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yst - the lost dedicated

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Blind
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Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Blind
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 19 March 2016 at 14:39:56

Artist: yst
Title: the lost dedicated
Source: THE BMS OF FIGHTERS 2010 - The Evolution of War -
Tags: bms
BPM: 134
Filesize: 3265kb
Play Time: 00:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Normal (1.8 stars, 101 notes)
  2. unwanted (5.94 stars, 617 notes)
Download: yst - the lost dedicated
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Last edited by Blind , edited 19 times in total.
Aezis
216 posts
Joined May 2015
Aezis
unwanted:

00:28:640 - Add a circle here
00:59:088 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I'd honestly recommend remapping this part. It's really bland, I suggest moving every 4 notes around, rather than just staying in the same spot
01:01:103 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is extremely hard to read and overmapped, try spacing it out a bit, this is harder to read than tag4
01:13:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is a mess, use ctrl+shift+f to convert a slider into a stream
01:13:976 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - There is way too much overlapping notes, clean it up a bit
01:42:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - This makes for a really weird angle, make it flow a little bit smoother
Blind
11 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Blind

Aezis wrote:

unwanted:

00:28:640 - Add a circle here - makes sense, done
00:59:088 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I'd honestly recommend remapping this part. It's really bland, I suggest moving every 4 notes around, rather than just staying in the same spot - yeah remapped
01:01:103 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is extremely hard to read and overmapped, try spacing it out a bit, this is harder to read than tag4 - remapped as well
01:13:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is a mess, use ctrl+shift+f to convert a slider into a stream - made a bit smoother
01:13:976 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - There is way too much overlapping notes, clean it up a bit - yeah it was pretty hard to read made it easier to read
01:42:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - This makes for a really weird angle, make it flow a little bit smoother - changed slider angle
ty for mod
Benpoi
9 posts
Joined May 2014
Benpoi
Mod so Blind Senpai will notice me >////<

unwanted:

00:42:969 (1) - move this to (435, 299) so it is horizontal with 3
00:43:080 (2) - move along to (396, 204) (midpoint of 1 and 3) so it flows nicer
00:43:416 (4) - to (264, 104)
00:43:528 (5) - to (226, 199)
00:44:312 (10) - to (306, 162) so it actually has a pattern

00:45:655 - In my opinion, there really needs to be a circle here, subsequently 6,7,8 need to be moved slightly to compensate. This needs to be done for all the patterns from now to the next Kiai (unless you liked it mapped to the foreground beat)

01:13:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - inconsistent spacing, please fix
Blind
11 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Blind

Benpoi wrote:

Mod so Blind Senpai will notice me >////<

unwanted:

00:42:969 (1) - move this to (435, 299) so it is horizontal with 3
00:43:080 (2) - move along to (396, 204) (midpoint of 1 and 3) so it flows nicer
00:43:416 (4) - to (264, 104)
00:43:528 (5) - to (226, 199)
00:44:312 (10) - to (306, 162) so it actually has a pattern end of the musical phrase here so i made the last 'mini' jump bigger. it wasnt distance snapped though so i guess it looked out of place. ty for pointing out that it didnt look right. i distance snapped it now to make it consistent with the one that occurs before [00:37:260 (11,12)]

i used distance snap for all these mini jumps

also im not trying to get a perfect looking map, it wouldnt suit the song to have perfect patterns because of the interesting pitch bending of the song AND the title. "lost" really does not suggest aesthetic patterns to me. there have been some compromises though

sorry poi boi everything above (except for last point) is not going to happen hehe

of course i tried out every single mod i didnt actually ignore

00:45:655 - In my opinion, there really needs to be a circle here, subsequently 6,7,8 need to be moved slightly to compensate. This needs to be done for all the patterns from now to the next Kiai (unless you liked it mapped to the foreground beat) - aaaaaaaah give me time to think about this one

01:13:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - inconsistent spacing, please fix - fixed(ish) now yay looks a little neater and more playable
TY FOR MOD
Cheesecake
729 posts
Joined December 2013
Cheesecake
Modded over skype
13:32:43 Cheesecake: 00:02:670 (2,3) - same note could be one point
13:32:49 Cheesecake: stack
13:32:50 Cheesecake: even
13:32:58 Cheesecake: apples to all other sets of 4
13:34:28 Cheesecake: 00:08:715 (5) - this should decrease in spacing since pitch goes down
13:34:36 Blind: OK i am back
13:34:38 Cheesecake: 00:08:939 (1) - should have much higher spacing
13:36:51 Blind: 00:02:670 (2,3) - same note could be one pointno the pitch changes
13:37:59 Cheesecake: listening on 50% they sound exactly the same
13:38:10 Cheesecake: actually no it goes up slightly
13:38:10 Cheesecake: hm
13:38:10 Blind: they are like a semitone apart
13:38:23 Blind: sorry no it is a WHOLE tone apart
13:39:01 Cheesecake: also for like this 00:03:118 (4) - you have 1.83x but for 00:14:312 (5) - this you have 2.05x pls keep spacing consistant when the music is consistant thanks
13:39:12 Blind: tanks
13:39:38 Cheesecake: 00:16:103 (1,2,3,4) - ok for shit like this where it could be a stream you should try and only put clickable parts on red and white ticks
13:40:01 Cheesecake: also youre starting and ending sliders on blue ticks which is dISGUSTING for rhythm
13:40:23 Blind: hehe the one at the end right
13:40:31 Cheesecake: yeah that sucks
13:40:40 Cheesecake: 00:17:446 (7,8) - hang yourself
13:40:57 Cheesecake: but anyway when youre replacing streams with sliders and stuff make clickable not on blue tick ok cool
13:42:19 Cheesecake: 00:23:491 (2,1,2,1) - these bits being on linear flow is eh to me
13:42:46 Cheesecake: youve got the kicks and then the cymbals (?) which are all quite strong so i dont think it should just be boring and linear like that
13:43:30 Cheesecake: 00:27:969 (2) - i think you probably meant to stack this but something broke
13:44:26 Cheesecake: 00:30:431 (1,2) - ok for literally every one of these i dont like it because you're making the clickable parts act like doubles which isnt ok for this music
13:44:36 Cheesecake: lets say for the kickslider
13:44:40 Cheesecake: it starts on nothing
13:44:43 Cheesecake: and ends on a hat
13:44:44 Cheesecake: ??????????????????
13:44:56 Blind: youve got the kicks and then the cymbals (?) which are all quite strong so i dont think it should just be boring and linear like thatim using clap
13:45:02 Blind: cymbals are in the music
13:45:10 Cheesecake: tbh when i mod i turn off hitsounds
13:45:13 Cheesecake: all effect sounds
13:45:19 Cheesecake: so i can actually listen to the music
13:45:51 Cheesecake: anyway those strong beats shouldnt be linear
13:46:00 Cheesecake: i only really like to use linear flow when its a string of hats or smthn
13:46:22 Cheesecake: 00:45:655 - missed a beat
13:46:32 Cheesecake: 00:47:446 - same
13:46:36 Cheesecake: omg you keep on doing that
13:46:41 Cheesecake: dont do that
13:47:44 Cheesecake: 00:59:088 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ok this is all kinds of fucky because youve got stronger flow breaks on offbeats than on beats
13:48:12 Blind: offbeats are cool :(
13:48:24 Cheesecake: 00:59:424 (4) - like this makes the cursor flow turn 180 degrees and then 00:59:536 (1) - this about 80 degrees but that (1) is so much stronger because it has the kick
13:49:22 Cheesecake: 01:14:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - wew lad not so big
13:49:42 Blind: it's not that big -.-
13:49:56 Cheesecake: its a LOT bigger than the previous spacing for no reason
13:50:17 Cheesecake: 01:15:431 (2,4,6) - so youre missing out lots of beats after these
13:50:32 Cheesecake: should be a triplet every red tick in this part
13:50:47 Cheesecake: 01:15:767 - omg theres also one here
13:51:40 Cheesecake: 01:15:431 (2,3,4,5) - so this should become a septet (stream of 7 notes) and then this 01:16:327 (6,7) - a triplet
13:52:07 Cheesecake: you could get away with using kicksliders as well
13:52:13 Blind: oh i missed all of those triplets
13:52:19 Cheesecake: since you have stronger beats on the white and red ticks and then weaker on the blues
13:52:26 Cheesecake: by the way you dont have to actually apply any of this
13:52:30 Cheesecake: just keep in mind for your next map
13:52:39 Cheesecake: for new mappers i see modding as modding the mapper not the map
13:52:48 Blind: no i change eveerything...
13:52:51 Cheesecake: 01:19:461 (4,8) - ew inconsistent overlap
13:53:08 Cheesecake: by the way triplet triangles are cancer pls dont do them
13:53:24 Blind: they are ez...
13:53:40 Cheesecake: spaced 1/4 making sharp angles are (puke)
13:53:55 Cheesecake: 01:34:685 (8,9,1) - omg inconsistently spaced kys
13:54:23 Blind: whops
13:54:24 Cheesecake: 01:44:200 (5) - you have a stream jump here but this isnt a strong beat
13:54:29 Cheesecake: the one afterwards IS
13:54:38 Cheesecake: 01:44:648 (1) - same
13:54:53 Cheesecake: you're making new combos and stream jumps on offbeats and not on beat which is (puke)
13:55:02 Cheesecake: 01:45:095 (1,2,3,4) - honestly just end it all you sick fuck
13:55:35 Blind: hehe
13:55:39 Cheesecake: 01:56:401 (7) - add finish hs
13:55:44 Cheesecake: and maybe nc
13:55:48 Cheesecake: if you like it when people do that
13:55:57 Cheesecake: i know i do thats why i suggest
13:56:05 Blind: nc?
13:56:14 Cheesecake: new combo
13:56:24 Blind: oh
13:56:36 Cheesecake: you dont have to do it if you dont want to i just think its stylish

replaced names and such
Last edited by Cheesecake , edited 2 times in total.
MEK
66 posts
Joined September 2013
MEK
00:22:372 (5) - missed a clap note
Blind
11 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Blind

MEK wrote:

00:22:372 (5) - missed a clap note
thx
unko
517 posts
Joined March 2014
unko

Cheesecake wrote:

Modded over skype
same :D
Blind
11 posts
Joined June 2013
Topic Starter
Blind

Microsoft Vista wrote:

Cheesecake wrote:

Modded over skype
same :D
NO
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