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Lia - kizunairo (TV size)

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Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi

General
Audio must be between 120-192 kbps, change it

Easy
00:28:611 (4) - 2 grids right

Kizuna
00:05:408 (6) - sounds...not very good, try the 1/3 snap divisor and do shorter that slider
00:29:783 (1) - i don't like that slider, do it on the 1.0x speed
not beautiful map, looks random

HeiL's Color
01:19:470 (1) - try new combo, i think it will be better

Star~
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi

General
Audio must be between 120-192 kbps, change it no

Easy
00:28:611 (4) - 2 grids right ok

Kizuna
00:05:408 (6) - sounds...not very good, try the 1/3 snap divisor and do shorter that slider no
00:29:783 (1) - i don't like that slider, do it on the 1.0x speed
not beautiful map, looks random ok

HeiL's Color
01:19:470 (1) - try new combo, i think it will be better ok

Star~
thx star and modding~
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[Kizuna] really has too much claps. Maybe you could lower their volume or remove some of them?

[HeiL's] is really well done. I like it.

Starred.
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>JInxyjem
thx mod and star~
add it.
Wylo
346 posts
Joined October 2010
Wylo
Here, I re-encoded the MP3 in 128 kbps.
File size reduction from 3.56 MB (original) -> 1.42 MB (re-encoded).

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3690054/FA-kizu ... 28kbps.mp3
(1.42 MB)

I also re-encoded the video to be better quality (video does not stretch).
800x600 H.264 .avi

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3690054/Fortune ... 0_x264.avi
(9.04 MB)

starred!
Skyblue_old_1
743 posts
Joined July 2009
Skyblue_old_1

doomed151 wrote:

Here, I re-encoded the MP3 in 128 kbps.
File size reduction from 3.56 MB (original) -> 1.42 MB (re-encoded).

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3690054/FA-kizu ... 28kbps.mp3
(1.42 MB)

I also re-encoded the video to be better quality (video does not stretch).
800x600 H.264 .avi

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3690054/Fortune ... 0_x264.avi
(9.04 MB)

starred!
hmm..
Do you really think quality has increased? (Baseline @ L 1.3 and 800kbps... I don't think it is better)

Anyway, decision is up to mapper :)
Wylo
346 posts
Joined October 2010
Wylo

skyble wrote:

doomed151 wrote:

Here, I re-encoded the MP3 in 128 kbps.
File size reduction from 3.56 MB (original) -> 1.42 MB (re-encoded).

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3690054/FA-kizu ... 28kbps.mp3
(1.42 MB)

I also re-encoded the video to be better quality (video does not stretch).
800x600 H.264 .avi

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3690054/Fortune ... 0_x264.avi
(9.04 MB)

starred!
hmm..
Do you really think quality has increased? (Baseline @ L 1.3 and 800kbps... I don't think it is better)

Anyway, decision is up to mapper :)
Quality in terms of aspect ratio. I can up the bitrate if needed, just trying to keep the filesize small.

Tell me if I should re-encode it. I'll do it gladly for this awesome beatmap and song.
Skyblue_old_1
743 posts
Joined July 2009
Skyblue_old_1

doomed151 wrote:

Quality in terms of aspect ratio. I can up the bitrate if needed, just trying to keep the filesize small.

Tell me if I should re-encode it. I'll do it gladly for this awesome beatmap and song.
I totally agree with your opinion. :D
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>skyble,doomed151
sry,no changed.
Wylo
346 posts
Joined October 2010
Wylo
It's ok, but if you don't want to change the mp3, at least change the video.

The current one looks pretty bad because it's stretched out of proportion.
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
:D
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR
- osbファイルを削除してください
- Easyと次のdifのstar raitingの差が大きいので
間のdifを作ってみてもいいかなと思いました

Good map!! Starヽ(*´∀｀)ノ★
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>KSHR
thx modding and star~
Normal diffについては今の所考えてはいませんが、後々作るかも知れません。
Wylo
346 posts
Joined October 2010
Wylo
Sorry if this is a bit sudden but I almost finished Normal diff.
Should be finished in a few hours/days.
Wylo
346 posts
Joined October 2010
Wylo
At last I finished it, please accept it as I worked pretty hard on this diff.

Download: Lia - kizunairo (TV size) (frost-b-spec) [doomed's Normal].osu
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Hinacle
star~
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>doomed
sorry,don't add it.

>Hinacle11
thx star~ :)
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
star~ :lol:
thethorndog
33 posts
Joined April 2009
thethorndog
awesome good job, YEs for more lia songs
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
thethorndog,swish
thx star :lol:
sitemii
86 posts
Joined March 2010
sitemii
star~~
kusakabe001
171 posts
Joined June 2009
kusakabe001
star~ヾ(ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ゛
miss_dior
miss_dior
star~ :)
arien666
6,271 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[General]
offset = 2845ms [+15ms from current]
(I recommend to check with other timing hunters before accepting this offet :3)

[Easy]
:3

[Kizuna]
00:27:908 - Umm... This part takes 1/4 of HP bar (If not break) but dunno about necessery of this. I'll leave atm :3
01:00:486 (1,2,3) - Intended spacing miss or mistake :3?

[HeiL's Color]
Some notes are not fit with melody imo ;_;



Wonder about star-symbol but I'll leave atm ;_;
Good luck :3
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec

arien666 wrote:

[General]
offset = 2845ms [+15ms from current]　no


[Kizuna]
00:27:908 - Umm... This part takes 1/4 of HP bar (If not break) but dunno about necessery of this. I'll leave atm :3 add object
01:00:486 (1,2,3) - Intended spacing miss or mistake :3? no
thx modding and star~
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Easy

00:53:455 - this timing is usnapped(serious)

00:38:455(7) - remove clap and add a finish hitsound
00:52:986(1) - a bit loud

Kizuna

star rating is too higher than Easy.

i mean that your diff spread is not really good.

try adding more notes in Easy diff or make a Normal diff imo

00:52:986 - this timing is useless
00:53:455 - usnapped

00:15:486(7) - MOVE 1 grid up (lv3)
00:15:720(8) - x:432 y:280
00:52:400(13) - finish and clap

i think this diff's hitsounds is lack of change,but anyway its not bad

HeiL's Color

00:05:876(2) - maybe del
00:11:267(3) - remove whistle
00:17:595(5) - ^

i think this section has too many whistle

00:24:392(2) - remove whistle
00:25:330(8) - ^
00:26:267(9) - ^
00:31:892(4) - ^
00:33:767(8) - ^
00:36:580(6) - ^
00:37:517(6) - ^
00:38:455(8) - remove whistle and add finish
00:39:392(3) - rmeove whistle
00:41:267(9) - ^
00:43:142(6) - ^

why not add some clap at kiaitime,but its not bad now


starrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>TTTTTTTTTTTT
all done!(my diff)

thx!
Mercurius
Former osu! Champion: 2014
501 posts
Joined November 2010
Mercurius
「・ω・)「　がおー★
PSPDS Eddie
457 posts
Joined November 2009
PSPDS Eddie
;)
DarkRingSystem
DarkRingSystem
:) !

starrrrr
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
On Easy.

At 00:06:580 (Slider 2): You didn't snapped this from Slider 1 yet...? (Take this seriously...)

On Normal.

At 00:25:330 (Slider 3): Like this...
SPOILER
At 00:32:830 (Slider 3): One grid up and one grid left.

I guess that's it, I'll do the other 2 next time.

Here's a star.
Thank you.
CoCoNuts
17 posts
Joined February 2010
CoCoNuts
star!
Magical Pokie
358 posts
Joined August 2010
Magical Pokie
good
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,733 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
Star ;)
akrolsmir
606 posts
Joined November 2010
akrolsmir
So many stars and so few mods... time to fix that!

Easy:
00:10:330 (1,2,3,4) - Give this some pattern? Also, try and not have (1) touch the slider from before.
00:17:830 (1) - Try to arrange in the center of the map?
00:23:923 (1) - Move lower so start doesn't touch the M slider?
00:53:455 (1) - A copy of (3) might look better here.
01:12:205 (1,2) - This would look better if one was a copy of another

Normal:
Increase circle size?
00:02:830 (1) - looks pinched, try more curve, or use the red nodes.
00:23:455 (1) - Make more symmetric, and then copy for (3)
00:47:830 (4) - Wrap around (3) better and don't overlap, like:


Kizuna
00:06:580 (2) - this just looks straight, is there any point in the other nodes?
00:07:165 (4) - ^
00:44:080 (1,2,3,4) - try making this square, right now the height > width

HeiL's Color
00:11:736 (4) - Looks a bit close to (3)
Mostly fine

Most difficulties besides HeiL's seemed to lack patterns. Nice music and map, though. Starred!
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>akrolsmir
thx mod~ :)
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,436 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
General
Source : " FORTUNE ARTERIAL 赤い約束 " or " Fortune Arterial: Akai Yakusoku ". Choose only one.
Wikipedia says that your title is " 絆-kizunairo-色 " :)
add "opening" to the tags, remove "anime" from the tags, so i think you could add "game" and "ps3" to the tags too, but not sure in that.

HeiL's Color
[T] 01:30:955 - Turn off kiai at this point

Kizuna
01:30:955 (6) - remove clap, add finish + add timing section here that will be turning off kiai

Normal
00:53:455 (1) - 1 grid right
00:13:142 (5) - add new combo
00:30:955 (1) - Imo, will be better for playing
SPOILER
00:32:830 (3) - ^
00:37:986 (1,2) - ^
SPOILER
01:27:205 (1) - add whistle
01:29:080 (1) - add finish
[T] 01:30:955 - add timing section here that will be turning off kiai

Easy
HP -2, AR -1, OD -1
00:02:830 (1) - add whistle to the start and to the 2nd reverse
00:06:580 (2) - ^
00:14:080 (1) - remove clap from the reverse, add whistle to the reverse
00:15:955 (2) - remove clap, add finish
00:17:830 (1) - i guess this slider must be 1/2 longer
00:31:423 (1) - remove whistle, add finish
00:56:267 (2) - remove whistle, add clap
[T] 01:30:955 - add timing section here that will be turning off kiai

So, that's all.Star
frost-b-spec
783 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
frost-b-spec
>aleks
sorry,ignore little.(source,img mod etc...)
thx mod and star~
YaMaO04
214 posts
Joined June 2010
YaMaO04
:)
piratesof
23 posts
Joined May 2010
piratesof
[easy]
01:14:080 (slider 2) : maybe some more spacing?
01:19:705-01:21:580 : some more beats would be nice

[Heil's Color]
for some reason i found this very hard (personal opinion though :/ )
01:20:642 (slider 3) : more spacing
01:21:345 (4,5) : perhaps not stacking it might be nice
01:23:923 (1) : new combo
01:24:861 (1) : delete the new combo if you apply ^
01:26:501 (1,2) : new combo and not stacking

almost forgot your star~

editL: sorry, that is for Heil's Color, not kizuna. My bad :p
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