1. Easy (1.52 stars, 118 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 416 notes)
3. MeLLoN (4.98 stars, 314 notes)
4. Normal (3.88 stars, 184 notes)

MeLLoN wrote:

sorry i'm late ><
finished~

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
0:37:833 (3) left 1 grid? // no
1:19:976 (3) down 1 grid? // no

[MeLLoN]
0:38:904 (5,6) unsnapped? // They are snapped.

[Normal]
1:17:119 (5,6,1...) right 1 grid? // fixed
nice diff~

[easy]
nice

starrrrrr

karenying wrote:

General
BG size should be 1024*768 or 800*600,but yours is 1024*640,resize it,or fine new one? Quoting this, having a letterboxed BG feels weird, try finding another one (I'd cut this one, but there's a frame in the image...)
Delete .osb Read please

• Video contents are kinda "borderline".

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:17:654 (2) - it's way more intuitive 1/2 later

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Nothing to say, but maybe one more break wouldn't hurt :X

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Nothing to say

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:28:904 (2,3) - i know this kind of jump is used nowadays, but you used it only here. This made me think that you used it elsewhere in the map and i mistimed two jumps that looked similiar because of that.
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:38:904 (5,6) - no please. This is, like, unreadable and doesn't match any other patterns.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

karenying wrote:

General
BG size should be 1024*768 or 800*600,but yours is 1024*640,resize it,or fine new one? Quoting this, having a letterboxed BG feels weird, try finding another one (I'd cut this one, but there's a frame in the image...) // I'll change BG to 16:9 ratio image. I tried to find 4:3 ratio image but it is not exist. I won't crop it.
Delete .osb Read please

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)

• Video contents are kinda "borderline".

// I think so too. I'll conform to BAT's opinion.

- Easy:

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:17:654 (2) - it's way more intuitive 1/2 later

// fixed

- Normal:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Nothing to say, but maybe one more break wouldn't hurt :X

- Insane:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Nothing to say

narakucrimson wrote:

[Easy]

1:02:833 (3) - Maybe move this one grid up and two left?
1:04:262 (4) - Then, maybe you should move this one grid down and two left to keep it symmetrical.
1:05:690 (5) - And place this in the middle of the screen.
1:11:404 (2) - Move this one grid up?
// I see what you saying, but I won't change the position of notes if it isn't major issue.

Aenna wrote:

ykmellon

1. "Star2" is too big resize it to 52x50

1. 00:01:405 (1) - Increase volume gradually like the other diffs., It'd sound cool.
2. Great~

1. 00:01:405 (1) - Increase volume gradually here too.
2. 00:01:405 (1) - Uh starts the same way as easy, Flip it horizontally?
3. 00:34:262 (1,2) - This looks ugly try to make the overlap the same as the other sliders.

1. 00:13:369 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is not consistent here, increase the distance between (3)&(4)
2. 00:25:154 (6,1,2) - New Combo starts on (6), remove the new combo placed on (1)
3. 01:00:333 (1) - This spinner sounds better if you end it here: 01:01:226 and place a finish too.
4. 01:13:458 (9,1) - This could overlap less, using distance snap, ie.

1. 01:14:172 (8,1) - Color stacking, looks ugly, Unstack (1)
2. 01:25:601 (8,1) - ^

Yay

Gonzvlo wrote:

General:

1. "Star2" is too big resize it to 52x50 // fixed to 52*52

Easy:

1. 00:01:405 (1) - Increase volume gradually like the other diffs., It'd sound cool. // I took mute sliderslide.wav and slidertick.wav at this part. Because that slider's sound bothering me. So unfortunately, your suggestion doesn't work. I'll keep this custom hitsound
2. Great~

Normal:

1. 00:01:405 (1) - Increase volume gradually here too.
2. 00:01:405 (1) - Uh starts the same way as easy, Flip it horizontally? // Both sliders are same clockwise.
3. 00:34:262 (1,2) - This looks ugly try to make the overlap the same as the other sliders. // fixed

Insane:

1. 01:14:172 (8,1) - Color stacking, looks ugly, Unstack (1) // no
2. 01:25:601 (8,1) - ^

Yay

Sandpig wrote:

Insane

02:02:119 (1,2,3,4) - although it's a insane I'd like to suggest you change them into a repeat slider like you have in other diffs(you can use 0.5x if it looks too long). It feels bad to play with notes that snapped on 1/6. I know it goes with the music, but not everyone has heard it before playing. And I thought they should be the same as 00:24:976 (1,2,3,4), but they were not.
// I see what you say, but I won't change it to slider. I fixed it to stacks.

Sandpig wrote:

MeLLoN

00:26:762 (4) - I think it plays better if this circle is stacked with 00:26:940 (1)

Done

Leorda wrote:

Annyong

Sorry for delay~

[General]
Your MP3 Bit Rate is over 192kbps. You need to re-encode it, otherwise, the MP3 is bad to hear it
// No. Peppy said VBR V2 is rankable, and the MP3 isn't bad. D:

SPOILER

[Easy]
01:38:726 (1) - This spinner are too short >.<
02:12:297 (1) - ^ // Well.. I think it's enough to clear.

[Normal]
AR +1? // OK~

[MeLLoN]
Fine~

[Insane]
01:48:369 (8) - Put this away from previous slider? // fixed

I love you // >_<

Alace wrote:

btw why do you guys like to map ero game songs >//<

• 
  01:13:904 : Add a circle

• 
  01:23:726 : Add a circle

• 
  01:25:690 (4): Add finish at the beginning
  01:35:512 (4,5): Exchange

• 
  01:13:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8): Add a little space between these circles
  01:25:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8): ^

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~

My suggestions:

[Easy]

• 
  01:13:904 : Add a circle // No

[Normal]

• 
  01:23:726 : Add a circle // OK~

[Insane]

• 
  01:13:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8): Add a little space between these circles // I keep the stack.
  01:25:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8): ^

Star and Kudosu Star for perfect mapping~

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~

[MeLLoN]

• 
  01:25:690 (4): Add finish at the beginning Done
  01:35:512 (4,5): Exchange No

Star and Kudosu Star for perfect mapping~

kioukiou wrote:

Red line and green line overlapped with each other, it's not a good idea imo.

Change offset to -23 ms. (All diff)

Don't forget check snap、green lines..etc // Fixed all

Other stuff are fine.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

00:01:048 (x) - This green line seems unused to me. Remove it and use the offset for the volume. // nah~

[MeLLoN]

02:02:119 (1) - Add a finish at the end of this slider like you did on the other difficulties. Much better to me. // I totally agree with it. Please forgive me adding finish at it without your allow, MelloN. >_<

Fix and I'll rank >w<

EDIT: Ranked~