1. Seems fine, event tho I'd like to have an easy diff, the song is short and bpm isn't that high..

1. 00:08:144 (3,4,5) - about this one sounds really inconsistent and not fiting your previous parts, this 00:08:362 - needs a click action to follow the melody in the song, yeah the same as you was following in the before parts 00:03:144 (4) - 00:05:753 (4) - , I know there is a new beat added to the melody 00:08:579 (4) - , but I still believe you can do it better, adding some circles instead of sliders don't hurt
2. 00:09:884 (1,1) - pattern would look cleaner if you don't overlap this, its easy to fix, and to be honest the current pattern doesn't looks planned
3. 00:11:405 (2) - whistle at the end of this slider doesn't really fit the song, it doesn't fit better at 00:12:057 (3) - with the melody? same here 00:14:014 (2) - and maybe in other places as well
4. 00:17:275 (3) - 00:19:884 (3) - etc you really could use more whistles being honest, hitsounds atm looks really simple, even tho its acceptable I'd love to see a more complex hitsouding in this map, even work a bit better with the default whistle will be cool, a every whistle at second stanza (following your combos) would add some extra nice emphasis to the beatmap, of course apply to both diffs
5. 00:44:666 (1,2,3) - all your diff is structure using distance snap, so I dont see the reason or consistency behind this spacing, just use 1,40 DS that is what the map is following. There are another places that need some more spacing, but you didn't, so I don't see why this one is special o.o.
6. 00:45:971 (3,1) - 00:12:927 (5,1) - same as above
7. 00:49:992 (1) - reduce a bit the volume at spinner body, sounds really distracting and restore it back at spinner end
8. 01:08:579 (2) - I'd rotate 2 a bit so the direction flow better to both sides 01:08:144 (1,3) - , for example:
   
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9. 01:13:362 (1,2) - 01:19:449 (3,4) - blanket is off

1. same about hitsounds as hard diff, I think they could be better, actually the are just too simple tbh
2. 00:15:535 use a 1/2 slider here instead? fit better the music, just like you did with in a similar part 00:36:405 (7) - , consistency is really important when mapping, so keep them the same
3. 00:15:971 (1,2) - not that off but blanket can be better, also movement 00:15:971 (1,2) - kinda not flow wells with the slider curve, I know that the sliders have leniency, but this is a diff for newbies and they usually follow sliders from the start to the end, I'd love if you build this pattern in a different way
4. 00:49:884 (1) - reduce volume at spinner body, sounds bit annoying tbh and restore it at spinner end.
5. 01:00:318 (3) - not important, but seems really not nice slider shape imo, if you like it keep it, but I think it can be alot better
6. 01:17:710 (7) - rhythm not that nice imo, use a 1/1 slider an a circle in 01:18:578 - , if you notice 01:18:578 - is were your NC also should be.

Natsu wrote:

Yo:


General:

1. Seems fine, event tho I'd like to have an easy diff, the song is short and bpm isn't that high.. Though yeah, I already made Normal pretty Easy-like so...

Hard:

1. 00:08:144 (3,4,5) - about this one sounds really inconsistent and not fiting your previous parts, this 00:08:362 - needs a click action to follow the melody in the song, yeah the same as you was following in the before parts 00:03:144 (4) - 00:05:753 (4) - , I know there is a new beat added to the melody 00:08:579 (4) - , but I still believe you can do it better, adding some circles instead of sliders don't hurt Tried to make it better.
2. 00:09:884 (1,1) - pattern would look cleaner if you don't overlap this, its easy to fix, and to be honest the current pattern doesn't looks planned That WAS planned, but I guess it didn't turn out that good, so I fixed.
3. 00:11:405 (2) - whistle at the end of this slider doesn't really fit the song, it doesn't fit better at 00:12:057 (3) - with the melody? same here 00:14:014 (2) - and maybe in other places as well That whistle sound indicates only one specific sound, so I managed hitsounds differently as I'll state later.
4. 00:17:275 (3) - 00:19:884 (3) - etc you really could use more whistles being honest, hitsounds atm looks really simple, even tho its acceptable I'd love to see a more complex hitsouding in this map, even work a bit better with the default whistle will be cool, a every whistle at second stanza (following your combos) would add some extra nice emphasis to the beatmap, of course apply to both diffs Put a new hitsound on every second stanza. Hope it works out well.
5. 00:44:666 (1,2,3) - all your diff is structure using distance snap, so I dont see the reason or consistency behind this spacing, just use 1,40 DS that is what the map is following. There are another places that need some more spacing, but you didn't, so I don't see why this one is special o.o. [b]Ummmmmmm yeah okay...
6. 00:45:971 (3,1) - 00:12:927 (5,1) - same as above[/b] same as above
7. 00:49:992 (1) - reduce a bit the volume at spinner body, sounds really distracting and restore it back at spinner end ofc
8. 01:08:579 (2) - I'd rotate 2 a bit so the direction flow better to both sides 01:08:144 (1,3) - , for example: Fixed it like that.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:13:362 (1,2) - 01:19:449 (3,4) - blanket is off So you do care about 1 degree misblanket lol, I thought you don't care because your map had a lot of misblankets!

Normal:

1. same about hitsounds as hard diff, I think they could be better, actually the are just too simple tbh Yeah fixed that.
2. 00:15:535 use a 1/2 slider here instead? fit better the music, just like you did with in a similar part 00:36:405 (7) - , consistency is really important when mapping, so keep them the same ok
3. 00:15:971 (1,2) - not that off but blanket can be better, also movement 00:15:971 (1,2) - kinda not flow wells with the slider curve, I know that the sliders have leniency, but this is a diff for newbies and they usually follow sliders from the start to the end, I'd love if you build this pattern in a different way Change the whole part, hope it's better now.
4. 00:49:884 (1) - reduce volume at spinner body, sounds bit annoying tbh and restore it at spinner end. ok
5. 01:00:318 (3) - not important, but seems really not nice slider shape imo, if you like it keep it, but I think it can be alot better Changed that as there were some complaints about that before too.
6. 01:17:710 (7) - rhythm not that nice imo, use a 1/1 slider an a circle in 01:18:578 - , if you notice 01:18:578 - is were your NC also should be. Hmm okay. I wanted to make this map really Easy-like but I guess it didn't work well overall...

If you fix bold points call me back, since I believe those should be fixed

Riviclia wrote:

Normal

00:09:884 (6) - 이것도 3/2 길이로 하시지 앞에 것들처럼 뒤로 이어지는 느낌이 아니어서 여기는 끊었음

Hard

01:00:753 (2) - 밑으로 굽혀요 원래 그랬었는데 위에서 누군가의 모딩에 의해 이렇게 바꿨는데 지금이 더 나은 거 같음

정말 짧고 재미없는 모딩

Doyak wrote:

So you do care about 1 degree misblanket lol, I thought you don't care because your map had a lot of misblankets

Riviclia wrote:

Normal

00:09:884 (6) - 이것도 3/2 길이로 하시지

Hard

01:00:753 (2) - 밑으로 굽혀요

정말 짧고 재미없는 모딩

F1r3tar wrote:

I remember playing this game years ago. Good memories.

[C u r i] wrote:

저도 랭크시켜보고 싶어요옷 ㅠㅠ

Lanturn wrote:

Nice. Grats!

Natsu wrote:

gratz

ByBy13 wrote:

Congratulations! ^^

Sangzin wrote:

이건 언제 랭만드셨대 ㄷㄷ

kyoujinX7 wrote:

naisu!

klonoa wrote:

YAY RANKED