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Aether & SizzleBird ft. Veela - Raccoon City

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Ezasu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, January 31, 2016 at 1:37:43 AM

Artist: Aether & SizzleBird ft. Veela
Title: Raccoon City
Tags: dnb drum and bass
BPM: 175
Filesize: 1846kb
Play Time: 01:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.34 stars, 184 notes)
  2. Insane (4.42 stars, 274 notes)
  3. Normal (2.08 stars, 114 notes)
Download: Aether & SizzleBird ft. Veela - Raccoon City
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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BriedisLT
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18:01 Ezasu: sveikas
18:01 BriedisLT: o sv
18:01 Ezasu: su kaledom! :D
18:02 BriedisLT: kazkaip px vps tos kaledos
18:02 Ezasu: nu man irgi
18:02 Ezasu: bet reik pasveikint
18:02 BriedisLT: nu tai nx :D
18:02 Ezasu: sita
18:02 Ezasu: galetum 1 mapa pamoddint?
18:02 BriedisLT: galbut ir sugaleciau
18:02 BriedisLT: jei kudu dosi
18:03 Ezasu: duosiu :3
18:03 *Ezasu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/858660 Aether & SizzleBird ft. Veela - Raccoon City]
18:03 BriedisLT: pl bsk
18:03 BriedisLT: lol raccoon city
18:03 BriedisLT: as ta irgi norejau mappint
18:03 BriedisLT: bet vagrant impisau instead
18:03 Ezasu: oke
18:06 BriedisLT: live mod nori?
18:06 Ezasu: hmm
18:06 Ezasu: gal geriau butu
18:06 Ezasu: tada tu /savelog kelsi i weba ane?
18:07 BriedisLT: nzn niekada nedariau bet esme tokia
18:07 *BriedisLT is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/858660 Aether & SizzleBird ft. Veela - Raccoon City [Insane]] +Hidden
18:08 BriedisLT: paskui dar su kitais modais pralosiu jei geresnis mapas bus paziuret kaip issidesto
18:11 BriedisLT: is karto matosi
18:11 BriedisLT: reikia od kelti
18:11 BriedisLT: iki bent 7
18:11 Ezasu: oke
18:12 BriedisLT: cia suprask kaip nori mapas :D
18:12 BriedisLT: per lengvas taip
18:12 BriedisLT: per sunkus su dt
18:12 Ezasu: tai gali but
18:12 Ezasu: as ten su od ir hp nesigaudau
18:13 BriedisLT: cia prototipai ane
18:13 Ezasu: ta prasme
18:13 BriedisLT: nes toli jiem iki gero mapo
18:13 Ezasu: nu hard ir normal tai per daug nesistengiau
18:14 BriedisLT: nu suprantu
18:14 Ezasu: bet insane tai man atrodo visai neblogas
18:14 BriedisLT: eik i moda
18:14 BriedisLT: pakankamai blogas
18:14 BriedisLT: bet ne per daugh
18:14 Ezasu: ok
18:14 Ezasu: live mod it is
18:14 BriedisLT: as tau belekaip spaminsiu db galesi skaityti per loga nzn
18:15 BriedisLT: nepatariu is karto daryt pakeitimu
18:15 Ezasu: ok
18:15 BriedisLT: 00:00:342 -
18:15 BriedisLT: 00:00:684 -
18:15 BriedisLT: slideris
18:15 BriedisLT: ar kazka tokio dvi natos
18:15 BriedisLT: 00:01:542 -
18:15 Ezasu: cia insane?
18:15 BriedisLT: taip
18:15 BriedisLT: 00:01:542 - zodis little skiemenys
18:15 BriedisLT: pirmas turi nata kitas ne
18:16 BriedisLT: kiek matau toliau pagal vokalus mappini
18:16 BriedisLT: 00:04:284 -
18:16 BriedisLT: tas pats
18:16 Ezasu: pradzioj jo
18:16 BriedisLT: 00:04:970 -
18:16 Ezasu: bet as ne pagal visus norejau mappint
18:16 BriedisLT: 00:12:856 -
18:16 Ezasu: nes per greitai kaip pradziai
18:16 BriedisLT: arba pagal ta arba pagal ritma
18:16 Ezasu: bent jau man taip atrodo
18:16 BriedisLT: paskui issimusi is standarto
18:16 BriedisLT: tikiesi o nera
18:17 Ezasu: tai sakai kas antra skiemeni pvz
18:17 BriedisLT: 00:13:714 (3) - tragiskas slideris
18:17 Ezasu: nemapint?
18:17 BriedisLT: nu taigi kai kur sudejas
18:17 BriedisLT: as tau parodziau kur nesudejai
18:17 BriedisLT: ir kur kliuna
18:17 BriedisLT: nes nera nk ten
18:17 Ezasu: nu ok
18:18 Ezasu: nu ok toliau
18:18 BriedisLT: pl
18:18 BriedisLT: 00:11:999 - galetu geriau buti kazkas tokio http://snag.gy/jdWBJ.jpg
18:18 BriedisLT: toliau irgi tas eina
18:19 BriedisLT: slideris ant pirmos natos
18:19 BriedisLT: tipo stiprios
18:19 BriedisLT: negali baigtis
18:19 BriedisLT: turi circle arba prasideti slideris ant tokios
18:19 BriedisLT: 00:14:056 -
18:19 BriedisLT: 00:15:085 (1) -
18:19 BriedisLT: 00:16:457 (4) -
18:19 BriedisLT: o sitas gerai idetas 00:18:171 (3) -
18:19 Ezasu: ai nu
18:19 Ezasu: supratau
18:20 Ezasu: net nepagalvojau :D
18:20 BriedisLT: ilga slideri gali pabandyt 00:19:371 (6,1) -
18:20 BriedisLT: 00:34:028 (4) -
18:20 BriedisLT: tokie bajeriai ant lengvu mapu neiseina
18:20 BriedisLT: vadinasi terminu overmap atrodo
18:20 Ezasu: hm
18:21 Ezasu: o ant 5 star
18:21 Ezasu: liptu toks?
18:21 BriedisLT: jeigu velocity didesnis jo
18:21 Ezasu: aisku
18:21 BriedisLT: as gal ir apsiimciau daryt guest diff
18:22 Ezasu: cia kaip nori :3
18:22 Ezasu: esi welcome
18:22 BriedisLT: ok db pamusiu ant layout
18:23 Ezasu: oke
18:23 BriedisLT: nzn ar tokioj vietoj 00:02:571 (1) - tinka pasleptas nors cia dar px
18:23 Ezasu: jei tinka tai paliksiu
18:23 BriedisLT: 00:07:200 (1) - idomus jumpas cia padarytas bet tokiai diff gal bsk ne i tema
18:23 BriedisLT: playtestink ir ziurek kaip zmones ar nepanikuoja
18:24 BriedisLT: kaip as matei feilinau su hdhr ar hd net
18:24 Ezasu: daviau porai ciuvu
18:24 Ezasu: daug mazesnio ranko
18:24 BriedisLT: 00:07:200 (1,2) -
18:24 BriedisLT: nevienoda struktura
18:24 Ezasu: tai pradzioj kaip ir nefailino
18:24 BriedisLT: slideriu
18:24 BriedisLT: 00:13:028 (5) -
18:24 BriedisLT: per smarkus gali buti jumpas
18:25 Ezasu: ne ta man rodos nukopinai
18:25 BriedisLT: paskui 00:13:371 (1) - commit sudoku flow
18:25 BriedisLT: ta
18:25 Ezasu: ai nu
18:25 Ezasu: as kazkaip flow nesistengiu ilgai laikyt
18:25 BriedisLT: praleidai garsa kuri galima sumappint 00:17:656 -
18:25 Ezasu: noris keist vis
18:25 BriedisLT: flow neesant geram mapas nebus fun
18:26 Ezasu: ne tai taip mazdaug
18:26 Ezasu: yra flow
18:26 BriedisLT: 00:22:457 (2) - ant red ticko slideriai dazniausiai nebuna geri
18:26 Ezasu: poto 180 ir vel flow
18:26 Ezasu: ar taip netinka
18:26 BriedisLT: nuobodus mapas butu
18:26 BriedisLT: pakankamai daug ant red ticku pas tave
18:27 Ezasu: hmm
18:27 Ezasu: bet jei visi slideriai ant white bus
18:27 Ezasu: tai irgi nelabai idomu ar ne?
18:27 BriedisLT: nebutinai visi turi buti
18:27 BriedisLT: kai kurie tinka
18:27 BriedisLT: ziurek pagal muzika pagrinde
18:28 BriedisLT: jei kickas ant redo tai pisk po antru px
18:28 BriedisLT: o jei koks snare anr hat
18:28 BriedisLT: tai abejoju kad sueis
18:28 BriedisLT: 00:46:457 (1) - vps ant pauzes
18:29 Ezasu: nu cia
18:29 Ezasu: kazn kaip paaiskint
18:29 BriedisLT: jeigu pvz situos numestum i kaire 00:47:657 (4,5,6) -
18:29 Ezasu: :D
18:29 BriedisLT: flow geresnis butu
18:29 BriedisLT: negu pasislepes po tuo slideriu
18:29 BriedisLT: manau
18:29 Ezasu: sutinku
18:30 BriedisLT: 01:06:171 (1) - toks pat spacing kaip ir 8 bet garsas labai nezymus
18:30 BriedisLT: cia tokios mazesnes dialemos
18:30 BriedisLT: kurios daug ka reiskia
18:30 BriedisLT: cia kaip su kokiu web dizainu
18:30 BriedisLT: jei backenda padarai zjbs quality mazdaug visiem px bus
18:31 BriedisLT: visiem rupes tik kaip atrodo
18:31 Ezasu: i see
18:31 BriedisLT: 01:00:685 (1) -
18:31 BriedisLT: jeigu taip stackini
18:32 BriedisLT: diff mazeja
18:32 BriedisLT: ir nlb fun mapas dazniausiai bus
18:32 Ezasu: bet nei nedaznai tai gal px?
18:32 Ezasu: ar ne
18:32 BriedisLT: daznai jauciasi
18:32 BriedisLT: vienas kitas butu nesijaustu
18:33 BriedisLT: bet jei bsk daugiau nei vienas kitas tai meh
18:33 BriedisLT: ctrl shift a perziurek aimod kada uploadint noresi
18:33 Ezasu: nu ok
iYiyo
Hey! Saw you on #modreqs. Nice song btw

General
The gap between Normal & Hard is very high. You should add another diff between them if you want to get this mapset ranked.
For better consistency on the New Combos, you should try adding them on a "Big White Tick", basically because there's where the music is "stronger" so it helps follow the combos better.

Insane
00:01:542 - Here I think you should add a single note. it feels empty
00:01:714 (4) - Maybe end this slider 00:02:227 - here & then add a single note 00:02:399 - here. I think it would fit better the music
00:04:114 (1,2,3) - Maybe add some distance here because they feel very close to each other compared from what u've been making before that part
00:08:743 (4,1,2) - You should fix the distance here, adding some space between 1 & 2 for consistency.
00:12:342 (4,5,1) - same ^
00:15:085 (1,4) - Idk but maybe make these two sliders into a 1/2 and a single note, I think they fit better the music.
00:17:485 (6,1,2,3) - The distance here is very weird, try making it more consistent.
00:27:085 (5,6,7,1,2) - You can try with a perfect start here.
00:37:028 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think you can improve this pattern here since the flow is a little bit poor. I would recommend you to follow something like this
00:38:743 (1) - I think you should make this a 1/2 slider because of the music, there's a strong beat so it would fit better imo.
00:39:257 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - The flow here is good but you can improve it by making a perfect star or hexagon.
00:44:400 (1) - I think this spin should start 00:44:227 - here.
00:46:799 - Here should go a single note imo.
00:46:971 (1) - Same as before, here you should start with a 1/2 slider.
00:50:485 (5) - I think you should move this note 00:50:570 - here.

Hard
00:01:713 (3,4,5) - Same as in Insane, you should keep consistency in the distance.
00:07:027 - Maybe add a single note here? It fits the music good imo.
From 00:09:770 - here to 00:11:656 - here feels a little bit empty, why not consider add some notes between here? it would be nice.
00:12:170 - Same, a single note here maybe
From 00:13:370 (4) - this part I would recommend you to follow this pattern, it fits better imo.
00:16:627 - single note?

Ok I have to go now, but you have in general a good flow, maybe try to make them more symetrically, that would be fine. Also I think you missed a few places where to add notes. Good luck with your mapset! :)
Topic Starter
Ezasu

iYiyo wrote:

Hey! Saw you on #modreqs. Nice song btw

General
The gap between Normal & Hard is very high. You should add another diff between them if you want to get this mapset ranked.
For better consistency on the New Combos, you should try adding them on a "Big White Tick", basically because there's where the music is "stronger" so it helps follow the combos better. I'll consider it a diff between Normal and Hard. I haven't paid too much attention to new combos but I'll take a look.

Insane
00:01:542 - Here I think you should add a single note. it feels empty
Adjusted ^
00:01:714 (4) - Maybe end this slider 00:02:227 - here & then add a single note 00:02:399 - here. I think it would fit better the music Adjusted ^
00:04:114 (1,2,3) - Maybe add some distance here because they feel very close to each other compared from what u've been making before that part
Adjusted ^
00:08:743 (4,1,2) - You should fix the distance here, adding some space between 1 & 2 for consistency.
Added a break here ^ (still not sure about it but it looks okay for now)
00:12:342 (4,5,1) - same ^
Remapped this section ^
00:15:085 (1,4) - Idk but maybe make these two sliders into a 1/2 and a single note, I think they fit better the music.
Adjusted ^
00:17:485 (6,1,2,3) - The distance here is very weird, try making it more consistent.
Remapped ^
00:27:085 (5,6,7,1,2) - You can try with a perfect start here.
I kinda like this secion so I'll keep it ^
00:37:028 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think you can improve this pattern here since the flow is a little bit poor. I would recommend you to follow something like this
Slightly adjusted (but left some parts) ^
00:38:743 (1) - I think you should make this a 1/2 slider because of the music, there's a strong beat so it would fit better imo.
Adjusted ^
00:39:257 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - The flow here is good but you can improve it by making a perfect star or hexagon.
Adjusted ^
00:44:400 (1) - I think this spin should start 00:44:227 - here.
I agree but then i couldn't add a break between 00:42:857 (7) and 00:44:227 (1) ^
00:46:799 - Here should go a single note imo.
Adjusted ^
00:46:971 (1) - Same as before, here you should start with a 1/2 slider.
Adjusted ^
00:50:485 (5) - I think you should move this note 00:50:570 - here.
I guess I'll just have to replace this slider with a stream.

Hard
00:01:713 (3,4,5) - Same as in Insane, you should keep consistency in the distance.
I'd like to keep visually equal distance even if there are pauses between notes, since it's the slow part of the song. I'll change it if it's unrankable. ^
00:07:027 - Maybe add a single note here? It fits the music good imo.
Adjusted ^
From 00:09:770 - here to 00:11:656 - here feels a little bit empty, why not consider add some notes between here? it would be nice.
Adjusted ^
00:12:170 - Same, a single note here maybe
From 00:13:370 (4) - this part I would recommend you to follow this pattern, it fits better imo.
Adjusted ^
00:16:627 - single note?
Adjusted ^
Thanks a lot for your mod and sorry for the late reply. It was really helpful. Have some kudos ^^
Ambu5h
Try using ofest 335; if you'll do it, dont forget to resnap green sections


Normal

00:12:684 (3) - maybe curve it like 00:03:084 (1) - ?
00:27:084 (6) - this type of sliders you use a lot, but i think its hard to read them, maybe change it to 2 1/2 sliders and a note?

Hard

00:08:742 (3,4) - make the spacing bigger or move 4 under the end of 3
00:26:399 (1,2) - comapiring with 00:25:027 (1,2) - feels like a spacing issue
00:29:827 (4,5,6) - feelsovermappedman how about just 1/2 reversal slider starting here 00:29:827 - ?
00:40:113 (1) - how about ctrl+g for better flow?
00:42:856 (5) - emphasize with hitsound and make new combo
00:52:799 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - holy shit this part is hard, maybe make here 00:52:799 (2,3,4) - smaller spacing and put this sliders head 00:55:199 (1) - under previous note?

Insane

00:07:884 (2,4) - - isnt it overlap?
00:09:753 - how about adding here a note and then a slow slider from 00:09:925 - to 00:10:439 - with silenced end?
00:21:583 (1) - how about making a slow slider from 00:21:582 - to 00:22:096 - with silenced end instead?
00:46:457 (1,1) - overlaps man
00:55:885 (4) - somehow its hard to read and i sliderbroke here while playing, so maybe rotate it 60 degress clockwise? also move it a bit to evade overlapping 00:55:200 (1,4) -
01:06:171 (1) - either move it under previous note or make a bigger jump here for epic ending

soz for small mod, cant see anything really wrong in all diffs

happy new year!
Topic Starter
Ezasu

freebird42 wrote:

Try using ofest 335; if you'll do it, dont forget to resnap green sections
I'll think about that. I think I'll have to change it as you say, though :D


Normal

00:12:684 (3) - maybe curve it like 00:03:084 (1) - ?
Adjusted ^
00:27:084 (6) - this type of sliders you use a lot, but i think its hard to read them, maybe change it to 2 1/2 sliders and a note?
I agree, I've seen some new players struggling with it, so
Adjusted ^

Hard

00:08:742 (3,4) - make the spacing bigger or move 4 under the end of 3
Adjusted ^
00:26:399 (1,2) - comapiring with 00:25:027 (1,2) - feels like a spacing issue
Can't find a way to fix it. I don't think this is a big problem since it's a slow jump. ^
00:29:827 (4,5,6) - feelsovermappedman how about just 1/2 reversal slider starting here 00:29:827 - ?
Adjusted ^
00:40:113 (1) - how about ctrl+g for better flow?
Adjusted ^
00:42:856 (5) - emphasize with hitsound and make new combo
Adjusted ^
00:52:799 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - holy shit this part is hard, maybe make here 00:52:799 (2,3,4) - smaller spacing and put this sliders head 00:55:199 (1) - under previous note?
Adjusted ^

Insane

00:07:884 (2,4) - - isnt it overlap?
It might be, but i like this part so i think i'll keep it like that. (i think it's allowed for a 4.4 stars diff) ^
00:09:753 - how about adding here a note and then a slow slider from 00:09:925 - to 00:10:439 - with silenced end?
It would fit imo, but i don't want to add anything here. (Besides, I'm not a fan of sliders with silenced ends). ^
00:21:583 (1) - how about making a slow slider from 00:21:582 - to 00:22:096 - with silenced end instead?
same as before ^
00:46:457 (1,1) - overlaps man
Adjusted ^
00:55:885 (4) - somehow its hard to read and i sliderbroke here while playing, so maybe rotate it 60 degress clockwise? also move it a bit to evade overlapping 00:55:200 (1,4) -
Adjusted ^
01:06:171 (1) - either move it under previous note or make a bigger jump here for epic ending
Adjusted ^

soz for small mod, cant see anything really wrong in all diffs

happy new year!
Thanks a lot for the mod :D. Was kind of unexpected lol. Happy 2016 to you too! Have some kudos ^^
Prismetical
Hello! c: #ModReqs ♥

Normal
00:02:735 (4) - I find it better if you put it at the same place as 00:01:363 (2) - but mirrored
00:08:906 - circle
00:22:963 (3,4,5) - star pattern

00:24:335 (6,3) - care that here if no overlay
00:38:563 (7,1) - stack it with either start or end of 00:37:706 (5) - so we have no overlay
00:43:020 - add break?
00:48:335 (4,1) - overlay
00:50:392 (2,5) - stack
00:51:763 (5,2) - move (2) somewhere else, so no overlay
00:53:820 (3,1) - stack
00:55:192 (6,3) - stack
00:59:649 (2,1) - stack

Hard
00:04:106 (8,1) - stack?
00:05:135 (2,4) - overlay, use the playfield
00:10:963 (2,1) - stack
00:14:392 (7,1) - stack
00:23:306 (4,2) - ^
00:25:363 (2,1) - ^
00:29:820 (4,2) - ^
00:31:192 (3,1) - ^
00:33:592 (1,4) - ^ (mostly when I say stack here, it also means that there is an overlay, so either stack it or move it so there is no overlay, it really distracts the player if two things don't lay on each other properly)
00:34:277 (4,3) - overlay
00:35:992 (1,3) - ^
00:38:392 (6,2) - overlay
00:39:249 (3,1) - stack properly
00:41:477 (1,3,4) - overlay
00:51:077 (1,1) - stack
00:52:106 (1,5) - overlay
00:53:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - a very cluttered part, use the playfield
01:00:506 (6,2) - stack
01:03:077 (4,2) - ^
01:04:277 (3,1) - ^

And don't tell me you can't stack anything, because of distance snap... I checked AiMod! ;)
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Ezasu

Prismetical wrote:

Hello! c: #ModReqs ♥
Hai ^^

Normal
00:02:735 (4) - I find it better if you put it at the same place as 00:01:363 (2) - but mirrored
Adjusted ^
00:08:906 - circle
Added ^
00:22:963 (3,4,5) - star pattern

Adjusted ^
00:24:335 (6,3) - care that here if no overlay
No overlapping ^
00:38:563 (7,1) - stack it with either start or end of 00:37:706 (5) - so we have no overlay
Changed complely ^
00:43:020 - add break?
I though I did that lol. Adjusted ^
00:48:335 (4,1) - overlay
Adjusted ^
00:50:392 (2,5) - stack
Yup, did the same ^
00:51:763 (5,2) - move (2) somewhere else, so no overlay
Stacked 00:53:477 (2) - on the end of 00:51:763 (5). Also, remapped the whole 00:52:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6) section to fix that and make it easier to read ^
00:53:820 (3,1) - stack
Changed completely without stacking. ^
00:55:192 (6,3) - stack
Same here ^
00:59:649 (2,1) - stack
Adjusted ^

Hard
00:04:106 (8,1) - stack?
Nah, I like it that way ^
00:05:135 (2,4) - overlay, use the playfield
Adjusted ^
00:10:963 (2,1) - stack
Adjusted ^
00:14:392 (7,1) - stack
I like it ^
00:23:306 (4,2) - ^
Adjusted ^
00:25:363 (2,1) - ^
Adjusted ^
00:29:820 (4,2) - ^
Adjusted ^
00:31:192 (3,1) - ^
Adjusted ^
00:33:592 (1,4) - ^ (mostly when I say stack here, it also means that there is an overlay, so either stack it or move it so there is no overlay, it really distracts the player if two things don't lay on each other properly)
Adjusted ^
00:34:277 (4,3) - overlay
Adjusted ^
00:35:992 (1,3) - ^
Adjusted ^
00:38:392 (6,2) - overlay
It might look weird, but I think it plays well ^
00:39:249 (3,1) - stack properly
Oops ^^
00:41:477 (1,3,4) - overlay
Again, i think it plays well ^
00:51:077 (1,1) - stack
Adjusted ^
00:52:106 (1,5) - overlay
I really like how this one plays. Also, it would be hard to change ^
00:53:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - a very cluttered part, use the playfield
Adjusted ^
01:00:506 (6,2) - stack
Really hard to change and plays wel l^
01:03:077 (4,2) - ^
Adjusted ^
01:04:277 (3,1) - ^
Adjusted ^

And don't tell me you can't stack anything, because of distance snap... I checked AiMod! ;)
Good luck!
Thanks for the mod! I think I avoided overlapping/overlays as much as I could (without breaking the map) thanks to your help. Have kudosu ^^
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