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chou nai dai
aji bg 10/10
SanadaYukimura wrote:
aji bg 10/10
Topic Starter
cao
offset:625
[BASIC]
00:06:687 (6687|2) - remove?
00:51:220 (51220|2) - 这个snap错了吧
00:52:075 (52075|2) - ^
还有一些snap错的就不提了
[MEDIUM]
01:11:816 (71816|0) - 这里是1/6吧 话说这个1/6换成1/4不知道行不行 看看别人怎么说
01:30:780 (90780|2) - 移到1?
01:40:728 (100728|1) - ^
HARD都还没做，差评
别的没了，做的挺好的
[BASIC]
00:06:687 (6687|2) - remove?
00:51:220 (51220|2) - 这个snap错了吧
00:52:075 (52075|2) - ^
还有一些snap错的就不提了
[MEDIUM]
01:11:816 (71816|0) - 这里是1/6吧 话说这个1/6换成1/4不知道行不行 看看别人怎么说
01:30:780 (90780|2) - 移到1?
01:40:728 (100728|1) - ^
HARD都还没做，差评
别的没了，做的挺好的
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
ene out from nowhere >w<
edit : aaaa just notice that liaoxingyao just post a mod here... maybe some of my mod can be same as liaoxingyao pointed out :v
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gud map btw...
ene out o/
ene out from nowhere >w<
edit : aaaa just notice that liaoxingyao just post a mod here... maybe some of my mod can be same as liaoxingyao pointed out :v
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MEDIUM
00:10:884 - delete 1 note for consistency with 00:12:127 - and 00:15:858 -
00:16:790 - add note for concistency with 00:11:816 - and 00:13:060 -
00:23:086 - add note for concistency with 00:21:842 -
00:22:464 (22464|0) - delete this , or add note in here 00:23:707 - for concistency of each other
00:25:573 - add note for concistency with 00:26:816 -
00:32:490 - add note for kick , since u use 2 note at 00:32:179 - for kick both melody, right?
00:45:391 - add note for finish sound and concistency with 00:40:417 -
00:42:593 - add note, it has melody and snare sound just same like 00:44:459 -
00:41:972 - ^
00:46:946 - ^
00:54:407 - it has similar sound with 00:55:029 - so maybe u can add note here 00:54:407 -
00:55:728 - add note here or delete note at 00:56:972 - for concistency of each other
00:59:381 - u can add note here, it has kick and finish, and has same sound with 00:59:070 - and 00:58:759 -
00:59:692 - ^
01:00:003 - ^
01:13:759 - add note here for concistency with this sound > 01:11:894 - 01:15:625 - 01:16:868 -
01:33:034 - add note here for concistency with 01:23:086 -
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01:44:459 (104459|2,105003|2) - em... 1/4 shielding... better not keep this way, its not so good for the pattern reading yet its not at the same pitch...u can prevent this by this step (too lazy to set this using pict lel):
1. 01:45:080 (105080|0,105080|1,105391|0) - switch these collumn
2. 01:44:459 (104459|3,104459|2,104925|3) - ^
3. 01:45:003 (105003|2) - move to col 2
4. 01:45:080 (105080|1) - move to col 4
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01:46:946 (106946|2,107412|3,107490|2) - again.. 1/4 shielding.. again better not keep this way, its not so good for the pattern reading yet its not at the same pitch...u can prevent this by this step (too lazy to set this using pict lel):
1. 01:46:946 (106946|2,107412|3) - switch these collumn
2. 01:47:490 (107490|2) - move to 2
3. 01:47:568 (107568|0) - move to 4
4. 01:47:568 (107568|1) - move to 1
00:16:790 - add note for concistency with 00:11:816 - and 00:13:060 -
00:23:086 - add note for concistency with 00:21:842 -
00:22:464 (22464|0) - delete this , or add note in here 00:23:707 - for concistency of each other
00:25:573 - add note for concistency with 00:26:816 -
00:32:490 - add note for kick , since u use 2 note at 00:32:179 - for kick both melody, right?
00:45:391 - add note for finish sound and concistency with 00:40:417 -
00:42:593 - add note, it has melody and snare sound just same like 00:44:459 -
00:41:972 - ^
00:46:946 - ^
00:54:407 - it has similar sound with 00:55:029 - so maybe u can add note here 00:54:407 -
00:55:728 - add note here or delete note at 00:56:972 - for concistency of each other
00:59:381 - u can add note here, it has kick and finish, and has same sound with 00:59:070 - and 00:58:759 -
00:59:692 - ^
01:00:003 - ^
01:13:759 - add note here for concistency with this sound > 01:11:894 - 01:15:625 - 01:16:868 -
01:33:034 - add note here for concistency with 01:23:086 -
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01:44:459 (104459|2,105003|2) - em... 1/4 shielding... better not keep this way, its not so good for the pattern reading yet its not at the same pitch...u can prevent this by this step (too lazy to set this using pict lel):
1. 01:45:080 (105080|0,105080|1,105391|0) - switch these collumn
2. 01:44:459 (104459|3,104459|2,104925|3) - ^
3. 01:45:003 (105003|2) - move to col 2
4. 01:45:080 (105080|1) - move to col 4
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01:46:946 (106946|2,107412|3,107490|2) - again.. 1/4 shielding.. again better not keep this way, its not so good for the pattern reading yet its not at the same pitch...u can prevent this by this step (too lazy to set this using pict lel):
1. 01:46:946 (106946|2,107412|3) - switch these collumn
2. 01:47:490 (107490|2) - move to 2
3. 01:47:568 (107568|0) - move to 4
4. 01:47:568 (107568|1) - move to 1
BASIC
00:06:687 (6687|2) - delete for concistency with 00:01:402 -
00:23:474 - add note here for concistency with 00:22:231 - 00:20:987 -
00:35:288 (35288|2) - better delete this and change 00:35:132 (35132|1) - into LN, just like u did at MEDIUM
00:51:220 (51220|2) - wrong snap, should be 1/3 , same as u did at MEDIUM
00:52:464 (52464|1) - ^
00:53:707 (53707|2) - ^
01:45:080 (105080|3,105391|2,105702|1,106013|0) - better change this into 1/1 LN for represent melody rather than just kick (kick = note, melody = LN)
00:23:474 - add note here for concistency with 00:22:231 - 00:20:987 -
00:35:288 (35288|2) - better delete this and change 00:35:132 (35132|1) - into LN, just like u did at MEDIUM
00:51:220 (51220|2) - wrong snap, should be 1/3 , same as u did at MEDIUM
00:52:464 (52464|1) - ^
00:53:707 (53707|2) - ^
01:45:080 (105080|3,105391|2,105702|1,106013|0) - better change this into 1/1 LN for represent melody rather than just kick (kick = note, melody = LN)
gud map btw...
ene out o/
All Systems' Readrrrr ... GO!
I will points some snaps, which is not belongs to 1/4, hope this could help your progress get faster
00:49:329 - 00:49:640 - 00:49:951 - 00:50:055 - to 00:50:365 - is 1/3
in here 00:54:459 - 00:50:106 - can have 1/6
00:50:365 - to 00:55:029 - all is 1/3, didn't have 1/4, 1/2 either (i think so, because i can't hear any 1/2, even small hihat on 1/2 beat snap)
01:11:816 - to 01:11:972 - is 1/6
01:13:681 - to 01:13:837 -
01:15:547 - to 01:15:702 -
01:16:790 - to 01:16:946 -
01:19:277 - to 01:19:433 - (of course, on here could be 1/4 too, there is a bass)
01:23:008 - to 01:23:163 -
01:26:738 - to 01:26:894 -
01:27:982 - to 01:28:137 -
01:32:956 - to 01:33:112 -
01:36:687 - to 01:36:842 -
01:37:930 - to 01:38:086 -
Those all full of 1/6
That's all! Good luck
I will points some snaps, which is not belongs to 1/4, hope this could help your progress get faster
00:49:329 - 00:49:640 - 00:49:951 - 00:50:055 - to 00:50:365 - is 1/3
in here 00:54:459 - 00:50:106 - can have 1/6
00:50:365 - to 00:55:029 - all is 1/3, didn't have 1/4, 1/2 either (i think so, because i can't hear any 1/2, even small hihat on 1/2 beat snap)
01:11:816 - to 01:11:972 - is 1/6
01:13:681 - to 01:13:837 -
01:15:547 - to 01:15:702 -
01:16:790 - to 01:16:946 -
01:19:277 - to 01:19:433 - (of course, on here could be 1/4 too, there is a bass)
01:23:008 - to 01:23:163 -
01:26:738 - to 01:26:894 -
01:27:982 - to 01:28:137 -
01:32:956 - to 01:33:112 -
01:36:687 - to 01:36:842 -
01:37:930 - to 01:38:086 -
Those all full of 1/6
That's all! Good luck
liaoxingyao wrote:
SanadaYukimura wrote:
aji bg 10/10
Topic Starter
。我都沒做完是在神個屁
缺KD順便水
[HARD]
00:27:049 - 加點音吧
01:26:816 - add
01:28:060 - ^
和01:33:034 - 一樣
01:36:764 - 加
01:38:552 - 建議加
[HARD]
00:27:049 - 加點音吧
01:26:816 - add
01:28:060 - ^
和01:33:034 - 一樣
01:36:764 - 加
01:38:552 - 建議加
Sky_Demon wrote:
!OGC
oke lets continue
aaa HARD doesnt finish yet :3
call me when it finish for mod
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ene out again o/
aaa HARD doesnt finish yet :3
call me when it finish for mod
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victorica's SPECIAL
00:11:039 (11039|2) - move to 2 or 00:11:194 (11194|2) - move to 4 for hand balance and prevent 00:10:884 (10884|2,11039|2,11194|2,11350|2) - jack (its not hve same sound, right?)
00:22:464 (22464|2,22542|2) - whats with this jack? it has no same sound both of them... nor for pattern... 00:22:386 (22386|3,22464|2) - switch these collumn
00:36:065 - add note here... for consistency and same sound with 00:37:930 - 00:38:241 - 00:35:443 -
00:36:687 - and 00:37:308 - add note here... same reason as above
01:15:236 - add note for consistency both same sound with 01:17:101 - 01:17:412 - 01:14:614 - 01:14:303 -
01:15:858 - add note, same reason ^
01:16:479 - add note, same reason ^
01:27:049 (87049|3) - different length of LN with 01:36:998 (96998|0) - ? both have exactly the same melody sound
01:28:448 - only one note? but use 2 note 01:38:397 - ? make it consistent maybe
00:22:464 (22464|2,22542|2) - whats with this jack? it has no same sound both of them... nor for pattern... 00:22:386 (22386|3,22464|2) - switch these collumn
00:36:065 - add note here... for consistency and same sound with 00:37:930 - 00:38:241 - 00:35:443 -
00:36:687 - and 00:37:308 - add note here... same reason as above
01:15:236 - add note for consistency both same sound with 01:17:101 - 01:17:412 - 01:14:614 - 01:14:303 -
01:15:858 - add note, same reason ^
01:16:479 - add note, same reason ^
01:27:049 (87049|3) - different length of LN with 01:36:998 (96998|0) - ? both have exactly the same melody sound
01:28:448 - only one note? but use 2 note 01:38:397 - ? make it consistent maybe
ene out again o/
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Hello Spy, I want to give you a little mod. I know your maps are often already good enough but maybe i can find something
General
Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right // Nice BG
BPM/Offset: Right
Other: Disable Widescreen Support in: Medium, victorica's Special and Basic
BASIC
00:19:899 (19899|1) - why not move this to 1? Different vocal as 00:19:277 (19277|1,19588|1) - 00:51:220 (51220|2) - Wrong Snapped. Move to previous 1/3 beatline.
00:52:075 (52075|2) - Wrong Snapped. Move to next 1/3 beatline.
00:52:464 (52464|1) - Wrong Snapped. Move to previous 1/3 beatline.
00:53:707 (53707|2) - Wrong Snapped. Move to previous 1/3 beatline.
00:54:407 - Add here maybe one? The music is here connected with 00:54:096 (54096|1,54200|2,54303|3) -
MEDIUM
00:20:599 - Add note. -> 00:20:909 - too and 00:20:987 - because it follows much better the music. Its like you did it here 00:21:764 (21764|0,21842|1,21920|2,22075|3,22153|2,22231|0) - . Try to be consistent with your pattern here 00:50:055 - maybe add here one? Because it fit kinda well to the music
00:50:884 - add at 2 for consistency.
Thats all for now. Was just a quick "passing by" xP
臭奶呆
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