• 
  [general]

1. BG is 1280/720 , try use 1366/768 or 16：9 ? i tried to find 1366*768 by http://iqdb.org/ but fail , only girls BG easy to find lol
   [Journey]
2. rip 3/4 note
3. 00:01:080 (1,2,3) - 2 hit a little more sane ↓↓↓
   
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4. 00:56:680 (3,4) - 02:13:480 (3,4) - all whistle sounds better for me
5. 01:10:480 (2) - you without stack when other part …… it's a bit hard for HD , i suggest like this → 00:38:080 (5) - or add more stack when slider tail
6. 02:41:480 - amzing soft-clap 111
7. 01:14:280 (3,4,5,6) - should be 0.5 DS …… and 02:31:480 (1) - 03:32:280 (1) - 0.8ds here a little more sane
8. 03:57:480 (3,4,5,1) - it‘s constant deceleration , you should timing it and snap → 03:58:780 (1) -

Dono027 wrote:

[Journey]

(You don't need to stack all the circles in 1/4 beat)

00:13:330 (1,2) - You've a problem with the beats here, go in 1/8 beat & select the slider & the circle, and throw them in the next yellow beat took out the slider instead

02:18:280 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Use same distance enter the circles please. You keeped the same distance in all the last streams, why you do this in THIS stream ? xD ah to transition from verse -> kiai

02:31:080 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same, why just at this part of the song ? should be 0.8 ds, changed

03:06:280 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Why again, you keeped the same distance on all circle on the last stream 02:53:680 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - to me the beat feels more intense later, so i increased the distance

03:31:880 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Same should be 0.8 ds, changed

That's all for my mod~

Narcissu wrote:

sorry i late …… something in the new year

• 
  [general]

1. BG is 1280/720 , try use 1366/768 or 16：9 ? i tried to find 1366*768 by http://iqdb.org/ but fail , only girls BG easy to find lol it's the largest one i could find D: i'l try to find a bigger one
   [Journey]
2. rip 3/4 note
3. 00:01:080 (1,2,3) - 2 hit a little more sane ↓↓↓ i couldn't add a slider with 0.8 sv, so i unstacked 1 and 2
   
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4. 02:41:480 - amzing soft-clap 111 thank you
5. 01:14:280 (3,4,5,6) - should be 0.5 DS …… and 02:31:480 (1) - 03:32:280 (1) - 0.8ds here a little more sane i changed first stream to 0.8 ds instead
6. 03:57:480 (3,4,5,1) - it‘s constant deceleration , you should timing it and snap → 03:58:780 (1) - ah yes i'll try to find someone to time it

新年快乐！谢谢!

• General

1. You might want to add an Easy diff as your Normal diff is a bit too complex for new players.

• [Normal]

1. 00:06:280 (3,4) - How about trying a blanket pattern here by changing (3)'s shape into a curved one? looks more neat imo
   
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2. 00:07:880 (1,2,3) - This pattern here looks scrambled and doesn't flow too well. I think you can improve it a lot by just rearranging it a bit. Like this:
   
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3. 00:09:480 (1,2) - The flow isn't that good here either due to (1)'s curve facing the opposite way. It'd flow better like this:
   
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4. 00:18:280 (2,3,4) - Spread these notes a bit so they don't overlap? I know they barely overlap but it looks messy that way
   
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5. 00:39:480 (5,1) - This overlap please move 00:39:880 (1) away so it doesn't overlap with 00:39:480 (5).
   
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6. 01:04:880 (5) - I don't think that a 1/2 slider like this is a good idea considering that you don't have an Easy diff in your mapset.
7. 01:11:680 (1) - This NC shouldn't be here, it'd fit more the music if you remove it and then add it to 01:11:480 (6) instead.
8. 01:13:480 (4) - A NC here to emphasize the vocals and guitar would be nice imo.
9. 01:24:680 (1) - Hmm I'm not sure about this NC. I can see your reasoning behind it but I think it'd follow more the music if you try adding NC to 01:23:480 (5) and then remove NC of 01:24:680 (1)-
10. 01:27:080 (1) - I suggest you to replace this slider with two circles instead. A single slider is boring and doesn't fit the drums at all imo.
11. 02:29:080 (2) - Messy overlap again ><
12. 02:35:080 (1) - Bad flow here again. Try changing this slider curve like this to improve this pattern's flow.
    
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13. 02:57:880 - This break is too long imo. Such a good solo left unmapped like this is a shame.
14. 03:29:080 (6,1) - As I suggested above for a similar combo pattern, I think it'd follow more the music if you remove 03:29:280 (1) NC and add it to
15. 03:29:080 (6) instead, and then add 03:31:080 (4) here as well to emphasize this part.

• [Hard]

1. 03:28:280 (3) - How about making this slider curved in order to make a blanket and improve the flow slightly?
   
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2. 03:35:880 (1) - The flow can also be improved here by changing the curve of this slider to the opposite side!
   
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3. 03:45:480 (1) - And here as well, by making this slider a curved one instead of straight!
   
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Kei wrote:

• General

1. You might want to add an Easy diff as your Normal diff is a bit too complex for new players. technically the normal is under 2 stars, so it's enough as the lowest diff, but i'll consider it !! if others say it's too complex, i'll make an Easy~

• [Normal]

1. 00:07:880 (1,2,3) - This pattern here looks scrambled and doesn't flow too well. I think you can improve it a lot by just rearranging it a bit. Like this: rearranged it a bit, but not quite the way you did it
   
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2. 01:04:880 (5) - I don't think that a 1/2 slider like this is a good idea considering that you don't have an Easy diff in your mapset. for now, i'd like to keep this and see what others say i like it because it adds a bit of a rhythm variation in the mapset, but i'll change it if others disagree
3. 01:13:480 (4) - A NC here to emphasize the vocals and guitar would be nice imo.
4. 01:24:680 (1) - Hmm I'm not sure about this NC. I can see your reasoning behind it but I think it'd follow more the music if you try adding NC to 01:23:480 (5) and then remove NC of 01:24:680 (1)- removed
5. 01:27:080 (1) - I suggest you to replace this slider with two circles instead. A single slider is boring and doesn't fit the drums at all imo.
6. 02:29:080 (2) - Messy overlap again >< ahh sorry ;w; fixed
7. 02:57:880 - This break is too long imo. Such a good solo left unmapped like this is a shame. aaaaa i was lazy, but since i mapped the break in hard + insane, i guess i will map this section in Normal as well
8. 03:29:080 (6,1) - As I suggested above for a similar combo pattern, I think it'd follow more the music if you remove 03:29:280 (1) NC and add it to
9. 03:29:080 (6) instead, and then add 03:31:080 (4) here as well to emphasize this part. hmm i'll think about adding NC on 03:31:080, but i'd like to stay consistent with my NC every 2 measures

• [Hard]

1. 03:45:480 (1) - And here as well, by making this slider a curved one instead of straight! ahh this one i actually like how it is currently ;w;
   
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Hard and Journey are pretty good. I didn't like some overlaps on Journey but that's just my opinion!

Normal needs more work and you might need to add an Easy difficulty to improve the spread.

Good luck! thank you for your mod! it was helpful~~

Reditum wrote:

Raose for BN tbh pls no

Insane:

00:32:480 (2,3,4,5,6) - I know you're pressed for space here, but for me it's kind of hard to read approach circles like this, I'd prefer it if you could make this a pattern that looks like this? http://puu.sh/msmXt/7edb41c954.jpg . Momentum-wise, it kinda works, because my hand will naturally just circle around to the (1), but meh. mmm i kinda like how it is right now, but i'll consider changing it if others agree

jonathanlfj wrote:

a

[Normal]
02:30:280 (4) - I'd use all circles here like the first kiai can't do it without messing up the other combos :C

[Hard]
00:19:780 - try a circle here the catch the 1/4 i missed a lot of 1/4, but i prefer not to map them (except the really obvious ones) til later
01:10:480 (2) - I find this back and forth slightly hard to follow, try stacking it on the bottom of 01:10:080 (4) stacked on 1 instead
01:45:080 (4) - any reason for a change in spacing here? oops my bad

[Journey]
00:13:480 (1,2,3) - i'd use even spacing here for equal emphasis, also maybe a triplet coverage for 00:13:480 (1) it's not actually a triplet :C made spacing even


yeah tis all good

appleeaterx wrote:

Yeah, still need to take care of quite a few things. Really sorry for the inconveniece...

:idea: General

* 128kbps? Please use this freshly ripped + re-encoded 192kbps one! http://puu.sh/nsxJl/a67e252938.mp3 . Don't forget to resnap everything to the correct offset. (for the main offset I got around 1455) thanks for the mp3 but now my folder is larger than 24 mb
* Timing is not really accurate at the end, but it's still okay to use. For the mp3 I linked you, you should -25 everything.

Normal

* 01:51:080 (1,2,3) - Optional, but since this is the lowest difficulty, I think it'd be better to avoid stuff like back-and-forth patterns... to me,i t's ok because the AR is high enough in this case

Insane

* 00:13:480 (1) - You even mapped the 1/4s in the Hard difficulty. I don't think I need to say more than that. after listening closely to the music, i found the beat here is actually 1/6. So I added a 1/6 repeat slider here, but removed the 1/4s in Hard
* 02:38:680 (2) - 03:39:480 (2) - Would avoid using an extended slider here as there are beats (also a strong vocal note) on the red tick. You would want his beautiful voice to be ignored, right? ;_; i love his voice, but i really want to emphasize the beats here
* 03:57:480 (1,2) - Due to the timing changes, I'd make these a slider as well. Currently it's a bit hard to predict from someone who hasn't heard the song before, how to get good accuracy on these notes. If you feel this part won't be as dense enough as you want it to be, you can turn a slider somewhere at 03:52:680 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - into circles instead if really needed. haha that's the opposite of what jonny said. Personally, the song slows down gradually enough that the player can still get good accuracy, and the last slider will let them know the BPM changed

Sorry again... should've mentioned this stuff earlier.