) - Add a finish
00:11:597 (5) - Add a finish but only in the finish of the slider
0:24:683 (T) - It's better than kiai begins in 00:24:683 and finish in 00:44:803 or 00:47:638
01:20:287 (4) - Add a finish
01:24:995 (5) - Add a finish but only in the finish of the slider
01:41:037 (1) - 1 grid left?

Is your first insane? is cool x3
Gl with the map
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Add new combo at these spinners. It has bug when made at some period. :o

[Hard]
00:44:803 (1) -
00:57:575 (1) -
01:06:152 (1) -
01:44:471 (1) -
01:47:413 (1) -
01:56:101 (1) -

[Insane]
00:44:803 (1) -
00:57:575 (1) -
01:06:153 (1) -
01:44:471 (1) -
01:47:413 (1) -
01:56:207 (1) -
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
@Verdisphena: Thanks for mod, though implemented just some of them. I usually don't use finish that much.
@ykcarrot: Oh, thanks for noticing that!
Sandpig
847 posts
Joined September 2010
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Insane

00:05:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the slowing down is hard to recognize, maybe you can increase the spacing distance or change the notes at beginning into a slider like 00:17:461 (2) (and I think there is something wrong the timing here ._. the notes come earlier than the piano)
00:53:350 (6,7,8,9) - I don't like these notes and hitsound, recommand changing 6,7,8 into a slider like previous one
01:05:122 (1) - this one is hard to catch
01:05:863 (1) - ^
01:19:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - do something for the slowing down and check timing


Hard

01:00:030 - I don't like the rhythm here, I'd prefer if you make 01:00:030 (1), 01:01:511 (1), 01:02:992 (1) 1/4 longer (extend until a white line) (just advice :>)

and also check timing


Normal

fine to me

star 8-)
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
@Sandpig:
00:05:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It's natural that piano comes about 1/4 after than those beats in that part. And people can't notice 167 --> 177 --> 151 changes by checking spacing or speed of slider cause it isn't significant change. (Unfortunatly, acc will severly hurt.)

Other than that, hmm, I've considered about your suggests but I deicded to stay with current state. I'll see if there are more complains about those things. Thanks for modding.
IceBeam
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IceBeam
[Normal]
Isn't AR a bit high,eh? I'd reduced for 1-2 ticks,and probably OD as well.
Probably it works for Normal,yeah,but if it's the easiest difficulty in mapset,really,it shouldn't be that high.

00:28:276 (3) - Clap?

[Hard]
01:19:100 (1) - Finish or any other hitsound?

[Insane]
00:41:929 (1) - ^
01:30:748 (1) - Jump after steam? Reduce distance a bit at least?

Perfect,as always.
Star~
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
@IceBeam: Some fixed. I'll consider about AR in normal if there is more complain about that. Thanks for modding~
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
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kanpakyin
Hey..
Here my mod:
======================
Blue=suggestion only
Red=I think you should fix this
*Major issue are in Bold

[Normal]
01:00:032(1)-Maybe Timing mistake?..It sounds the rhythm is off of the music
01:51:190(1)-volume-10%
Some suggestion: emm..This diff is okey..but you can make the slider more beautiful

[Hard]
00:26:120(1)-IMO...I don't like this slider...Well..Just my suggestion..You can save if you like it.
00:51:605(1)-^
01:00:030(Offset)-Maybe Timing mistake?It sounds the rhythm is off of the music
01:43:668(4)-New combo
01:58:687(x)add a finish here

[Insane]
01:09:447(x)-In insane I suggest you map this break
01:43:668(4)-New combo

Nice Insane0.0
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
@kanpakyin: Thanks for modding. About that timing, that isn't off that much. Hmm.. After giving some thought, I decided to stay as current state for those suggestions, as for most of them I already considered at least once. I'm very sorry about that.
Kiddo-Kun
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Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
I found nothing wrong with this map.
I never find anything wrong with your maps -.-

STAR
Niva
Global Moderator
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Niva
Mod :D

[Insane]
00:15:369 (8) - If you flip-horizontal this you can see this slider isn't same with (7). But it's barely noticeable.
01:40:683 (9) - Curve this smoother with more waypoints? Maybe like this:
SPOILER

[Hard]
-> FC on 1st try with 98% acc... Nice Hard :D
01:29:311 (1,2,3,4) - Make these four slider fans maybe?

[Normal]
00:23:964 (3) - Add clap?
01:24:641 (4) - One grid right maybe? Not too sure about this

The rest is perfect, another nice map :)
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
@Nivalis: Mostly fixed. Always thanks for your modding!
rrtyui
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rrtyui
:)
Shana
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Shana
별 익스프레스!
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
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OnosakiHito
Just Amazing.
One more Muzukashii for Drum set.~
OzzyOzrock
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OzzyOzrock
The Inner Oni is really damn hard, lol.
Zekira
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Zekira
asdgqrewy

It's really kinda difficult when the BPM changes in between stanzas @_@

Download: Frederic Chopin - Etude Op. 10-4 (lepidopodus) [Zek's Red Lines].osu
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
Ah, finally, thanks a lot, Zekira!
Zekira
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Zekira
I just wanted to make Insane, that's all.
This is actually the same motivation that I have when I want to map something, lol.
Rikers
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Rikers
It's be pretty nice if I added some dancers like in the games to give it a more taiko feel x3
Nice map though
too bad its a bit hard for me xD
yuan0312
yuan0312
OP10-4
Numbers 596108
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Numbers 596108
Taiko no Tatsujin :3
Tomboy_old_1
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Tomboy_old_1
*- Good Job Lepido! -*
~ Star ~
arien666
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arien666
As Zekira gave timing and I trust Zekira,
At least, it's worth to have star-symbol orz



edit. Garr... It seems fine mapset orz
And timing is got by some good timer so

Bubbled :3
ps. Not sure if it would be popped quickly orz
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus

arien666 wrote:

ps. Not sure if it would be popped quickly orz
Then I'll blame arken lol
jk.

EDIT:
@#$&#%$@& NAMCO WUT
arien666
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arien666
After just 6 nazi 1/12 note timing moved as mapper's bubble popped , fixed bubble FFF
GARR!!!
Larto
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Larto
Yeah, why not.
Andrea
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Andrea
[Insane]

01:05:576 (6) - This note shouldn't be there or I'm wrong?

Awesome map, though.
ziin
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ziin
01:04:372 - wasn't mapped on the previous section. It fits the melody. (6) is mapping the low note, same as (5) on the one before it, so I don't think there's anything wrong.
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
@Larto: Thanks a lot!
@osuplayer111: Oh, that note, that's my purpose, to make a map a little harder :P
@ziin: Exactly, thanks!
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Kiddo-Kun
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Kiddo-Kun
I've been waiting for this map ^^
GJ.
arien666
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arien666
Lesson = DO NOT be afraid about timing
If it's great and timed by expert timer, let's approve this :3

Good job lepidon <3
Musty
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Musty
HeadShot.
Garven
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Garven
Hello map that got ranked before I could mod it, how are you doing?

Gratz, lepi. :D
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