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[General]
offset = 2845ms [+15ms from current]
(I recommend to check with other timing hunters before accepting this offet :3)
[Easy]
:3
[Kizuna]
00:27:908 - Umm... This part takes 1/4 of HP bar (If not break) but dunno about necessery of this. I'll leave atm :3
01:00:486 (1,2,3) - Intended spacing miss or mistake :3?
[HeiL's Color]
Some notes are not fit with melody imo ;_;
Wonder about star-symbol but I'll leave atm ;_;
Good luck :3
offset = 2845ms [+15ms from current]
(I recommend to check with other timing hunters before accepting this offet :3)
[Easy]
:3
[Kizuna]
00:27:908 - Umm... This part takes 1/4 of HP bar (If not break) but dunno about necessery of this. I'll leave atm :3
01:00:486 (1,2,3) - Intended spacing miss or mistake :3?
[HeiL's Color]
Some notes are not fit with melody imo ;_;
Wonder about star-symbol but I'll leave atm ;_;
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
thx modding and star~arien666 wrote:
[General]
offset = 2845ms [+15ms from current] no
[Kizuna]
00:27:908 - Umm... This part takes 1/4 of HP bar (If not break) but dunno about necessery of this. I'll leave atm :3 add object
01:00:486 (1,2,3) - Intended spacing miss or mistake :3? no
Easy
00:53:455 - this timing is usnapped(serious)
00:38:455(7) - remove clap and add a finish hitsound
00:52:986(1) - a bit loud
Kizuna
star rating is too higher than Easy.
i mean that your diff spread is not really good.
try adding more notes in Easy diff or make a Normal diff imo
00:52:986 - this timing is useless
00:53:455 - usnapped
00:15:486(7) - MOVE 1 grid up (lv3)
00:15:720(8) - x:432 y:280
00:52:400(13) - finish and clap
i think this diff's hitsounds is lack of change,but anyway its not bad
HeiL's Color
00:05:876(2) - maybe del
00:11:267(3) - remove whistle
00:17:595(5) - ^
i think this section has too many whistle
00:24:392(2) - remove whistle
00:25:330(8) - ^
00:26:267(9) - ^
00:31:892(4) - ^
00:33:767(8) - ^
00:36:580(6) - ^
00:37:517(6) - ^
00:38:455(8) - remove whistle and add finish
00:39:392(3) - rmeove whistle
00:41:267(9) - ^
00:43:142(6) - ^
why not add some clap at kiaitime,but its not bad now
starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
00:53:455 - this timing is usnapped(serious)
00:38:455(7) - remove clap and add a finish hitsound
00:52:986(1) - a bit loud
Kizuna
star rating is too higher than Easy.
i mean that your diff spread is not really good.
try adding more notes in Easy diff or make a Normal diff imo
00:52:986 - this timing is useless
00:53:455 - usnapped
00:15:486(7) - MOVE 1 grid up (lv3)
00:15:720(8) - x:432 y:280
00:52:400(13) - finish and clap
i think this diff's hitsounds is lack of change,but anyway its not bad
HeiL's Color
00:05:876(2) - maybe del
00:11:267(3) - remove whistle
00:17:595(5) - ^
i think this section has too many whistle
00:24:392(2) - remove whistle
00:25:330(8) - ^
00:26:267(9) - ^
00:31:892(4) - ^
00:33:767(8) - ^
00:36:580(6) - ^
00:37:517(6) - ^
00:38:455(8) - remove whistle and add finish
00:39:392(3) - rmeove whistle
00:41:267(9) - ^
00:43:142(6) - ^
why not add some clap at kiaitime,but its not bad now
starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Topic Starter
>TTTTTTTTTTTT
all done!(my diff)
thx!
all done!(my diff)
thx!
good
Star 
So many stars and so few mods... time to fix that!
Easy:
00:10:330 (1,2,3,4) - Give this some pattern? Also, try and not have (1) touch the slider from before.
00:17:830 (1) - Try to arrange in the center of the map?
00:23:923 (1) - Move lower so start doesn't touch the M slider?
00:53:455 (1) - A copy of (3) might look better here.
01:12:205 (1,2) - This would look better if one was a copy of another
Normal:
Increase circle size?
00:02:830 (1) - looks pinched, try more curve, or use the red nodes.
00:23:455 (1) - Make more symmetric, and then copy for (3)
00:47:830 (4) - Wrap around (3) better and don't overlap, like:
Kizuna
00:06:580 (2) - this just looks straight, is there any point in the other nodes?
00:07:165 (4) - ^
00:44:080 (1,2,3,4) - try making this square, right now the height > width
HeiL's Color
00:11:736 (4) - Looks a bit close to (3)
Mostly fine
Most difficulties besides HeiL's seemed to lack patterns. Nice music and map, though. Starred!
Easy:
00:10:330 (1,2,3,4) - Give this some pattern? Also, try and not have (1) touch the slider from before.
00:17:830 (1) - Try to arrange in the center of the map?
00:23:923 (1) - Move lower so start doesn't touch the M slider?
00:53:455 (1) - A copy of (3) might look better here.
01:12:205 (1,2) - This would look better if one was a copy of another
Normal:
Increase circle size?
00:02:830 (1) - looks pinched, try more curve, or use the red nodes.
00:23:455 (1) - Make more symmetric, and then copy for (3)
00:47:830 (4) - Wrap around (3) better and don't overlap, like:
Kizuna
00:06:580 (2) - this just looks straight, is there any point in the other nodes?
00:07:165 (4) - ^
00:44:080 (1,2,3,4) - try making this square, right now the height > width
HeiL's Color
00:11:736 (4) - Looks a bit close to (3)
Mostly fine
Most difficulties besides HeiL's seemed to lack patterns. Nice music and map, though. Starred!
Topic Starter
>akrolsmir
thx mod~
thx mod~
General
Source : " FORTUNE ARTERIAL 赤い約束 " or " Fortune Arterial: Akai Yakusoku ". Choose only one.
Wikipedia says that your title is " 絆-kizunairo-色 "
add "opening" to the tags, remove "anime" from the tags, so i think you could add "game" and "ps3" to the tags too, but not sure in that.
HeiL's Color
[T] 01:30:955 - Turn off kiai at this point
Kizuna
01:30:955 (6) - remove clap, add finish + add timing section here that will be turning off kiai
Normal
00:53:455 (1) - 1 grid right
00:13:142 (5) - add new combo
00:30:955 (1) - Imo, will be better for playing 00:32:830 (3) - ^
00:37:986 (1,2) - ^ 01:27:205 (1) - add whistle
01:29:080 (1) - add finish
[T] 01:30:955 - add timing section here that will be turning off kiai
Easy
HP -2, AR -1, OD -1
00:02:830 (1) - add whistle to the start and to the 2nd reverse
00:06:580 (2) - ^
00:14:080 (1) - remove clap from the reverse, add whistle to the reverse
00:15:955 (2) - remove clap, add finish
00:17:830 (1) - i guess this slider must be 1/2 longer
00:31:423 (1) - remove whistle, add finish
00:56:267 (2) - remove whistle, add clap
[T] 01:30:955 - add timing section here that will be turning off kiai
So, that's all.Star
Source : " FORTUNE ARTERIAL 赤い約束 " or " Fortune Arterial: Akai Yakusoku ". Choose only one.
Wikipedia says that your title is " 絆-kizunairo-色 "
add "opening" to the tags, remove "anime" from the tags, so i think you could add "game" and "ps3" to the tags too, but not sure in that.
HeiL's Color
[T] 01:30:955 - Turn off kiai at this point
Kizuna
01:30:955 (6) - remove clap, add finish + add timing section here that will be turning off kiai
Normal
00:53:455 (1) - 1 grid right
00:13:142 (5) - add new combo
00:30:955 (1) - Imo, will be better for playing 00:32:830 (3) - ^
00:37:986 (1,2) - ^ 01:27:205 (1) - add whistle
01:29:080 (1) - add finish
[T] 01:30:955 - add timing section here that will be turning off kiai
Easy
HP -2, AR -1, OD -1
00:02:830 (1) - add whistle to the start and to the 2nd reverse
00:06:580 (2) - ^
00:14:080 (1) - remove clap from the reverse, add whistle to the reverse
00:15:955 (2) - remove clap, add finish
00:17:830 (1) - i guess this slider must be 1/2 longer
00:31:423 (1) - remove whistle, add finish
00:56:267 (2) - remove whistle, add clap
[T] 01:30:955 - add timing section here that will be turning off kiai
So, that's all.Star
Topic Starter
>aleks
sorry,ignore little.(source,img mod etc...)
thx mod and star~
sorry,ignore little.(source,img mod etc...)
thx mod and star~
[easy]
01:14:080 (slider 2) : maybe some more spacing?
01:19:705-01:21:580 : some more beats would be nice
[Heil's Color]
for some reason i found this very hard (personal opinion though :/ )
01:20:642 (slider 3) : more spacing
01:21:345 (4,5) : perhaps not stacking it might be nice
01:23:923 (1) : new combo
01:24:861 (1) : delete the new combo if you apply ^
01:26:501 (1,2) : new combo and not stacking
almost forgot your star~
editL: sorry, that is for Heil's Color, not kizuna. My bad :p
01:14:080 (slider 2) : maybe some more spacing?
01:19:705-01:21:580 : some more beats would be nice
[Heil's Color]
for some reason i found this very hard (personal opinion though :/ )
01:20:642 (slider 3) : more spacing
01:21:345 (4,5) : perhaps not stacking it might be nice
01:23:923 (1) : new combo
01:24:861 (1) : delete the new combo if you apply ^
01:26:501 (1,2) : new combo and not stacking
almost forgot your star~
editL: sorry, that is for Heil's Color, not kizuna. My bad :p
Hi
M4m
General
Too big kiai time, i suggest you divide it into several pieces
try this colors?
Easy
01:19:705 (1,2) - do more bigger spacing there, it will be not so confusing
01:23:455 (1) - remove two returnings and add circle there 01:25:330 -
Normal
00:17:830 (1) - this big spinner looks bad, really, try to do slider like in easy or some circles
Kizuna
in beginning this rustling sound of spinner spoils all impression of the map, i suggest to do sounds louder
00:34:705 (8) - new combo
01:04:236 - 01:05:173 - add notes there
01:09:626 (6) - ^
01:19:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - so suddenly jumps oO add some notes by spacing
01:25:095 (5) - prolong to 01:25:798 - (add returnings)
HeiL's Color
good~
Star
M4m
General
Too big kiai time, i suggest you divide it into several pieces
try this colors?
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,185,198
Combo2 : 168,163,226
Combo3 : 68,24,103
Combo4 : 177,24,58
Easy
01:19:705 (1,2) - do more bigger spacing there, it will be not so confusing
01:23:455 (1) - remove two returnings and add circle there 01:25:330 -
Normal
00:17:830 (1) - this big spinner looks bad, really, try to do slider like in easy or some circles
Kizuna
in beginning this rustling sound of spinner spoils all impression of the map, i suggest to do sounds louder
00:34:705 (8) - new combo
01:04:236 - 01:05:173 - add notes there
01:09:626 (6) - ^
01:19:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - so suddenly jumps oO add some notes by spacing
01:25:095 (5) - prolong to 01:25:798 - (add returnings)
HeiL's Color
good~
Star
nice map!
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